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* AdaptationalPersonalityChange: Hikage, unlike in the canon, is no longer a ButtMonkey, but a rather mature young adult dealing with daily-life problems. This is emphasised, when [[spoiler:she reunites with Suguru for the first time in six years, who is shocked to find out that he lives next to Sakura Dormitory.]] However, some of her old traits are retained, including MiddleChildSyndrome.
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* AdaptationalPersonalityChange: AdaptationPersonalityChange: Hikage, unlike in the canon, is no longer a ButtMonkey, but a rather mature young adult dealing with daily-life problems. This is emphasised, when [[spoiler:she reunites with Suguru for the first time in six years, who is shocked to find out that he lives next to Sakura Dormitory.]] However, some of her old traits are retained, including MiddleChildSyndrome.
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* TheVoiceless: Used to. In the prologue, he was known to be silent and used to "talk" through gestures, much like in canon, [[spoiler:but we later found out that he is extremely conversational towards Hikage. As part of his personality change, however, he is no longer silent, making this a SubvertedTrope.]]
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* TheVoiceless: Used to. In the prologue, he was known to be silent and used to "talk" through gestures, much like in the canon, [[spoiler:but we later found out that he is extremely conversational towards Hikage. As part of his personality change, however, he is no longer silent, thus making this a SubvertedTrope.]]
* {{Foil}}: To Saori and Suguru. He is the more serious of the trio.
* {{Foil}}: To Suguru and Soichiro. He is the more optimistic of the trio.
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A first-year high school student in Suiko, who is a former student of Asahigaoka Branch School, and is a talented [[SequentialArtist mangaka]] known for her series ''Love in the Rain''. She is the younger sister of Suguru Koshigaya.
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A first-year high school student in Suiko, who is a former student of Asahigaoka Branch School, and is a talented [[SequentialArtist mangaka]] known for her series ''Love in the Rain''.mangaka]]. She is the younger sister of Suguru Koshigaya.
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* ChildhoodFriend: To [[spoiler:Hikage Miyauchi]].
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* ChildhoodFriend: To [[spoiler:Hikage Miyauchi]].Miyauchi]], Konomi Fujimiya, and Kaede Kagayama, although the former is much closer.
* TheVoiceless: Used to. In the prologue, he was known to be silent and used to "talk" through gestures, much like in canon, [[spoiler:but we later found out that he is extremely conversational towards Hikage. As part of his personality change, however, he is no longer silent, making this a SubvertedTrope.]]
* AdaptationalPersonalityChange: Hikage, unlike in the canon, is no longer a ButtMonkey, but a rather mature young adult dealing with daily-life problems. This is emphasised, when [[spoiler:she reunites with Suguru for the first time in six years, who is shocked to find out that he lives next to Sakura Dormitory.]] However, some of her old traits are retained, including MiddleChildSyndrome.
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* ChildhoodFriend: To [[spoiler:Suguru Koshigaya]].
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* ChildhoodFriend: To [[spoiler:Suguru Koshigaya]].Koshigaya]], Konomi Fujimiya, and Kaede Kagayama, although the former is much closer.
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A first-year high school student in Suiko, who is a former student of Asahigaoka Branch School, and is a talented [[SequentialArtist mangaka]] known for her series ''Love in the Rain''. She is the younger sister of Suguru Koshigaya.
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* AgeLift: Komari is 15, as opposed to her being 13-14 in her ''[[Manga/NonNonBiyori source material]]''.
* ExpositoryHairstyleChange: In the present time, Komari has a shoulder-length hair, while in the past her hair was like in the canon.
* ImprobableAge: Sort of. She is a mangaka since she was ''13''.
* MoralityChain: Oftentimes towards Suguru. She often tries her best to stop Suguru's questionable behaviour.
* SequentialArtist: She is a manga artist, who has already had created a shoujo manga series known as ''Love in the Rain''. However, she cares little for fame.
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* AgeLift: Komari is 15, as opposed to her being 13-14 in her ''[[Manga/NonNonBiyori source material]]''.
* ExpositoryHairstyleChange: In the present time, Komari has a shoulder-length hair, while in the past her hair was like in the canon.
* ImprobableAge: Sort of. She is a mangaka since she was ''13''.
* MoralityChain: Oftentimes towards Suguru. She often tries her best to stop Suguru's questionable behaviour.
* SequentialArtist: She is a manga artist, who has already had created a shoujo manga series known as ''Love in the Rain''. However, she cares little for fame.
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The President of Suiko's student council and Saori Himemiya's love interest. He is the best friend of Suguru.
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A third-year high school student in Suiko and Soichiro's love interest, who is also the best friend of Suguru.
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* OhCrap: [[spoiler:Paired with WhamEpisode, Suguru is ''shocked'' to realise to see Hikage Miyauchi in front of his house at the end of Chapter 1, even after six years have passed in the Prologue.]]
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* OhCrap: [[spoiler:Paired with WhamEpisode, Suguru [[spoiler:Suguru is ''shocked'' to realise to see Hikage Miyauchi in front of his house at the end of Chapter 1, even after six years have passed in the Prologue.]]
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* TookALevelInCynic: It is ''heavily'' implied that Suguru's [[spoiler:separation with Hikage]] has caused him to have grown more cynical and distrustful as years go by, [[spoiler:due to the fact that his feelings for her becomes completely unrequited, thanks to her Empty Promise to reconnect with him through mails, which did not happen.]]
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* TookALevelInCynic: It is ''heavily'' implied that Suguru's [[spoiler:separation with Hikage]] has caused him to have grown more cynical and distrustful as years go by, [[spoiler:due to the fact that his feelings for her becomes completely unrequited, thanks to her Empty Promise EmptyPromise to reconnect with him through mails, which did not happen.]]
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* BigDamnReunion: [[spoiler:His reunion with Hikage, six years later.]]
* {{Foil}}: To Soichiro and Saori. He is the more short-tempered of the trio.
* TookALevelInCynic: It is ''heavily'' implied that Suguru's [[spoiler:separation with Hikage]] has caused him to have grown more cynical and distrustful as years go by, [[spoiler:due to the fact that his feelings for her becomes completely unrequited, thanks to her Empty Promise to reconnect with him through mails, which did not happen.]]
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The female main character of the fan fiction. She is a former student of Asahigaoka Branch School, who later moved to Saitama during the events of Prologue, due to the closure of the branch school and her father's job in 2005. She is the [[spoiler:long-lost childhood friend of Suguru Koshigaya]].
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The female main character of the fan fiction. She is a former student of Asahigaoka Branch School, who later moved to Saitama during the events of Prologue, due to the closure of the branch school and her father's job in 2005. She is the [[spoiler:long-lost childhood friend of Suguru [[spoiler:Suguru Koshigaya]].
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* HairstyleInertia: Unlike in the canon where her hair is shoulder-length with a small side ponytail that accents her "city girl" appearance, [[spoiler:Hikage's hair upon meeting Suguru at the end of Chapter 1 remains uncut, which is now waist-length, whom she puts it through a side ponytail.]]
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* HairstyleInertia: Unlike in the canon where her hair is shoulder-length with a small side ponytail that accents her "city girl" appearance, [[spoiler:Hikage's hair upon meeting Suguru at the end of Chapter 1 remains uncut, which is the same in the past, which is now waist-length, whom she puts it through a side ponytail.]]
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: Suguru is much smarter in the fan fiction, but it is often polarised with his temper.
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The main character of the fan fiction. Formerly an alumnus in Asahigaoka Branch School, he is a third-year high school student in Suimei University of the Arts, who works as a Digital Artist at a publishing company. He is the childhood friend of [[spoiler:Hikage Miyauchi]].
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The male main character of the fan fiction. Formerly an alumnus a student in Asahigaoka Branch School, he is a third-year high school student in Suimei University of the Arts, who works as a Digital Artist at a publishing company. He is the childhood friend of [[spoiler:Hikage Miyauchi]].
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* AdaptationalJobChange: Not just a student, but Suguru is also a digital artist, who even worked with Misaki before.
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* AdaptationalJobChange: Not just a student, but Suguru is also a digital artist, artist on an industry level, who even worked with Misaki before.
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* OhCrap: [[spoiler:Paired with WhamEpisode, Suguru is ''shocked'' to realise that he is reunited with Hikage, to see Hikage Miyauchi in front of his house at the end of Chapter 1, even after six years have passed, passed in Chapter 1.the Prologue.]]
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The female main character of the fan fiction. She is a former student of Asahigaoka Branch School, who later moved to Saitama during the events of Prologue, due to the closure of the branch school and her father's job in 2005. She is the [[spoiler:long-lost childhood friend of Suguru Koshigaya]].
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* AgeLift: Hikage is 17, as opposed to her being 15-16 in her ''[[Manga/NonNonBiyori source material]]''.
* AscendedExtra: She is the secondary protagonist of the story.
* ChildhoodFriend: To [[spoiler:Suguru Koshigaya]].
* HairstyleInertia: Unlike in the canon where her hair is shoulder-length with a small side ponytail that accents her "city girl" appearance, [[spoiler:Hikage's hair upon meeting Suguru at the end of Chapter 1 remains uncut, which is now waist-length, whom she puts it through a side ponytail.]]
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* AgeLift: Hikage is 17, as opposed to her being 15-16 in her ''[[Manga/NonNonBiyori source material]]''.
* AscendedExtra: She is the secondary protagonist of the story.
* ChildhoodFriend: To [[spoiler:Suguru Koshigaya]].
* HairstyleInertia: Unlike in the canon where her hair is shoulder-length with a small side ponytail that accents her "city girl" appearance, [[spoiler:Hikage's hair upon meeting Suguru at the end of Chapter 1 remains uncut, which is now waist-length, whom she puts it through a side ponytail.]]
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Being the main character of the fan fic, Suguru appears much, much earlier than in the source material.
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: Suguru is much smarter in the fan fiction, but it is often polarised with his temper.
* AdaptationalJobChange: Not just a student, but Suguru is also a digital artist, who even worked with Misaki before.
* AdaptationalJobChange: Not just a student, but Suguru is also a digital artist, who even worked with Misaki before.
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* OhCrap: [[spoiler:Paired with WhamEpisode, Suguru is ''shocked'' to realise that he is reunited with Hikage, even after six years have passed, in Chapter 1.]]
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* VitriolicBestBuds: Sometimes and even most of the times towards Soichiro.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Suguru, unlike his source material counterpart, is a problematic troublemaker, in spite of his diligence and genius, chiefly towards Soichiro, his best friend since junior high. [[spoiler:This is largely because of his rather unsavoury past as a delinquent during his junior high.]]
* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Suguru's personality in the source material is a rather goofy and silent teenager who only "talks" through hand gestures. Here, Suguru is more mature, in spite of his HairTriggerTemper, and diligent, to the point that he even sheds his old personality before the series happened.
* AscendedExtra: He is the mainprotagonist.protagonist of the story.
* ChildhoodFriend: To [[spoiler:Hikage Miyauchi]].
* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Suguru's personality in the source material is a rather goofy and silent teenager who only "talks" through hand gestures. Here, Suguru is more mature, in spite of his HairTriggerTemper, and diligent, to the point that he even sheds his old personality before the series happened.
* AscendedExtra: He is the main
* ChildhoodFriend: To [[spoiler:Hikage Miyauchi]].
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* UnclePennybags: It is inferred that his occupation, which is a highly lucrative job occupation, made it possible for him to own a house and even a motorcycle.
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* UnclePennybags: It is inferred that his occupation, work as a full-time digital artist, which is a highly lucrative job occupation, made it possible for him to own a house and even a motorcycle.
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The main character of the fan fiction. Formerly an alumnus in Asahigaoka Branch School, he is a third-year high school student in Suimei University of the Arts, who works as a Digital Artist at a publishing company. He is the childhood friend of [[spoiler:Hikage Miyauchi]].
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* AscendedExtra: He is the main protagonist.
* TeenGenius: As per his canon counterpart, but it is more expanded in a way that he is even able to secure a job as a digital artist.
* UnclePennybags: It is inferred that his occupation, which is a highly lucrative job occupation, made it possible for him to own a house and even a motorcycle.
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* AscendedExtra: He is the main protagonist.
* TeenGenius: As per his canon counterpart, but it is more expanded in a way that he is even able to secure a job as a digital artist.
* UnclePennybags: It is inferred that his occupation, which is a highly lucrative job occupation, made it possible for him to own a house and even a motorcycle.
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The characters of FanFic/A Forgotten Memory fanfiction.
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[[folder:Hikage Miyauchi]]
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!!Suimei High Characters
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!!Other Characters
The characters of FanFic/A Forgotten Memory fanfiction.
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