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Can\'t think of a good Dies quote.
* FailureKnight
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-> '''"Klik"'''
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-> '''"Trust me. I'm tougher than I look."'''
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The Goblins Adventuring Party are the main characters of our story. After their warcamp is destroyed by a human adventuring party, five goblins set off on an adventure to gain class levels and become strong so that they can get revenge on the human adventuring party.
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[[folder:Goblin Adventuring Party]]
TheGoblins Goblin Adventuring Party are the main characters of our story. After their warcamp is destroyed by a human adventuring party, five goblins set off on an adventure to gain class levels and become strong so that they can get revenge on the human adventuring party.
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The
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* SimpleStaff: And she is very good at using it too.
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* SimpleStaff: And she is very good at using it too.too.
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* GoodIsDumb: Subverted. Big Ears is very intelligent, and good at getting himself and others out of bad situations. He also knows when to quit.
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* GoodIsDumb: Subverted. Big Ears is very intelligent, and good at getting himself and others out of bad situations. He also knows when to quit.
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A goblin girl who starts looking after Dies.
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Dies Horribly quickly finds himself
Dies Horribly is a timid, fearful goblin who is separated from the Goblin Adventuring Party during the attack on the warcamp.
* BlessedWithSuck: Dies loses an arm, but Klik make him a living metal replacement. He doesn't like it because it's hard to control.
'''Klik'''
A strange flying metal sphere that was sitting around in the goblin warcamp. [[TastesLikeFriendship It follows Dies Horribly around after he helps it recover.]]
* BizarreAlienBiology
* HeroicMime: Klik can only make "Klik" sounds.
* MechanicalLifeform: Klik is made of living metal, eats metal to regenerate, and can fly without visible means of propulsion.
* ShoutOut: Klik resembles the alien face found on the cover of HitchhikersGuideToTheGalaxy novels.
* WeaksauceWeakness: Blood is corrosive.
A strange flying metal sphere that was sitting around in the goblin warcamp. [[TastesLikeFriendship It follows Dies Horribly around after he helps it recover.]]
* BizarreAlienBiology
* HeroicMime: Klik can only make "Klik" sounds.
* MechanicalLifeform: Klik is made of living metal, eats metal to regenerate, and can fly without visible means of propulsion.
* ShoutOut: Klik resembles the alien face found on the cover of HitchhikersGuideToTheGalaxy novels.
* WeaksauceWeakness: Blood is corrosive.
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* ScrewDestiny: Her motto.[[spoiler:But, as Dies explains to her, YouCantFightFate.]]
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* ScrewDestiny: Her motto.[[spoiler:But, as Dies explains to her, YouCantFightFate.]]]]
* SimpleStaff: And she is very good at using it too.
* SimpleStaff: And she is very good at using it too.
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* BattleAura: Chief's IME is a stylized blue crown and mantle.
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* BattleAura: Complains's IME when raging is that his eyes glow purple and give of LensFlare. [[spoiler: After becoming part-demon, he also gains an ethereal purple demon tail.]]
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* {{Revenge}}: Subverted. Early in his adventuring career, Thaco finds [[strike: Goblinslayer, who cut off his ear]] [[spoiler: some no-name adventurer who cut off his ear. Thaco finally beats him in a duel, then cuts off the human's ear. The human taunts Thaco, claiming that he's NotSoDifferent. Thaco responds by telling the human the he's just "some human that I fought in the early levels of my adventuring career," then chucks his ear in the sewer and leaves the human alive.]] [[FateWorseThanDeath Needless to say,]] this is a FateWorseThanDeath.
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* {{Revenge}}: Subverted. Early in his adventuring career, Thaco finds [[strike: Goblinslayer, who cut off his ear]] [[spoiler: some no-name adventurer who cut off his ear. Thaco finally beats him in a duel, then cuts off the human's ear. The human taunts Thaco, claiming that he's NotSoDifferent. Thaco responds by telling the human the he's just "some human that I fought in the early levels of my adventuring career," then chucks his ear in the sewer and leaves the human alive.]] [[FateWorseThanDeath Needless to say,]] this His anguished response is a FateWorseThanDeath.horrifying.]]
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* {{Revenge}}: Subverted. Early in his adventuring career, Thaco finds [[strike: Goblinslayer, who cut off his ear]] [[spoiler: some no-name adventurer who cut off his ear. Thaco finally beats him in a duel, then cuts off the human's ear. The human taunts Thaco, claiming that he's NotSoDifferent. Thaco responds by telling the human the he's "just an encounter", then chucks his ear in the sewer.]] [[FateWorseThanDeath Needless to say,]] this is a FateWorseThanDeath.
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* {{Revenge}}: Subverted. Early in his adventuring career, Thaco finds [[strike: Goblinslayer, who cut off his ear]] [[spoiler: some no-name adventurer who cut off his ear. Thaco finally beats him in a duel, then cuts off the human's ear. The human taunts Thaco, claiming that he's NotSoDifferent. Thaco responds by telling the human the he's "just an encounter", just "some human that I fought in the early levels of my adventuring career," then chucks his ear in the sewer.sewer and leaves the human alive.]] [[FateWorseThanDeath Needless to say,]] this is a FateWorseThanDeath.
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* BattleAura: Big Ears's IME is a yellow decagonal ring.
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* {{Revenge}}: Subverted. Early in his adventuring career, Thaco finds [[strike: Goblinslayer, who cut off his ear]] [[spoiler: some no-name adventurer who cut off his ear. Thaco finally beats him in a duel, then cuts off the human's ear. The human taunts Thaco, claiming that he's NotSoDifferent. Thaco responds by telling the human the he's "just an encounter", then chucks his ear in the sewer.]] [[FateWorseThanDeath Needless to say,]] this is a FateWorseThanDeath.
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-> [[AwesomeMcCoolName '''"SENOOOOR VORPAAAAL KICKASS'OOOOO!!!"''']]
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-> [[AwesomeMcCoolName '''"SENOOOOR '''[[AwesomeMcCoolName "SENOOOOR VORPAAAAL KICKASS'OOOOO!!!"''']]
KICKASS'OOOOO!!!"]]'''
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The Goblins Adventuring Party are the main characters of our story. After their warcamp is destroyed by a human adventuring party, five goblins set off on an adventure to gain class levels and become strong so that they can get revenge on the human adventuring party.
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-> [[AwesomeMcCoolName '''"SENOOOOR VORPAAAAL KICKASS'OOOOO!!!"'''
KICKASS'OOOOO!!!"''']]
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** [[HappyPlace But even then, he's still a hero in his own mind.]]
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* [[spoiler: SealedEvilInACan: Big Ears's second axe is a major artifact that contains a powerful demon.]] OrIsIt?
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* [[spoiler: SealedEvilInACan: Big Ears's second axe is a major artifact that contains a powerful demon.]] OrIsIt?]]
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-> '''"Paladins get the best stuff at third level!"'''
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*EmpathicWeapon / MorphWeapon: Dies left arm has shapeshifting abilities that respond to his emotions, but since fear is his most common emotion, it mostly just makes spikes.
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* BecauseDestinySaysSo: A firmly believer of this.
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* BecauseDestinySaysSo: A firmly firm believer of this.
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* TheFool: Altough his name says the opposite, the universe seems to conspire for his survival.
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* TheFool: Altough his name says the opposite, the universe seems to conspire for his survival.survival.
'''Saves-a-Fox'''
*ActionGirl
*CuteMonsterGirl
*ScrewDestiny: Her motto.[[spoiler:But, as Dies explains to her, YouCantFightFate.]]
'''Saves-a-Fox'''
*ActionGirl
*CuteMonsterGirl
*ScrewDestiny: Her motto.[[spoiler:But, as Dies explains to her, YouCantFightFate.]]
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* PluckyComicRelief: At least until he's [[spoiler:tortured by Goblinslayer.]]
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adding some new tropes
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* TookALevelInBadass: After he gets his [[spoiler:second axe. It also comes with a magic armor.]]
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* TheMedic
*BadassGrandpa
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** [[http://www.goblinscomic.com/09032005/ It's less useful than it sounds.]]
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** [[http://www.goblinscomic.com/09032005/ It's less useful than it sounds.]]]]
'''Dies Horribly'''
* BecauseDestinySaysSo: A firmly believer of this.
* LovableCoward
* TheFool: Altough his name says the opposite, the universe seems to conspire for his survival.
'''Dies Horribly'''
* BecauseDestinySaysSo: A firmly believer of this.
* LovableCoward
* TheFool: Altough his name says the opposite, the universe seems to conspire for his survival.
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Thaco is the oldest goblin in the Goblin Adventuring Party, which is why he's named after an outdated Dungeons & Dragons defense mechanic. He's also Complain's father.
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Thaco is the oldest goblin in the Goblin Adventuring Party, which is why he's named after an outdated Dungeons & Dragons defense mechanic. He's also Complain's Complains's father.
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moved the line about Thaco being complain\'s father to Thaco\'s description. I think it\'s more fitting this way.
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Thaco is also Complains's father.
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Thaco is the oldest goblin in the Goblin Adventuring Party, which is why he's named after an outdated Dungeons & Dragons defense mechanic. \n He's also Complain's father.
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I decided to change Chief\'s quote to a Crowing Moment of Awesome (his last and biggest CMOA before dieing). I don\'t know if I\'m allowed to do this without making a discussion, though...
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-> '''"Father, '''"My name is Chief, member of the Goblin Adventuring Party and leader of the Clan of the Cryptic Fall. And I'm no Chief.not here to beg for my life. I'm here to kill you."'''
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* [[spoiler: SenselessSacrifice]]
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'''Complains About Names'''
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'''Complains About of Names'''
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* GoodScarsEvilScars: Thaco has the good guy vertical scar across the eye.
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-> '''"I'm your worst nightmare... A goblin with a readied action AND an elevation bonus."'''
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* CoolSword
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* SwordCane
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Fumbles is the mascot of the Goblin Adventuring Party. It was originally his idea to take class levels, and the rest of the party decided to follow suit after the warcamp fell.
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Fumbles is the mascot fifth member of the Goblin Adventuring Party. It was originally his idea to take class levels, and the rest of the party decided to follow suit after the warcamp fell.
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'''Big Ears'''
--> '''"Never tell me to slience my heart again!"'''
The leader of the Goblin Adventuring Party. He chose to be a paladin because he was tired of watching others die.
* AnAxeToGrind
* GoodIsDumb: Subverted. Big Ears is very intelligent, and good at getting himself and others out of bad situations. He also knows when to quit.
* PrecisionFStrike
* [[spoiler: SealedEvilInACan: Big Ears's second axe is a major artifact that contains a powerful demon.]] OrIsIt?
'''Chief'''
The goblin tribe's leader, and unwilling member of the Goblin Adventuring Party. He chose to be a cleric because he wanted to have the least glamorous and "adventurer-like" job.
* OnlySaneMan
* TheChick
--> '''"Never tell me to slience my heart again!"'''
The leader of the Goblin Adventuring Party. He chose to be a paladin because he was tired of watching others die.
* AnAxeToGrind
* GoodIsDumb: Subverted. Big Ears is very intelligent, and good at getting himself and others out of bad situations. He also knows when to quit.
* PrecisionFStrike
* [[spoiler: SealedEvilInACan: Big Ears's second axe is a major artifact that contains a powerful demon.]] OrIsIt?
'''Chief'''
The goblin tribe's leader, and unwilling member of the Goblin Adventuring Party. He chose to be a cleric because he wanted to have the least glamorous and "adventurer-like" job.
* OnlySaneMan
* TheChick
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One of the members of the Goblin Adventuring Party, he fought Minmax in the latter's attack to the village and sweared to chase and kill him. His class is Barbarian, since it benefits from his bad temper.
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One of the members of the Goblin Adventuring Party, he fought Minmax in the latter's attack to the village and sweared swore to chase find and kill him. His class is Barbarian, since it benefits from his bad temper.
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* {{Badass}}
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* OnlySaneMan: In the first arc.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: After he becomes [[spoiler: part demon]] in Brassmoon City arc.
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* OnlySaneMan: In the first arc.
arc. He breaks the Goblin Camp's tradition of [[spoiler: leaving minor magic items in a treasure chest and not using them against level 1 adventurers.]]
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: After he becomes [[spoiler: part demon]] in Brassmoon Cityarc.arc.
'''Thaco'''
--> '''"I'll bet you a copper piece that you can't stabilize in seven rounds."'''
Thaco is the oldest goblin in the Goblin Adventuring Party, which is why he's named after an outdated Dungeons & Dragons defense mechanic.
* {{Badass}}
'''[[strike: Fumbles]] Senor Vorpal Kickass'O'''
--> '''"SENOOOOR VORPAAAAL KICKASS'OOOOO!!!"'''
Fumbles is the mascot of the Goblin Adventuring Party. It was originally his idea to take class levels, and the rest of the party decided to follow suit after the warcamp fell.
* HeroicBSOD
* TheFool
* TheWoobie
* TookALevelInBadass: Subverted.
-->'''"Which class did you choose?"'''
-->'''"All of them."'''
** [[http://www.goblinscomic.com/09032005/ It's less useful than it sounds.]]
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: After he becomes [[spoiler: part demon]] in Brassmoon City
'''Thaco'''
--> '''"I'll bet you a copper piece that you can't stabilize in seven rounds."'''
Thaco is the oldest goblin in the Goblin Adventuring Party, which is why he's named after an outdated Dungeons & Dragons defense mechanic.
* {{Badass}}
'''[[strike: Fumbles]] Senor Vorpal Kickass'O'''
--> '''"SENOOOOR VORPAAAAL KICKASS'OOOOO!!!"'''
Fumbles is the mascot of the Goblin Adventuring Party. It was originally his idea to take class levels, and the rest of the party decided to follow suit after the warcamp fell.
* HeroicBSOD
* TheFool
* TheWoobie
* TookALevelInBadass: Subverted.
-->'''"Which class did you choose?"'''
-->'''"All of them."'''
** [[http://www.goblinscomic.com/09032005/ It's less useful than it sounds.]]
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One of the members of the Goblin Adventuring Party, he fought Minmax in the latler's latter's attack to the village and sweared to chase and kill him. His class is Barbarian, since it benefits from his bad temper.
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One of the members of the Goblin Adventuring Party, he fought Minmax in the later's latler's attack to the village and sweared to chase and kill him. His class is Barbarian, since it benefits from his bad temper.
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One of the goblins members of the Goblin Adventuring Party, he fought Minmax in the later's attack to the village and sweared to chase and kill him. His class is Barbarian, since it benefits from his bad temper.