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* LivingWeapon: Paracelsus is a talking axe with his own personality, which is just as kooky as A.B.A's in some regards, especially with his violent personality shifts. Despite his 'true' form being a formless sludge, and making heavy axe noises when dropped, he has been shown to be quite organic as he bleeds when scratched by A.B.A, hungers for and is able to consume blood, and he has a very pronounced LuminescentBlush and [[FantasticArousal
reaction]] when teased by A.B.A.
reaction]] when teased by A.B.A.
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* LivingWeapon: Paracelsus is a talking axe with his own personality, which is just as kooky as A.B.A's in some regards, especially with his violent personality shifts. Despite his 'true' form being a formless sludge, and making heavy axe noises when dropped, he has been shown to be quite organic as he bleeds when scratched by A.B.A, hungers for and is able to consume blood, and he has a very pronounced LuminescentBlush and [[FantasticArousal
[[FantasticArousal reaction]] when suggestively teased by A.B.A.
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* HeelRealization: After spending his lifetime brainwashing and manipulating his wielders into bloody battles at the cost of their lives, and attempting to do the same to poor A.B.A from the moment they first met, their journey together has him self-reflect on the demonic weapon he used to be and how A.B.A's unwillingness for such conflicts caused him to [[HeelFaceTurn change for the better]] in favor of peace. Realizing that his selfishness in trying to control A.B.A is what amplified her jealousy and insecurity leading to his physical instability, he resolves to finally voice their faults and grow together into a more stable pairing, free from any and all toxicity.
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* HeelRealization: After spending his lifetime early years of sapience brainwashing and manipulating his wielders into bloody battles at the cost of their lives, approximately 20 years of being left without a wielder in a wasteland after being defeated by Slayer, and attempting to do the same to poor then being picked up by A.B.A from the moment they first met, and having to deal with her [[UnderStatement unique perspective]] of both their journey together relationship and the world at large; Paracelsus has him self-reflect undergone significant character growth over time. His self-reflection on the demonic weapon he used to be be, and how his now more pronounced concern for A.B.A's unwillingness for such conflicts wellbeing has caused him to [[HeelFaceTurn change for the better]] in favor of peace. Realizing that his selfishness in trying to control encouraging A.B.A to pursue violence through his thirst for blood and Moroha mode is what amplified her jealousy and insecurity leading to his physical instability, he resolves to finally voice their faults and grow together into a more stable pairing, free from any and all toxicity.
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* LivingWeapon: Paracelsus is a talking axe with his own personality, which is just as kooky as A.B.A's in some regards, especially with his violent personality shifts.
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* LivingWeapon: Paracelsus is a talking axe with his own personality, which is just as kooky as A.B.A's in some regards, especially with his violent personality shifts. Despite his 'true' form being a formless sludge, and making heavy axe noises when dropped, he has been shown to be quite organic as he bleeds when scratched by A.B.A, hungers for and is able to consume blood, and he has a very pronounced LuminescentBlush and [[FantasticArousal
reaction]] when teased by A.B.A.
reaction]] when teased by A.B.A.
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A.B.A is a high-risk/high-reward character, starings out generally terrible with limited mobility and slow attack speed. But when she lands her ''Bonding'' command throw (a.k.a. Keygrab) or consumes a bloodpack (she starts with 3 each round), A.B.A will temporarily enter her monstrous ''Moroha Mode'', granting her greatly enhanced mobility, attack options and solid damage. This comes at a price however; she drains her own hit-points every time her attacks connect with the opponent, even if it lands or is blocked while in Moroha Mode. This makes her a very technical character with a reliance on careful resource management and knowing just when to apply pressure with ''Moroha Mode''.\\\
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A.B.A is a high-risk/high-reward character, starings starting out generally terrible with limited mobility and slow attack speed. But when she lands her ''Bonding'' command throw (a.k.a. Keygrab) or consumes a bloodpack (she starts with 3 each round), A.B.A will temporarily enter her monstrous ''Moroha Mode'', granting her greatly enhanced mobility, attack options and solid damage. This comes at a price however; she drains her own hit-points every time her attacks connect with the opponent, even if it lands or is blocked while in Moroha Mode. This makes her a very technical character with a reliance on careful resource management and knowing just when to apply pressure with ''Moroha Mode''.\\\
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--> '''A.B.A:''' I don't know about that. Loving...I understand the concept. But...just understanding something. Can one say that's the same as knowing it?\\
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--> '''A.B.A:''' I don't know about that. Loving...I understand the concept. But...just understanding something.something... Can one say that's the same as knowing it?\\
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A.B.A is explicitly rizzing up Paracelsus in every single one of her victory screens, she's not less unhinged just unhinged in different ways.
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* LighterAndSofter: Their long-awaited return in ''-STRIVE-'' has noticeably scaled down the grittiness of A.B.A's original design and themes; SelfHarm and blood is all over A.B.A's design cues in ''XX'', making her look quite creepy and unhinged. In ''-STRIVE-'', A.B.A's BloodMagic is mostly replaced with a more age-rating-friendly sludge to signal her change of states, and her unhinged behavior is more reigned in than it was before. In Paracelsus' case, he too lost some of his original edge: in the two Moroha states, he turns into a {{Baphomet}}-like demonic visage, while Jealous Rage coats his "head" in sludge and scrambles up his face (with a glimpse of his more demonic form, although more cartoony still, shown in A.B.A's Overdrive).
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* LighterAndSofter: Their long-awaited return in ''-STRIVE-'' has noticeably scaled down the grittiness of A.B.A's original design and themes; SelfHarm and blood is all over A.B.A's design cues in ''XX'', making her look quite creepy and unhinged. In ''-STRIVE-'', A.B.A's BloodMagic is mostly replaced with a more age-rating-friendly sludge to signal her change of states, and her unhinged behavior is more reigned in than it was before.states. In Paracelsus' case, he too lost some of his original edge: in the two Moroha states, he turns into a {{Baphomet}}-like demonic visage, while Jealous Rage coats his "head" in sludge and scrambles up his face (with a glimpse of his more demonic form, although more cartoony still, shown in A.B.A's Overdrive).
