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* LadyMacbeth: GenderInverted; he seemed to have encouraged Rhaenyra's worse tendencies, indirectly or not. This was also how he was seen InUniverse; while Rhaenyra would've already had a hard time ascending to the Iron Throne on account of her gender, her marrying her notorious and dangerous uncle certainly didn't help her gain many supporters.
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* LadyMacbeth: GenderInverted; he seemed to have encouraged Rhaenyra's worse worst tendencies, indirectly or not. This was also how he was seen InUniverse; while Rhaenyra would've already had a hard time ascending to the Iron Throne on account of her gender, her marrying her notorious and dangerous uncle certainly didn't help her gain many supporters.
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* MurderTheHypotenuse: It's questionable how many times he did this (there are some unsavory rumours attributed to him about Rhaenyra's husband's death, and rumors circulate he was behind the fire at Harrenhal that killed Rhaenyra's lover Harwin Strong), but when he wanted to marry Laena Velaryon, Daemon kept provoking her loser fiancée (the match was made long ago before the guy squandered his father's fortunes and Laena's father kept putting the wedding off, hoping a solution would roll down) until the guy challenged him to a duel. Daemon made ''very'' short work of him and happily married Laena.
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* MurderTheHypotenuse: It's questionable how many times he did this (there are some unsavory rumours attributed to him about Rhaenyra's husband's death, and rumors circulate he was behind the fire at Harrenhal that killed Rhaenyra's lover Harwin Strong), but when he wanted to marry Laena Velaryon, Daemon kept provoking her loser fiancée fiancé (the match was made long ago before the guy squandered his father's fortunes and Laena's father kept putting the wedding off, hoping a solution would roll down) until the guy challenged him to a duel. Daemon made ''very'' short work of him and happily married Laena.
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** To Charles of Valois, King Philip IV's more boisterous brother. All his life went on in the pursuit of power and a throne, like his brief adventure of being Emperor of Constantinople or King of Aragon, but every chance of ruling in his name or his brother's heirs' name would eventually be spurned. Despite this, he was an excellent military leader, and after his brother's son all died without heirs' it is his son Philip of Valois who would inherit the throne. So like Daemon he was never a king, but his offspring eventually were.
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** To Charles of Valois, King Philip IV's more boisterous brother. All his life went on in the pursuit of power and a throne, like his brief adventure of being Emperor of Constantinople or King of Aragon, but every chance of ruling in his name or his brother's heirs' name would eventually be spurned. Despite this, he was an excellent military leader, and after his brother's son all died without heirs' heirs, it is his son Philip of Valois who would inherit the throne. So like Daemon he was never a king, but his offspring eventually were.
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* KillItWithFire: He attempted to tame the dragon Seasmoke after Prince Jacaerys Velaryon asked for more dragonriders but was burned to death in the attempt.
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* ManOnFire: He attempted to tame the dragon Seasmoke after Prince Jacaerys Velaryon asked for more dragonriders but was burned to death in the attempt.
