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*** He is suprised to learn that Xianada apparently has no concept of ''knitting'', and Meiling is quite excited by the idea of being able to create clothes without a full loom.
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*** He is suprised surprised to learn that Xianada apparently has no concept of ''knitting'', and Meiling is quite excited by the idea of being able to create clothes without a full loom.
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* WeirdnessMagnet: The unusual just seems to show up at his doorstep, often literally, including a whole farm's worth of cultivating animals, spirits, and many people with unconventional attitudes for Xianxia-land.
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* WeirdnessMagnet: The unusual just seems to show up at his doorstep, often literally, including a whole farm's worth of cultivating animals, spirits, and many people with unconventional attitudes for Xianxia-land.Xianada.
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* InconsistentSpelling: Everyone in Xiannada besides Jin Rou and Chunky himself hears/pronounces his name as "Chun Ke".
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* InconsistentSpelling: Everyone in Xiannada Xianada besides Jin Rou and Chunky himself hears/pronounces his name as "Chun Ke".
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* InconsistentSpelling: Everyone in Xianxialand besides Jin Rou hears and pronounces her name "Pi Pa", like all the other animals.
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* InconsistentSpelling: Everyone in Xianxialand Xianada besides Jin Rou hears and pronounces her name "Pi Pa", like all the other animals.
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* UndyingLoyalty: The Spirit Beasts all see Jin as their Great Master, take all of his teaching to heart, and would give their lives for him if he asked.
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* BeautifulSingingVoice: [[spoiler:While in human form,]] he still keeps up his morning habits by [[spoiler:[[CockADoodleDawn singing to the dawning sun]], which actually invigorates everyone who hears it. Many women are transfixed by his voice.]]
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* BeautifulSingingVoice: [[spoiler:While in While [[spoiler:in human form,]] form]], he still keeps up his morning habits by [[spoiler:[[CockADoodleDawn singing to the dawning sun]], which actually [[MagicMusic invigorates everyone who hears it. it]]. Many women women, [[EvenTheGuysWantHim and some men]], are transfixed by his voice.]]
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* BishonenLine: Inverted; [[spoiler:Big D is stronger as a chicken than as a human, since it is the former that is his true form]].
* BreakTheHaughty: Big D suffers from this in the first volume [[spoiler: after he lets in a group of pill-making rats whose pills corrupt his qi. It takes him quite a while to recover from this, both in a physical sense and an emotional sense.]]
* ChickMagnet: He has been considered attractive by several female characters, none of whom are chickens themselves. Besides Rizzo and Vajra back at the Farm, he has also been noticed by [[spoiler:Liang Yin, a rabbit]]. That said, non-sapient chickens also find him attractive (presumably due to qi optimising and enhancing his body), and he is mentioned as mating with them multiple times. [[spoiler:When he takes human form, every woman and many men who meet him drools over his appearance.]]
* BreakTheHaughty: Big D suffers from this in the first volume [[spoiler: after he lets in a group of pill-making rats whose pills corrupt his qi. It takes him quite a while to recover from this, both in a physical sense and an emotional sense.]]
* ChickMagnet: He has been considered attractive by several female characters, none of whom are chickens themselves. Besides Rizzo and Vajra back at the Farm, he has also been noticed by [[spoiler:Liang Yin, a rabbit]]. That said, non-sapient chickens also find him attractive (presumably due to qi optimising and enhancing his body), and he is mentioned as mating with them multiple times. [[spoiler:When he takes human form, every woman and many men who meet him drools over his appearance.]]
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* BishonenLine: Inverted; Inverted. [[spoiler:Big D is stronger as a chicken than as a human, since it is the former that is his true form]].
* BreakTheHaughty: Big D suffers from this in the first volume[[spoiler: after [[spoiler:after he lets in a group of pill-making rats whose pills corrupt his qi. qi]]. It takes him quite a while to recover from this, both in a physical sense and an emotional sense.]]
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* ChickMagnet: He has been considered attractive by several female characters, none of whom are chickens themselves. Besides Rizzo and Vajra back at the Farm, he has also been noticed by [[spoiler:Liang Yin, a rabbit]]. That said, non-sapient chickens also find him attractive (presumably due to qi optimising and enhancing his body), and he is mentioned as mating with them multiple times. [[spoiler:When he takes human form, every woman and many men who meet himdrools drool over his appearance.]]
* BreakTheHaughty: Big D suffers from this in the first volume
* ChickMagnet: He has been considered attractive by several female characters, none of whom are chickens themselves. Besides Rizzo and Vajra back at the Farm, he has also been noticed by [[spoiler:Liang Yin, a rabbit]]. That said, non-sapient chickens also find him attractive (presumably due to qi optimising and enhancing his body), and he is mentioned as mating with them multiple times. [[spoiler:When he takes human form, every woman and many men who meet him
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* HumanityEnsues: [[spoiler: In Book 4, he takes on a human form to infiltrate the Shrouded Mountain Sect. Surprisingly he's able to do it with little fanfare. As it turns out, this is because he's so powerful as a rooster that becoming human actually makes him weaker, so he's 'stepping down' to an inferior form.]]
* InconsistentSpelling: Everyone in Xianxialand besides Jin Rou hears/pronounces his name as "Bi De", even Big D himself.
* InconsistentSpelling: Everyone in Xianxialand besides Jin Rou hears/pronounces his name as "Bi De", even Big D himself.
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* HumanityEnsues: [[spoiler: In [[spoiler:In Book 4, he takes on a human form to infiltrate the Shrouded Mountain Sect. Surprisingly he's able to do it with little fanfare. As it turns out, this is because he's so powerful as a rooster that becoming human actually makes him weaker, so he's 'stepping down' to an inferior form.]]
* InconsistentSpelling: Everyone inXianxialand Xianada besides Jin Rou hears/pronounces his name as "Bi De", even Big D himself.
* InconsistentSpelling: Everyone in
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** He also rescues Ri Zu from a hawk, and she repays the debt by helping him resist Chow Ji's corruptive techniques.
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** He also rescues Ri Zu from a hawk, and she repays the debt by helping him resist [[spoiler:resist Chow Ji's corruptive techniques.techniques]].
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Big D has this in the first volume, [[spoiler: after he realizes the pills he's been taking are corrupting his qi, and that the farm/Fa Ram has been suffering for it.]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Big D has this in the first volume, [[spoiler: after [[spoiler:after he realizes the pills he's been taking are corrupting his qi, and that the farm/Fa Ram has been suffering for it.]]it]].
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* TheParagon: [[spoiler:After his CharacterDevelopment.]]
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* TheParagon: [[spoiler:After Becomes this after his CharacterDevelopment.]]CharacterDevelopment. He now does his best to help his fellow disciples grow and develop, both as cultivators and as people.
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* RightForTheWrongReasons: He ''is'' learning Cultivation from Jin Rou... but it's completely unintentional as Jin Rou doesn't even realize he's practicing cultivation. This changes once Jin realizes that Big D is sapient.
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* RightForTheWrongReasons: He ''is'' learning Cultivation from Jin Rou... Jin... but it's completely unintentional as Jin Rou [[AchievementsInIgnorance doesn't even realize he's practicing cultivation.cultivation]]. This changes once Jin realizes that Big D is sapient.
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* TranslatorCollar: Elder Gen gives him a medallion that allows him to speak human.
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* TranslatorCollar: Elder Master Gen gives him a medallion that allows him to speak human.to humans who can't understand Qi speech.
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A City Rat that was originally part of Chow Ji's pack, who eventually saved Bi De from him and joined the Farm.
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A City Rat that was originally part of Chow Ji's pack, who eventually saved Bi De from him left the pack and joined the Farm.
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* NamedAfterSomebodyFamous: Named after Rizzo the Rat from Series/TheMuppetShow.
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* NamedAfterSomebodyFamous: Named after Rizzo the Rat from Series/TheMuppetShow.''Series/TheMuppetShow''.
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* HasAType: [[ObliviousToLove Probably non-romantic,]] but her ideal of attractiveness is that of her master Jin, [[{{Hunk}} rugged and muscular]]. There's a reason her nickname for Tie Delun of the blacksmithing Hermetic Iron Sect is "Handsome Man".
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* HasAType: [[ObliviousToLove Probably non-romantic,]] non-romantic]], but her ideal of attractiveness is that of her master Jin, [[{{Hunk}} rugged and muscular]]. There's a reason her nickname for Tie Delun of the blacksmithing Hermetic Iron Sect is "Handsome Man".
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* ThePaladin: After her encounter with the Grass City slaving rings, Tigu has pledged herself to Zhong Kui, the Ghost Hunter. Per WordOfGod, continuing along this Path will eventually let her develop powerful techniques to destroy demons (even ones that are unkillable by normal means) and cause the wicked to recoil from her mere presence.
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* ThePaladin: After her encounter with the Grass City slaving rings, Tigu has pledged herself to Zhong Kui, the Ghost Hunter. Per WordOfGod, continuing along this Path will eventually let her develop powerful techniques to [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/99169664 destroy demons (even ones that are unkillable by normal means) and cause the wicked to recoil from her mere presence.presence]].
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* InconsistentSpelling: Everyone in Xianxialand besides Jin Rou and Chunky himself hears/pronounces his name as "Chun Ke".
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* InconsistentSpelling: Everyone in Xianxialand Xiannada besides Jin Rou and Chunky himself hears/pronounces his name as "Chun Ke".
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* BigEater: [[FedToPigs Pi Pa can eat a human body in one bite]]. Though depending on the body, she finds it distasteful.
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* BigEater: Pi Pa can [[FedToPigs Pi Pa can eat a human body in one bite]]. Though depending on the body, she finds it distasteful.
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* DespairEventHorizon: ''Almost'' fell to this following [[spoiler:Chun Ke's injuries from Chow Ji. The combination of brain damage and disruption of his cultivation nearly reverted him to a normal animal, and only Jin and Meiling's treatments were able to allow him to keep his sapience. The trauma and struggle from nearly losing him caused Pi Pa's qi to gain the essence of [[PowerOfTheVoid Void]].]]
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* DespairEventHorizon: ''Almost'' fell to this following [[spoiler:Chun Ke's injuries from Chow Ji. The combination of brain damage and disruption of his cultivation nearly reverted him to a normal animal, and only Jin and Meiling's treatments were able to allow him to keep his sapience. The trauma and struggle from nearly losing him caused Pi Pa's qi to gain the essence of [[PowerOfTheVoid the essence of Void]].]]
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** When he first introduces himself to Bi De, he calls himself "Shi Te." In-universe this means "Corpse," since he feels he has failed everything and deserves to die, but out of universe it sounds like "Shitty" ,which pretty accurately describes his self-image.
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** When he first introduces himself to Bi De, he calls himself "Shi Te." In-universe this means "Corpse," since he feels he has failed everything and deserves to die, but out of universe it sounds like "Shitty" ,which "Shitty", which pretty accurately describes his self-image.
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* NamedAfterSomebodyFamous: Named after the aliens from ''Anime/MacrossFrontier''. Other potential names that she rejected were [[VideoGame/StarCraft Kei Regan]] and [[TabletopGame/Warhammer40000 Tai Ranid.]]
* TheRuntAtTheEnd: So far, she's the only Spirit Animal associated with Fa Ram that is not themed with the Chinese Zodiac.
* TheRuntAtTheEnd: So far, she's the only Spirit Animal associated with Fa Ram that is not themed with the Chinese Zodiac.
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* NamedAfterSomebodyFamous: Named after the aliens from ''Anime/MacrossFrontier''. Other potential names that she rejected were [[VideoGame/StarCraft Kei Regan]] and [[TabletopGame/Warhammer40000 Tai Ranid.]]
Ranid]].
* TheRuntAtTheEnd: So far, she's the only Spirit Animal associated with Fa Ram that is notthemed in theme with the Chinese Zodiac.
* TheRuntAtTheEnd: So far, she's the only Spirit Animal associated with Fa Ram that is not
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** When he first introduces himself to Bi De, he calls himself "Shi Te." In universe this means "Corpse," since he feels he has failed everything and deserves to die, but out of universe it sounds like "Shitty," which pretty accurately describes his self-image.
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** When he first introduces himself to Bi De, he calls himself "Shi Te." In universe In-universe this means "Corpse," since he feels he has failed everything and deserves to die, but out of universe it sounds like "Shitty," which "Shitty" ,which pretty accurately describes his self-image.
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* HumanityEnsues: [[spoiler: Following Tigu's example, she also undergoes Tribulation and achieves human form.]]
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* HumanityEnsues: [[spoiler: Following [[spoiler:Following Tigu's example, she also undergoes Tribulation and achieves human form.]]
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A Azure Hills Golden Snub-nosed Monkey, spirit beast and one of Master Gen's relatives, who goes with Jin after his visit to Master Gen.
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* HeartDrive: Jin finds a core of ice Qi in The General that Commands the Winter after his first winter. Jin keeps it in his ice cellar and uses it when the next winter comes; Jin later discovers that it has turned into a crystal in the following spring.
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* {{Snowlems}}: The general started out as a fun winter project and a bit of a joke, but due to the Qi Jin used to build him, he began forming a core of ice Qi and awakened into full sapience by his second winter, the core having been preserved in Jin's ice cellar.
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* {{Snowlems}}: The general started out as a fun winter project and a bit of a joke, but due to the Qi Jin used to build him, he began forming [[HeartDrive a core of ice Qi Qi]] and awakened into full sapience by his second winter, the core having been preserved in Jin's ice cellar.
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* NotAfraidToDie: When Shen Yu confronts Jin about the fact that his current path makes immortality an impossibility, Jin merely responds by calmly saying: "I know".
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* NotAfraidToDie: When Shen Yu confronts Jin about the fact that his current path makes immortality an impossibility, Jin merely responds by and calmly saying: replies: "I know".
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* AncestralWeapon: The Jade Grass Blades are considered a heirloom of the sect and were passed down to her when she proved herself before the start of the story.
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* AncestralWeapon: The Jade Grass Blades are considered a heirloom of the sect and were passed down to her when she proved herself before the start of the story. It's revealed that they were originally opera props used by her ancestor Ruolan.
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* OrgasmicallyDelicious: Xiulan has a tendency to make ''sounds'' when she encounters a new sort of food she enjoys. It's completely involuntary and she's quite embarrassed by it.
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* OrgasmicallyDelicious: Xiulan has a tendency to make ''sounds'' when she encounters a new sort of food she enjoys.enjoys, mostly from Jin's otherworldly recipes. It's completely involuntary and she's quite embarrassed by it.
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The first spirit beast featured in the series and the eponymous chicken of the story. Jin Rou's first and faithful "subordinate", who names himself "First Disciple of Fa Ram".
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A rat that was originally part of Chow Ji's pack, who eventually saved Bi De from him and joined the Farm.
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A rat City Rat that was originally part of Chow Ji's pack, who eventually saved Bi De from him and joined the Farm.
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A tiger-striped kitten that Jin Rou received as a gift from an old woman. [[spoiler: She later manages to transform herself into a human.]]
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A tiger-striped kitten that of the Goldgrass Steppe Tiger-Cat species, which Jin Rou received as a gift from an old woman. [[spoiler: She later manages to transform herself into a human.]]
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One of Jin's pigs, given to him as a reward for a favor.
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* TheHeart: He acts as this for the Spirit Beasts of Fa Ram, being able to get through to each member, earn their trust, and get them to work together when they even if they are arguing with one another.
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* TheHeart: He acts as this for the Spirit Beasts of Fa Ram, being able to get through to each member, earn their trust, and get them to work together even when they even if they are arguing with one another.
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One of Jin's pigs, given to him as a reward from Tingfeng for protecting Meihua.
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A carp who acts as a dishwasher. [[spoiler: Later becomes a dragon, but still likes being a dishwasher and sprinkler system for the farm.]]
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A carp Common Azure Hills Carp who acts as a dishwasher.the farm's dishwasher and scrap disposal. [[spoiler: Later becomes a dragon, but still likes being a dishwasher and sprinkler system for the farm.]]
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A queen bee that Big D rescued when Jin expressed an interest in starting a hive.
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An ox that Jin received on his wedding day to plow his fields, and his plow [[spoiler:made from the sword that once belonged to Sun Ken.]]
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* TheStoic: Babe. He doesn't talk much, and it actually took months for Jin to realize that he was sapient. (The fact that he was content with his life did contribute to that, too.)
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* TheStoic: Babe. He Babe doesn't talk much, and it actually took months for Jin to realize that he was sapient. (The fact that he was content with his life did contribute to that, too.)
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A sapient Qi-using snake encountered by Big D during his travels. Deeply knowledgeable of martial arts, pottery, and glasswork.
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* DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife: Miantiao has told her to find something that she would like to do, so she's been trying different activities. For a while, nothing really worked with her beyond fighting, but working with Huo Ten has given her an interest in mining. [[spoiler:Eventually she decides to undergo her own form of Tribulation to achieve human form to reinvent herself in as a complete form as she can manage.]]
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* ChallengeSeeker: Finds inner peace in the midst of challenge and strife, which she indulges as [[spoiler: the Commander of the Blazing Swords of the Azure Hills alliance]].
* DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife: After her initial purpose to become a weapon to kill Sun Ken was rendered defunct, Miantiao has told her to find something that she would like to do, so she's been trying different activities. For a while, nothing really worked with her beyond fighting, but working with Huo Ten has given her an interest in mining.[[spoiler:Eventually [[spoiler:Eventually, she decides to undergo her own form of Tribulation to achieve human form to reinvent herself in as a complete form as she can manage.manage, and later on, finds that peace when fighting against evildoers.]]
* DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife: After her initial purpose to become a weapon to kill Sun Ken was rendered defunct, Miantiao has told her to find something that she would like to do, so she's been trying different activities. For a while, nothing really worked with her beyond fighting, but working with Huo Ten has given her an interest in mining.
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* MoonRabbit: She's implied to be an actual Moon Rabbit who was exiled to Earth for unclear reasons. This doesn't apply to her martial techniques, however.
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* MoonRabbit: She's implied to be an actual Moon Lunar Rabbit who was exiled to Earth for unclear reasons. This doesn't apply to her martial techniques, however. [[spoiler:An [[WordOfGod informational post]] says that she has an excess of Yang energy compared to her mostly Yin-aligned kin, and the pity and mockery heaped on her caused her to lash out with her fiery, irascible temper, which led to her being exiled.]]
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A spirit beast monkey and one of Master Gen's relatives, who goes with Jin after his visit to Master Gen.
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A Azure Hills Golden Snub-nosed Monkey, spirit beast monkey and one of Master Gen's relatives, who goes with Jin after his visit to Master Gen.
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* TreacherousAdvisor: He wheedles and brainwashes his way into Big D's good graces while Jin is away, for the explicit purpose of turning the rooster into his personal [[TheDragon goon]].
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* TreacherousAdvisor: He wheedles and brainwashes his way into Big D's good graces while Jin is away, for the explicit purpose of turning the rooster into his personal [[TheDragon goon]].goon]] via Qi drugs.
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* TheHeart: He acts as this for the Spirit Beasts of Fa Ram, being able to get through to each member, earn their trust, and get them to work together when they even if they are arguing with one another.
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* NotAfraidToDie: When Shen Yu confronts Jin about the fact that his current path makes immortality an impossibility, Jin mere responds by calmly saying: "I know".
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* NotAfraidToDie: When Shen Yu confronts Jin about the fact that his current path makes immortality an impossibility, Jin mere merely responds by calmly saying: "I know".
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** [[spoiler: Come Vol. 3 Chapter 48, the two souls appear to have merged fully into a single existence.]]
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** [[spoiler: Come [[spoiler:Come Vol. 3 Chapter 48, the two souls appear to have merged fully into a single existence.]]
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* [[WorldsStrongestMan Region's Strongest Man]]: He's easily the strongest cultivator in Azure Hills, which comes with status and responsibilities that he really doesn't want.
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* [[WorldsStrongestMan Region's Strongest Man]]: He's easily NotAfraidToDie: When Shen Yu confronts Jin about the strongest cultivator in Azure Hills, which comes with status and responsibilities fact that he really doesn't want.his current path makes immortality an impossibility, Jin mere responds by calmly saying: "I know".
* WorldsStrongestMan: Downplayed. He's easily the strongest cultivator in the province, which comes with status and responsibilities that he really doesn't want.
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* TheJoyOfFirstFlight: After he returns to the farm [[spoiler:as a Dragon, Washy]] gives Xiulan a ride as he flies around. She finds it quite enjoyable [[spoiler:and the change in physical perspective helps give her ''philosophical'' perspective, increasing her cultivation by two Steps, all the way into the next Realm]].
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* TheJoyOfFirstFlight: After he returns to the farm [[spoiler:as a Dragon, Washy]] gives Xiulan a ride as he flies around. She finds it quite enjoyable [[spoiler:and the change in physical perspective helps give her ''philosophical'' perspective, increasing her cultivation by two Steps, Stages, all the way into the next Realm]].
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* TheMedic: Meiling has training as a healer, and helps her FrontierDoctor father treat various injuries and sicknesses. She also treats animals. [[spoiler:After becoming a cultivator on her wedding night, it turns out that her Qi is specifically medical Qi, which she later uses to stop a plague dead in its tracks in Verdant Hill.]]
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* TheMedic: Meiling has training as a healer, and helps her FrontierDoctor father treat various injuries and sicknesses. She also treats animals. [[spoiler:After After becoming a cultivator on her wedding night, it turns out that her Qi is specifically medical Qi, which she later uses to stop a plague dead in its tracks in Verdant Hill.]]heal more severe injuries and afflictions, such as demonic qi infection.