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* MysticalWhiteHair: During their first meeting, Arthur describes her like a Snow Angel due to her hair with light around her head like a halo causing him to blush.
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* MysticalWhiteHair: During their first meeting, Arthur describes her like a Snow Angel due to her long hair with light around her head like a halo causing him to blush.
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* SpoiledSweet: Considering he is the son of Arthur and Guinevere, despite his status as a prince. He is still innocent, cheerful, and kind young boy, lacking a trait of an entitled spoiled brat. Considering how noble his parents were, it runs in the family.
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* SpoiledSweet: Considering he is the son of Arthur and Guinevere, despite his status as a prince. He is still innocent, cheerful, and kind young boy, lacking a trait of an entitled spoiled brat. Considering how noble his parents were, it runs must've run in the family.
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* LonelyRichKid: played with, Mordred recalls in Chapter 26, that Lucius lacked any friends his age causing him to go after the knights or Merlin or even his nannies as his playmates instead. She even recalls Agravain panicking whenever he went missing or something might have happen to him.
* SpoiledSweet: Considering he is the son of Arthur and Guinevere, despite his status as a prince. He is still innocent, cheerful, and kind young boy, lacking a trait of an entitled spoiled brat. Considering how noble his parents were, it runs in the family.
* SpoiledSweet: Considering he is the son of Arthur and Guinevere, despite his status as a prince. He is still innocent, cheerful, and kind young boy, lacking a trait of an entitled spoiled brat. Considering how noble his parents were, it runs in the family.
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* OddFriendship: With Karna whom she sometimes worries about. She's also rather cordial towards Perseus, mainly because he never tried to hit on her - something she would never have expected from a son of [[AnythingThatMoves Zeus]].
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* OddFriendship: With Karna whom she sometimes worries about. She's also rather cordial towards Perseus, mainly because he never tried to hit on her - something she would never have expected from a son of [[AnythingThatMoves Zeus]].
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A noble rogue spoken of in tales from the British Isles who steals from the rich and gives to the poor, although this Robin is one of the many people who took the name of 'Robin Hood'. He is the Servant of Beatrice Flowerchild.
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A noble rogue who is spoken of in tales from the British Isles who steals from the rich and gives to the poor, although this Robin is one of the many people who took the name of 'Robin Hood'. He is the Servant of Beatrice Flowerchild.
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* PoisonousPerson: His Noble Phantasm ''Yew Bow'' makes use of poison to deal more damage to his enemies. [[spoiler:Cu Chulainn got struck by this and was significantly injured by it, not that it stops him from killing Robin.]]
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* PoisonousPerson: His Noble Phantasm ''Yew Bow'' makes use of poison to deal more damage to his enemies. [[spoiler:Cu Chulainn got struck by this and was significantly injured by it, in the process, not that it stops him from killing Robin.]]
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A demigod hero and son of Zeus from Ancient Greece famous for killing the Gorgon Medusa. Although he serves Shirou Kotomine as his Servant, he does not care much about the Rogue Faction or its goals.
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A demigod hero and son of Zeus from Ancient Greece famous for killing the Gorgon Medusa. Although he serves Shirou Kotomine as his Servant, he does not care much about the Rogue Faction or and its goals.
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* SinisterScythe: Though described as a sword, his Noble Phantasm ''Harpe'' resembles one. It can penetrate magical defenses, making it an effective counter against Siegfried and Achilles who both have magic-based invulnerability Noble Phantasms.
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* SinisterScythe: Though described as a sword, his Noble Phantasm ''Harpe'' resembles one. It can penetrate magical defenses, making it an effective counter against Siegfried and Achilles who both have magic-based invulnerability defense Noble Phantasms.
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* BerserkButton: Again, puns aside, his is pushed whenever he sees Arthur. However, an even greater one would be Mordred as the moment he first sees her his focus immediately shifts upon realizing who she is and attacking her while ignoring Arthur.
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* BerserkButton: Again, puns Puns aside, his is pushed whenever he sees Arthur. However, an even greater one would be Mordred as the moment he first sees her his focus immediately shifts upon realizing who she is and starts attacking her while ignoring Arthur.
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* DualWielding: Unlike in canon, he fights in close combat with two golden swords as he is based on his Anime/FatePrototype incarnation.
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* DualWielding: Unlike in canon, he fights in close combat with two golden swords as he is based on like his Anime/FatePrototype incarnation.
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* TheWorfEffect: She is an incredibly powerful Servant, but she also tends to be the go-to punching bag to showcase the overall power of another Servant, such as Lancelot, Chiron, Shirou, Siegfried, and Arash.
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* TheWorfEffect: She is an incredibly powerful Servant, but she also tends to be the go-to punching bag to showcase the overall power of another Servant, such as Lancelot, Siegfried, Chiron, Shirou, Siegfried, and Arash.
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* TheWorfEffect: She is an incredibly powerful Servant, but she also tends to be the go-to punching bag to showcase the overall power of another Servant, such as Lancelot, Shirou, Siegfried, and Arash.
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* TheWorfEffect: She is an incredibly powerful Servant, but she also tends to be the go-to punching bag to showcase the overall power of another Servant, such as Lancelot, Chiron, Shirou, Siegfried, and Arash.
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The legendary king of Camelot who was summoned by Ruler to aid her during the Holy Grail War. He was formerly a participant in a previous Holy Grail War.
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The legendary king of Camelot who was summoned by Ruler to aid her during the Holy Grail War. He was formerly a participant in a previous Holy Grail War.
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* LadyOfBlackMagic: A beautiful but deadly spellcaster who controls the ''Hanging Gardens of Babylon'' and can conjure powerful magical spells from within.
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* LadyOfBlackMagic: A beautiful but deadly spellcaster who controls the ''Hanging Gardens of Babylon'' and can conjure powerful magical spells from within.within her domain.
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* GrandTheftMe: She possesses a human girl named Laeticia to manifest in the world. Like in canon, Laeticia granted her permission to do so, making it a heroic example of this trope.
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* GrandTheftMe: She possesses a human girl named Laeticia to manifest in the world.world [[spoiler:because the previous Ruler is still around]]. Like in canon, Laeticia granted her permission to do so, making it a heroic example of this trope.
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The legendary king of Camelot who was summoned by Ruler in order to aid her during the Holy Grail War. He was formerly a participant in a previous Holy Grail War.
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The legendary king of Camelot who was summoned by Ruler in order to aid her during the Holy Grail War. He was formerly a participant in a previous Holy Grail War.
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* MasterSwordsman: He ''is'' King Arthur after all. He often fights and bests other warriors of equal or greater strength through pure swordsmanship alone, making him probably the best sword fighter in the Grail War.
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* MasterSwordsman: He ''is'' King Arthur after all. He often fights and bests other warriors of equal or greater strength through pure swordsmanship alone, making him probably the best sword fighter in the Holy Grail War.
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* LadyOfBlackMagic: A beautiful but deadly spellcaster who controls the ''Hanging Gardens of Babylon'' and can conjure powerful magic spells from within.
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* LadyOfBlackMagic: A beautiful but deadly spellcaster who controls the ''Hanging Gardens of Babylon'' and can conjure powerful magic magical spells from within.
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* RedBaron: The Wise Queen of Assyria. Also known as The World's First Poisoner.
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* RedBaron: The Wise Queen of Assyria. Also known as The World's First Oldest Poisoner.
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* CainAndAbel: The Cain to Ayaka's Abel. She even tried to sacrifice Ayaka to fuel the Grail because she did not want to sacrifice Arthur to it.
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* CainAndAbel: The Cain to Ayaka's Abel. She even tried to sacrifice Ayaka to fuel The fact that she almost killed the Grail because she did not want to sacrifice Arthur to it.latter further reinforces the comparison.
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* StrongerThanTheyLook: Despite his simple appearance, Arash is a lot stronger than he initially lets on. Mordred was surprised at how powerful his arrows have become once he stops holding back.
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* StrongerThanTheyLook: Despite his simple appearance, Arash is a lot stronger than he initially lets on. Mordred compared him to one of the Knights of the Round Table (specifically Tristan) and was surprised at how powerful his arrows have become once he stops holding back.
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A Valkyrie from Norse mythology famous for falling in love with the hero Sigurd and killing him before committing suicide to be with him in death.
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A Valkyrie from Norse mythology famous for falling in love with the hero Sigurd and killing him when he betrayed her before committing suicide to be with him in death.
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* MysticalWhiteHair: She has long white hair, is a former Divine Spirit, and is a powerful Servant in her own right.
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* MysticalWhiteHair: She has long white hair, is a former Divine Spirit, and is a powerful Servant in her own right.
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* TheAce: He's one of the strongest Servants imaginable. In the previous war he partook in, it took five Servants that were empowered by the Ruler of the Third Holy Grail War to successfully defeat him, and this was ''after'' his Master had been killed by Assassin and his mana supply was wearing thin. He is so powerful that Arthur does not think he can defeat him now and the only person they can count on to beat him is Gilgamesh.
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* TheAce: He's one of the strongest Servants imaginable. In the previous war he partook in, it took five Servants that were empowered by the Ruler of the Third Holy Grail War to successfully defeat him, and this was ''after'' his Master had been killed by Assassin and his mana supply was wearing thin. He is so powerful that Arthur does not think he can ever defeat him now by himself and the only person they can count on to beat him is Gilgamesh.
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* AffablyEvil: As noted above, she has a cheerful personality that hides her much darker traits. The fact that she is aiding Manaka adds to this.
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* AffablyEvil: As noted above, she has a cheerful personality that hides her much darker traits. The fact that she is aiding Manaka adds to reinforces this.
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* LittleBitBeastly: As a {{Kitsune}}, she has a pair of fox ears and a tail. [[spoiler:It's how Gilgamesh was able to deduce her identity.]]
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* LittleBitBeastly: As a {{Kitsune}}, she has a pair of fox ears and a tail.tail that she doesn't bother to hide. [[spoiler:It's how Gilgamesh was able to deduce her identity.]]
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A demigod son of Zeus considered to be one of the greatest heroes of Ancient Greece, famous for his immense strength and for completing the Twelve Labours. He was the Servant of Darnic Prestone Yggmellania in the Third War.
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A demigod son of Zeus considered to be one of the greatest heroes of Ancient Greece, famous for his immense strength and for completing the Twelve Labours. He was the Servant of Darnic Prestone Yggmellania in the Third War.
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* ResurrectiveImmortality: Like in ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'', his Noble Phantasm ''God Hand'' grants him 12 lives and he can only be killed when all his lives are extinguished, which is easier said than done.
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* ResurrectiveImmortality: Like in ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'', his Noble Phantasm ''God Hand'' grants him 12 lives and he can only be killed when all his lives are extinguished, which is easier said than done.done since he has to be killed differently for it to stick.
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* MysticalWhiteHair: Has long white hair and is a powerful and immortal mage.
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* MysticalWhiteHair: Has long white hair and is a powerful and immortal mage.
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Is implied to be the one who placed a seal in the Trifas Grail to prevent anyone from accessing it. Not even [[TheAce Manaka]] could bypass it which is why she took it with her. She might also be the reason why Jeanne went to Britain to summon Arthur as her Servant.
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Is implied to be the one who placed a seal in the Trifas Grail to prevent anyone from accessing it. Not even [[TheAce Manaka]] could bypass it which is why she took it the Grail with her. She might also be the reason why Jeanne went to Britain to summon Arthur as her Servant.
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* WorldsMostBeautifulWoman: She is described as having such gorgeous looks that they could only belong to a goddess, and several characters have noted how beautiful she is.
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* WorldsMostBeautifulWoman: She is has been described as having such gorgeous looks that they could only belong to a goddess, and several characters have noted how beautiful she is.
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* MadeOfIron: Is rather tough due to his armor being capable of taking a lot of damage. He got struck by Mordred's ''Clarent Blood Arthur'' and while injured, his armor was only dented and scratched while Cu Chulainn had to strike it many times with his spear before it shows any damage.
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* MadeOfIron: Is He is rather tough due to his armor being capable of taking a lot of damage. He got struck by Mordred's ''Clarent Blood Arthur'' and while injured, his armor was only dented and scratched while Cu Chulainn had to strike it many times with his spear before it shows any damage.
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* BladeOnAStick: Has a long and massive spear as her main weapon.
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* BladeOnAStick: Has She uses a long and massive spear as her main weapon.
* WorldsMostBeautifulWoman: She is described as having such gorgeous looks that they could only belong to a goddess, and several characters have noted how beautiful she is.
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* TheAce: He's one of the strongest Servants imaginable. In the previous war he partook in, it took five Servants that were empowered by the Ruler of the Third Holy Grail War to successfully defeat him, and this was ''after'' his Master had been killed by Assassin and his mana supply was wearing thin.
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* TheAce: He's one of the strongest Servants imaginable. In the previous war he partook in, it took five Servants that were empowered by the Ruler of the Third Holy Grail War to successfully defeat him, and this was ''after'' his Master had been killed by Assassin and his mana supply was wearing thin. He is so powerful that Arthur does not think he can defeat him now and the only person they can count on to beat him is Gilgamesh.
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The legendary king of Uruk from [[Literature/TheEpicOfGilgamesh the Epic of Gilgamesh]] and the oldest known hero of humanity. He is the Servant of Reines El-Melloi Archisorte.
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The legendary king of Uruk from the [[Literature/TheEpicOfGilgamesh the Epic "Epic of Gilgamesh]] Gilgamesh"]] and the oldest known hero of humanity. He is the Servant of Reines El-Melloi Archisorte.
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One of the Twelve Paladins of Charlemagne. Originally the Servant of Celenike Icecolle Yggdmillenia, he later becomes the Servant of Sieg.
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One of the Twelve Paladins of Charlemagne.Charlemagne known for his good looks and many adventures. Originally the Servant of Celenike Icecolle Yggdmillenia, he later becomes the Servant of Sieg.
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* DudeLooksLikeALady: Can be easily mistaken for a girl thanks to his appearance. ''[[UpToEleven Even Jeanne herself initially cannot tell his gender even with her abilities as Ruler.]]''
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* DudeLooksLikeALady: Can be easily mistaken for a girl thanks to his appearance.androgynous appearance and clothing. ''[[UpToEleven Even Jeanne herself initially cannot tell his gender even with her abilities as Ruler.]]''
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The legendary king of Uruk from [[Literature/TheEpicOfGilgamesh The Epic of Gilgamesh]] and the oldest known hero of humanity. He is the Servant of Reines El-Melloi Archisorte.
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The legendary king of Uruk from [[Literature/TheEpicOfGilgamesh The the Epic of Gilgamesh]] and the oldest known hero of humanity. He is the Servant of Reines El-Melloi Archisorte.
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The legendary king of Uruk from the [[Literature/TheEpicOfGilgamesh ''Epic of Gilgamesh'']] and the oldest known hero of humanity. He is the Servant of Reines El-Melloi Archisorte.
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The legendary king of Uruk from the [[Literature/TheEpicOfGilgamesh ''Epic The Epic of Gilgamesh'']] Gilgamesh]] and the oldest known hero of humanity. He is the Servant of Reines El-Melloi Archisorte.
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The legendary king of Uruk from the ''Epic of Gilgamesh'' and the oldest known hero of humanity. He is the Servant of Reines El-Melloi Archisorte.
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The legendary king of Uruk from the [[Literature/TheEpicOfGilgamesh ''Epic of Gilgamesh'' Gilgamesh'']] and the oldest known hero of humanity. He is the Servant of Reines El-Melloi Archisorte.
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* ArmorOfInvincibility: As per canon, ''Kavacha and Kundala'', which reduces all attacks to 1/10th of its initial strength. Combined with his own toughness, this makes him near-invulnerable to all attacks.
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* ArmorOfInvincibility: As per canon, ''Kavacha and Kundala'', which Kundala'' reduces all forms of attacks to 1/10th of its initial strength. Combined with his own toughness, this makes him near-invulnerable to all attacks.
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* MadeOfIron: Is rather tough due to his armor being capable of taking a lot of damage. He got struck by Mordred's ''Clarent Blood Arthur'' and while injured, his armor was only dented and scratched while Cu Chulainn had to strike it many times with his spear before it shows any damage.
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* NighInvulnerability: Like his myth, he has an impenetrable body which is reflected in his Noble Phantasm ''Andreías Amárantos'' protecting his whole body from damage except for [[AchillesHeel his heel]].
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* NighInvulnerability: Like his myth, he has an impenetrable body which is reflected in his Noble Phantasm ''Andreías Amárantos'' protecting his whole body him from damage except for [[AchillesHeel his heel]].heel]] and against those with higher Divinity than him such as Chiron.
* ArmorOfInvincibility: As per canon, ''Kavacha and Kundala'', which reduces all attacks to 1/10th of its initial strength. Combined with his own toughness, this makes him near-invulnerable to all attacks.
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* NighInvulnerability: Like in ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'', he is nearly invincible thanks to his Armor Noble Phantasm ''Kavacha and Kundala''.
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* NighInvulnerability: Like in ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'', As mentioned above, he is nearly invincible thanks to his Armor Noble Phantasm ''Kavacha and Kundala''.
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: Due to her being a Homunculus, she aged twice as fast as the average human and was practically a full-grown adult when she was barely over a decade old.
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: Due to her being a Homunculus, she aged twice as fast as the average human and was practically a full-grown adult when she was barely over a decade old.
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The oldest known hero of humanity and the main protagonist of the ''Epic of Gilgamesh''. He is the Servant of Reines El-Melloi Archisorte.
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The oldest known hero legendary king of humanity and the main protagonist of Uruk from the ''Epic of Gilgamesh''.Gilgamesh'' and the oldest known hero of humanity. He is the Servant of Reines El-Melloi Archisorte.
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* BlingOfWar: Whatever bits of armor he wears are gold and ornate in design.
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* BlingOfWar: Whatever bits pieces of armor he wears are gold and ornate in design.
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* DualWielding: Unlike in canon, he fights in close combat with two golden swords as he is based on his Anime/FatePrototype version.
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* StormOfBlades: The ''Gates of Babylon'' as per usual. In this fic, however, he uses two variations of it. One is him using it the same way as his Proto incarnation would, firing off his treasures in a rotating volley like a Gatling gun. The second is the method used by the FSN version as a sign that he's fighting seriously [[spoiler:such as his fight against Ozymandias]].
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* StormOfBlades: The ''Gates of Babylon'' as per usual. In this fic, however, he uses two variations of it. One is him using it the same way as his Proto incarnation would, firing off his treasures in a rotating volley like a Gatling gun. The second is the method used by the FSN version as a sign that he's fighting seriously [[spoiler:such as in his brief fight against Ozymandias]].
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* WildCard: Among the characters he's the most prone to doing as he pleases thanks to Reines letting him do so. [[spoiler:This includes him going off to meet with Manaka's group without telling anybody else, taking only Reines along with him more or less because she wouldn't leave him alone]].
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* WildCard: Among the characters he's the most prone to doing as he pleases thanks to Reines letting him do so. [[spoiler:This includes him going off to meet with Manaka's group without telling anybody else, taking only Reines along with him more or less because she wouldn't leave him alone]].
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Much more friendly and heroic compared to canon. Justified as her situation as a Servant is vastly different compared to her status canon in ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight''.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Much more friendly and heroic compared to canon. Justified as her situation as a Servant is vastly different compared to her canon status canon in ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight''.
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* PoisonousPerson: His Noble Phantasm ''Yew Bow'' makes use of poison to deal a lot of damage to his enemies. [[spoiler:Cu Chulainn got struck by this and was significantly injured by it, not that it stops him from killing Robin.]]
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* PoisonousPerson: His Noble Phantasm ''Yew Bow'' makes use of poison to deal a lot of more damage to his enemies. [[spoiler:Cu Chulainn got struck by this and was significantly injured by it, not that it stops him from killing Robin.]]
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A demigod hero and son of Zeus from Ancient Greece famous for killing the Gorgon Medusa. He is a Servant of Although he serves Shirou Kotomine and while he serves him, as his Servant, he does not care much about the Rogue Faction or its goals.
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* BrokenAce: He was once one of the greatest knights to ever live, but his affair with Guinevere led to his disgrace and exile, and the fall of Camelot led him to become a wandering monk who later went mad in life. He now exists as a Servant of madness consumed almost entirely by his hatred.
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* BrokenAce: He was once one of the greatest knights to ever live, but his affair with Guinevere led to his disgrace and exile, and the fall of Camelot led him to become a wandering monk who later went mad in life. He now exists as a Servant of madness Madness consumed almost entirely by his hatred.
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* HiddenDepths: He's actually a decent chef as discovered by Jeanne at the end Chapter 3.
* KingIncognito: In the past, he'd sneak into villages and towns as a peasant sometimes for fun and to interact with people without the stigma of being king. This is actually how he and Mordred first met.
* KingIncognito: In the past, he'd sneak into villages and towns as a peasant sometimes for fun and to interact with people without the stigma of being king. This is actually how he and Mordred first met.
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* HiddenDepths: He's actually a decent chef as discovered by Jeanne at the end of Chapter 3.
* KingIncognito: In the past, he'd sometimes sneak into villages and towns as a peasantsometimes for fun and to interact with people without the stigma of being king. This is actually how he and Mordred first met.
* KingIncognito: In the past, he'd sometimes sneak into villages and towns as a peasant
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* WorfHadTheFlu: Due to receiving an arm injury from Richard, Arthur did not participate in the search for Manaka in the latter half of ACT-2. He fully recovers by ACT-3.
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* WorfHadTheFlu: Due to receiving an arm injury from Richard, Arthur did not participate in the search for Manaka nor assist Waver and his team in the latter half of ACT-2. He fully recovers by ACT-3.
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The legendary king of Camelot who was summoned by Ruler in order to aid her during the Holy Grail War. He was formerly a Servant who fought in a previous Holy Grail War.
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The legendary king of Camelot who was summoned by Ruler in order to aid her during the Holy Grail War. He was formerly a Servant who fought participant in a previous Holy Grail War.
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* StrongerThanYouLook: Despite his simple appearance, Arash is a lot stronger than he looks. Mordred was surprised at how powerful his arrows have become once he stops holding back.
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* StrongerThanYouLook: StrongerThanTheyLook: Despite his simple appearance, Arash is a lot stronger than he looks.initially lets on. Mordred was surprised at how powerful his arrows have become once he stops holding back.
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* {{Yandere}}: Much like in canon, she's this towards Arthur. Even he literally stabbing her in the back didn't change this.
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* {{Yandere}}: Much like in canon, she's this towards Arthur. Even he being literally stabbing her stabbed in the back by her beloved prince didn't change this.this, showing just how delusional she is.
* StrongerThanYouLook: Despite his simple appearance, Arash is a lot stronger than he looks. Mordred was surprised at how powerful his arrows have become once he stops holding back.
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* MysticalWhiteHair: She has long white hair, is a former Divine Spirit, and a powerful Servant in her own right.
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* MysticalWhiteHair: She has long white hair, is a former Divine Spirit, and is a powerful Servant in her own right.
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* ThePowerOfLove: Weaponized due to her Noble Phantasm ''Brynhild Romantia''. The stronger her feelings towards her target the stronger she herself becomes [[spoiler:as seen with her fight against Siegfried, being able to keep up with him even with 3 Command Spells enhancing his abilities.]]
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* ThePowerOfLove: Weaponized due to her Noble Phantasm ''Brynhild Romantia''. The stronger her feelings towards her target target, the stronger she herself becomes [[spoiler:as seen with her fight against Siegfried, being able to keep up with him even with 3 Command Spells enhancing his abilities.]]
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A courtesan of Emperor Toba and a famous fox-spirit from Japanese mythology. She has a cheerful personality that masks the darkness within her.
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A legendary courtesan of Emperor Toba and a famous fox-spirit from Japanese mythology.mythology who served the Emperor Toba. She has a cheerful personality that masks the darkness within her.
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One of the nineteen people to inherit the name of Hassan-I-Sabbah who utilizes poison as her Zabaniya.
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One of the nineteen people to inherit the name of Hassan-I-Sabbah who utilizes poison as her own Zabaniya.
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* MsFanservice: Wears a revealing outfit and Caules catches himself staring at her during her fight against Elizabeth.
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* MsFanservice: Wears a revealing outfit and Caules catches himself staring at her during her fight against Elizabeth. This makes sense as it allows her to better utilize her poison-based Zabaniya.
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A demigod son of Zeus considered one of the greatest heroes of Ancient Greece, famous for his great strength and for completing Twelve Labours. He was the Servant of Darnic Prestone Yggmellania in the Third War.
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A demigod son of Zeus considered to be one of the greatest heroes of Ancient Greece, famous for his great immense strength and for completing the Twelve Labours. He was the Servant of Darnic Prestone Yggmellania in the Third War.
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* CainAndAbel: The Abel to Manaka's Cain. That the latter tried to kill her reinforces the comparison.
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* CainAndAbel: The Abel to Manaka's Cain. That The fact that the latter tried to kill her only reinforces the comparison.
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* AxCrazy: Considering the childlike glee she has in sacrificing children (including her sister) to achieve her goals and how unnervingly giddy she is when her Servants kill people, it's clear that there's something very, '''very''' wrong with her.
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* AxCrazy: Considering the childlike glee she has in sacrificing children (including her younger sister) to achieve her goals and how unnervingly giddy she is when her Servants kill people, it's clear that there's something very, '''very''' wrong with her.
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* HerosEvilPredecessor: She's the former master of Arthur and the overall villain of the story, so she serves as this to Jeanne.
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* HerosEvilPredecessor: She's the former master Master of Arthur and the overall villain of the story, so she serves as this to Jeanne.
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* {{Yandere}}: Much like in canon, she's this towards Arthur.
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* {{Yandere}}: Much like in canon, she's this towards Arthur. Even he literally stabbing her in the back didn't change this.
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The six Servants who fought and died in the Third Holy Grail War of Tokyo during World War II. They have been [[BackFromTheDead brought back by Manaka]] and [[BrainwashedAndCrazy placed under her control]] to aid in her objective of raising the Beast of Revelation.
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The six Servants who fought and died in the Third Holy Grail War of Tokyo during World War II. They have been [[BackFromTheDead brought back by Manaka]] and [[BrainwashedAndCrazy placed under her control]] to aid in her objective of raising the Beast of Revelation.and protect her.
* JustToyingWithThem: When fighting Mordred in Chapter 22, he admitted that he underestimated her and had been holding back, which only serves to anger her.
* MadeOfIron: In Chapter 22, he got tackled by Mordred using her Mana Burst only to get back up no worse for wear. The fact that he has no immortal or invulnerability-based ability just shows how tough he is.
* MadeOfIron: In Chapter 22, he got tackled by Mordred using her Mana Burst only to get back up no worse for wear. The fact that he has no immortal or invulnerability-based ability just shows how tough he is.
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* {{BFS}}: Wields a massive spear as her main weapon that can get even bigger and heavier.
* InstantRunes: Can use runes and is highly proficient in it. [[spoiler:She uses them to summon golems against Shishigou and Fiore to keep them away while she fights Siegfried.]]
* InstantRunes: Can use runes and is highly proficient in it. [[spoiler:She uses them to summon golems against Shishigou and Fiore to keep them away while she fights Siegfried.]]
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* {{BFS}}: Wields BladeOnAStick: Has a long and massive spear as her main weapon that weapon.
* {{BFS}}: Not only is it huge, but her spear can get even bigger and heavier.
* InstantRunes: Canuse runes utilize Primordial Runes and is highly proficient in with it. [[spoiler:She uses them to summon golems against Shishigou and Fiore to keep them away while she fights Siegfried.]]
* {{BFS}}: Not only is it huge, but her spear can get even bigger and heavier.
* InstantRunes: Can
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A famous fox-spirit from Japanese mythology who was a courtesan of the Emperor Toba. She has a cheerful personality that masks the darkness within her.
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A courtesan of Emperor Toba and a famous fox-spirit from Japanese mythology who was a courtesan of the Emperor Toba.mythology. She has a cheerful personality that masks the darkness within her.
* AffablyEvil: As noted above, she has a cheerful personality that hides her much darker traits. The fact that she is aiding Manaka adds to this.
* ItsPersonal: She detests Shirou for doing something to her but the reason is unknown.
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* LightningBruiser: Despite his size, he is both fast and strong as Vlad III finds out.
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* LightningBruiser: Despite his huge size, he is both fast and strong as Vlad III finds out.found out the hard way.
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* CainAndAbel: The Abel to Manaka's Cain.
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* CainAndAbel: The Abel to Manaka's Cain. That the latter tried to kill her reinforces the comparison.
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* ParentalSubstitute: She is sometimes this to Lucius whenever Guinevere or Arthur aren't around or were busy.
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* ParentalSubstitute: She is sometimes this to Lucius whenever Guinevere or Arthur aren't around or were are too busy.
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* AlphaBitch: She is this to Guinevere when she visited Camelot by Arthur's request and is taking her sweet time talking down and mocking on both her and Arthur.
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* AlphaBitch: She is this to Guinevere when she visited Camelot by Arthur's request and is taking her sweet time talking down and mocking on both her and Arthur.
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* HeelFaceTurn: Once Camelot had fallen, she came to regret her actions to the point that she brought back Lucius with the use of the Holy Grail. She later returned him to Guinevere as she stated that now that Arthur had passed, he could no longer be of any use.
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* HeelFaceTurn: Once Camelot had fallen, she came to regret her actions to the point that she brought back Lucius with the use of the Holy Grail. She later returned him to Guinevere as she stated that now that Arthur had passed, passed and Camelot had fallen, he could no longer be of any use.
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The oldest known hero of humanity from the ''Epic of Gilgamesh'' and the King of Heroes. He is the Servant of Reines El-Melloi Archisorte.
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The oldest known hero of humanity from and the main protagonist of the ''Epic of Gilgamesh'' and the King of Heroes.Gilgamesh''. He is the Servant of Reines El-Melloi Archisorte.
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* TheAce: He's the strongest Servant of the Red Faction and one of the most powerful Servants that can be summoned overall.
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* TheAce: He's the ''the'' strongest Servant of the Red Faction and one of the most powerful Servants that can be summoned overall.overall.
* AdaptationalHeroism: While still brash and arrogant, he is much less of a jerk than his depiction in VisualNovel/FateStayNight and LightNovel/FateZero.
* BlingOfWar: Whatever bits of armor he wears are gold and ornate in design.
* AdaptationalHeroism: While still brash and arrogant, he is much less of a jerk than his depiction in VisualNovel/FateStayNight and LightNovel/FateZero.
* BlingOfWar: Whatever bits of armor he wears are gold and ornate in design.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: He may be a jerk, but he was outright disgusted when he saw Manaka brainwash her Servants and force them to obey her.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Still a jerk, though he's far more considerate of others compared to FSN-Gilgamesh.
* RedBaron: The King of Heroes, due to being the first and oldest known hero.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Still a jerk, though he's far more considerate of others compared to FSN-Gilgamesh.
* RedBaron: The King of Heroes, due to being the first and oldest known hero.
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* DualWielding: Unlike in canon, he fights in close combat with two golden swords as he is based on his Anime/FatePrototype version.
* EveryoneHasStandards: He may bea an arrogant jerk, but he was outright disgusted when he saw Manaka brainwash her Servants and force them to obey her.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Still a jerk, though he's far more considerate of others compared toFSN-Gilgamesh.
[[VisualNovel/FateStayNight FSN-Gilgamesh]].
* RedBaron: The King of Heroes, due to being the first and oldest knownhero.hero of humanity.
* EveryoneHasStandards: He may be
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Still a jerk, though he's far more considerate of others compared to
* RedBaron: The King of Heroes, due to being the first and oldest known
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* StormOfBlades: The ''Gates of Babylon'' as per usual. In this fic, however, he uses two variations of it. One is him using it the same way as his Proto incarnation would, firing off his treasures in a rotating volley like a Gatling gun. The second is the method used by the FSN version where using it is a sign that he's fighting seriously.
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* StormOfBlades: The ''Gates of Babylon'' as per usual. In this fic, however, he uses two variations of it. One is him using it the same way as his Proto incarnation would, firing off his treasures in a rotating volley like a Gatling gun. The second is the method used by the FSN version where using it is as a sign that he's fighting seriously.seriously [[spoiler:such as his fight against Ozymandias]].
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* StrongAndSkilled: He is an incredibly skilled warrior with four Noble Phantasms including his famed invulnerability and can go toe-to-toe with the likes of Karna.
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* StrongAndSkilled: He is an incredibly fast and skilled warrior with four Noble Phantasms including his famed invulnerability and can go toe-to-toe with the likes of Karna.
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* AffablyEvil: He's a conqueror and he espouses his desires to take over the world, but he's not a bad guy and is rather nice to everyone on his side and is even respectful to his enemies. It's less that he's a bad guy and more that he's a good guy with a morally dubious motive.
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* AffablyEvil: He's a conqueror and he who espouses his desires to take over the world, but he's not a bad guy and is rather nice to everyone on his side and is even respectful to his enemies. It's less that he's a bad guy and more that he's a good guy with a morally dubious motive.
* AscendedExtra: A minor character in ''Apocrypha'', but is a Master of Red himself and the overall leader of the Red Faction.
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* HonorBeforeReason: Even when faced with Heracles, an opponent who his B-Rank Noble Phantasm can't even faze, he still refuses to use ''Legend of Dracula'' to give him an edge. [[spoiler:It leads to his death when he and Darnic don't stop arguing about this before Heracles kills them]].
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* HonorBeforeReason: Even when faced with Heracles, an opponent who that his B-Rank Noble Phantasm can't even faze, he still refuses to use ''Legend of Dracula'' to give him himself an edge. [[spoiler:It leads to his death when he and Darnic don't stop arguing about this before Heracles kills them]].
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* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: Not him, but his Servant. In canon, he was the Master of Fionn in the Third Holy Grail War. Here, he was the Master of Heracles in said War.
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* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: Not him, but his Servant. Servant in the Third Holy Grail War. In canon, he was the Master of Fionn in the Third Holy Grail War.Fionn. Here, he was the Master of Heracles in said War.
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An overseer sent by the Church and the Master of Semiramis. It's later revealed that he's actually the Ruler-Class Servant of the Third Holy Grail War Amakusa Shirou Tokisada, and the overall leader of the Rogue Faction together with Julian Ainsworth.
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An overseer sent by the Church and the Master of Semiramis. It's later revealed that he's actually the Ruler-Class Servant of the Third Holy Grail War Amakusa Shirou Tokisada, the leader of the failed Shimabara Rebellion and the overall leader of the Rogue Faction together with Julian Ainsworth.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Intends on using the grail in order to better humanity by any means, including killing those who oppose him.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Intends on using the grail in order Holy Grail to better humanity by any means, means necessary, including killing all those who oppose him.
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* EmergencyTransformation: In Chapter 31, [[spoiler:after being poisoned by Hassan of Serenity, she activates ''Agrius Metamorphosis'' to give her extra strength to fight the Hassan before she dies.]]
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* EmergencyTransformation: In Chapter 31, [[spoiler:after being poisoned by Hassan of Serenity, she activates ''Agrius Metamorphosis'' to give her herself extra strength to fight the Hassan before she dies.dies from the poison.]]
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A noble rogue that is spoken of in tales from the British Isles who steals from the rich and gives to the poor, although he is one of the many people who took the name of 'Robin Hood'. He is the Servant of Beatrice Flowerchild.
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A noble rogue that is spoken of in tales from the British Isles who steals from the rich and gives to the poor, although he this Robin is one of the many people who took the name of 'Robin Hood'. He is the Servant of Beatrice Flowerchild.
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* SinisterScythe: Though described as a sword, his Noble Phantasm ''Harpe'' resembles one. It can penetrate magical defenses, making it an effective counter for Siegfried and Achilles.
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* SinisterScythe: Though described as a sword, his Noble Phantasm ''Harpe'' resembles one. It can penetrate magical defenses, making it an effective counter for against Siegfried and Achilles.Achilles who both have magic-based invulnerability Noble Phantasms.
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* ScreamingWarrior: As a Berserker, he is incapable of speech, causing him to growl and roar in battle.
* StrongAndSkilled: Like in LightNovel/FateZero, he retains his incredible fighting skills despite his madness and rage clouding his sanity, and can turn anything he touches into a Noble Phantasm. He was able to skillfully fight Arthur, Cu Chulainn, and even Gilgamesh.
* StrongAndSkilled: Like in LightNovel/FateZero, he retains his incredible fighting skills despite his madness and rage clouding his sanity, and can turn anything he touches into a Noble Phantasm. He was able to skillfully fight Arthur, Cu Chulainn, and even Gilgamesh.
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* ScreamingWarrior: As a Berserker, he is incapable of speech, causing him to and can only growl and roar in battle.
* StrongAndSkilled: Like in LightNovel/FateZero, he retains his incredible fighting skills despite his madness and rage clouding his sanity, and can turn anything he touches into a low-ranked NoblePhantasm. He was Phantasm such that he is able to skillfully fight Arthur, Mordred, Cu Chulainn, and even Gilgamesh.
* StrongAndSkilled: Like in LightNovel/FateZero, he retains his incredible fighting skills despite his madness and rage clouding his sanity, and can turn anything he touches into a low-ranked Noble
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* BlingOfWar: His armor is described as being ornately designed.
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* BlingOfWar: His armor is described as being ornately designed.
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* HonorBeforeReason: He challenges Arthur to a duel to the death in one-on-one combat and refused the aid of his ally, Robin Hood. However, he ends up wasting most of his mana in the fight and would have died had Atlanta not intervened. He even acknowledges this.
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* HonorBeforeReason: He challenges Arthur to a duel to the death in one-on-one combat and refused the aid of his ally, ally Robin Hood. However, he ends up wasting most of his mana in the fight and would have died had Atlanta not intervened. He even acknowledges this.
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* MasterSwordsman: Is able to match Arthur's swordsmanship and manages to wound him, and he only lost because he ran out of mana. He later fights Brynhild and was able to keep up with her despite the latter being stronger than him.
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* MasterSwordsman: Is able to match Arthur's swordsmanship and manages to wound him, and he only lost because he ran out of mana. He later fights Brynhild and was able to keep up with her despite the latter being stronger than him.
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* YouRemindMeOfX: Gilgamesh compares her to Ishtar at one point, something that Semiramis finds very complimenting. Mordred also finds her similar to her own mother, Morgan Le Fay.
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* YouRemindMeOfX: Gilgamesh compares her to Ishtar at one point, something that Semiramis finds very complimenting. Mordred also finds her similar to her own mother, mother Morgan Le Fay.
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* AxCrazy: Considering the childlike glee she has in sacrificing children to achieve her goals and how unnervingly giddy she is when her Servants kill people, it's clear that there's something very, '''very''' wrong with her.
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* AxCrazy: Considering the childlike glee she has in sacrificing children (including her sister) to achieve her goals and how unnervingly giddy she is when her Servants kill people, it's clear that there's something very, '''very''' wrong with her.
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* YourCheatingHeart: As per the legends. [[spoiler:Justified because of the death of Lucius]]
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* YourCheatingHeart: As per the legends. [[spoiler:Justified Justified because of the death of Lucius]]Lucius.
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* FantasticNuke: His Noble Phantasm ''Brahmastra Kundala'' is basically this. [[spoiler:He uses it to kill Iskandar and his Army when they were within ''Ionian Hetairoi''.]]
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* FantasticNuke: His Noble Phantasm ''Brahmastra Kundala'' is basically this. [[spoiler:He uses it to kill Iskandar and destroy his Army when they were within ''Ionian Hetairoi''.]]
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!!The Knights of Camelot.
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!!The Knights of Camelot.Camelot
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* ParentalSubstitute: As seen in Chapter 32, ACT 2. He looks after Lucius and encountered him when Lucius runs off
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* ParentalSubstitute: As seen in Chapter 32, ACT 2. He looks after Lucius and Guinevere encountered him when Lucius runs off
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