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** Chapter 3 reveals that [[spoiler:Nepthys, the business conglomerate that Nonomi's family owns, has bought out Abydos' debt from Kaiser Loans and are the new creditor threatening to repossess the school]].
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** Chapter 3 reveals that [[spoiler:Nepthys, [[spoiler:Saint Nepthys, the business conglomerate that Nonomi's family owns, has bought out Abydos' debt from Kaiser Loans and are the new creditor threatening to repossess the school]].
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* TheAce: While she's a sleepyhead who finds fighting to be a pain, she's actually the strongest student in Abydos. [[spoiler: It's to the point Hina both fears and respects Hoshino, remembering what she was like when she was young. Not to mention, Black Suit wanted ''her'' because he saw Hoshino had the potential to become the strongest Mystic.]]
* AdultsAreUseless: [[spoiler: While hiding it extremely well, she dislikes adults, because she sees them to be untrustworthy. Considering the problems with Kaiser and the Abydos debt, it's understandable. Even through her character development from being a hardboiled loner to a chill girl, she still viewed them in a negative manner, such as at first thinking Sensei was an useless adult because they had to be carried by Shiroko and didn't trust them at first. At the very least, she saw Sensei to be an actual good adult over time.]]
* AdultsAreUseless: [[spoiler: While hiding it extremely well, she dislikes adults, because she sees them to be untrustworthy. Considering the problems with Kaiser and the Abydos debt, it's understandable. Even through her character development from being a hardboiled loner to a chill girl, she still viewed them in a negative manner, such as at first thinking Sensei was an useless adult because they had to be carried by Shiroko and didn't trust them at first. At the very least, she saw Sensei to be an actual good adult over time.]]
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* TheAce: While she's a sleepyhead who finds fighting to be a pain, she's actually the strongest student in Abydos. [[spoiler: It's [[spoiler:It's to the point Hina both fears and respects Hoshino, remembering what she was like when she was young. Not to mention, Black Suit wanted ''her'' because he saw Hoshino had the potential to become the strongest Mystic.]]
* AdultsAreUseless:[[spoiler: While [[spoiler:While hiding it extremely well, she dislikes adults, because she sees them to be untrustworthy. Considering the problems with Kaiser and the Abydos debt, it's understandable. Even through her character development from being a hardboiled loner to a chill girl, she still viewed them in a negative manner, such as at first thinking Sensei was an useless adult because they had to be carried by Shiroko and didn't trust them at first. At the very least, she saw Sensei to be an actual good adult over time.]]
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* BrilliantButLazy: Despite always looking for an opportunity to sleep more, she does show maturity from time to time. [[spoiler: Knowing her past and the fact '''Hina''' respects and fears her shows she was TheAce even as a first year.]]
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* BrilliantButLazy: Despite always looking for an opportunity to sleep more, she does show maturity from time to time. [[spoiler: Knowing [[spoiler:Knowing her past and the fact '''Hina''' respects and fears is in awe of her shows she was TheAce even as a first year.]]
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* BrokenAce: Behind her sleepy oji-san persona, she hides a lot of pain and trauma. [[spoiler: She found Yume's corpse, had to keep on persisting in keeping Abydos alive, and is hinted she's still not over Yume's death.]]
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* BrokenAce: Behind her sleepy oji-san persona, she hides a lot of pain and trauma. [[spoiler: She [[spoiler:She found Yume's corpse, had to keep on persisting in keeping Abydos alive, and is heavily hinted she's still not over Yume's death.]]
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* DealWithTheDevil: [[spoiler: In the hopes of clearing Abydos's debt, Hoshino sought to join Kaiser at Black Suit's request. Kaiser's response is to use her departure as a loophole to destroy the school.]]
* DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife: [[spoiler: She reveals she joined the Abydos Student Council because she felt aimless in life.]]
* DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife: [[spoiler: She reveals she joined the Abydos Student Council because she felt aimless in life.]]
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* DealWithTheDevil: [[spoiler: In [[spoiler:In the hopes of clearing Abydos's debt, Hoshino sought to join Kaiser at Black Suit's request. Kaiser's response is to use her departure as a loophole to destroy the school.]]
* DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife:[[spoiler: She [[spoiler:She reveals she joined the Abydos Student Council because she felt aimless in life.]]
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* {{Sleepyhead}}: She's always drowsy or taking a nap. She's [[EstablishingCharacterMoment introduced]] in the Abydos story by Serika having to drag her out of her nap to go on a mission. [[spoiler: The reason is in her Relationship Stories where it reveals she patrols Abydos at night for troublemakers.]]
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* {{Sleepyhead}}: She's always drowsy or taking a nap. She's [[EstablishingCharacterMoment introduced]] in the Abydos story by Serika having to drag her out of her nap to go on a mission. [[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The reason is in her Relationship Stories where it reveals she patrols Abydos at night for troublemakers.]]
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** In her Swimsuit version relationship stories, she asks if Sensei wants to nap on the hammock with her. When they decline at first, she expected that response but she admits she wouldn't mind it if they really ''did'' want to take a nap with her which they finally obliged. It at least shows her being trustful of Sensei [[spoiler: despite her dislike of adults.]]
** [[spoiler: During the beginning of Volume F]] when Shiroko gets a message from Sensei asking if she was okay, Hoshino states how she wished Sensei would check on her too.
* SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids: [[spoiler: Before she became the nice, chill girl we knew, she was aggressive, logical, and cold; she butt-heads with her senpai Yume who was an idealistic girl.]]
** [[spoiler: During the beginning of Volume F]] when Shiroko gets a message from Sensei asking if she was okay, Hoshino states how she wished Sensei would check on her too.
* SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids: [[spoiler: Before she became the nice, chill girl we knew, she was aggressive, logical, and cold; she butt-heads with her senpai Yume who was an idealistic girl.]]
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** In her Swimsuit version relationship stories, she asks if Sensei wants to nap on the hammock with her. When they decline at first, she expected that response but she admits she wouldn't mind it if they really ''did'' want to take a nap with her which they finally obliged. It at least shows her being trustful of Sensei [[spoiler: despite [[spoiler:in spite of her dislike of adults.]]
** [[spoiler: During the beginning of Volume F]] when Shiroko gets a message from Sensei asking if she was okay, Hoshino states how she wished Sensei would check on hertoo.
too and Serika tells her she has to be more direct to which Hoshino actually shows a rare case of awkwardness.
* SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids:[[spoiler: Before [[spoiler:Before she became the nice, chill girl we knew, she was aggressive, logical, and cold; she butt-heads with her senpai Yume who was an idealistic girl.]]
** [[spoiler: During the beginning of Volume F]] when Shiroko gets a message from Sensei asking if she was okay, Hoshino states how she wished Sensei would check on her
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* TragicKeepsake: Her foldable riot shield and the poster with tape all over in her room came from [[spoiler: Yume. Aside her body, her shield was one of the only things Hoshino could recover.]]
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* TragicKeepsake: Her foldable riot shield and the poster with tape all over in her room came from [[spoiler: Yume. [[spoiler:Yume. Aside her body, her shield was one of the only things Hoshino could recover.recover and use.]]
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* ShipTease: Hints of it towards Sensei, throughout her relationship stories. Especially in Episode 4: Midnight Ranger, where she says how Sensei is very caring towards her than most people and glomps onto Sensei's arm but having to let go several times because of passerbys.
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* ShipTease: Hints of it towards Sensei, throughout her relationship stories. Especially in Episode ''Episode 4: Midnight Ranger, Ranger'', where she says how that Sensei is very much more caring towards her than most people and glomps onto Sensei's people. She also briefly breaks character when she asks Sensei to escort her home, asking as a schoolgirl instead of an 'old man' in a touching display of trust.
--> '''Hoshino''': "I think I need you to hold my armbut having to let go several times because of passerbys. on the way home. I'm so dizzy."
--> '''Hoshino''': "Come on, let's go. You wouldn't deny an innocent young maiden's request, would you?"
--> '''Hoshino''': "I think I need you to hold my arm
--> '''Hoshino''': "Come on, let's go. You wouldn't deny an innocent young maiden's request, would you?"
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** Chapter 3 reveals that [[spoiler:Nepthys, the business conglomerate that Nonomi's family owns, has bought out Abydos' debt from Kaiser Loans and are the new creditor threatening to repossess the school]].
* DyingTown: The entire Abydos district is still barely clinging to life, but as the sand continues to encroach on the few remaining habitable areas and the district remains saddled with debt, more and more residents are closing up shop and leaving, threatening to turn the entire district into a complete GhostTown.
* DyingTown: The entire Abydos district is still barely clinging to life, but as the sand continues to encroach on the few remaining habitable areas and the district remains saddled with debt, more and more residents are closing up shop and leaving, threatening to turn the entire district into a complete GhostTown.
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** Their students have inspirations, such as Hoshino being one for the god Horus (her shotgun being named Eye of Horus for example) and Shiroko for Anubis (her surname means "sand wolf", as in the jackal).
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** Their students have inspirations, such as Hoshino being one for the god Horus (her shotgun and shield being named Eye of Horus and Iron Horus respectively, for example) and Shiroko for Anubis (her surname means "sand wolf", as in the jackal).
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* ImpoverishedPatrician: While Nonomi and her family are still well off enough that she doesn't have to worry about her spending habits, Nonomi still admits that her family business has been steadily declining due to failed investments in the Abydos district's rail lines.
* RebelliousPrincess: Nonomi admits that [[spoiler:she was originally supposed to enroll in the Highlander Railway Academy, which is essentially owned by her family. However, she decided to defy them and enroll in Abydos, instead.]]
* DamselInDistress: At one point, [[spoiler:she is kidnapped by the Helmet Gang, forcing Sensei and the Task Force to go out to rescue her]].
* ImprobableAimingSkills: The anime depicts Serika as having the best marksmanship out of the Task Force, being able to snipe a crate falling in midair with perfect timing.
* ImprobableAimingSkills: The anime depicts Serika as having the best marksmanship out of the Task Force, being able to snipe a crate falling in midair with perfect timing.
* IOweYouMyLife: She's incredibly loyal to the Foreclosure Task Force and dedicated to helping clear the school's debt due to [[spoiler:Hoshino and Nonomi bringing her out of poverty and enrolling her in Abydos]].
* GoodIsDumb: Hoshino's flashback reveals that due to Yume's friendly and trusting attitude, she was prone to falling for all sorts of scams that would have exacerbated the school's debt had Hoshino not been there to bail her out.
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* PosthumousCharacter: In Volume 3, it reveals she died three years ago, her body found by Hoshino. As of the present, it's unknown how it happened. She occasionaly still features in {{flashback}} with Hoshino.
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* PosthumousCharacter: In Volume 3, it reveals she died three years ago, her body found by Hoshino. As of the present, it's unknown how it happened. happened, though it's been officially declared an accident. She occasionaly occasionally still features in {{flashback}} with Hoshino.
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They are the main focus club in Main Scenario Volume 1: Foreclosure Task Force as well as the upcoming ''Blue Archive: The Animation''.
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They are the main focus club in Main Scenario Volume 1: Foreclosure Task Force as well as the upcoming ''Blue Archive: The Animation''.
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'''Schools:''' '''Abydos High School''' | [[Characters/BlueArchiveAriusBranchSchool Arius Satellite School]] | [[Characters/BlueArchiveGehennaAcademy Gehenna Academy]] | [[Characters/BlueArchiveHyakkiyakoAllianceAcademy Hyakkiyako Alliance Academy]] | [[Characters/BlueArchiveKronosSchoolOfJournalism Kronos School of Journalism]] | [[Characters/BlueArchiveMillenniumScienceSchool Millennium Science School]] | [[Characters/BlueArchiveRedWinterFederalAcademy Red Winter Federal Academy]] | [[Characters/BlueArchiveShanhaijingSeniorSecondarySchool Shanhaijing Senior Secondary School]] | [[Characters/BlueArchiveSRTSpecialAcademy SRT Special Academy]] | [[Characters/BlueArchiveTrinityGeneralSchool Trinity General School]] | [[Characters/BlueArchiveValkyriePoliceAcademy Valkyrie Police Academy]] | [[Characters/BlueArchiveSchoolsOthers Others]]\\
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'''Schools:''' '''Abydos High School''' | [[Characters/BlueArchiveAriusBranchSchool Arius Satellite School]] | [[Characters/BlueArchiveGehennaAcademy Gehenna Academy]] | [[Characters/BlueArchiveHighlanderRailwayAcademy Highlander Railway Academy]] | [[Characters/BlueArchiveHyakkiyakoAllianceAcademy Hyakkiyako Alliance Academy]] | [[Characters/BlueArchiveKronosSchoolOfJournalism Kronos School of Journalism]] | [[Characters/BlueArchiveMillenniumScienceSchool Millennium Science School]] | [[Characters/BlueArchiveRedWinterFederalAcademy Red Winter Federal Academy]] | [[Characters/BlueArchiveShanhaijingSeniorSecondarySchool Shanhaijing Senior Secondary School]] | [[Characters/BlueArchiveSRTSpecialAcademy SRT Special Academy]] | [[Characters/BlueArchiveTrinityGeneralSchool Trinity General School]] | [[Characters/BlueArchiveValkyriePoliceAcademy Valkyrie Police Academy]] | [[Characters/BlueArchiveSchoolsOthers Others]]\\
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[[folder:Yume '''(Spoiler Warning)''']]
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Zero context example and the band is of six members, not 5.
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* FiveManBand: Fitting, since the Foreclosure Task Force are literally the last five students in the school.
** TheLeader: Hoshino
** TheLancer: Serika
** TheHeart: Nonomi
** TheSmartGuy: Ayane
** TheBigGuy: Shiroko
** TheSixthRanger: Hifumi
** TheLeader: Hoshino
** TheLancer: Serika
** TheHeart: Nonomi
** TheSmartGuy: Ayane
** TheBigGuy: Shiroko
** TheSixthRanger: Hifumi
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They are the main focus club in Main Scenario Volume 1: Foreclosure Task Force.
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They are the main focus club in Main Scenario Volume 1: Foreclosure Task Force.Force as well as the upcoming ''Blue Archive: The Animation''.
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[-[[caption-width-right:350:L - R: Ayane, Shiroko, Serika, Hoshino, Nonomi]]-]
