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* TheWorldsExpertOnGettingKilled: He knows about the Evil Faerie and has managed to survive in the forest just fine until the children arrive, upon which he dies before you can see the present version of him. Justified in that it's not his skills or knowledge that protect him, but his cat, and he lent his cat to Lorinc on purpose to protect the children.
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* TheWorldsExpertOnGettingKilled: He knows about the Evil Faerie and has managed to survive in the forest just fine until the children arrive, upon which he dies before you can see the present version of him. Justified in that it's not his skills or knowledge that protect him, but his cat, and Justified, as he lent his cat knowingly gave up what protected him (his cat) to Lorinc on purpose in order to protect save the children.
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* AlwaysWithYou: Yuliya gets to retroactively invoke this at the end of the game. After being [[spoiler:brought back to life, she gets to explain to her friends, lamenting that she missed their recent adventures, that she literally was with them the whole time (as a ghost)]].
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* AlwaysWithYou: Yuliya gets to retroactively invoke this at the end of the game. After being [[spoiler:brought back to life, she gets to explain to her friends, friends (who were lamenting that she missed their recent adventures, adventures) that she literally was with them the whole time (as a ghost)]].
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->'''Voiced by:''' Gerran Howell (English), Kengo Kawanishi (Japanese)
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->'''Voiced by:''' Gerran Howell (English), Kengo Kawanishi Creator/KengoKawanishi (Japanese)
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->'''Voiced by:''' Naomi [=McDonald=] (English), Miyuki Kobori (Japanese)
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->'''Voiced by:''' Naomi [=McDonald=] Creator/NaomiMcDonald (English), Miyuki Kobori (Japanese)
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->'''Voiced by:''' Teresa Gallagher (English), Ayumu Murase (Japanese)
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->'''Voiced by:''' Teresa Gallagher Creator/TeresaGallagher (English), Ayumu Murase Creator/AyumuMurase (Japanese)
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->'''Voiced by:''' Emma Pierson (English), Mika Takashita (Japanese)
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->'''Voiced by:''' Emma Pierson Creator/EmmaPierson (English), Mika Takashita (Japanese)
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* TheBigGuy: Lorinc doesn't just act as the big brother of the other children, he's literally the biggest of them, being tall and solidly built. While it's implied he does more than it outside of the plot, the main heavy lifting we see him do is holding Herman so the other boy can open a window.
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* KnightOfCerebus: Once you see him, the fun times are over and the game gets ''much'' more serious. After that point, even older plot points are re-examined in a new light. This is even invoked in universe, when Lorinc says he can't but be scared of ''you'' now.
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* KnightOfCerebus: Once you see him, the fun times are over and the game gets ''much'' more serious. After that point, even older plot points are re-examined in a new light. This is even invoked in universe, when Lorinc says he can't but be scared of ''you'' now.after seeing how terrifyingly your powers can be used.
