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** ChildProdigy: Despite his young age, Keigo's negotiation skills and quick thinking save his father's life. He also is TheRedeemer of Shinyo's heel-turn and displays TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior, because of his past.
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* AllLovingHero: {{Averted]]. Keigo is very compassionate and empathetic young child, trying to protect his father, but he can be selfish too. He is disgusted by himself.
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He starts out as a [[AbusiveParents abusive parent]] but upon getting to know Keigo closer, he realizes the error of his ways in a MyGodWhatHaveIDone. He learns that his own past is [[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse no excuse to abuse]] Keigo and tries to[[BreakingTheCycleOfBadParenting to [[BreakingTheCycleOfBadParenting break the cycle of bad parenting]].
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The main protagonist of Fear of You. He is a very clever but scarred child.
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Touya is often a threat to Keigo, due to the enemy-relationship of their fathers. However he is abused and foreshadowed to leave Endeavor's care.
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Touya is often a threat to Keigo, due to the enemy-relationship of their fathers. However he is abused and foreshadowed to leave Endeavor's care.
care. Despite his young age he seems to be DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife.
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FieryStoic: Despite his hot temper, he is more quiet, reserved, and mature than normal.
He is said to be 7 years old, turning 8 soon.
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He is a GloryHound and [[MusclesAreMeaningful very strong]] pro Hero Endeavor. He is an old enemy/former friend (??) of Takami Shinyo and tries to capture him and his son.
Endeavor can be very formal and stoic, albeit in a cold sort of way, but the Takami Thief is one of his {{BerserkButton|s}}.
Endeavor can be very formal and stoic, albeit in a cold sort of way, but the Takami Thief is one of his {{BerserkButton|s}}.
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He is a GloryHound and [[MusclesAreMeaningful very strong]] pro Hero Endeavor.Hero. He is an old enemy/former friend (??) of Takami Shinyo and tries to capture him and his son.
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* ItsPersonalWithTheDragon: Despite being hunted by Oji Harima, [[spoiler: the one going out to hunt Shinyo is his own (former?) brother.brother, Takami Junto/Harima Junto.]]
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* BloodKnight: Especially young Shinyo is shown to enjoy the thrill offighting.a fight.
*ItsPersonalWithTheDragon: Despite being hunted by Oji Harima, [[spoiler: the one going out to hunt Shinyo is his own (former?) brother.]]
He is 26 years old and has NoSocialSkills.
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In the fanfiction he is said to be 7 years old, turning 8 soon.
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** ChildProdigy: Despite his young age, Keigo's negotiation skills and quick thinking save his father's life. He also is TheRedeemer of Shinyo's heel-turn and displays TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior, because of his past.
** ChildProdigy: Despite his young age, Keigo's negotiation skills and quick thinking save his father's life. He also is TheRedeemer of Shinyo's heel-turn and displays TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior, because of his past.
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the story.
He starts out as a [[AbusiveParents abusive parent]] but upon getting to know Keigo closer, he realizes the error of his ways in a MyGodWhatHaveIDone. He learns that his own past is [[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse no excuse to abuse]] Keigo and tries to[[BreakingTheCycleOfBadParenting break the cycle of bad parenting]].
* HairTriggerTemper: While Shinyo can get violent when he feels threatened.
* BloodKnight: Especially young Shinyo is shown to enjoy the thrill of fighting.
He starts out as a [[AbusiveParents abusive parent]] but upon getting to know Keigo closer, he realizes the error of his ways in a MyGodWhatHaveIDone. He learns that his own past is [[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse no excuse to abuse]] Keigo and tries to[[BreakingTheCycleOfBadParenting break the cycle of bad parenting]].
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* BloodKnight: Like Shinyo, Endeavor seems to enjoy fighting.
Endeavor can be very formal and stoic, albeit in a cold sort of way, but the Takami Thief is his BerserkButton.
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