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* ItsAllMyFault: Getting an InternalReveal in chapter 134 of Naofumi and Malty's capture by the Three Heroes Church, Eclair places the blame towards herself wishing she had stayed to protect them, rather than leave them behind for Port Harp. Contrary to what Eclair believes herself to be, Yatsuhashi comes in to assure her that their leave was only circumstantial, but they should not blame themselves for everything the Three Heroes Church had done.


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* LooseLips: Even though Eclair wishes to keep herself hidden in front of the Three Heroes as "Eclea", Yatsuhashi accidentally refers to her by her real name, cluing Ren in chapter 134 of her real identity.
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* CommutingOnABus: Yatsuhashi started off as one of the main characters that travelled around Naofumi, but after getting sent off to ask for support from Jarl Balgruuf, Yatsuhashi's presence dwindles away from the story until becoming a RecurringCharacter that only appears in the interludes involving his interactions with the Three Heroes.

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* BladeLock: To train Ren into improving his sword skills, they both lock their blades together as part of their training in chapter 134.



* CommutingOnABus: She starts off as a main character present as part of Naofumi's party members, but after chapter 79 where she departs by staying in Port Harp, Eclair's appearances in the story whittle down into her becoming a RecurringCharacter. By the time she makes a reappearance in chapter 109, Eclair's in-story involvement only happens in interludes where she has to interact with the Three Heroes.



* FawltyTowersPlot: If she wants to keep her identity a secret under the guise of Eclea, she has to put in the effort in making a cohesive backstory of how she came to be as a mercenary, but ends up struggling to do so, due to her LooseLips occasionally revealing her life as a knight or information she should have not known as a mercenary.



* LooseLips: Trying to maintain her SecretIdentity as Eclea the mercenary, Eclair has a problem with her lips accidentally revealing crucial pieces of her personal life that cracks the [[FawltyTowersPlot vague origins of what she built up at Eclea]].



* MythologyGag: Her disguised name as Eclea is a reference to Motoyasu from ''Literature/TheRepriseOfTheSpearHero'' accidentally misnaming her real name.

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Her disguised name as Eclea is a reference to Motoyasu from ''Literature/TheRepriseOfTheSpearHero'' accidentally misnaming her real name.name.
** Even if Ren is a much more competent hero than his canon self in ''Literature/TheRisingOfTheShieldHero'', Eclair him still get into a sparring match to train the latter of his honing his swordsmanship skills in chapter 134.



%%* ThatCameOutWrong: Played for Drama. When first declaring in chapter 111 that the Three Heroes Church should not have the power to prosecute Naofumi as a criminal, Iris points out the obvious that the church is doing what they can because no one is strong enough to stop them. Though Iris thought Eclea to be unsophisticated, the latter rephrases her statement as in the Shield Hero being an official thane/lord, meaning the Three Heroes Church targeting him, is also an indirect attack on nobility.

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%%* * ThatCameOutWrong: Played for Drama. When first declaring in chapter 111 that the Three Heroes Church should not have the power to prosecute Naofumi as a criminal, Iris points out the obvious that the church is doing what they can because no one is strong enough to stop them. Though Iris thought Eclea to be unsophisticated, the latter rephrases her statement as in the Shield Hero being an official thane/lord, meaning the Three Heroes Church targeting him, is also an indirect attack on nobility.


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* UncertifiedExpert: Inverted. Training Ren to hone in his abilities as a swordsman in chapter 134, she makes herself look like an average mercenary that lacks the proper qualifications of a knight, but hides the fact she is a real knight herself, and is already experienced at fighting with a sword.

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* BladeLock: To train Ren into improving his sword skills, they both lock their blades together as part of their training in chapter 134.



* CommutingOnABus: She starts off as a main character present as part of Naofumi's party members, but after chapter 79 where she departs by staying in Port Harp, Eclair's appearances in the story whittle down into her becoming a RecurringCharacter. By the time she makes a reappearance in chapter 109, Eclair's in-story involvement only happens in interludes where she has to interact with the Three Heroes.



* FawltyTowersPlot: If she wants to keep her identity a secret under the guise of Eclea, she has to put in the effort in making a cohesive backstory of how she came to be as a mercenary, but ends up struggling to do so, due to her LooseLips occasionally revealing her life as a knight or information she should have not known as a mercenary.



* LooseLips: Trying to maintain her SecretIdentity as Eclea the mercenary, Eclair has a problem with her lips accidentally revealing crucial pieces of her personal life that cracks the [[FawltyTowersPlot vague origins of what she built up at Eclea]].



* MythologyGag: Her disguised name as Eclea is a reference to Motoyasu from ''Literature/TheRepriseOfTheSpearHero'' accidentally misnaming her real name.

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Her disguised name as Eclea is a reference to Motoyasu from ''Literature/TheRepriseOfTheSpearHero'' accidentally misnaming her real name.name.
** Even if Ren is a much more competent hero than his canon self in ''Literature/TheRisingOfTheShieldHero'', Eclair him still get into a sparring match to train the latter of his honing his swordsmanship skills in chapter 134.



%%* ThatCameOutWrong: Played for Drama. When first declaring in chapter 111 that the Three Heroes Church should not have the power to prosecute Naofumi as a criminal, Iris points out the obvious that the church is doing what they can because no one is strong enough to stop them. Though Iris thought Eclea to be unsophisticated, the latter rephrases her statement as in the Shield Hero being an official thane/lord, meaning the Three Heroes Church targeting him, is also an indirect attack on nobility.

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%%* * ThatCameOutWrong: Played for Drama. When first declaring in chapter 111 that the Three Heroes Church should not have the power to prosecute Naofumi as a criminal, Iris points out the obvious that the church is doing what they can because no one is strong enough to stop them. Though Iris thought Eclea to be unsophisticated, the latter rephrases her statement as in the Shield Hero being an official thane/lord, meaning the Three Heroes Church targeting him, is also an indirect attack on nobility.


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* UncertifiedExpert: Inverted. Training Ren to hone in his abilities as a swordsman in chapter 134, she makes herself look like an average mercenary that lacks the proper qualifications of a knight, but hides the fact she is a real knight herself, and is already experienced at fighting with a sword.

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* BratsWithSlingshots: Being a child with minimal experience at fighting, Raphtalia resorts to using a slingshot carrying various types of substances as a means to assist her party to fight their enemies.



* FeedItABomb: She shoves explosives into a cloth and fires the cloth into the mouth of Roger in chapter 133, as so the latter's mouth explodes to provide the others fighting a better advantage in beating him.



* IChooseToStay: To buy time for everyone to leave Balafon, as well as give someone else a chance to be freed of their slave seal, Raphtalia volunteers to stay behind to distract Consevatie as a status of a slave, even if she would rather join up with Naofumi and Mein in chapter 133.

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* IChooseToStay: To buy time for everyone to leave Balafon, as well as give someone else a chance to be freed of their slave seal, Raphtalia volunteers to stay behind to distract Consevatie as a status of a slave, even if she would rather join up with Naofumi and Mein slave in chapter 133.


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** Played for Drama. Similarly like canon, Raphtalia prefers being a slave, because she believes the act to be a "sign of trust" to the person she cares for, but Malty and Naofumi understanding the horrors of slavery, they deconstruct SlaveryToBeASpecialKindOfEvil to deter Raphtalia from seeing it as a positive thing like her canon self.
** Played for Drama. After escaping Consevatie's grasp, and choosing to join up with Mein and Naofumi to escape Balafon village in chapter 133, Raphtalia chooses to keep her slave seal on, just like her canon self, reasons vary wildly. While Canon!Raphtalia chooses to brand herself a slave to further Naofumi's trust on her, Ambition!Raphtalia only wishes to keep her slave seal as a means to provide others with the option to free themselves, before herself as last.
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* PutOnABus: In chapter 79, Eclair stays behind at Port Hart to be by herself while the Shield Hero's party goes to the North. Eclair does promise Mein that when ready, she will return and assist Mein in her journey as friends.
* RightInFrontOfMe: Being a mercenary known as Eclea, she helps out Lord Steward, Lord Graithos, and Lord Nash fight off a group of the undead. Once finished, Eclair is offered to become a knight by Lord Steward for her heroism and praises her as someone that reminds him of Eclair, all while the latter in chapter 109 does not reveal her identity to anyone.

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* PutOnABus: In chapter 79, Eclair stays behind at Port Hart to be by herself while the Shield Hero's party goes to the North.returns south. Eclair does promise Mein that when ready, she will return and assist Mein in her journey as friends.
* RightInFrontOfMe: Being a mercenary known as Eclea, she helps out Lord Steward, Reichnott, Lord Graithos, and Lord Nash fight off a group of the undead. Once finished, Eclair is offered to become a knight by Lord Steward Reichnott for her heroism and praises her as someone that reminds him of Eclair, all while the latter in chapter 109 does not reveal her identity to anyone.
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* HeroicSacrifice: She announces to Naofumi and Mein of her decision to stay with Consevatie, instead of escaping Balafon like everyone else in chapter 133. By staying, Raphtalia hopes to buy time by distracting Consevatie, and to allow someone else to have access to holy water for their slave seal to be removed.


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* IChooseToStay: To buy time for everyone to leave Balafon, as well as give someone else a chance to be freed of their slave seal, Raphtalia volunteers to stay behind to distract Consevatie as a status of a slave, even if she would rather join up with Naofumi and Mein in chapter 133.
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* CallBack: To be resolve the SurvivorGuilt within her in chapter 132, Mein reminds Raphtalia of their conversation back in chapter 23 that because of the world being unfair, they both need to have the independence to grab what makes them happy, because no one aside from themselves has the drive to seek what they want.
-->'''Mein:''' Nobody, and I mean ''nobody'' has the right to stop you from living a happy life. Let alone trying to live at all.
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%%: SurvivorsGuilt* SurvivorGuilt: After finally leaving Consevatie's grasp in chapter 132, Raphtalia's mind is filled with guilt blaming herself that the people who got hurt was the result of her existence, in which Consevatie uses how people treat her as an excuse to beat up others.
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* BigDamnReunion: After spending several chapters of Naofumi and Malty separated from Raphtalia and Firo being kept as slaves of Consevatie, they all manage to finally reunite with each other in chapter 132, where a rescue operation is enacted to liberate everyone of slavery in Balafon.


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** Arriving into Balafon, the group all form plans as to what they need to do to rescue everyone in Balafon of the people enslaving them for food production. Once their plans are prepared, they sneak into Balafon to cage the soldiers in Bed-Chan's bark, all while providing the villagers the time they need to evacuate from the destruction caused within their town.


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* CryLaughing: In a more hopeful tune, Firo cries out her TearsOfJoy to celebrate her BigDamnReunion with Naofumi coming to Balafon in chapter 132 to save her.


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* TearsOfJoy: She runs towards Naofumi CryLaughing with joy that they can finally be reunited in chapter 132 with no one keeping her as a slave away from him.
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* CrypticCoversation: During her two encounters with Mein in chapter 131, Raphtalia communicates with her through a CallBack of the latter's MouthToMouthForceFeeding to reminded of the same method to save the injured Balafon Elder. Later, near the end of the chapter, Raphtalia and Mein have another brief meeting, in which the latter writes "imp" on Raphtalia's arm to direct her to go meet Zylden for more secret information.

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* MouthToMouthForceFeeding: She uses a type of kissing technique she learned from Raki to transport an antidote into Mein's mouth to save her from poisoning.

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** Reminded by Mein of the MouthToMouthForceFeeding in chapter 131, Raphtalia places her mouth onto the Balafon Elder's mouth to provide a way for the latter to drink a HealingPotion unconscious.

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* UniversalGroupReaction: Played for Laughs. Mein gets most of her group members in chapter 130 to be unnerved at her short rant to get Consevatie gruesomely killed by Siltvelt, before furthering elaborating she wants to save Raphtalia and Firo first, before focusing on Consevatie's death.

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*** Yet again in the same chapter, Mein's FreudianThreat to have Consevatie's dick be cut off to humiliate and bring pain to his defeat prompts everyone to give Mein a weird look with the strange suggestion she brought out to scare off their enemy.
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* UniversalGroupReaction: Played for Laughs. Mein gets most of her group members in chapter 130 to be unnerved at her short rant to get Consevatie gruesomely killed by Siltvelt, before furthering elaborating she wants to save Raphtalia and Firo first, before focusing on Consevatie's death.
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* HowWeGotHere: The start of chapter 129 begins with Jackson groveling to the Three Heroes Church to expose Naofumi's group, and everyone else being left to fight the opposing parties. By the halfway of the chapter, a prelude happens to detail everything that led up to how Naofumi, Mein, and Jackson all working together to lure the Three Heroes Church into a PitTrap created by Bed-Chan.
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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Knowing that the scouts of the Three Heroes Church would eventually send reinforcements, Naofumi, Mein, Bed-Chan, and all their group members gather up together to escape from the battle in chapter 127.
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* FrozenDinnerOfLoneliness:FrozenDinnerOfLoneliness: Naofumi, Malty, and all of their escorters in chapter 125 eat their meals frozen and in complete silence on top of the mountain to ensure they all remain alone from the Three Heroes Church possibly finding them.
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* ChainOfPeople: Yukari, Ren, Nora, Oersted, Malty, and Naofumi all hold close to each other as a chain to ensure no one else slips out of the mountain they are scaling in chapter 125.


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* ScalingTheSummit: Chapter 125 has Malty, Naofumi, Oersted, Yukari, Nora, and Ren be climbing up a tall mountain to avoid detection from the Three Heroes Church, and to have it act as their route to reach Balafon.
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* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: Malty and Naofumi embarrassed from the humiliation of Consevatie managing to defeat them in chapter 118, despite the latter being a complete idiot, Malty and Naofumi vow to never let such a humiliating event ever befall to them when discussing Consevatie in chapter 125.


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* MayItNeverHappenAgain: For Malty and Naofumi to take measures in ensuring Consevatie does not pull of another victory against them by pure luck, in spite of the latter's idiocy, they both take Consevatie as a serious threat that is backed up by the many manpower provided by the Three Heroes Church.
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* AdaptationalSkill: Downplayed. Growing into an adult in ''Literature/TheRisingOfTheShieldHero'', Raphtalia's growth is dependent on how high her levels are. by ''FanFic/AmbitionOfTheRedPrincess'', though Raphtalia needs levels to use her adult body, she also has the ability to change between looking like a child or adult, and to transform into a little raccoon as an addition.
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* StormingTheCastle: Once he knew of Naofumi's imprisonment by the Three Heroes Church from Raki delivering him news, Yatsuhashi was determined to go into the Melromarc kingdom himself to battle every enemy to save Naofumi, until Balgruuf convinced him to instead team up with the Three Heroes for better support.
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* RunOrDie: Oersted, Naofumi, and Malty seeing unknown dead creatures inside of a cave in chapter 122, their instincts immediately alert them to run outside of the cave to get some distance, which would increase their chances to combat the unknown enemies.
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* SilenceOfSadness: Naofumi, Malty, and Oersted are left silent, rarely speaking words to each other in chapter 122, because they are all personally dealing with the losses of their rescuers from the Three Heroes Church.
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'''Main Characters''' '''([[Characters/AmbitionOfTheRedPrincessMaltySMelromarc Malty S Melromarc]])''' '''([[Characters/AmbitionOfTheRedPrincessNaofumiIwatani Naofumi Iwatani]])''' | '''[[Characters/AmbitionOfTheRedPrincessThreeHeroesAndAllies Three Heroes and Allies]]''' | '''[[Characters/AmbitionOfTheRedPrincessHousesAndKingdoms Houses and Kingdoms]]''' '''[[[Characters/AmbitionOfTheRedPrincessHouseDeGallia House De Gallia]]]''' '''([[Characters/AmbitionOfTheRedPrincessSiegmarIsaacOctaviusConsevatie Siegmar Isaac Octavius Consevatie]])''' '''[[[Characters/AmbitionOfTheRedPrincessMelromarcKingdom Melromarc Kingdom]]]''' | '''[[Characters/AmbitionOfTheRedPrincessReligiousFactions Religious Factions]]''' | '''[[Characters/AmbitionOfTheRedPrincessOthers Others]]'''-]]]]]

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'''Main Characters''' '''([[Characters/AmbitionOfTheRedPrincessMaltySMelromarc Malty S Melromarc]])''' '''([[Characters/AmbitionOfTheRedPrincessNaofumiIwatani Naofumi Iwatani]])''' | '''[[Characters/AmbitionOfTheRedPrincessThreeHeroesAndAllies Three Heroes and Allies]]''' | '''[[Characters/AmbitionOfTheRedPrincessHousesAndKingdoms Houses and Kingdoms]]''' '''[[[Characters/AmbitionOfTheRedPrincessHouseDeGallia House De Gallia]]]''' '''([[Characters/AmbitionOfTheRedPrincessSiegmarIsaacOctaviusConsevatie Siegmar Isaac Octavius Consevatie]])''' '''[[[Characters/AmbitionOfTheRedPrincessMelromarcKingdom Melromarc Kingdom]]]''' | '''[[Characters/AmbitionOfTheRedPrincessReligiousFactions Religious Factions]]''' Factions]]''' '''[[[Characters/AmbitionOfTheRedPrincessChurchOfTheThreeHeroes Church of the Three Heroes]]]''' | '''[[Characters/AmbitionOfTheRedPrincessOthers Others]]'''-]]]]]

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* DwindlingParty: The party once had all its members fully intact and while Eclair and Yatsuhashi end up leaving, they are still alive for [[TheBusCameBack The Bus To Come Back.]] For Kyubey and Farkas, they both lose their lives in the hands of the Three Heroes Church at chapter 95, which shrinks the party. Along with the smaller party, Naofumi and Mein are left separated from all their party members, until they can find a way to eventually reunite with them.

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The party once had all its members fully intact and while Eclair and Yatsuhashi end up leaving, they are still alive for [[TheBusCameBack The Bus To Come Back.]] For Kyubey and Farkas, they both lose their lives in the hands of the Three Heroes Church at chapter 95, which shrinks the party. Along with the smaller party, Naofumi and Mein are left separated from all their party members, until they can find a way to eventually reunite with them.
** Streibough, Uranus and Oersted who acted as the escorters that travelled with Malty and Naofumi to reach their desired destinations, Uranus and Streibough are killed in having to sacrifice themselves to fight off hordes of enemies. In the end, Oersted is the last member remaining that can travel with Mein and Naofumi to protect
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* TransformationDiscretionShot: Transforming into her tiny raccoon form and demi-human form will cause a cloud of smoke to appear in the brief seconds she makes her time to change states.

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* LockedInTheDungeon: Malty and Naofumi are MadeASlave to be locked inside of the Melromarc castle's dungeon to rot inside in, until Baldy and Blue Eyes come to their rescue as BigDamnHeroes.



* SlaveLiberation: To rebel against the Three Heroes Church is for Naofumi and Malty to work together with the remaining members of the Okami Clan, so that everyone that was turned into a SlaveRace inside of Graile is freed from their slave seal.

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** Naofumi and Malty are removed of their Slave Seal in chapter 119, by Blue Eyes and Baldy arriving into the Melromarc castle's dungeon for their rescue mission.

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