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* TheChosenOne: Less prophecy but more on the basis of probability, many believed [[https://www.deviantart.com/comments/1/889105057/4945555746 with reasonable grounds]] that she have the best shot at succeeding in unifying the Pony Tribes and other races of New Equus due to her already being very intelligent and cunning, managed to find out much about Ponykind's unified past by herself, and was in imminent accession to a position of authority which would give her the resources and influence to do it years later. That Sunny Starscout managed to do it years earlier despite her incredibly low odds of success (less than 0.000001% by Interstellar Federation of Friendship scientists' calculations) took everybody by surprise.
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* TheChosenOne: Less prophecy but more on the basis of probability, many believed [[https://www.deviantart.com/comments/1/889105057/4945555746 with reasonable grounds]] that she would have had the best shot at succeeding in unifying the Pony Tribes and other races of New Equus due to her already being very intelligent and cunning, managed to find out much about Ponykind's unified past by herself, and was in imminent accession to a position of authority which would give her the resources and influence to do it years later. That Sunny Starscout managed to do it years earlier despite her incredibly low odds of success (less than 0.000001% by Interstellar Federation of Friendship scientists' calculations) took everybody by surprise.
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: It is [[https://www.deviantart.com/comments/1/889105057/4945555746 noted]] by Starry Search that Izzy discovering Sunny's message at all is a statistical improbability.
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: It is [[https://www.deviantart.com/comments/1/889105057/4945555746 noted]] by Starry Search that Izzy discovering Sunny's message at all is a [[BeyondTheImpossible statistical improbability.improbability]].
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* OnceDoneNeverForgotten: While Queen Haven was eventually [[https://www.deviantart.com/comments/1/889105057/4979434828 returned]] to the throne, it's noted that because of the monarchy's earlier deception about their ability to fly, the Pegasi [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome never fully trust her again]].
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* OnceDoneNeverForgotten: While Queen Haven was eventually [[https://www.deviantart.com/comments/1/889105057/4979434828 returned]] to the throne, it's noted that because of the monarchy's earlier deception about their ability to fly, the Pegasi [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome Pegasi never fully trust her again]].again.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: While it was done with the best of intentions, Queen Haven's decision to continue her dynasty's deception of their subjects over their ability to fly meant that even after she was restored to the throne, she still lost her subjects' trust.
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-->''"I am '''GENERAL MORNING GLORY!''' Guardian of the Northern Reaches! Slayer of the Valley Hydras! Hammer of the Mountain Warlords...!"'' [Many additional titles listed] ''"... Proud scion of House Glory, the fearless Lioness of Zephyr Heights!'' Face me if you dare!"
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