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* Manchild: He has quite a few immature elements; an apparently-sincere belief in magic and his tendency to take the female suitors Sir Archibald keeps trying to matchmake him with as housemaids.
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* Manchild: {{Manchild}}: He has quite a few immature elements; an apparently-sincere belief in magic and his tendency to take the female suitors Sir Archibald keeps trying to matchmake him with as housemaids.
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* TheObiWannabe: Likes to think of himself as your wise mentor. His advice is often either useless or non-existant.
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* TheObiWannabe: Likes to think of himself as your wise mentor. His advice is often either useless or non-existant.non-existent.
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The player assumes the role of Hannah Goode's sibling and heir to their father. At some point however, they left the old world presumably to work in the new world. There, they meet a new friend in Aarhant, who's life they saved. Later, the protagonist receives a letter from their sister about their fathers death, which prompts a return to the old world, starting the plot of the campaign.
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The player assumes the role of Hannah Goode's sibling and heir to their father. At some point however, they left the old world presumably to work in the new world. There, they meet a new friend in Aarhant, who's whose life they saved. Later, the protagonist receives a letter from their sister about their fathers father's death, which prompts a return to the old world, starting the plot of the campaign.
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dewicking Badass Baritone
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* BadassBaritone: He has the deepest voice of the cast and uses it to full effect, especially when giving motivational speeches.
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Adding Starter Villain to Beryl
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* StarterVillain: She will likely be the first truly challenging opponent a new player faces, as she is one of the three predetermined competitors on the default Normal difficulty setting and is a 2-star competitor compared to her two 1-star counterparts (Qing and Willie); as such she will grow much more rapidly than the others and can easily outpace a still inexperienced player.
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* MeaningfulName: "Margaret" calls to mind a [[UsefulNotes/MargaretThatcher certain controversial British politician]], while "Hunt" suggests "Berkeley Hunt", BritishEnglish/CockneyRhymingSlang for...[[CountryMatters an unpleasant woman]].
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* AlasPoorVillain: At the end, despite everything he put the Goode siblings and friends through, they come to pity him for his failures and grieve his death at the hands of the Pyrphorians.
* AllForNothing: He comes to realize that his framing his brother and stealing his island was basically for nothing, as it was only a temporary success, it made everyone hate him, and eventually brought his own death.
* DealWithTheDevil: He made a deal the Pyrphorians to frame his brother and in exchange get Bright Sands. It ends poorly for him.
* AllForNothing: He comes to realize that his framing his brother and stealing his island was basically for nothing, as it was only a temporary success, it made everyone hate him, and eventually brought his own death.
* DealWithTheDevil: He made a deal the Pyrphorians to frame his brother and in exchange get Bright Sands. It ends poorly for him.
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* GracefulLoser: Surprisingly, he accepts his arrest and imminent trial with ease, albeit with heavy resignation. He also accepts the arrival of the Pyrphorians and imminent death with a stiff upper lip.
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rich idiot with no day job was disambiguated by TRS. Moving examples to proper tropes.
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* RichIdiotWithNoDayJob: As heir to a philanthropic trust, her life see-saws between daring adventure and charity fundraisers.
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* RichIdiotWithNoDayJob: WealthyPhilanthropist: As heir to a philanthropic trust, her life see-saws between daring adventure and charity fundraisers.
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To even browse Kahina's emporium can feel like a privilege, so luxurious are her exotic displays.
But to Kahina, this whole enterprise is rather humdrum -- a compromise for her comfort and safety, and one that seems desperatly dull in comparison to the daredevil life of intrigue and prestige that she once led.
But to Kahina, this whole enterprise is rather humdrum -- a compromise for her comfort and safety, and one that seems desperatly dull in comparison to the daredevil life of intrigue and prestige that she once led.
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To even browse Kahina's emporium can feel like a privilege, so luxurious are her exotic displays. \nBut to To Kahina, however, this whole enterprise is rather humdrum -- a compromise for her comfort and safety, and one that seems desperatly desperately dull in comparison to the daredevil life of intrigue and prestige that she once led.
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Isabel Sarmento is the passionate leader of a rebellion in the New World which people call "The Movement", striving for independence from the Old World empires.
She lost her brother to the violence, but this only seems to have strengthened her resolve. She knows her people will have to fight clever if they want to build a lasting future for themselves.
She lost her brother to the violence, but this only seems to have strengthened her resolve. She knows her people will have to fight clever if they want to build a lasting future for themselves.
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Isabel Sarmento is the passionate leader of a rebellion in the New World which people call "The "the Movement", striving for independence from the Old World empires.
empires. She lost her brother to the violence, but this only seems to have strengthened her resolve. She knows her people will have to fight clever if they want to build a lasting future for themselves.
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Anne Harlow is the vengeful leader of a forsaken band - the last hurrah of piracy. She was born into nobility, only to see her father Benjamin hung for speaking against the King. In exile, Anne's lust to destroy the crown and social order has only grown with the arrival of a new and vulnerable Queen.
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Anne Harlow is the vengeful leader of a forsaken band - -- the last hurrah of piracy. She was born into nobility, only to see her father Benjamin hung for speaking against the King. In exile, Anne's lust to destroy the crown and social order has only grown with the arrival of a new and vulnerable Queen.
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But to Kahina, this whole enterprise is rather humdrum - a compromise for her comfort and safety, and one that seems desperatly dull in comparison to the daredevil life of intrigue and prestige that she once led.
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But to Kahina, this whole enterprise is rather humdrum - -- a compromise for her comfort and safety, and one that seems desperatly dull in comparison to the daredevil life of intrigue and prestige that she once led.
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Nathaniel Spoondrift, A.K.A "Old Nate", is a drifter, opportunist and inventor. His life's work is his zeppelin, and the island at which it is moored -- Both hodgepodges of parts he's spent years scrounging for. Aside from his mysterious employees, Nate rarely crosses paths with others - Not unless they're willing to help him strip a corpse.
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Nathaniel Spoondrift, A.K.A "Old Nate", is a drifter, opportunist and inventor. His life's work is his zeppelin, and the island at which it is moored -- Both both hodgepodges of parts he's spent years scrounging for. Aside from his mysterious employees, Nate rarely crosses paths with others - -- Not unless they're willing to help him strip a corpse.
