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* CoveredWithScars: To what extent is never fully explained due to only using his mana to heal in a way that either prevents debilitation or compromising his identity, but Rio's torso has all the markings you'd expect from someone who's made a career of fighting government oppression.
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* CoveredWithScars: To what extent is never fully explained due to only using his mana to heal in a way that either prevents debilitation or compromising his identity, but Rio's torso has all the markings you'd expect from someone who's made a career of fighting government oppression. He later tells Hilda that Boss told him that "scars make a man" and remind him of things that really matter.
* ItsPersonalWithTheDragon: He has a more direct conflict with Dark than with Embryo himself, starting from their first encounter when he fights Dark to prevent him from taking Hilda.
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* {{BFG}}: Its compressed particle beam gun, a.k.a. Buster Rifle
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* AnArmAndALeg: During the final battle, it loses its shield arm and Rio continues to fight without it.
* {{BFG}}: Its compressed particle beam gun, a.k.a. BusterRifleRifle.
* {{BFG}}: Its compressed particle beam gun, a.k.a. Buster
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* YouCantFightFate: He has this attitude, feeling it's pointless to try and deviate from the purpose Embryo created him for, no matter how much he hates it.
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Commander of the Network militia.
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* DefrostingIceQueen: In the early chapters, Hilda retains her distrust towards men and Mana users in general. Fortunately, Rio's kindness and chivalry show her not all Mana users are her enemy and is a major contributor to her character growth.
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* DefrostingIceQueen: In the early chapters, Hilda retains her distrust towards men and Mana users in general. Fortunately, Rio's kindness and chivalry show her not all Mana users are her enemy enemies and is a major contributor to her character growth.
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* {{Foil}}: To each other. Tanya is more outgoing and amorous while Irene is more introverted and reserved.
* ShadowArchetype: To Kaname and Naga
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* {{Foil}}: To each other. Tanya is more outgoing and amorous while Irene Irma is more introverted and reserved.
* ShadowArchetype: To Kaname andNagaNaga. Despite fighting alongside Rio during the DRAGON invasion and later the Misurugi fleet, they had no problem siding with Embryo after he captured them, and they even happily gloat about how they've "gotten over him". Meanwhile, Kaname and Naga begin as Rio's enemies, but the former gains respect for Rio after he stood up to her without a machine of his own, and they eventually become his allies.
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* BadBoss: Even worse than in canon, since she forces the Network survivors under her thumb and constantly holds threats of kicking them out should they step out of line. This also extends to any Norma who does not follow her same mindset about them.
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Although, as stated, Jill comes across as cold and uncaring over Rio's mixture of rage and grief over Sarah's death, Jill's not wrong about it either. The Network had likely informed Rio about the [=DRAGON=]s and probably should have figured that Sarah had met an early death like Norma usually do. Plus his emotional state would put him at risk of discovery.
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** Although, as stated, Jill comes across as cold and uncaring over Rio's mixture of rage and grief over Sarah's death, Jill's not wrong about it either. The Network had likely informed Rio about the [=DRAGON=]s and probably should have figured that Sarah had met an early death like Norma usually do. Plus his emotional state would put him at risk of discovery.
* YoungAndInCharge: The leader of the Armorers despite being their youngest member.
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The human overseer of ArzenalArzenal.
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* TearsOfJoy: Ange was happy to have Momoka by her side while facing their execution.
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* FallenPrincess: Implied. After surviving the world calamity as seven years pass, Misty becomes one when her kingdom is destroyed and most likely loses her family.
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* JerkassRealization: In Chapter 21, she ends up storming off of Lamia's house, getting angry at the way Lamia is shown to care for Vivian, refusing to believe that everything around her is real. Later, after she calms down, she finally realizes she's jealous of Vivian for having a mother who truly cares for her, and wonders if she would be happy to see Vivian go through the same misery as she did.
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* ForWantOfANail: After arriving with the others in the True Earth, to better explain his theory that where they are is a parallel earth, Rio mentions that during his search to find Hilda after she escaped, he got lost and nearly took the wrong turn before he found her.
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*ShipSinking: With Dark after the second death of the children, Embryo refusing to revive them again, Dark just stating how things are under Embryo's law drives Ersha to defect back to the Aurora, thus killing any future between her and Dark.
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* ItWasAGift: The bracelet that Rio gave her when they were kids. She took a part-time job in Arzenal's mall to buy it back.
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* ItWasAGift: The bracelet that Rio Aaron gave her when they were kids. She took a part-time job in Arzenal's mall to buy it back.
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* HiddenDepths: Is actually a pretty good cook (a reference to the Cross Ange UsefulNotes/PSVita game) and turns out to have a lovely singing voice.
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* HiddenDepths: Is actually a pretty good cook (a reference to the Cross Ange UsefulNotes/PSVita ''Cross Ange'' Platform/PSVita game) and turns out to have a lovely singing voice.
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*PetTheDog: An aside comment from Emma reveals that after Misty was recovered following Ange and Hilda's escape, she contacted Emma and asked that the Inspector not punish Ange too harshly.
*WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Averted. The epilogue reveals that she not only survived Embryo's attempt to merge the two Earths but established her own community of survivors on the grounds of the Rosenblum Imperial Palace.
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*PetTheDog: An aside comment from Emma reveals that after Misty was recovered following Ange and Hilda's escape, she contacted Emma and asked that the Inspector not punish Ange too harshly.
*WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Averted. The epilogue reveals that she not only survived Embryo's attempt to merge the two Earths but established her own community of survivors on the grounds of the Rosenblum Imperial Palace.
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* HeroesPreferRedheads: His relationship with Hilda.
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* IHatePastMe: she is a bit more prevalent than in the canon, thanks to Rio's influence. She admits that she hates herself in the past for doing terrible, shameful, and disgusting things in Arzenal just to survive long enough to escape and reunite with her mother, like being Zola's plaything for protection, secretly hating Chris and Roselie and manipulating them by using sex then throwing them away; sabotage the Vilkiss and almost kill Ange.
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* IHatePastMe: she is a bit more prevalent than in the canon, thanks to Rio's influence. She Hilda admits to Rio that she hates herself in the past for doing terrible, shameful, and disgusting things past deeds in Arzenal just to survive long enough to escape and reunite with her mother, like being Zola's plaything for protection, secretly hating Chris and Roselie and manipulating them by using sex then throwing them away; sabotage the Vilkiss and almost kill Ange.
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* IHatePastMe: she is a bit more prevalent than in the canon, thanks to Rio's influence. [[spoiler: She admits that she hates herself in the past for doing terrible, shameful, and disgusting things in Arzenal just to survive long enough to escape and reunite her mother, like being Zola's plaything for protection, secretly hating Chris and Roselie and manipulating them by using sex then throwing them away; sabotage the Vilkiss and almost kill Ange.]]
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* IHatePastMe: she is a bit more prevalent than in the canon, thanks to Rio's influence. [[spoiler: She admits that she hates herself in the past for doing terrible, shameful, and disgusting things in Arzenal just to survive long enough to escape and reunite with her mother, like being Zola's plaything for protection, secretly hating Chris and Roselie and manipulating them by using sex then throwing them away; sabotage the Vilkiss and almost kill Ange.]]
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* IHatePastMe: A bit more prevalent than in canon due to Rio's influence.
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* TheDreaded: Before it destroyed their submarine, Chaplain recognized it as "The Nightmare of Zion".
