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* {{Adorkable}}: Zenn's interactions with his friends are this.
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* HiveMind: While the Makai's servants are capable of tactics and independent thought, they only have one purpose: To feed their masters.
* ItCanThink: Interestingly, only the servants are capable of this, possessing enough intelligence to conduct basic tactics and work with other active servants. The actual spawn of Trilojig's blood is a mindless glutton.
* MadeOfEvil: The Makai are mindless amalgamations of negative energy, born from Trilojig's spilled blood when he was defeated centuries ago.
* ItCanThink: Interestingly, only the servants are capable of this, possessing enough intelligence to conduct basic tactics and work with other active servants. The actual spawn of Trilojig's blood is a mindless glutton.
* MadeOfEvil: The Makai are mindless amalgamations of negative energy, born from Trilojig's spilled blood when he was defeated centuries ago.
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* EyelessFace: A common trait is that they either have no eyes or its obscured by their grotesque features.
* HiveMind: While the Makai's servants are capable of tactics and independent thought, they only have one purpose: To feed theirmasters.
masters, which in this case is a mere drop of Trilojig's blood, grown into an abomination.
* ItCanThink: Interestingly, only the servants are capable of this, possessing enough intelligence to conduct basic tactics and work with other active servants. The actual spawn of Trilojig's blood is a mindlessglutton.
beast whose only capable of spawning more servants and consuming negative energy.
* MadeOfEvil: The Makai are mindless amalgamations of negative energy, born from Trilojig's spilled blood when he was defeated centuries ago. During his reign, they served as his army.
* HiveMind: While the Makai's servants are capable of tactics and independent thought, they only have one purpose: To feed their
* ItCanThink: Interestingly, only the servants are capable of this, possessing enough intelligence to conduct basic tactics and work with other active servants. The actual spawn of Trilojig's blood is a mindless
* MadeOfEvil: The Makai are mindless amalgamations of negative energy, born from Trilojig's spilled blood when he was defeated centuries ago. During his reign, they served as his army.
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* NoBiologicalSex: Justified as they are MadeOfEvil.
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* NoBiologicalSex: Justified as they are MadeOfEvil. In the story, they're usually referred to with gender-neutral pronouns.
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* FliesEqualsEvil: Their Ace monster: Infection Buzz King.
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* LovePotion: Spreaded a love plague to garner desire.
* PaperPeople
* TheDividual: Was able to split themselves apart in order to tag duel.
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** His default strategy tends to lean into this. His turns are often extremely aggressive but costly, meaning that if his opponent survives the initial onslaught, they can mount to a comeback that Zenn may not be able to withstand. Fittingly, his closest duel was against the StoneWall Ozumaji.
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* AnimeHair: Is described as having a long blonde ponytail with black ends reaching to his waist.
* AssKickingPose: Strikes one before every duel.
* AssKickingPose: Strikes one before every duel.
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* AnimeHair: Is described as having Being a long Yu-Gi-Oh! Protagonist, this comes naturally. Zenn's has a blonde ponytail with black ends reaching like a dabbed calligraphy brush that reaches down to his waist.
* AssKickingPose: Strikes one before everyduel.duel...Or when he's reciting something from his master or when he's making a point.
* AssKickingPose: Strikes one before every
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* TrainingFromHell: Zenn ties rocks to himself whenever he trains in order to make it more challenging. Downplayed though in that we never see him get tired or exhausted by it.
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* TrainingFromHell: Zenn ties rocks to himself whenever he trains in order to make it more challenging. Downplayed though in that we never see him get tired or exhausted by it. Usually, he ties a 'burden' to himself, and it changes depending on the chapter, from rocks, to boxes to even a whole wooden log.
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* FieryRedhead: written word-for-word in several chapters whenever it's referring to her.
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* FieryRedhead: written word-for-word in several chapters whenever it's referring to her.chapters. She's very brash and headstrong.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: She's abrasive, impolite and impatient, but is ultimately a good person that suffers from a lot of self-confidence issues.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: She's abrasive, impolite impolite, and impatient, but is ultimately a good person that ultimately suffers from a lot of self-confidence issues.
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* SheWhoFightsMonsters: After being bullied when she was younger, Jasmine developed a HairTriggerTemper.
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* SheWhoFightsMonsters: After being bullied when she was younger, Jasmine developed a HairTriggerTemper. A temper that she has lashed out against her friends.
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* SourOutsideSadInside: At her worst, Jasmine is TheBully, but deep down, she only uses her abrasive attitude as a coping mechanism so she could NeverBeHurtAgain.
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* SourOutsideSadInside: At her worst, Jasmine is TheBully, but deep down, she only uses her abrasive attitude as a coping mechanism so she could NeverBeHurtAgain.NeverBeHurtAgain by those who played with her trust. It's why her circle of friends is small despite her brashness.
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[[HeroicSelfDeprecation The Doubtful Duelist]]. Twelve-year-old Brier Kohara is Blair's BestFriend. When the two were caught by Mindy in their plan to expel Zenn, Brier was the first to fold, touched by her kindness despite her status as an Obelisk Blue. [[GuileHero Clever]] and Resourceful, Brier shows a lot of maturity for his age but is completely held back by his low self-esteem.
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[[HeroicSelfDeprecation The Doubtful Duelist]]. Twelve-year-old Brier Kohara is Blair's BestFriend. When the two were caught by Mindy in their plan to expel Zenn, Zenn from Duel Academy, Brier was the first to fold, touched fold. Touched by her Mindy's kindness despite her status as an Obelisk Blue. [[GuileHero Clever]] and Resourceful, Brier shows a lot of maturity for his age but is completely held back by his low self-esteem.a total toady for Blair in an effort to get her attention.
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* ShrinkingViolet: Usually shy most of the time and is prone to mumbling.
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* ShrinkingViolet: Usually shy most of the time and is prone to mumbling.mumbling. Even amongst the Makai Busters, he usually tends to stay quiet and lets his more out-spoken friends do the bantering.
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* WeakButSkilled: Brier's Ace Monster: Perfect Dart Striker lacks the firepower of Zenn's Red Ogre or Jasmine's Simorgh, but makes up it by having a lot of support spells and traps.
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* WeakButSkilled: Brier's Ace Monster: Perfect Dart Striker lacks the firepower of Zenn's Red Ogre or Jasmine's Simorgh, his friend's Ace Monsters, but makes up it by having using a lot of support spells and traps.traps. In fact, unlike the others, Blair's Dart Striker deck mostly consist of cards that synergize with his monster's theme of tributes.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: His lack of social skills, discomfort in crowds, and his habit of reciting quotes from his master or Gendai Reiki may imply that he's part of the autism spectrum.
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* SociallyAwkwardHero: Zenn has a hard time understanding certain social cues, sarcasm and tends to talk very stiltedly whenever he's not reciting a quote, all signs of social ineptitude.
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* SociallyAwkwardHero: Zenn has a hard time understanding certain social cues, sarcasm sarcasm, and tends to talk very stiltedly whenever he's not reciting a quote, quotes, all signs of social ineptitude.
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*SociallyAwkwardHero: Zenn has a hard time understanding certain social cues, sarcasm and tends to talk very stiltedly whenever he's not reciting a quote, all signs of social ineptitude.
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[[BlowYouAway The Harpie Duelist]]. Jasmine is an Obelisk Blue. At the start of the story, she's stuck in a losing streak, after suffering another loss, she decides to quit dueling. This is when she meets Zenn and gain back her lost confidence. Jasmine is [[HairTriggerTemper Hot-headed]], and [[HotBlooded reckless]], but behind that hard exterior is a [[ActionGirl brave]] hero that wants the best out of herself and her friends.
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[[BlowYouAway The Harpie Duelist]]. Jasmine is an Obelisk Blue. At the start of the story, she's Jasmine's stuck in a losing streak, after suffering another loss, she decides to quit dueling. This is when she meets Zenn and gain back her lost confidence. Jasmine is [[HairTriggerTemper Hot-headed]], and [[HotBlooded reckless]], but behind that hard exterior is a [[ActionGirl brave]] hero that wants the best out of herself and her friends.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Was ostracized during her time in Dueling Prep School due to coming from a poor family.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Was ostracized during her time in Dueling Prep School due to coming from a poor family.family and was framed as a thief by her peers.
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* BlowYouAway: Her Harpie Ladies, as well as Simorgh.
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* BlowYouAway: Her Harpie Ladies, as well as Simorgh.Simorgh are all WIND monsters.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: She's abrasive and rude, but is ultimately a good person that suffers from self-confidence issues.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: She's abrasive abrasive, impolite and rude, impatient, but is ultimately a good person that suffers from a lot of self-confidence issues.
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* UnsportsmanlikeGloating: She's prone to this, although this most stems from her self-confidence issues.
* {{Tsundere}}: Type A. She's moody and rude most of the time but that's mostly because she has a lot of insecurities. She only shows her soft side to her friends.
* {{Tsundere}}: Type A. She's moody and rude most of the time but that's mostly because she has a lot of insecurities. She only shows her soft side to her friends.
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* UnsportsmanlikeGloating: She's prone to this, although this most stems from her self-confidence issues.
issues and is mostly done in jest.
* {{Tsundere}}: Type A. She's moody and rude most of the time but that's mostly because she has a lot of insecurities. She only shows her soft side to herfriends.friends, especially to Zenn.
* {{Tsundere}}: Type A. She's moody and rude most of the time but that's mostly because she has a lot of insecurities. She only shows her soft side to her
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* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Averted, she is described as a 'mess of branches and dirt' after stalking Jasmine through the forests of Duel Academy.
* BrainyBrunette: She doesn't act like one, but she has the grades to prove it.
* TheChick: Because of her distaste of the overly-serious nature of duels, she doesn't duel as much as the rest of her friends.
* CharacterTics: Winks whenever she's teasing someone or being playful.
* CoolBigSis: Mindy is this to both Brier and Blair respectively. They usually go to her instead of Zenn or Jasmine when they need help.
* CurbStompBattle: As soon as Mindy starts using her Performapal monsters, she easily defeats Chairman Claire.
* DeadpanSnarker: More emphasis on 'Snarker' than 'Deadpan', she has a pretty quick wit.
* FanGirl: subverted, she was quick to point out that something that made Zenn attractive, but only to get Jasmine to [[FemaleGaze stare at him]].
* BrainyBrunette: She doesn't act like one, but she has the grades to prove it.
* TheChick: Because of her distaste of the overly-serious nature of duels, she doesn't duel as much as the rest of her friends.
* CharacterTics: Winks whenever she's teasing someone or being playful.
* CoolBigSis: Mindy is this to both Brier and Blair respectively. They usually go to her instead of Zenn or Jasmine when they need help.
* CurbStompBattle: As soon as Mindy starts using her Performapal monsters, she easily defeats Chairman Claire.
* DeadpanSnarker: More emphasis on 'Snarker' than 'Deadpan', she has a pretty quick wit.
* FanGirl: subverted, she was quick to point out that something that made Zenn attractive, but only to get Jasmine to [[FemaleGaze stare at him]].
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* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Averted, she is described as a 'mess of branches and dirt' after stalking Jasmine through the forests of Duel Academy.
Academy when she met Zenn.
* BrainyBrunette: She doesn't look nor act like one, but she has the grades and the skill to prove it.
* TheChick: Because of her distaste of the overly-serious nature of duels, she doesn't duel as much as the rest of herfriends.
friends and is mostly comfortable encouraging others.
* CharacterTics: Winks whenever she's teasing someone or beingplayful.
playful, usually to Jasmine.
* CoolBigSis: Mindy is this to both Brier and Blair respectively. They usually go to her instead of Zenn or Jasmine when they needhelp.
help or advice.
* CurbStompBattle: As soon as Mindystarts using puts on her Performapal monsters, dueltainer persona, she easily defeats trounces Chairman Claire.
* DeadpanSnarker: More emphasis on 'Snarker' than 'Deadpan', she has a pretty quickwit.
wit to offset with Jasmine's headstrong attitude.
* FanGirl: subverted, she was quick to point out that something that made Zenn attractive, but only toget trick Jasmine to [[FemaleGaze stare at him]].
* BrainyBrunette: She doesn't look nor act like one, but she has the grades and the skill to prove it.
* TheChick: Because of her distaste of the overly-serious nature of duels, she doesn't duel as much as the rest of her
* CharacterTics: Winks whenever she's teasing someone or being
* CoolBigSis: Mindy is this to both Brier and Blair respectively. They usually go to her instead of Zenn or Jasmine when they need
* CurbStompBattle: As soon as Mindy
* DeadpanSnarker: More emphasis on 'Snarker' than 'Deadpan', she has a pretty quick
* FanGirl: subverted, she was quick to point out that something that made Zenn attractive, but only to
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* NiceGirl: While she prone to teasing, her teasing with Jasmine can go a little overboard, Mindy is still kind, generous, and friendly.friendly to everyone.
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* SilkHidingSteel: Behind this NiceGirl is a great duelist.
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* SilkHidingSteel: Behind this bubbly NiceGirl is a great duelist.duelist who can put on a show.
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* TinySchoolBoy: The shy and insecure kind.
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* TinySchoolBoy: The shy and insecure kind.kind and its stated that Blair is taller than him, making him the shortest of the Makai Busters.
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* NiceGuy: While quiet and awkward, Zenn is polite to anyone he meets.
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* NiceGuy: While quiet and awkward, Zenn is polite likes to help anyone he meets.in need.
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* TheStoic: Usually quiet and reserved. His friends aren't having any of that.
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* TheStoic: Usually quiet and reserved.reserved and rarely shows any emotion. His friends aren't having any of that.
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* TheStrategist: Duels in this way. Brier prefers planning ahead in his duels, and he uses spells and traps that can synergize with each other or cancel out their drawbacks.
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* TheStrategist: Duels in this way. Brier prefers planning ahead in his duels, and he uses spells and traps that can synergize with each other or cancel out their drawbacks.as well as focusing more on card advantage.
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* EvilIsPetty: While cruel and monstrous with their actions, they generally act like TheBully or TheTroll and usually Resort to petty jabs and insults to chip at their opponent's confidence.
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* EvilIsPetty: While cruel and monstrous with their actions, they generally act like TheBully or TheTroll a Troll and usually Resort resort to petty jabs and insults to chip at their opponent's confidence.
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When Trilojig was defeated, his blood spilled onto the earth, creating the Makai: Physical Manifestations of Humanities' darkest emotions. They seek to resurrect their fallen emperor, they do this by spawning servants of Makai, which possess vulnerable people and turn them into monsters.
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When Trilojig was defeated, a single drop of his blood spilled onto fell to the earth, creating giving birth to the Makai: Physical Manifestations of Humanities' darkest emotions. They seek to resurrect their fallen emperor, they do this by spawning servants of Makai, which who possess the vulnerable people and turn warp them into terror-spreading monsters.
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* EvilIsPetty: While cruel and monstrous with their actions, they generally act like TheBully or TheTroll. Resorting to petty jabs and insults to chip at their opponent's confidence.
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* EvilIsPetty: While cruel and monstrous with their actions, they generally act like TheBully or TheTroll. Resorting TheTroll and usually Resort to petty jabs and insults to chip at their opponent's confidence.
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* ItCanThink: Interestingly, only the servants are capable of this, possessing enough intelligence to conduct basic tactics and work with other active servants.
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* ItCanThink: Interestingly, only the servants are capable of this, possessing enough intelligence to conduct basic tactics and work with other active servants. The actual spawn of Trilojig's blood is a mindless glutton.
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* EvilIsPetty: While cruel and monstrous with their actions, they generally act like TheBully or TheTroll. Resorting to petty jabs and insults to chip at their opponent's confidence.
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* PetTheDog: Gives Brier a kiss on the cheek as a sort of apology gift after rejecting him.
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* FriendlessBackground: Would put focus on training during his childhood. It's a major contribution to his [[NoSocialSkills Social Ineptitude]].
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* FriendlessBackground: Would put focus on constant training during his childhood. It's a major contribution to his [[NoSocialSkills Social Ineptitude]].
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* HiddenDepths: Despite Zenn's rough, matted hands, he can make delicate-looking Onigiri.
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* HiddenDepths: Despite Zenn's rough, matted hands, rough looks and physique, he can make delicate-looking Onigiri.
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* LovingAShadow: States that she shares a 'special bond' with Jaden, despite barely interacting with him.
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[[BlowYouAway The Harpie Duelist]]. Jasmine is an Obelisk Blue. At the start of the story, she's stuck in a losing streak, after suffering another loss, she decides to quit dueling. This is when she meets Zenn and gain back her lost confidence. Jasmine is [[HairTriggerTemper Hot-headed]], and [[HotBlooded reckless]], but she's [[ActionGirl brave]], passionate, and determined.
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[[BlowYouAway The Harpie Duelist]]. Jasmine is an Obelisk Blue. At the start of the story, she's stuck in a losing streak, after suffering another loss, she decides to quit dueling. This is when she meets Zenn and gain back her lost confidence. Jasmine is [[HairTriggerTemper Hot-headed]], and [[HotBlooded reckless]], but she's behind that hard exterior is a [[ActionGirl brave]], passionate, brave]] hero that wants the best out of herself and determined.
her friends.
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* {{Expy}}: To the [[Videogame/WorldOfWarcraft The Sha]].
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* {{Expy}}: To the Their existence as living negative emotions brings [[Videogame/WorldOfWarcraft The Sha]].Sha]] to mind.
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* XanatosGambit: The Makai's only goal is to feed off of negative energy and grow. Whenever a servant possesses someone, the Makai are able to feed off of that person as soon as they come into contact, this means that even if the servant is quickly defeated, The Makai will grow and be closed to their goal of resurrecting Trilojig
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* XanatosGambit: The Makai's only goal is to feed off of negative energy and grow. Whenever a servant possesses someone, the Makai are able to feed off of that person as soon as they come into contact, this means that even if the servant is quickly defeated, The Makai will grow and be closed closer to their goal of resurrecting Trilojig
Trilojig.
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* NiceGirl: Mindy is kind, generous, and friendly.
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* NiceGirl: While she prone to teasing, Mindy is still kind, generous, and friendly.
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* HairDecorations: Wears a yellow Ponytail holder and a long pink bow on her hair.
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* DishingOutDirt: A common element in Brier's decks is that almost all of his monsters have the EARTH attribute.
* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Does this a lot, may it be aloud or in thought.
* NiceGuy: Brier has a lot of self-confidence issues which breeds into his flaws, but he is still a good guy when you get down to it.
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* TheSmartGuy: Similar to Bastion in the original TV Series, Brier fits this role, being the only duelist who uses different.
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* TheSmartGuy: Similar to Bastion in the original TV Series, Brier fits into this role, role for The Makai Busters, being the only duelist who uses different.different decks and different strategies.
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* SourOutsideSadInside: At her worst, Jasmine is TheBully, but deep down, she only uses her abrasive attitude as a coping mechanism so she could NeverBeHurtAgain.
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* FanGirl: subverted, she was quick to point out that something that made Zenn attractive, but only to get Jasmin to [[FemaleGaze stare at him]].
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* FanGirl: subverted, she was quick to point out that something that made Zenn attractive, but only to get Jasmin Jasmine to [[FemaleGaze stare at him]].
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Was ostracized during her time in Dueling Prep School due to coming from a poor family.
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* InsultOfEndearment: Calls Zenn a 'dork' ever since they've met, first as an insult, now as an affectionate nickname.
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* SheWhoFightsMonsters: After being bullied when she was younger, Jasmine developed a HairTriggerTemper.
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* RapunzelHair: A rare male example. Zenn's ponytail reaches down to his waist.
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* TheSidekick: To Blair.
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* TheSidekick: {{Sidekick}}: To Blair.
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* DarkSkinnedBlonde
* HiddenDepths: Despite Zenn's rough, matted hands, he can make delicate-looking Onigiri.
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* WiseBeyondTheirYears: Is a teenager, but is a lot more rational compared to his friends.
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* SleevesAreForWimps: His Slifer Red jacket doesn't have sleeves, showing off his tanned, muscular arms.
* WiseBeyondTheirYears: Is a teenager, but is a lot morerational rational, mature, and reserved compared to his friends.
* WiseBeyondTheirYears: Is a teenager, but is a lot more
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* ZettaiRyouiki: Type A, goes well with her short shorts.
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* LargeHam: When she's dueling anyway.
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* LargeHam: When She turns this up when she's dueling anyway.dueling.
* EvilGloating: All the servants are prone to this, mostly used to invoke anger and annoyance.
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* MadeOfEvil: The Makai is mindless amalgamations of negative energy, born from Trilojig's spilled blood when he was defeated centuries ago.
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* MadeOfEvil: The Makai is are mindless amalgamations of negative energy, born from Trilojig's spilled blood when he was defeated centuries ago.
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* XanatosGambit: The Makai's only goal is to feed off of negative energy and grow. Whenever a servant possesses someone, the Makai are able to feed off of that person as soon as they come into contact, this means that even if the servant is quickly defeated, The Makai will grow and be one step closer to resurrecting Trilojig.
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* XanatosGambit: The Makai's only goal is to feed off of negative energy and grow. Whenever a servant possesses someone, the Makai are able to feed off of that person as soon as they come into contact, this means that even if the servant is quickly defeated, The Makai will grow and be one step closer closed to their goal of resurrecting Trilojig.
Trilojig
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* TheAce: Has only lost one duel so far. He's also managed to beat Jaden Yuki.
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[[BlowYouAway The Harpie Duelist]]. Jasmine is an Obelisk Blue. At the start of the story, she's stuck in a losing streak, after suffering another loss, she decides to quit dueling. This is when she meets Zenn and gain back her lost confidence. Jasmine is [[HairTriggerTemper Hot-headed]], head-strong and reckless, [[HotBlooded reckless]], but she's brave, loyal, [[ActionGirl brave]], passionate, and passionate.
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* ActionGirl: Competes with Zenn as the best duelist out of their inner circle of friends.
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* ActionGirl: Competes with Zenn as the best duelist out of their inner circle of friends.in the story.
* CoolLoser: Is a great duelist and a good student, but she's unpopular with the rest of her fellow Obelisk Blues due to her aforementioned losing streak and bad temper.
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* HotBloodedHotBlooded: Oh is she ever.
* SpiritedCompetitor: After gaining back her confidence, it's clear that she has a passion for dueling, not a passion for winning.
* UnsportsmanlikeGloating: She's prone to this, although this most stems from her self-confidence issues.
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* WhoWearsShortShorts: Forgoes the Obelisk Blue girl uniform's mini-skirt for this instead.
* DeadpanSnarker: More emphasis on 'Snarker' than 'Deadpan', she has a pretty quick wit.
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* WeakButSkilledWeakButSkilled: Brier's Ace Monster: Perfect Dart Striker lacks the firepower of Zenn's Red Ogre or Jasmine's Simorgh, but makes up it by having a lot of support spells and traps.
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* ClassicalAntiHero: The biggest example out of the main five. Brier is unathletic, timid, and full of self-doubt, but he has a big heart and will always try to be the brave hero he wants to be.
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* ClassicalAntiHero: The biggest example out of the main five. Brier is unathletic, timid, and full of self-doubt, but he has a big heart and will always try to be the brave hero IdealHero he wants to be.
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* CrazyPrepared: The only duelist so far in the story who uses multiple decks.
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* HumbleHero: Despite his intelligence and his skill in dueling, Brier doesn't really think of himself as anything special.
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* PerformanceAnxiety: Suffers from this. He would've won his duel against [[TheBully Barrett]] if it weren't for Makai!Jasmine's jeering.
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* TheMatchmaker: Is this to Zenn and Jasmine, wanting the two both get over their UnresolvedSexualTension.
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* ShipperOnDeck: Is this to Zenn and Jasmine, wanting the two both get over their UnresolvedSexualTension.
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* BadassBookWorm
* CoatCape: Wears his Ra Yellow jacket like this. With this and his green hair, he looks a lot like [[Anime/YuGiOhArcV Yuya Sakaki]].
* ClassicalAntiHero: The biggest example out of the main five. Brier is unathletic, timid, and full of self-doubt, but he has a big heart and will always try to be the brave hero he wants to be.
* CowardlyLion: Terrified of [[BodyHorror Konaki]], but is willing to duel the Makai if it means saving Alexis.
* CoatCape: Wears his Ra Yellow jacket like this. With this and his green hair, he looks a lot like [[Anime/YuGiOhArcV Yuya Sakaki]].
* ClassicalAntiHero: The biggest example out of the main five. Brier is unathletic, timid, and full of self-doubt, but he has a big heart and will always try to be the brave hero he wants to be.
* CowardlyLion: Terrified of [[BodyHorror Konaki]], but is willing to duel the Makai if it means saving Alexis.
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* MrExposition: Whenever the group is watching a duel, Brier will usually be this to Blair, explaining card effects to her.
* SensitiveGuyAndManlyMan: The Sensitive Guy to Zenn's Manly Man.
* ShrinkingViolet: Usually shy most of the time and is prone to mumbling.
* SensitiveGuyAndManlyMan: The Sensitive Guy to Zenn's Manly Man.
* ShrinkingViolet: Usually shy most of the time and is prone to mumbling.
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* TheSidekick: To Blair.
* TinySchoolBoy: The shy and insecure kind.
* TinySchoolBoy: The shy and insecure kind.
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* WeakButSkilled
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Has olive-green hair.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Has olive-green hair.
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[[HeroicSelfDeprecation The Doubtful Duelist]]. Twelve-year-old Brier Kohara is Blair's BestFriend. When the two were caught by Mindy in their plan to expel Zenn, Brier was the first to fold, touched by her kindness despite her status as an Obelisk Blue. [[GuileHero Clever]] and Resourceful, Brier shows a lot of maturity for his age, but is completely held back by his low self-esteem.
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[[HeroicSelfDeprecation The Doubtful Duelist]]. Twelve-year-old Brier Kohara is Blair's BestFriend. When the two were caught by Mindy in their plan to expel Zenn, Brier was the first to fold, touched by her kindness despite her status as an Obelisk Blue. [[GuileHero Clever]] and Resourceful, Brier shows a lot of maturity for his age, age but is completely held back by his low self-esteem.
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* AllLoveIsUnrequited: It's revealed in Chapter 12 that he has a crush on Blair, who is to obsessed with Jaden to notice it yet.
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* AllLoveIsUnrequited: It's revealed in Chapter 12 that he has a crush on Blair, who is to too obsessed with Jaden to notice it yet.
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*TheStrategist: Duels in this way. Brier prefers planning ahead in his duels, and he uses spells and traps that can synergize with each other or cancel out their drawbacks.
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Brier uses a Dart Striker deck.
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In contrast to his friends, Brier uses a variety of decks depending on the situation. Currently, Brier uses a Dart Striker deck.
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* GreenEyedMonster: Is envious of Jaden for unwittingly stealing his chances of getting together with Blair.
* HeightAngst: Considers himself a shrimp and yearns to be TallDarkAndHandsome
* TheSmartGuy: Similar to Bastion in the original TV Series, Brier fits this role, being the only duelist who uses different.
* HeightAngst: Considers himself a shrimp and yearns to be TallDarkAndHandsome
* TheSmartGuy: Similar to Bastion in the original TV Series, Brier fits this role, being the only duelist who uses different.
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* BullyHunter: Was quick to silence the FatBastard Barrett when he decided to insult Blair for being a Slifer Red.
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* FriendlessBackground: Would put focus on his training instead of making friends during his childhood. It's a major contribution to his [[NoSocialSkills Social Ineptitude]].
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* FriendlessBackground: Would put focus on his training instead of making friends during his childhood. It's a major contribution to his [[NoSocialSkills Social Ineptitude]].
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* WiseBeyondTheirYears: Is a teenager, but is a lot more rational compared to his friends.
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* TheMatchmaker: Is this to Zenn and Jasmine, wanting the two both get over their UnresolvedSexualTension.
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* SelfProclaimedLoveInterest: Constantly states she is Jaden's girlfriend, even though when they meet, Jaden doesn't remember her.
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[[HeroicSelfDeprecation The Doubtful Duelist]]. Twelve-year-old Brier Kohara is Blair's BestFriend. When the two were caught by Mindy in their plan to expel Zenn, Brier was the first to fold, touched by her kindness despite her status as an Obelisk Blue. [[GuileHero Clever]] and Resourceful, Brier shows a lot of maturity for his age, but is completely held back by his low self-esteem.
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*AllLoveIsUnrequited: It's revealed in Chapter 12 that he has a crush on Blair, who is to obsessed with Jaden to notice it yet.
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* ShipTease: Has a lot of moments with Zenn.
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* ShipTease: Has a lot of these moments with Zenn.Zenn. It's unknown whether or not Zenn shares the same feelings.
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* TinyTyrannicalGirl: Bosses Brier around constantly, she tries to TheLeader of her group of friends only for them to mostly ignore her.
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* TinyTyrannicalGirl: Bosses Brier around constantly, she constantly. She tries to TheLeader of her group of friends only for them to mostly ignore her.
