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dewicking Senpai Kohai
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This older disciple is Ling Qi's [[SenpaiKohai senpai]]. While sometimes flirtatious, other times Liao Zhu acts as a mentor or older brother to Ling Qi.
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This older disciple is Ling Qi's [[SenpaiKohai senpai]].senpai. While sometimes flirtatious, other times Liao Zhu acts as a mentor or older brother to Ling Qi.
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Uncanny Valley is IUEO now and the subjective version has been split; cleaning up misuse and ZCE in the process
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* UncannyValley: Her body is made of white cloth stitched together to form a humanoid shape save for her face which is made of flesh with glass eyes, the stitched together seams that run across her body and under her dress ''bleed'' and her movements, while smooth, are indescribably unsettling.
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Up To Eleven is a defunct trope
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* TheAce: An administrative genius capable of running entire ministries single handedly, a revolutionary figure that rallied an entire province against its corrupt dukes, a charismatic orator that convinced an Imperial Throne to support her uprising against one of their own provinces, and one of the most powerful cultivators in the whole of the Celestial Empire. Cai Shenhua already had the makings of a prodigy back during her relative youth, having reached the 5th realm at by the age of 40, before somehow managing to progress to the 8th realm in a mere ten years, [[UpToEleven achieving the peak of cultivation at the age of 50]] [[BeyondTheImpossible in a setting where even the greatest talents achieve the 8th realm well into their 400s]], cementing her as this.
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* TheAce: An administrative genius capable of running entire ministries single handedly, a revolutionary figure that rallied an entire province against its corrupt dukes, a charismatic orator that convinced an Imperial Throne to support her uprising against one of their own provinces, and one of the most powerful cultivators in the whole of the Celestial Empire. Cai Shenhua already had the makings of a prodigy back during her relative youth, having reached the 5th realm at by the age of 40, before somehow managing to progress to the 8th realm in a mere ten years, [[UpToEleven achieving the peak of cultivation at the age of 50]] 50 [[BeyondTheImpossible in a setting where even the greatest talents achieve the 8th realm well into their 400s]], cementing her as this.
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fixed lore
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* {{Turncoat}}: Betrayed the sect and joined the Ha Y'ith Kai
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* {{Turncoat}}: Betrayed the sect and joined the Ha Y'ith Ya L'ith Kai
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A historically fractured province of the Empire composed of many disparate groups and interests. The Emerald Seas is a land primarily dominated by dense forests, and was originally ruled by the Weilu during the pre-imperial era and the throughout the First Dynasty before their [[TheUnsolvedMystery mysterious disappearance]]. Rulership of the province has since had the dubious honor of exchanging hands more than any other territory of the Empire, passing onto the Xi, then the Hui and recently the Cai.
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A historically fractured province of the Empire composed of many disparate groups and interests. The Emerald Seas is a land primarily dominated by dense forests, and was originally ruled by the Weilu during the pre-imperial era and the then throughout the First Dynasty before their [[TheUnsolvedMystery mysterious disappearance]]. Rulership of the province has since had the dubious honor of exchanging hands more than any other territory of the Empire, passing onto the Xi, then the Hui and recently the Cai.
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* EvilIsPetty: Turned on the empire, got a lot of fellow disciples who had never wronged him killed, and started a long complicated scheme to kill Ling Qi over a minor squable they had in the outer sect.
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* EvilIsPetty: Turned on the empire, got a lot of fellow disciples who had never wronged him killed, and started a long complicated scheme to kill Ling Qi over a minor squable they had in the outer sect.Outer Sect.
* KillItWithWater: How [[SnakePeople Bai Meizhen]] dealt with his last base. She used a talisman to summon a lake's worth of water in the middle of his base, destroying all his work and letting [[SnakesAreSinister Bai Cui]]
* TheWormThatWalks: While he isn't there yet, this seems to be the direction Yan Renshu is headed with his cultivation. In the Outer Sect he moved on a carpet of worms that fell of his robes, had a bound spirit beast worm, had large pits filled with smaller worms, and the art it all seemed to be based on was all about summoning worms to drain the qi of his opponents.
* KillItWithWater: How [[SnakePeople Bai Meizhen]] dealt with his last base. She used a talisman to summon a lake's worth of water in the middle of his base, destroying all his work and letting [[SnakesAreSinister Bai Cui]]
* TheWormThatWalks: While he isn't there yet, this seems to be the direction Yan Renshu is headed with his cultivation. In the Outer Sect he moved on a carpet of worms that fell of his robes, had a bound spirit beast worm, had large pits filled with smaller worms, and the art it all seemed to be based on was all about summoning worms to drain the qi of his opponents.
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* Turncoat: Betrayed the sect and joined the Ha Y'ith Kai
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* Turncoat: {{Turncoat}}: Betrayed the sect and joined the Ha Y'ith Kai
