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!!The Watcher
->"My goal is, as it always was, to stain this land crimson with the blood of the Clan cats."
A mysterious figure who seeks the destruction of the Clans. His plans involved tracking down the enigmatic tom known as Arise. Although his identity is unclear, he has apparently committed a deed so horrible that even thinking about it would be an enormous crime.
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!!The Watcher
->"My goal is, as it always was, to stain this land crimson with the blood of the Clan cats."
A mysterious figure who seeks the destruction of the Clans. His plans involved tracking down the enigmatic tom known as Arise. Although his identity is unclear, he has apparently committed a deed so horrible that even thinking about it would be an enormous crime.
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!!The Watcher
->"My goal is, as it always was, to stain this land crimson with
!!Sandstone
[=ThunderClan=]'s current deputy and Lightningblaze's niece. Always dreamed of becoming leader, and was appointed deputy after the
A mysterious figure
In Interlude 1, she was attacked by Hazelfrost, who
* LeaderWannabe: Her dream is to become Clan leader. She has a good shot at, considering her current status as deputy.
* NumberTwo: She's currently [=ThunderClan=]'s deputy.
* OhCrap: Has this reaction when Hazelfrost attacks her.
* TheRival: Due to both wanting to be leaders, she and Jaytalon are naturally rivals.
!!Jaytalon
A [=ThunderClan=] tom that dreams of being Clan leader. Thornstar, [=ThunderClan=]'s current leader, and Whisperwing, the elderly deputy of [=ThunderClan=], both thought he was the best choice for deputy. Whisperwing was planning to retire as soon as Jaytalon became a mentor and could be appointed deputy. However, Whisperwing died before Jaytalon could receive an apprentice (leading many to suspect that she had been murdered by Lightningblaze), forcing Thornstar to select the next best choice, Sandstone, as deputy.
Jaytalon was later given an apprentice named Mousepaw. However, Mousepaw disappeared shortly after becoming an apprentice. Whether Lightningblaze or the rogues were involved in Mousepaw's disappearance has yet to be seen.
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* BigDamnHeroes: In Interlude 1, he shows up to save Sandstone from the AxCrazy Hazelfrost.
* LeaderWannabe: More than anything else, he wants to be leader of [=ThunderClan=].
* TheRival: His desire to be leader makes him one to Sandstone.
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[[folder:The Watcher's Crew]]
!!The Watcher
->"My goal is, as it always was, to stain this land crimson with the blood of the Clan cats."
A mysterious figure who seeks the destruction of the Clans. His plans involved tracking down the enigmatic tom known as Arise. Although his identity is unclear, he has apparently committed a deed so horrible that even thinking about it would be an enormous crime.
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* NumberTwo: She's currently [=ThunderClan=]'s deputy.
* OhCrap: Has this reaction when Hazelfrost attacks her.
* TheRival: Due to both wanting to be leaders, she and Jaytalon are naturally rivals.
!!Jaytalon
A [=ThunderClan=] tom that dreams of being Clan leader. Thornstar, [=ThunderClan=]'s current leader, and Whisperwing, the elderly deputy of [=ThunderClan=], both thought he was the best choice for deputy. Whisperwing was planning to retire as soon as Jaytalon became a mentor and could be appointed deputy. However, Whisperwing died before Jaytalon could receive an apprentice (leading many to suspect that she had been murdered by Lightningblaze), forcing Thornstar to select the next best choice, Sandstone, as deputy.
Jaytalon was later given an apprentice named Mousepaw. However, Mousepaw disappeared shortly after becoming an apprentice. Whether Lightningblaze or the rogues were involved in Mousepaw's disappearance has yet to be seen.
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* BigDamnHeroes: In Interlude 1, he shows up to save Sandstone from the AxCrazy Hazelfrost.
* LeaderWannabe: More than anything else, he wants to be leader of [=ThunderClan=].
* TheRival: His desire to be leader makes him one to Sandstone.
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[[folder:The Watcher's Crew]]
!!The Watcher
->"My goal is, as it always was, to stain this land crimson with the blood of the Clan cats."
A mysterious figure who seeks the destruction of the Clans. His plans involved tracking down the enigmatic tom known as Arise. Although his identity is unclear, he has apparently committed a deed so horrible that even thinking about it would be an enormous crime.
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A she-cat working for The Watcher. As part of his plan, she kidnaps two newborn kits.
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* TheFaceless: Who is she? What Clan is she from? What does she look like? The only thing that we know about her is that in the first six chapters and the interlude, one of the appearing characters is her.
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* TheFaceless: Who is she? What Clan is she from? What does she look like? The only thing that we know about her is that her true identity appears somewhere in the first six chapters and the interlude, one of the appearing characters is her.that she isn't Hazelfrost.
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* NumberTwo: Formerly the second-in-command to Bonetail.
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* SecretKeeper: In Chapter 8 it is revealed that [[spoiler:he knows that Tidepaw killed her own father]] and [[spoiler:even though he hates her]] he hasn't told anyone else.
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A grumpy [=ThunderClan=] warrior. Many Clan cats believe that her murdered [=ThunderClan=]'s former deputy Whisperwing so that his niece Sandstone could be deputy.
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A grumpy [=ThunderClan=] warrior. Many Clan cats believe that her he murdered [=ThunderClan=]'s former deputy Whisperwing so that his niece Sandstone could be deputy.
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* MysteriousPast: Did he really kill Whisperwing or did something else happen? No one knows for certain.
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* IGaveMyWord: He never breaks a promise, even if it means putting himself in danger. [[spoiler:He even dies to keep a promise that seemed to be a joke.]]
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* IGaveMyWord: One of his defining traits. He never breaks a promise, even if it means putting himself in danger. [[spoiler:He even dies to keep a promise that seemed to be a joke.]]
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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: He knows that it will get him in trouble, but he still speaks out against Ravenstar's treatment of [=RiverClan=] at the Gathering.
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* LeaderWannabe: Her dream is to become Clan leader.
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* LeaderWannabe: Her dream is to become Clan leader. Or was, as she is now determined to become a medicine cat.
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** Glace: He attacks her at first, but afterwards he hears her out when she starts talking to him, and it's mentioned that he trusts her,
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* TheFaceless: Who is he? What does he even look like? The audience has no clue, and outside of the Deliverer and Arise, it's unlikely that anyone in universe knows who he is, or even that he's plotting anything.
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* TheFaceless: Who is she? What Clan is she from? What does she look like? The only thing that we know about her is that in the first six chapters and the interlude, one of the appearing characters is her.
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* CurbStompBattle: His fight with Darkclaw in Chapter 6. After the setup in Chapter 5 you'd expect some kind of showdown, but instead he effortlessly knocks Darkclaw aside.
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With the old ''Literature/WarriorCats'' characters joining the ranks of [=StarClan=], ''Golden Dawn'' picks up the slack with many replacements.
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!!Galeflight
->"You still don't understand me. As long as I can protect those precious to me, there's nothing I wouldn't sacrifice!"
The father of Leafkit, Hawkkit, and Gustkit, Galeflight is a tom who dreams of becoming [=WindClan=]'s leader and bringing peace to the Clans. He is brave and honourable to a fault, which often annoys his Clanmates.
->"You still don't understand me. As long as I can protect those precious to me, there's nothing I wouldn't sacrifice!"
The father of Leafkit, Hawkkit, and Gustkit, Galeflight is a tom who dreams of becoming [=WindClan=]'s leader and bringing peace to the Clans. He is brave and honourable to a fault, which often annoys his Clanmates.
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->"You still don't understand me. As long as I can protect those precious to me, there's nothing I wouldn't sacrifice!"
The father
Leafkit's sister. A bit of
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* [[spoiler:AlmostDeadGuy]]: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:he talks to Leafkit and Fieldstone a little bit before he dies.]]
* BigDamnHeroes: He saves Leafkit from Slash in Chapter Three.
* {{Expy}}: He's based on {{Shonen}} protagonists, drawing most heavily from Manga/{{Naruto}}.
* [[FieryRedhead Fiery Red Pelt]]: He's incredibly excitable, and rushes off to help others at the drop of a hat.
* [[HappilyMarried Happily Mated]]: He's happy in his relationship with Dovesong.
* [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice]]: In Chapter 9 [[spoiler:he dies pushing Fieldstone away as Amberfang attacks her.]]
* HonorBeforeReason: He refuses to break his promise to Leafkit, even though it puts her in danger.
* HotBlooded: He always leaps in to help those in need.
* IdiotHero: Fieldstone is always there pointing out that he isn't very bright.
* IGaveMyWord: He never breaks a promise, even if it means putting himself in danger. [[spoiler:He even dies to keep a promise that seemed to be a joke.]]
* LeaderWannabe: His goal is to become Clan leader.
* MartialPacifist: He talks about peace nearly every time he appears, but he still has plenty of fights against cats like Bear and Slash.
* [[spoiler:SlashedThroat]]: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:he dies because Amberfang slices open his throat.]]
* ToBeAMaster: His dream is to become Clan Leader and change the Clans.
!!Snowcloud
->"Is that what you really believe, Bonetail? Because you're wrong. There is always something worth fighting for. We all have things that we have to protect!"
[=WindClan=]'s medicine cat. She went from apprentice to a full medicine cat at eight moons, because her mentor was killed by a passing fox.
* BigDamnHeroes: He saves Leafkit from Slash in Chapter Three.
* {{Expy}}: He's based on {{Shonen}} protagonists, drawing most heavily from Manga/{{Naruto}}.
* [[FieryRedhead Fiery Red Pelt]]: He's incredibly excitable, and rushes off to help others at the drop of a hat.
* [[HappilyMarried Happily Mated]]: He's happy in his relationship with Dovesong.
* [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice]]: In Chapter 9 [[spoiler:he dies pushing Fieldstone away as Amberfang attacks her.]]
* HonorBeforeReason: He refuses to break his promise to Leafkit, even though it puts her in danger.
* HotBlooded: He always leaps in to help those in need.
* IdiotHero: Fieldstone is always there pointing out that he isn't very bright.
* IGaveMyWord: He never breaks a promise, even if it means putting himself in danger. [[spoiler:He even dies to keep a promise that seemed to be a joke.]]
* LeaderWannabe: His goal is to become Clan leader.
* MartialPacifist: He talks about peace nearly every time he appears, but he still has plenty of fights against cats like Bear and Slash.
* [[spoiler:SlashedThroat]]: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:he dies because Amberfang slices open his throat.]]
* ToBeAMaster: His dream is to become Clan Leader and change the Clans.
!!Snowcloud
->"Is that what you really believe, Bonetail? Because you're wrong. There is always something worth fighting for. We all have things that we have to protect!"
[=WindClan=]'s medicine cat. She went from apprentice to a full medicine cat at eight moons, because her mentor was killed by a passing fox.
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* [[spoiler:AlmostDeadGuy]]: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:he talks JerkWithAHeartOfGold: She acts fairly rude to some of her Clanmates, but Leafkit and Fieldstone a little bit before he dies.]]
* BigDamnHeroes: He saves Leafkit from Slash in Chapter Three.
* {{Expy}}: He's based on {{Shonen}} protagonists, drawing most heavily from Manga/{{Naruto}}.
* [[FieryRedhead Fiery Red Pelt]]: He's incredibly excitable, and rushes off to help others at the drop of a hat.
* [[HappilyMarried Happily Mated]]: He's happy in his relationship with Dovesong.
* [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice]]: In Chapter 9 [[spoiler:he dies pushing Fieldstone away as Amberfang attacks her.]]
* HonorBeforeReason: He refuses to break his promise to Leafkit, even though it puts her in danger.
* HotBlooded: He always leaps in to help those in need.
* IdiotHero: Fieldstone is always there pointing outmentions that he isn't very bright.
* IGaveMyWord: He never breaks a promise, even if it means putting himself in danger. [[spoiler:He even dies to keep a promise that seemed to be a joke.]]
she is nicer than she seems and doesn't mean any harm.
* LeaderWannabe:His goal is Hawkkit tells Leafkit that ''she'' will be the one to become Clan leader.
* MartialPacifist: He talks about peace nearly every time he appears, but he still has plenty of fights against cats like Bear and Slash.
* [[spoiler:SlashedThroat]]: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:he diesleader, because Amberfang slices open in their litter, she is the fastest.
!!Gustkit
Leafkit's brother. Looks like histhroat.]]
* ToBeAMaster: Hisfather, but doesn't share the dream is to become of being Clan Leader and change the Clans.
!!Snowcloud
->"Is that what you really believe, Bonetail? Because you're wrong. Thereleader which is always something worth fighting for. We all have things that we have to protect!"
[=WindClan=]'s medicine cat. She went from apprentice to a full medicine cat at eight moons, because her mentor was killed by a passing fox.common in his family.
* BigDamnHeroes: He saves Leafkit from Slash in Chapter Three.
* {{Expy}}: He's based on {{Shonen}} protagonists, drawing most heavily from Manga/{{Naruto}}.
* [[FieryRedhead Fiery Red Pelt]]: He's incredibly excitable, and rushes off to help others at the drop of a hat.
* [[HappilyMarried Happily Mated]]: He's happy in his relationship with Dovesong.
* [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice]]: In Chapter 9 [[spoiler:he dies pushing Fieldstone away as Amberfang attacks her.]]
* HonorBeforeReason: He refuses to break his promise to Leafkit, even though it puts her in danger.
* HotBlooded: He always leaps in to help those in need.
* IdiotHero: Fieldstone is always there pointing out
* IGaveMyWord: He never breaks a promise, even if it means putting himself in danger. [[spoiler:He even dies to keep a promise that seemed to be a joke.]]
* LeaderWannabe:
* MartialPacifist: He talks about peace nearly every time he appears, but he still has plenty of fights against cats like Bear and Slash.
* [[spoiler:SlashedThroat]]: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:he dies
!!Gustkit
Leafkit's brother. Looks like his
* ToBeAMaster: His
!!Snowcloud
->"Is that what you really believe, Bonetail? Because you're wrong. There
[=WindClan=]'s medicine cat. She went from apprentice to a full medicine cat at eight moons, because her mentor was killed by a passing fox.
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* ActionGirl: Not usually, but she does help Tidepaw fight Bear during the Gathering Island Battle.
* ActuallyIAmHim: Tidepaw mistakes her for the [=WindClan=] medicine apprentice. However, Rainpaw is the one to do the correcting.
* BigDamnHeroes: She saves Tidepaw from Bear in Chapter Two.
* CelibateHero: As a medicine cat, she can never have a mate.
* CombatMedic: While a medicine cat, she is also trained to fight.
* GreenEyes: She's a green-eyed medic and is closely associated with [=StarClan=].
* TheMedic: She's [=WindClan=]'s medicine cat.
* TheMentor: She's going to be Leafkit's mentor.
* MrExposition: Her main role is to explain the plot to Leafkit and Tidepaw.
* ScarsAreForever: At the end of Chapter Three, Leafkit notices that she has a small scar.
* YoungAndInCharge: She was put in charge of her Clan's medical and spiritual needs at only eight moons old.
!!Ravenstar (Ravenfeather)
->"Why should we encourage the breaking of the Warrior Code?"
[=WindClan=]'s leader. He disagrees with [=RiverClan=] taking [=WindClan=] prey, even though [=RiverClan=] needs the prey to survive.
* ActuallyIAmHim: Tidepaw mistakes her for the [=WindClan=] medicine apprentice. However, Rainpaw is the one to do the correcting.
* BigDamnHeroes: She saves Tidepaw from Bear in Chapter Two.
* CelibateHero: As a medicine cat, she can never have a mate.
* CombatMedic: While a medicine cat, she is also trained to fight.
* GreenEyes: She's a green-eyed medic and is closely associated with [=StarClan=].
* TheMedic: She's [=WindClan=]'s medicine cat.
* TheMentor: She's going to be Leafkit's mentor.
* MrExposition: Her main role is to explain the plot to Leafkit and Tidepaw.
* ScarsAreForever: At the end of Chapter Three, Leafkit notices that she has a small scar.
* YoungAndInCharge: She was put in charge of her Clan's medical and spiritual needs at only eight moons old.
!!Ravenstar (Ravenfeather)
->"Why should we encourage the breaking of the Warrior Code?"
[=WindClan=]'s leader. He disagrees with [=RiverClan=] taking [=WindClan=] prey, even though [=RiverClan=] needs the prey to survive.
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* ActionGirl: Not usually, but she does help Tidepaw fight Bear during BadassBeard: Has some kind of fur beard, and he'd be a great fighter if he could control his speed.
* ButtMonkey: Can't control his speed, which leads to him often being hurt by himself and others.
* IdiotHero: He's not theGathering Island Battle.
* ActuallyIAmHim: Tidepaw mistakes herbrightest of the kits. One time he even thought that deathberries were good for the [=WindClan=] rat bites.
* RedHerring: Suggested as a possible medicineapprentice. However, Rainpaw apprentice a few times, but it is ultimately his sister Leafkit decides to become the one to do the correcting.
* BigDamnHeroes: She saves Tidepaw from Bear in Chapter Two.
* CelibateHero: As amedicine cat, she can never have a mate.
* CombatMedic: While a medicine cat, she is also trained to fight.
* GreenEyes: She's a green-eyed medic and is closely associated with [=StarClan=].
* TheMedic: She's [=WindClan=]'s medicine cat.
* TheMentor: She's going to beapprentice.
!!Eaglekit
One of Leafkit'smentor.
* MrExposition: Her main role is to explain the plot to Leafkit and Tidepaw.
* ScarsAreForever: At the end of Chapter Three, Leafkit notices that shefriends. He has a small scar.
* YoungAndInCharge: She was put in chargefairly obvious crush on her. Is the son of her Clan's medical Moorwhisker and spiritual needs at only eight moons old.
!!Ravenstar (Ravenfeather)
->"Why should we encourage the breaking of the Warrior Code?"
[=WindClan=]'s leader. He disagrees with [=RiverClan=] taking [=WindClan=] prey, even though [=RiverClan=] needs the prey to survive.Runningflame. Silverkit is his sister.
* ButtMonkey: Can't control his speed, which leads to him often being hurt by himself and others.
* IdiotHero: He's not the
* ActuallyIAmHim: Tidepaw mistakes her
* RedHerring: Suggested as a possible medicine
* BigDamnHeroes: She saves Tidepaw from Bear in Chapter Two.
* CelibateHero: As a
* CombatMedic: While a medicine cat, she is also trained to fight.
* GreenEyes: She's a green-eyed medic and is closely associated with [=StarClan=].
* TheMedic: She's [=WindClan=]'s medicine cat.
* TheMentor: She's going to be
!!Eaglekit
One of Leafkit's
* MrExposition: Her main role is to explain the plot to Leafkit and Tidepaw.
* ScarsAreForever: At the end of Chapter Three, Leafkit notices that she
* YoungAndInCharge: She was put in charge
!!Ravenstar (Ravenfeather)
->"Why should we encourage the breaking of the Warrior Code?"
[=WindClan=]'s leader. He disagrees with [=RiverClan=] taking [=WindClan=] prey, even though [=RiverClan=] needs the prey to survive.
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* {{Jerkass}}: He treats Otterstar cruelly, denying her prey even though [=RiverClan=] is starving and [=WindClan=] has lots of food.
* TheLeader: He's [=WindClan=]'s leader.
!!Fieldstone
->"Surely you can't agree to this madness!"
One of [=WindClan=]'s senior warriors. She has a deep hatred for Galeflight.
* TheLeader: He's [=WindClan=]'s leader.
!!Fieldstone
->"Surely you can't agree to this madness!"
One of [=WindClan=]'s senior warriors. She has a deep hatred for Galeflight.
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* {{Jerkass}}: He treats Otterstar cruelly, denying her prey even though [=RiverClan=] is starving and [=WindClan=] has lots of food.
DeclarationOfProtection: Promises to shred the rogues if they try to hurt Leafkit. Twice, just to be sure.
*TheLeader: GenkiBoy: He's [=WindClan=]'s leader.
!!Fieldstone
->"Surely you can't agreepretty energetic and excitable.
* TheSmartGuy: Manages to become thismadness!"
Onein Chapter 9 due to his newfound obsession with the relationships between the Clans.
!!Silverkit
Another one of[=WindClan=]'s senior warriors. She has a deep hatred for Galeflight.Leafkit's friends. Brother of Eaglekit, and daughter of Moorwhisker and Runningflame.
*
!!Fieldstone
->"Surely you can't agree
* TheSmartGuy: Manages to become this
One
!!Silverkit
Another one of
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* ActionGirl: She fights frequently, mostly seen in her battle with the rogues in Chapter 3.
* IronicEcho: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:as Galeflight lies dying, she repeats the words she told him when he promised to protect her, only this time with a completely different context.]]
* {{Jerkass}}: She frequently insults those around her, and calls Galeflight an idiot nearly every time she talks to him.
* OnlySaneMan: Considers herself this in Chapter Three when everyone else ignores how stupid Galeflight's plan is.
* [[spoiler:{{Protectorate}}]]: [[spoiler:Galeflight's promise to protect her in Chapter 3 seems like a joke, but he actually means it and gives his life to save her.]]
* TheRival: To Galeflight
!!Brambletail
->"I'm interested in all of the kits of [=WindClan=]. One day, you and your denmates will be our future."
A kind and affectionate [=WindClan=] warrior.
* IronicEcho: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:as Galeflight lies dying, she repeats the words she told him when he promised to protect her, only this time with a completely different context.]]
* {{Jerkass}}: She frequently insults those around her, and calls Galeflight an idiot nearly every time she talks to him.
* OnlySaneMan: Considers herself this in Chapter Three when everyone else ignores how stupid Galeflight's plan is.
* [[spoiler:{{Protectorate}}]]: [[spoiler:Galeflight's promise to protect her in Chapter 3 seems like a joke, but he actually means it and gives his life to save her.]]
* TheRival: To Galeflight
!!Brambletail
->"I'm interested in all of the kits of [=WindClan=]. One day, you and your denmates will be our future."
A kind and affectionate [=WindClan=] warrior.
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* ActionGirl: EveryoneCanSeeIt: She fights frequently, mostly seen in is fully aware of her battle with the rogues in Chapter 3.
* IronicEcho: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:asbrother's crush on Leafkit.
!!Galeflight
->"You still don't understand me. As long as I can protect those precious to me, there's nothing I wouldn't sacrifice!"
The father of Leafkit, Hawkkit, and Gustkit, Galeflightlies dying, she repeats is a tom who dreams of becoming [=WindClan=]'s leader and bringing peace to the words she told him when he promised to protect her, only this time with a completely different context.]]
* {{Jerkass}}: She frequently insults those around her,Clans. He is brave and calls Galeflight an idiot nearly every time she talks honourable to him.
* OnlySaneMan: Considers herself this in Chapter Three when everyone else ignores how stupid Galeflight's plan is.
* [[spoiler:{{Protectorate}}]]: [[spoiler:Galeflight's promise to protect her in Chapter 3 seems likea joke, but he actually means it and gives fault, which often annoys his life to save her.]]
* TheRival: To Galeflight
!!Brambletail
->"I'm interested in all of the kits of [=WindClan=]. One day, you and your denmates will be our future."
A kind and affectionate [=WindClan=] warrior.Clanmates.
* IronicEcho: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:as
!!Galeflight
->"You still don't understand me. As long as I can protect those precious to me, there's nothing I wouldn't sacrifice!"
The father of Leafkit, Hawkkit, and Gustkit, Galeflight
* {{Jerkass}}: She frequently insults those around her,
* OnlySaneMan: Considers herself this in Chapter Three when everyone else ignores how stupid Galeflight's plan is.
* [[spoiler:{{Protectorate}}]]: [[spoiler:Galeflight's promise to protect her in Chapter 3 seems like
* TheRival: To Galeflight
!!Brambletail
->"I'm interested in all of the kits of [=WindClan=]. One day, you and your denmates will be our future."
A kind and affectionate [=WindClan=] warrior.
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* BigDamnHeroes: She appears just in time to prevent Slash from grabbing Leafkit in Chapter Three.
* TheMentor: If Chapter 3 is any indication, she'll end up as this to Leafkit. However, in Chapter 9 she [[spoiler:replaces the now deceased Galeflight as Harepaw's mentor]], as Leafkit is going to become a medicine cat.
* ShipTease: With Thistlepelt in Chapter Three.
!!Dovesong
->"We won't deprive them of a kindness just because they remain ignorant of it. From the fiercest of rogues to the tiniest of kits."
The mother of Leafkit, Hawkkit, and Gustkit. She cares deeply for them.
* TheMentor: If Chapter 3 is any indication, she'll end up as this to Leafkit. However, in Chapter 9 she [[spoiler:replaces the now deceased Galeflight as Harepaw's mentor]], as Leafkit is going to become a medicine cat.
* ShipTease: With Thistlepelt in Chapter Three.
!!Dovesong
->"We won't deprive them of a kindness just because they remain ignorant of it. From the fiercest of rogues to the tiniest of kits."
The mother of Leafkit, Hawkkit, and Gustkit. She cares deeply for them.
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* [[spoiler:AlmostDeadGuy]]: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:he talks to Leafkit and Fieldstone a little bit before he dies.]]
* BigDamnHeroes:She appears just in time to prevent Slash from grabbing He saves Leafkit from Slash in Chapter Three.
*TheMentor: If Chapter 3 is any indication, she'll end up as this {{Expy}}: He's based on {{Shonen}} protagonists, drawing most heavily from Manga/{{Naruto}}.
* [[FieryRedhead Fiery Red Pelt]]: He's incredibly excitable, and rushes off toLeafkit. However, help others at the drop of a hat.
* [[HappilyMarried Happily Mated]]: He's happy in his relationship with Dovesong.
* [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice]]: In Chapter 9she [[spoiler:replaces the now deceased Galeflight [[spoiler:he dies pushing Fieldstone away as Harepaw's mentor]], as Leafkit Amberfang attacks her.]]
* HonorBeforeReason: He refuses to break his promise to Leafkit, even though it puts her in danger.
* HotBlooded: He always leaps in to help those in need.
* IdiotHero: Fieldstone isgoing always there pointing out that he isn't very bright.
* IGaveMyWord: He never breaks a promise, even if it means putting himself in danger. [[spoiler:He even dies to keep a promise that seemed to be a joke.]]
* LeaderWannabe: His goal is to becomea Clan leader.
* MartialPacifist: He talks about peace nearly every time he appears, but he still has plenty of fights against cats like Bear and Slash.
* [[spoiler:SlashedThroat]]: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:he dies because Amberfang slices open his throat.]]
* ToBeAMaster: His dream is to become Clan Leader and change the Clans.
!!Snowcloud
->"Is that what you really believe, Bonetail? Because you're wrong. There is always something worth fighting for. We all have things that we have to protect!"
[=WindClan=]'s medicinecat.
* ShipTease: With Thistlepelt in Chapter Three.
!!Dovesong
->"We won't deprive them ofcat. She went from apprentice to a kindness just full medicine cat at eight moons, because they remain ignorant of it. From the fiercest of rogues to the tiniest of kits."
The mother of Leafkit, Hawkkit, and Gustkit. She cares deeply for them.her mentor was killed by a passing fox.
* BigDamnHeroes:
*
* [[FieryRedhead Fiery Red Pelt]]: He's incredibly excitable, and rushes off to
* [[HappilyMarried Happily Mated]]: He's happy in his relationship with Dovesong.
* [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice]]: In Chapter 9
* HonorBeforeReason: He refuses to break his promise to Leafkit, even though it puts her in danger.
* HotBlooded: He always leaps in to help those in need.
* IdiotHero: Fieldstone is
* IGaveMyWord: He never breaks a promise, even if it means putting himself in danger. [[spoiler:He even dies to keep a promise that seemed to be a joke.]]
* LeaderWannabe: His goal is to become
* MartialPacifist: He talks about peace nearly every time he appears, but he still has plenty of fights against cats like Bear and Slash.
* [[spoiler:SlashedThroat]]: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:he dies because Amberfang slices open his throat.]]
* ToBeAMaster: His dream is to become Clan Leader and change the Clans.
!!Snowcloud
->"Is that what you really believe, Bonetail? Because you're wrong. There is always something worth fighting for. We all have things that we have to protect!"
[=WindClan=]'s medicine
* ShipTease: With Thistlepelt in Chapter Three.
!!Dovesong
->"We won't deprive them of
The mother of Leafkit, Hawkkit, and Gustkit. She cares deeply for them.
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* [[HappilyMarried Happily Mated]]: She and Galeflight have a solid relationship.
* [[MrExposition Mrs. Exposition]]: Her role so far has been to explain the 16th rule of the Warrior Code, and to say that Galeflight never breaks his promises.
* {{Protectorate}}: Galeflight's first ever promise was one he made to Sunstorm where he promised to protect Dovesong.
!!Thistlepelt
->"Sorry, I need to stop apologizing so much."
Dovesong's younger brother. He's a fairly capable warrior, but he's not very confident.
* [[MrExposition Mrs. Exposition]]: Her role so far has been to explain the 16th rule of the Warrior Code, and to say that Galeflight never breaks his promises.
* {{Protectorate}}: Galeflight's first ever promise was one he made to Sunstorm where he promised to protect Dovesong.
!!Thistlepelt
->"Sorry, I need to stop apologizing so much."
Dovesong's younger brother. He's a fairly capable warrior, but he's not very confident.
to:
* [[HappilyMarried Happily Mated]]: ActionGirl: Not usually, but she does help Tidepaw fight Bear during the Gathering Island Battle.
* ActuallyIAmHim: Tidepaw mistakes her for the [=WindClan=] medicine apprentice. However, Rainpaw is the one to do the correcting.
* BigDamnHeroes: Sheand Galeflight saves Tidepaw from Bear in Chapter Two.
* CelibateHero: As a medicine cat, she can never have asolid relationship.
mate.
*[[MrExposition Mrs. Exposition]]: CombatMedic: While a medicine cat, she is also trained to fight.
* GreenEyes: She's a green-eyed medic and is closely associated with [=StarClan=].
* TheMedic: She's [=WindClan=]'s medicine cat.
* TheMentor: She's going to be Leafkit's mentor.
* MrExposition: Her main roleso far has been is to explain the 16th rule plot to Leafkit and Tidepaw.
* ScarsAreForever: At the end of Chapter Three, Leafkit notices that she has a small scar.
* YoungAndInCharge: She was put in charge of her Clan's medical and spiritual needs at only eight moons old.
!!Ravenstar (Ravenfeather)
->"Why should we encourage the breaking of the WarriorCode, and Code?"
[=WindClan=]'s leader. He disagrees with [=RiverClan=] taking [=WindClan=] prey, even though [=RiverClan=] needs the prey tosay that Galeflight never breaks his promises.
* {{Protectorate}}: Galeflight's first ever promise was one he made to Sunstorm where he promised to protect Dovesong.
!!Thistlepelt
->"Sorry, I need to stop apologizing so much."
Dovesong's younger brother. He's a fairly capable warrior, but he's not very confident.survive.
* ActuallyIAmHim: Tidepaw mistakes her for the [=WindClan=] medicine apprentice. However, Rainpaw is the one to do the correcting.
* BigDamnHeroes: She
* CelibateHero: As a medicine cat, she can never have a
*
* GreenEyes: She's a green-eyed medic and is closely associated with [=StarClan=].
* TheMedic: She's [=WindClan=]'s medicine cat.
* TheMentor: She's going to be Leafkit's mentor.
* MrExposition: Her main role
* ScarsAreForever: At the end of Chapter Three, Leafkit notices that she has a small scar.
* YoungAndInCharge: She was put in charge of her Clan's medical and spiritual needs at only eight moons old.
!!Ravenstar (Ravenfeather)
->"Why should we encourage the breaking of the Warrior
[=WindClan=]'s leader. He disagrees with [=RiverClan=] taking [=WindClan=] prey, even though [=RiverClan=] needs the prey to
* {{Protectorate}}: Galeflight's first ever promise was one he made to Sunstorm where he promised to protect Dovesong.
!!Thistlepelt
->"Sorry, I need to stop apologizing so much."
Dovesong's younger brother. He's a fairly capable warrior, but he's not very confident.
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* ApologizesALot: Every line of dialogue from him has the word "sorry" in it. Hawkkit eventually decides that he'll only stop constantly apologizing if he stops talking.
* ShipTease: With Brambletail in Chapter Three.
!!Boulderfang
->"I-I will have my revenge!"
An egotistical [=WindClan=] apprentice. (Now a warrior, as of Chapter 9.)
* ShipTease: With Brambletail in Chapter Three.
!!Boulderfang
->"I-I will have my revenge!"
An egotistical [=WindClan=] apprentice. (Now a warrior, as of Chapter 9.)
to:
* ApologizesALot: Every line of dialogue from him has the word "sorry" in it. Hawkkit eventually decides that he'll only stop constantly apologizing if he stops talking.
* ShipTease: With Brambletail in Chapter Three.
!!Boulderfang
->"I-I will have my revenge!"
An egotistical{{Jerkass}}: He treats Otterstar cruelly, denying her prey even though [=RiverClan=] is starving and [=WindClan=] apprentice. (Now a warrior, as has lots of Chapter 9.)food.
* TheLeader: He's [=WindClan=]'s leader.
!!Fieldstone
->"Surely you can't agree to this madness!"
One of [=WindClan=]'s senior warriors. She has a deep hatred for Galeflight.
* ShipTease: With Brambletail in Chapter Three.
!!Boulderfang
->"I-I will have my revenge!"
An egotistical
* TheLeader: He's [=WindClan=]'s leader.
!!Fieldstone
->"Surely you can't agree to this madness!"
One of [=WindClan=]'s senior warriors. She has a deep hatred for Galeflight.
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* ButtMonkey: Nobody ever gives him a break.
* [[spoiler:NotSoHarmlessVillain]]: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:his bloodlust wins the battle for [=WindClan=], and Leafkit is actually scared by the hatred she sees in his eyes.]]
* SmallNameBigEgo: Believes himself to be a mighty warrior, but he's actually a total wimp.
* ThirdPersonPerson: Refers to himself as "the mighty Boulderpaw" sometimes.
!!Woodfur
[=WindClan=]'s deputy. He's also the father of Snowcloud and Tigertail.
* [[spoiler:NotSoHarmlessVillain]]: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:his bloodlust wins the battle for [=WindClan=], and Leafkit is actually scared by the hatred she sees in his eyes.]]
* SmallNameBigEgo: Believes himself to be a mighty warrior, but he's actually a total wimp.
* ThirdPersonPerson: Refers to himself as "the mighty Boulderpaw" sometimes.
!!Woodfur
[=WindClan=]'s deputy. He's also the father of Snowcloud and Tigertail.
to:
* ButtMonkey: Nobody ever gives him a break.
ActionGirl: She fights frequently, mostly seen in her battle with the rogues in Chapter 3.
*[[spoiler:NotSoHarmlessVillain]]: IronicEcho: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:his bloodlust wins [[spoiler:as Galeflight lies dying, she repeats the battle for [=WindClan=], and Leafkit is actually scared by the hatred words she sees in his eyes.told him when he promised to protect her, only this time with a completely different context.]]
*SmallNameBigEgo: Believes himself {{Jerkass}}: She frequently insults those around her, and calls Galeflight an idiot nearly every time she talks to be him.
* OnlySaneMan: Considers herself this in Chapter Three when everyone else ignores how stupid Galeflight's plan is.
* [[spoiler:{{Protectorate}}]]: [[spoiler:Galeflight's promise to protect her in Chapter 3 seems like amighty warrior, joke, but he's he actually a total wimp.
* ThirdPersonPerson: Refersmeans it and gives his life to himself as "the mighty Boulderpaw" sometimes.
!!Woodfur
[=WindClan=]'s deputy. He's alsosave her.]]
* TheRival: To Galeflight
!!Brambletail
->"I'm interested in all of thefather kits of Snowcloud [=WindClan=]. One day, you and Tigertail.your denmates will be our future."
A kind and affectionate [=WindClan=] warrior.
*
*
* OnlySaneMan: Considers herself this in Chapter Three when everyone else ignores how stupid Galeflight's plan is.
* [[spoiler:{{Protectorate}}]]: [[spoiler:Galeflight's promise to protect her in Chapter 3 seems like a
* ThirdPersonPerson: Refers
!!Woodfur
[=WindClan=]'s deputy. He's also
* TheRival: To Galeflight
!!Brambletail
->"I'm interested in all of the
A kind and affectionate [=WindClan=] warrior.
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* NumberTwo: He's [=WindClan=]'s deputy.
* MinorMajorCharacter: He has the very important position of [=WindClan=]'s deputy, but he has done next to nothing.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Riverclan]]
!!Tidepaw
->"Everyone always overlooks the happy ones. The ones who sulk stand out, but nobody ever thinks that someone so cheerful could be so broken inside."
One of the three main point of view characters. Tidepaw is an upbeat [=RiverClan=] she-cat who never lets anything get her down, despite recent misfortune. At least, that's what she pretends. In reality, Tidepaw hates herself, and hides dark secrets which she believes would cause her Clanmates to hate her.
* MinorMajorCharacter: He has the very important position of [=WindClan=]'s deputy, but he has done next to nothing.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Riverclan]]
!!Tidepaw
->"Everyone always overlooks the happy ones. The ones who sulk stand out, but nobody ever thinks that someone so cheerful could be so broken inside."
One of the three main point of view characters. Tidepaw is an upbeat [=RiverClan=] she-cat who never lets anything get her down, despite recent misfortune. At least, that's what she pretends. In reality, Tidepaw hates herself, and hides dark secrets which she believes would cause her Clanmates to hate her.
to:
* NumberTwo: He's [=WindClan=]'s deputy.
BigDamnHeroes: She appears just in time to prevent Slash from grabbing Leafkit in Chapter Three.
*MinorMajorCharacter: He has TheMentor: If Chapter 3 is any indication, she'll end up as this to Leafkit. However, in Chapter 9 she [[spoiler:replaces the very important position now deceased Galeflight as Harepaw's mentor]], as Leafkit is going to become a medicine cat.
* ShipTease: With Thistlepelt in Chapter Three.
!!Dovesong
->"We won't deprive them of[=WindClan=]'s deputy, but he has done next to nothing.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Riverclan]]
!!Tidepaw
->"Everyone always overlooksa kindness just because they remain ignorant of it. From the happy ones. The ones who sulk stand out, but nobody ever thinks that someone so cheerful could be so broken inside.fiercest of rogues to the tiniest of kits."
One The mother of the three main point of view characters. Tidepaw is an upbeat [=RiverClan=] she-cat who never lets anything get her down, despite recent misfortune. At least, that's what she pretends. In reality, Tidepaw hates herself, Leafkit, Hawkkit, and hides dark secrets which she believes would cause her Clanmates to hate her.Gustkit. She cares deeply for them.
*
* ShipTease: With Thistlepelt in Chapter Three.
!!Dovesong
->"We won't deprive them of
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Riverclan]]
!!Tidepaw
->"Everyone always overlooks
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* ActionGirl: She fights frequently, taking on Bear in Chapter 2 and Darkclaw in Chapter 4.
* BeneathTheMask: She seems to be an excitable and upbeat she-cat, but that's a false persona she uses to prevent her Clanmates from hating her.
* BreakTheCutie: She seems broken beyond repair. However, we don't actually know what made her that way.
* DarkSecret: She has one, but it's only been hinted at. In Chapter 8 [[spoiler:part of her secret turns out to be that she killed her father, Quailfeather.]]
* GenkiGirl: She pretends to be an energetic and optimistic she-cat.
* HealingFactor: The wounds she received during her fight with Bear have mysteriously healed by the time she leaves the Gathering Island.
* HeroicBSOD: In Chapter 4, when Darkclaw wounds Brightpaw. She manages to snap out of it when her mentor Graywave tells her that Brightpaw will be okay.
* [[spoiler:MurderMakesYouCrazy]]: [[spoiler:A great deal of her self-loathing and depression stems from her guilt over killing her own father.]]
* MysteriousPast: Something happened to break her so hard. It involves Darkclaw, but the rest has only been hinted at.
* OhCrap: In Chapter 4, when she realizes that she has a {{healing factor}}.
* [[spoiler:{{Patricide}}]]: Darkclaw reveals in Chapter 8 that [[spoiler:the rogues did not in fact kill Tidepaw's father Quailfeather. He was killed by Tidepaw herself.]]
* PluckyComicRelief: She pretends to be this.
* PromotionToParent: She has had to care for her sister Brightpaw ever since her father was killed by rogues and her mother went missing.
* SadClown: Her plucky and humorous nature is just a ruse for her misery.
* ScarsAreForever: She has a noticeable scar across her forehead. It's still as fresh as when she first got it, which perplexes Sunstorm.
* StepfordSmiler: She's faking her cheerfulness to deal with trauma, and to give Brightpaw someone to lean on.
* StepfordSnarker: Seems like a snarky joker, but she's really incredibly miserable and hates herself.
* [[spoiler:SympatheticMurderer]]: [[spoiler:She killed her own father, but since she's a point of view character, the reader gets to see just how much she hates herself over it.]]
!!Rainpaw
->"I think we can all find cats who we admire for their strength."
The [=RiverClan=] medicine apprentice. She was a loner, but joined [=RiverClan=] when she was fairly young. Before that, her brother Scratch died because of a disease, which made her vow to never lose a cat to sickness again. She is also Tidepaw's best friend, and tries to offer moral support even when her friend fights against it. Boulderpaw of [=WindClan=] has a one-sided rivalry with her.
* BeneathTheMask: She seems to be an excitable and upbeat she-cat, but that's a false persona she uses to prevent her Clanmates from hating her.
* BreakTheCutie: She seems broken beyond repair. However, we don't actually know what made her that way.
* DarkSecret: She has one, but it's only been hinted at. In Chapter 8 [[spoiler:part of her secret turns out to be that she killed her father, Quailfeather.]]
* GenkiGirl: She pretends to be an energetic and optimistic she-cat.
* HealingFactor: The wounds she received during her fight with Bear have mysteriously healed by the time she leaves the Gathering Island.
* HeroicBSOD: In Chapter 4, when Darkclaw wounds Brightpaw. She manages to snap out of it when her mentor Graywave tells her that Brightpaw will be okay.
* [[spoiler:MurderMakesYouCrazy]]: [[spoiler:A great deal of her self-loathing and depression stems from her guilt over killing her own father.]]
* MysteriousPast: Something happened to break her so hard. It involves Darkclaw, but the rest has only been hinted at.
* OhCrap: In Chapter 4, when she realizes that she has a {{healing factor}}.
* [[spoiler:{{Patricide}}]]: Darkclaw reveals in Chapter 8 that [[spoiler:the rogues did not in fact kill Tidepaw's father Quailfeather. He was killed by Tidepaw herself.]]
* PluckyComicRelief: She pretends to be this.
* PromotionToParent: She has had to care for her sister Brightpaw ever since her father was killed by rogues and her mother went missing.
* SadClown: Her plucky and humorous nature is just a ruse for her misery.
* ScarsAreForever: She has a noticeable scar across her forehead. It's still as fresh as when she first got it, which perplexes Sunstorm.
* StepfordSmiler: She's faking her cheerfulness to deal with trauma, and to give Brightpaw someone to lean on.
* StepfordSnarker: Seems like a snarky joker, but she's really incredibly miserable and hates herself.
* [[spoiler:SympatheticMurderer]]: [[spoiler:She killed her own father, but since she's a point of view character, the reader gets to see just how much she hates herself over it.]]
!!Rainpaw
->"I think we can all find cats who we admire for their strength."
The [=RiverClan=] medicine apprentice. She was a loner, but joined [=RiverClan=] when she was fairly young. Before that, her brother Scratch died because of a disease, which made her vow to never lose a cat to sickness again. She is also Tidepaw's best friend, and tries to offer moral support even when her friend fights against it. Boulderpaw of [=WindClan=] has a one-sided rivalry with her.
to:
* ActionGirl: [[HappilyMarried Happily Mated]]: She fights frequently, taking on Bear in Chapter 2 and Darkclaw in Chapter 4.
Galeflight have a solid relationship.
*BeneathTheMask: She seems to be an excitable and upbeat she-cat, but that's a false persona she uses to prevent her Clanmates from hating her.
* BreakTheCutie: She seems broken beyond repair. However, we don't actually know what made her that way.
* DarkSecret: She[[MrExposition Mrs. Exposition]]: Her role so far has one, but it's only been hinted at. In Chapter 8 [[spoiler:part of her secret turns out to be that she killed her father, Quailfeather.]]
* GenkiGirl: She pretends to be an energetic and optimistic she-cat.
* HealingFactor: The wounds she received during her fight with Bear have mysteriously healed byexplain the time she leaves 16th rule of the Gathering Island.
* HeroicBSOD: In Chapter 4, when Darkclaw wounds Brightpaw. She manages to snap out of it when her mentor Graywave tells her that Brightpaw will be okay.
* [[spoiler:MurderMakesYouCrazy]]: [[spoiler:A great deal of her self-loathing and depression stems from her guilt over killing her own father.]]
* MysteriousPast: Something happened to break her so hard. It involves Darkclaw, but the rest has only been hinted at.
* OhCrap: In Chapter 4, when she realizes that she has a {{healing factor}}.
* [[spoiler:{{Patricide}}]]: Darkclaw reveals in Chapter 8 that [[spoiler:the rogues did not in fact kill Tidepaw's father Quailfeather. He was killed by Tidepaw herself.]]
* PluckyComicRelief: She pretends to be this.
* PromotionToParent: She has had to care for her sister Brightpaw ever since her father was killed by rogues and her mother went missing.
* SadClown: Her plucky and humorous nature is just a ruse for her misery.
* ScarsAreForever: She has a noticeable scar across her forehead. It's still as fresh as when she first got it, which perplexes Sunstorm.
* StepfordSmiler: She's faking her cheerfulness to deal with trauma,Warrior Code, and to give Brightpaw someone say that Galeflight never breaks his promises.
* {{Protectorate}}: Galeflight's first ever promise was one he made tolean on.
* StepfordSnarker: Seems like a snarky joker, but she's really incredibly miserable and hates herself.
* [[spoiler:SympatheticMurderer]]: [[spoiler:She killed her own father, but since she's a point of view character, the reader getsSunstorm where he promised to see just how much she hates herself over it.]]
!!Rainpaw
->"I think we can all find cats who we admire for their strength.protect Dovesong.
!!Thistlepelt
->"Sorry, I need to stop apologizing so much."
The [=RiverClan=] medicine apprentice. She was Dovesong's younger brother. He's a loner, but joined [=RiverClan=] when she was fairly young. Before that, her brother Scratch died because of a disease, which made her vow to never lose a cat to sickness again. She is also Tidepaw's best friend, and tries to offer moral support even when her friend fights against it. Boulderpaw of [=WindClan=] has a one-sided rivalry with her.capable warrior, but he's not very confident.
*
* BreakTheCutie: She seems broken beyond repair. However, we don't actually know what made her that way.
* DarkSecret: She
* GenkiGirl: She pretends to be an energetic and optimistic she-cat.
* HealingFactor: The wounds she received during her fight with Bear have mysteriously healed by
* HeroicBSOD: In Chapter 4, when Darkclaw wounds Brightpaw. She manages to snap out of it when her mentor Graywave tells her that Brightpaw will be okay.
* [[spoiler:MurderMakesYouCrazy]]: [[spoiler:A great deal of her self-loathing and depression stems from her guilt over killing her own father.]]
* MysteriousPast: Something happened to break her so hard. It involves Darkclaw, but the rest has only been hinted at.
* OhCrap: In Chapter 4, when she realizes that she has a {{healing factor}}.
* [[spoiler:{{Patricide}}]]: Darkclaw reveals in Chapter 8 that [[spoiler:the rogues did not in fact kill Tidepaw's father Quailfeather. He was killed by Tidepaw herself.]]
* PluckyComicRelief: She pretends to be this.
* PromotionToParent: She has had to care for her sister Brightpaw ever since her father was killed by rogues and her mother went missing.
* SadClown: Her plucky and humorous nature is just a ruse for her misery.
* ScarsAreForever: She has a noticeable scar across her forehead. It's still as fresh as when she first got it, which perplexes Sunstorm.
* StepfordSmiler: She's faking her cheerfulness to deal with trauma,
* {{Protectorate}}: Galeflight's first ever promise was one he made to
* StepfordSnarker: Seems like a snarky joker, but she's really incredibly miserable and hates herself.
* [[spoiler:SympatheticMurderer]]: [[spoiler:She killed her own father, but since she's a point of view character, the reader gets
!!Rainpaw
->"I think we can all find cats who we admire for their strength.
!!Thistlepelt
->"Sorry, I need to stop apologizing so much."
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* CelibateHero: She's a medicine cat, so she can never take a mate.
* CombatMedic: She is a trained fighter and healer.
* [[spoiler:DamselInDistress]]: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:she is captured by [=WindClan=] and taken prisoner.]]
* TheMedic: She's the medicine apprentice of [=RiverClan=].
* LoveAtFirstPunch: Tidepaw jokes that ever tom she fights falls in love with her.
!!Brightpaw
->"We're all starving, and the Clan needs strong warriors more than they need a sickly apprentice."
Tidepaw's sister. A quarter moon before Tidepaw's story began, she sometime obtained an incurable illness.
* CombatMedic: She is a trained fighter and healer.
* [[spoiler:DamselInDistress]]: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:she is captured by [=WindClan=] and taken prisoner.]]
* TheMedic: She's the medicine apprentice of [=RiverClan=].
* LoveAtFirstPunch: Tidepaw jokes that ever tom she fights falls in love with her.
!!Brightpaw
->"We're all starving, and the Clan needs strong warriors more than they need a sickly apprentice."
Tidepaw's sister. A quarter moon before Tidepaw's story began, she sometime obtained an incurable illness.
to:
* CelibateHero: She's a medicine cat, so she can never take a mate.
ApologizesALot: Every line of dialogue from him has the word "sorry" in it. Hawkkit eventually decides that he'll only stop constantly apologizing if he stops talking.
*CombatMedic: She is a trained fighter and healer.
* [[spoiler:DamselInDistress]]: InShipTease: With Brambletail in Chapter 9, [[spoiler:she is captured by Three.
!!Boulderfang
->"I-I will have my revenge!"
An egotistical [=WindClan=]and taken prisoner.]]
* TheMedic: She's the medicine apprenticeapprentice. (Now a warrior, as of [=RiverClan=].
* LoveAtFirstPunch: Tidepaw jokes that ever tom she fights falls in love with her.
!!Brightpaw
->"We're all starving, and the Clan needs strong warriors more than they need a sickly apprentice."
Tidepaw's sister. A quarter moon before Tidepaw's story began, she sometime obtained an incurable illness.Chapter 9.)
*
* [[spoiler:DamselInDistress]]: In
!!Boulderfang
->"I-I will have my revenge!"
An egotistical [=WindClan=]
* TheMedic: She's the medicine apprentice
* LoveAtFirstPunch: Tidepaw jokes that ever tom she fights falls in love with her.
!!Brightpaw
->"We're all starving, and the Clan needs strong warriors more than they need a sickly apprentice."
Tidepaw's sister. A quarter moon before Tidepaw's story began, she sometime obtained an incurable illness.
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* [[IllGirl Ill She-cat]]: She has a severe illness that hampers her at crucial moments.
* IncurableCoughOfDeath: Nightheart goes out of his way to explain that he has found no cure for her illness.
!!Wildpaw
Tidepaw's self-proclaimed rival. He loves fighting, and is always challenging other cats. His mentor is Amberfang.
* IncurableCoughOfDeath: Nightheart goes out of his way to explain that he has found no cure for her illness.
!!Wildpaw
Tidepaw's self-proclaimed rival. He loves fighting, and is always challenging other cats. His mentor is Amberfang.
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* [[IllGirl Ill She-cat]]: She has ButtMonkey: Nobody ever gives him a severe illness that hampers her at crucial moments.
break.
*IncurableCoughOfDeath: Nightheart goes out of [[spoiler:NotSoHarmlessVillain]]: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:his bloodlust wins the battle for [=WindClan=], and Leafkit is actually scared by the hatred she sees in his way eyes.]]
* SmallNameBigEgo: Believes himself toexplain that he has found no cure for her illness.
!!Wildpaw
Tidepaw's self-proclaimed rival. He loves fighting,be a mighty warrior, but he's actually a total wimp.
* ThirdPersonPerson: Refers to himself as "the mighty Boulderpaw" sometimes.
!!Woodfur
[=WindClan=]'s deputy. He's also the father of Snowcloud andis always challenging other cats. His mentor is Amberfang.Tigertail.
*
* SmallNameBigEgo: Believes himself to
!!Wildpaw
Tidepaw's self-proclaimed rival. He loves fighting,
* ThirdPersonPerson: Refers to himself as "the mighty Boulderpaw" sometimes.
!!Woodfur
[=WindClan=]'s deputy. He's also the father of Snowcloud and
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* AMinorKidroduction: He first shows up as a kit in Tidepaw's flashback. Then he appears in the present as one of Tidepaw's friends.
* HotBlooded: He loves fighting. He's often challenging Tidepaw to fights, and when he meets Harepaw, he quickly challenges him to one.
* TheRival: He declares himself to be Tidepaw's rival.
!!Otterstar (Otterfur/Nightclaw)
->"We may not be as strong as you, but we are fighting for our very survival! We won't lose."
[=RiverClan=]'s leader. She struggles to deal with the current food shortage, but is finding it increasingly difficult to save her Clan. She is also a former [=ShadowClan=] warrior who joined [=RiverClan=] after a [=RiverClan=] warrior made a large impact on her life during the war against the Sky Avengers.
* HotBlooded: He loves fighting. He's often challenging Tidepaw to fights, and when he meets Harepaw, he quickly challenges him to one.
* TheRival: He declares himself to be Tidepaw's rival.
!!Otterstar (Otterfur/Nightclaw)
->"We may not be as strong as you, but we are fighting for our very survival! We won't lose."
[=RiverClan=]'s leader. She struggles to deal with the current food shortage, but is finding it increasingly difficult to save her Clan. She is also a former [=ShadowClan=] warrior who joined [=RiverClan=] after a [=RiverClan=] warrior made a large impact on her life during the war against the Sky Avengers.
to:
* AMinorKidroduction: He first shows up as a kit in Tidepaw's flashback. Then he appears in the present as one of Tidepaw's friends.
* HotBlooded: He loves fighting.NumberTwo: He's often challenging Tidepaw to fights, and when he meets Harepaw, he quickly challenges him to one.
[=WindClan=]'s deputy.
*TheRival: MinorMajorCharacter: He declares himself to be Tidepaw's rival.
!!Otterstar (Otterfur/Nightclaw)
->"We may not be as strong as you, but we are fighting for ourhas the very survival! We won't lose.important position of [=WindClan=]'s deputy, but he has done next to nothing.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Riverclan]]
!!Tidepaw
->"Everyone always overlooks the happy ones. The ones who sulk stand out, but nobody ever thinks that someone so cheerful could be so broken inside."
[=RiverClan=]'s leader. She struggles to deal with One of the current food shortage, but three main point of view characters. Tidepaw is finding it increasingly difficult to save her Clan. She is also a former [=ShadowClan=] warrior who joined an upbeat [=RiverClan=] after a [=RiverClan=] warrior made a large impact on she-cat who never lets anything get her life during the war against the Sky Avengers.down, despite recent misfortune. At least, that's what she pretends. In reality, Tidepaw hates herself, and hides dark secrets which she believes would cause her Clanmates to hate her.
* HotBlooded: He loves fighting.
*
!!Otterstar (Otterfur/Nightclaw)
->"We may not be as strong as you, but we are fighting for our
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Riverclan]]
!!Tidepaw
->"Everyone always overlooks the happy ones. The ones who sulk stand out, but nobody ever thinks that someone so cheerful could be so broken inside."
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* BigGood: She's the most heroic of the leaders.
* EnemyMine: She teams up with Duskstar and [=ShadowClan=] to defeat Bonetail.
* HurtingHero: In addition to the problems facing her Clan, she lost her kits.
* TheLeader: She's the leader of [=RiverClan=].
* WorkingWithTheEx: Works with Finflutter to create a strategy to defeat Bonetail.
!!Finflutter
->"Yo, [=ShadowClan=] and [=RiverClan=]!"
A tom who always steals Nightheart's catnip and gets high with it. He was once a respected warrior and the mate of [=RiverClan=]'s leader Otterstar, but he fell into depression when his kits died.
* EnemyMine: She teams up with Duskstar and [=ShadowClan=] to defeat Bonetail.
* HurtingHero: In addition to the problems facing her Clan, she lost her kits.
* TheLeader: She's the leader of [=RiverClan=].
* WorkingWithTheEx: Works with Finflutter to create a strategy to defeat Bonetail.
!!Finflutter
->"Yo, [=ShadowClan=] and [=RiverClan=]!"
A tom who always steals Nightheart's catnip and gets high with it. He was once a respected warrior and the mate of [=RiverClan=]'s leader Otterstar, but he fell into depression when his kits died.
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* BigGood: ActionGirl: She fights frequently, taking on Bear in Chapter 2 and Darkclaw in Chapter 4.
* BeneathTheMask: She seems to be an excitable and upbeat she-cat, but that's a false persona she uses to prevent her Clanmates from hating her.
* BreakTheCutie: She seems broken beyond repair. However, we don't actually know what made her that way.
* DarkSecret: She has one, but it's only been hinted at. In Chapter 8 [[spoiler:part of her secret turns out to be that she killed her father, Quailfeather.]]
* DeclarationOfProtection: Promises to protect Brightpaw, since she believes that it's the only worthwhile thing she can do.
* GenkiGirl: She pretends to be an energetic and optimistic she-cat.
* HealingFactor: The wounds she received during her fight with Bear have mysteriously healed by the time she leaves the Gathering Island.
* HeroicBSOD: In Chapter 4, when Darkclaw wounds Brightpaw. She manages to snap out of it when her mentor Graywave tells her that Brightpaw will be okay.
* [[spoiler:MurderMakesYouCrazy]]: [[spoiler:A great deal of her self-loathing and depression stems from her guilt over killing her own father.]]
* MysteriousPast: Something happened to break her so hard. It involves Darkclaw, but the rest has only been hinted at.
* OhCrap: In Chapter 4, when she realizes that she has a {{healing factor}}.
* [[spoiler:{{Patricide}}]]: Darkclaw reveals in Chapter 8 that [[spoiler:the rogues did not in fact kill Tidepaw's father Quailfeather. He was killed by Tidepaw herself.]]
* PluckyComicRelief: She pretends to be this.
* PromotionToParent: She has had to care for her sister Brightpaw ever since her father was killed by rogues and her mother went missing.
* SadClown: Her plucky and humorous nature is just a ruse for her misery.
* ScarsAreForever: She has a noticeable scar across her forehead. It's still as fresh as when she first got it, which perplexes Sunstorm.
* StepfordSmiler: She'sthe most heroic of the leaders.
* EnemyMine: She teams upfaking her cheerfulness to deal with Duskstar trauma, and [=ShadowClan=] to defeat Bonetail.
* HurtingHero: In additiongive Brightpaw someone to lean on.
* StepfordSnarker: Seems like a snarky joker, but she's really incredibly miserable and hates herself.
* [[spoiler:SympatheticMurderer]]: [[spoiler:She killed her own father, but since she's a point of view character, theproblems facing reader gets to see just how much she hates herself over it.]]
!!Rainpaw
->"You don't need to carry all your pain by yourself. Lean on me and Wildpaw and all your other friends. That's what we're here for."
The [=RiverClan=] medicine apprentice. She was a loner, but joined [=RiverClan=] when she was fairly young. Before that, herClan, she lost brother Scratch died because of a disease, which made her kits.
* TheLeader: She's the leadervow to never lose a cat to sickness again. She is also Tidepaw's best friend, and tries to offer moral support even when her friend fights against it. Boulderpaw of [=RiverClan=].
* WorkingWithTheEx: Works[=WindClan=] has a one-sided rivalry with Finflutter to create a strategy to defeat Bonetail.
!!Finflutter
->"Yo, [=ShadowClan=] and [=RiverClan=]!"
A tom who always steals Nightheart's catnip and gets high with it. He was once a respected warrior and the mate of [=RiverClan=]'s leader Otterstar, but he fell into depression when his kits died.her.
* BeneathTheMask: She seems to be an excitable and upbeat she-cat, but that's a false persona she uses to prevent her Clanmates from hating her.
* BreakTheCutie: She seems broken beyond repair. However, we don't actually know what made her that way.
* DarkSecret: She has one, but it's only been hinted at. In Chapter 8 [[spoiler:part of her secret turns out to be that she killed her father, Quailfeather.]]
* DeclarationOfProtection: Promises to protect Brightpaw, since she believes that it's the only worthwhile thing she can do.
* GenkiGirl: She pretends to be an energetic and optimistic she-cat.
* HealingFactor: The wounds she received during her fight with Bear have mysteriously healed by the time she leaves the Gathering Island.
* HeroicBSOD: In Chapter 4, when Darkclaw wounds Brightpaw. She manages to snap out of it when her mentor Graywave tells her that Brightpaw will be okay.
* [[spoiler:MurderMakesYouCrazy]]: [[spoiler:A great deal of her self-loathing and depression stems from her guilt over killing her own father.]]
* MysteriousPast: Something happened to break her so hard. It involves Darkclaw, but the rest has only been hinted at.
* OhCrap: In Chapter 4, when she realizes that she has a {{healing factor}}.
* [[spoiler:{{Patricide}}]]: Darkclaw reveals in Chapter 8 that [[spoiler:the rogues did not in fact kill Tidepaw's father Quailfeather. He was killed by Tidepaw herself.]]
* PluckyComicRelief: She pretends to be this.
* PromotionToParent: She has had to care for her sister Brightpaw ever since her father was killed by rogues and her mother went missing.
* SadClown: Her plucky and humorous nature is just a ruse for her misery.
* ScarsAreForever: She has a noticeable scar across her forehead. It's still as fresh as when she first got it, which perplexes Sunstorm.
* StepfordSmiler: She's
* EnemyMine: She teams up
* HurtingHero: In addition
* StepfordSnarker: Seems like a snarky joker, but she's really incredibly miserable and hates herself.
* [[spoiler:SympatheticMurderer]]: [[spoiler:She killed her own father, but since she's a point of view character, the
!!Rainpaw
->"You don't need to carry all your pain by yourself. Lean on me and Wildpaw and all your other friends. That's what we're here for."
The [=RiverClan=] medicine apprentice. She was a loner, but joined [=RiverClan=] when she was fairly young. Before that, her
* TheLeader: She's the leader
* WorkingWithTheEx: Works
!!Finflutter
->"Yo, [=ShadowClan=] and [=RiverClan=]!"
A tom who always steals Nightheart's catnip and gets high with it. He was once a respected warrior and the mate of [=RiverClan=]'s leader Otterstar, but he fell into depression when his kits died.
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Even though he's crazy and depressed, he still was able to come up with a good strategy that [=RiverClan=] and [=ShadowClan=] could use to defeat Bonetail.
* FamedInStory: He's a legend because he led the Clans to the defeat of the Sky Avengers. However, he doesn't quite live up to the stories.
* HiddenDepths: At first he appears to be some idiot stoner character, but then it turns out that he was once a legendary strategist and Otterstar's mate.
* HurtingHero: He fell into depression after his kits died.
* TheStoner: To dull the pain of the deaths of his kits, he takes catnip and gets high off of it.
* TheStrategist: He was formerly one of the greatest strategists born to the Clans in years. He was also the one to create the strategy that defeated the Sky Avengers. However, his strategic skills fell into disuse after his kits died.
!!Amberfang
->"That's another problem with ideals. Some cats ''do'' follow them with absolute conviction. They craft themselves into the image of their ideals, and do not fail to follow them. But when they're beaten down by all around them, when the very world rejects their principles, they themselves will shatter like ice. Beware, young she-cat."
Wildpaw's mentor. He's a former medicine apprentice, but during the battle against the Sky Avengers he chose to become a warrior apprentice to avenge his fallen Clanmates. In the present he's a respected member of [=RiverClan=] and one of Otterstar's chief strategists, but he's not very nice.
* FamedInStory: He's a legend because he led the Clans to the defeat of the Sky Avengers. However, he doesn't quite live up to the stories.
* HiddenDepths: At first he appears to be some idiot stoner character, but then it turns out that he was once a legendary strategist and Otterstar's mate.
* HurtingHero: He fell into depression after his kits died.
* TheStoner: To dull the pain of the deaths of his kits, he takes catnip and gets high off of it.
* TheStrategist: He was formerly one of the greatest strategists born to the Clans in years. He was also the one to create the strategy that defeated the Sky Avengers. However, his strategic skills fell into disuse after his kits died.
!!Amberfang
->"That's another problem with ideals. Some cats ''do'' follow them with absolute conviction. They craft themselves into the image of their ideals, and do not fail to follow them. But when they're beaten down by all around them, when the very world rejects their principles, they themselves will shatter like ice. Beware, young she-cat."
Wildpaw's mentor. He's a former medicine apprentice, but during the battle against the Sky Avengers he chose to become a warrior apprentice to avenge his fallen Clanmates. In the present he's a respected member of [=RiverClan=] and one of Otterstar's chief strategists, but he's not very nice.
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Even though he's crazy and depressed, he still was able to come up with CelibateHero: She's a good strategy that [=RiverClan=] and [=ShadowClan=] could use to defeat Bonetail.
* FamedInStory: He'smedicine cat, so she can never take a legend because he led the Clans to the defeat of the Sky Avengers. However, he doesn't quite live up to the stories.
* HiddenDepths: At first he appears to be some idiot stoner character, but then it turns out that he was once a legendary strategist and Otterstar'smate.
*HurtingHero: He fell into depression after his kits died.
CombatMedic: She is a trained fighter and healer.
*TheStoner: To dull [[spoiler:DamselInDistress]]: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:she is captured by [=WindClan=] and taken prisoner.]]
* TheMedic: She's thepain medicine apprentice of the deaths of his kits, he takes catnip and gets high off of it.
[=RiverClan=].
*TheStrategist: He was formerly one of the greatest strategists born to the Clans in years. He was also the one to create the strategy LoveAtFirstPunch: Tidepaw jokes that defeated the Sky Avengers. However, his strategic skills fell into disuse after his kits died.
!!Amberfang
->"That's another problemever tom she fights falls in love with ideals. Some cats ''do'' follow them with absolute conviction. They craft themselves into her.
!!Brightpaw
->"We're all starving, and theimage of their ideals, and do not fail to follow them. But when they're beaten down by all around them, when the very world rejects their principles, Clan needs strong warriors more than they themselves will shatter like ice. Beware, young she-cat.need a sickly apprentice."
Wildpaw's mentor. He's a former medicine apprentice, but during the battle against the Sky Avengers he chose to become a warrior apprentice to avenge his fallen Clanmates. In the present he's a respected member of [=RiverClan=] and one of Otterstar's chief strategists, but he's not very nice.Tidepaw's sister. A quarter moon before Tidepaw's story began, she sometime obtained an incurable illness.
* FamedInStory: He's
* HiddenDepths: At first he appears to be some idiot stoner character, but then it turns out that he was once a legendary strategist and Otterstar's
*
*
* TheMedic: She's the
*
!!Amberfang
->"That's another problem
!!Brightpaw
->"We're all starving, and the
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* DrillSergeantNasty: He's a strict mentor, and isn't very kind.
* {{Jerkass}}: He isn't very nice to Tidepaw.
* TheMedic: He was Nightheart's apprentice for a time. However, he chose to become a warrior apprentice instead.
!!Quailfeather
->"It's not a question of how strong I am. It's how I gain my strength. I believe that when we are protecting something precious to ourselves, we can grow more ferocious than the warriors of [=TigerClan=]."
The father of Tidepaw and Brightpaw. He was killed by rogues before the story began.
* {{Jerkass}}: He isn't very nice to Tidepaw.
* TheMedic: He was Nightheart's apprentice for a time. However, he chose to become a warrior apprentice instead.
!!Quailfeather
->"It's not a question of how strong I am. It's how I gain my strength. I believe that when we are protecting something precious to ourselves, we can grow more ferocious than the warriors of [=TigerClan=]."
The father of Tidepaw and Brightpaw. He was killed by rogues before the story began.
to:
* DrillSergeantNasty: He's [[IllGirl Ill She-cat]]: She has a strict mentor, and isn't very kind.
* {{Jerkass}}: He isn't very nice to Tidepaw.
* TheMedic: He was Nightheart's apprentice for a time. However, he chose to become a warrior apprentice instead.
!!Quailfeather
->"It's not a question of how strong I am. It's how I gain my strength. I believesevere illness that when we are protecting something precious hampers her at crucial moments.
* IncurableCoughOfDeath: Nightheart goes out of his way toourselves, we can grow more ferocious than the warriors of [=TigerClan=]."
The father of Tidepawexplain that he has found no cure for her illness.
!!Wildpaw
Tidepaw's self-proclaimed rival. He loves fighting, andBrightpaw. He was killed by rogues before the story began.is always challenging other cats. His mentor is Amberfang.
* {{Jerkass}}: He isn't very nice to Tidepaw.
* TheMedic: He was Nightheart's apprentice for a time. However, he chose to become a warrior apprentice instead.
!!Quailfeather
->"It's not a question of how strong I am. It's how I gain my strength. I believe
* IncurableCoughOfDeath: Nightheart goes out of his way to
The father of Tidepaw
!!Wildpaw
Tidepaw's self-proclaimed rival. He loves fighting, and
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* PosthumousCharacter: The rogues killed him a week before Tidepaw's first point of view chapter. [[spoiler:It's later revealed that he was actually killed by Tidepaw.]]
!!Swanwing
The mother of Tidepaw and Brightpaw. She disappeared on the same day her mate Quailfeather was killed.
!!Swanwing
The mother of Tidepaw and Brightpaw. She disappeared on the same day her mate Quailfeather was killed.
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* PosthumousCharacter: The rogues killed him AMinorKidroduction: He first shows up as a week before kit in Tidepaw's first point flashback. Then he appears in the present as one of view chapter. [[spoiler:It's later revealed that he was actually killed by Tidepaw.]]
!!Swanwing
The mother ofTidepaw's friends.
* HotBlooded: He loves fighting. He's often challenging Tidepaw to fights, andBrightpaw. when he meets Harepaw, he quickly challenges him to one.
* TheRival: He declares himself to be Tidepaw's rival.
!!Otterstar (Otterfur/Nightclaw)
->"We may not be as strong as you, but we are fighting for our very survival! We won't lose."
[=RiverClan=]'s leader. Shedisappeared on struggles to deal with the same day current food shortage, but is finding it increasingly difficult to save her mate Quailfeather was killed.Clan. She is also a former [=ShadowClan=] warrior who joined [=RiverClan=] after a [=RiverClan=] warrior made a large impact on her life during the war against the Sky Avengers.
!!Swanwing
The mother of
* HotBlooded: He loves fighting. He's often challenging Tidepaw to fights, and
* TheRival: He declares himself to be Tidepaw's rival.
!!Otterstar (Otterfur/Nightclaw)
->"We may not be as strong as you, but we are fighting for our very survival! We won't lose."
[=RiverClan=]'s leader. She
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* MissingMom: She disappeared mysteriously a week before Tidepaw's first point of view chapter.
* UnnamedParent: Until Chapter 4, when we learn that her name is Swanwing.
!!Nightheart
[=RiverClan=]'s medicine cat. He promises to never give up on a patient.
* UnnamedParent: Until Chapter 4, when we learn that her name is Swanwing.
!!Nightheart
[=RiverClan=]'s medicine cat. He promises to never give up on a patient.
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* MissingMom: BigGood: She's the most heroic of the leaders.
* EnemyMine: Shedisappeared mysteriously a week before Tidepaw's first point of view chapter.
teams up with Duskstar and [=ShadowClan=] to defeat Bonetail.
*UnnamedParent: Until Chapter 4, when we learn that HurtingHero: In addition to the problems facing her name is Swanwing.
!!Nightheart
Clan, she lost her kits.
* TheLeader: She's the leader of [=RiverClan=].
* WorkingWithTheEx: Works with Finflutter to create a strategy to defeat Bonetail.
!!Finflutter
->"Yo, [=ShadowClan=] and [=RiverClan=]!"
A tom who always steals Nightheart's catnip and gets high with it. He was once a respected warrior and the mate of [=RiverClan=]'smedicine cat. He promises to never give up on a patient.leader Otterstar, but he fell into depression when his kits died.
* EnemyMine: She
*
!!Nightheart
* TheLeader: She's the leader of [=RiverClan=].
* WorkingWithTheEx: Works with Finflutter to create a strategy to defeat Bonetail.
!!Finflutter
->"Yo, [=ShadowClan=] and [=RiverClan=]!"
A tom who always steals Nightheart's catnip and gets high with it. He was once a respected warrior and the mate of [=RiverClan=]'s
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* CelibateHero: He can never take a mate due to being a medicine cat.
* {{Determinator}}: Amberfang says that Nightheart never gives up on a patient.
* TheMedic: Of [=RiverClan=].
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Shadowclan]]
!!Darkclaw
->"Is it arrogant of me to want the she-cat who birthed me to give a simple sign that she loves me?"
One of the three main point of view characters. He is the son of [=ShadowClan=]'s leader, Duskstar, and his distance from her causes him great stress. He is very bloodthirsty, but his deepest desire is to be acknowledged by his Clan. He has some sort of history with Tidepaw. He was also the one who discovered the body of her father Quailfeather, who was killed by rogues.
* {{Determinator}}: Amberfang says that Nightheart never gives up on a patient.
* TheMedic: Of [=RiverClan=].
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Shadowclan]]
!!Darkclaw
->"Is it arrogant of me to want the she-cat who birthed me to give a simple sign that she loves me?"
One of the three main point of view characters. He is the son of [=ShadowClan=]'s leader, Duskstar, and his distance from her causes him great stress. He is very bloodthirsty, but his deepest desire is to be acknowledged by his Clan. He has some sort of history with Tidepaw. He was also the one who discovered the body of her father Quailfeather, who was killed by rogues.
to:
* CelibateHero: He can never take a mate due BunnyEarsLawyer: Even though he's crazy and depressed, he still was able to being come up with a medicine cat.
* {{Determinator}}: Amberfang saysgood strategy that Nightheart never gives up on a patient.
* TheMedic: Of [=RiverClan=].
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Shadowclan]]
!!Darkclaw
->"Is it arrogant of me[=RiverClan=] and [=ShadowClan=] could use to want defeat Bonetail.
* FamedInStory: He's a legend because he led theshe-cat who birthed me Clans to give a simple sign that she loves me?"
Onethe defeat of the three main point of view characters. He is Sky Avengers. However, he doesn't quite live up to the son of [=ShadowClan=]'s leader, Duskstar, and his distance from her causes him great stress. He is very bloodthirsty, but his deepest desire is stories.
* HiddenDepths: At first he appears to beacknowledged by his Clan. He has some sort idiot stoner character, but then it turns out that he was once a legendary strategist and Otterstar's mate.
* HighOnCatnip: Gets high off ofhistory with Tidepaw. Nightheart's catnip, which he frequently attempts to steal.
* HurtingHero: He fell into depression after his kits died.
* TheStoner: To dull the pain of the deaths of his kits, he takes catnip and gets high off of it.
* TheStrategist: He was formerly one of the greatest strategists born to the Clans in years. He was also the onewho discovered to create the body strategy that defeated the Sky Avengers. However, his strategic skills fell into disuse after his kits died.
!!Amberfang
->"That's another problem with ideals. Some cats ''do'' follow them with absolute conviction. They craft themselves into the image ofher father Quailfeather, who was killed their ideals, and do not fail to follow them. But when they're beaten down by rogues.all around them, when the very world rejects their principles, they themselves will shatter like ice. Beware, young she-cat."
Wildpaw's mentor. He's a former medicine apprentice, but during the battle against the Sky Avengers he chose to become a warrior apprentice to avenge his fallen Clanmates. In the present he's a respected member of [=RiverClan=] and one of Otterstar's chief strategists, but he's not very nice.
* {{Determinator}}: Amberfang says
* TheMedic: Of [=RiverClan=].
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Shadowclan]]
!!Darkclaw
->"Is it arrogant of me
* FamedInStory: He's a legend because he led the
One
* HiddenDepths: At first he appears to be
* HighOnCatnip: Gets high off of
* HurtingHero: He fell into depression after his kits died.
* TheStoner: To dull the pain of the deaths of his kits, he takes catnip and gets high off of it.
* TheStrategist: He was formerly one of the greatest strategists born to the Clans in years. He was also the one
!!Amberfang
->"That's another problem with ideals. Some cats ''do'' follow them with absolute conviction. They craft themselves into the image of
Wildpaw's mentor. He's a former medicine apprentice, but during the battle against the Sky Avengers he chose to become a warrior apprentice to avenge his fallen Clanmates. In the present he's a respected member of [=RiverClan=] and one of Otterstar's chief strategists, but he's not very nice.
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* AntiHero: He does care for his Clan and is firmly on the side of the good guys, but he's also extremely violent and a jerk.
* ArchEnemy: To Tidepaw.
* AxCrazy: He often forgets everything except his bloodlust. Creamfur and Owlflight have had to snap him out of it.
* BerserkButton: Talking about how he was mentored by Bonetail sets him off into a rage.
* EarNotch: Tidepaw tears his ear in Chapter 4.
* HotBlooded: He's completely obsessed with battle, and goes charging into it without thinking.
* {{Jerkass}}: Tidepaw sees him as one. His point of view shows us that she's right, as he constantly insults other cats and has serious temper problems.
* MysteriousPast: Something happened between him and Tidepaw, and it serves as a driving source of conflict.
* PostVictoryCollapse: After defeating Bonetail, he falls over due to the injuries he was ignoring.
* RoyalBrat: He will not shut up about being the Clan Leader's son. However, he's doing it because of issues with his mother.
* ShipTease: Just to troll the audience, he has gotten relationship hints with quite a few cats.
** Hopepaw: He wanted to be her mentor, and they realize how much they understand each other in Chapter 8 and start rubbing against each other.
** Snowcloud: She's the only cat he considers a friend, they always talk with each other at Gatherings, he apparently went to Foxwhisker and asked her to take him to see her, and he is obsessed with her in his flashback.
** Owlflight: In Chapter 8, she goes out and looks for him in the middle of the night and tells him that she wants to fight alongside him. Also, she says that he used to be cute.
** Tidepaw: They used to be friends, and despite how much he claims to hate her he still carries her to a medicine cat when she gets injured in a battle.
* SlasherSmile: When attacking Brightpaw in Chapter 4.
* WellDoneSonGuy: He strives to earn the approval of his mother Duskstar, but finds it hard due to the distance between them.
!!Duskstar
[=ShadowClan=]'s leader, and the mother of Darkclaw and Cherrynose. She had her kits when she was deputy, but was forced to leave the Nursery when her predecessor died. Nowadays, Darkclaw struggles to earn her approval.
* ArchEnemy: To Tidepaw.
* AxCrazy: He often forgets everything except his bloodlust. Creamfur and Owlflight have had to snap him out of it.
* BerserkButton: Talking about how he was mentored by Bonetail sets him off into a rage.
* EarNotch: Tidepaw tears his ear in Chapter 4.
* HotBlooded: He's completely obsessed with battle, and goes charging into it without thinking.
* {{Jerkass}}: Tidepaw sees him as one. His point of view shows us that she's right, as he constantly insults other cats and has serious temper problems.
* MysteriousPast: Something happened between him and Tidepaw, and it serves as a driving source of conflict.
* PostVictoryCollapse: After defeating Bonetail, he falls over due to the injuries he was ignoring.
* RoyalBrat: He will not shut up about being the Clan Leader's son. However, he's doing it because of issues with his mother.
* ShipTease: Just to troll the audience, he has gotten relationship hints with quite a few cats.
** Hopepaw: He wanted to be her mentor, and they realize how much they understand each other in Chapter 8 and start rubbing against each other.
** Snowcloud: She's the only cat he considers a friend, they always talk with each other at Gatherings, he apparently went to Foxwhisker and asked her to take him to see her, and he is obsessed with her in his flashback.
** Owlflight: In Chapter 8, she goes out and looks for him in the middle of the night and tells him that she wants to fight alongside him. Also, she says that he used to be cute.
** Tidepaw: They used to be friends, and despite how much he claims to hate her he still carries her to a medicine cat when she gets injured in a battle.
* SlasherSmile: When attacking Brightpaw in Chapter 4.
* WellDoneSonGuy: He strives to earn the approval of his mother Duskstar, but finds it hard due to the distance between them.
!!Duskstar
[=ShadowClan=]'s leader, and the mother of Darkclaw and Cherrynose. She had her kits when she was deputy, but was forced to leave the Nursery when her predecessor died. Nowadays, Darkclaw struggles to earn her approval.
to:
* AntiHero: He does care for his Clan and is firmly on the side of the good guys, but he's also extremely violent and a jerk.
* ArchEnemy: To Tidepaw.
* AxCrazy: He often forgets everything except his bloodlust. Creamfur and Owlflight have had to snap him out of it.
* BerserkButton: Talking about how he was mentored by Bonetail sets him off into a rage.
* EarNotch: Tidepaw tears his ear in Chapter 4.
* HotBlooded:DrillSergeantNasty: He's completely obsessed with battle, a strict mentor, and goes charging into it without thinking.
isn't very kind.
* {{Jerkass}}:Tidepaw sees him as one. His point of view shows us that she's right, as he constantly insults other cats and has serious temper problems.
* MysteriousPast: Something happened between him and Tidepaw, and it serves as a driving source of conflict.
* PostVictoryCollapse: After defeating Bonetail, he falls over dueHe isn't very nice to the injuries he Tidepaw.
* TheMedic: He wasignoring.
* RoyalBrat: He will not shut up about being the Clan Leader's son.Nightheart's apprentice for a time. However, he's doing it because he chose to become a warrior apprentice instead.
* TheStrategist: Otterstar calls him one ofissues with his mother.
* ShipTease: Just to troll the audience, he has gotten relationship hints with quite a few cats.
** Hopepaw: He wanted to beher mentor, and they realize brightest strategists.
!!Quailfeather
->"It's not a question of howmuch they understand each other in Chapter 8 and start rubbing against each other.
** Snowcloud: She's the only cat he considers a friend, they always talk with each other at Gatherings, he apparently went to Foxwhisker and asked her to take him to see her, and he is obsessed with her in his flashback.
** Owlflight: In Chapter 8, she goes out and looks for him in the middle of the night and tells himstrong I am. It's how I gain my strength. I believe that she wants to fight alongside him. Also, she says that he used to be cute.
** Tidepaw: They used to be friends, and despite how much he claims to hate her he still carries her to a medicine catwhen she gets injured in a battle.
* SlasherSmile: When attacking Brightpaw in Chapter 4.
* WellDoneSonGuy: He striveswe are protecting something precious to earn ourselves, we can grow more ferocious than the approval warriors of his mother Duskstar, but finds it hard due to [=TigerClan=]."
The father of Tidepaw and Brightpaw. He was killed by rogues before thedistance between them.
!!Duskstar
[=ShadowClan=]'s leader, and the mother of Darkclaw and Cherrynose. She had her kits when she was deputy, but was forced to leave the Nursery when her predecessor died. Nowadays, Darkclaw struggles to earn her approval.story began.
* ArchEnemy: To Tidepaw.
* AxCrazy: He often forgets everything except his bloodlust. Creamfur and Owlflight have had to snap him out of it.
* BerserkButton: Talking about how he was mentored by Bonetail sets him off into a rage.
* EarNotch: Tidepaw tears his ear in Chapter 4.
* HotBlooded:
* {{Jerkass}}:
* MysteriousPast: Something happened between him and Tidepaw, and it serves as a driving source of conflict.
* PostVictoryCollapse: After defeating Bonetail, he falls over due
* TheMedic: He was
* RoyalBrat: He will not shut up about being the Clan Leader's son.
* TheStrategist: Otterstar calls him one of
* ShipTease: Just to troll the audience, he has gotten relationship hints with quite a few cats.
** Hopepaw: He wanted to be
!!Quailfeather
->"It's not a question of how
** Snowcloud: She's the only cat he considers a friend, they always talk with each other at Gatherings, he apparently went to Foxwhisker and asked her to take him to see her, and he is obsessed with her in his flashback.
** Owlflight: In Chapter 8, she goes out and looks for him in the middle of the night and tells him
** Tidepaw: They used to be friends, and despite how much he claims to hate her he still carries her to a medicine cat
* SlasherSmile: When attacking Brightpaw in Chapter 4.
* WellDoneSonGuy: He strives
The father of Tidepaw and Brightpaw. He was killed by rogues before the
!!Duskstar
[=ShadowClan=]'s leader, and the mother of Darkclaw and Cherrynose. She had her kits when she was deputy, but was forced to leave the Nursery when her predecessor died. Nowadays, Darkclaw struggles to earn her approval.
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* EnemyMine: Agrees to work with Otterstar and [=RiverClan=] to take down Bonetail.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: She refuses to help [=RiverClan=] in Chapter 2, but in Chapter 7 it turns out that she had some of her warriors take food to [=RiverClan=].
* TheLeader: She's the leader of [=ShadowClan=].
!!Redclaw
->"I'll keep walking this path, as long as it leads me to further strength."
[=ShadowClan=]'s deputy. He doesn't agree with his leader's decision to abandon [=RiverClan=].
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: She refuses to help [=RiverClan=] in Chapter 2, but in Chapter 7 it turns out that she had some of her warriors take food to [=RiverClan=].
* TheLeader: She's the leader of [=ShadowClan=].
!!Redclaw
->"I'll keep walking this path, as long as it leads me to further strength."
[=ShadowClan=]'s deputy. He doesn't agree with his leader's decision to abandon [=RiverClan=].
to:
* EnemyMine: Agrees to work with Otterstar and [=RiverClan=] to take down Bonetail.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: She refuses to help [=RiverClan=] in Chapter 2, but in Chapter 7 it turns outPosthumousCharacter: The rogues killed him a week before Tidepaw's first point of view chapter. [[spoiler:It's later revealed that she had some he was actually killed by Tidepaw.]]
!!Swanwing
The mother of Tidepaw and Brightpaw. She disappeared on the same day herwarriors take food to [=RiverClan=].
* TheLeader: She's the leader of [=ShadowClan=].
!!Redclaw
->"I'll keep walking this path, as long as it leads me to further strength."
[=ShadowClan=]'s deputy. He doesn't agree with his leader's decision to abandon [=RiverClan=].mate Quailfeather was killed.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: She refuses to help [=RiverClan=] in Chapter 2, but in Chapter 7 it turns out
!!Swanwing
The mother of Tidepaw and Brightpaw. She disappeared on the same day her
* TheLeader: She's the leader of [=ShadowClan=].
!!Redclaw
->"I'll keep walking this path, as long as it leads me to further strength."
[=ShadowClan=]'s deputy. He doesn't agree with his leader's decision to abandon [=RiverClan=].
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* NumberTwo: He's the deputy of [=ShadowClan=].
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He wants to help [=RiverClan=] with their food problems.
!!Foxwhisker
->"Heroic tales of fancy would only serve to cause impressionable young rat-brains like you to make stupid decisions in an attempt to emulate the Heroes of Prophecy."
[=ShadowClan=]'s medicine cat. She is sarcastic, and enjoys picking on Darkclaw.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He wants to help [=RiverClan=] with their food problems.
!!Foxwhisker
->"Heroic tales of fancy would only serve to cause impressionable young rat-brains like you to make stupid decisions in an attempt to emulate the Heroes of Prophecy."
[=ShadowClan=]'s medicine cat. She is sarcastic, and enjoys picking on Darkclaw.
to:
* NumberTwo: He's the deputy MissingMom: She disappeared mysteriously a week before Tidepaw's first point of [=ShadowClan=].
view chapter.
*ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He wants to help [=RiverClan=] with their food problems.
!!Foxwhisker
->"Heroic tales of fancy would only serve to cause impressionable young rat-brains like you to make stupid decisions in an attempt to emulate the Heroes of Prophecy."
[=ShadowClan=]'sUnnamedParent: Until Chapter 4, when we learn that her name is Swanwing.
!!Nightheart
[=RiverClan=]'s medicine cat.She is sarcastic, and enjoys picking He promises to never give up on Darkclaw.a patient.
*
!!Foxwhisker
->"Heroic tales of fancy would only serve to cause impressionable young rat-brains like you to make stupid decisions in an attempt to emulate the Heroes of Prophecy."
[=ShadowClan=]'s
!!Nightheart
[=RiverClan=]'s medicine cat.
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* CelibateHero: She isn't allowed a mate because she's a medicine cat.
* DeadpanSnarker: Tends to be dryly snarky. An example from Chapter 8 comes when she is trying to lure some rogues into a trap.
-->'''Foxwhisker''': "I'm just a harmless medicine cat out for a walk. It sure would be a shame if something happened to me."
-->Rogues surround her.
-->'''Foxwhisker''': "Oh, the predictability."
* TheMedic: She is the medicine cat of [=ShadowClan=].
!!Sootstain
->"It won't be any trouble for an experienced warrior like me."
One of [=ShadowClan=]'s warriors. He's Bonetail's brother, and is somewhat grumpy.
* DeadpanSnarker: Tends to be dryly snarky. An example from Chapter 8 comes when she is trying to lure some rogues into a trap.
-->'''Foxwhisker''': "I'm just a harmless medicine cat out for a walk. It sure would be a shame if something happened to me."
-->Rogues surround her.
-->'''Foxwhisker''': "Oh, the predictability."
* TheMedic: She is the medicine cat of [=ShadowClan=].
!!Sootstain
->"It won't be any trouble for an experienced warrior like me."
One of [=ShadowClan=]'s warriors. He's Bonetail's brother, and is somewhat grumpy.
to:
* CelibateHero: She isn't allowed He can never take a mate because she's due to being a medicine cat.
*DeadpanSnarker: Tends to be dryly snarky. An example from Chapter 8 comes when she is trying to lure some rogues into {{Determinator}}: Amberfang says that Nightheart never gives up on a trap.
-->'''Foxwhisker''': "I'm just a harmless medicine cat out for a walk. It sure would be a shame if something happened to me."
-->Rogues surround her.
-->'''Foxwhisker''': "Oh, the predictability."
patient.
* TheMedic:She is the medicine cat of [=ShadowClan=].
!!Sootstain
->"It won't be any trouble for an experienced warrior like me."
One of [=ShadowClan=]'s warriors. He's Bonetail's brother,Of [=RiverClan=].
!!Graywave
Tidepaw's mentor andis somewhat grumpy.one of [=RiverClan=]'s brightest strategists. Knows something about Arise.
*
-->'''Foxwhisker''': "I'm just a harmless medicine cat out for a walk. It sure would be a shame if something happened to me."
-->Rogues surround her.
-->'''Foxwhisker''': "Oh, the predictability."
* TheMedic:
!!Sootstain
->"It won't be any trouble for an experienced warrior like me."
One of [=ShadowClan=]'s warriors. He's Bonetail's brother,
!!Graywave
Tidepaw's mentor and
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* AscendedExtra: Introduced as a minor character, but gets more important in each chapter he appears.
* IKnowYouAreInThereSomewhereFight: Tries to bring the noble part of his brother back by defeating him in battle. However, he fails and Darkclaw is the one to defeat Bonetail.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Darkclaw is very surprised when Sootstain actually begs him to save Bonetail, because Sootstain is usually very grumpy and aloof.
* StarCrossedLovers: He and a [=RiverClan=] she-cat fell in love and had kits together, but they're apart now. Those kits are Skystorm and Grasstail of [=RiverClan=] and Creamfur of [=ShadowClan=].
!!Hopepaw
->"The Winds of Death can never be cheated."
A small white she-kit (now Owlflight's apprentice) who often bothers Darkclaw. She can somehow tell when cats will die with a mysterious power known as "The Winds of Death".
* IKnowYouAreInThereSomewhereFight: Tries to bring the noble part of his brother back by defeating him in battle. However, he fails and Darkclaw is the one to defeat Bonetail.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Darkclaw is very surprised when Sootstain actually begs him to save Bonetail, because Sootstain is usually very grumpy and aloof.
* StarCrossedLovers: He and a [=RiverClan=] she-cat fell in love and had kits together, but they're apart now. Those kits are Skystorm and Grasstail of [=RiverClan=] and Creamfur of [=ShadowClan=].
!!Hopepaw
->"The Winds of Death can never be cheated."
A small white she-kit (now Owlflight's apprentice) who often bothers Darkclaw. She can somehow tell when cats will die with a mysterious power known as "The Winds of Death".
to:
* AscendedExtra: Introduced as a minor character, but gets TheMentor: He mentors Tidepaw.
* TheStrategist: In Chapter 7, Otterstar tells Duskstar that he is one of her brightest strategists.
!!Risingwave
A tortoiseshell tom who was [=RiverClan=]'s deputy during the time of the Sky Avengers. He betrayed the Clans to gain moreimportant in each chapter he appears.
* IKnowYouAreInThereSomewhereFight: Tries to bring the noble part of his brother back by defeating him in battle. However, he fails and Darkclaw is the one to defeat Bonetail.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Darkclaw is very surprised when Sootstain actually begs him to save Bonetail, because Sootstain is usually very grumpy and aloof.
* StarCrossedLovers: He and a [=RiverClan=] she-cat fell in love and had kits together,power, but they're apart now. Those kits are Skystorm and Grasstail of [=RiverClan=] and Creamfur of [=ShadowClan=].
!!Hopepaw
->"The Winds of Death can never be cheated."
A small white she-kit (now Owlflight's apprentice) who often bothers Darkclaw. She can somehow tell when cats will die with a mysterious power known as "The Winds of Death".was killed by Darkclaw's father Blackfur.
* TheStrategist: In Chapter 7, Otterstar tells Duskstar that he is one of her brightest strategists.
!!Risingwave
A tortoiseshell tom who was [=RiverClan=]'s deputy during the time of the Sky Avengers. He betrayed the Clans to gain more
* IKnowYouAreInThereSomewhereFight: Tries to bring the noble part of his brother back by defeating him in battle. However, he fails and Darkclaw is the one to defeat Bonetail.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Darkclaw is very surprised when Sootstain actually begs him to save Bonetail, because Sootstain is usually very grumpy and aloof.
* StarCrossedLovers: He and a [=RiverClan=] she-cat fell in love and had kits together,
!!Hopepaw
->"The Winds of Death can never be cheated."
A small white she-kit (now Owlflight's apprentice) who often bothers Darkclaw. She can somehow tell when cats will die with a mysterious power known as "The Winds of Death".
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* CatchPhrase: "Oh my frog!"
* CheerfulChild: Alternates between this and CreepyChild. The cheerful part comes out when she's talking about frogs.
* CreepyChild: Alternates between this and CheerfulChild. The creepy part comes out when she's talking about the Winds of Death.
* HoldYourHippogriffs: Does this to the terminology of the Clans themselves by saying "Oh my frog" instead of "Oh my [=StarClan=]".
* TheUnfavorite: In Chapter 8, she mentions that her mother Webnose seems to love her brother Blazepaw more than she loves Hopepaw.
* WaifProphet: She can tell who will die due to the Winds of Death. And she's a kit.
* CheerfulChild: Alternates between this and CreepyChild. The cheerful part comes out when she's talking about frogs.
* CreepyChild: Alternates between this and CheerfulChild. The creepy part comes out when she's talking about the Winds of Death.
* HoldYourHippogriffs: Does this to the terminology of the Clans themselves by saying "Oh my frog" instead of "Oh my [=StarClan=]".
* TheUnfavorite: In Chapter 8, she mentions that her mother Webnose seems to love her brother Blazepaw more than she loves Hopepaw.
* WaifProphet: She can tell who will die due to the Winds of Death. And she's a kit.
to:
* CatchPhrase: "Oh my frog!"
* CheerfulChild: Alternates between this and CreepyChild. The cheerful part comes out when she's talking about frogs.
* CreepyChild: Alternates between this and CheerfulChild. The creepy part comes out when she's talking aboutNumberTwo: He was [=RiverClan=]'s deputy until he betrayed the Winds of Death.
* HoldYourHippogriffs: Does this to the terminology of the Clans themselves by saying "Oh my frog" instead of "Oh my [=StarClan=]".
* TheUnfavorite: In Chapter 8, she mentions that her mother Webnose seems to love her brother Blazepaw more than she loves Hopepaw.
* WaifProphet: She can tell who will die due to the Winds of Death. And she's a kit.Clans.
* CheerfulChild: Alternates between this and CreepyChild. The cheerful part comes out when she's talking about frogs.
* CreepyChild: Alternates between this and CheerfulChild. The creepy part comes out when she's talking about
* HoldYourHippogriffs: Does this to the terminology of the Clans themselves by saying "Oh my frog" instead of "Oh my [=StarClan=]".
* TheUnfavorite: In Chapter 8, she mentions that her mother Webnose seems to love her brother Blazepaw more than she loves Hopepaw.
* WaifProphet: She can tell who will die due to the Winds of Death. And she's a kit.
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[[folder:Thunderclan]]
!!Sunstorm
->"The survival of all four Clans has always been [=StarClan=]'s will, and I will not let you condemn another Clan for the sake of your pride."
[=ThunderClan=]'s medicine cat. Despite his undying loyalty to his own Clan, he cares for all the Clans, protecting them for hardship.
!!Sunstorm
->"The survival of all four Clans has always been [=StarClan=]'s will, and I will not let you condemn another Clan for the sake of your pride."
[=ThunderClan=]'s medicine cat. Despite his undying loyalty to his own Clan, he cares for all the Clans, protecting them for hardship.
to:
!!Sunstorm
->"The survival
!!Darkclaw
->"Is it arrogant of
One of the three main point of view characters. He is the son of [=ShadowClan=]'s leader, Duskstar, and his distance from her causes him great stress. He is very bloodthirsty, but his deepest desire is to be acknowledged by his Clan. He has
[=ThunderClan=]'s medicine cat. Despite his undying loyalty to his own Clan, he cares for all
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Tidepaw even goes on a rant about it.
* CelibateHero: As a medicine cat, he can never take a mate.
* DeadpanSnarker: He's both polite and sarcastic at the same time.
* HeroicSacrifice: Proposes that he could make one by giving himself up to Bonetail in exchange for the freedom of the other medicine cats.
* TheMedic: He's one of [=ThunderClan=]'s Medicine Cats.
* MysteriousPast: He claims that there's quite a story behind his name, but he never elaborates. In Chapter 5, he's revealed to be a former kittypet. This probably has something to do with it.
* NiceGuy: He brings herbs to [=WindClan=] simply because he thinks they might need them.
* [[RedHeadedHero Red Furred Hero]]: He has ginger fur, and he's very heroic.
!!Lightningblaze
->"Must you always be so theatrical?"
A grumpy [=ThunderClan=] warrior. Many Clan cats believe that her murdered [=ThunderClan=]'s former deputy Whisperwing so that his niece Sandstone could be deputy.
* CelibateHero: As a medicine cat, he can never take a mate.
* DeadpanSnarker: He's both polite and sarcastic at the same time.
* HeroicSacrifice: Proposes that he could make one by giving himself up to Bonetail in exchange for the freedom of the other medicine cats.
* TheMedic: He's one of [=ThunderClan=]'s Medicine Cats.
* MysteriousPast: He claims that there's quite a story behind his name, but he never elaborates. In Chapter 5, he's revealed to be a former kittypet. This probably has something to do with it.
* NiceGuy: He brings herbs to [=WindClan=] simply because he thinks they might need them.
* [[RedHeadedHero Red Furred Hero]]: He has ginger fur, and he's very heroic.
!!Lightningblaze
->"Must you always be so theatrical?"
A grumpy [=ThunderClan=] warrior. Many Clan cats believe that her murdered [=ThunderClan=]'s former deputy Whisperwing so that his niece Sandstone could be deputy.
to:
* AwesomeMcCoolname: AntiHero: He does care for his Clan and is firmly on the side of the good guys, but he's also extremely violent and a jerk.
* ArchEnemy: To Tidepaw.
* AxCrazy: He often forgets everything except his bloodlust. Creamfur and Owlflight have had to snap him out of it.
* BerserkButton: Talking about how he was mentored by Bonetail sets him off into a rage.
* EarNotch: Tidepaweven goes on a rant about it.
tears his ear in Chapter 4.
*CelibateHero: As a medicine cat, he can never take a mate.
* DeadpanSnarker:HotBlooded: He's both polite completely obsessed with battle, and sarcastic at the same time.
goes charging into it without thinking.
*HeroicSacrifice: Proposes {{Jerkass}}: Tidepaw sees him as one. His point of view shows us that she's right, as he could make one by giving himself up to Bonetail in exchange for the freedom of the constantly insults other medicine cats.
* TheMedic: He's one of [=ThunderClan=]'s Medicine Cats.
cats and has serious temper problems.
* MysteriousPast: Something happened between him and Tidepaw, and it serves as a driving source of conflict.
* PostVictoryCollapse: After defeating Bonetail, he falls over due to the injuries he was ignoring.
* RoyalBrat: Heclaims that there's will not shut up about being the Clan Leader's son. However, he's doing it because of issues with his mother.
* ShipTease: Just to troll the audience, he has gotten relationship hints with quite astory behind few cats.
** Hopepaw: He wanted to be her mentor, and they realize how much they understand each other in Chapter 8 and start rubbing against each other.
** Snowcloud: She's the only cat he considers a friend, they always talk with each other at Gatherings, he apparently went to Foxwhisker and asked her to take him to see her, and he is obsessed with her in hisname, but he never elaborates. flashback.
** Owlflight: In Chapter5, he's revealed 8, she goes out and looks for him in the middle of the night and tells him that she wants to fight alongside him. Also, she says that he used to be a former kittypet. This probably has something cute.
** Tidepaw: They used todo with it.
* NiceGuy: He brings herbs to [=WindClan=] simply because he thinks they might need them.
* [[RedHeadedHero Red Furred Hero]]: He has ginger fur,be friends, and he's very heroic.
!!Lightningblaze
->"Must you always be so theatrical?"
A grumpy [=ThunderClan=] warrior. Many Clan cats believe thatdespite how much he claims to hate her murdered [=ThunderClan=]'s former deputy Whisperwing so that he still carries her to a medicine cat when she gets injured in a battle.
* SlasherSmile: When attacking Brightpaw in Chapter 4.
* WellDoneSonGuy: He strives to earn the approval of hisniece Sandstone could be deputy.mother Duskstar, but finds it hard due to the distance between them.
!!Duskstar
[=ShadowClan=]'s leader, and the mother of Darkclaw and Cherrynose. She had her kits when she was deputy, but was forced to leave the Nursery when her predecessor died. Nowadays, Darkclaw struggles to earn her approval.
* ArchEnemy: To Tidepaw.
* AxCrazy: He often forgets everything except his bloodlust. Creamfur and Owlflight have had to snap him out of it.
* BerserkButton: Talking about how he was mentored by Bonetail sets him off into a rage.
* EarNotch: Tidepaw
*
* DeadpanSnarker:
*
* TheMedic: He's one of [=ThunderClan=]'s Medicine Cats.
* MysteriousPast: Something happened between him and Tidepaw, and it serves as a driving source of conflict.
* PostVictoryCollapse: After defeating Bonetail, he falls over due to the injuries he was ignoring.
* RoyalBrat: He
* ShipTease: Just to troll the audience, he has gotten relationship hints with quite a
** Hopepaw: He wanted to be her mentor, and they realize how much they understand each other in Chapter 8 and start rubbing against each other.
** Snowcloud: She's the only cat he considers a friend, they always talk with each other at Gatherings, he apparently went to Foxwhisker and asked her to take him to see her, and he is obsessed with her in his
** Owlflight: In Chapter
** Tidepaw: They used to
* NiceGuy: He brings herbs to [=WindClan=] simply because he thinks they might need them.
* [[RedHeadedHero Red Furred Hero]]: He has ginger fur,
!!Lightningblaze
->"Must you always be so theatrical?"
A grumpy [=ThunderClan=] warrior. Many Clan cats believe that
* SlasherSmile: When attacking Brightpaw in Chapter 4.
* WellDoneSonGuy: He strives to earn the approval of his
!!Duskstar
[=ShadowClan=]'s leader, and the mother of Darkclaw and Cherrynose. She had her kits when she was deputy, but was forced to leave the Nursery when her predecessor died. Nowadays, Darkclaw struggles to earn her approval.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: He may be prickly, but he does agree to share herbs with [=WindClan=], and Leafkit notices that he is surprisingly soft around Snowcloud.
* OnlySaneMan: He's bothered by the antics of the other cats.
!!Hazelfrost
->"Your Clan of traitors and murderers can collapse on itself. And then, you'll die just like everyone else."
A violently insane she-cat who was formerly a member of [=ThunderClan=]. After attempting to kill Sandstone, [=ThunderClan=]'s deputy, she fled to the mountains. She's working with Arise, but WordOfGod states that she is not The Deliverer.
* OnlySaneMan: He's bothered by the antics of the other cats.
!!Hazelfrost
->"Your Clan of traitors and murderers can collapse on itself. And then, you'll die just like everyone else."
A violently insane she-cat who was formerly a member of [=ThunderClan=]. After attempting to kill Sandstone, [=ThunderClan=]'s deputy, she fled to the mountains. She's working with Arise, but WordOfGod states that she is not The Deliverer.
to:
* EnemyMine: Agrees to work with Otterstar and [=RiverClan=] to take down Bonetail.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold:He may be prickly, She refuses to help [=RiverClan=] in Chapter 2, but he does agree to share herbs with [=WindClan=], and Leafkit notices in Chapter 7 it turns out that he is surprisingly soft around Snowcloud.
she had some of her warriors take food to [=RiverClan=].
*OnlySaneMan: He's bothered by TheLeader: She's the antics leader of the other cats.
!!Hazelfrost
->"Your Clan of traitors and murderers can collapse on itself. And then, you'll die just like everyone else.[=ShadowClan=].
!!Redclaw
->"I'll keep walking this path, as long as it leads me to further strength."
A violently insane she-cat who was formerly a member of [=ThunderClan=]. After attempting to kill Sandstone, [=ThunderClan=]'s deputy, she fled to [=ShadowClan=]'s deputy. Spent four moons as Darkclaw's mentor after Bonetail turned against the mountains. She's working Clan. He doesn't agree with Arise, but WordOfGod states that she is not The Deliverer.his leader's decision to abandon [=RiverClan=].
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold:
*
!!Hazelfrost
->"Your Clan of traitors and murderers can collapse on itself. And then, you'll die just like everyone else.
!!Redclaw
->"I'll keep walking this path, as long as it leads me to further strength."
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* ADayInTheLimelight: Interlude 1 is about her failed attempt to kill the [=ThunderClan=] deputy Sandstone.
* AxCrazy: She's crazy, and violent, especially when she attacks Sandstone.
* BrokenPedestal: She decided that she hated Jaytalon after he refused to let her kill Sandstone.
* ChekhovsGunman: She seems like a random minor character in Chapter 6, but then Interlude 1 reveals that she's working for Arise.
* TheCuckoolanderWasRight: At first, she seems insane when she says that Sandstone killed her mother. Then it turns out to be true.
* DarkSecret: She killed her brother.
* HearingVoices: She hears many voices talking to her. Some, like Whisperwing, are imaginary, but she also hears the voice of Arise.
* {{Revenge}}: She spends most of Interlude 1 ranting about taking revenge on Sandstone.
* TheRunaway: She flees [=ThunderClan=] at the end of Interlude 1.
* [[YouKilledMyFather You Killed My Mother]]: The reason she wants to kill Sandstone is because she has been led to believe that Sandstone murdered her mother, Goldenfoot. Then it turns out that it's true.
!!Thornstar
[=ThunderClan=]'s leader. He's significantly less important than the other Clan leaders.
* AxCrazy: She's crazy, and violent, especially when she attacks Sandstone.
* BrokenPedestal: She decided that she hated Jaytalon after he refused to let her kill Sandstone.
* ChekhovsGunman: She seems like a random minor character in Chapter 6, but then Interlude 1 reveals that she's working for Arise.
* TheCuckoolanderWasRight: At first, she seems insane when she says that Sandstone killed her mother. Then it turns out to be true.
* DarkSecret: She killed her brother.
* HearingVoices: She hears many voices talking to her. Some, like Whisperwing, are imaginary, but she also hears the voice of Arise.
* {{Revenge}}: She spends most of Interlude 1 ranting about taking revenge on Sandstone.
* TheRunaway: She flees [=ThunderClan=] at the end of Interlude 1.
* [[YouKilledMyFather You Killed My Mother]]: The reason she wants to kill Sandstone is because she has been led to believe that Sandstone murdered her mother, Goldenfoot. Then it turns out that it's true.
!!Thornstar
[=ThunderClan=]'s leader. He's significantly less important than the other Clan leaders.
to:
* ADayInTheLimelight: Interlude 1 is about her failed NumberTwo: He's the deputy of [=ShadowClan=].
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He wants to help [=RiverClan=] with their food problems.
!!Foxwhisker
->"Heroic tales of fancy would only serve to cause impressionable young rat-brains like you to make stupid decisions in an attempt tokill emulate the [=ThunderClan=] deputy Sandstone.
* AxCrazy: She's crazy,Heroes of Prophecy."
[=ShadowClan=]'s medicine cat. She is sarcastic, andviolent, especially when she attacks Sandstone.
* BrokenPedestal: She decided that she hated Jaytalon after he refused to let her kill Sandstone.
* ChekhovsGunman: She seems like a random minor character in Chapter 6, but then Interlude 1 reveals that she's working for Arise.
* TheCuckoolanderWasRight: At first, she seems insane when she says that Sandstone killed her mother. Then it turns out to be true.
* DarkSecret: She killed her brother.
* HearingVoices: She hears many voices talking to her. Some, like Whisperwing, are imaginary, but she also hears the voice of Arise.
* {{Revenge}}: She spends most of Interlude 1 ranting about taking revengeenjoys picking on Sandstone.
* TheRunaway: She flees [=ThunderClan=] at the end of Interlude 1.
* [[YouKilledMyFather You Killed My Mother]]: The reason she wants to kill Sandstone is because she has been led to believe that Sandstone murdered her mother, Goldenfoot. Then it turns out that it's true.
!!Thornstar
[=ThunderClan=]'s leader. He's significantly less important than the other Clan leaders.Darkclaw.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He wants to help [=RiverClan=] with their food problems.
!!Foxwhisker
->"Heroic tales of fancy would only serve to cause impressionable young rat-brains like you to make stupid decisions in an attempt to
* AxCrazy: She's crazy,
[=ShadowClan=]'s medicine cat. She is sarcastic, and
* BrokenPedestal: She decided that she hated Jaytalon after he refused to let her kill Sandstone.
* ChekhovsGunman: She seems like a random minor character in Chapter 6, but then Interlude 1 reveals that she's working for Arise.
* TheCuckoolanderWasRight: At first, she seems insane when she says that Sandstone killed her mother. Then it turns out to be true.
* DarkSecret: She killed her brother.
* HearingVoices: She hears many voices talking to her. Some, like Whisperwing, are imaginary, but she also hears the voice of Arise.
* {{Revenge}}: She spends most of Interlude 1 ranting about taking revenge
* TheRunaway: She flees [=ThunderClan=] at the end of Interlude 1.
* [[YouKilledMyFather You Killed My Mother]]: The reason she wants to kill Sandstone is because she has been led to believe that Sandstone murdered her mother, Goldenfoot. Then it turns out that it's true.
!!Thornstar
[=ThunderClan=]'s leader. He's significantly less important than the other Clan leaders.
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* HeroicBastard: He's a [=halfClan=].
* TheLeader: He's [=ThunderClan=]'s leader.
* MinorMajorCharacter: He's a Clan leader, but he only has a single line so far. In Chapter 5, he gets a second line, and that's all.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:The Watcher's Crew]]
!!The Watcher
->"My goal is, as it always was, to stain this land crimson with the blood of the Clan cats."
A mysterious figure who seeks the destruction of the Clans. His plans involved tracking down the enigmatic tom known as Arise. Although his identity is unclear, he has apparently committed a deed so horrible that even thinking about it would be an enormous crime.
* TheLeader: He's [=ThunderClan=]'s leader.
* MinorMajorCharacter: He's a Clan leader, but he only has a single line so far. In Chapter 5, he gets a second line, and that's all.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:The Watcher's Crew]]
!!The Watcher
->"My goal is, as it always was, to stain this land crimson with the blood of the Clan cats."
A mysterious figure who seeks the destruction of the Clans. His plans involved tracking down the enigmatic tom known as Arise. Although his identity is unclear, he has apparently committed a deed so horrible that even thinking about it would be an enormous crime.
to:
* HeroicBastard: He's CelibateHero: She isn't allowed a [=halfClan=].
mate because she's a medicine cat.
*TheLeader: He's [=ThunderClan=]'s leader.
* MinorMajorCharacter: He's a Clan leader, but he only has a single line so far. InDeadpanSnarker: Tends to be dryly snarky. An example from Chapter 5, he gets a second line, and that's all.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:The Watcher's Crew]]
!!The Watcher
->"My goal is, as it always was,8 comes when she is trying to stain this land crimson with lure some rogues into a trap.
-->'''Foxwhisker''': "I'm just a harmless medicine cat out for a walk. It sure would be a shame if something happened to me."
-->Rogues surround her.
-->'''Foxwhisker''': "Oh, theblood of predictability."
* TheMedic: She is theClan cats.medicine cat of [=ShadowClan=].
!!Sootstain
->"It won't be any trouble for an experienced warrior like me."
A mysterious figure who seeks the destruction One of the Clans. His plans involved tracking down the enigmatic tom known as Arise. Although his identity [=ShadowClan=]'s warriors. He's Bonetail's brother, and is unclear, he has apparently committed a deed so horrible that even thinking about it would be an enormous crime.somewhat grumpy.
*
* MinorMajorCharacter: He's a Clan leader, but he only has a single line so far. In
[[/folder]]
[[folder:The Watcher's Crew]]
!!The Watcher
->"My goal is, as it always was,
-->'''Foxwhisker''': "I'm just a harmless medicine cat out for a walk. It sure would be a shame if something happened to me."
-->Rogues surround her.
-->'''Foxwhisker''': "Oh, the
* TheMedic: She is the
!!Sootstain
->"It won't be any trouble for an experienced warrior like me."
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* BigBad: He's the menacing figure manipulating the characters in his attempt to destroy the Clans.
* BiggerBad: He is much more powerful and malicious than Bonetail, but he hasn't received any focus outside out the prologue.
* TheChessmaster: He's apparently pulling the strings of the Clans. His plans also seem malleable enough to account for problems. When the Deliverer kills one of the kits she was supposed to bring to him, he explains that instead of screwing him over, she may have improved the end result.
* EvilPlan: He has one, and it somehow involves abducting and killing newborn kittens.
* HiddenAgendaVillain: All we know is that his plan involves killing some cats, and the Clan cats are in danger because of it.
* HiddenVillain: We know that he is a Clan cat, but we don't know who he is, or even which Clan he's in.
* IntroOnlyPointOfView: He has a point of view in the prologue, but he's not a main character like Leafkit, Tidepaw, or Darkclaw.
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The prologue simply calls him, "The Watcher".
* TheWatcher: He seems to be watching over the Clans with an evil plan in mind. It's also what the prologue calls him.
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He is last seen carrying off a kit so that he can kill it. It somehow fits into his master plan.
!!The Deliverer
->"I told her everything that you told me."
A she-cat working for The Watcher. As part of his plan, she kidnaps two newborn kits.
* BiggerBad: He is much more powerful and malicious than Bonetail, but he hasn't received any focus outside out the prologue.
* TheChessmaster: He's apparently pulling the strings of the Clans. His plans also seem malleable enough to account for problems. When the Deliverer kills one of the kits she was supposed to bring to him, he explains that instead of screwing him over, she may have improved the end result.
* EvilPlan: He has one, and it somehow involves abducting and killing newborn kittens.
* HiddenAgendaVillain: All we know is that his plan involves killing some cats, and the Clan cats are in danger because of it.
* HiddenVillain: We know that he is a Clan cat, but we don't know who he is, or even which Clan he's in.
* IntroOnlyPointOfView: He has a point of view in the prologue, but he's not a main character like Leafkit, Tidepaw, or Darkclaw.
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The prologue simply calls him, "The Watcher".
* TheWatcher: He seems to be watching over the Clans with an evil plan in mind. It's also what the prologue calls him.
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He is last seen carrying off a kit so that he can kill it. It somehow fits into his master plan.
!!The Deliverer
->"I told her everything that you told me."
A she-cat working for The Watcher. As part of his plan, she kidnaps two newborn kits.
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* BigBad: He's the menacing figure manipulating the characters in his attempt to destroy the Clans.
* BiggerBad: He is muchAscendedExtra: Introduced as a minor character, but gets more powerful important in each chapter he appears.
* IKnowYouAreInThereSomewhereFight: Tries to bring the noble part of his brother back by defeating him in battle. However, he fails andmalicious than Darkclaw is the one to defeat Bonetail.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Darkclaw is very surprised when Sootstain actually begs him to save Bonetail,but he hasn't received any focus outside out the prologue.
* TheChessmaster: He's apparently pulling the strings of the Clans. His plans also seem malleable enough to account for problems. When the Deliverer kills one of the kits she was supposed to bring to him, he explains that instead of screwing him over, she may have improved the end result.
* EvilPlan: He has one, and it somehow involves abducting and killing newborn kittens.
* HiddenAgendaVillain: All we know is that his plan involves killing some cats, and the Clan cats are in dangerbecause of it.
* HiddenVillain: We know that heSootstain is usually very grumpy and aloof.
* StarCrossedLovers: He and aClan cat, [=RiverClan=] she-cat fell in love and had kits together, but we don't know who he is, or even which Clan he's in.
* IntroOnlyPointOfView: He has a pointthey're apart now. Those kits are Skystorm and Grasstail of view in the prologue, but he's not a main character like Leafkit, Tidepaw, or Darkclaw.
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The prologue simply calls him, "The Watcher".
* TheWatcher: He seems to be watching over the Clans with an evil plan in mind. It's also what the prologue calls him.
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He is last seen carrying off a kit so that he[=RiverClan=] and Creamfur of [=ShadowClan=].
!!Hopepaw
->"The Winds of Death cankill it. It somehow fits into his master plan.
!!The Deliverer
->"I told her everything that you told me.never be cheated."
Ashe-cat working for The Watcher. As part small white she-kit (now Owlflight's apprentice) who often bothers Darkclaw. She can somehow tell when cats will die with a mysterious power known as "The Winds of his plan, she kidnaps two newborn kits.Death".
* BiggerBad: He is much
* IKnowYouAreInThereSomewhereFight: Tries to bring the noble part of his brother back by defeating him in battle. However, he fails and
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Darkclaw is very surprised when Sootstain actually begs him to save Bonetail,
* TheChessmaster: He's apparently pulling the strings of the Clans. His plans also seem malleable enough to account for problems. When the Deliverer kills one of the kits she was supposed to bring to him, he explains that instead of screwing him over, she may have improved the end result.
* EvilPlan: He has one, and it somehow involves abducting and killing newborn kittens.
* HiddenAgendaVillain: All we know is that his plan involves killing some cats, and the Clan cats are in danger
* HiddenVillain: We know that he
* StarCrossedLovers: He and a
* IntroOnlyPointOfView: He has a point
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The prologue simply calls him, "The Watcher".
* TheWatcher: He seems to be watching over the Clans with an evil plan in mind. It's also what the prologue calls him.
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He is last seen carrying off a kit so that he
!!Hopepaw
->"The Winds of Death can
!!The Deliverer
->"I told her everything that you told me.
A
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* DarkActionGirl: Stealing kits and performing daring escapes is all in a day's work for her.
* TheDragon: To The Watcher.
* HiddenVillain: She's confirmed to have appeared somewhere in the first six chapters, but her identity is unknown. However, she is known to be a Clan cat.
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: She throws a kit into a river, causing it to drown.
!!Arise
->"Do what you wish. It's not as if it concerns me. I'm just glad your hatred is still so strong. You'd be useless to me otherwise."
A mysterious tom who wields great power. He plays some sort of role in The Watcher's plan. He has also been manipulating Darkclaw.
* TheDragon: To The Watcher.
* HiddenVillain: She's confirmed to have appeared somewhere in the first six chapters, but her identity is unknown. However, she is known to be a Clan cat.
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: She throws a kit into a river, causing it to drown.
!!Arise
->"Do what you wish. It's not as if it concerns me. I'm just glad your hatred is still so strong. You'd be useless to me otherwise."
A mysterious tom who wields great power. He plays some sort of role in The Watcher's plan. He has also been manipulating Darkclaw.
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* DarkActionGirl: Stealing kits CatchPhrase: "Oh my frog!"
* CheerfulChild: Alternates between this andperforming daring escapes is all in a day's work for her.
* TheDragon: ToCreepyChild. The Watcher.
cheerful part comes out when she's talking about frogs.
*HiddenVillain: She's confirmed to have appeared somewhere in CreepyChild: Alternates between this and CheerfulChild. The creepy part comes out when she's talking about the first six chapters, but Winds of Death.
* HoldYourHippogriffs: Does this to the terminology of the Clans themselves by saying "Oh my frog" instead of "Oh my [=StarClan=]".
* TheUnfavorite: In Chapter 8, she mentions that heridentity is unknown. However, mother Webnose seems to love her brother Blazepaw more than she is known to be a Clan cat.
loves Hopepaw.
*[[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: WaifProphet: She throws a kit into a river, causing it can tell who will die due to drown.
!!Arise
->"Do what you wish. It's not as if it concerns me. I'm just glad your hatred is stillthe Winds of Death. And she's a kit.
!!Owlflight
->"We need strategies sostrong. You'd be useless to me otherwise.that we don't fight like disorganized rogues."
A mysterious tom who wields great power. He plays some sort One of role in The Watcher's plan. He Darkclaw's Clanmates. She has also been manipulating Darkclaw.appeared a few times throughout the story.
* CheerfulChild: Alternates between this and
* TheDragon: To
*
* HoldYourHippogriffs: Does this to the terminology of the Clans themselves by saying "Oh my frog" instead of "Oh my [=StarClan=]".
* TheUnfavorite: In Chapter 8, she mentions that her
*
!!Arise
->"Do what you wish. It's not as if it concerns me. I'm just glad your hatred is still
!!Owlflight
->"We need strategies so
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* DragonWithAnAgenda: It's clear that he has his own plans other than what the Watcher gives him. He even goes behind the Watcher's back and messes with his spike thing.
* TheDreaded: Even the Watcher is scared of him.
* IntangibleMan: When Darkclaw tries to attack him in Chapter 8, he passes right through him.
* ManipulativeBastard: He has been seen manipulating Hazelfrost and Darkclaw to his own ends.
* ShroudedInMyth: Only a few cats know about him, and even then the truth about him is unclear.
* VillainExitStageLeft: He seems to vanish into nowhere after he's done talking with a cat. Apparently he's teleporting.
* TheDreaded: Even the Watcher is scared of him.
* IntangibleMan: When Darkclaw tries to attack him in Chapter 8, he passes right through him.
* ManipulativeBastard: He has been seen manipulating Hazelfrost and Darkclaw to his own ends.
* ShroudedInMyth: Only a few cats know about him, and even then the truth about him is unclear.
* VillainExitStageLeft: He seems to vanish into nowhere after he's done talking with a cat. Apparently he's teleporting.
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* DragonWithAnAgenda: TheStrategist: Redclaw has her work over some strategies for fighting Bonetail.
!!Fernheart
->"Bonetail thinks of you like a son. Look after yourself, okay?"
Bonetail's mate. Died four moons before the story began, on the night of a Gathering. Her death drove Bonetail over the edge, and caused him to hate medicine cats.
----
* CynicismCatalyst: Her death was what caused Bonetail to snap and turn against the Clans.
* TheLostLenore: Bonetail mourns the death of his mate greatly. It'sclear that he has the basis of his own plans other than what the Watcher gives him. He even goes behind the Watcher's back and messes with his spike thing.
* TheDreaded: Even the Watcher is scared of him.
* IntangibleMan: When Darkclaw tries to attack him in Chapter 8, he passes right through him.
* ManipulativeBastard: He has been seen manipulating Hazelfrost and Darkclaw to his own ends.
* ShroudedInMyth: Only a few cats know about him, and even then the truth about him is unclear.
* VillainExitStageLeft: He seems to vanish into nowhere after he's done talking with a cat. Apparently he's teleporting.entire rebellion.
!!Fernheart
->"Bonetail thinks of you like a son. Look after yourself, okay?"
Bonetail's mate. Died four moons before the story began, on the night of a Gathering. Her death drove Bonetail over the edge, and caused him to hate medicine cats.
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* CynicismCatalyst: Her death was what caused Bonetail to snap and turn against the Clans.
* TheLostLenore: Bonetail mourns the death of his mate greatly. It's
* TheDreaded: Even the Watcher is scared of him.
* IntangibleMan: When Darkclaw tries to attack him in Chapter 8, he passes right through him.
* ManipulativeBastard: He has been seen manipulating Hazelfrost and Darkclaw to his own ends.
* ShroudedInMyth: Only a few cats know about him, and even then the truth about him is unclear.
* VillainExitStageLeft: He seems to vanish into nowhere after he's done talking with a cat. Apparently he's teleporting.
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[[folder:The Rogues]]
!!Bonetail
->"How strange. Don't you Clan cats pride yourselves on your rules and regulations? Yet when I come for a visit, I see you squabbling like a bunch of restless kits."
A former [=ShadowClan=] warrior, who left to form a rebellion against the Clans. He commands an army of rogues, which he promises will be used to wipe out the Clans if he doesn't get what he wants (that being the Medicine Cats). There's more to him than he lets on, but only Snowcloud has tried to figure out his motives.
!!Bonetail
->"How strange. Don't you Clan cats pride yourselves on your rules and regulations? Yet when I come for a visit, I see you squabbling like a bunch of restless kits."
A former [=ShadowClan=] warrior, who left to form a rebellion against the Clans. He commands an army of rogues, which he promises will be used to wipe out the Clans if he doesn't get what he wants (that being the Medicine Cats). There's more to him than he lets on, but only Snowcloud has tried to figure out his motives.
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!!Bonetail
->"How strange. Don't
!!Sunstorm
->"The survival of all four Clans has always been [=StarClan=]'s will, and I will not let you condemn another Clan
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* AlasPoorVillain: There's an emphasis on how noble he once was when he dies.
* AttackOfTheTownFestival: He crashes the Gathering in Chapter 2 so that he can give the Clans a demonstration of his rogue army.
* BigBad: At least for the beginning of the story. He had a personal connection to Darkclaw and his rogue army was a major threat to the Clans, but he was taken care of in Chapter 8.
* DiscardAndDraw: He throws his battle against Moorwhisker's patrol so that he can take the Clans by surprise at the Gathering.
* DiscOneFinalBoss: Appears to be the BigBad, or part of a BigBadEnsemble with the Watcher. Then he dies in Chapter 8.
* EvilMentor: He was Darkclaw's mentor before he betrayed the Clans. Darkclaw hates him because of this, and wants to be the one to defeat/kill him.
* EvilPlan: He has one involving the medicine cats.
* FallenHero: He used to be very noble, but he fell to the dark side after his mate Fernheart died.
* FreudianExcuse: He wants the Medicine Cats because he's angry at them for failing to save his mate, Fernheart.
* LaResistance: He runs an evil one against the Clans.
* LargeHam: According to Tidepaw, it seems as if "the earth itself would move to accommodate for his grandeur".
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: The "Bone" half of his name does not signify a nice guy.
* NeckSnap: Dies in Chapter 8 when Arise snaps his neck.
* {{Revenge}}: He seeks revenge against the Clans, especially the Medicine Cats. Snowcloud believes this to be because he is angry at them for failing to save his mate.
* VillainExitStageLeft: After ranting at the Clan cats in Chapter 2, he leaves the Gathering Island without fighting. It's justified because he had a large army of rogues blocking off the Clan cats.
!!Slash[=/=]Reedfur
->"Do you believe that love can last beyond one lifetime?"
Bonetail's new second-in-command, replacing Frost after he fled from the Clans. He used to be a [=RiverClan=] warrior named Reedfur, but he left the Clans so that he could be with his true love, Whitefeather of [=WindClan=]. Formerly the mate of Willowfern, making him the father of Copperpaw and Streampaw, and the adoptive father of Rainpaw.
* AttackOfTheTownFestival: He crashes the Gathering in Chapter 2 so that he can give the Clans a demonstration of his rogue army.
* BigBad: At least for the beginning of the story. He had a personal connection to Darkclaw and his rogue army was a major threat to the Clans, but he was taken care of in Chapter 8.
* DiscardAndDraw: He throws his battle against Moorwhisker's patrol so that he can take the Clans by surprise at the Gathering.
* DiscOneFinalBoss: Appears to be the BigBad, or part of a BigBadEnsemble with the Watcher. Then he dies in Chapter 8.
* EvilMentor: He was Darkclaw's mentor before he betrayed the Clans. Darkclaw hates him because of this, and wants to be the one to defeat/kill him.
* EvilPlan: He has one involving the medicine cats.
* FallenHero: He used to be very noble, but he fell to the dark side after his mate Fernheart died.
* FreudianExcuse: He wants the Medicine Cats because he's angry at them for failing to save his mate, Fernheart.
* LaResistance: He runs an evil one against the Clans.
* LargeHam: According to Tidepaw, it seems as if "the earth itself would move to accommodate for his grandeur".
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: The "Bone" half of his name does not signify a nice guy.
* NeckSnap: Dies in Chapter 8 when Arise snaps his neck.
* {{Revenge}}: He seeks revenge against the Clans, especially the Medicine Cats. Snowcloud believes this to be because he is angry at them for failing to save his mate.
* VillainExitStageLeft: After ranting at the Clan cats in Chapter 2, he leaves the Gathering Island without fighting. It's justified because he had a large army of rogues blocking off the Clan cats.
!!Slash[=/=]Reedfur
->"Do you believe that love can last beyond one lifetime?"
Bonetail's new second-in-command, replacing Frost after he fled from the Clans. He used to be a [=RiverClan=] warrior named Reedfur, but he left the Clans so that he could be with his true love, Whitefeather of [=WindClan=]. Formerly the mate of Willowfern, making him the father of Copperpaw and Streampaw, and the adoptive father of Rainpaw.
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* AlasPoorVillain: There's an emphasis AwesomeMcCoolname: Tidepaw even goes on how noble a rant about it.
* CelibateHero: As a medicine cat, heonce was when he dies.
can never take a mate.
*AttackOfTheTownFestival: He crashes DeadpanSnarker: He's both polite and sarcastic at the Gathering in Chapter 2 so same time.
* HeroicSacrifice: Proposes that hecan give the Clans a demonstration of his rogue army.
* BigBad: At leastcould make one by giving himself up to Bonetail in exchange for the beginning freedom of the story. He had a personal connection to Darkclaw and his rogue army was a major threat to the Clans, but he was taken care of in Chapter 8.
* DiscardAndDraw: He throws his battle against Moorwhisker's patrol so that he can take the Clans by surprise at the Gathering.
* DiscOneFinalBoss: Appears to be the BigBad, or part of a BigBadEnsemble with the Watcher. Then he dies in Chapter 8.
* EvilMentor: He was Darkclaw's mentor before he betrayed the Clans. Darkclaw hates him because of this, and wants to be the one to defeat/kill him.
* EvilPlan: He has one involving theother medicine cats.
*FallenHero: He used to be very noble, but he fell to the dark side after his mate Fernheart died.
* FreudianExcuse: He wants theTheMedic: He's one of [=ThunderClan=]'s Medicine Cats because Cats.
* MysteriousPast: He claims that there's quite a story behind his name, but he never elaborates. In Chapter 5, he'sangry at them for failing to save his mate, Fernheart.
* LaResistance: He runs an evil one against the Clans.
* LargeHam: According to Tidepaw, it seems as if "the earth itself would move to accommodate for his grandeur".
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: The "Bone" half of his name does not signify a nice guy.
* NeckSnap: Dies in Chapter 8 when Arise snaps his neck.
* {{Revenge}}: He seeks revenge against the Clans, especially the Medicine Cats. Snowcloud believes thisrevealed to be a former kittypet. This probably has something to do with it.
* NiceGuy: He brings herbs to [=WindClan=] simply because heis angry at them for failing to save his mate.
thinks they might need them.
*VillainExitStageLeft: After ranting at the [[RedHeadedHero Red Furred Hero]]: He has ginger fur, and he's very heroic.
!!Lightningblaze
->"Must you always be so theatrical?"
A grumpy [=ThunderClan=] warrior. Many Clan catsin Chapter 2, he leaves the Gathering Island without fighting. It's justified because he had a large army of rogues blocking off the Clan cats.
!!Slash[=/=]Reedfur
->"Do youbelieve that love can last beyond one lifetime?"
Bonetail's new second-in-command, replacing Frost after he fled from the Clans. He used to be a [=RiverClan=] warrior named Reedfur, but he left the Clansher murdered [=ThunderClan=]'s former deputy Whisperwing so that he his niece Sandstone could be with his true love, Whitefeather of [=WindClan=]. Formerly the mate of Willowfern, making him the father of Copperpaw and Streampaw, and the adoptive father of Rainpaw.deputy.
* CelibateHero: As a medicine cat, he
*
* HeroicSacrifice: Proposes that he
* BigBad: At least
* DiscardAndDraw: He throws his battle against Moorwhisker's patrol so that he can take the Clans by surprise at the Gathering.
* DiscOneFinalBoss: Appears to be the BigBad, or part of a BigBadEnsemble with the Watcher. Then he dies in Chapter 8.
* EvilMentor: He was Darkclaw's mentor before he betrayed the Clans. Darkclaw hates him because of this, and wants to be the one to defeat/kill him.
* EvilPlan: He has one involving the
*
* FreudianExcuse: He wants the
* MysteriousPast: He claims that there's quite a story behind his name, but he never elaborates. In Chapter 5, he's
* LaResistance: He runs an evil one against the Clans.
* LargeHam: According to Tidepaw, it seems as if "the earth itself would move to accommodate for his grandeur".
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: The "Bone" half of his name does not signify a nice guy.
* NeckSnap: Dies in Chapter 8 when Arise snaps his neck.
* {{Revenge}}: He seeks revenge against the Clans, especially the Medicine Cats. Snowcloud believes this
* NiceGuy: He brings herbs to [=WindClan=] simply because he
*
!!Lightningblaze
->"Must you always be so theatrical?"
A grumpy [=ThunderClan=] warrior. Many Clan cats
!!Slash[=/=]Reedfur
->"Do you
Bonetail's new second-in-command, replacing Frost after he fled from the Clans. He used to be a [=RiverClan=] warrior named Reedfur, but he left the Clans
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* BattleCouple: With his mate, Whitefeather.
* DefectorFromDecadence: He left [=RiverClan=] after they shunned him for loving a cat from another Clan.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, replacing Frost.
* DragonAscendant: He takes over Bonetail's rogues after Bonetail dies.
* EarNotch: When Leafkit first sees him, she notes that he has a notch in his ear.
* FreudianExcuse: He used to be a member of [=RiverClan=], but they shunned him when he fell in love with the [=WindClan=] she-cat Whitefeather. Together, they joined Bonetail's rogues, where they weren't looked down on for being together.
* IcyBlueEyes: Leafkit notes that he has "icy blue eyes" which seem to look right into her soul.
* MeaningfulRename: He changed his name from Reedfur to Slash when he joined Bonetail's rogues. His mate Whitefeather still calls him Reedfur, however.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Leafkit even jokes about it by pointing out that Slash is a fairly intimidating name.
* NumberTwo: He's Bonetail's second in command.
* StarCrossedLovers: With Whitefeather. Or so the Clans thought.
* WakeUpCallBoss: His fight with Leafkit taught her that she had to train harder if she wanted to fight rogues. [[invoked]]
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He was perfectly willing to beat up Leafkit if it meant weakening her enough to capture.
* YourCheatingHeart: He was Willowfern's mate, but he left her because his true love was Whitefeather of [=WindClan=].
!!Whitefeather
->"We're leaving. We didn't come here to pick a fight. That may have been Bonetail's intention, but we're only in this place to restock our supply of herbs."
Slash's mate, a former [=WindClan=] cat. She left [=WindClan=] to join Bonetail's rogues, where she wasn't shunned for loving a cat from another Clan.
* DefectorFromDecadence: He left [=RiverClan=] after they shunned him for loving a cat from another Clan.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, replacing Frost.
* DragonAscendant: He takes over Bonetail's rogues after Bonetail dies.
* EarNotch: When Leafkit first sees him, she notes that he has a notch in his ear.
* FreudianExcuse: He used to be a member of [=RiverClan=], but they shunned him when he fell in love with the [=WindClan=] she-cat Whitefeather. Together, they joined Bonetail's rogues, where they weren't looked down on for being together.
* IcyBlueEyes: Leafkit notes that he has "icy blue eyes" which seem to look right into her soul.
* MeaningfulRename: He changed his name from Reedfur to Slash when he joined Bonetail's rogues. His mate Whitefeather still calls him Reedfur, however.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Leafkit even jokes about it by pointing out that Slash is a fairly intimidating name.
* NumberTwo: He's Bonetail's second in command.
* StarCrossedLovers: With Whitefeather. Or so the Clans thought.
* WakeUpCallBoss: His fight with Leafkit taught her that she had to train harder if she wanted to fight rogues. [[invoked]]
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He was perfectly willing to beat up Leafkit if it meant weakening her enough to capture.
* YourCheatingHeart: He was Willowfern's mate, but he left her because his true love was Whitefeather of [=WindClan=].
!!Whitefeather
->"We're leaving. We didn't come here to pick a fight. That may have been Bonetail's intention, but we're only in this place to restock our supply of herbs."
Slash's mate, a former [=WindClan=] cat. She left [=WindClan=] to join Bonetail's rogues, where she wasn't shunned for loving a cat from another Clan.
to:
* BattleCouple: With his mate, Whitefeather.
* DefectorFromDecadence:JerkWithAHeartOfGold: He left [=RiverClan=] after they shunned him for loving a cat from another Clan.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, replacing Frost.
* DragonAscendant: He takes over Bonetail's rogues after Bonetail dies.
* EarNotch: Whenmay be prickly, but he does agree to share herbs with [=WindClan=], and Leafkit first sees him, she notes notices that he has a notch in his ear.
* FreudianExcuse: He used to be a member of [=RiverClan=], but they shunned him when he fell in love with the [=WindClan=] she-cat Whitefeather. Together, they joined Bonetail's rogues, where they weren't looked down on for being together.
* IcyBlueEyes: Leafkit notes that he has "icy blue eyes" which seem to look right into her soul.
* MeaningfulRename: He changed his name from Reedfur to Slash when he joined Bonetail's rogues. His mate Whitefeather still calls him Reedfur, however.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Leafkit even jokes about it by pointing out that Slashis a fairly intimidating name.
surprisingly soft around Snowcloud.
*NumberTwo: OnlySaneMan: He's Bonetail's second in command.
* StarCrossedLovers: With Whitefeather. Or sobothered by the Clans thought.
* WakeUpCallBoss: His fight with Leafkit taught her that she had to train harder if she wanted to fight rogues. [[invoked]]
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He was perfectly willing to beat up Leafkit if it meant weakening her enough to capture.
* YourCheatingHeart: He was Willowfern's mate, but he left her because his true love was Whitefeatherantics of [=WindClan=].
!!Whitefeather
->"We're leaving. We didn't come here to pick a fight. That may have been Bonetail's intention, but we're only in this place to restock our supplythe other cats.
!!Hazelfrost
->"Your Clan ofherbs.traitors and murderers can collapse on itself. And then, you'll die just like everyone else."
Slash's mate, A violently insane she-cat who was formerly a former [=WindClan=] cat. She left [=WindClan=] member of [=ThunderClan=]. After attempting to join Bonetail's rogues, where kill Sandstone, [=ThunderClan=]'s deputy, she wasn't shunned for loving a cat from another Clan.fled to the mountains. She's working with Arise, but WordOfGod states that she is not The Deliverer.
* DefectorFromDecadence:
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, replacing Frost.
* DragonAscendant: He takes over Bonetail's rogues after Bonetail dies.
* EarNotch: When
* FreudianExcuse: He used to be a member of [=RiverClan=], but they shunned him when he fell in love with the [=WindClan=] she-cat Whitefeather. Together, they joined Bonetail's rogues, where they weren't looked down on for being together.
* IcyBlueEyes: Leafkit notes that he has "icy blue eyes" which seem to look right into her soul.
* MeaningfulRename: He changed his name from Reedfur to Slash when he joined Bonetail's rogues. His mate Whitefeather still calls him Reedfur, however.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Leafkit even jokes about it by pointing out that Slash
*
* StarCrossedLovers: With Whitefeather. Or so
* WakeUpCallBoss: His fight with Leafkit taught her that she had to train harder if she wanted to fight rogues. [[invoked]]
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He was perfectly willing to beat up Leafkit if it meant weakening her enough to capture.
* YourCheatingHeart: He was Willowfern's mate, but he left her because his true love was Whitefeather
!!Whitefeather
->"We're leaving. We didn't come here to pick a fight. That may have been Bonetail's intention, but we're only in this place to restock our supply
!!Hazelfrost
->"Your Clan of
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* AffablyEvil: She's quite kind to Leafkit, even offering to get her some herbs when they take her to Bonetail.
* BattleCouple: With her mate, Slash. Their fighting style relies on working together.
* BigDamnHeroes: A villainous variant. When Leafkit manages to weaken Slash, she shows up to protect him.
* DarkChick: She's not as aggressive as the other rogues, and focuses more on collecting herbs.
* TheMedic: Although she wasn't a medicine cat during her time with [=WindClan=], she has enough knowledge of herbs to aid Bonetail and his rogues.
!!Frost
Bonetail's former second-in-command. After he abandoned Bonetail in a battle, he left the Clans. Bonetail has replaced him with Slash.
* BattleCouple: With her mate, Slash. Their fighting style relies on working together.
* BigDamnHeroes: A villainous variant. When Leafkit manages to weaken Slash, she shows up to protect him.
* DarkChick: She's not as aggressive as the other rogues, and focuses more on collecting herbs.
* TheMedic: Although she wasn't a medicine cat during her time with [=WindClan=], she has enough knowledge of herbs to aid Bonetail and his rogues.
!!Frost
Bonetail's former second-in-command. After he abandoned Bonetail in a battle, he left the Clans. Bonetail has replaced him with Slash.
to:
* AffablyEvil: ADayInTheLimelight: Interlude 1 is about her failed attempt to kill the [=ThunderClan=] deputy Sandstone.
* AxCrazy: She'squite kind to Leafkit, even offering to get her some herbs crazy, and violent, especially when they take she attacks Sandstone.
* BrokenPedestal: She decided that she hated Jaytalon after he refused to let herto Bonetail.
kill Sandstone.
*BattleCouple: With her mate, Slash. Their fighting style relies on ChekhovsGunman: She seems like a random minor character in Chapter 6, but then Interlude 1 reveals that she's working together.
for Arise.
*BigDamnHeroes: A villainous variant. When Leafkit manages to weaken Slash, TheCuckoolanderWasRight: At first, she shows up seems insane when she says that Sandstone killed her mother. Then it turns out to protect him.
be true.
*DarkChick: She's not as aggressive as DarkSecret: She killed her brother.
* HearingVoices: She hears many voices talking to her. Some, like Whisperwing, are imaginary, but she also hears the voice of Arise.
* {{Revenge}}: She spends most of Interlude 1 ranting about taking revenge on Sandstone.
* TheRunaway: She flees [=ThunderClan=] at the end of Interlude 1.
* [[YouKilledMyFather You Killed My Mother]]: The reason she wants to kill Sandstone is because she has been led to believe that Sandstone murdered her mother, Goldenfoot. Then it turns out that it's true.
!!Thornstar
[=ThunderClan=]'s leader. He's significantly less important than the otherrogues, and focuses more on collecting herbs.
* TheMedic: Although she wasn't a medicine cat during her time with [=WindClan=], she has enough knowledge of herbs to aid Bonetail and his rogues.
!!Frost
Bonetail's former second-in-command. After he abandoned Bonetail in a battle, he left the Clans. Bonetail has replaced him with Slash.Clan leaders.
* AxCrazy: She's
* BrokenPedestal: She decided that she hated Jaytalon after he refused to let her
*
*
*
* HearingVoices: She hears many voices talking to her. Some, like Whisperwing, are imaginary, but she also hears the voice of Arise.
* {{Revenge}}: She spends most of Interlude 1 ranting about taking revenge on Sandstone.
* TheRunaway: She flees [=ThunderClan=] at the end of Interlude 1.
* [[YouKilledMyFather You Killed My Mother]]: The reason she wants to kill Sandstone is because she has been led to believe that Sandstone murdered her mother, Goldenfoot. Then it turns out that it's true.
!!Thornstar
[=ThunderClan=]'s leader. He's significantly less important than the other
* TheMedic: Although she wasn't a medicine cat during her time with [=WindClan=], she has enough knowledge of herbs to aid Bonetail and his rogues.
!!Frost
Bonetail's former second-in-command. After he abandoned Bonetail in a battle, he left the Clans. Bonetail has replaced him with Slash.
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* DirtyCoward: He abandons the others during the fight with Moorwhisker's patrol.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, before the story began.
* TheGhost: He has never actually appeared.
!!Bear
->"You claim to have strong morals, and yet you do something like this? I can't believe how hypocritical you are, Clan cat."
One of Bonetail's rogues. Fights Tidepaw during the Gathering Battle, battles Sootstain's patrol during the fight at the original [=ShadowClan=] camp, and delivers Sootstain's message to Bonetail during the final battle with the rogues.
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* ButtMonkey: After being stupid enough to walk into Foxwhisker's trap, he is the butt of Sootstain and Foxwhisker's jokes about his cliched villain traits.
* HannibalLecture: After Sootstain captures him, he start monologuing about how hypocritical the Clan cats are, only for Sootstain to cut him off by pointing out that he is the one whose claws are at Bear's throat.
* NotSoDifferent: Believes that the Clan cats are hypocritical and no better than him.
* ThisCannotBe: Claims that Foxwhisker's trap is inconceivable. Foxwhisker replies by [[YouKeepUsingThatWord telling him that he should redefine "inconceivable"]], because he quite clearly walked into a trap.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, before the story began.
* TheGhost: He has never actually appeared.
!!Bear
->"You claim to have strong morals, and yet you do something like this? I can't believe how hypocritical you are, Clan cat."
One of Bonetail's rogues. Fights Tidepaw during the Gathering Battle, battles Sootstain's patrol during the fight at the original [=ShadowClan=] camp, and delivers Sootstain's message to Bonetail during the final battle with the rogues.
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* ButtMonkey: After being stupid enough to walk into Foxwhisker's trap, he is the butt of Sootstain and Foxwhisker's jokes about his cliched villain traits.
* HannibalLecture: After Sootstain captures him, he start monologuing about how hypocritical the Clan cats are, only for Sootstain to cut him off by pointing out that he is the one whose claws are at Bear's throat.
* NotSoDifferent: Believes that the Clan cats are hypocritical and no better than him.
* ThisCannotBe: Claims that Foxwhisker's trap is inconceivable. Foxwhisker replies by [[YouKeepUsingThatWord telling him that he should redefine "inconceivable"]], because he quite clearly walked into a trap.
to:
* DirtyCoward: He abandons the others during the fight with Moorwhisker's patrol.
HeroicBastard: He's a [=halfClan=].
*TheDragon: To Bonetail, before the story began.
TheLeader: He's [=ThunderClan=]'s leader.
*TheGhost: He MinorMajorCharacter: He's a Clan leader, but he only has never actually appeared.
!!Bear
->"You claim to have strong morals,a single line so far. In Chapter 5, he gets a second line, and yet you do that's all.
* MixedAncestry: Half [=ThunderClan=] and half...somethinglike this? I can't believe how hypocritical you are, Clan cat."
One of Bonetail's rogues. Fights Tidepaw during the Gathering Battle, battles Sootstain's patrol during the fight at the original [=ShadowClan=] camp, and delivers Sootstain's message to Bonetail during the final battle with the rogues.
----
* ButtMonkey: After being stupid enough to walk into Foxwhisker's trap, he is the butt of Sootstain and Foxwhisker's jokes about his cliched villain traits.
* HannibalLecture: After Sootstain captures him, he start monologuing about how hypocritical the Clan cats are, only for Sootstain to cut him off by pointing out that he is the one whose claws are at Bear's throat.
* NotSoDifferent: Believes that the Clan cats are hypocritical and no better than him.
* ThisCannotBe: Claims that Foxwhisker's trap is inconceivable. Foxwhisker replies by [[YouKeepUsingThatWord telling him that he should redefine "inconceivable"]], because he quite clearly walked into a trap.else.
*
*
!!Bear
->"You claim to have strong morals,
* MixedAncestry: Half [=ThunderClan=] and half...something
One of Bonetail's rogues. Fights Tidepaw during the Gathering Battle, battles Sootstain's patrol during the fight at the original [=ShadowClan=] camp, and delivers Sootstain's message to Bonetail during the final battle with the rogues.
----
* ButtMonkey: After being stupid enough to walk into Foxwhisker's trap, he is the butt of Sootstain and Foxwhisker's jokes about his cliched villain traits.
* HannibalLecture: After Sootstain captures him, he start monologuing about how hypocritical the Clan cats are, only for Sootstain to cut him off by pointing out that he is the one whose claws are at Bear's throat.
* NotSoDifferent: Believes that the Clan cats are hypocritical and no better than him.
* ThisCannotBe: Claims that Foxwhisker's trap is inconceivable. Foxwhisker replies by [[YouKeepUsingThatWord telling him that he should redefine "inconceivable"]], because he quite clearly walked into a trap.
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!!Glace/Ace, The Rogue Hunter
->"Not dying is my specialty!"
A she-cat who came to the Clans to warn them about a coming darkness. Seeing Bonetail's rogues convinced her to aid the Clans in the battle against Bonetail. Unfortunately, she's not actually very good at fighting.
!!Glace/Ace, The Rogue Hunter
->"Not dying is my specialty!"
A she-cat who came to the Clans to warn them about a coming darkness. Seeing Bonetail's rogues convinced her to aid the Clans in the battle against Bonetail. Unfortunately, she's not actually very good at fighting.
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!!Glace/Ace, The Rogue Hunter
->"Not dying is my specialty!"
!!The Watcher
->"My goal is, as it always was, to stain this land crimson with the blood of the Clan cats."
A
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: "Ace, the Rogue Hunter" At one point, Darkclaw points out that her name is so overdramatic that no one could actually take it seriously.
* BigDamnHeroes: Subverted in her first appearance. When Darkclaw is fighting Slash and Whitefeather, she comes out of nowhere to help him fight the rogues, only for Slash to effortlessly knock her aside.
* CheerfulChild: Darkclaw finds her cheerfulness very annoying, but thinks that she's a lot like Tidepaw. Glace is presumably not as angsty as Tidepaw is on the inside.
* DynamicEntry: She screams to announce her presence when she interrupts Darkclaw's fight with Slash and Whitefeather.
* {{Kiai}}: She yells "Kiai!" when she attacks Slash.
* LargeHam: She constantly acts overblown, from screaming as she attacks Slash to striking a dramatic pose when introducing herself to Darkclaw.
!!Jester
->'''Tidepaw''': "Tell me who you are."
->'''Jester''': "Just a cat who doesn't know the meaning of eternity."
A strange kit who Tidepaw meets on the beach. He claims to work for "the wishgranter". He later appears to Leafkit. Who or what he is remains unknown.
* BigDamnHeroes: Subverted in her first appearance. When Darkclaw is fighting Slash and Whitefeather, she comes out of nowhere to help him fight the rogues, only for Slash to effortlessly knock her aside.
* CheerfulChild: Darkclaw finds her cheerfulness very annoying, but thinks that she's a lot like Tidepaw. Glace is presumably not as angsty as Tidepaw is on the inside.
* DynamicEntry: She screams to announce her presence when she interrupts Darkclaw's fight with Slash and Whitefeather.
* {{Kiai}}: She yells "Kiai!" when she attacks Slash.
* LargeHam: She constantly acts overblown, from screaming as she attacks Slash to striking a dramatic pose when introducing herself to Darkclaw.
!!Jester
->'''Tidepaw''': "Tell me who you are."
->'''Jester''': "Just a cat who doesn't know the meaning of eternity."
A strange kit who Tidepaw meets on the beach. He claims to work for "the wishgranter". He later appears to Leafkit. Who or what he is remains unknown.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: "Ace, BigBad: He's the Rogue Hunter" At menacing figure manipulating the characters in his attempt to destroy the Clans.
* BiggerBad: He is much more powerful and malicious than Bonetail, but he hasn't received any focus outside out the prologue.
* TheChessmaster: He's apparently pulling the strings of the Clans. His plans also seem malleable enough to account for problems. When the Deliverer kills onepoint, Darkclaw points out of the kits she was supposed to bring to him, he explains that her name instead of screwing him over, she may have improved the end result.
* EvilPlan: He has one, and it somehow involves abducting and killing newborn kittens.
* HiddenAgendaVillain: All we know isso overdramatic that no one could actually take it seriously.
* BigDamnHeroes: Subverted in her first appearance. When Darkclaw is fighting Slashhis plan involves killing some cats, and Whitefeather, she comes out of nowhere to help him fight the rogues, only for Slash to effortlessly knock her aside.
Clan cats are in danger because of it.
*CheerfulChild: Darkclaw finds her cheerfulness very annoying, but thinks HiddenVillain: We know that she's he is a lot Clan cat, but we don't know who he is, or even which Clan he's in.
* IntroOnlyPointOfView: He has a point of view in the prologue, but he's not a main character likeTidepaw. Glace is presumably not as angsty as Tidepaw is on Leafkit, Tidepaw, or Darkclaw.
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The prologue simply calls him, "The Watcher".
* TheWatcher: He seems to be watching over theinside.
* DynamicEntry: She screams to announce her presence when she interrupts Darkclaw's fightClans with Slash and Whitefeather.
an evil plan in mind. It's also what the prologue calls him.
*{{Kiai}}: She yells "Kiai!" when she attacks Slash.
* LargeHam: She constantly acts overblown, from screaming as she attacks Slash to striking[[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He is last seen carrying off a dramatic pose when introducing herself to Darkclaw.
!!Jester
->'''Tidepaw''': "Tell me whokit so that he can kill it. It somehow fits into his master plan.
!!The Deliverer
->"I told her everything that youare."
->'''Jester''': "Just a cat who doesn't know the meaning of eternity.told me."
Astrange kit who Tidepaw meets on the beach. He claims to work she-cat working for "the wishgranter". He later appears to Leafkit. Who or what he is remains unknown.The Watcher. As part of his plan, she kidnaps two newborn kits.
* BiggerBad: He is much more powerful and malicious than Bonetail, but he hasn't received any focus outside out the prologue.
* TheChessmaster: He's apparently pulling the strings of the Clans. His plans also seem malleable enough to account for problems. When the Deliverer kills one
* EvilPlan: He has one, and it somehow involves abducting and killing newborn kittens.
* HiddenAgendaVillain: All we know is
* BigDamnHeroes: Subverted in her first appearance. When Darkclaw is fighting Slash
*
* IntroOnlyPointOfView: He has a point of view in the prologue, but he's not a main character like
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The prologue simply calls him, "The Watcher".
* TheWatcher: He seems to be watching over the
* DynamicEntry: She screams to announce her presence when she interrupts Darkclaw's fight
*
* LargeHam: She constantly acts overblown, from screaming as she attacks Slash to striking
!!Jester
->'''Tidepaw''': "Tell me who
!!The Deliverer
->"I told her everything that you
->'''Jester''': "Just a cat who doesn't know the meaning of eternity.
A
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* BerserkButton: He hates oathbreakers, and tells Leafkit that they are the worst kind of cat.
* CheerfulChild: He usually seems pretty happy, although hints of sadness do occasionally show.
!!Flint
The leader of the Sky Avengers, a group of cats that tried to destroy the Clans three years before the events of ''Golden Dawn: Lost Sunrise''.
* CheerfulChild: He usually seems pretty happy, although hints of sadness do occasionally show.
!!Flint
The leader of the Sky Avengers, a group of cats that tried to destroy the Clans three years before the events of ''Golden Dawn: Lost Sunrise''.
to:
* BerserkButton: He hates oathbreakers, DarkActionGirl: Stealing kits and tells Leafkit that they are performing daring escapes is all in a day's work for her.
* TheDragon: To The Watcher.
* HiddenVillain: She's confirmed to have appeared somewhere in theworst kind of first six chapters, but her identity is unknown. However, she is known to be a Clan cat.
*CheerfulChild: [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: She throws a kit into a river, causing it to drown.
!!Arise
->"Do what you wish. It's not as if it concerns me. I'm just glad your hatred is still so strong. You'd be useless to me otherwise."
A mysterious tom who wields great power. Heusually seems pretty happy, although hints plays some sort of sadness do occasionally show.
!!Flint
role in The leader of the Sky Avengers, a group of cats that tried to destroy the Clans three years before the events of ''Golden Dawn: Lost Sunrise''.Watcher's plan. He has also been manipulating Darkclaw.
* TheDragon: To The Watcher.
* HiddenVillain: She's confirmed to have appeared somewhere in the
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!!Arise
->"Do what you wish. It's not as if it concerns me. I'm just glad your hatred is still so strong. You'd be useless to me otherwise."
A mysterious tom who wields great power. He
!!Flint
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* TheLeader: He led the Sky Avengers.
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* TheLeader: He led the Sky Avengers.
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* AllYourBaseAreBelongToUs: His goal was to take over DragonWithAnAgenda: It's clear that he has his own plans other than what the lake completely. While Finflutter managed Watcher gives him. He even goes behind the Watcher's back and messes with his spike thing.
* TheDreaded: Even the Watcher is scared of him.
* IntangibleMan: When Darkclaw tries tocome up attack him in Chapter 8, he passes right through him.
* ManipulativeBastard: He has been seen manipulating Hazelfrost and Darkclaw to his own ends.
* ShroudedInMyth: Only a few cats know about him, and even then the truth about him is unclear.
* VillainExitStageLeft: He seems to vanish into nowhere after he's done talking with aplan that defeated the Sky Avengers before Flint could do so, he did manage to take over the Gathering Island and a good amount of [=WindClan=] territory.
* TheLeader: He led the Sky Avengers.
* PredecessorVillain: He was the leader of the Sky Avengers, a group that attacked the Clans several years prior to the main story and had a heavy impact on the lives of many characters, such as Galeflight, Amberfang, Otterstar, and Sunstorm.cat. Apparently he's teleporting.
* TheDreaded: Even the Watcher is scared of him.
* IntangibleMan: When Darkclaw tries to
* ManipulativeBastard: He has been seen manipulating Hazelfrost and Darkclaw to his own ends.
* ShroudedInMyth: Only a few cats know about him, and even then the truth about him is unclear.
* VillainExitStageLeft: He seems to vanish into nowhere after he's done talking with a
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!!Bonetail
->"How strange. Don't you Clan cats pride yourselves on your rules and regulations? Yet when I come for a visit, I see you squabbling like a bunch of restless kits."
A former [=ShadowClan=] warrior, who left to form a rebellion against the Clans. He commands an army of rogues, which he promises will be used to wipe out the Clans if he doesn't get what he wants (that being the Medicine Cats). There's more to him than he lets on, but only Snowcloud has tried to figure out his motives.
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* AlasPoorVillain: There's an emphasis on how noble he once was when he dies.
* AttackOfTheTownFestival: He crashes the Gathering in Chapter 2 so that he can give the Clans a demonstration of his rogue army.
* BigBad: At least for the beginning of the story. He had a personal connection to Darkclaw and his rogue army was a major threat to the Clans, but he was taken care of in Chapter 8.
* DiscardAndDraw: He throws his battle against Moorwhisker's patrol so that he can take the Clans by surprise at the Gathering.
* DiscOneFinalBoss: Appears to be the BigBad, or part of a BigBadEnsemble with the Watcher. Then he dies in Chapter 8.
* EvilMentor: He was Darkclaw's mentor before he betrayed the Clans. Darkclaw hates him because of this, and wants to be the one to defeat/kill him.
* EvilPlan: He has one involving the medicine cats.
* FallenHero: He used to be very noble, but he fell to the dark side after his mate Fernheart died.
* FreudianExcuse: He wants the Medicine Cats because he's angry at them for failing to save his mate, Fernheart.
* LaResistance: He runs an evil one against the Clans.
* LargeHam: According to Tidepaw, it seems as if "the earth itself would move to accommodate for his grandeur".
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: The "Bone" half of his name does not signify a nice guy.
* NeckSnap: Dies in Chapter 8 when Arise snaps his neck.
* {{Revenge}}: He seeks revenge against the Clans, especially the Medicine Cats. Snowcloud believes this to be because he is angry at them for failing to save his mate.
* VillainExitStageLeft: After ranting at the Clan cats in Chapter 2, he leaves the Gathering Island without fighting. It's justified because he had a large army of rogues blocking off the Clan cats.
!!Slash[=/=]Reedfur
->"Do you believe that love can last beyond one lifetime?"
Bonetail's new second-in-command, replacing Frost after he fled from the Clans. He used to be a [=RiverClan=] warrior named Reedfur, but he left the Clans so that he could be with his true love, Whitefeather of [=WindClan=]. Formerly the mate of Willowfern, making him the father of Copperpaw and Streampaw, and the adoptive father of Rainpaw.
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* BattleCouple: With his mate, Whitefeather.
* DefectorFromDecadence: He left [=RiverClan=] after they shunned him for loving a cat from another Clan.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, replacing Frost.
* DragonAscendant: He takes over Bonetail's rogues after Bonetail dies.
* EarNotch: When Leafkit first sees him, she notes that he has a notch in his ear.
* FreudianExcuse: He used to be a member of [=RiverClan=], but they shunned him when he fell in love with the [=WindClan=] she-cat Whitefeather. Together, they joined Bonetail's rogues, where they weren't looked down on for being together.
* IcyBlueEyes: Leafkit notes that he has "icy blue eyes" which seem to look right into her soul.
* MeaningfulRename: He changed his name from Reedfur to Slash when he joined Bonetail's rogues. His mate Whitefeather still calls him Reedfur, however.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Leafkit even jokes about it by pointing out that Slash is a fairly intimidating name.
* NumberTwo: He's Bonetail's second in command.
* StarCrossedLovers: With Whitefeather. Or so the Clans thought.
* WakeUpCallBoss: His fight with Leafkit taught her that she had to train harder if she wanted to fight rogues. [[invoked]]
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He was perfectly willing to beat up Leafkit if it meant weakening her enough to capture.
* YourCheatingHeart: He was Willowfern's mate, but he left her because his true love was Whitefeather of [=WindClan=].
!!Whitefeather
->"We're leaving. We didn't come here to pick a fight. That may have been Bonetail's intention, but we're only in this place to restock our supply of herbs."
Slash's mate, a former [=WindClan=] cat. She left [=WindClan=] to join Bonetail's rogues, where she wasn't shunned for loving a cat from another Clan.
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* AffablyEvil: She's quite kind to Leafkit, even offering to get her some herbs when they take her to Bonetail.
* BattleCouple: With her mate, Slash. Their fighting style relies on working together.
* BigDamnHeroes: A villainous variant. When Leafkit manages to weaken Slash, she shows up to protect him.
* DarkChick: She's not as aggressive as the other rogues, and focuses more on collecting herbs.
* TheMedic: Although she wasn't a medicine cat during her time with [=WindClan=], she has enough knowledge of herbs to aid Bonetail and his rogues.
!!Frost
Bonetail's former second-in-command. After he abandoned Bonetail in a battle, he left the Clans. Bonetail has replaced him with Slash.
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* DirtyCoward: He abandons the others during the fight with Moorwhisker's patrol.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, before the story began.
* TheGhost: He has never actually appeared.
!!Bear
->"You claim to have strong morals, and yet you do something like this? I can't believe how hypocritical you are, Clan cat."
One of Bonetail's rogues. Fights Tidepaw during the Gathering Battle, battles Sootstain's patrol during the fight at the original [=ShadowClan=] camp, and delivers Sootstain's message to Bonetail during the final battle with the rogues.
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* ButtMonkey: After being stupid enough to walk into Foxwhisker's trap, he is the butt of Sootstain and Foxwhisker's jokes about his cliched villain traits.
* HannibalLecture: After Sootstain captures him, he starts monologuing about how hypocritical the Clan cats are, only for Sootstain to cut him off by pointing out that he is the one whose claws are at Bear's throat.
* NotSoDifferent: Believes that the Clan cats are hypocritical and no better than him.
* ThisCannotBe: Claims that Foxwhisker's trap is inconceivable. Foxwhisker replies by [[YouKeepUsingThatWord telling him that he should redefine "inconceivable"]], because he quite clearly walked into a trap.
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!!Glace/Ace, The Rogue Hunter
->"Not dying is my specialty!"
A she-cat who came to the Clans to warn them about a coming darkness. Seeing Bonetail's rogues convinced her to aid the Clans in the battle against Bonetail. Unfortunately, she's not actually very good at fighting.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: "Ace, the Rogue Hunter" At one point, Darkclaw points out that her name is so overdramatic that no one could actually take it seriously.
* BigDamnHeroes: Subverted in her first appearance. When Darkclaw is fighting Slash and Whitefeather, she comes out of nowhere to help him fight the rogues, only for Slash to effortlessly knock her aside.
* CheerfulChild: Darkclaw finds her cheerfulness very annoying, but thinks that she's a lot like Tidepaw. Glace is presumably not as angsty as Tidepaw is on the inside.
* DynamicEntry: She screams to announce her presence when she interrupts Darkclaw's fight with Slash and Whitefeather.
* {{Kiai}}: She yells "Kiai!" when she attacks Slash.
* LargeHam: She constantly acts overblown, from screaming as she attacks Slash to striking a dramatic pose when introducing herself to Darkclaw.
!!Jester
->'''Tidepaw''': "Tell me who you are."
->'''Jester''': "Just a cat who doesn't know the meaning of eternity."
A strange kit who Tidepaw meets on the beach. He claims to work for "the wishgranter". He later appears to Leafkit. Who or what he is remains unknown.
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* BerserkButton: He hates oathbreakers, and tells Leafkit that they are the worst kind of cat.
* CheerfulChild: He usually seems pretty happy, although hints of sadness do occasionally show.
!!Flint
The leader of the Sky Avengers, a group of cats that tried to destroy the Clans three years before the events of ''Golden Dawn: Lost Sunrise''.
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* AllYourBaseAreBelongToUs: His goal was to take over the lake completely. While Finflutter managed to come up with a plan that defeated the Sky Avengers before Flint could do so, he did manage to take over the Gathering Island and a good amount of [=WindClan=] territory.
* TheLeader: He led the Sky Avengers.
* PredecessorVillain: He was the leader of the Sky Avengers, a group that attacked the Clans several years prior to the main story and had a heavy impact on the lives of many characters, such as Galeflight, Amberfang, Otterstar, and Sunstorm.
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* ShipTease: Just to troll the audience, he has gotten relationship hints with quite a few cats.
** Hopepaw: He wanted to be her mentor, and they realize how much they understand each other in Chapter 8 and start rubbing against each other.
** Snowcloud: She's the only cat he considers a friend, they always talk with each other at Gatherings, he apparently went to Foxwhisker and asked her to take him to see her, and he is obsessed with her in his flashback.
** Owlflight: In Chapter 8, she goes out and looks for him in the middle of the night and tells him that she wants to fight alongside him. Also, she says that he used to be cute.
** Tidepaw: They used to be friends, and despite how much he claims to hate her he still carries her to a medicine cat when she gets injured in a battle.
** Hopepaw: He wanted to be her mentor, and they realize how much they understand each other in Chapter 8 and start rubbing against each other.
** Snowcloud: She's the only cat he considers a friend, they always talk with each other at Gatherings, he apparently went to Foxwhisker and asked her to take him to see her, and he is obsessed with her in his flashback.
** Owlflight: In Chapter 8, she goes out and looks for him in the middle of the night and tells him that she wants to fight alongside him. Also, she says that he used to be cute.
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!!Frost
Bonetail's former second-in-command. After he abandoned Bonetail in a battle, he left the Clans. Bonetail has replaced him with Slash.
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* TheDragon: To Bonetail, before the story began.
* TheGhost: He has never actually appeared.
!!Slash[=/=]Reedfur
->"Give up now, come with me, and I won't have to hurt you any more."
Bonetail's new second-in-command, replacing Frost after he fled from the Clans.
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* TheDragon: To Bonetail, before the story began.
* TheGhost: He has never actually appeared.
!!Slash[=/=]Reedfur
->"Give up now, come with me, and I won't have to hurt you any more."
Bonetail's new second-in-command, replacing Frost after he fled from the Clans.
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!!Glace/Ace, The Rogue Hunter
->"Not dying is my specialty!"
A she-cat who came to the Clans to warn them about a coming darkness. Seeing Bonetail's rogues convinced her to aid the Clans in the battle against Bonetail. Unfortunately, she's not actually very good at fighting.
->"Not dying is my specialty!"
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* CheerfulChild: Darkclaw finds her cheerfulness very annoying, but thinks that she's a lot like Tidepaw. Glace is presumably not as angsty as Tidepaw is on the inside.
* DynamicEntry: She screams to announce her presence when she interrupts Darkclaw's fight with Slash and Whitefeather.
* {{Kiai}}: She yells "Kiai!" when she attacks Slash.
* LargeHam: She constantly acts overblown, from screaming as she attacks Slash to striking a dramatic pose when introducing herself to Darkclaw.
!!Jester
->'''Tidepaw''': "Tell me who you are."
->'''Jester''': "Just a cat who doesn't know the meaning of eternity."
A strange kit who Tidepaw meets on the beach. He claims to work for "the wishgranter". He later appears to Leafkit. Who or what he is remains unknown.
* BigDamnHeroes: Subverted in her first appearance. When Darkclaw is fighting Slash and Whitefeather, she comes out of nowhere to help him fight the rogues, only for Slash to effortlessly knock her aside.
* CheerfulChild: Darkclaw finds her cheerfulness very annoying, but thinks that she's a lot like Tidepaw. Glace is presumably not as angsty as Tidepaw is on the inside.
* DynamicEntry: She screams to announce her presence when she interrupts Darkclaw's fight with Slash and Whitefeather.
* {{Kiai}}: She yells "Kiai!" when she attacks Slash.
* LargeHam: She constantly acts overblown, from screaming as she attacks Slash to striking a dramatic pose when introducing herself to Darkclaw.
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->'''Tidepaw''': "Tell me who you are."
->'''Jester''': "Just a cat who doesn't know the meaning of eternity."
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: "Ace, DirtyCoward: He abandons the Rogue Hunter" At one point, Darkclaw points out that her name is so overdramatic that no one could actually take it seriously.
* BigDamnHeroes: Subverted in her first appearance. When Darkclaw is fighting Slash and Whitefeather, she comes out of nowhere to help him fightothers during the rogues, only for Slash to effortlessly knock her aside.
* CheerfulChild: Darkclaw finds her cheerfulness very annoying, but thinks that she's a lot like Tidepaw. Glace is presumably not as angsty as Tidepaw is on the inside.
* DynamicEntry: She screams to announce her presence when she interrupts Darkclaw'sfight with Slash Moorwhisker's patrol.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, before the story began.
* TheGhost: He has never actually appeared.
!!Bear
->"You claim to have strong morals, andWhitefeather.
* {{Kiai}}: She yells "Kiai!" when she attacks Slash.
* LargeHam: She constantly acts overblown, from screaming as she attacks Slash to striking a dramatic pose when introducing herself to Darkclaw.
!!Jester
->'''Tidepaw''': "Tell me whoyet you are."
->'''Jester''': "Just a cat who doesn't know the meaning of eternity.do something like this? I can't believe how hypocritical you are, Clan cat."
A strange kit who One of Bonetail's rogues. Fights Tidepaw meets on during the beach. He claims Gathering Battle, battles Sootstain's patrol during the fight at the original [=ShadowClan=] camp, and delivers Sootstain's message to work for "the wishgranter". He later appears to Leafkit. Who or what he is remains unknown.Bonetail during the final battle with the rogues.
* BigDamnHeroes: Subverted in her first appearance. When Darkclaw is fighting Slash and Whitefeather, she comes out of nowhere to help him fight
* CheerfulChild: Darkclaw finds her cheerfulness very annoying, but thinks that she's a lot like Tidepaw. Glace is presumably not as angsty as Tidepaw is on the inside.
* DynamicEntry: She screams to announce her presence when she interrupts Darkclaw's
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, before the story began.
* TheGhost: He has never actually appeared.
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->"You claim to have strong morals, and
* {{Kiai}}: She yells "Kiai!" when she attacks Slash.
* LargeHam: She constantly acts overblown, from screaming as she attacks Slash to striking a dramatic pose when introducing herself to Darkclaw.
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* BerserkButton: He hates oathbreakers, ButtMonkey: After being stupid enough to walk into Foxwhisker's trap, he is the butt of Sootstain and tells Leafkit Foxwhisker's jokes about his cliched villain traits.
* HannibalLecture: After Sootstain captures him, he starts trying to monologue about how hypocritical the Clan cats are, only for Sootstain to cut him off by pointing out thatthey he is the one whose claws are at Bear's throat.
* NotSoDifferent: Believes that theworst kind of cat.
Clan cats are hypocritical and no better than him.
*CheerfulChild: He usually seems pretty happy, although hints of sadness do occasionally show.ThisCannotBe: Claims that Foxwhisker's trap is inconceivable. Foxwhisker replies by [[YouKeepUsingThatWord telling him that he should redefine "inconceivable"]], because he quite clearly walked into a trap.
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!!Glace/Ace, The Rogue Hunter
->"Not dying is my specialty!"
A she-cat who came to the Clans to warn them about a coming darkness. Seeing Bonetail's rogues convinced her to aid the Clans in the battle against Bonetail. Unfortunately, she's not actually very good at fighting.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: "Ace, the Rogue Hunter" At one point, Darkclaw points out that her name is so overdramatic that no one could actually take it seriously.
* BigDamnHeroes: Subverted in her first appearance. When Darkclaw is fighting Slash and Whitefeather, she comes out of nowhere to help him fight the rogues, only for Slash to effortlessly knock her aside.
* CheerfulChild: Darkclaw finds her cheerfulness very annoying, but thinks that she's a lot like Tidepaw. Glace is presumably not as angsty as Tidepaw is on the inside.
* DynamicEntry: She screams to announce her presence when she interrupts Darkclaw's fight with Slash and Whitefeather.
* {{Kiai}}: She yells "Kiai!" when she attacks Slash.
* LargeHam: She constantly acts overblown, from screaming as she attacks Slash to striking a dramatic pose when introducing herself to Darkclaw.
!!Jester
->'''Tidepaw''': "Tell me who you are."
->'''Jester''': "Just a cat who doesn't know the meaning of eternity."
A strange kit who Tidepaw meets on the beach. He claims to work for "the wishgranter". He later appears to Leafkit. Who or what he is remains unknown.
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* BerserkButton: He hates oathbreakers, and tells Leafkit that they are the worst kind of cat.
* CheerfulChild: He usually seems pretty happy, although hints of sadness do occasionally show.
!!Flint
The leader of the Sky Avengers, a group of cats that tried to destroy the Clans three years before the events of ''Golden Dawn: Lost Sunrise''.
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* AllYourBaseAreBelongToUs: His goal was to take over the lake completely. While Finflutter managed to come up with a plan that defeated the Sky Avengers before Flint could do so, he did manage to take over the Gathering Island and a good amount of [=WindClan=] territory.
* TheLeader: He led the Sky Avengers.
* PredecessorVillain: He was the leader of the Sky Avengers, a group that attacked the Clans several years prior to the main story and had a heavy impact on the lives of many characters, such as Galeflight, Amberfang, Otterstar, and Sunstorm.
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->"The Winds of Death can never be cheated."
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* IKnowYouAreInThereSomewhereFight: Tries to bring the noble part of his brother back by defeating him in battle. However, he fails and Darkclaw is the one to defeat Bonetail.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Darkclaw is very surprised when Sootstain actually begs him to save Bonetail, because Sootstain is usually very grumpy and aloof.
* StarCrossedLovers: He and a [=RiverClan=] she-cat fell in love and had kits together, but they're apart now. Those kits are Skystorm and Grasstail of [=RiverClan=] and Creamfur of [=ShadowClan=].
!!Hopepaw
->"The Winds of Death can never be cheated."
A small white she-kit (now Owlflight's apprentice) who often bothers Darkclaw. She can somehow tell when cats will die with a mysterious power known as "The Winds of Death".
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* IKnowYouAreInThereSomewhereFight: Tries to bring the noble part of his brother back by defeating him in battle. However, he fails and Darkclaw is the one to defeat Bonetail.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Darkclaw is very surprised when Sootstain actually begs him to save Bonetail, because Sootstain is usually very grumpy and aloof.
* StarCrossedLovers: He and a [=RiverClan=] she-cat fell in love and had kits together, but they're apart now. Those kits are Skystorm and Grasstail of [=RiverClan=] and Creamfur of [=ShadowClan=].
!!Hopepaw
->"The Winds of Death can never be cheated."
A small white she-kit (now Owlflight's apprentice) who often bothers Darkclaw. She can somehow tell when cats will die with a mysterious power known as "The Winds of Death".
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* DarkSecret: She has one, but it's only been hinted at.
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* DarkSecret: She has one, but it's only been hinted at. In Chapter 8 [[spoiler:part of her secret turns out to be that she killed her father, Quailfeather.]]
* [[spoiler:MurderMakesYouCrazy]]: [[spoiler:A great deal of her self-loathing and depression stems from her guilt over killing her own father.]]
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* OhCrap: In Chapter 4, when she realizes that she has the {{healing factor}}.
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* OhCrap: In Chapter 4, when she realizes that she has the a {{healing factor}}.
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* PostVictoryCollapse: After defeating Bonetail, he falls over due to the injuries he was ignoring.
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!!Boulderpaw
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An egotistical [=WindClan=] apprentice.
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An egotistical [=WindClan=] apprentice. (Now a warrior, as of Chapter 9.)
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* IronicEcho: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:as Galeflight lies dying, she repeats the words she told him when he promised to protect, only this time with a completely different context.]]
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* IronicEcho: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:as Galeflight lies dying, she repeats the words she told him when he promised to protect, protect her, only this time with a completely different context.]]
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* TheMentor: If Chapter 3 is any indication, she'll end up as this to Leafkit. However, in Chapter 9 she becomes Harepaw's mentor, as Leafkit is going to become a medicine cat.
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* TheMentor: If Chapter 3 is any indication, she'll end up as this to Leafkit. However, in Chapter 9 she becomes [[spoiler:replaces the now deceased Galeflight as Harepaw's mentor, mentor]], as Leafkit is going to become a medicine cat.
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* TheMentor: If Chapter 3 is any indication, she'll end up as this to Leafkit. However, in Chapter 9 she becomes Harepaw's apprentice, as Leafkit is going to become a medicine cat.
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* TheMentor: If Chapter 3 is any indication, she'll end up as this to Leafkit. However, in Chapter 9 she becomes Harepaw's apprentice, mentor, as Leafkit is going to become a medicine cat.
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* DrillSeargentNasty: He's a strict mentor, and isn't very kind.
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* DrillSeargentNasty: DrillSergeantNasty: He's a strict mentor, and isn't very kind.
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->"That's another problem with ideals. Some cats ''do'' follow them with absolute conviction. They craft themselves into the image of their ideals, and do not fail to follow them. But when they're beaten down by all around them, when the very world rejects their principles, they themselves will shatter like ice. Beware, young she-cat."
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A strange kit who Tidepaw meets on the beach. He claims to work for "the wishgranter".
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A strange kit who Tidepaw meets on the beach. He claims to work for "the wishgranter". He later appears to Leafkit. Who or what he is remains unknown.
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* BerserkButton: He hates oathbreakers, and tells Leafkit that they are the worst kind of cat.
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!!Quailfeather
->"It's not a question of how strong I am. It's how I gain my strength. I believe that when we are protecting something precious to ourselves, we can grow more ferocious than the warriors of [=TigerClan=]."
The father of Tidepaw and Brightpaw. He was killed by rogues before the story began.
->"It's not a question of how strong I am. It's how I gain my strength. I believe that when we are protecting something precious to ourselves, we can grow more ferocious than the warriors of [=TigerClan=]."
The father of Tidepaw and Brightpaw. He was killed by rogues before the story began.
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->"It's
Wildpaw's mentor. He's a former medicine apprentice, but during the battle against the Sky Avengers he chose to become a warrior apprentice to avenge his fallen Clanmates. In the present he's a respected member of [=RiverClan=] and one of Otterstar's chief strategists, but he's not
The father of Tidepaw and Brightpaw. He was killed by rogues before the story began.
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* DrillSeargentNasty: He's a strict mentor, and isn't very kind.
* {{Jerkass}}: He isn't very nice to Tidepaw.
* TheMedic: He was Nightheart's apprentice for a time. However, he chose to become a warrior apprentice instead.
!!Quailfeather
->"It's not a question of how strong I am. It's how I gain my strength. I believe that when we are protecting something precious to ourselves, we can grow more ferocious than the warriors of [=TigerClan=]."
The father of Tidepaw and Brightpaw. He was killed by rogues before the story began.
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* {{Jerkass}}: He isn't very nice to Tidepaw.
* TheMedic: He was Nightheart's apprentice for a time. However, he chose to become a warrior apprentice instead.
!!Quailfeather
->"It's not a question of how strong I am. It's how I gain my strength. I believe that when we are protecting something precious to ourselves, we can grow more ferocious than the warriors of [=TigerClan=]."
The father of Tidepaw and Brightpaw. He was killed by rogues before the story began.
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* TheMedic: In Chapter 9, she decides to become a medicine cat.
* [[spoiler:AlmostDeadGuy]]: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:he talks to Leafkit and Fieldstone a little bit before he dies.]]
* [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice]]: In Chapter 9 [[spoiler:he dies pushing Fieldstone away as Amberfang attacks her.]]
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* IGaveMyWord: He never breaks a promise, even if it means putting himself in danger.
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* IGaveMyWord: He never breaks a promise, even if it means putting himself in danger. [[spoiler:He even dies to keep a promise that seemed to be a joke.]]
* [[spoiler:SlashedThroat]]: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:he dies because Amberfang slices open his throat.]]
* TheMentor: She's going to be Leafkit's mentor.
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* TheMentor: If Chapter Three is any indication, she'll end up as this to Leafkit.
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* TheMentor: If Chapter Three 3 is any indication, she'll end up as this to Leafkit.Leafkit. However, in Chapter 9 she becomes Harepaw's apprentice, as Leafkit is going to become a medicine cat.
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->'''Foxwhisker''': "I'm just a harmless medicine cat out for a walk. It sure would be a shame if something happened to me."
->Rogues surround her.
->'''Foxwhisker''': "Oh, the predictability."
->Rogues surround her.
->'''Foxwhisker''': "Oh, the predictability."
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* TheMedic: He's [=ThunderClan=]'s Medicine Cats.
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* TheMedic: He's one of [=ThunderClan=]'s Medicine Cats.
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* DragonAscendent: He takes over Bonetail's rogues after Bonetail dies.
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* DragonAscendent: DragonAscendant: He takes over Bonetail's rogues after Bonetail dies.
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!!Ravenstar
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* IronicEcho: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:as Galeflight lies dying, she repeats the words she told him when he promised to protect, only this time with a completely different context.]]
* [[spoiler:NotSoHarmlessVillain]]: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:his bloodlust wins the battle for [=WindClan=], and Leafkit is actually scared by the hatred she sees in his eyes.]]
* [[spoiler:DamselInDistress]]: In Chapter 9, [[spoiler:she is captured by [=WindClan=] and taken prisoner.]]
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!!Otterstar
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[=RiverClan=]'s leader. She struggles to deal with the current food shortage, but is finding it increasingly difficult to save her Clan.
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[=RiverClan=]'s leader. She struggles to deal with the current food shortage, but is finding it increasingly difficult to save her Clan. She is also a former [=ShadowClan=] warrior who joined [=RiverClan=] after a [=RiverClan=] warrior made a large impact on her life during the war against the Sky Avengers.
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!!Quailfeather
->"It's not a question of how strong I am. It's how I gain my strength. I believe that when we are protecting something precious to ourselves, we can grow more ferocious than the warriors of [=TigerClan=]."
The father of Tidepaw and Brightpaw. He was killed by rogues before the story began.
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The father of Tidepaw
!!Finflutter
->"Yo, [=ShadowClan=] and
A tom who always steals Nightheart's catnip and gets high with it. He was
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* PosthumousCharacter: The rogues killed him a week before Tidepaw's first point of view chapter.
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Even though he's crazy and depressed, he still was able to come up with a good strategy that [=RiverClan=] and [=ShadowClan=] could use to defeat Bonetail.
* FamedInStory: He's a legend because he led the Clans to the defeat of the Sky Avengers. However, he doesn't quite live up to the stories.
* HiddenDepths: At first he appears to be some idiot stoner character, but then it turns out that he was once a legendary strategist and Otterstar's mate.
* HurtingHero: He fell into depression after his kits died.
* TheStoner: To dull the pain of the deaths of his kits, he takes catnip and gets high off of it.
* TheStrategist: He was formerly one of the greatest strategists born to the Clans in years. He was also the one to create the strategy that defeated the Sky Avengers. However, his strategic skills fell into disuse after his kits died.
!!Quailfeather
->"It's not a question of how strong I am. It's how I gain my strength. I believe that when we are protecting something precious to ourselves, we can grow more ferocious than the warriors of [=TigerClan=]."
The father of Tidepaw and Brightpaw. He was killed by rogues before the story began.
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* PosthumousCharacter: The rogues killed him a week before Tidepaw's first point of viewchapter.
chapter. [[spoiler:It's later revealed that he was actually killed by Tidepaw.]]
* FamedInStory: He's a legend because he led the Clans to the defeat of the Sky Avengers. However, he doesn't quite live up to the stories.
* HiddenDepths: At first he appears to be some idiot stoner character, but then it turns out that he was once a legendary strategist and Otterstar's mate.
* HurtingHero: He fell into depression after his kits died.
* TheStoner: To dull the pain of the deaths of his kits, he takes catnip and gets high off of it.
* TheStrategist: He was formerly one of the greatest strategists born to the Clans in years. He was also the one to create the strategy that defeated the Sky Avengers. However, his strategic skills fell into disuse after his kits died.
!!Quailfeather
->"It's not a question of how strong I am. It's how I gain my strength. I believe that when we are protecting something precious to ourselves, we can grow more ferocious than the warriors of [=TigerClan=]."
The father of Tidepaw and Brightpaw. He was killed by rogues before the story began.
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* PosthumousCharacter: The rogues killed him a week before Tidepaw's first point of view
* CelibateHero: She isn't allowed a mate because she's a medicine cat.
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!!Hopekit
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!!Hopepaw
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A small white she-kit who often bothers Darkclaw. She can somehow tell when cats will die with a mysterious power known as "The Winds of Death".
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A small white she-kit (now Owlflight's apprentice) who often bothers Darkclaw. She can somehow tell when cats will die with a mysterious power known as "The Winds of Death".
* TheUnfavorite: In Chapter 8, she mentions that her mother Webnose seems to love her brother Blazepaw more than she loves Hopepaw.
* IntangibleMan: When Darkclaw tries to attack him in Chapter 8, he passes right through him.
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* VillainExitStageLeft: He seems to vanish into nowhere after he's done talking with a cat. Apparently he's teleporting.
* AlasPoorVillain: There's an emphasis on how noble he once was when he dies.
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* BigBad: At least for the beginning of the story.
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* BigBad: At least for the beginning of the story. He had a personal connection to Darkclaw and his rogue army was a major threat to the Clans, but he was taken care of in Chapter 8.
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* DiscOneFinalBoss: Appears to be the BigBad, or part of a BigBadEnsemble with the Watcher. Then he dies in Chapter 8.
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* FallenHero: He used to be very noble, but he fell to the dark side after his mate Fernheart died.
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* NeckSnap: Dies in Chapter 8 when Arise snaps his neck.
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* DragonAscendent: He takes over Bonetail's rogues after Bonetail dies.
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* [[spoiler:{{Patricide}}]]: Darkclaw reveals in Chapter 8 that [[spoiler:the rogues did not in fact kill Tidepaw's father Quailfeather. He was killed by Tidepaw herself.]]
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!!Hopekit
->"The Winds of Death can never be cheated."
A small white she-kit who often bothers Darkclaw. She can somehow tell when cats will die with a mysterious power known as "The Winds of Death".
->"The Winds of Death can never be cheated."
A small white she-kit who often bothers Darkclaw. She can somehow tell when cats will die with a mysterious power known as "The Winds of Death".
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->"The Winds of Death can never be cheated."
A small white she-kit who often bothers Darkclaw.
[=ShadowClan=]'s medicine cat. She
* DeadpanSnarker: Tends to be dryly snarky. An example from Chapter 8 comes when she is trying to lure some rogues into a trap.
->'''Foxwhisker''': "I'm just a harmless medicine cat out for a walk. It sure would be a shame if something happened to me."
->Rogues surround her.
->'''Foxwhisker''': "Oh, the predictability."
!!Hopekit
->"The Winds of Death can never be cheated."
A small white she-kit who often bothers Darkclaw. She can somehow tell when cats will die with a mysterious power known as "The Winds of Death".
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->'''Foxwhisker''': "I'm just a harmless medicine cat out for a walk. It sure would be a shame if something happened to me."
->Rogues surround her.
->'''Foxwhisker''': "Oh, the predictability."
!!Hopekit
->"The Winds of Death can never be cheated."
A small white she-kit who often bothers Darkclaw. She can somehow tell when cats will die with a mysterious power known as "The Winds of Death".
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->"Not dying is my specialty!"
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!!Otterstar
->"Please, allow us some of your food, even if we have to be monitored or hunted for."
[=RiverClan=]'s leader. She struggles to deal with the current food shortage, but is finding it increasingly difficult to save her Clan.
->"Please, allow us some of your food, even if we have to be monitored or hunted for."
[=RiverClan=]'s leader. She struggles to deal with the current food shortage, but is finding it increasingly difficult to save her Clan.
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->"Please, allow us some of your food, even if we have to be monitored or hunted for."
[=RiverClan=]'s leader. She struggles to deal with the current food shortage, but
Tidepaw's self-proclaimed rival. He loves fighting, and is
* AMinorKidroduction: He first shows up as a kit in Tidepaw's flashback. Then he appears in the present as one of Tidepaw's friends.
* HotBlooded: He loves fighting. He's often challenging Tidepaw to fights, and when he meets Harepaw, he quickly challenges him to one.
* TheRival: He declares himself to be Tidepaw's rival.
!!Otterstar
->"Please, allow us some of your food, even if we have to be monitored or hunted for."
[=RiverClan=]'s leader. She struggles to deal with the current food shortage, but is finding it increasingly difficult to save her Clan.
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* HotBlooded: He loves fighting. He's often challenging Tidepaw to fights, and when he meets Harepaw, he quickly challenges him to one.
* TheRival: He declares himself to be Tidepaw's rival.
!!Otterstar
->"Please, allow us some of your food, even if we have to be monitored or hunted for."
[=RiverClan=]'s leader. She struggles to deal with the current food shortage, but is finding it increasingly difficult to save her Clan.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: She refuses to help [=RiverClan=] in Chapter 2, but in Chapter 7 it turns out that she had some of her warriors take food to [=RiverClan=].
* TheLeader: She's the leader of [=ShadowClan=].
* TheLeader: She's the leader of [=ShadowClan=].
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* NumberTwo: He's Bonetail's second in command.