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* BerserkButton: ''don't'' refer to him as a giant.
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* BerserkButton: ''don't'' ''Don't'' refer to him as a giant.
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* EasilyForgiven: Tracker is baffled at why Leopard keeps Fumeli around, even after [[spoiler: his manipulations]], Leopard merely replies he needs someone to carry his bow.
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* EasilyForgiven: Tracker is baffled at why Leopard keeps Fumeli around, even after [[spoiler: his manipulations]], [[spoiler:his manipulations]]; Leopard merely replies he needs someone to carry his bow.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Tracker definitely thinks so, and Leopard acts really different whenever Fumeli is around. It turns out [[spoiler: Tracker is right, and that Fumeli had been drugging Leopard in order to turn him against Tracker.]]
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* ManipulativeBastard: Tracker definitely thinks so, and Leopard acts really different whenever Fumeli is around. It turns out [[spoiler: Tracker [[spoiler:Tracker is right, and that Fumeli had been drugging Leopard in order to turn him against Tracker.]]
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* UnreliableExpositor: She gives several conflicting stories about who the boy is, and Tracker doesn't trust her for a minute. Then again, this is [[TheParanoiac Tracker]] we're talking about, we'd be shocked if he did trust her.
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* UnreliableExpositor: She gives several conflicting stories about who the boy is, and Tracker doesn't trust her for a minute. Then again, this is [[TheParanoiac Tracker]] we're talking about, about; we'd be shocked if he did trust her.
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* HoistByHerOwnPetard: Her attempts to find her son [[spoiler: inadvertently leads her great enemy right to him.]]
* MyGreatestFailure: She views her son being kidnapped and [[spoiler: eventually falling under the sway of the inpundulu and Sasabonsam]] to be hers.
* MyGreatestFailure: She views her son being kidnapped and [[spoiler: eventually falling under the sway of the inpundulu and Sasabonsam]] to be hers.
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* HoistByHerOwnPetard: Her attempts to find her son [[spoiler: inadvertently [[spoiler:inadvertently leads her great enemy right to him.]]
* MyGreatestFailure: She views her son being kidnapped and[[spoiler: eventually [[spoiler:eventually falling under the sway of the inpundulu and Sasabonsam]] to be hers.
* MyGreatestFailure: She views her son being kidnapped and
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* FatalFlaw: Quite literally her love for Nyka, which [[spoiler: leads to her death when Nyka feeds on her since he's a inpundulu now.]]
* MoralityPet: For Nyka. He genuinely cares about her, it makes things all the more saddening when [[spoiler: he kills her when he becomes an inpundulu.]]
* MoralityPet: For Nyka. He genuinely cares about her, it makes things all the more saddening when [[spoiler: he kills her when he becomes an inpundulu.]]
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* FatalFlaw: Quite literally her love for Nyka, which [[spoiler: leads [[spoiler:leads to her death when Nyka feeds on her since he's a inpundulu now.]]
* MoralityPet: For Nyka. He genuinely cares abouther, her; it makes things all the more saddening when [[spoiler: he [[spoiler:he kills her when he becomes an inpundulu.]]
* MoralityPet: For Nyka. He genuinely cares about
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* DepravedBisexual: He's a former lover of Tracker, as well as the current lover of Nsaka. He also [[spoiler: sold Tracker into sexual slavery, which cost him his eye.]]
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* DepravedBisexual: He's a former lover of Tracker, as well as the current lover of Nsaka. He also [[spoiler: sold [[spoiler:sold Tracker into sexual slavery, which cost him his eye.]]
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: He sincerely loves Nsaka, and he feels some regret for [[spoiler: betraying Tracker.]]
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: He sincerely loves Nsaka, and he feels some regret for [[spoiler: betraying [[spoiler:betraying Tracker.]]
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* LoveRedeems: Surprisingly, yes. His relationship with Nsaka brings out his better qualities, and his love for her proves to be genuine. [[spoiler: He's devastated and filled with shame after he kills her in order to become an inpundulu.]]
* PetTheDog: He helped his current lover Nsaka escape her abusive family, and he never betrayed her as he did with Tracker. [[spoiler: This is dampened slightly by Nyka killing her when he becomes an inpundulu, but it still counts.]]
* PetTheDog: He helped his current lover Nsaka escape her abusive family, and he never betrayed her as he did with Tracker. [[spoiler: This is dampened slightly by Nyka killing her when he becomes an inpundulu, but it still counts.]]
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* LoveRedeems: Surprisingly, yes. His relationship with Nsaka brings out his better qualities, and his love for her proves to be genuine. [[spoiler: He's [[spoiler:He's devastated and filled with shame after he kills her in order to become an inpundulu.]]
* PetTheDog: He helped his current lover Nsaka escape her abusive family, and he never betrayed her as he did with Tracker.[[spoiler: This [[spoiler:This is dampened slightly by Nyka killing her when he becomes an inpundulu, but it still counts.]]
* PetTheDog: He helped his current lover Nsaka escape her abusive family, and he never betrayed her as he did with Tracker.
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* WouldHurtAChild: Downplayed, as the child is a [[EnfantTerrible vicious little shit]], but still. [[spoiler: He incinerates the boy alongside himself.]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: Downplayed, as the child is a [[EnfantTerrible vicious little shit]], but still. [[spoiler: He [[spoiler:He incinerates the boy alongside himself.]]
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* {{Sadist}}: Clearly enjoys toying with the young Tracker, and taunting him about how he'll be eaten until [[spoiler: he is killed by Leopard and Tracker.]]
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* {{Sadist}}: Clearly enjoys toying with the young Tracker, and taunting him about how he'll be eaten until [[spoiler: he [[spoiler:he is killed by Leopard and Tracker.]]
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: He did care about his brother Asanbosam, [[spoiler: taking revenge on Tracker by murdering his lover Mossi and their adopted mingi children.]]
* ForTheEvulz: He and the boy had no real reason why they [[spoiler: killed Tracker's family]], rather than the fact that they could.
* ForTheEvulz: He and the boy had no real reason why they [[spoiler: killed Tracker's family]], rather than the fact that they could.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: He did care about his brother Asanbosam, [[spoiler: taking [[spoiler:taking revenge on Tracker by murdering his lover Mossi and their adopted mingi children.]]
* ForTheEvulz: He and the boy had no real reason why they[[spoiler: killed [[spoiler:killed Tracker's family]], rather than the fact that they could.
* ForTheEvulz: He and the boy had no real reason why they
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* {{Sadist}}: Sasabonsam cruelly taunts Tracker, [[spoiler: telling him how he killed Tracker's family in detail.]]
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* {{Sadist}}: Sasabonsam cruelly taunts Tracker, [[spoiler: telling [[spoiler:telling him how he killed Tracker's family in detail.]]
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* AntiHero: Tracker's pretty rough around the edges, but he's generally one of the more moral members of the group...[[UnreliableNarrator or so he says.]]
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* AntiHero: Tracker's pretty rough around the edges, but he's generally one of the more moral members of the group... [[UnreliableNarrator or so he says.]]
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* EnemyMine: He teams up with Nyka and The Aesi to take down the boy once and for all after [[spoiler: the boy and Sasabonsam kills Tracker's whole family.]]
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* EnemyMine: He teams up with Nyka and The Aesi to take down the boy once and for all after [[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the boy and Sasabonsam kills kill Tracker's whole family.]]
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* EyeScream: [[spoiler: In one of the most infamous and graphic scenes in the book, Tracker gets gang-raped by a pack of werehyenas, and then one of them ''sucks his friggin' eyeball out'' for good measure.]] He ends up getting a new eye from a wolf, which just creeps everyone out.
* FatalFlaw: The guy holds a grudge like it's nobody's business, and after [[spoiler: his lover Mossi and their adopted children are brutally murdered, and one driven insane by the trauma of the attack,]] he's driven insane with revenge. He ends the story a bitter, broken man as a result.
* FatalFlaw: The guy holds a grudge like it's nobody's business, and after [[spoiler: his lover Mossi and their adopted children are brutally murdered, and one driven insane by the trauma of the attack,]] he's driven insane with revenge. He ends the story a bitter, broken man as a result.
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* EyeScream: [[spoiler: In [[spoiler:In one of the most infamous and graphic scenes in the book, Tracker gets gang-raped by a pack of werehyenas, and then one of them ''sucks his friggin' eyeball out'' for good measure.]] He ends up getting a new eye from a wolf, which just creeps everyone out.
* FatalFlaw: The guy holds a grudge like it's nobody's business, and after[[spoiler: his [[spoiler:his lover Mossi and their adopted children are brutally murdered, and one driven insane by the trauma of the attack,]] attack]], he's driven insane with revenge. He ends the story a bitter, broken man as a result.
* FatalFlaw: The guy holds a grudge like it's nobody's business, and after
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* HeartbrokenBadass: [[spoiler: After Mossi and his adoptive family die at the hands of Sasabonsam and the boy.]]
* IJustWantToBeLoved: Deep down, Tracker wants a family who'll accept and love him for who he truly is. [[spoiler: He gets his wish, which makes it all the more heartwrenching when its taken from him.]]
* IJustWantToBeLoved: Deep down, Tracker wants a family who'll accept and love him for who he truly is. [[spoiler: He gets his wish, which makes it all the more heartwrenching when its taken from him.]]
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* HeartbrokenBadass: [[spoiler: After [[spoiler:After Mossi and his adoptive family die at the hands of Sasabonsam and the boy.]]
* IJustWantToBeLoved: Deep down, Tracker wants a family who'll accept and love him for who he truly is.[[spoiler: He [[spoiler:He gets his wish, which makes it all the more heartwrenching when its taken from him.]]
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Tracker can be a prick, and he's a misogynist to boot. But he's not a bad guy at heart, his immense amount of trauma keeps him from trusting people. [[CharacterDevelopment He gets better though.]]
* ManlyTears: He openly weeps alongside Mossi after [[spoiler:Sadogo sacrifices himself to save their lives.]]
* IJustWantToBeLoved: Deep down, Tracker wants a family who'll accept and love him for who he truly is.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Tracker can be a prick, and he's a misogynist to boot. But he's not a bad guy at heart, his immense amount of trauma keeps him from trusting people. [[CharacterDevelopment He gets better though.]]
* ManlyTears: He openly weeps alongside Mossi after [[spoiler:Sadogo sacrifices himself to save their lives.]]
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Tracker can be a prick, and he's a misogynist to boot. But he's not a bad guy at heart, his immense amount of trauma keeps him from trusting people. [[CharacterDevelopment He gets better though.]]
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* SanitySlippage: After [[spoiler: Mossi and their adoptive family all die]], Tracker gradually becomes more mentally unstable, focusing only on his revenge.
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* SanitySlippage: After [[spoiler: Mossi [[spoiler:Mossi and their adoptive family all die]], Tracker gradually becomes more mentally unstable, focusing only on his revenge.
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* SexSlave: He's betrayed by Nyka and sold to a group of werehyenas who, in one of the book's most infamous and graphic scenes, [[spoiler: gang rape and suck out Tracker's eyeball.]]
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* SexSlave: He's betrayed by Nyka and sold to a group of werehyenas who, in one of the book's most infamous and graphic scenes, [[spoiler: gang [[spoiler:gang rape and suck out Tracker's eyeball.]]
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* TookALevelInKindness: With the good influence of Mossi, Tracker [[spoiler: reconciles with his long lost mother]] and becomes much happier after they get together and [[spoiler: start a family with the mingi children. But sadly, this doesn't last.]]
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* TookALevelInKindness: With the good influence of Mossi, Tracker [[spoiler: reconciles [[spoiler:reconciles with his long lost mother]] and becomes much happier after they get together and [[spoiler: start [[spoiler:start a family with the mingi children. But sadly, this doesn't last.]]
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* UnresolvedSexualTension: A one sided example with Leopard, Tracker clearly has feelings for him that go beyond friendship, but his jerkassery as well as he and Leopard's complicated friendship puts a damper on any romance that may happen.
* VengeanceFeelsEmpty: After taking his revenge on [[spoiler: Sasabonsam]], he remarks he doesn't feel much better after what happened, it doesn't help that [[spoiler: Leopard dies in his arms]]. Broken by the experience, he starts wandering the earth until he's arrested.
* VitriolicBestBuds: He and Leopard snark at and insult each other often, but it's clear that it's in good fun and the two are good friends despite their differences. [[spoiler: Tracker takes it particularly hard when Leopard dies, made worse that he died in his arms.]]
* WalkingTheEarth: After [[spoiler: killing Sasabonsam, losing Leopard, and watching Nyka kill the boy]], Tracker wanders the world alone for some time before being captured by the Inquisitors.
* WouldHurtAChild: Downplayed, as said child [[spoiler: helped murder his adoptive family]], but still.
* VengeanceFeelsEmpty: After taking his revenge on [[spoiler: Sasabonsam]], he remarks he doesn't feel much better after what happened, it doesn't help that [[spoiler: Leopard dies in his arms]]. Broken by the experience, he starts wandering the earth until he's arrested.
* VitriolicBestBuds: He and Leopard snark at and insult each other often, but it's clear that it's in good fun and the two are good friends despite their differences. [[spoiler: Tracker takes it particularly hard when Leopard dies, made worse that he died in his arms.]]
* WalkingTheEarth: After [[spoiler: killing Sasabonsam, losing Leopard, and watching Nyka kill the boy]], Tracker wanders the world alone for some time before being captured by the Inquisitors.
* WouldHurtAChild: Downplayed, as said child [[spoiler: helped murder his adoptive family]], but still.
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* UnresolvedSexualTension: A one sided example with Leopard, Tracker clearly has feelings for him that go beyond friendship, but his jerkassery as well as he his and Leopard's complicated friendship puts a damper on any romance that may happen.
* VengeanceFeelsEmpty: After taking his revenge on[[spoiler: Sasabonsam]], [[spoiler:Sasabonsam]], he remarks he doesn't feel much better after what happened, happened; it doesn't help that [[spoiler: Leopard [[spoiler:Leopard dies in his arms]]. Broken by the experience, he starts wandering the earth until he's arrested.
* VitriolicBestBuds: He and Leopard snark at and insult each other often, but it's clear that it's in good fun and the two are good friends despite their differences.[[spoiler: Tracker [[spoiler:Tracker takes it particularly hard when Leopard dies, made worse that he died in his arms.]]
* WalkingTheEarth: After[[spoiler: killing [[spoiler:killing Sasabonsam, losing Leopard, and watching Nyka kill the boy]], Tracker wanders the world alone for some time before being captured by the Inquisitors.
* WouldHurtAChild: Downplayed, as said child[[spoiler: helped [[spoiler:helped murder his adoptive family]], but still.
* VengeanceFeelsEmpty: After taking his revenge on
* VitriolicBestBuds: He and Leopard snark at and insult each other often, but it's clear that it's in good fun and the two are good friends despite their differences.
* WalkingTheEarth: After
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* DiedInYourArmsTonight: [[spoiler: Sogolon mortally wounds him, and he dies in Tracker's arms.]]
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* DiedInYourArmsTonight: [[spoiler: Sogolon [[spoiler:Sogolon mortally wounds him, and he dies in Tracker's arms.]]
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* BreakTheHaughty: [[DownplayedTrope Perhaps 'haughty' is the wrong word]], but she's utterly flabbergasted when she learns [[spoiler: Tracker located the writs when she, a long lived moon witch, couldn't.]]
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* BreakTheHaughty: [[DownplayedTrope Perhaps 'haughty' is the wrong word]], but she's utterly flabbergasted when she learns [[spoiler: Tracker [[spoiler:Tracker located the writs when she, a long lived moon witch, couldn't.]]
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* ForTheEvulz: There wasn't really a core reason why the kid and Sasabonsam [[spoiler: killed Tracker's whole family]], rather than the fact that they could and it ''amused'' the boy to see Tracker so pissed off.
* StockholmSyndrome: Tracker thinks that a kid whose been gone for three years will be so bonded to his captors that rescuing him will be pointless, and he's proven right. [[spoiler: Even after he's rescued, he is taken by Sasabonsam again, though Tracker thinks he went willingly.]]
* TheWrongfulHeirToTheThrone: [[spoiler: His mother plans to rule through him, who per the original succession rules is the true king. However, being raised by the Ipundulu utterly warped him, and there's a prophecy that he will be a horrible and cruel king (at least if you believe Tracker)--and, at the very least, it's unlikely that he would be as obedient as Lissisolo would need.]]
* StockholmSyndrome: Tracker thinks that a kid whose been gone for three years will be so bonded to his captors that rescuing him will be pointless, and he's proven right. [[spoiler: Even after he's rescued, he is taken by Sasabonsam again, though Tracker thinks he went willingly.]]
* TheWrongfulHeirToTheThrone: [[spoiler: His mother plans to rule through him, who per the original succession rules is the true king. However, being raised by the Ipundulu utterly warped him, and there's a prophecy that he will be a horrible and cruel king (at least if you believe Tracker)--and, at the very least, it's unlikely that he would be as obedient as Lissisolo would need.]]
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* ForTheEvulz: There wasn't really a core reason why the kid and Sasabonsam [[spoiler: killed [[spoiler:killed Tracker's whole family]], rather than the fact that they could and it ''amused'' the boy to see Tracker so pissed off.
* StockholmSyndrome: Tracker thinks that a kidwhose who has been gone for three years will be so bonded to his captors that rescuing him will be pointless, and he's proven right. [[spoiler: Even [[spoiler:Even after he's rescued, he is taken by Sasabonsam again, though Tracker thinks he went willingly.]]
* TheWrongfulHeirToTheThrone:[[spoiler: His [[spoiler:His mother plans to rule through him, who per the original succession rules is the true king. However, being raised by the Ipundulu utterly warped him, and there's a prophecy that he will be a horrible and cruel king (at least if you believe Tracker)--and, at the very least, it's unlikely that he would be as obedient as Lissisolo would need.]]
* StockholmSyndrome: Tracker thinks that a kid
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* MyGreatestFailure: She views her son being kidnapped and [[spoiler: eventually falling under the sway of the inpundulu and Sasabonsam]] to be hers.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: He did care about his brother Asanbosam, [[spoiler: taking revenge on Tracker by murdering his lover Mossi and their adopted mingi children.]]
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* VengeanceFeelsEmpty: After taking his revenge on [[spoiler: Sasabonsam]], he remarks he doesn't feel much better after what happened, it doesn't help that [[spoiler: Leopard dies in his arms]]. Emotionally broken by the experience, he starts wandering the earth until he's arrested.
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* VengeanceFeelsEmpty: After taking his revenge on [[spoiler: Sasabonsam]], he remarks he doesn't feel much better after what happened, it doesn't help that [[spoiler: Leopard dies in his arms]]. Emotionally broken Broken by the experience, he starts wandering the earth until he's arrested.
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* HeroOfAnotherStory: She's the main character of the sequel to his novel, Moon Witch, Spider King.
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* HeroOfAnotherStory: She's the main character of the sequel to his this novel, Moon Witch, Spider King.
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* RedOniBlueOni: The more calculating and patient blue to Tracker's impulsive and violent red.
* ActionGirl: Nsaka proves to be a tough member of the group, and one of the few females who can fight on the mission.
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* ImAHumanitarian: He's a vicious beast with a taste for human flesh.
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* ProperlyParanoid: Given Tracker's [[TheCynic cynical streak]], he's often suspicious of many of the people around him, and often he's right to be suspicious.
* DepravedBisexual: He's a former lover of Tracker, as well as the current lover of Nsaka. He also [[spoiler: sold Tracker into sexual slavery, which cost him his eye.]]
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* AssholeVictim: He had it coming and that's putting it lightly.
* ForTheEvulz: He and the boy had no real reason why they [[spoiler: killed Tracker's family]], rather than the fact that they could.
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* HairTriggerTemper: He gets pissed off really quickly.
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* HairTriggerTemper: He gets pissed off really quickly. quickly and is quick to react violently.
* RedOniBlueOni: He is the red to Mossi's blue.
* TheMentor: He serves as one to Tracker, showing him how to defend himself and use a bow.
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: [[spoiler: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted.]] She's dragged into a portal ''made of fire'', but she survives. She's not unscathed as it's revealed she was heavily burned.]]
* NominalHero: She does a lot of really shady things throughout the story, and isn't above betraying her companions if it suits her goals, but she goes up against some really heinous individuals as the story moves along.
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* DragonInChief: Though he is ostensibly the Northern King's servant, it's really him who's running the show behind the scenes.
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: He doesn't understand why Tracker would still hesitate to kill The Leopard, and tells him to either choose love or vengeance when going after the boy.
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* SanitySlippage: After [[spoiler: Mossi and their adoptive family all die]], Tracker gradually becomes more mentally unstable, focusing only on his revenge.
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* CreepyChild: He's so warped by the inpundulu that he's basically become this. Even Tracker's creeped out by the kid.
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!!Nsaka De Vampi
* DarkAndTroubledPast: She was pimped out by her abusive stepfather and stepbrothers until Nyka rescued her.
* FatalFlaw: Quite literally her love for Nyka, which [[spoiler: leads to her death when Nyka feeds on her since he's a inpundulu now.]]
* MoralityPet: For Nyka. He genuinely cares about her, it makes things all the more saddening when [[spoiler: he kills her when he becomes an inpundulu.]]
* UndyingLoyalty: Her love for Nyka is so strong that she's a ride or die
* DarkAndTroubledPast: She was pimped out by her abusive stepfather and stepbrothers until Nyka rescued her.
* FatalFlaw: Quite literally her love for Nyka, which [[spoiler: leads to her death when Nyka feeds on her since he's a inpundulu now.]]
* MoralityPet: For Nyka. He genuinely cares about her, it makes things all the more saddening when [[spoiler: he kills her when he becomes an inpundulu.]]
* UndyingLoyalty: Her love for Nyka is so strong that she's a ride or die
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* {{Jerkass}}: He's JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Nyka is a nasty prick all around, even when not betraying treacherous bastard, willing to sell out his friends.friends if it benefits him. But his love for Nsaka is sincere and it inspires him to become a better man as the story moves along.
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!!Lisisolo
The mother of the boy who wants to find her son no matter what.
* HoistByHerOwnPetard: Her attempts to find her son [[spoiler: inadvertently leads her great enemy right to him.]]
* TheWrongfulHeirToTheThrone: Lissisolo would be a far better ruler than her brother--but unfortunately, that ''her'' is a crucial sticking point, superior qualifications be damned.
!!Lisisolo
The mother of the boy who wants to find her son no matter what.
* HoistByHerOwnPetard: Her attempts to find her son [[spoiler: inadvertently leads her great enemy right to him.]]
* TheWrongfulHeirToTheThrone: Lissisolo would be a far better ruler than her brother--but unfortunately, that ''her'' is a crucial sticking point, superior qualifications be damned.
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* TheWrongfulHeirToTheThrone: Lissisolo would be a far better ruler than her brother--but unfortunately, that ''her'' is a crucial sticking point, superior qualifications be damned. [[spoiler: She plans to rule through her son, who per the original succession rules is the true king. However, being raised by the Ipundulu utterly warped him, and there's a prophecy that he will be a horrible and cruel king (at least if you believe Tracker)--and, at the very least, it's unlikely that he would be as obedient as Lissisolo would need.]]
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* TheWrongfulHeirToTheThrone: Lissisolo would be a far better ruler than her brother--but unfortunately, that ''her'' is a crucial sticking point, superior qualifications be damned. [[spoiler: She His mother plans to rule through her son, him, who per the original succession rules is the true king. However, being raised by the Ipundulu utterly warped him, and there's a prophecy that he will be a horrible and cruel king (at least if you believe Tracker)--and, at the very least, it's unlikely that he would be as obedient as Lissisolo would need.]]
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* EasilyForgiven: Tracker is baffled at why Leopard keeps Fumeli around, even after [[spoiler: his manipulations]], Leopard merely replies he needs someone to carry his bow.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Tracker definitely thinks so, and Leopard acts really different whenever Fumeli is around. [[UnreliableNarrator Or so Tracker says.]]
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* ManipulativeBastard: Tracker definitely thinks so, and Leopard acts really different whenever Fumeli is around. [[UnreliableNarrator Or so It turns out [[spoiler: Tracker says.is right, and that Fumeli had been drugging Leopard in order to turn him against Tracker.]]
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* PetTheDog: He helped his current lover Nsaka escape her abusive family, and he never betrayed her as he did with Tracker. [[spoiler: This is dampened slightly by Nyka killing her when he becomes an inpundulu, but it still counts.]]
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* BreakTheHaughty: [[DownplayedTrope Perhaps 'haughty' is the wrong word]], but she's utterly flabbergasted when she learns [[spoiler: Tracker located the writs when she, a long lived moon witch, couldn't.]]
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* {{Jerkass}}: She's not a particularly nice lady, and rubs everyone the wrong way at one point or another.
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