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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: The fact that he praised Michael's early "prank" only served to embolden the creep, leading him to escalate his harassment against Petra during the school year. Naturally, Michael kept pushing his luck until karma came knocking and he found himself in detention, washing zombies, apparently getting bitten in the hand...
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* LazyBum: She's only interested in two things, eating and sleeping. She works for Ella in return for food and help with her homework.
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* BloodKnight: She's extremely aggressive and violent.
* LazyBum: She's only interested intwo three things, fighting, eating and sleeping. She works for Ella in return for food and help with her homework.
* LazyBum: She's only interested in
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* InnocentCohabitation: Being forced to live in the girl dorms, thanks to her gender-bent body, and being Ella's roommate on-top of it, Petra is still a perfect gentleman and never tries to push the envelope. Ella herself is immensely grateful for it.
--> '''Ella''':"You've been the perfect gentleman. You don't leer, and you certainly didn't try to take advantage of the situation by getting all touchy-feely."
--> '''Ella''':"You've been the perfect gentleman. You don't leer, and you certainly didn't try to take advantage of the situation by getting all touchy-feely."
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* AllWomenArePrudes: According to her brother Kai, she's a bit prudish and, in fact, faints when she accidentally gets a peek at Peter's "Mr. Happy." (His words.)
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* StarfishAlien: It's not described in great detail, but it has ten fingers on a hand that feel like bones covered in old, dusty silk. It also has an elephant like trunk, enormous droopy jowls, a lip-less mouth full of sharp teeth, grey eyes, and it can change colour.
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* StarfishAlien: It's not described BiggerOnTheInside: It lives under Petra's bed in great detail, a somewhat cramped room, but it has ten fingers on there's enough room for it, Petra, a hand that feel like bones covered in old, dusty silk. It also has an elephant like trunk, enormous droopy jowls, a lip-less mouth full of sharp teeth, grey eyes, kitchen, and it can change colour. other things.
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* BiggerOnTheInside: It lives under Petra's bed in a somewhat cramped room, but there's enough room for it, Petra, a kitchen, and other things.
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* BiggerOnTheInside: It lives under Petra's bed LivingEmotionalCrutch: Second only to Ella, it's the being Petra runs to when they want to curl up into a ball and hide.
* StarfishAlien: It's not described ina somewhat cramped room, great detail, but there's enough room for it, Petra, it has ten fingers on a kitchen, hand that feel like bones covered in old, dusty silk. It also has an elephant like trunk, enormous droopy jowls, a lip-less mouth full of sharp teeth, grey eyes, and other things.it can change color.
* StarfishAlien: It's not described in
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* AllMenArePerverts: His first act in the story is turning Peter into a girl with drugs and using hypnotic suggestions to try and make the new woman madly in love with him. He regrets it when Petra is given the green-light by the teachers to retaliate and beat the snot out of him for three minutes.
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* AllMenArePerverts: His first act in the story is turning Peter into a girl with drugs and using hypnotic suggestions to try and make the new woman madly in love with him. He regrets it when Petra is given the green-light by the teachers to retaliate and beat the snot out of him for three minutes.minutes, with Sir Grieve even giving Petra pointers on how to make it hurt.
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* You'reInsane: When he hears how often and how quickly Petra has transformed herself, he exclaims, "Are you insane?!"
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* You'reInsane: YoureInsane: When he hears how often and how quickly Petra has transformed herself, he exclaims, "Are you insane?!"
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* AlchemyIsMagic: He created the cat girl potion for Petra, which drastically transformed her body in a few minutes.
* AmazingTechnicolourPopulation: He's purple. Why he's purple is unknown.
* AmazingTechnicolourPopulation: He's purple. Why he's purple is unknown.
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* You'reInsane: When he hears how often and how quickly Petra has transformed herself, he exclaims, "Are you insane?!"
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* You'reInsane: When he hears how often and how quickly Petra has transformed herself, he exclaims, "Are you insane?!"insane?!"
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Ella's older brother.
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* BigWordShout: Upon hearing that Petra has rapidly transformed herself over a period of two weeks, he shouts, "TWO OR THREE DAYS!"
* You'reInsane: When he hears how often and how quickly Petra has transformed herself, he exclaims, "Are you insane?!"
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* PhlebotinumOverload: Thanks to rapid-fire shapeshifts, mostly unwilling, her body's forgotten what it's supposed to be like and started shifting at random, starting in chapter 44 and moving on to chapter 45. Ella's brother Kai calls it "Rapid Shifting Syndrome" and Petra's got it '''bad'''. According to Kai, it's a miracle it hasn't happened sooner.
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* PhlebotinumOverload: Thanks to rapid-fire shapeshifts, mostly unwilling, her body's forgotten what it's supposed to be like and started shifting at random, starting in chapter 44 and moving on to chapter 45. Ella's brother Kai calls it "Rapid Shifting Transformation Syndrome" and Petra's got it '''bad'''. According to Kai, it's a miracle it hasn't happened sooner. It doesn't help that the nurse is pretty ticked that a certain someone swiped some potions before the start of detention. OUCH!
