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* GreenEyes: Snowcloud even mentions that toms will love her green eyes.
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* GreenEyes: She's a green-eyed medic and is closely associated with [=StarClan=].
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* BiggerBad: He is much more powerful and malicious than Bonetail, but he hasn't received any focus outside out the prologue.
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* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He is last seen unsheathing his claws to kill a newborn kit named Aurora. It somehow fits into his master plan.
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* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: WouldHurtAChild: He is last seen unsheathing his claws to kill a newborn kit named Aurora. It somehow fits into his master plan.
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* [[RedHeadedHero Red Furred Hero]]: He has ginger fur, and he's very heroic.
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* MeaningfulRename: Changed her name from Nightclaw to Otterfur when she joined [=RiverClan=] both to show her past with [=ShadowClan=] was no more and in memory of Ottertail, who gave his life for her.
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* WorkingWithTheEx: Works with Finflutter to create a strategy to defeat Bonetail.
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* WorkingWithTheEx: Works with her former mate Finflutter to create a strategy to defeat Bonetail.
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* ParentalSubstitute: Raised Darkclaw and Cherrynose and Duskstar had to leave the Nursery and take the role of Clan leader.
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* ParentalSubstitute: Raised Darkclaw and Cherrynose and after Duskstar had to leave the Nursery and take the role of Clan leader.
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!!Hawkkit
Leafkit's sister. A bit of a jerk, but ultimately well-meaning.
Leafkit's sister. A bit of a jerk, but ultimately well-meaning.
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Leafkit's sister. A bit of a jerk,
->"Everyone always overlooks the happy ones. The ones who sulk stand out, but
One of the three main point of view characters. Tidepaw is an upbeat [=RiverClan=] she-cat who never lets anything get her down, despite recent misfortune. At least, that's what she pretends. In reality, Tidepaw hates herself, and hides dark secrets which she believes would cause her Clanmates to hate her.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: She acts fairly rude to some of her Clanmates, but Leafkit mentions that she is nicer than she seems and doesn't mean any harm.
* LeaderWannabe: Hawkkit tells Leafkit that ''she'' will be the one to become Clan leader, because in their litter, she is the fastest.
!!Gustkit
Leafkit's brother. Looks like his father, but doesn't share the dream of being Clan leader which is common in his family.
* LeaderWannabe: Hawkkit tells Leafkit that ''she'' will be the one to become Clan leader, because in their litter, she is the fastest.
!!Gustkit
Leafkit's brother. Looks like his father, but doesn't share the dream of being Clan leader which is common in his family.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: ActionGirl: She acts fairly rude fights frequently, taking on Bear in Chapter 2 and Darkclaw in Chapter 4.
* BeneathTheMask: She seems tosome be an excitable and upbeat she-cat, but that's a false persona she uses to prevent her Clanmates from hating her.
* BreakTheCutie: She seems broken beyond repair. However, we don't actually know what made her that way.
* DarkSecret: She has one, but it's only been hinted at. In Chapter 8 [[spoiler:part of herClanmates, but Leafkit mentions secret turns out to be that she is nicer than killed her father, Quailfeather.]]
* DeclarationOfProtection: Promises to protect Brightpaw, since sheseems believes that it's the only worthwhile thing she can do.
* GenkiGirl: She pretends to be an energetic anddoesn't mean any harm.
optimistic she-cat.
*LeaderWannabe: Hawkkit HealingFactor: The wounds she received during her fight with Bear have mysteriously healed by the time she leaves the Gathering Island.
* HeroicBSOD: In Chapter 4, when Darkclaw wounds Brightpaw. She manages to snap out of it when her mentor Graywave tellsLeafkit her that ''she'' Brightpaw will be okay.
* MurderMakesYouCrazy: In Chapter 8, it's revealed that [[spoiler:a great deal of her self-loathing and depression stems from her guilt over killing her own father.]]
* MysteriousPast: Something happened to break her so hard. It involves Darkclaw, but theone to become Clan leader, because in their litter, rest has only been hinted at.
* OhCrap: In Chapter 4, when she realizes that she has a {{healing factor}}.
* {{Patricide}}: Darkclaw reveals in Chapter 8 that [[spoiler:the rogues did not in fact kill Tidepaw's father Quailfeather. He was killed by Tidepaw herself.]]
* PluckyComicRelief: She pretends to be this.
* PromotionToParent: She has had to care for her sister Brightpaw ever since her father was killed by rogues and her mother went missing.
* SadClown: Her plucky and humorous nature isthe fastest.
!!Gustkit
Leafkit's brother. Looksjust a ruse for her misery.
* ScarsAreForever: She has a noticeable scar across her forehead. It's still as fresh as when she first got it, which perplexes Sunstorm.
* StepfordSmiler: She's faking her cheerfulness to deal with trauma, and to give Brightpaw someone to lean on.
* StepfordSnarker: Seems likehis a snarky joker, but she's really incredibly miserable and hates herself.
* SympatheticMurderer: In Chapter 8 it is revealed that [[spoiler:she killed her own father, butdoesn't share since she's a point of view character, the dream reader gets to see just how much she hates herself over it.]]
!!Darkclaw
->"Is it arrogant ofbeing Clan leader which me to want the she-cat who birthed me to give a simple sign that she loves me?"
One of the three main point of view characters. He iscommon in the son of [=ShadowClan=]'s leader, Duskstar, and his family.distance from her causes him great stress. He is very bloodthirsty, but his deepest desire is to be acknowledged by his Clan. He has some sort of history with Tidepaw. He was also the one who discovered the body of her father Quailfeather, who was killed by rogues.
* BeneathTheMask: She seems to
* BreakTheCutie: She seems broken beyond repair. However, we don't actually know what made her that way.
* DarkSecret: She has one, but it's only been hinted at. In Chapter 8 [[spoiler:part of her
* DeclarationOfProtection: Promises to protect Brightpaw, since she
* GenkiGirl: She pretends to be an energetic and
*
* HeroicBSOD: In Chapter 4, when Darkclaw wounds Brightpaw. She manages to snap out of it when her mentor Graywave tells
* MurderMakesYouCrazy: In Chapter 8, it's revealed that [[spoiler:a great deal of her self-loathing and depression stems from her guilt over killing her own father.]]
* MysteriousPast: Something happened to break her so hard. It involves Darkclaw, but the
* OhCrap: In Chapter 4, when she realizes that she has a {{healing factor}}.
* {{Patricide}}: Darkclaw reveals in Chapter 8 that [[spoiler:the rogues did not in fact kill Tidepaw's father Quailfeather. He was killed by Tidepaw herself.]]
* PluckyComicRelief: She pretends to be this.
* PromotionToParent: She has had to care for her sister Brightpaw ever since her father was killed by rogues and her mother went missing.
* SadClown: Her plucky and humorous nature is
!!Gustkit
Leafkit's brother. Looks
* ScarsAreForever: She has a noticeable scar across her forehead. It's still as fresh as when she first got it, which perplexes Sunstorm.
* StepfordSmiler: She's faking her cheerfulness to deal with trauma, and to give Brightpaw someone to lean on.
* StepfordSnarker: Seems like
* SympatheticMurderer: In Chapter 8 it is revealed that [[spoiler:she killed her own father, but
!!Darkclaw
->"Is it arrogant of
One of the three main point of view characters. He is
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* BadassBeard: Has some kind of fur beard, and he'd be a great fighter if he could control his speed.
* ButtMonkey: Can't control his speed, which leads to him often being hurt by himself and others.
* IdiotHero: He's not the brightest of the kits. One time he even thought that deathberries were good for rat bites.
* RedHerring: Suggested as a possible medicine apprentice a few times, but it is ultimately his sister Leafkit decides to become the medicine apprentice.
!!Eaglekit
One of Leafkit's friends. He has a fairly obvious crush on her. Is the son of Moorwhisker and Runningflame. Silverkit is his sister.
* ButtMonkey: Can't control his speed, which leads to him often being hurt by himself and others.
* IdiotHero: He's not the brightest of the kits. One time he even thought that deathberries were good for rat bites.
* RedHerring: Suggested as a possible medicine apprentice a few times, but it is ultimately his sister Leafkit decides to become the medicine apprentice.
!!Eaglekit
One of Leafkit's friends. He has a fairly obvious crush on her. Is the son of Moorwhisker and Runningflame. Silverkit is his sister.
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* BadassBeard: Has some kind of fur beard, AntiHero: He does care for his Clan and he'd be is firmly on the side of the good guys, but he's also extremely violent and a great fighter if he could control his speed.
jerk.
*ButtMonkey: Can't control his speed, which leads to him ArchEnemy: To Tidepaw.
* AxCrazy: He oftenbeing hurt by himself forgets everything except his bloodlust. Creamfur and others.
Owlflight have had to snap him out of it.
*IdiotHero: BerserkButton: Talking about how he was mentored by Bonetail sets him off into a rage.
* EarNotch: Tidepaw tears his ear in Chapter 4.
* HotBlooded: He'snot the brightest of the kits. One time completely obsessed with battle, and goes charging into it without thinking.
* ItsPersonal: Thinks this about his conflict with Bonetail because heeven thought feels that deathberries were his former mentor betrayed him more than the other Clan cats with his rebellion.
* {{Jerkass}}: Tidepaw sees him as one. His point of view shows us that she's right, as he constantly insults other cats and has serious temper problems.
* MysteriousPast: Something happened between him and Tidepaw, and it serves as a driving source of conflict.
* TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: He wants to be the one to defeat Bonetail, and doesn't want anyone else getting in the way.
* PostVictoryCollapse: After defeating Bonetail, he falls over due to the injuries he was ignoring.
* RoyalBrat: He will not shut up about being the Clan Leader's son. However, he's doing it because of issues with his mother.
* SecretKeeper: In Chapter 8 it is revealed that [[spoiler:he knows that Tidepaw killed her own father]] and [[spoiler:even though he hates her]] he hasn't told anyone else.
* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Several cats (such as Stonepaw and Toadclaw) suggest that Snowcloud is basically his mate. He fervently denies it. (With goodfor rat bites.
* RedHerring: Suggested asreason, since being mates with a possible medicine cat is against the code.)
* ShipTease: Just to troll the audience, he has gotten relationship hints with quite a few cats.
** Hopepaw: He wanted to be her mentor, and they realize how much they understand each other in Chapter 8 and start rubbing against each other.
** Snowcloud: She's the only cat he considers a friend, they always talk with each other at Gatherings, he apparently went to Foxwhisker and asked her to take him to see her, and he is obsessed with her in his flashback.
** Owlflight: In Chapter 8, she goes out and looks for him in the middle of the night and tells him that she wants to fight alongside him. Also, she says that he used to be cute. Additionally, she made his nest for him when he was a kit, and he feels slightly jealous when she's interacting with Lionfur.
** Tidepaw: They used to be friends, and despite how much he claims to hate her he still carries her to a medicine cat when she gets injured in a battle.
** Glace: He attacks her at first, but afterwards he hears her out when she starts talking to him, and it's mentioned that he trusts her.
** Creamfur: Redclaw tries to set him up on a date with her. He agrees to it, but with [[spoiler:the fire throwing a wrench in their plans]], it's unclear how things will turn out.
* SlasherSmile: When attacking Brightpaw in Chapter 4.
* UsedToBeASweetKid: While not a villain (yet), Darkclaw is sarcastic, violent, revenge obsessed, and has a temper problem. When he was a kit, however, he was a lot meeker, more sincere, and less violent. His change in temperament seems to come from losing many cats close to him.
* WellDoneSonGuy: He strives to earn the approval of his mother Duskstar, but finds it hard due to the distance between them.
* YouCanBarelyStand: Sort of. Bonetail's beating makes it incredibly painful for Darkclaw to move, but despite Sootstain's advice, he chases after Bonetail and still manages to defeat him.
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[[folder:Windclan]]
!!Snowcloud
->"Is that what you really believe, Bonetail? Because you're wrong. There is always something worth fighting for. We all have things that we have to protect!"
[=WindClan=]'s medicine cat. She went from apprenticea few times, but it is ultimately his sister Leafkit decides to become the a full medicine apprentice.
!!Eaglekit
One of Leafkit's friends. He hascat at eight moons, because her mentor was killed by a fairly obvious crush on her. Is the son of Moorwhisker and Runningflame. Silverkit is his sister.passing fox. She's best friends with Darkclaw.
*
* AxCrazy: He often
*
* EarNotch: Tidepaw tears his ear in Chapter 4.
* HotBlooded: He's
* ItsPersonal: Thinks this about his conflict with Bonetail because he
* {{Jerkass}}: Tidepaw sees him as one. His point of view shows us that she's right, as he constantly insults other cats and has serious temper problems.
* MysteriousPast: Something happened between him and Tidepaw, and it serves as a driving source of conflict.
* TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: He wants to be the one to defeat Bonetail, and doesn't want anyone else getting in the way.
* PostVictoryCollapse: After defeating Bonetail, he falls over due to the injuries he was ignoring.
* RoyalBrat: He will not shut up about being the Clan Leader's son. However, he's doing it because of issues with his mother.
* SecretKeeper: In Chapter 8 it is revealed that [[spoiler:he knows that Tidepaw killed her own father]] and [[spoiler:even though he hates her]] he hasn't told anyone else.
* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Several cats (such as Stonepaw and Toadclaw) suggest that Snowcloud is basically his mate. He fervently denies it. (With good
* RedHerring: Suggested as
* ShipTease: Just to troll the audience, he has gotten relationship hints with quite a few cats.
** Hopepaw: He wanted to be her mentor, and they realize how much they understand each other in Chapter 8 and start rubbing against each other.
** Snowcloud: She's the only cat he considers a friend, they always talk with each other at Gatherings, he apparently went to Foxwhisker and asked her to take him to see her, and he is obsessed with her in his flashback.
** Owlflight: In Chapter 8, she goes out and looks for him in the middle of the night and tells him that she wants to fight alongside him. Also, she says that he used to be cute. Additionally, she made his nest for him when he was a kit, and he feels slightly jealous when she's interacting with Lionfur.
** Tidepaw: They used to be friends, and despite how much he claims to hate her he still carries her to a medicine cat when she gets injured in a battle.
** Glace: He attacks her at first, but afterwards he hears her out when she starts talking to him, and it's mentioned that he trusts her.
** Creamfur: Redclaw tries to set him up on a date with her. He agrees to it, but with [[spoiler:the fire throwing a wrench in their plans]], it's unclear how things will turn out.
* SlasherSmile: When attacking Brightpaw in Chapter 4.
* UsedToBeASweetKid: While not a villain (yet), Darkclaw is sarcastic, violent, revenge obsessed, and has a temper problem. When he was a kit, however, he was a lot meeker, more sincere, and less violent. His change in temperament seems to come from losing many cats close to him.
* WellDoneSonGuy: He strives to earn the approval of his mother Duskstar, but finds it hard due to the distance between them.
* YouCanBarelyStand: Sort of. Bonetail's beating makes it incredibly painful for Darkclaw to move, but despite Sootstain's advice, he chases after Bonetail and still manages to defeat him.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Windclan]]
!!Snowcloud
->"Is that what you really believe, Bonetail? Because you're wrong. There is always something worth fighting for. We all have things that we have to protect!"
[=WindClan=]'s medicine cat. She went from apprentice
!!Eaglekit
One of Leafkit's friends. He has
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* DeclarationOfProtection: Promises to shred the rogues if they try to hurt Leafkit. Twice, just to be sure.
* [[GenkiGirl Genki Boy]]: He's pretty energetic and excitable.
* TheSmartGuy: Manages to become this in Chapter 9 due to his newfound obsession with the relationships between the Clans.
!!Silverkit
Another one of Leafkit's friends. Brother of Eaglekit, and daughter of Moorwhisker and Runningflame.
* [[GenkiGirl Genki Boy]]: He's pretty energetic and excitable.
* TheSmartGuy: Manages to become this in Chapter 9 due to his newfound obsession with the relationships between the Clans.
!!Silverkit
Another one of Leafkit's friends. Brother of Eaglekit, and daughter of Moorwhisker and Runningflame.
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* DeclarationOfProtection: Promises to shred ActionGirl: Not usually, but she does help Tidepaw fight Bear during the rogues if they try Gathering Island Battle.
* ActuallyIAmHim: Tidepaw mistakes her for the [=WindClan=] medicine apprentice. However, Rainpaw is the one tohurt Leafkit. Twice, just to be sure.
do the correcting.
*[[GenkiGirl Genki Boy]]: He's pretty energetic and excitable.
* TheSmartGuy: Manages to become thisBigDamnHeroes: She saves Tidepaw from Bear in Chapter 9 due Two.
* CelibateHero: As a medicine cat, she can never have a mate.
* CombatMedic: While a medicine cat, she is also trained tohis newfound obsession fight.
* GreenEyes: She's a green-eyed medic and is closely associated withthe relationships between the Clans.
!!Silverkit
Another one of[=StarClan=].
* TheMedic: She's [=WindClan=]'s medicine cat.
* TheMentor: She's going to be Leafkit'sfriends. Brother of Eaglekit, mentor.
* MrExposition: Her main role is to explain the plot to Leafkit anddaughter Tidepaw.
* ScarsAreForever: At the end ofMoorwhisker Chapter Three, Leafkit notices that she has a small scar.
* YoungAndInCharge: She was put in charge of her Clan's medical andRunningflame.spiritual needs at only eight moons old.
!!Hawkkit
Leafkit's sister. A bit of a jerk, but ultimately well-meaning.
* ActuallyIAmHim: Tidepaw mistakes her for the [=WindClan=] medicine apprentice. However, Rainpaw is the one to
*
* TheSmartGuy: Manages to become this
* CelibateHero: As a medicine cat, she can never have a mate.
* CombatMedic: While a medicine cat, she is also trained to
* GreenEyes: She's a green-eyed medic and is closely associated with
!!Silverkit
Another one of
* TheMedic: She's [=WindClan=]'s medicine cat.
* TheMentor: She's going to be Leafkit's
* MrExposition: Her main role is to explain the plot to Leafkit and
* ScarsAreForever: At the end of
* YoungAndInCharge: She was put in charge of her Clan's medical and
!!Hawkkit
Leafkit's sister. A bit of a jerk, but ultimately well-meaning.
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: She is fully aware of her brother's crush on Leafkit.
!!Galeflight
->"You still don't understand me. As long as I can protect those precious to me, there's nothing I wouldn't sacrifice!"
The father of Leafkit, Hawkkit, and Gustkit, Galeflight is a tom who dreams of becoming [=WindClan=]'s leader and bringing peace to the Clans. He is brave and honourable to a fault, which often annoys his Clanmates.
!!Galeflight
->"You still don't understand me. As long as I can protect those precious to me, there's nothing I wouldn't sacrifice!"
The father of Leafkit, Hawkkit, and Gustkit, Galeflight is a tom who dreams of becoming [=WindClan=]'s leader and bringing peace to the Clans. He is brave and honourable to a fault, which often annoys his Clanmates.
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: JerkWithAHeartOfGold: She is fully aware acts fairly rude to some of her brother's crush on Leafkit.
!!Galeflight
->"You still don't understand me. As long as I can protect those precious to me, there's nothing I wouldn't sacrifice!"
The father of Leafkit, Hawkkit,Clanmates, but Leafkit mentions that she is nicer than she seems and Gustkit, Galeflight doesn't mean any harm.
* LeaderWannabe: Hawkkit tells Leafkit that ''she'' will be the one to become Clan leader, because in their litter, she isa tom who dreams the fastest.
!!Gustkit
Leafkit's brother. Looks like his father, but doesn't share the dream ofbecoming [=WindClan=]'s being Clan leader and bringing peace to the Clans. He is brave and honourable to a fault, which often annoys is common in his Clanmates.family.
!!Galeflight
->"You still don't understand me. As long as I can protect those precious to me, there's nothing I wouldn't sacrifice!"
The father of Leafkit, Hawkkit,
* LeaderWannabe: Hawkkit tells Leafkit that ''she'' will be the one to become Clan leader, because in their litter, she is
!!Gustkit
Leafkit's brother. Looks like his father, but doesn't share the dream of
* BadassBeard: Has some kind of fur beard, and he'd be a great fighter if he could control his speed.
* ButtMonkey: Can't control his speed, which leads to him often being hurt by himself and others.
* IdiotHero: He's not the brightest of the kits. One time he even thought that deathberries were good for rat bites.
* RedHerring: Suggested as a possible medicine apprentice a few times, but it is ultimately his sister Leafkit decides to become the medicine apprentice.
!!Eaglekit
One of Leafkit's friends. He has a fairly obvious crush on her. Is the son of Moorwhisker and Runningflame. Silverkit is his sister.
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* DeclarationOfProtection: Promises to shred the rogues if they try to hurt Leafkit. Twice, just to be sure.
* [[GenkiGirl Genki Boy]]: He's pretty energetic and excitable.
* TheSmartGuy: Manages to become this in Chapter 9 due to his newfound obsession with the relationships between the Clans.
!!Silverkit
Another one of Leafkit's friends. Brother of Eaglekit, and daughter of Moorwhisker and Runningflame.
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: She is fully aware of her brother's crush on Leafkit.
!!Galeflight
->"You still don't understand me. As long as I can protect those precious to me, there's nothing I wouldn't sacrifice!"
The father of Leafkit, Hawkkit, and Gustkit, Galeflight is a tom who dreams of becoming [=WindClan=]'s leader and bringing peace to the Clans. He is brave and honourable to a fault, which often annoys his Clanmates.
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* ButtMonkey: Can't control his speed, which leads to him often being hurt by himself and others.
* IdiotHero: He's not the brightest of the kits. One time he even thought that deathberries were good for rat bites.
* RedHerring: Suggested as a possible medicine apprentice a few times, but it is ultimately his sister Leafkit decides to become the medicine apprentice.
!!Eaglekit
One of Leafkit's friends. He has a fairly obvious crush on her. Is the son of Moorwhisker and Runningflame. Silverkit is his sister.
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* DeclarationOfProtection: Promises to shred the rogues if they try to hurt Leafkit. Twice, just to be sure.
* [[GenkiGirl Genki Boy]]: He's pretty energetic and excitable.
* TheSmartGuy: Manages to become this in Chapter 9 due to his newfound obsession with the relationships between the Clans.
!!Silverkit
Another one of Leafkit's friends. Brother of Eaglekit, and daughter of Moorwhisker and Runningflame.
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: She is fully aware of her brother's crush on Leafkit.
!!Galeflight
->"You still don't understand me. As long as I can protect those precious to me, there's nothing I wouldn't sacrifice!"
The father of Leafkit, Hawkkit, and Gustkit, Galeflight is a tom who dreams of becoming [=WindClan=]'s leader and bringing peace to the Clans. He is brave and honourable to a fault, which often annoys his Clanmates.
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!!Snowcloud
->"Is that what you really believe, Bonetail? Because you're wrong. There is always something worth fighting for. We all have things that we have to protect!"
[=WindClan=]'s medicine cat. She went from apprentice to a full medicine cat at eight moons, because her mentor was killed by a passing fox. She's best friends with Darkclaw.
->"Is that what you really believe, Bonetail? Because you're wrong. There is always something worth fighting for. We all have things that we have to protect!"
[=WindClan=]'s medicine cat. She went from apprentice to a full medicine cat at eight moons, because her mentor was killed by a passing fox. She's best friends with Darkclaw.
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->"Is that what you really believe, Bonetail? Because you're wrong. There is always something worth fighting for. We all have things that
->"Why should we
[=WindClan=]'s
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* ActionGirl: Not usually, but she does help Tidepaw fight Bear during the Gathering Island Battle.
* ActuallyIAmHim: Tidepaw mistakes her for the [=WindClan=] medicine apprentice. However, Rainpaw is the one to do the correcting.
* BigDamnHeroes: She saves Tidepaw from Bear in Chapter Two.
* CelibateHero: As a medicine cat, she can never have a mate.
* CombatMedic: While a medicine cat, she is also trained to fight.
* GreenEyes: She's a green-eyed medic and is closely associated with [=StarClan=].
* TheMedic: She's [=WindClan=]'s medicine cat.
* TheMentor: She's going to be Leafkit's mentor.
* MrExposition: Her main role is to explain the plot to Leafkit and Tidepaw.
* ScarsAreForever: At the end of Chapter Three, Leafkit notices that she has a small scar.
* YoungAndInCharge: She was put in charge of her Clan's medical and spiritual needs at only eight moons old.
!!Ravenstar (Ravenfeather)
->"Why should we encourage the breaking of the Warrior Code?"
[=WindClan=]'s leader. He disagrees with [=RiverClan=] taking [=WindClan=] prey, even though [=RiverClan=] needs the prey to survive.
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* ActuallyIAmHim: Tidepaw mistakes her for the [=WindClan=] medicine apprentice. However, Rainpaw is the one to do the correcting.
* BigDamnHeroes: She saves Tidepaw from Bear in Chapter Two.
* CelibateHero: As a medicine cat, she can never have a mate.
* CombatMedic: While a medicine cat, she is also trained to fight.
* GreenEyes: She's a green-eyed medic and is closely associated with [=StarClan=].
* TheMedic: She's [=WindClan=]'s medicine cat.
* TheMentor: She's going to be Leafkit's mentor.
* MrExposition: Her main role is to explain the plot to Leafkit and Tidepaw.
* ScarsAreForever: At the end of Chapter Three, Leafkit notices that she has a small scar.
* YoungAndInCharge: She was put in charge of her Clan's medical and spiritual needs at only eight moons old.
!!Ravenstar (Ravenfeather)
->"Why should we encourage the breaking of the Warrior Code?"
[=WindClan=]'s leader. He disagrees with [=RiverClan=] taking [=WindClan=] prey, even though [=RiverClan=] needs the prey to survive.
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!!Tidepaw
->"Everyone always overlooks the happy ones. The ones who sulk stand out, but nobody ever thinks that someone so cheerful could be so broken inside."
One of the three main point of view characters. Tidepaw is an upbeat [=RiverClan=] she-cat who never lets anything get her down, despite recent misfortune. At least, that's what she pretends. In reality, Tidepaw hates herself, and hides dark secrets which she believes would cause her Clanmates to hate her.
->"Everyone always overlooks the happy ones. The ones who sulk stand out, but nobody ever thinks that someone so cheerful could be so broken inside."
One of the three main point of view characters. Tidepaw is an upbeat [=RiverClan=] she-cat who never lets anything get her down, despite recent misfortune. At least, that's what she pretends. In reality, Tidepaw hates herself, and hides dark secrets which she believes would cause her Clanmates to hate her.
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->"Everyone always overlooks the happy ones. The ones who sulk stand out, but nobody ever thinks that someone so cheerful could be so broken inside.
->"You don't need to carry all your pain by yourself. Lean on me and Wildpaw and all your other friends. That's what we're here for."
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* ActionGirl: She fights frequently, taking on Bear in Chapter 2 and Darkclaw in Chapter 4.
* BeneathTheMask: She seems to be an excitable and upbeat she-cat, but that's a false persona she uses to prevent her Clanmates from hating her.
* BreakTheCutie: She seems broken beyond repair. However, we don't actually know what made her that way.
* DarkSecret: She has one, but it's only been hinted at. In Chapter 8 [[spoiler:part of her secret turns out to be that she killed her father, Quailfeather.]]
* DeclarationOfProtection: Promises to protect Brightpaw, since she believes that it's the only worthwhile thing she can do.
* GenkiGirl: She pretends to be an energetic and optimistic she-cat.
* HealingFactor: The wounds she received during her fight with Bear have mysteriously healed by the time she leaves the Gathering Island.
* HeroicBSOD: In Chapter 4, when Darkclaw wounds Brightpaw. She manages to snap out of it when her mentor Graywave tells her that Brightpaw will be okay.
* MurderMakesYouCrazy: In Chapter 8, it's revealed that [[spoiler:a great deal of her self-loathing and depression stems from her guilt over killing her own father.]]
* MysteriousPast: Something happened to break her so hard. It involves Darkclaw, but the rest has only been hinted at.
* OhCrap: In Chapter 4, when she realizes that she has a {{healing factor}}.
* {{Patricide}}: Darkclaw reveals in Chapter 8 that [[spoiler:the rogues did not in fact kill Tidepaw's father Quailfeather. He was killed by Tidepaw herself.]]
* PluckyComicRelief: She pretends to be this.
* PromotionToParent: She has had to care for her sister Brightpaw ever since her father was killed by rogues and her mother went missing.
* SadClown: Her plucky and humorous nature is just a ruse for her misery.
* ScarsAreForever: She has a noticeable scar across her forehead. It's still as fresh as when she first got it, which perplexes Sunstorm.
* StepfordSmiler: She's faking her cheerfulness to deal with trauma, and to give Brightpaw someone to lean on.
* StepfordSnarker: Seems like a snarky joker, but she's really incredibly miserable and hates herself.
* SympatheticMurderer: In Chapter 8 it is revealed that [[spoiler:she killed her own father, but since she's a point of view character, the reader gets to see just how much she hates herself over it.]]
!!Rainpaw
->"You don't need to carry all your pain by yourself. Lean on me and Wildpaw and all your other friends. That's what we're here for."
The [=RiverClan=] medicine apprentice. She was a loner, but joined [=RiverClan=] when she was fairly young. Before that, her brother Scratch died because of a disease, which made her vow to never lose a cat to sickness again. She is also Tidepaw's best friend, and tries to offer moral support even when her friend fights against it. Boulderpaw of [=WindClan=] has a one-sided rivalry with her.
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* BeneathTheMask: She seems to be an excitable and upbeat she-cat, but that's a false persona she uses to prevent her Clanmates from hating her.
* BreakTheCutie: She seems broken beyond repair. However, we don't actually know what made her that way.
* DarkSecret: She has one, but it's only been hinted at. In Chapter 8 [[spoiler:part of her secret turns out to be that she killed her father, Quailfeather.]]
* DeclarationOfProtection: Promises to protect Brightpaw, since she believes that it's the only worthwhile thing she can do.
* GenkiGirl: She pretends to be an energetic and optimistic she-cat.
* HealingFactor: The wounds she received during her fight with Bear have mysteriously healed by the time she leaves the Gathering Island.
* HeroicBSOD: In Chapter 4, when Darkclaw wounds Brightpaw. She manages to snap out of it when her mentor Graywave tells her that Brightpaw will be okay.
* MurderMakesYouCrazy: In Chapter 8, it's revealed that [[spoiler:a great deal of her self-loathing and depression stems from her guilt over killing her own father.]]
* MysteriousPast: Something happened to break her so hard. It involves Darkclaw, but the rest has only been hinted at.
* OhCrap: In Chapter 4, when she realizes that she has a {{healing factor}}.
* {{Patricide}}: Darkclaw reveals in Chapter 8 that [[spoiler:the rogues did not in fact kill Tidepaw's father Quailfeather. He was killed by Tidepaw herself.]]
* PluckyComicRelief: She pretends to be this.
* PromotionToParent: She has had to care for her sister Brightpaw ever since her father was killed by rogues and her mother went missing.
* SadClown: Her plucky and humorous nature is just a ruse for her misery.
* ScarsAreForever: She has a noticeable scar across her forehead. It's still as fresh as when she first got it, which perplexes Sunstorm.
* StepfordSmiler: She's faking her cheerfulness to deal with trauma, and to give Brightpaw someone to lean on.
* StepfordSnarker: Seems like a snarky joker, but she's really incredibly miserable and hates herself.
* SympatheticMurderer: In Chapter 8 it is revealed that [[spoiler:she killed her own father, but since she's a point of view character, the reader gets to see just how much she hates herself over it.]]
!!Rainpaw
->"You don't need to carry all your pain by yourself. Lean on me and Wildpaw and all your other friends. That's what we're here for."
The [=RiverClan=] medicine apprentice. She was a loner, but joined [=RiverClan=] when she was fairly young. Before that, her brother Scratch died because of a disease, which made her vow to never lose a cat to sickness again. She is also Tidepaw's best friend, and tries to offer moral support even when her friend fights against it. Boulderpaw of [=WindClan=] has a one-sided rivalry with her.
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!!Darkclaw
->"Is it arrogant of me to want the she-cat who birthed me to give a simple sign that she loves me?"
One of the three main point of view characters. He is the son of [=ShadowClan=]'s leader, Duskstar, and his distance from her causes him great stress. He is very bloodthirsty, but his deepest desire is to be acknowledged by his Clan. He has some sort of history with Tidepaw. He was also the one who discovered the body of her father Quailfeather, who was killed by rogues.
->"Is it arrogant of me to want the she-cat who birthed me to give a simple sign that she loves me?"
One of the three main point of view characters. He is the son of [=ShadowClan=]'s leader, Duskstar, and his distance from her causes him great stress. He is very bloodthirsty, but his deepest desire is to be acknowledged by his Clan. He has some sort of history with Tidepaw. He was also the one who discovered the body of her father Quailfeather, who was killed by rogues.
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* AntiHero: He does care for his Clan and is firmly on the side of the good guys, but he's also extremely violent and a jerk.
* ArchEnemy: To Tidepaw.
* AxCrazy: He often forgets everything except his bloodlust. Creamfur and Owlflight have had to snap him out of it.
* BerserkButton: Talking about how he was mentored by Bonetail sets him off into a rage.
* EarNotch: Tidepaw tears his ear in Chapter 4.
* HotBlooded: He's completely obsessed with battle, and goes charging into it without thinking.
* ItsPersonal: Thinks this about his conflict with Bonetail because he feels that his former mentor betrayed him more than the other Clan cats with his rebellion.
* {{Jerkass}}: Tidepaw sees him as one. His point of view shows us that she's right, as he constantly insults other cats and has serious temper problems.
* MysteriousPast: Something happened between him and Tidepaw, and it serves as a driving source of conflict.
* TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: He wants to be the one to defeat Bonetail, and doesn't want anyone else getting in the way.
* PostVictoryCollapse: After defeating Bonetail, he falls over due to the injuries he was ignoring.
* RoyalBrat: He will not shut up about being the Clan Leader's son. However, he's doing it because of issues with his mother.
* SecretKeeper: In Chapter 8 it is revealed that [[spoiler:he knows that Tidepaw killed her own father]] and [[spoiler:even though he hates her]] he hasn't told anyone else.
* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Several cats (such as Stonepaw and Toadclaw) suggest that Snowcloud is basically his mate. He fervently denies it. (With good reason, since being mates with a medicine cat is against the code.)
* ShipTease: Just to troll the audience, he has gotten relationship hints with quite a few cats.
** Hopepaw: He wanted to be her mentor, and they realize how much they understand each other in Chapter 8 and start rubbing against each other.
** Snowcloud: She's the only cat he considers a friend, they always talk with each other at Gatherings, he apparently went to Foxwhisker and asked her to take him to see her, and he is obsessed with her in his flashback.
** Owlflight: In Chapter 8, she goes out and looks for him in the middle of the night and tells him that she wants to fight alongside him. Also, she says that he used to be cute. Additionally, she made his nest for him when he was a kit, and he feels slightly jealous when she's interacting with Lionfur.
** Tidepaw: They used to be friends, and despite how much he claims to hate her he still carries her to a medicine cat when she gets injured in a battle.
** Glace: He attacks her at first, but afterwards he hears her out when she starts talking to him, and it's mentioned that he trusts her.
** Creamfur: Redclaw tries to set him up on a date with her. He agrees to it, but with [[spoiler:the fire throwing a wrench in their plans]], it's unclear how things will turn out.
* SlasherSmile: When attacking Brightpaw in Chapter 4.
* UsedToBeASweetKid: While not a villain (yet), Darkclaw is sarcastic, violent, revenge obsessed, and has a temper problem. When he was a kit, however, he was a lot meeker, more sincere, and less violent. His change in temperament seems to come from losing many cats close to him.
* WellDoneSonGuy: He strives to earn the approval of his mother Duskstar, but finds it hard due to the distance between them.
* YouCanBarelyStand: Sort of. Bonetail's beating makes it incredibly painful for Darkclaw to move, but despite Sootstain's advice, he chases after Bonetail and still manages to defeat him.
!!Duskstar
[=ShadowClan=]'s leader, and the mother of Darkclaw and Cherrynose. She had her kits when she was deputy, but was forced to leave the Nursery when her predecessor died. Nowadays, Darkclaw struggles to earn her approval.
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* ArchEnemy: To Tidepaw.
* AxCrazy: He often forgets everything except his bloodlust. Creamfur and Owlflight have had to snap him out of it.
* BerserkButton: Talking about how he was mentored by Bonetail sets him off into a rage.
* EarNotch: Tidepaw tears his ear in Chapter 4.
* HotBlooded: He's completely obsessed with battle, and goes charging into it without thinking.
* ItsPersonal: Thinks this about his conflict with Bonetail because he feels that his former mentor betrayed him more than the other Clan cats with his rebellion.
* {{Jerkass}}: Tidepaw sees him as one. His point of view shows us that she's right, as he constantly insults other cats and has serious temper problems.
* MysteriousPast: Something happened between him and Tidepaw, and it serves as a driving source of conflict.
* TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: He wants to be the one to defeat Bonetail, and doesn't want anyone else getting in the way.
* PostVictoryCollapse: After defeating Bonetail, he falls over due to the injuries he was ignoring.
* RoyalBrat: He will not shut up about being the Clan Leader's son. However, he's doing it because of issues with his mother.
* SecretKeeper: In Chapter 8 it is revealed that [[spoiler:he knows that Tidepaw killed her own father]] and [[spoiler:even though he hates her]] he hasn't told anyone else.
* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Several cats (such as Stonepaw and Toadclaw) suggest that Snowcloud is basically his mate. He fervently denies it. (With good reason, since being mates with a medicine cat is against the code.)
* ShipTease: Just to troll the audience, he has gotten relationship hints with quite a few cats.
** Hopepaw: He wanted to be her mentor, and they realize how much they understand each other in Chapter 8 and start rubbing against each other.
** Snowcloud: She's the only cat he considers a friend, they always talk with each other at Gatherings, he apparently went to Foxwhisker and asked her to take him to see her, and he is obsessed with her in his flashback.
** Owlflight: In Chapter 8, she goes out and looks for him in the middle of the night and tells him that she wants to fight alongside him. Also, she says that he used to be cute. Additionally, she made his nest for him when he was a kit, and he feels slightly jealous when she's interacting with Lionfur.
** Tidepaw: They used to be friends, and despite how much he claims to hate her he still carries her to a medicine cat when she gets injured in a battle.
** Glace: He attacks her at first, but afterwards he hears her out when she starts talking to him, and it's mentioned that he trusts her.
** Creamfur: Redclaw tries to set him up on a date with her. He agrees to it, but with [[spoiler:the fire throwing a wrench in their plans]], it's unclear how things will turn out.
* SlasherSmile: When attacking Brightpaw in Chapter 4.
* UsedToBeASweetKid: While not a villain (yet), Darkclaw is sarcastic, violent, revenge obsessed, and has a temper problem. When he was a kit, however, he was a lot meeker, more sincere, and less violent. His change in temperament seems to come from losing many cats close to him.
* WellDoneSonGuy: He strives to earn the approval of his mother Duskstar, but finds it hard due to the distance between them.
* YouCanBarelyStand: Sort of. Bonetail's beating makes it incredibly painful for Darkclaw to move, but despite Sootstain's advice, he chases after Bonetail and still manages to defeat him.
!!Duskstar
[=ShadowClan=]'s leader, and the mother of Darkclaw and Cherrynose. She had her kits when she was deputy, but was forced to leave the Nursery when her predecessor died. Nowadays, Darkclaw struggles to earn her approval.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: An in-universe example, in that nobody has any clue what happened to its crystal. However, it was evidently freed, as it appears before Leafpaw in [=StarClan=].
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* UsedToBeASweetKit: While not a villain (yet), Darkclaw is sarcastic, violent, revenge obsessed, and has a temper problem. When he was a kit, however, he was a lot meeker, more sincere, and less violent. His change in temperament seems to come from losing many cats close to him.
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* UsedToBeASweetKit: UsedToBeASweetKid: While not a villain (yet), Darkclaw is sarcastic, violent, revenge obsessed, and has a temper problem. When he was a kit, however, he was a lot meeker, more sincere, and less violent. His change in temperament seems to come from losing many cats close to him.
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[[folder:Legendary Figures]]
!!Jayfeather
One of the Three of Stars, the heroes that saved the Clans from the Dark Forest and during the Echo Wars. Long dead, he appears to Leafpaw in [=StarClan=].
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* BigDamnHeroes: Shows up with Squirrelflight to save Leafpaw from his own EvilTwin, the Nightmare Walker.
* FamedInStory: Now a legend due to his role in saving the Clans. Even fifty years on, everyone has heard of him. However, his reputation is highly misleading, as Leafpaw pictures him as a charming tom who makes she-cats swoon.
* HeroicSacrifice: Gave his life to defeat the Three of Shadows and Ragnarok in the Echo Wars, as did Dovewing.
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!!Jayfeather
One of the Three of Stars, the heroes that saved the Clans from the Dark Forest and during the Echo Wars. Long dead, he appears to Leafpaw in [=StarClan=].
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* BigDamnHeroes: Shows up with Squirrelflight to save Leafpaw from his own EvilTwin, the Nightmare Walker.
* FamedInStory: Now a legend due to his role in saving the Clans. Even fifty years on, everyone has heard of him. However, his reputation is highly misleading, as Leafpaw pictures him as a charming tom who makes she-cats swoon.
* HeroicSacrifice: Gave his life to defeat the Three of Shadows and Ragnarok in the Echo Wars, as did Dovewing.
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* MinorMajorCharacter: He has the very important position of [=WindClan=]'s deputy, but he has done next to nothing.
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* MinorMajorCharacter: He has the very important position of [=WindClan=]'s deputy, but he has done next to nothing.
nothing. However, he finally averts this in Chapter 12 by becoming a rival to Graynose and a spokesman for peace in Galeflight's stead.
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* WideEyedIdealist: Starts as one, though, she becomes more pragmatic after going through some traumatic events.
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One of the three main point of view characters. Leafkit Leafpaw is a the silver [=WindClan=] she-cat who dreams medicine apprentice of one day being the leader of her Clan. Although her dreams are big, she doesn't [=WindClan=]. She is quite have intelligent, able to pinpoint weaknesses in other cats at a complete grip glance, but also incredibly impulsive, often acting on thoughts the way moment she comes up with them. At first, she believed that the Clans work yet.were composed entirely of heroic good cats and bad cats that did evil for no reason. However, she's slowly changing her point of view.
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!!Graynose
A smug, war-mongering tom who commands his own group of [=WindClan=] cats. Holds great sway over Ravenstar, and seeks to destroy [=RiverClan=]. Also mentor to Wolfpaw.
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* ScarsAreForever: Received a set of scars while fighting Whitefeather at some point.
* SmugSnake: He is incredibly smug, constantly belittling everyone who speaks against him (especially Snowcloud), and referring to them as fools.
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* UsedToBeASweetKit: While not a villain (yet), Darkclaw is sarcastic, violent, revenge obsessed, and has a temper problem. When he was a kit, however, he was a lot meeker, more sincere, and less violent. His change in temperament seems to come from losing many cats close to him.
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[[folder:The Rogues]]
!!Bonetail
->"How strange. Don't you Clan cats pride yourselves on your rules and regulations? Yet when I come for a visit, I see you squabbling like a bunch of restless kits."
A former [=ShadowClan=] warrior, who left to form a rebellion against the Clans. He commands an army of rogues, which he promises will be used to wipe out the Clans if he doesn't get what he wants (that being the Medicine Cats). There's more to him than he lets on, but only Snowcloud has tried to figure out his motives.
[[folder:The Rogues]]
!!Bonetail
->"How strange. Don't you Clan cats pride yourselves on your rules and regulations? Yet when I come for a visit, I see you squabbling like a bunch of restless kits."
A former [=ShadowClan=] warrior, who left to form a rebellion against the Clans. He commands an army of rogues, which he promises will be used to wipe out the Clans if he doesn't get what he wants (that being the Medicine Cats). There's more to him than he lets on, but only Snowcloud has tried to figure out his motives.
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[[folder:The Rogues]]
!!Bonetail
->"How strange. Don't you Clan cats pride yourselves on your rules
!!Nightmare Walker
->"I am merely a guardian and
It fought in the Echo Wars long ago, but
* AffablyEvil: Unfailingly polite to Leafpaw (it's probably the most formal speaker among the cast), but also tries to harm her in some way.
* AmbiguousGender: Referred to only as an "it". If it had a gender though, it would probably be a tom, considering that it's a Jayfeather copy.
* BloodMagic: Tries to use some sort of "blood blinding" on Leafpaw, although aside from Jayfeather saying that its bad, the nature of it is unknown.
* DreamWalker: Like Jayfeather, it can walk in dreams. Unlike Jayfeather, it eats those dreams.
* EvilCounterpart: It is Jayfeather's dark counterpart among the Three of Shadows.
* EvilTwin: Other than its glowing red eyes, it looks exactly like Jayfeather.
* RedEyesTakeWarning: The Nightmare Walker's glowing red eyes are what first alert Leafpaw to its presence.
* TakenForGranite: Was turned to crystal during the Echo Wars. However, the crystal vanished, and it returned seemingly unharmed.
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[[folder:The Rogues]]
!!Bonetail
->"How strange. Don't you Clan cats pride yourselves on your rules and regulations? Yet when I come for a visit, I see you squabbling like a bunch of restless kits."
A former [=ShadowClan=] warrior, who left to form a rebellion against the Clans. He commands an army of rogues, which he promises will be used to wipe out the Clans if he doesn't get what he wants (that being the Medicine Cats). There's more to him than he lets on, but only Snowcloud has tried to figure out his motives.
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* AmbiguousGender: Referred to only as an "it". If it had a gender though, it would probably be a tom, considering that it's a Jayfeather copy.
* BloodMagic: Tries to use some sort of "blood blinding" on Leafpaw, although aside from Jayfeather saying that its bad, the nature of it is unknown.
* DreamWalker: Like Jayfeather, it can walk in dreams. Unlike Jayfeather, it eats those dreams.
* EvilCounterpart: It is Jayfeather's dark counterpart among the Three of Shadows.
* EvilTwin: Other than its glowing red eyes, it looks exactly like Jayfeather.
* RedEyesTakeWarning: The Nightmare Walker's glowing red eyes are what first alert Leafpaw to its presence.
* TakenForGranite: Was turned to crystal during the Echo Wars. However, the crystal vanished, and it returned seemingly unharmed.
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[[folder:The Rogues]]
!!Bonetail
->"How strange. Don't you Clan cats pride yourselves on your rules and regulations? Yet when I come for a visit, I see you squabbling like a bunch of restless kits."
A former [=ShadowClan=] warrior, who left to form a rebellion against the Clans. He commands an army of rogues, which he promises will be used to wipe out the Clans if he doesn't get what he wants (that being the Medicine Cats). There's more to him than he lets on, but only Snowcloud has tried to figure out his motives.
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* [[spoiler:AlmostDeadGuy]]: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:he talks to Leafkit and Fieldstone a little bit before he dies.]]
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* [[HappilyMarried Happily Mated]]: He's happy in his relationship with Dovesong.
* [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice]]: In Chapter 9 [[spoiler:he dies pushing Fieldstone away as Amberfang attacks her.]]
* [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice]]: In Chapter 9 [[spoiler:he dies pushing Fieldstone away as Amberfang attacks her.]]
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* [[HappilyMarried Happily Mated]]: HappilyMarried: He's happy in his relationship with Dovesong.
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* [[spoiler:{{Protectorate}}]]: Revealed in Chapter 9. [[spoiler:Galeflight's promise to protect her in Chapter 3 seems like a joke, but he actually means it and gives his life to save her.]]
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* [[spoiler:{{Protectorate}}]]: {{Protectorate}}: Revealed in Chapter 9. [[spoiler:Galeflight's promise to protect her in Chapter 3 seems like a joke, but he actually means it and gives his life to save her.]]
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* [[spoiler:NotSoHarmlessVillain]]: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:his bloodlust wins the battle for [=WindClan=], and Leafkit is actually scared by the hatred she sees in his eyes.]]
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* [[spoiler:NotSoHarmlessVillain]]: NotSoHarmlessVillain: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:his bloodlust wins the battle for [=WindClan=], and Leafkit is actually scared by the hatred she sees in his eyes.]]
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* [[spoiler:{{Patricide}}]]: Darkclaw reveals in Chapter 8 that [[spoiler:the rogues did not in fact kill Tidepaw's father Quailfeather. He was killed by Tidepaw herself.]]
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* [[spoiler:{{Patricide}}]]: {{Patricide}}: Darkclaw reveals in Chapter 8 that [[spoiler:the rogues did not in fact kill Tidepaw's father Quailfeather. He was killed by Tidepaw herself.]]
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** Owlflight: In Chapter 8, she goes out and looks for him in the middle of the night and tells him that she wants to fight alongside him. Also, she says that he used to be cute.
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** Owlflight: In Chapter 8, she goes out and looks for him in the middle of the night and tells him that she wants to fight alongside him. Also, she says that he used to be cute. Additionally, she made his nest for him when he was a kit, and he feels slightly jealous when she's interacting with Lionfur.
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** Glace: He attacks her at first, but afterwards he hears her out when she starts talking to him, and it's mentioned that he trusts her,
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** Glace: He attacks her at first, but afterwards he hears her out when she starts talking to him, and it's mentioned that he trusts her,her.
** Creamfur: Redclaw tries to set him up on a date with her. He agrees to it, but with [[spoiler:the fire throwing a wrench in their plans]], it's unclear how things will turn out.
** Creamfur: Redclaw tries to set him up on a date with her. He agrees to it, but with [[spoiler:the fire throwing a wrench in their plans]], it's unclear how things will turn out.
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* LaughingMad: In Chapter 6, during his crazed rant to the [=ShadowClan=] group, he laughs with glee when he sees that Dawnfern, one of the cats he wants to kill, is with them.
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* ApologeticAttacker: Apologizes to Darkclaw as she fights him in Chapter 6.
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* YouCanBarelyStand: Sort of. Bonetail's beating makes it incredibly painful for Darkclaw to move, but despite Sootstain's advice, he chases after Bonetail and still manages to defeat him.
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[=WindClan=]'s medicine cat. She went from apprentice to a full medicine cat at eight moons, because her mentor was killed by a passing fox.
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[=WindClan=]'s medicine cat. She went from apprentice to a full medicine cat at eight moons, because her mentor was killed by a passing fox. She's best friends with Darkclaw.
* ConfusionFu: Had an unorthodox fighting style which won him many fights due to his unpredictability.
* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Several cats (such as Stonepaw and Toadclaw) suggest that Snowcloud is basically his mate. He fervently denies it. (With good reason, since being mates with a medicine cat is against the code.)
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[=ShadowClan=]'s deputy. Spent four moons as Darkclaw's mentor after Bonetail turned against the Clan. He doesn't agree with his leader's decision to abandon [=RiverClan=].
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[=ShadowClan=]'s deputy.deputy, mate to Lilymist, and father of Owlflight and Shrewfang. Spent four moons as Darkclaw's mentor after Bonetail turned against the Clan. He doesn't agree with his leader's decision to abandon [=RiverClan=].
* TheMentor: Was previously mentor to Darkclaw.
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* StarCrossedLovers: He and a [=RiverClan=] she-cat fell in love and had kits together, but they're apart now. Those kits are Skystorm and Grasstail of [=RiverClan=] and Creamfur of [=ShadowClan=].
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* StarCrossedLovers: He and Scaleshine, a [=RiverClan=] she-cat she-cat, fell in love and had kits together, but they're apart now. Those kits are Skystorm and Grasstail of [=RiverClan=] and Creamfur of [=ShadowClan=].
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!!Fernheart
->"Bonetail thinks of you like a son. Look after yourself, okay?"
Bonetail's mate. Died four moons before the story began, on the night of a Gathering. Her death drove Bonetail over the edge, and caused him to hate medicine cats.
->"Bonetail thinks of you like a son. Look after yourself, okay?"
Bonetail's mate. Died four moons before the story began, on the night of a Gathering. Her death drove Bonetail over the edge, and caused him to hate medicine cats.
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->"Bonetail thinks
The daughter of
Bonetail's mate. Died four moons before the story began, on the night of a Gathering. Her death drove Bonetail over the edge,
* CurbStompBattle: When they were kits, she defeated Darkclaw before he could even make a move.
* HeroicBastard: She's a loyal and kind warrior who just happens to be a halfClan.
* ShipTease: Redclaw suggests to Darkclaw that she likes him.
!!Fernheart
->"Bonetail thinks of you like a son. Look after yourself, okay?"
Bonetail's mate. Died four moons before the story began, on the night of a Gathering. Her death drove Bonetail over the edge, and caused him to hate medicine cats.
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* HeroicBastard: She's a loyal and kind warrior who just happens to be a halfClan.
* ShipTease: Redclaw suggests to Darkclaw that she likes him.
!!Fernheart
->"Bonetail thinks of you like a son. Look after yourself, okay?"
Bonetail's mate. Died four moons before the story began, on the night of a Gathering. Her death drove Bonetail over the edge, and caused him to hate medicine cats.
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!!Sunstorm
->"I am not Clanborn like the cats gathered here. The animosity the Clans hold for each other is not burned into my blood. I serve the medicine cat code, which tells us that all four Clans are worth fighting for."
[=ThunderClan=]'s medicine cat. Despite his undying loyalty to his own Clan, he cares for all the Clans, protecting them for hardship.
[[folder:Thunderclan]]
!!Sunstorm
->"I am not Clanborn like the cats gathered here. The animosity the Clans hold for each other is not burned into my blood. I serve the medicine cat code, which tells us that all four Clans are worth fighting for."
[=ThunderClan=]'s medicine cat. Despite his undying loyalty to his own Clan, he cares for all the Clans, protecting them for hardship.
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!!Sunstorm
!!Lionfur
->"I
The
[=ThunderClan=]'s medicine cat. Despite his undying loyalty to his own Clan, he cares for all
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Redclaw says that while Lionfur isn't that smart and he loses all the time, when his friends are threatened he becomes a force to be reckoned with.
* IdiotHero: Strives to be a hero, but is kind of a moron. At one point, he even mistakes a rogue Darkclaw is fighting for a squirrel.
* TheRival: He's the cat Darkclaw hates most. They consider each other adversaries and frequently fight.
!!Lilymist
->"You're my little warrior. You know that, right?"
The mother of Owlflight and Shrewfang, as well as the foster mother of Darkclaw and Cherrynose after Duskstar had to leave the Nursery. Overall a kind and caring mother. She died at some point between Darkclaw's apprenticeship and the beginning of the story.
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* DeceasedParentsAreTheBest: She was an awesome mom, but she's dead.
* TheLostLenore: For her mate Redclaw, who still lives and grieves for her.
* ParentalSubstitute: Raised Darkclaw and Cherrynose and Duskstar had to leave the Nursery and take the role of Clan leader.
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[[folder:Thunderclan]]
!!Sunstorm
->"I am not Clanborn like the cats gathered here. The animosity the Clans hold for each other is not burned into my blood. I serve the medicine cat code, which tells us that all four Clans are worth fighting for."
[=ThunderClan=]'s medicine cat. Despite his undying loyalty to his own Clan, he cares for all the Clans, protecting them for hardship.
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* IdiotHero: Strives to be a hero, but is kind of a moron. At one point, he even mistakes a rogue Darkclaw is fighting for a squirrel.
* TheRival: He's the cat Darkclaw hates most. They consider each other adversaries and frequently fight.
!!Lilymist
->"You're my little warrior. You know that, right?"
The mother of Owlflight and Shrewfang, as well as the foster mother of Darkclaw and Cherrynose after Duskstar had to leave the Nursery. Overall a kind and caring mother. She died at some point between Darkclaw's apprenticeship and the beginning of the story.
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* DeceasedParentsAreTheBest: She was an awesome mom, but she's dead.
* TheLostLenore: For her mate Redclaw, who still lives and grieves for her.
* ParentalSubstitute: Raised Darkclaw and Cherrynose and Duskstar had to leave the Nursery and take the role of Clan leader.
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!!Sunstorm
->"I am not Clanborn like the cats gathered here. The animosity the Clans hold for each other is not burned into my blood. I serve the medicine cat code, which tells us that all four Clans are worth fighting for."
[=ThunderClan=]'s medicine cat. Despite his undying loyalty to his own Clan, he cares for all the Clans, protecting them for hardship.
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!!Flint
The leader of the Sky Avengers, a group of cats that tried to destroy the Clans three years before the events of ''Golden Dawn: Lost Sunrise''.
The leader of the Sky Avengers, a group of cats that tried to destroy the Clans three years before the events of ''Golden Dawn: Lost Sunrise''.
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The leader of the Sky Avengers, a group of
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* CurbStompBattle: He easily dispatches Lionfur, Owlflight, Redclaw, and Newtfoot, taking only minimal scratches (that proceed to heal themselves) in the process.
* FauxAffablyEvil: Acts polite and calls his enemies guests, while trying to kill them. This only slips when Slash asks him about a treasure he stole from [=ShadowClan=].
* HealingFactor: Lionfur tears out his throat, but it simply grows back. As well, all the scratches he receives in his fight with the [=ShadowClan=] patrol simply vanish.
* ImplacableMan: Shrugs off all wounds, including mortal ones. Last seen being burned to a crisp, but even that doesn't seem to be enough to kill him.
* ManOnFire: He's only incapacitated when he gets trapped under a piece of wood and set on fire.
* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Casually tells Darkclaw that he was fighting cats 100 seasons ago. If he's telling the truth, then he's more than twice as old as the oldest of elders.
!!Flint
The leader of the Sky Avengers, a group of cats that tried to destroy the Clans three years before the events of ''Golden Dawn: Lost Sunrise''.
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* FauxAffablyEvil: Acts polite and calls his enemies guests, while trying to kill them. This only slips when Slash asks him about a treasure he stole from [=ShadowClan=].
* HealingFactor: Lionfur tears out his throat, but it simply grows back. As well, all the scratches he receives in his fight with the [=ShadowClan=] patrol simply vanish.
* ImplacableMan: Shrugs off all wounds, including mortal ones. Last seen being burned to a crisp, but even that doesn't seem to be enough to kill him.
* ManOnFire: He's only incapacitated when he gets trapped under a piece of wood and set on fire.
* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Casually tells Darkclaw that he was fighting cats 100 seasons ago. If he's telling the truth, then he's more than twice as old as the oldest of elders.
!!Flint
The leader of the Sky Avengers, a group of cats that tried to destroy the Clans three years before the events of ''Golden Dawn: Lost Sunrise''.
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->"I'll beat you someday. Because you're my rival, Tidepaw."
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* GenkiBoy: He's pretty energetic and excitable.
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* GenkiBoy: [[GenkiGirl Genki Boy]]: He's pretty energetic and excitable.
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* BerserkButton: Being called Nightclaw (her [=ShadowClan=] name), bothers her greatly, although her reaction varies between being angered and simply being annoyed.
!!Mistfur
[=RiverClan=]'s current deputy.
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* NumberTwo: She's second-in-command of [=RiverClan=] by virtue of being deputy.
[=RiverClan=]'s current deputy.
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* IntergenerationalFriendship: She's good friends with Streampaw, who is much younger than her.
* NumberTwo: She's second-in-command of [=RiverClan=] by virtue of being deputy.
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A tom who always steals Nightheart's catnip and gets high with it. He was once a respected warrior and the mate of [=RiverClan=]'s leader Otterstar, but he fell into depression when his kits died.
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A tom who always steals Nightheart's catnip and gets high with it. He was once a respected famed warrior and whose strategy led the mate of Clans to victory when the Sky Avengers invaded. Finflutter was mates with Otterstar, [=RiverClan=]'s leader Otterstar, but he fell into depression leader, and they had two kits, Dustclaw and Sparrowheart. However, when his those two kits died.died saving Finflutter and a group of [=RiverClan=] cats from [=ShadowClan=], he grew depressed and broke off his relationship with Otterstar. In modern times, he's fairly useless, and steals catmint from Nightheart. He's also Tidepaw's uncle.
* ItsAllMyFault: Blames himself for the deaths of his kits, Dustclaw and Sparrowheart.
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* {{Jerkass}}: He isn't very nice to Tidepaw.
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* {{Jerkass}}: He isn't very nice to Tidepaw.Tidepaw, or to any kits he sees.
* [[ChildHater Kit Hater]]: He detests kits and thinks that they should learn to behave themselves.
* [[ChildHater Kit Hater]]: He detests kits and thinks that they should learn to behave themselves.
* ParentalNeglect: In the past, Tidepaw accused him of it, saying he was never there for her or Brightpaw. However, he is aware of this and tries to be a better father.
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->"All mothers worry about their kits. You and Brightkit are the most precious things in the world to me, so it's only natural."
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* ParentalNeglect: She hardly spends any time with her son Darkclaw, which causes him to have issues.
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* HiddenAgendaVillain: All we know is that his plan involves killing some cats, and the Clan cats are in danger because of it.
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* HiddenAgendaVillain: All we know is that his plan involves killing some cats, two kits named Nix and Aurora, and that the Clan cats are in danger because of it.
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->"Do what you wish. It's not as if it concerns me. I'm just glad your hatred is still so strong. You'd be useless to me otherwise."
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* TheDreaded: Even the Watcher is The cats that know of him seem pretty scared of him.
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->"The survival of all four Clans has always been [=StarClan=]'s will, and I will not let you condemn another Clan for the sake of your pride."
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* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He is last seen carrying off a kit so that he can kill it. It somehow fits into his master plan.
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* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He is last seen carrying off a kit so that he can unsheathing his claws to kill it.a newborn kit named Aurora. It somehow fits into his master plan.
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* DarkActionGirl: Stealing kits and performing daring escapes is all in a day's work for her.
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* DarkActionGirl: Stealing kits and performing daring escapes from their mother is all in a day's work for her.
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* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: She throws a kit into a river, causing it to drown.
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* [[ChildHater Kit Hater]]: She despises kits and compares them to maggots. She also gloats over killing Nix and wanted to kill Aurora because she just hates kits that much.
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: She throws a kit named Nix into a river, causing it todrown.
drown. She also begged the Watcher to let her kill Nix's sister Aurora.
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: She throws a kit named Nix into a river, causing it to
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->"My goal is, as it always was, to stain this land crimson with the blood of the Clan cats."
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->"I told her everything that you told me."
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->"I told her everything apologize. There were two kits, but I had to throw the one that the mother called Nix into the river. She gave chase, you told me.see, so I thought that it would deter her if I drowned one of her brats. You do not know how ''heavy'' they can be until you try to steal a pair."
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* BerserkButton: When other Clan cats call Lightningblaze a murderer, it infuriates her.
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Tidepaw's sister. A quarter moon before Tidepaw's story began, she sometime obtained an incurable illness.
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Tidepaw's sister. A quarter moon before Tidepaw's story began, she sometime obtained an incurable illness. She's also a competent tracker.
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* TheMedic: Of [=RiverClan=].
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* TheMedic: Of [=RiverClan=].
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* BackFromTheDead: Loses a life in the final battle against Bonetail and his rogues, but she has nine lives so she's okay.
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* [[spoiler:{{Protectorate}}]]: [[spoiler:Galeflight's promise to protect her in Chapter 3 seems like a joke, but he actually means it and gives his life to save her.]]
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* [[spoiler:{{Protectorate}}]]: Revealed in Chapter 9. [[spoiler:Galeflight's promise to protect her in Chapter 3 seems like a joke, but he actually means it and gives his life to save her.]]
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* [[spoiler:MurderMakesYouCrazy]]: [[spoiler:A great deal of her self-loathing and depression stems from her guilt over killing her own father.]]
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* [[spoiler:MurderMakesYouCrazy]]: [[spoiler:A In Chapter 8, it's revealed that [[spoiler:a great deal of her self-loathing and depression stems from her guilt over killing her own father.]]
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* [[spoiler:SympatheticMurderer]]: [[spoiler:She killed her own father, but since she's a point of view character, the reader gets to see just how much she hates herself over it.]]
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* [[spoiler:SympatheticMurderer]]: [[spoiler:She In Chapter 8 it is revealed that [[spoiler:she killed her own father, but since she's a point of view character, the reader gets to see just how much she hates herself over it.]]
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* DeadGuyJunior: Played with. She deeply respected Ottertail, and when he died she took on his prefix to honour him.
* RousingSpeech: In Chapter 7, she gives a speech to the combined [=RiverClan=] and [=ShadowClan=] forces about how it's time to start fighting back against Bonetail.
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* WorkingWithTheEx: Works together with his former mate Otterstar to combat Bonetail.
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* ItsPersonal: Thinks this about his conflict with Bonetail because he feels that his former mentor betrayed him more than the other Clan cats with his rebellion.
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* TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: He wants to be the one to defeat Bonetail, and doesn't want anyone else getting in the way.
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* BigDamnHeroes: When Darkclaw is getting beaten down by Bonetail in Chapter 8, she saves him by calling out to Bonetail and luring him away.
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* CainAndAbel: He's an enemy to his brother Sootstain and sister Foxwhisker. Both of those two go through much stress about fighting their formerly heroic brother.