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* ThirdPartyPeacekeeper: She advises Garon Baratheon to make peace with the children of his estranged brothers, especially since after the Shivers and Lord Rogar's death, there are a lot fewer Baratheons alive than before and Garon is feeling desperately lonely.
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* [[WickedStepmother Wicked Stepfather]]: Downplayed. Alysanne has had a frosty relationship with him ever since he attempted to break up her and Jaehaerys (and it's not even the attempt itself that angered her so much but the fact that Rogar didn't even try to learn her opinion of the matter). However, she acknowledges that he has done a lot of good for their family and the realm, and she is deeply saddened when he tells her he is dying – for all his faults, he has been a constant in her life since her childhood.
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* [[WickedStepmother Wicked Stepfather]]: Downplayed. Alysanne has had a frosty relationship with him ever since he attempted to break up her and Jaehaerys (and it's not even the attempt itself that angered her so much but the fact that Rogar didn't even try to learn her opinion of the matter). However, she acknowledges that he has done a lot of good for their family and the realm, and she is deeply saddened when he tells her he is dying and later mourns his death – for all his faults, he has been a constant in her life since her childhood.
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* NeverGotToSayGoodbye: She never gets the chance to say goodbye to her dying father. With their strained relationship, she didn't feel much affection for him, but she wanted at least some closure between them.
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* BigSisterInstinct: PracticallyDifferentGenerations they might be, but she looks out for her younger half-siblings Boremund and Jocelyn whenever possible.
* AffectionateNickname: "Rog" to his younger brother Garon.
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Rogar's daughter, whom he brings to be raised at court when she is seven.
Rogar's daughter, whom he brings to be raised at court when she is seven.
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Rogar's
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* AffectionateNickname: Aemon calls her Lynnie.
* OneOfTheBoys: She loves playing at swords with her half-nephews.
* TomboyAngst: She sometimes fears that her tomboyish interests could be harmful for her character. However, Grand Maester Elysar has told her it's ridiculous.
* OneOfTheBoys: She loves playing at swords with her half-nephews.
* TomboyAngst: She sometimes fears that her tomboyish interests could be harmful for her character. However, Grand Maester Elysar has told her it's ridiculous.
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* AffectionateNickname: Aemon calls her Lynnie.
BeneathTheMask: He acts very haughty and wants to be taken as a grown-up, but, after he is orphaned, he is a lost and frightened little boy, [[ActingYourIntellectualAge and nobody would expect much more from someone his age]].
*OneOfTheBoys: She loves playing AChildShallLeadThem: He inherits the title at swords with her half-nephews.
* TomboyAngst: She sometimes fears that her tomboyish interests could be harmful for her character. However, Grand Maester Elysar has told her it's ridiculous.ten and is confused and lost about what to do.
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* TomboyAngst: She sometimes fears that her tomboyish interests could be harmful for her character. However, Grand Maester Elysar has told her it's ridiculous.
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!! House Lannister
[[folder:Lord Tommen Lannister]]
Lord of Casterly Rock at the start of the fanfic.
[[folder:Lord Tommen Lannister]]
Lord of Casterly Rock at the start of the fanfic.
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[[folder:Lord Tommen Lannister]]
Lord of Casterly Rock
Rogar's daughter, whom he brings to be raised at
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* DeclarationOfProtection: His romantic relationship with Fenella has deteriorated, but he makes sure to tell Tyler that it doesn't mean he would allow her to come to harm.
* FormerlyFit: According to Fenella, he used to be handsome but let himself go during the Shivers and had grown plump since.
* MaliciousMisnaming: He calls the Sunset Palace, one of the Lannisters' Lannisport residences, "the Bloodbrook" due to the prevalence of red color in both the furnishings and the building itself.
* FormerlyFit: According to Fenella, he used to be handsome but let himself go during the Shivers and had grown plump since.
* MaliciousMisnaming: He calls the Sunset Palace, one of the Lannisters' Lannisport residences, "the Bloodbrook" due to the prevalence of red color in both the furnishings and the building itself.
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* DeclarationOfProtection: His romantic relationship with Fenella has deteriorated, but he makes sure to tell Tyler that it doesn't mean he would allow her to come to harm.
* FormerlyFit: According to Fenella, he used to be handsome but let himself go during the Shivers and had grown plump since.
* MaliciousMisnaming: HeAffectionateNickname: Aemon calls the Sunset Palace, one of the Lannisters' Lannisport residences, "the Bloodbrook" due to the prevalence of red color in both the furnishings and the building itself.her Lynnie.
* OneOfTheBoys: She loves playing at swords with her half-nephews.
* TomboyAngst: She sometimes fears that her tomboyish interests could be harmful for her character. However, Grand Maester Elysar has told her it's ridiculous.
* FormerlyFit: According to Fenella, he used to be handsome but let himself go during the Shivers and had grown plump since.
* MaliciousMisnaming: He
* OneOfTheBoys: She loves playing at swords with her half-nephews.
* TomboyAngst: She sometimes fears that her tomboyish interests could be harmful for her character. However, Grand Maester Elysar has told her it's ridiculous.
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[[folder:Lady Fenella Lannister]]
Born Fenella Estren, Tommen's wife.
Born Fenella Estren, Tommen's wife.
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* DeclarationOfProtection: His romantic relationship with Fenella has deteriorated, but he makes sure to tell Tyler that it doesn't mean he would allow her to come to harm.
* FormerlyFit: According to Fenella, he used to be handsome but let himself go during the Shivers and had grown plump since.
* MaliciousMisnaming: He calls the Sunset Palace, one of the Lannisters' Lannisport residences, "the Bloodbrook" due to the prevalence of red color in both the furnishings and the building itself.
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[[folder:Lady Fenella Lannister]]
Born Fenella Estren, Tommen's wife.
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* FormerlyFit: According to Fenella, he used to be handsome but let himself go during the Shivers and had grown plump since.
* MaliciousMisnaming: He calls the Sunset Palace, one of the Lannisters' Lannisport residences, "the Bloodbrook" due to the prevalence of red color in both the furnishings and the building itself.
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Born Fenella Estren, Tommen's wife.
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!! House Brownhill
[[folder:Lady Emilia Brownhill]]
Lady-in-waiting to Jocelyn Baratheon.
* GloryDays: She is implied to be around sixteen, but, according to Jocelyn, she feels that the best days both for her and for House Baratheon ended when Queen Alyssa died.
* OutOfCharacterIsSeriousBusiness: Jocelyn is astonished when she sees Emilia apparently flirting with a maester. As careful about following the rules of courtesy as Emilia is, she would hardly be flirting so openly, especially with someone neither eligible ''nor'' even available, and especially during the time of [[spoiler:deep mourning for Rogar Baratheon]]. As it turns out, [[spoiler:the maester has been telling Emilia about his suspicions about Rogar being murdered]].
* ProperLady: Extremely concerned with propriety and etiquette (most of the time). Very haughty, too, according to Jocelyn.
* RoyalFavorite: Downplayed. According to her, she was a favorite attendant of Queen Alyssa (when the latter was already just the Lady of Storm's End).
* SecretKeeper: Becomes the one from Jocelyn's retinue [[spoiler:whom the maester of Nightsong tells about his suspicions that someone poisoned Rogar]].
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[[folder:Lady Emilia Brownhill]]
Lady-in-waiting to Jocelyn Baratheon.
* GloryDays: She is implied to be around sixteen, but, according to Jocelyn, she feels that the best days both for her and for House Baratheon ended when Queen Alyssa died.
* OutOfCharacterIsSeriousBusiness: Jocelyn is astonished when she sees Emilia apparently flirting with a maester. As careful about following the rules of courtesy as Emilia is, she would hardly be flirting so openly, especially with someone neither eligible ''nor'' even available, and especially during the time of [[spoiler:deep mourning for Rogar Baratheon]]. As it turns out, [[spoiler:the maester has been telling Emilia about his suspicions about Rogar being murdered]].
* ProperLady: Extremely concerned with propriety and etiquette (most of the time). Very haughty, too, according to Jocelyn.
* RoyalFavorite: Downplayed. According to her, she was a favorite attendant of Queen Alyssa (when the latter was already just the Lady of Storm's End).
* SecretKeeper: Becomes the one from Jocelyn's retinue [[spoiler:whom the maester of Nightsong tells about his suspicions that someone poisoned Rogar]].
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* DeathByAdaptation: He dies a few months earlier than in canon, after being wounded in the Dornish War. [[spoiler:However, the maester of Nightsong suspects he was poisoned]].
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* BelatedChildDiscipline: In ''Jonquil sans Florian'', Derryk is extremely spoiled and willful due to being the heir and the only legitimate child in the family to survive past infancy. When he is eleven, his father realizes enough is enough and sends him away to squire for Lord Massey. Six years later, Derryk returns, having grown into a mature and responsible young lord.
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* PutOnABus: Leaves King's Landing for the Vale to be by his pregnant wife's side in Chapter 18 and hasn't been seen since.
* HonoraryAunt: She is "Aunt Jonquil" to Aemon and Baelon.
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* RedIsHeroic: As mentioned in canon, she has a suit of ceremonial armor which is "as scarlet as the setting sun", in Alarra's words.
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* RedIsHeroic: As mentioned in canon, she has a suit of ceremonial armor which is "as scarlet as the setting sun", in Alarra's words. In everyday life, except when she is on a spying mission, she also wears red.
* TheReliableOne: She is privy to many royal secrets and is one of the few people whom Alysanne can trust with looking after her children without extra supervision. Her own [=POV=] segments show the trust is fully deserved.
* TheReliableOne: She is privy to many royal secrets and is one of the few people whom Alysanne can trust with looking after her children without extra supervision. Her own [=POV=] segments show the trust is fully deserved.
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* InsaneTrollLogic: Sometimes he goes beyond MoralMyopia and straight into this. He accuses his mother of not fulfilling "a woman's proper destiny" in motherhood (by marrying again and having more children) -- while refusing to have any contact with her, thus depriving her from the contact with the son she does have. Moreover, in his accusation he apparently forgets ''at least'' about the existence of septas and silent sisters, whose destiny is defined, among other things, by a vow of chastity.
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* InsaneTrollLogic: Sometimes he goes beyond MoralMyopia and straight into this. He accuses his mother of not fulfilling "a woman's proper destiny" in motherhood (by marrying again and having more children) -- while refusing to have any contact with her, thus depriving her from the contact a relationship with the son she does have. Moreover, in his accusation he apparently forgets ''at least'' about the existence of septas and silent sisters, whose destiny is defined, among other things, by a vow of chastity.
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[[folder:Septa Lyra]]
One of Alysanne's companions, a survivor (and heroine) of the Jonquil's Pool attack.
* ImproperlyParanoid: Ever since the attack at Jonquil's Pool, she has been very frightened of assassins, even in the Red Keep which is about the closest to safe one can get.
* NiceGirl: Very kind and industrious, she oversees the city's orphanage and consoles Heloise and Ermesande Baratheon in their grief.
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One of Alysanne's companions, a survivor (and heroine) of the Jonquil's Pool attack.
* ImproperlyParanoid: Ever since the attack at Jonquil's Pool, she has been very frightened of assassins, even in the Red Keep which is about the closest to safe one can get.
* NiceGirl: Very kind and industrious, she oversees the city's orphanage and consoles Heloise and Ermesande Baratheon in their grief.
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Born Lord Beric Turnberry, he is formerly of the Warrior's Sons, now a confessor of the City Watch in Lannisport.
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Born Lord Beric Turnberry, he is formerly the son of Lady Aspen Turnberry. Formerly of the Warrior's Sons, he is now a confessor of the City Watch in Lannisport.Lannisport.
* AntagonisticOffspring: His mother loves him deeply, but he doesn't have a kind word to say about her.
* AntagonisticOffspring: His mother loves him deeply, but he doesn't have a kind word to say about her.
