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* BigBrotherAttraction: Houli and Anri aren't ''actually'' incestuous, but it's humorously obvious Anri's a bit weird about him...even ''Leo'' internally thinks that of her.
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* BigBrotherAttraction: Houli and Anri aren't ''actually'' incestuous, but it's humorously obvious Anri's a bit weird about him... even ''Leo'' internally thinks that of her.
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Boobs Of Steel is a disambiguation
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* BoobsOfSteel: Leo is entirely unmatched as a fighter (and can do 500 pushups so fast she leaves an after-image) while chapter 36 has Sariela try to give Leo a bra because she just binds her breasts up, only to have it break and find she doesn't actually have a good fit for Leo. A standalone book also has her break the risque one-piece bikini she's wearing just from holding an arm up.
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* BareYourMidriff: Leo's primary outfit consists of armor for her upper body and a long armored skirt. Her stomach is completely bare. When Houli confesses to Leo in chapter 1, he makes a special point of describing her perfect abs as one of the things that attracts him to her.
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* NavelWindow: Leo's primary outfit consists of armor for her upper body and a long armored skirt. Her stomach is completely bare. When Houli confesses to Leo in chapter 1, he makes a special point of describing her perfect abs as one of the things that attracts him to her.
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* EleventhHourSuperpower: [[spoiler:When Houli is fading from [[CastFromHitPoints overusing his healing magic]] during the fight with the demon lord, he is approached by Asmodeus with the promise to continue on with power greater than the Demon Lord. Houli is supremely confused.]]
--> '''Houli:''' What the hell is happening right now?
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* EleventhHourSuperpower: [[spoiler:When Houli is fading from [[CastFromHitPoints overusing his healing magic]] during the fight with the demon lord, he is approached by Asmodeus with the promise to continue on with power greater than the Demon Lord. Houli is supremely confused.]]
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* EleventhHourSuperpower: [[spoiler:When Houli is fading from [[CastFromHitPoints overusing his healing magic]] during the fight with the demon lord, he is approached by Asmodeus with the promise of power to continue on and make his Super Mode essentially permanent. Houli is supremely confused.]]
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* EleventhHourSuperpower: [[spoiler:When Houli is fading from [[CastFromHitPoints overusing his healing magic]] during the fight with the demon lord, he is approached by Asmodeus with the promise of power to continue on and make his Super Mode essentially permanent.with power greater than the Demon Lord. Houli is supremely confused.]]
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* EleventhHourSuperpower: [[spoiler:When Houli is fading from [[CastFromHitPoints overusing his healing magic]] during the fight with the demon lord, he is approached by Asmodeus with the promise of power to continue on and make his Super Mode essentially permanent. Houli is supremely confused.]]
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* Fake Pregnancy: Tries to entrap Houli with one using a pillow despite the fact that they hadn't known each other ''nearly'' long enough for her to be that pregnant even if he ''had'' returned her advances. When she's found out, she tries to play it off as [[JustJokingJustification a joke]]. Unfortunately for her, Leo, who'd [[SuperGullible believed it at the beginning]], isn't having any of it.
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* Fake Pregnancy: FakePregnancy: Tries to entrap Houli with one using a pillow despite the fact that they hadn't known each other ''nearly'' long enough for her to be that pregnant even if he ''had'' returned her advances. When she's found out, she tries to play it off as [[JustJokingJustification a joke]]. Unfortunately for her, Leo, who'd [[SuperGullible believed it at the beginning]], isn't having any of it.
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Swapping Understimating Badassery for Clipped Wing Angel. As written, it seems the narrative was overestimating Melvie's badassery.
* ClippedWingAngel: For all the build up of her becoming stronger through forbidden methods so she can get revenge against Leo, she's [[CurbStompBattle taken out in seconds]].
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* UnderestimatingBadassery: For all the build up of her becoming stronger through forbidden methods so she can get revenge against Leo, she's [[CurbStompBattle taken out in seconds]].
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* Stripperific: Her outfit doesn't leave much to the imagination.
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* Stripperific: Her outfit doesn't leave much to the imagination.
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* UnderestimatingBadassery: For all the build up of her becoming stronger through forbidden methods so she can get revenge against Leo, she's [[CurbStompBattle taken out in seconds]].
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* Fake Pregnancy: Tries to entrap Houli with one using a pillow despite the fact that they hadn't known each other ''nearly'' long enough for her to be that pregnant even if he ''had'' returned her advances. When she's found out, she tries to play it off as [[JustJokingJustification a joke]]. Unfortunately for her, Leo, who'd [[SuperGullible believed it at the beginning]], isn't having any of it.
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* JustJokingJustification: When her supremely ill-thought attempt to convince Houli that he'd gotten her pregnant (they hadn't known each other nearly long enough for any possible pregnancy to advance that far even if Houli ''had'' given in to her advances) is exposed, she tries to play it off as a joke. Leo, who'd [[SuperGullible believed it]], isn't having any of the "apology" and Houli is in no mood to try and stop her from exacting revenge.
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[[folder:Melvi]]
A former elite Imperial Knight of the kingdom who has a grudge against Leo.
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* DrivenByEnvy: Her entire motivation for her grudge against Leo. Melvi was the strongest of the Imperial Knights until the day Leo defeated her in a duel. After that, Melvi went off the deep end, obsessed with gaining strength by any means so she could kill Leo and regain the title of "strongest".
[[folder:Melvi]]
A former elite Imperial Knight of the kingdom who has a grudge against Leo.
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* DrivenByEnvy: Her entire motivation for her grudge against Leo. Melvi was the strongest of the Imperial Knights until the day Leo defeated her in a duel. After that, Melvi went off the deep end, obsessed with gaining strength by any means so she could kill Leo and regain the title of "strongest".