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* ChangeTheUncomfortableSubject: Back when Aenys I ascended the throne. When Lord Darklyn's fiercely pro-Maegor cousin Davos started badmouthing the new king and said, among other things, "your bastard girl is more ferocious", Lord Darklyn immediately snatched the opportunity to change the subject to Jonquil, then Derryk, then Derryk's squiring.
* HumbleHero: She doesn't view her rescue of her father as a big deal, since she's not even sure the lynx she shot was intending to attack ''him''.
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* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: Unwittingly. In the first months of her training, the guards go easy on her because they don't want to anger her brother. When Derryk is sent away to Stonedance, however...
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* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: Unwittingly. In the first months of her training, the guards go easy on her because they don't want to anger her brother.brother, while she genuinely thinks she's making amazing progress. When Derryk is sent away to Stonedance, however...
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* SuperSenses: Probably (she reasons) thanks to her spying skills, she also has very good hearing.
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[[folder:Lady Darklyn]]
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[[folder:Lady Photinie Darklyn]]
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* FridgeHorror: [[invoked]] When he throws a tantrum demands for Jonquil to be raised in Dun Fort, he shouts at his mother that he doesn't have any other siblings and threatens to stop eating unless Jonquil is allowed to stay. Later, looking back, he realizes it was a ''lot'' harsher for his mother to hear than he thought, since Lady Darklyn had lost several infant children and always feared for Derryk's health as a result.
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* FridgeHorror: [[invoked]] When he throws a tantrum demands demanding for Jonquil to be raised in Dun Fort, he shouts at his mother that he doesn't have any other siblings and threatens to stop eating unless Jonquil is allowed to stay. Later, looking back, he realizes it was a ''lot'' harsher for his mother to hear than he thought, since Lady Darklyn had lost several infant children and always feared for Derryk's health as a result.result.
* OffstageVillainy: Downplayed. He used to be a horrible SpoiledBrat, but we aren't shown much of that because currently his childhood is only shown through the eyes of Jonquil, [[MoralityPet to whom he was always loving and supportive]].
* OffstageVillainy: Downplayed. He used to be a horrible SpoiledBrat, but we aren't shown much of that because currently his childhood is only shown through the eyes of Jonquil, [[MoralityPet to whom he was always loving and supportive]].
* FreeRangeChildren: Subverted. She thinks she explores Dun Fort all on her own at the age of four, until Derryk tells her that he has assigned two guards to watch over her whenever she ventures towards high-risk places like the castle wall.
* PretendingToBeOnesOwnRelative: In the last year of Maegor's reign, she posed as her own sister-in-law several times to save the latter from being chosen as a Black Bride.
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* PretendingToBeOnesOwnRelative: In the last year of Maegor's reign, she posed as her own sister-in-law several times to save the latter from being chosen as a Black Bride.
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* PretendingToBeOnesOwnRelative: ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: Unwittingly. In the last year first months of Maegor's reign, she posed as her own sister-in-law several times to save training, the latter from being chosen as a Black Bride.guards go easy on her because they don't want to anger her brother. When Derryk is sent away to Stonedance, however...
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: Lady Darklyn has borne many children, but only Derryk has survived beyond infancy. Some of her children [[TragicStillbirth have died in the womb]].
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* FridgeHorror: [[invoked]] When he throws a tantrum demands for Jonquil to be raised in Dun Fort, he shouts at his mother that he doesn't have any other siblings and threatens to stop eating unless Jonquil is allowed to stay. Later, looking back, he realizes it was a ''lot'' harsher for his mother to hear than he thought, since Lady Darklyn had lost several infant children and always feared for Derryk's health as a result.
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* BreakTheCutie: After the fear and strain she goes through during the last year of Maegor's reign, she miscarries her first baby and is utterly devastated.
* NiceGirl: Sweet and cheerful, she quickly wins the hearts of the rest of the family.
* NiceGirl: Sweet and cheerful, she quickly wins the hearts of the rest of the family.
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Alysanne's fiercely loyal sworn shield, half-sister to Derryk Darklyn.
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Born Jonquil Waters. Alysanne's fiercely loyal sworn shield, half-sister to Derryk Darklyn.
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!! House Darke
[[folder:Lady Jonquil Darke]]
Alysanne's fiercely loyal sworn shield.
* ActionGirl: As per canon, she is an excellent fighter.
* AllThereInTheManual: There is a prequel which details her backstory.
* BigBrotherWorship: She has practically idolized her half-brother Derryk since birth, considering he is the only one in Dun Fort who has always treated her with love and care. After they grew up, she became less blind to his flaws but remained absolutely devoted to him.
* ConflictingLoyalty: She had to choose between staying with her beloved family and going to protect Alysanne for the good of the realm.
* ImprobableAge: Played with. She is made a junior captain in Dun Fort's guard at thirteen. However, her father does it out of concern for her safety, wanting her to get well-acquainted with the servants and smallfolk in case she needs to quickly escape from the castle.
* MoralityPet: She used to be one for her brother Derryk when he was little, since he was a major SpoiledBrat and she was the only one around whom he became caring and responsible.
* ParentalNeglect: Her mother [[MissingMom died soon after she was born]]. Meanwhile, her father didn't pay her much attention and her stepmother only tolerated her for Derryk's sake (until Jonquil saved her father's life, that is).
* RedIsHeroic: As mentioned in canon, she has a suit of ceremonial armor which is "as scarlet as the setting sun", in Alarra's words.
* PretendingToBeOnesOwnRelative: In the last year of Maegor's reign, she posed as her own sister-in-law several times to save the latter from being chosen as a Black Bride.
* StealthExpert: Before she began her training in arms, she developed excellent spying skills which she still puts to use on occasion.
[[folder:Lady Jonquil Darke]]
Alysanne's fiercely loyal sworn shield.
* ActionGirl: As per canon, she is an excellent fighter.
* AllThereInTheManual: There is a prequel which details her backstory.
* BigBrotherWorship: She has practically idolized her half-brother Derryk since birth, considering he is the only one in Dun Fort who has always treated her with love and care. After they grew up, she became less blind to his flaws but remained absolutely devoted to him.
* ConflictingLoyalty: She had to choose between staying with her beloved family and going to protect Alysanne for the good of the realm.
* ImprobableAge: Played with. She is made a junior captain in Dun Fort's guard at thirteen. However, her father does it out of concern for her safety, wanting her to get well-acquainted with the servants and smallfolk in case she needs to quickly escape from the castle.
* MoralityPet: She used to be one for her brother Derryk when he was little, since he was a major SpoiledBrat and she was the only one around whom he became caring and responsible.
* ParentalNeglect: Her mother [[MissingMom died soon after she was born]]. Meanwhile, her father didn't pay her much attention and her stepmother only tolerated her for Derryk's sake (until Jonquil saved her father's life, that is).
* RedIsHeroic: As mentioned in canon, she has a suit of ceremonial armor which is "as scarlet as the setting sun", in Alarra's words.
* PretendingToBeOnesOwnRelative: In the last year of Maegor's reign, she posed as her own sister-in-law several times to save the latter from being chosen as a Black Bride.
* StealthExpert: Before she began her training in arms, she developed excellent spying skills which she still puts to use on occasion.
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!! House Darke
[[folder:LadyDarklyn
[[folder:Lord Darklyn]]
Father to Derryk Darklyn and JonquilDarke]]
Alysanne's fiercely loyal sworn shield.
Darke.
*ActionGirl: As per canon, she is an excellent fighter.
* AllThereInTheManual: There is a prequel which detailsBelievingTheirOwnLies: Jonquil thinks he fits the trope. He tells her backstory.
* BigBrotherWorship: She has practically idolizedhe planned to send her half-brother Derryk since birth, considering he is the only one in Dun Fort who has always treated her with love and care. After they grew up, she became less blind to his flaws but remained absolutely devoted to him.
* ConflictingLoyalty: She had to choose between staying with her beloved family and going to protect Alysanne for the good of the realm.
* ImprobableAge: Played with. She is made a junior captain in Dun Fort's guard at thirteen. However, her father does it out of concern for her safety, wanting her to get well-acquainted with the servants and smallfolk in case she needs to quickly escape from the castle.
* MoralityPet: She usedaway to be one for raised by commoners because he thought she'd be happier in a two-parent family, but Jonquil suspects it had more to do with him not wishing to anger his wife.
* IOweYouMyLife: He made Jonquil a landed knight and gave herbrother Derryk when he was little, since he was a major SpoiledBrat and she was the only one around whom he became caring and responsible.
* ParentalNeglect: Her mother [[MissingMom died soonnoble's last name after she was born]]. Meanwhile, her father didn't pay her saved his life.
* TookALevelInKindness: He became muchattention and her stepmother only tolerated her for Derryk's sake (until nicer towards Jonquil after she saved her father's life, that is).
him.
*RedIsHeroic: As mentioned in canon, she has a suit of ceremonial armor which is "as scarlet as ToughLove: He sends Derryk away to be fostered after he realizes the setting sun", in Alarra's words.
* PretendingToBeOnesOwnRelative: In the last year of Maegor's reign, she posed as her own sister-in-law several times to save the latter from being chosen as a Black Bride.
* StealthExpert: Before she began her training in arms, she developed excellent spying skills which she still puts to use on occasion.boy is ''severely'' spoiled.
[[folder:Lady
[[folder:Lord Darklyn]]
Father to Derryk Darklyn and Jonquil
Alysanne's fiercely loyal sworn shield.
*
* AllThereInTheManual: There is a prequel which details
* BigBrotherWorship: She has practically idolized
* ConflictingLoyalty: She had to choose between staying with her beloved family and going to protect Alysanne for the good of the realm.
* ImprobableAge: Played with. She is made a junior captain in Dun Fort's guard at thirteen. However, her father does it out of concern for her safety, wanting her to get well-acquainted with the servants and smallfolk in case she needs to quickly escape from the castle.
* MoralityPet: She used
* IOweYouMyLife: He made Jonquil a landed knight and gave her
* ParentalNeglect: Her mother [[MissingMom died soon
* TookALevelInKindness: He became much
*
* PretendingToBeOnesOwnRelative: In the last year of Maegor's reign, she posed as her own sister-in-law several times to save the latter from being chosen as a Black Bride.
* StealthExpert: Before she began her training in arms, she developed excellent spying skills which she still puts to use on occasion.
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!! The Faith of the Seven
[[folder:High Septon (Lemmar Hightower)]]
The High Septon who holds the position at the start of the story.
* AdaptationalVillainy: He does it InUniverse to ''himself'' while he's thinking up the plot of ''The Royal Penance''. The play!High Septon is a ruthless KnightTemplar who makes the heroine climb the highest mountain as penance for incest, separates her children from her and makes them join the begging brothers. The actual High Septon's most harsh suggestion was for Alysanne to join the septas or silent sisters, and he took that back precisely because she reminded him she had three small children to care for.
* HiddenDepths: Turns out to be quite an expert on theatre.
* KnightTemplar: Unlike his own counterpart from the play, he is a downplayed version. He does push Alysanne to get married again to someone not related to her, but his scenes show he genuinely wants what's best for the realm and the people and is very sorry for Alysanne and her children (or at least is polite enough to act like he is).
[[folder:High Septon (Lemmar Hightower)]]
The High Septon who holds the position at the start of the story.
* AdaptationalVillainy: He does it InUniverse to ''himself'' while he's thinking up the plot of ''The Royal Penance''. The play!High Septon is a ruthless KnightTemplar who makes the heroine climb the highest mountain as penance for incest, separates her children from her and makes them join the begging brothers. The actual High Septon's most harsh suggestion was for Alysanne to join the septas or silent sisters, and he took that back precisely because she reminded him she had three small children to care for.
* HiddenDepths: Turns out to be quite an expert on theatre.
* KnightTemplar: Unlike his own counterpart from the play, he is a downplayed version. He does push Alysanne to get married again to someone not related to her, but his scenes show he genuinely wants what's best for the realm and the people and is very sorry for Alysanne and her children (or at least is polite enough to act like he is).
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[[folder:High Septon (Lemmar Hightower)]]
The High Septon who holds the position at the start of the story.
Lord Darklyn's wife.
*
* HiddenDepths: Turns out to be quite an expert on theatre.
* KnightTemplar: Unlike his own counterpart from the play, he is a downplayed version. He does push Alysanne to get married again to someone not related to her, but his scenes show he genuinely
* WickedStepmother: A milder version than most. She is polite
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[[folder:Septa Rhaella]]
Alysanne's cousin, a septa in Oldtown.
* CowardlyLion: She is timid and fearful, but offers to become one of a new group of WalkingTheEarth Seven Speakers, if sending them out is what's needed to [[spoiler:secure Aemon's claim on the throne]].
* OrSoIHeard: She says that the plays performed in Oldtown end with a magnificent grand finale, and immediately adds that it's what she's been told and that she wouldn't dream of attending one.
* ShrinkingViolet: As in canon, she is extremely shy with everyone save for Alysanne, the High Septon, and the septa who tutors her.
* StutterStop: She stammers all the time, except when she talks to the few people she really trusts.
Alysanne's cousin, a septa in Oldtown.
* CowardlyLion: She is timid and fearful, but offers to become one of a new group of WalkingTheEarth Seven Speakers, if sending them out is what's needed to [[spoiler:secure Aemon's claim on the throne]].
* OrSoIHeard: She says that the plays performed in Oldtown end with a magnificent grand finale, and immediately adds that it's what she's been told and that she wouldn't dream of attending one.
* ShrinkingViolet: As in canon, she is extremely shy with everyone save for Alysanne, the High Septon, and the septa who tutors her.
* StutterStop: She stammers all the time, except when she talks to the few people she really trusts.
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Alysanne's cousin, a septa
Half-brother to Jonquil, he becomes Lord Darklyn after his father's death in
*
* OrSoIHeard: She says that the plays performed in Oldtown end with a magnificent grand finale, and immediately adds that
* ShrinkingViolet: As
* FormerlyFat: Plump as a child, he becomes lean by the time he is
* StarCrossedLovers: He was in love with
* StutterStop: She stammers all
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[[folder:Elinor Costayne]]
Previously one of Maegor's Black Brides, later one of the Seven Speakers who defended the legitimacy of Jaehaerys's marriage to Alysanne.
* GoodParents: Even though King's Landing is a place full of terrible memories for her, she stayed there for her youngest son's sake. She only decides to move to Lannisport after her son leaves for the Reach to become a squire.
* MissingMom: She has been forced to stay away from her eldest son for so long that he barely remembers her.
* TakingTheVeil: She decides to take vows in a motherhouse in Lannisport.
* YoungerThanTheyLook: She has a wrinkled face despite only being in her thirties.
Previously one of Maegor's Black Brides, later one of the Seven Speakers who defended the legitimacy of Jaehaerys's marriage to Alysanne.
* GoodParents: Even though King's Landing is a place full of terrible memories for her, she stayed there for her youngest son's sake. She only decides to move to Lannisport after her son leaves for the Reach to become a squire.
* MissingMom: She has been forced to stay away from her eldest son for so long that he barely remembers her.
* TakingTheVeil: She decides to take vows in a motherhouse in Lannisport.
* YoungerThanTheyLook: She has a wrinkled face despite only being in her thirties.
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Previously one of Maegor's Black Brides, later one of the Seven Speakers who defended the legitimacy of Jaehaerys's marriage to Alysanne.
* GoodParents: Even though King's Landing is a place full of terrible memories for her, she stayed there for her youngest son's sake. She only decides to move to Lannisport after her son leaves for the Reach to become a squire.
* MissingMom: She has been forced to stay away from her eldest son for so long that he barely remembers her.
* TakingTheVeil: She decides to take vows in a motherhouse in Lannisport.
* YoungerThanTheyLook: She has a wrinkled face despite only being in her thirties.
Born Elmire Rosby, Derryk's eventual wife.
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!! The Sunflowers
One of the theatre troupes invited to stage ''The Royal Penance'', whose rehearsals Alarra attends.
[[folder:Myribeth]]
The playwright and leading actress, born on Oakenshield.
* AffectionateNickname: She is Myrie to friends.
* TheChainsOfCommanding: She is finding it extremely tough to lead a theatre troupe; thanks to the Sunflowers' uncertain future, she is almost constantly on edge.
* DawsonCasting: She is middle-aged and plays an {{Expy}} of Alysanne, who is supposed to be in her mid-twenties at most. Her thoughts reveal there is simply no one else in the troupe able to be a leading lady. [[invoked]]
* FollowInMyFootsteps: She wants Brennan to be a mummer, though he has little acting ability and dreams of becoming a sailor.
* HiddenHeartOfGold: She has [[HairTriggerTemper quite the temper]], but a kind heart beneath it all. It's gradually revealed that, despite the Sunflowers' constantly precarious financial standing, she adopted Brennan after he was orphaned, allowed Obella to stay in the troupe after she got pregnant and gave birth to Garnet, and let Ellara and Melara join the troupe after the girls were orphaned (and, in Melara's case, widowed), even though they are terrible actresses.
* IWasQuiteALooker: She used to be very pretty when she started acting, but more than twenty years of a traveling mummer's life had taken their toll, and she is aware she'll soon be unable to portray the beautiful main characters.
* ImproperlyParanoid: She is wary about trusting Alysanne, thinking that she uses the women's courts to gain information that can be used against the women later. Alysanne has no such designs.
* {{Nepotism}}: She tries to defy it so furiously that she goes straight to [[AbusiveParents the opposite extreme]], constantly yelling at and belittling Brennan at the rehearsals and claiming he can do nothing right.
* NiceCharacterMeanActor: Downplayed. She plays a gentle virtous queen but is quite an unpleasant person offstage. However, a lot of it comes from the strain she has to bear rather than genuine nastiness.
One of the theatre troupes invited to stage ''The Royal Penance'', whose rehearsals Alarra attends.
[[folder:Myribeth]]
The playwright and leading actress, born on Oakenshield.
* AffectionateNickname: She is Myrie to friends.
* TheChainsOfCommanding: She is finding it extremely tough to lead a theatre troupe; thanks to the Sunflowers' uncertain future, she is almost constantly on edge.
* DawsonCasting: She is middle-aged and plays an {{Expy}} of Alysanne, who is supposed to be in her mid-twenties at most. Her thoughts reveal there is simply no one else in the troupe able to be a leading lady. [[invoked]]
* FollowInMyFootsteps: She wants Brennan to be a mummer, though he has little acting ability and dreams of becoming a sailor.
* HiddenHeartOfGold: She has [[HairTriggerTemper quite the temper]], but a kind heart beneath it all. It's gradually revealed that, despite the Sunflowers' constantly precarious financial standing, she adopted Brennan after he was orphaned, allowed Obella to stay in the troupe after she got pregnant and gave birth to Garnet, and let Ellara and Melara join the troupe after the girls were orphaned (and, in Melara's case, widowed), even though they are terrible actresses.
* IWasQuiteALooker: She used to be very pretty when she started acting, but more than twenty years of a traveling mummer's life had taken their toll, and she is aware she'll soon be unable to portray the beautiful main characters.
* ImproperlyParanoid: She is wary about trusting Alysanne, thinking that she uses the women's courts to gain information that can be used against the women later. Alysanne has no such designs.
* {{Nepotism}}: She tries to defy it so furiously that she goes straight to [[AbusiveParents the opposite extreme]], constantly yelling at and belittling Brennan at the rehearsals and claiming he can do nothing right.
* NiceCharacterMeanActor: Downplayed. She plays a gentle virtous queen but is quite an unpleasant person offstage. However, a lot of it comes from the strain she has to bear rather than genuine nastiness.
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!! The Sunflowers
One of the theatre troupes invitedHouse Darke
[[folder:Lady Jonquil Darke]]
Alysanne's fiercely loyal sworn shield, half-sister tostage ''The Royal Penance'', whose rehearsals Alarra attends.
[[folder:Myribeth]]
The playwright and leading actress, born on Oakenshield.
Derryk Darklyn.
* ActionGirl: As per canon, she is an excellent fighter.
* AffectionateNickname: She was "forest child" to Derryk when she was little, and "sister dear" after growing up.
* AllThereInTheManual: There isMyrie a prequel which details her backstory.
* BigBrotherWorship: She has practically idolized her half-brother Derryk since birth, considering he is the only one in Dun Fort who has always treated her with love and care. After they grew up, she became less blind tofriends.
his flaws but remained absolutely devoted to him.
*TheChainsOfCommanding: ConflictingLoyalty: She had to choose between staying with her beloved family and going to protect Alysanne for the good of the realm.
* ExactWords: When she is going to try out in the War for the White Cloaks, she points out that the Kingsguard knights swear to take no ''wives'', while there is no mention of ''husbands'' in their vows, so she won't be swearing to celibacy if she is accepted there.
* ImprobableAge: Played with. She isfinding made a junior captain in Dun Fort's guard at thirteen. However, her father does it extremely tough out of concern for her safety, wanting her to lead a theatre troupe; thanks to get well-acquainted with the Sunflowers' uncertain future, servants and smallfolk in case she is almost constantly on edge.needs to quickly escape from the castle.
* MoralityPet: She used to be one for her brother Derryk when he was little, since he was a major SpoiledBrat and she was the only one around whom he became caring and responsible.
* ParentalNeglect: Her mother [[MissingMom died soon after she was born]]. Meanwhile, her father didn't pay her much attention and her stepmother only tolerated her for Derryk's sake (until Jonquil saved her father's life, that is).
*DawsonCasting: She is middle-aged and plays an {{Expy}} of Alysanne, who is supposed to be RedIsHeroic: As mentioned in her mid-twenties at most. Her thoughts reveal there is simply no one else in the troupe able to be a leading lady. [[invoked]]
* FollowInMyFootsteps: She wants Brennan to be a mummer, though he has little acting ability and dreams of becoming a sailor.
* HiddenHeartOfGold: She has [[HairTriggerTemper quite the temper]], but a kind heart beneath it all. It's gradually revealed that, despite the Sunflowers' constantly precarious financial standing, she adopted Brennan after he was orphaned, allowed Obella to stay in the troupe after she got pregnant and gave birth to Garnet, and let Ellara and Melara join the troupe after the girls were orphaned (and, in Melara's case, widowed), even though they are terrible actresses.
* IWasQuiteALooker: She used to be very pretty when she started acting, but more than twenty years of a traveling mummer's life had taken their toll, and she is aware she'll soon be unable to portray the beautiful main characters.
* ImproperlyParanoid: She is wary about trusting Alysanne, thinking that she uses the women's courts to gain information that can be used against the women later. Alysanne has no such designs.
* {{Nepotism}}: She tries to defy it so furiously that she goes straight to [[AbusiveParents the opposite extreme]], constantly yelling at and belittling Brennan at the rehearsals and claiming he can do nothing right.
* NiceCharacterMeanActor: Downplayed. She plays a gentle virtous queen but is quite an unpleasant person offstage. However, a lot of it comes from the straincanon, she has a suit of ceremonial armor which is "as scarlet as the setting sun", in Alarra's words.
* PretendingToBeOnesOwnRelative: In the last year of Maegor's reign, she posed as her own sister-in-law several times tobear rather than genuine nastiness.save the latter from being chosen as a Black Bride.
* StealthExpert: Before she began her training in arms, she developed excellent spying skills which she still puts to use on occasion.
One of the theatre troupes invited
[[folder:Lady Jonquil Darke]]
Alysanne's fiercely loyal sworn shield, half-sister to
[[folder:Myribeth]]
The playwright and leading actress, born on Oakenshield.
* ActionGirl: As per canon, she is an excellent fighter.
* AffectionateNickname: She was "forest child" to Derryk when she was little, and "sister dear" after growing up.
* AllThereInTheManual: There is
* BigBrotherWorship: She has practically idolized her half-brother Derryk since birth, considering he is the only one in Dun Fort who has always treated her with love and care. After they grew up, she became less blind to
*
* ExactWords: When she is going to try out in the War for the White Cloaks, she points out that the Kingsguard knights swear to take no ''wives'', while there is no mention of ''husbands'' in their vows, so she won't be swearing to celibacy if she is accepted there.
* ImprobableAge: Played with. She is
* MoralityPet: She used to be one for her brother Derryk when he was little, since he was a major SpoiledBrat and she was the only one around whom he became caring and responsible.
* ParentalNeglect: Her mother [[MissingMom died soon after she was born]]. Meanwhile, her father didn't pay her much attention and her stepmother only tolerated her for Derryk's sake (until Jonquil saved her father's life, that is).
*
* FollowInMyFootsteps: She wants Brennan to be a mummer, though he has little acting ability and dreams of becoming a sailor.
* HiddenHeartOfGold: She has [[HairTriggerTemper quite the temper]], but a kind heart beneath it all. It's gradually revealed that, despite the Sunflowers' constantly precarious financial standing, she adopted Brennan after he was orphaned, allowed Obella to stay in the troupe after she got pregnant and gave birth to Garnet, and let Ellara and Melara join the troupe after the girls were orphaned (and, in Melara's case, widowed), even though they are terrible actresses.
* IWasQuiteALooker: She used to be very pretty when she started acting, but more than twenty years of a traveling mummer's life had taken their toll, and she is aware she'll soon be unable to portray the beautiful main characters.
* ImproperlyParanoid: She is wary about trusting Alysanne, thinking that she uses the women's courts to gain information that can be used against the women later. Alysanne has no such designs.
* {{Nepotism}}: She tries to defy it so furiously that she goes straight to [[AbusiveParents the opposite extreme]], constantly yelling at and belittling Brennan at the rehearsals and claiming he can do nothing right.
* NiceCharacterMeanActor: Downplayed. She plays a gentle virtous queen but is quite an unpleasant person offstage. However, a lot of it comes from the strain
* PretendingToBeOnesOwnRelative: In the last year of Maegor's reign, she posed as her own sister-in-law several times to
* StealthExpert: Before she began her training in arms, she developed excellent spying skills which she still puts to use on occasion.
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[[folder:Garris]]
An orphan of the Greenblood, specializing in villains.
* HonoraryUncle: "Uncle Garris" to Garnet.
* IronyAsHeIsCast: InUniverse. In the production of ''The Royal Penance'', he plays the High Septon. The orphans of the Greenblood very pointedly refuse to accept the Faith of the Seven.
* MasterActor: Easily the most gifted of the Sunflowers. Only Obella gets as much praise from other characters, and her acting is hindered by her inability to play romantic leads ([[DarkAndTroubledPast for no fault of her own]]).
* MeanCharacterNiceActor: He is an honest, reliable and kind CoolOldGuy with a knack for playing terrifying villains.
* SupremeChef: His cooking wouldn't look out of place on a high lord's table, in Myribeth's opinion.
An orphan of the Greenblood, specializing in villains.
* HonoraryUncle: "Uncle Garris" to Garnet.
* IronyAsHeIsCast: InUniverse. In the production of ''The Royal Penance'', he plays the High Septon. The orphans of the Greenblood very pointedly refuse to accept the Faith of the Seven.
* MasterActor: Easily the most gifted of the Sunflowers. Only Obella gets as much praise from other characters, and her acting is hindered by her inability to play romantic leads ([[DarkAndTroubledPast for no fault of her own]]).
* MeanCharacterNiceActor: He is an honest, reliable and kind CoolOldGuy with a knack for playing terrifying villains.
* SupremeChef: His cooking wouldn't look out of place on a high lord's table, in Myribeth's opinion.
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An orphan
* HonoraryUncle: "Uncle Garris" to Garnet.
* IronyAsHeIsCast: InUniverse. In
[[folder:High Septon (Lemmar Hightower)]]
The High Septon who holds the
* AdaptationalVillainy: He does it InUniverse to ''himself'' while he's thinking up the plot of ''The Royal
* MasterActor: Easily the
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[[folder:Brennan]]
A Lyseni orphan and adopted child of Myribeth.
* CrosscastRole: InUniverse. He used to play girls occasionally before his voice broke, and after [[spoiler:Ellara is traumatized and unable to act]], he gets cast as the crackling-voiced Crone.
* TheDutifulSon: He stays in the Sunflowers, despite having no interest in acting and no talent for it, because he feels deeply indebted to Myribeth for taking him in. He plans to leave and become a sailor only when he's certain Myribeth won't want for anything.
* UnderageCasting: InUniverse. He is a teenage boy playing twenty-six-year-old {{Expy}} of Jaehaerys in ''The Royal Penance''. Since the king in the play gets an early PlotTriggeringDeath, Myribeth deliberately gave the part to Brennan; it's his first speaking role.
A Lyseni orphan and adopted child of Myribeth.
* CrosscastRole: InUniverse. He used to play girls occasionally before his voice broke, and after [[spoiler:Ellara is traumatized and unable to act]], he gets cast as the crackling-voiced Crone.
* TheDutifulSon: He stays in the Sunflowers, despite having no interest in acting and no talent for it, because he feels deeply indebted to Myribeth for taking him in. He plans to leave and become a sailor only when he's certain Myribeth won't want for anything.
* UnderageCasting: InUniverse. He is a teenage boy playing twenty-six-year-old {{Expy}} of Jaehaerys in ''The Royal Penance''. Since the king in the play gets an early PlotTriggeringDeath, Myribeth deliberately gave the part to Brennan; it's his first speaking role.
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A Lyseni orphan
Alysanne's cousin, a septa in Oldtown.
* CowardlyLion: She is timid and
*
* TheDutifulSon: He stays in the Sunflowers, despite having no interest in acting and no talent for it, because he feels deeply indebted to Myribeth for taking him in. He plans to leave and become a sailor only when he's certain Myribeth won't want for anything.
* UnderageCasting: InUniverse. He is a teenage boy playing twenty-six-year-old {{Expy}} of Jaehaerys in ''The Royal Penance''. Since the king in the play gets an early PlotTriggeringDeath, Myribeth deliberately gave the part to Brennan;
* ShrinkingViolet: As in canon, she is extremely shy with everyone save for Alysanne, the High Septon, and the septa who tutors her.
* StutterStop: She stammers all the time, except when she talks to the few people she really trusts.
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[[folder:Obella]]
A dancer from Sandstone.
* EnsembleDarkHorse: InUniverse. She plays the minor part of the Mother, but Alysanne thinks she is the best among the Sunflowers.
* HypotheticalCasting: InUniverse. Alysanne thinks she would be much better at playing the queen than Myribeth.
* IronyAsSheIsCast: Absolutely nails the role of the Mother, but has a troubled relationship with her own daughter. [[invoked]]
* MaternityCrisis: Gave birth to Garnet in the Sunflowers' cart when it was on the road.
* MyBelovedSmother: She is overprotective towards Garnet, who, in turn, resents it.
* ParentsAsPeople: She loves her daughter but, it's implied, struggles to keep a close relationship with her.
* RapeAsBackstory: She was raped twelve years earlier and still hasn't fully recovered, considering ThereAreNoTherapists in Westeros. Even Myribeth, who is generally sympathetic towards her, views her trauma as a pesky reason why Obella can't succeed her as the Sunflowers' leading lady.
A dancer from Sandstone.
* EnsembleDarkHorse: InUniverse. She plays the minor part of the Mother, but Alysanne thinks she is the best among the Sunflowers.
* HypotheticalCasting: InUniverse. Alysanne thinks she would be much better at playing the queen than Myribeth.
* IronyAsSheIsCast: Absolutely nails the role of the Mother, but has a troubled relationship with her own daughter. [[invoked]]
* MaternityCrisis: Gave birth to Garnet in the Sunflowers' cart when it was on the road.
* MyBelovedSmother: She is overprotective towards Garnet, who, in turn, resents it.
* ParentsAsPeople: She loves her daughter but, it's implied, struggles to keep a close relationship with her.
* RapeAsBackstory: She was raped twelve years earlier and still hasn't fully recovered, considering ThereAreNoTherapists in Westeros. Even Myribeth, who is generally sympathetic towards her, views her trauma as a pesky reason why Obella can't succeed her as the Sunflowers' leading lady.
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A dancer from Sandstone.
* EnsembleDarkHorse: InUniverse. She plays the minor part
Previously one of Maegor's Black Brides, later one of the
* GoodParents: Even though King's Landing is a place full of terrible memories for her, she
*
*
* YoungerThanTheyLook: She has a
* MaternityCrisis: Gave birth to Garnet in the Sunflowers' cart when it was on the road.
* MyBelovedSmother: She is overprotective towards Garnet, who, in turn, resents it.
* ParentsAsPeople: She loves her daughter but, it's implied, struggles to keep a close relationship with her.
* RapeAsBackstory: She was raped twelve years earlier and still hasn't fully recovered, considering ThereAreNoTherapists in Westeros. Even Myribeth, who is generally sympathetic towards her, views her trauma as a pesky reason why Obella can't succeed her as the Sunflowers' leading lady.
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[[folder:Garnet]]
Obella's daughter.
* ChildByRape: She was conceived when her mother was raped by an ironborn.
* ConvertingForLove: In a platonic version, she is so close to her ParentalSubstitute Garris that she converted to the Rhoynish faith when she was eight.
* CrosscastRole: At the start of the fanfic, since she is eleven years old, very slim and has a deep voice, she plays boys. [[invoked]]
* SweetTooth: She's very fond of sweetmeats.
Obella's daughter.
* ChildByRape: She was conceived when her mother was raped by an ironborn.
* ConvertingForLove: In a platonic version, she is so close to her ParentalSubstitute Garris that she converted to the Rhoynish faith when she was eight.
* CrosscastRole: At the start of the fanfic, since she is eleven years old, very slim and has a deep voice, she plays boys. [[invoked]]
* SweetTooth: She's very fond of sweetmeats.
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Obella's daughter.
One of the theatre troupes invited to stage ''The Royal Penance'', whose rehearsals Alarra attends.
[[folder:Myribeth]]
The playwright and leading actress, born on Oakenshield.
*
* TheChainsOfCommanding: She is finding it extremely tough to lead a theatre troupe; thanks to the Sunflowers' uncertain future, she is almost constantly on edge.
*
* FollowInMyFootsteps: She wants Brennan to be a mummer, though he has little acting ability and dreams of becoming a sailor.
* HiddenHeartOfGold: She has [[HairTriggerTemper quite the temper]], but a kind heart beneath it all. It's gradually revealed that, despite the Sunflowers' constantly precarious financial standing, she adopted Brennan after he was orphaned, allowed Obella to stay in the troupe after she got pregnant and gave birth to Garnet, and let Ellara and Melara join the troupe after the girls were orphaned (and, in Melara's case, widowed), even though they are terrible actresses.
* IWasQuiteALooker: She used to be very pretty when she started acting, but more than twenty years of a traveling mummer's life had taken their toll, and she is
* ImproperlyParanoid: She is wary about trusting Alysanne, thinking that she
* {{Nepotism}}: She tries to defy it so furiously that she
* CrosscastRole: At
* NiceCharacterMeanActor: Downplayed. She plays
* SweetTooth: She's very fond
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[[folder:Caleotte]]
A handsome Reachman.
* IgnoreTheFanservice: He pays no attention to the numerous hopeful girls who try to make his acquaintance.
* ImpliedLoveInterest: Alarra thinks he is in a relationship with Myribeth – she is strangely mild towards him (and since he is young, handsome, and healthy, it can't be out of pity like in Ellara's case or out of respect for old age and experience like in Garris's case), and he never shows any interest in his fangirls.
* MrFanservice: He is drop-dead gorgeous, graceful and tall, with a beautiful voice, and is always smartly-dressed. Many girls in the audience swoon over him.
* TheQuietOne: He is strangely reclusive and is rarely seen anywhere except the stage and the Sunflowers' cart.
* SuperSenses: He has excellent hearing, which Jonquil finds out when she's sent to spy on him.
A handsome Reachman.
* IgnoreTheFanservice: He pays no attention to the numerous hopeful girls who try to make his acquaintance.
* ImpliedLoveInterest: Alarra thinks he is in a relationship with Myribeth – she is strangely mild towards him (and since he is young, handsome, and healthy, it can't be out of pity like in Ellara's case or out of respect for old age and experience like in Garris's case), and he never shows any interest in his fangirls.
* MrFanservice: He is drop-dead gorgeous, graceful and tall, with a beautiful voice, and is always smartly-dressed. Many girls in the audience swoon over him.
* TheQuietOne: He is strangely reclusive and is rarely seen anywhere except the stage and the Sunflowers' cart.
* SuperSenses: He has excellent hearing, which Jonquil finds out when she's sent to spy on him.
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A handsome Reachman.
* IgnoreTheFanservice: He pays no attention to
An orphan of the
* HonoraryUncle: "Uncle Garris" to
*
* MasterActor: Easily the most gifted of the Sunflowers. Only Obella gets as much praise from other characters, and her acting is
* MeanCharacterNiceActor: He is an honest, reliable and kind CoolOldGuy with
* SupremeChef: His cooking wouldn't look out of
* MrFanservice: He is drop-dead gorgeous, graceful and tall, with a beautiful voice, and is always smartly-dressed. Many girls in the audience swoon over him.
* TheQuietOne: He is strangely reclusive and is rarely seen anywhere except the stage and the Sunflowers' cart.
* SuperSenses: He has excellent hearing, which Jonquil finds out when she's sent to spy on him.
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[[folder:Brennan]]
A Lyseni orphan and adopted child of Myribeth.
* CrosscastRole: InUniverse. He used to play girls occasionally before his voice broke, and after [[spoiler:Ellara is traumatized and unable to act]], he gets cast as the crackling-voiced Crone.
* TheDutifulSon: He stays in the Sunflowers, despite having no interest in acting and no talent for it, because he feels deeply indebted to Myribeth for taking him in. He plans to leave and become a sailor only when he's certain Myribeth won't want for anything.
* UnderageCasting: InUniverse. He is a teenage boy playing twenty-six-year-old {{Expy}} of Jaehaerys in ''The Royal Penance''. Since the king in the play gets an early PlotTriggeringDeath, Myribeth deliberately gave the part to Brennan; it's his first speaking role.
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[[folder:Obella]]
A dancer from Sandstone.
* EnsembleDarkHorse: InUniverse. She plays the minor part of the Mother, but Alysanne thinks she is the best among the Sunflowers.
* HypotheticalCasting: InUniverse. Alysanne thinks she would be much better at playing the queen than Myribeth.
* IronyAsSheIsCast: Absolutely nails the role of the Mother, but has a troubled relationship with her own daughter. [[invoked]]
* MaternityCrisis: Gave birth to Garnet in the Sunflowers' cart when it was on the road.
* MyBelovedSmother: She is overprotective towards Garnet, who, in turn, resents it.
* ParentsAsPeople: She loves her daughter but, it's implied, struggles to keep a close relationship with her.
* RapeAsBackstory: She was raped twelve years earlier and still hasn't fully recovered, considering ThereAreNoTherapists in Westeros. Even Myribeth, who is generally sympathetic towards her, views her trauma as a pesky reason why Obella can't succeed her as the Sunflowers' leading lady.
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[[folder:Garnet]]
Obella's daughter.
* ChildByRape: She was conceived when her mother was raped by an ironborn.
* ConvertingForLove: In a platonic version, she is so close to her ParentalSubstitute Garris that she converted to the Rhoynish faith when she was eight.
* CrosscastRole: At the start of the fanfic, since she is eleven years old, very slim and has a deep voice, she plays boys. [[invoked]]
* SweetTooth: She's very fond of sweetmeats.
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[[folder:Caleotte]]
A handsome Reachman.
* IgnoreTheFanservice: He pays no attention to the numerous hopeful girls who try to make his acquaintance.
* ImpliedLoveInterest: Alarra thinks he is in a relationship with Myribeth – she is strangely mild towards him (and since he is young, handsome, and healthy, it can't be out of pity like in Ellara's case or out of respect for old age and experience like in Garris's case), and he never shows any interest in his fangirls.
* MrFanservice: He is drop-dead gorgeous, graceful and tall, with a beautiful voice, and is always smartly-dressed. Many girls in the audience swoon over him.
* TheQuietOne: He is strangely reclusive and is rarely seen anywhere except the stage and the Sunflowers' cart.
* SuperSenses: He has excellent hearing, which Jonquil finds out when she's sent to spy on him.
[[/folder]]
A Lyseni orphan and adopted child of Myribeth.
* CrosscastRole: InUniverse. He used to play girls occasionally before his voice broke, and after [[spoiler:Ellara is traumatized and unable to act]], he gets cast as the crackling-voiced Crone.
* TheDutifulSon: He stays in the Sunflowers, despite having no interest in acting and no talent for it, because he feels deeply indebted to Myribeth for taking him in. He plans to leave and become a sailor only when he's certain Myribeth won't want for anything.
* UnderageCasting: InUniverse. He is a teenage boy playing twenty-six-year-old {{Expy}} of Jaehaerys in ''The Royal Penance''. Since the king in the play gets an early PlotTriggeringDeath, Myribeth deliberately gave the part to Brennan; it's his first speaking role.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Obella]]
A dancer from Sandstone.
* EnsembleDarkHorse: InUniverse. She plays the minor part of the Mother, but Alysanne thinks she is the best among the Sunflowers.
* HypotheticalCasting: InUniverse. Alysanne thinks she would be much better at playing the queen than Myribeth.
* IronyAsSheIsCast: Absolutely nails the role of the Mother, but has a troubled relationship with her own daughter. [[invoked]]
* MaternityCrisis: Gave birth to Garnet in the Sunflowers' cart when it was on the road.
* MyBelovedSmother: She is overprotective towards Garnet, who, in turn, resents it.
* ParentsAsPeople: She loves her daughter but, it's implied, struggles to keep a close relationship with her.
* RapeAsBackstory: She was raped twelve years earlier and still hasn't fully recovered, considering ThereAreNoTherapists in Westeros. Even Myribeth, who is generally sympathetic towards her, views her trauma as a pesky reason why Obella can't succeed her as the Sunflowers' leading lady.
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[[folder:Garnet]]
Obella's daughter.
* ChildByRape: She was conceived when her mother was raped by an ironborn.
* ConvertingForLove: In a platonic version, she is so close to her ParentalSubstitute Garris that she converted to the Rhoynish faith when she was eight.
* CrosscastRole: At the start of the fanfic, since she is eleven years old, very slim and has a deep voice, she plays boys. [[invoked]]
* SweetTooth: She's very fond of sweetmeats.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Caleotte]]
A handsome Reachman.
* IgnoreTheFanservice: He pays no attention to the numerous hopeful girls who try to make his acquaintance.
* ImpliedLoveInterest: Alarra thinks he is in a relationship with Myribeth – she is strangely mild towards him (and since he is young, handsome, and healthy, it can't be out of pity like in Ellara's case or out of respect for old age and experience like in Garris's case), and he never shows any interest in his fangirls.
* MrFanservice: He is drop-dead gorgeous, graceful and tall, with a beautiful voice, and is always smartly-dressed. Many girls in the audience swoon over him.
* TheQuietOne: He is strangely reclusive and is rarely seen anywhere except the stage and the Sunflowers' cart.
* SuperSenses: He has excellent hearing, which Jonquil finds out when she's sent to spy on him.
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* ParentalAbandonment: His parents sent him away when he was just a child.
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* BigBrotherWorship: She has practically idolized her half-brother Derryk since birth, considering he is the only one in Dun Fort who has always treated her with love and care. After they grew up, she became less blind to his flaws but remained absolutely devoted to him.
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* ParentalNeglect: Her mother [[MissingMom died soon after she was born]]. Meanwhile, her father didn't pay her much attention and her stepmother only tolerated her for Derryk's sake (until Jonquil saved her father's life, that is).
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* ConflictingLoyalty: She had to choose between staying with her beloved family and going to protect Alysanne for the good of the realm.
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* PretendingToBeOnesOwnRelative: In the last year of Maegor's reign, she posed as her own sister-in-law several times to save the latter from being chosen as a Black Bride.
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Alysanne's loyal sworn shield.
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Alysanne's fiercely loyal sworn shield.
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* ImprobableAge: Played with. She is made a junior captain in Dun Fort's guard at thirteen. However, her father does it out of concern for her safety, wanting her to get well-acquainted with the servants and smallfolk in case she needs to quickly escape from the castle.
* MoralityPet: She used to be one for her brother Derryk when he was little, since he was a major SpoiledBrat and she was the only one around whom he became caring and responsible.
* RedIsHeroic: As mentioned in canon, she has a suit of ceremonial armor which is "as scarlet as the setting sun", in Alarra's words.
* StealthExpert: Before she began her training in arms, she developed excellent spying skills which she still puts to use on occasion.
* MoralityPet: She used to be one for her brother Derryk when he was little, since he was a major SpoiledBrat and she was the only one around whom he became caring and responsible.
* RedIsHeroic: As mentioned in canon, she has a suit of ceremonial armor which is "as scarlet as the setting sun", in Alarra's words.
* StealthExpert: Before she began her training in arms, she developed excellent spying skills which she still puts to use on occasion.
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* AllThereInTheManual: There is a midquel which details her backstory.
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* AllThereInTheManual: There is a midquel prequel which details her backstory.
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* MarriageBeforeRomance: She enters her second marriage without any romantic feelings for Alaric (unlike Alaric himself). As time passes, she gradually becomes fonder of him.
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* MarriageBeforeRomance: She enters her second marriage without any romantic feelings for Alaric (unlike Alaric himself). As time passes, she gradually becomes fonder of falls in love with him.
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* ConflictingLoyalty: Downplayed, since he is aware of it and stays quite reasonable. He is sad when Alysanne falls in love with Alaric, since for him, it means someone has replaced his late best friend. However, both from the religious and the political points of view, he realizes it's good news.
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!! House Darke
[[folder:Lady Jonquil Darke]]
Alysanne's loyal sworn shield.
* ActionGirl: As per canon, she is an excellent fighter.
* AllThereInTheManual: There is a midquel which details her backstory.
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[[folder:Lady Jonquil Darke]]
Alysanne's loyal sworn shield.
* ActionGirl: As per canon, she is an excellent fighter.
* AllThereInTheManual: There is a midquel which details her backstory.
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* OCStandIn: Whoever the master of whisperers under Jaehaerys was, he/she has so far never been described in canon.
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* AFatherToHisMen: He tries to look out for the watchmen under his command. Even though he comes from one of the Reach's wealthiest families and doesn't have to worry about his own future, it's painful for him to see the lower-ranked watchmen barely get paid at all, and he is delirious with joy when that salary is finally raised.
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!! The City Watch
[[folder:Ser Robert Redwyne]]
Lord Manfryd's eldest son and Commander of the City Watch.
* TookALevelInCynicism: Robert Redwyne used to be a WideEyedIdealist desperate to prove himself, but serving as commander of the City Watch during the Shivers and its aftermath took away most of it.
* YoungAndInCharge: He has already been in his position for two years, and he is only twenty-two.
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[[folder:Ser Robert Redwyne]]
Lord Manfryd's eldest son and Commander of the City Watch.
* TookALevelInCynicism: Robert Redwyne used to be a WideEyedIdealist desperate to prove himself, but serving as commander of the City Watch during the Shivers and its aftermath took away most of it.
* YoungAndInCharge: He has already been in his position for two years, and he is only twenty-two.
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* GreenEyedEpiphany: For the first time, she admits to herslef she might have fallen in love with Alaric after she fears he has grown too friendly with Florence Fossoway.
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* GreenEyedEpiphany: For the first time, she admits to herslef herself she might have fallen in love with Alaric after she fears he has grown too friendly with Florence Fossoway.
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* ProfessionalButtKisser: According to Alaric, who [[UnreliableNarrator doesn't like her]], she always speaks in an oily ingratiating voice.
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* HenpeckedHusband: In Alaric's opinion, he is sometimes openly disrespected by his wife. It should be noted, however, that Alaric doesn't like Lady Florence in general.
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* GreenEyedEpiphany: For the first time, she admits to herslef she might have fallen in love with Alaric after she fears he has grown too friendly with Florence Fossoway.
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* NotSoDifferentRemark: When Alysanne admits she was jealous (with no reason, as it turns out) of him and Lady Florence, he assures her he made the same mistake on their wedding day, getting very unsettled when Ryam Redwyne crowned Alysanne queen of love and beauty. That makes Alysanne laugh about how people from the Reach always seem to provoke jealousy in others.
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* StatuesqueStunner: Tall, stately, and very attractive.
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* MotiveMisidentification: When little Alyssa turns away and starts to cry just after tasting her milk, Alysanne thinks that the baby senses her mixed feelings towards her and therefore can't stand to be fed by her. The author's notes reveal Alysanne's milk at that point simply tastes bad due to her new pregnancy.
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* GoldDigger: Subverted. When his father asks him, he reveals his motive for pursuing Alarra is the influence she has at court, not any riches the marriage would bring (Alarra's brothers and nephews are ahead of her in line for Winterfell, and Mandon has no interest in moving halfway across the Kingdoms anyway).
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The one actually doing the master of coin's work.
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* ProfessionalMaidenName: Downplayed. Alaric and Alysanne think of her as Florence Fossoway more often than not.
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* WiseBeyondTheirYears: An able master of laws, despite being appointed at fifteen.
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* WiseBeyondTheirYears: An able master of laws, despite being appointed at fifteen. [[spoiler:Deconstructed, since not only is he overloaded with work, but he is afraid to voice his concerns at the council, feeling intimidated by the older members]].
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* PapaWolf: He is infuriated when it's suggested his son Robert is incompetent at his job.
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* PushedInFrontOfTheAudience: When Ellara fails to show up for the Sunflowers' premiere of ''The Royal Penance'', Alarra offers to play the Maiden herself instead. Since the audience consists of her father, stepmother, siblings and Jonquil Darke, she is allowed to do so.
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* PushedInFrontOfTheAudience: When Ellara fails to show up for the Sunflowers' premiere of ''The Royal Penance'', Alarra offers to play the Maiden herself instead. Since the audience consists of her father, stepmother, siblings and Jonquil Darke, she [[PromotedFanboy is allowed to do so.so]]. [[invoked]]
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* CrosscastRole: InUniverse. Since she is eleven years old, very slim and has a deep voice, she plays boys.
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* CrosscastRole: InUniverse. Since At the start of the fanfic, since she is eleven years old, very slim and has a deep voice, she plays boys.boys. [[invoked]]
* SweetTooth: She's very fond of sweetmeats.
* SweetTooth: She's very fond of sweetmeats.
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* LikeFatherUnlikeSon: His father doesn't have a shred of ambition, in particular, marrying the least highborn and least attractive noblewoman in the crownlands. Mandon is extremely ambitious and aims to marry Alarra, one of the most eligible brides in the entire realm.
* MommasBoy: He adored his mother and is very devoted to her memory.
* MommasBoy: He adored his mother and is very devoted to her memory.
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* NothingIsTheSameAnymore: InUniverse, though the grief itself is gradually healing, Alysanne often feels terrified and lost when she muses just how drastically her life has changed. After the loss of Jaehaerys and Daenerys and the hastily-arranged match with Alaric, she gets another shock when she learns Rogar Baratheon is dying, and even the news of Elinor Costayne's impending departure to Lannisport, minor compared to everything else, again prompt her to think about the old pre-Shivers times that would never come back.
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* OldMaid: Ellara, [[DeliberateValuesDissonance at twenty-two]], is desperate to find a husband and start a home of her own.
* TraumaCongaLine: During the Shivers epidemic, they lose their father and Melara her husband, so they have to join the Sunflowers. Since they have no acting talent whatsoever, they mostly act in silent and BitCharacter parts, so they don't even get ADayInTheLimelight, literal or figurative. Then Ellara, desperate to improve the situation, [[spoiler:accepts Hugh's CastingCouch offer, only to be let down in the cruelest way possible]].
* UnderageCasting: Melara, only twenty-two, plays the Crone (until taking over as the Maiden). [[invoked]]
* TraumaCongaLine: During the Shivers epidemic, they lose their father and Melara her husband, so they have to join the Sunflowers. Since they have no acting talent whatsoever, they mostly act in silent and BitCharacter parts, so they don't even get ADayInTheLimelight, literal or figurative. Then Ellara, desperate to improve the situation, [[spoiler:accepts Hugh's CastingCouch offer, only to be let down in the cruelest way possible]].
* UnderageCasting: Melara, only twenty-two, plays the Crone (until taking over as the Maiden). [[invoked]]
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[[folder:Ellara and Melara]]
Twin sisters from Dorne.
* CrosscastRole: [[invoked]] In the first act of ''The Royal Penance'', they play begging brothers.
[[folder:Ellara and Melara]]
Twin sisters from Dorne.
* CrosscastRole: [[invoked]] In the first act of ''The Royal Penance'', they play begging brothers.
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* ConvertingForLove: In a platonic version, she is so close to her ParentalSubstitute Garris that she converts to the Rhoynish faith.
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* ConvertingForLove: In a platonic version, she is so close to her ParentalSubstitute Garris that she converts converted to the Rhoynish faith.faith when she was eight.