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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Her abuse is heavily implied to be a result of her cracking under her perfectionism but in no way is used to justify her actions.
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* DemotedToExtra: He is somewhat of a major focus in the first fic as a being specifically created to protect Sunny from the truth, but once he accepts and Omori does a HeelFaceTurn, he only appears once in ''Truth'' afterwards.
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* DemotedToExtra: He is somewhat of a major focus in the first fic as a being specifically created to protect Sunny from the truth, truth and talked down Sunny in "Truth," but once he accepts and Omori does a HeelFaceTurn, he only appears once makes a brief appearance in ''Truth'' afterwards."Recovery".
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* TalkingDownTheSuicidal: When Sunny attempts suicide in response to his awakening trauma, Omori talks to him to remind him that he's no longer alone in the truth, at least delaying Sunny long enough for Hero to finish the job.
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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Her abuse is heavily implied to be a result of her cracking under her perfectionism but in no way is used to justify her actions.
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* TeensAreMonsters: Since she dies at the same age her canon counterpart did, she sexually molested her brother when she was ''fifteen''.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: The story follows an alternative reading of the game's story where Mari is portrayed as a predator who molested Sunny and is thought by Aubrey to have planned to prey on Basil.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: The story follows an alternative reading of the game's story where Mari is portrayed as a predator who molested Sunny and is thought by Aubrey to have planned to prey on Basil. In canon, Mari most likely wasn’t a sexual predator and very little indicates that she wasn’t the NiceGirl she’s portrayed as being.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Clearly blames himself for Sunny's near attempted suicide after initially denying the truth.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Clearly blames himself for Sunny's near attempted suicide after initially denying the truth.truth.
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The cast of characters as portrayed in Hands.
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The main character, as in canon, and here the victim of Mari's sexual abuse. Having been victimized all his life, he eventually pushed Mari down the stairs by accident trying to fight off her latest rape attempt. He then created Omori and Headspace to keep the horrible truth of their relationship locked up, so he may remember Mari as a loving big sister, but nightmarish visions of her true self still peak through in the form of Something and Black Space.
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[[folder:Sunny]]
The main character, as in canon, and here the victim of Mari's sexual abuse. Having been victimized all his life, he eventually pushed Mari down the stairs by accident trying to fight off her latest rape attempt. He then created Omori and Headspace to keep the horrible truth of their relationship locked up, so he may remember Mari as a loving big sister, but nightmarish visions of her true self still peak through in the form of Something and Black Space.
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The cast of characters as portrayed in Hands.
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[[folder:Sunny]]
The main character, as in canon, and here the victim of Mari's sexual abuse. Having been victimized all his life, he eventually pushed Mari down the stairs by accident trying to fight off her latest rape attempt. He then created Omori and Headspace to keep the horrible truth of their relationship locked up, so he may remember Mari as a loving big sister, but nightmarish visions of her true self still peak through in the form of Something and Black Space.''Hands''.
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[[folder:Sunny]]
The main character, as in canon, and here the victim of Mari's sexual abuse. Having been victimized all his life, he eventually pushed Mari down the stairs by accident trying to fight off her latest rape attempt. He then created Omori and Headspace to keep the horrible truth of their relationship locked up, so he may remember Mari as a loving big sister, but nightmarish visions of her true self still peak through in the form of Something and Black Space.
!!Sunny
The main character, as in canon, and here the victim of Mari's sexual abuse. Having been victimized all his life, he eventually pushed Mari down the stairs by accident trying to fight off her latest rape attempt. He then created Omori and Headspace to keep the horrible truth of their relationship locked up, so he may remember Mari as a loving big sister, but nightmarish visions of her true self still peak through in the form of Something and Black Space.
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* HatesBeingTouched: Sunny is averse to physical intimacy — particularly from grown women — because he was sexually assaulted by his sister. This causes Aubrey, who's his girlfriend in ''False Heaven'', no short amount of grief since all she wants is to be able to hold him lovingly.
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* HatesBeingTouched: Sunny is averse to physical intimacy — particularly from grown women — because he was sexually assaulted by his sister. This causes Aubrey, who's his girlfriend in ''False Heaven'', no short amount of grief since all she wants is to be able to hold him lovingly.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: In ''False Heaven'', the normally sweet and gentle flower boy [[PrecisionFStrike lets out a "bullshit"]] and angrily confronts Hero for not believing Sunny's confession that Mari sexually abused him, to the surprise of the others.
-->Every head snapped towards Basil's furrowed brows and bestial snarl. "Mari was a monster. I saw what she did!" He snapped.\\
It was a new thing to the brothers, the sight of a hateful flower boy. To Aubrey, his expression only now started to make sense. She still wondered how he let her bully him for all those years.
-->Every head snapped towards Basil's furrowed brows and bestial snarl. "Mari was a monster. I saw what she did!" He snapped.\\
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One of Sunny's dear friends. Upon realizing the truth, she fully believes him after some initial reluctance. She's also the protagonist of ''False Heaven'', in which she is Sunny's girlfriend who is distraught at being unable to hold him as he cannot stand being touched due to his trauma. This causes her to lash out even more than she did when Mari first died.
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One of Sunny's dear friends. Upon realizing the truth, she fully believes him after some initial reluctance. She's also the protagonist of ''False Heaven'', in which she is Sunny's girlfriend who is distraught at being unable to hold him as he cannot stand being touched due to his trauma. This causes her to lash out even more than she did when Mari first died.
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One of Sunny's dear friends. Upon realizing the truth, she fully believes him after some initial reluctance.
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* MisplacedRetribution: In ''False Heaven'', she's been furious at Mari ever since she learned how Mari's been raping Sunny behind everyone's backs, but since Mari is now dead, Aubrey can't personally deliver justice. So instead she's resorted to causing chaos around Faraway Town by destroying anything that reminds her of Mari and even stalking some poor girl with a physical resemblance to her.
* PsychoPink: Still has pink hair and is open about having murderous intent toward Mari. Taken further in ''False Heaven'', where she becomes a public menace in acting out against her memory of Mari (including stalking a girl that looks like her). It's implied that Sunny wants to keep her hair that way so that her natural black wouldn't remind him of Mari.
* PsychoPink: Still has pink hair and is open about having murderous intent toward Mari. Taken further in ''False Heaven'', where she becomes a public menace in acting out against her memory of Mari (including stalking a girl that looks like her). It's implied that Sunny wants to keep her hair that way so that her natural black wouldn't remind him of Mari.
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* StalkerWithoutACrush: In ''False Heaven'', she stalks a girl who looks like Mari, the girl who preyed on Aubrey's boyfriend Sunny, because she's still dealing with her unresolved anger at the deceased Mari for what she did.
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* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: In ''False Heaven'', while she can't actually protect Sunny from Mari's sexual aggression since the latter is dead, Aubrey substitutes by doing stuff like drawing a picture of her face and smashing it, destroying her grave, carving the words EVIL WHORE into a stump, destroying a bunch of White Egret Orchids (which are heavily associated with her), and even ''stalking some girl who looks like Mari''. This gets her friends to decide on StagingAnIntervention to help her calm her anger.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Clearly blames himself for Sunny's near attempted suicide after initially denying the truth.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Clearly blames himself for Sunny's near attempted suicide after initially denying the truth.
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* HormoneAddledTeenager: PlayedForHorror. She is a teenager who repeatedly sexually abuses her own brother and is implied to have wanted to target Basil and Aubrey.
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* TheSociopath: On the surface, she is the same sweet CoolBigSis as in canon. But behind closed doors, she is a sexual abuser who targets her own little brother. She is shown throughout the series to only care about two things- satisfying her hedonistic desires, and preserving her "perfect big sis" reputation.
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* TheSociopath: On the surface, she is the same sweet CoolBigSis as in canon. But behind closed doors, she is a sexual abuser who targets her own little brother. She is shown throughout the series to only care about two things- satisfying her hedonistic desires, and preserving her "perfect big sis" reputation.reputation, which the narrative outright refers to as a "face" and a "mode" that she puts on for others.
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* MisplacedRetribution: In ''False Heaven'', she's been furious at Mari ever since she learned how Mari's been raping Sunny behind everyone's backs, but since Mari is now dead, Aubrey can't personally deliver justice. So instead she's resorted to causing chaos around Faraway Town by destroying anything that reminds her of Mari and even stealing some poor girl with a physical resemblance to her.
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* MisplacedRetribution: In ''False Heaven'', she's been furious at Mari ever since she learned how Mari's been raping Sunny behind everyone's backs, but since Mari is now dead, Aubrey can't personally deliver justice. So instead she's resorted to causing chaos around Faraway Town by destroying anything that reminds her of Mari and even stealing stalking some poor girl with a physical resemblance to her.
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* MisplacedRetribution: In ''False Heaven'', she's been furious at Mari ever since she learned how Mari's been raping Sunny behind everyone's backs, but since Mari is now dead, Aubrey can't personally deliver justice. So instead she's resorted to causing chaos around Faraway Town by destroying anything that reminds her of Mari and even stealing some poor girl with a physical resemblance to her.
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* StalkerWithoutACrush: In ''False Heaven'', she stalks a girl who looks like Mari, the girl who preyed on Aubrey's boyfriend Sunny, because she's still dealing with her unresolved anger at the deceased Mari for what she did.
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* SerialRapist: An implied attempted example. Not satisfied with molesting Sunny, she tried to spend time with Basil alone for what is speculated to be making him her next victim (and her word choice supports this) until Sunny saves him by asking Mari to practice for the recital with him. She then tried to invite Aubrey to a "sleepover", only for Aubrey to refuse.
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* SerialRapist: An implied attempted example. Not satisfied with molesting Sunny, she tried to spend time with Basil alone for what is speculated to be making him her next victim (and her word choice supports this) until Sunny saves him by asking Mari to practice for the recital with him. She then tried to invite Aubrey to a "sleepover", only for Aubrey to refuse.refuse, but still "wrapped her hands around her" during their picnics together.
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* DepravedBisexual: Implied; in addition to molesting Sunny and trying to do the same to Basil, Basil and Aubrey worry that Mari wanted to prey on Aubrey too, since she also wanted to spend time alone with her.
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* DepravedBisexual: Implied; in addition to molesting Sunny and trying to do the same to Basil, Basil and Aubrey worry it is indicated that Mari wanted to prey on Aubrey too, since she also wanted to spend time alone with her.her and is depicted as touching her in a manner that very much resembles groping during their picnics together.
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* TraumaButton: The very concept of a picnic has been ruined for her, as they remind her of the picnics she had with Mari- a sexual abuser who is heavily indicated to have attempted to prey on her.
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* TraumaButton: The very concept of a picnic has been ruined for her, as they remind her of the picnics she had with Mari- a sexual abuser who is heavily indicated to have attempted to prey on her.groped her at them.
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* SerialRapist: An implied attempted example. Not satisfied with molesting Sunny, she tried to spend time with Basil alone for what is speculated to be making him her next victim (and her word choice supports this) until Sunny saves him by asking Mari to practice for the recital with him. She then tried to invite Aubrey to a "sleepover", only for Aubrey to refuse.
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* SerialRapist: An implied attempted example. Not satisfied with molesting Sunny, she tried to spend time with Basil alone for what is speculated to be making him her next victim (and her word choice supports this) until Sunny saves him by asking Mari to practice for the recital with him. She then tried to invite Aubrey to a "sleepover", only for Aubrey to refuse.
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-->While everyone else believed that Mari was a good person, Hero believed her to be perfect. Sunny wanted to tell him what Mari does. That despite all the lovey dovey talk and touches and kisses, Mari was more intimate with her own little brother than him.\\\
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-->While everyone else believed that Mari was a good person, Hero believed her to be perfect. Sunny wanted to tell him what Mari does. That despite all the lovey dovey lovey-dovey talk and touches and kisses, Mari was more intimate with her own little brother than him.\\\
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: In ''False Heaven'', the normally sweet and gentle flower boy [[PrecisionFStrike lets out a "bullshit"]] and angrily confronts Hero for not believing Sunny's confession that Mari sexually abused him, to the surprise of the others.
-->Every head snapped towards Basil's furrowed brows and bestial snarl. "Mari was a monster. I saw what she did!" He snapped.\\
It was a new thing to the brothers, the sight of a hateful flower boy. To Aubrey, his expression only now started to make sense. She still wondered how he let her bully him for all those years.
-->Every head snapped towards Basil's furrowed brows and bestial snarl. "Mari was a monster. I saw what she did!" He snapped.\\
It was a new thing to the brothers, the sight of a hateful flower boy. To Aubrey, his expression only now started to make sense. She still wondered how he let her bully him for all those years.
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* MirthlessLaughter: When Sunny confesses his victimization by Mari in ''Truth'', he nervously laughs in desperate disbelief.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Clearly blames himself for Sunny's near attempted suicide after initially denying the truth.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Clearly blames himself for Sunny's near attempted suicide after initially denying the truth.
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* ThePerfectionist: Even more so than in canon, and it gets ugly here.
--> Mari practiced her song in front of an audience of one. Sunny had went over to Kel and Hero's for a little bit, leaving his friend Basil by himself to listen to Mari's music. While composed for most of it, Basil could see a flash of agitation on her face when she messed up one note. Despite that and Mari's own perfectionism though, Basil thought it was beautiful.\\\
--> Mari practiced her song in front of an audience of one. Sunny had went over to Kel and Hero's for a little bit, leaving his friend Basil by himself to listen to Mari's music. While composed for most of it, Basil could see a flash of agitation on her face when she messed up one note. Despite that and Mari's own perfectionism though, Basil thought it was beautiful.\\\
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* ThePerfectionist: Even more so than in canon, and it gets ugly here.
--> Marihere. She is so obsessed with being the perfect one that she gives it as an excuse for molesting Sunny- it serves as stress relief for her.
-->Mari practiced her song in front of an audience of one. Sunny had went over to Kel and Hero's for a little bit, leaving his friend Basil by himself to listen to Mari's music. While composed for most of it, Basil could see a flash of agitation on her face when she messed up one note. Despite that and Mari's own perfectionism though, Basil thought it was beautiful.\\\
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-->Mari practiced her song in front of an audience of one. Sunny had went over to Kel and Hero's for a little bit, leaving his friend Basil by himself to listen to Mari's music. While composed for most of it, Basil could see a flash of agitation on her face when she messed up one note. Despite that and Mari's own perfectionism though, Basil thought it was beautiful.\\\
* TheSociopath: On the surface, she is the same sweet CoolBigSis as in canon. But behind closed doors, she is a sexual abuser who targets her own little brother. She is shown throughout the series to only care about two things- satisfying her hedonistic desires, and preserving her "perfect big sis" reputation.
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* TraumaButton: Feels guilty about having a picnic, as they remind her of the picnics she had with Mari.
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* TraumaButton: Feels guilty about having The very concept of a picnic, picnic has been ruined for her, as they remind her of the picnics she had with Mari.Mari- a sexual abuser who is heavily indicated to have attempted to prey on her.
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* BerserkButton: Downplayed in ''False Heaven''. He's clearly just as angry at Mari as Aubrey is, but has a far better control over his anger.
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* TakeMeInstead: At one point, when Mari attempts to invite Basil to "practice taking pictures" with her, Sunny bursts in and meekly demands she practice for the recital with him instead- which in context is him being willing to subject himself to Mari berating him endlessly- and later be molested by her- in exchange for her leaving his best friend alone.
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* TakeMeInstead: At one point, when Mari attempts to invite Basil to "practice taking pictures" with her, Sunny bursts in and meekly demands she practice for the recital with him instead- which in context is him being willing to subject himself to Mari berating him endlessly- and endlessly (and later be being molested by her- her)- in exchange for her leaving his best friend alone.
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* TakeMeInstead: At one point, when Mari attempts to invite Basil to "practice taking pictures" with her, Sunny bursts in and meekly demands she practice for the recital with him instead- which in context is him being willing to let Mari molest him in exchange for leaving his best friend alone.
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* TakeMeInstead: At one point, when Mari attempts to invite Basil to "practice taking pictures" with her, Sunny bursts in and meekly demands she practice for the recital with him instead- which in context is him being willing to let subject himself to Mari molest berating him endlessly- and later be molested by her- in exchange for her leaving his best friend alone.
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* TakeMeInstead: At one point, when Mari attempts to invite Basil to "practice taking pictures" with her, Sunny bursts in and meekly demands she practice for the recital with him instead- which in context is him being willing to let Mari molest him in exchange for leaving his best friend alone.
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* ThePerfectionist: Even more so than in canon, and it gets ugly here.
--> Mari practiced her song in front of an audience of one. Sunny had went over to Kel and Hero's for a little bit, leaving his friend Basil by himself to listen to Mari's music. While composed for most of it, Basil could see a flash of agitation on her face when she messed up one note. Despite that and Mari's own perfectionism though, Basil thought it was beautiful.\\\
"You did great, Mari!" Basil complimented when she finished, giving her a little applause.\\\
She looked bashful. "I'm glad you liked it, though it could have been better..."
--> Mari practiced her song in front of an audience of one. Sunny had went over to Kel and Hero's for a little bit, leaving his friend Basil by himself to listen to Mari's music. While composed for most of it, Basil could see a flash of agitation on her face when she messed up one note. Despite that and Mari's own perfectionism though, Basil thought it was beautiful.\\\
"You did great, Mari!" Basil complimented when she finished, giving her a little applause.\\\
She looked bashful. "I'm glad you liked it, though it could have been better..."
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* PsychoPink: Still has pink hair and is open about having murderous intent toward Mari. Taken further in ''False Heaven'', where she becomes a public menace in acting out against her memory of Mari (including stalking a girl that looks like her). It's implied that Sunny wants to keep her hair that way so that her natural black wouldn't remind him of Mari.
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* NiceGuy: Like his original self. He instantly believes Sunny's story with no conditions.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: He gets stern with Hero when he initially refuses to believe Sunny. He also gets serious with Basil and Aubrey when he suspects they're still strugging with trauma from Mari but won't confront it.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: He gets stern with Hero when he initially refuses to believe Sunny. He also gets serious with Basil and Aubrey when he suspects they're still strugging with trauma from Mari but won't confront it.
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A split personality created by Omori to protect him from the truth of what Mari did to him.
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* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: In ''False Heaven'', while she can't actually protect Sunny from Mari's sexual aggression since the latter is dead, Aubrey substitutes by doing stuff like drawing a picture of her face and smashing it, destroying her grave, carving the words EVIL WHORE into a stump, destroying a bunch of White Egret Orchids (which are heavily associated with her), and even ''stalking some girl who looks like Mari''. This gets her friends to decide on StagingAnIntervention to help her calm her anger.
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* HatesBeingTouched: Sunny is averse to physical intimacy — particularly from grown women — because he was sexually assaulted by his sister.
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* HatesBeingTouched: Sunny is averse to physical intimacy — particularly from grown women — because he was sexually assaulted by his sister. This causes Aubrey, who's his girlfriend in ''False Heaven'', no short amount of grief since all she wants is to be able to hold him lovingly.
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* DemotedToExtra: He is somewhat of a major focus in the first fic as a being specifically created to protect Sunny from the truth, but once he accepts and Omori does a HeelFaceTurn, he only appears once in ''Truth'' afterwards.
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rape Sunny instead. Not sure how that cut off.
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She shows no feeling other than must for him and only relents because she can
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* EvenEvilCanBeLoved: Despite sexually abusing Sunny, he still loves her and still feels the canonical guilt he does for accidentally killing her. Hero also loved her and its somewhat implied that her, while she also loves him, but is frustrated only shows frustration that Hero doesn't want to have sex with her.