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* CaptainObviousReveal: The Ghost is wearing a female mask, so the reveal of her being a woman is painfully obvious. Another obvious aspect is the clue "the Ghost controls Athenian politics". The only woman in the story with any actual political power in Athens is [[spoiler:Aspasia]].
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* CaptainObviousReveal: {{Foreshadowing}} The Ghost is wearing a female mask, so the reveal of her being a woman is painfully obvious. Another obvious aspect is the clue "the Ghost controls Athenian politics". The only woman in the story with any actual political power in Athens is [[spoiler:Aspasia]].
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* CarryABigStick: He uses two large maces when fighting.
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* DropTheHammer: He uses two large maces when fighting.
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* BeingEvilSucks: After serving the Cult for many years, he has finally grown weary of a life of malice and intrigue. Swordfish wants to leave the Cult but couldn't think of a way to do so that would allow him to keep his life. Because of this, he was not the Cult meeting at Delphi that the Eagle Bearer infiltrated.
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* BeingEvilSucks: After serving the Cult for many years, he has finally grown weary of a life of malice and intrigue. Swordfish wants to leave the Cult but couldn't think of a way to do so that would allow him to keep his life. Because of this, he was not at the Cult meeting at Delphi that the Eagle Bearer infiltrated.infiltrates.
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* BeingEvilSucks: After serving the Cult for many years, he has finally grown weary of a life of malice and intrigue. Swordfish wants to leave the Cult but couldn't think of a way to do so that would allow him to keep his life. Because of this, he was at not the Cult meeting at Delphi that the Eagle Bearer infiltrated.
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* BeingEvilSucks: After serving the Cult for many years, he has finally grown weary of a life of malice and intrigue. Swordfish wants to leave the Cult but couldn't think of a way to do so that would allow him to keep his life. Because of this, he was at not the Cult meeting at Delphi that the Eagle Bearer infiltrated.
