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* PutOnABus: [[spoiler: Leaves for College Station [[hottip:*:a town to the west of Humble]] at the end of part 2 to focus getting her degree in electrical engineering.]]
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A WebSerialNovel in the works by MetalShadowX. Will change as development goes along.
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A character list for the WebSerialNovel in the works by MetalShadowX. Will change as development goes along.
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* HairDecorations: Has a couple with her redesign to emphasize her femininity in comparison to the other two girls.
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!Captain Latex (Lucy D. Monk)
A SpacePirate who was inspired by her pioneering parents to go out and explore the galaxy.
* {{Asexuality}}
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* CaptainErsatz[=/=]DistaffCounterpart: To [[OnePiece Monkey D. Luffy]].
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* HeroOfAnotherStory: Most of her travels occur offscreen.
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* PirateGirl
* [[RubberMan Rubber Girl]]
* WrongGenreSavvy: She's convinced that she's TheHero of the story.
A SpacePirate who was inspired by her pioneering parents to go out and explore the galaxy.
* {{Asexuality}}
* BadassAdorable
* CaptainErsatz[=/=]DistaffCounterpart: To [[OnePiece Monkey D. Luffy]].
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* ConfusionFu
* GenkiGirl
* HeroOfAnotherStory: Most of her travels occur offscreen.
* TheLadette
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* PirateGirl
* [[RubberMan Rubber Girl]]
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* TenMinuteRetirement: Inverted. [[spoiler: She suddenly returns to help the Alliance when Roxy and Rio's wedding is being crashed, but goes back to the hospital after the wedding is over.]]
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* TenMinuteRetirement: Inverted. [[spoiler: She suddenly returns to help the Alliance when Roxy and Rio's wedding is being crashed, but goes back to actually announces she's leaving town at the hospital after the wedding is over.end.]]
* AxCrazy: Somewhat, as Anti Lass, but it's just a ruse.
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* BatmanGambit: The end of "Reckoning".
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* BloodKnight: Enjoys the fights with her sister.
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** [[spoiler: BadassAbnormal[=/=]SupernaturalMartialArts: In part 2, after suddenly gaining powers, she learns her parents had recessive Kinetic genes which had skipped their generation. Her ability is to use dark energy to power her physical attacks.]]
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** [[spoiler: BadassAbnormal[=/=]SupernaturalMartialArts: In part 2, after suddenly gaining powers, she learns her parents had recessive Kinetic genes which had skipped their generation. Her ability is to use dark energy to power enhance her physical attacks.]]
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* ButtMonkey[=/=]SlapstickKnowsNoGender: Anytime where someone gets beat up for laughs, it's probably going to be her.
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* PutOnABus: [[spoiler: Leaves for College Station [[hottip:*:a town to the west of Humble]] at the end of part 2 to focus getting her degree in electrical engineering.]]
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* PowerTrio: Roxy and Rio with Claire, after she joins them and before forming the Star Alliance.
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* PowerTrio: Roxy and Rio with Claire, after she joins them and before forming the Star Alliance. She also occasionally hangs out with Merle and Tom as their tutor and/or MissionControl around the same time.
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* OneHeadTaller: Averted; she and Rio are almost the same height (she's about 5'8, he's about 5'9).
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* OneHeadTaller: Averted; she and Rio are almost the same height (she's about 5'8, he's about 5'9).height.
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* StatuesqueStunner[=/=]HugeSchoolgirl: She's the tallest member at 5'11, two inches higher than Rio.
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* StatuesqueStunner[=/=]HugeSchoolgirl: She's the tallest member at 5'11, two inches higher than Rio.of the team.
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* IGotBigger: [[spoiler: She shoots up from 4'6 to 5'3 between parts 1 and 2.]]
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* IGotBigger: [[spoiler: She shoots up from 4'6 to 5'3 between Between parts 1 and 2.]]
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* TeensAreShort: Subverted. [[spoiler: Although she's always the shortest, even after growing 3/4 of a foot in the span of a year.]]
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* TeensAreShort: Subverted. [[spoiler: Although she's always the shortest, even after growing 3/4 of a foot in the span of a year.]]
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* TeensAreShort: Averted, he's around 5'7 at age 14 but he's still shorter than almost everyone else on the team.
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* TeensAreShort: Averted, he's around 5'7 at age 14 but he's still shorter than almost everyone else on the team.
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As the non-Kinetic hero Crow, she is highly agile and takes any opportunity to strike.
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As the non-Kinetic hero Crow, she is highly agile and takes any opportunity to strike.
strike. [[spoiler: Which is helped by having the power of darkness as her dormant Kinetic ability.]]
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** [[spoiler: BadassAbnormal[=/=]SupernaturalMartialArts: In part 2, after suddenly gaining powers, she learns her parents had recessive Kinetic genes which had skipped their generation. Her ability is to use dark energy to power her physical attacks.]]
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* CastingAShadow: Her Kinetic power, but it's mostly limited to close combat.
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* [[spoiler: CastingAShadow: Her Kinetic power, but it's mostly limited to close combat.]]
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* HotBlooded
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: He's a ton of fun, but don't deliberately hurt any of his friends (''especially'' [[spoiler: his wife]]).
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: He's a ton of fun, but don't deliberately hurt any of his friends (''especially'' [[spoiler: his wife]]).Roxy).
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: He's a ton of fun, but don't deliberately hurt any of his friends (''especially'' [[spoiler: his wife]]).
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: He's a ton of fun, but don't deliberately hurt any of his friends (''especially'' [[spoiler: his wife]]).Roxy).
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* AntiHero: Between Types II and III.
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* AntiHero: Between Types II and III.Type III, though she sometimes goes down to Type II.
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* AntiHero: Type III, veering toward Type IV at times.
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* AntiHero: Type III, veering toward Type IV at times.by part 2 [[hottip:*:even after dealing with her feelings against killing, she still will apply as much force as possible against villains and stop just short of death]].
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* TheComicallySerious: As the series progresses.
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* KidHero: Just barely; she started out as Cannon Queen at 17.
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* RainbowMotif: [[color:gold:Star Lass]] is golden-yellow, [[color:red:Willpower]] is bright red, [[color:green:Cannon Queen]] is green, [[color:blue:Crow]] is blue, [[color:gray:Sonic Servo/Servo Seer]] is silver/gray.
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* RainbowMotif: [[color:gold:Star Lass]] is golden-yellow, [[color:red:Willpower]] is bright red, [[color:green:Cannon Queen]] is green, [[color:blue:Crow]] is blue, [[color:gray:Sonic [[color:silver:Sonic Servo/Servo Seer]] is silver/gray.silver-gray.
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* StatuesqueStunner[=/=]HugeSchoolgirl: She towers at 6'2.
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* StatuesqueStunner[=/=]HugeSchoolgirl: She towers She's the tallest member at 6'2.5'11, two inches higher than Rio.
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* IGotBigger: [[spoiler: She shoots up from 4'6 to ''5'''6 between parts 1 and 2.]]
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* IGotBigger: [[spoiler: She shoots up from 4'6 to ''5'''6 5'3 between parts 1 and 2.]]
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* TeensAreShort: Subverted. [[spoiler: Although she's always the shortest, even after growing a whole foot in the span of a year.]]
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* TeensAreShort: Subverted. [[spoiler: Although she's always the shortest, even after growing 3/4 of a whole foot in the span of a year.]]
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* TeensAreShort: Averted, he's around 5'6 at age 14 but he's still shorter than almost everyone else on the team.
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* TeensAreShort: Averted, he's around 5'6 5'7 at age 14 but he's still shorter than almost everyone else on the team.
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* NaughtyByNight: Despite her shy and dutiful personality, she is rather perverted and takes pride in having a healthy sex life with her future husband.
* OneHeadTaller: Averted; she and Rio are almost the same height (He's about 5'8", she's about 5'9").
* OneHeadTaller: Averted; she and Rio are almost the same height (He's about 5'8", she's about 5'9").
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* NaughtyByNight: Despite her shy and dutiful personality, she is rather perverted and takes pride in having a healthy sex life with her future husband.
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* OneHeadTaller: Averted; she and Rio are almost the same height(He's (she's about 5'8", she's 5'8, he's about 5'9").5'9).
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* KiAttacks: He uses his inner energy (he calls it Xi [[hottip:*:pronounced like the letter "Z"]]) as a foil to Roxy's solar energy.
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* KiAttacks: He uses his inner energy (he calls it Xi [[hottip:*:pronounced Xi[[hottip:*:pronounced like the letter "Z"]]) as a foil to Roxy's solar energy.
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* HardWorkHardlyWorks: Averted; she always pushes her body to its limit to get stronger.
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* HardWorkHardlyWorks: Averted; she always pushes her body to near its limit to get stronger.
* IGotBigger: [[spoiler: She shoots up from 4'6 to ''5'''6 between parts 1 and 2.]]
* ImprobableAge: She's had great acrobatic skills ever since she was 11.
* ImprobableAge: She's had great acrobatic skills ever since she was 11.
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* ImprobableAge: Has great acrobatic skills, even when starting out as a hero at 11 years old.
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* TeensAreShort: Subverted. [[spoiler: Although she's always the shortest, even after growing a whole foot in the span of a year.]]
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* MuggleBornOfMages: Her father is Celestian, but she has none of the powers. [[BrattyTeenageDaughter Her sister]], however, may have them.
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!The Morlans
Claire's family. She has a mother named Heather, a father named Jack (a Celestian), and a sister named Guinevere (Gwen for short). Mostly taken from ''{{Daria}}'''s family, as the names indicate, but with a few differences.
* BrattyTeenageDaughter: Gwen.
* HotScoop: Heather.
Claire's family. She has a mother named Heather, a father named Jack (a Celestian), and a sister named Guinevere (Gwen for short). Mostly taken from ''{{Daria}}'''s family, as the names indicate, but with a few differences.
* BrattyTeenageDaughter: Gwen.
* HotScoop: Heather.
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As the superhero Willpower, he differs from other Kinetics by not using visible strength, but what he calls Xi energy. With it he's able to jump at great heights, run incredibly fast, and can perform various other powers.
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As the superhero Willpower, he differs from other Kinetics by not using visible strength, but what he calls Xi energy. With it he's able to jump at great heights, run incredibly fast, and can perform various other powers.
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As the superhero Willpower, he differs from other Kinetics by not using visible strength, but what he calls Xi energy. With it he's able to jump at great heights, run incredible incredibly fast, and can perform various other powers.
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* NobleDemon: Has no qualms of committing crimes, but draws the line at senseless killing and going against Astra.
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* UndyingLoyalty: To Anti Lass.
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* UndyingLoyalty: To Anti Lass.
While they were in space, Astra saved Luther's life. He feels indebted to her to do as she wishes.
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** CoDragons: Biocide
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** CoDragons: Biocide
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**CoDragons[=/=]TheBrute: TheBrute: Scaremonger
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* HandCannon: Her gun, Gypsy, at default.
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** AnIcePerson: Frost Beam.
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** HomingProjectile: Homing Missile.
** WaveMotionGun[=/=]HandCannon: Neutron Cannon, [[{{Cooldown}} requires a ten minute recharge]].
** PlayingWithFire: Plasma Ray, the default mode.
** AnIcePerson: Frost Beam.
** ShockAndAwe[=/=]PowerFist: Electric Gauntlet.
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* RainbowMotif: [[color:gold:Star Lass]] is golden-yellow, [[color:red:Willpower]] is bright red, [[color:green:Cannon Queen]] is green, [[color:blue:Crow]] is blue, [[color:gray:Sonic Servo]] is silver/gray.
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* RainbowMotif: [[color:gold:Star Lass]] is golden-yellow, [[color:red:Willpower]] is bright red, [[color:green:Cannon Queen]] is green, [[color:blue:Crow]] is blue, [[color:gray:Sonic Servo]] Servo/Servo Seer]] is silver/gray.