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-->'''Commander Lund:''' And how old is Miss Elsie?
-->'''Ingrid:''' Eight, sir.
-->'''Commander Lund:''' So you were playing with an eight year old girl?
-->'''Ingrid:''' Not all the time, sir.
-->'''Commander Lund:''' Of course not.
-->'''Ingrid:''' She used to be seven, sir. And before that, six.
-->'''Ingrid:''' Eight, sir.
-->'''Commander Lund:''' So you were playing with an eight year old girl?
-->'''Ingrid:''' Not all the time, sir.
-->'''Commander Lund:''' Of course not.
-->'''Ingrid:''' She used to be seven, sir. And before that, six.
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-->'''Commander Lund:''' And how old is Miss Elsie?
-->'''Ingrid:'''Elsie?\\
'''Ingrid:''' Eight,sir.
-->'''Commandersir.\\
'''Commander Lund:''' So you were playing with an eight year oldgirl?
-->'''Ingrid:'''girl?\\
'''Ingrid:''' Not all the time,sir.
-->'''Commandersir.\\
'''Commander Lund:''' Of coursenot.
-->'''Ingrid:'''not.\\
'''Ingrid:''' She used to be seven, sir. And before that, six.
-->'''Ingrid:'''
'''Ingrid:''' Eight,
-->'''Commander
'''Commander Lund:''' So you were playing with an eight year old
-->'''Ingrid:'''
'''Ingrid:''' Not all the time,
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'''Commander Lund:''' Of course
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'''Ingrid:''' She used to be seven, sir. And before that, six.
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-->'''Billy:''' Hey, that's a bomb!
-->'''Shawn:''' Thank you, Captain Obvious.
-->'''Shawn:''' Thank you, Captain Obvious.
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-->'''Billy:''' Hey, that's a bomb!
-->'''Shawn:'''bomb!\\
'''Shawn:''' Thank you, Captain Obvious.
-->'''Shawn:'''
'''Shawn:''' Thank you, Captain Obvious.
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-->'''Nala:''' I hate sandstorms. They're really... sandy.
-->'''Haiba:''' Well, duh! They're not gonna be banana-y, are they?
-->'''Haiba:''' Well, duh! They're not gonna be banana-y, are they?
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-->'''Nala:''' I hate sandstorms. They're really... sandy.
-->'''Haiba:'''sandy.\\
'''Haiba:''' Well, duh! They're not gonna be banana-y, are they?
-->'''Haiba:'''
'''Haiba:''' Well, duh! They're not gonna be banana-y, are they?
* ''Webcomic/NaruHinaChronicles'': In one chapter, Sai suddenly makes his presence known to Yuko and a bunch of captives by knocking out from behind a guard who tries to attack them. However, Sai feels the need to tell them "Hello. I got him.", even though they could already tell that with their own eyes.
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-->'''Giles''': She's had a rough time recently.\\
'''Xander''': [[Series/{{Jeopardy}} I'll take the Glaringly Obvious for 100, Alex.]]
'''Xander''': [[Series/{{Jeopardy}} I'll take the Glaringly Obvious for 100, Alex.]]
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--> '''Edward Kramer:''' That enemy woman really is bad news!
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*''Fanfic/VoltesVVersusVoltronTheGodaikinWars'':
--> '''Edward Kramer:''' That enemy woman really is bad news!
--> '''Edward Kramer:''' That enemy woman really is bad news!
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* In ''Fanfic/GoldPoisons'', Jiang Cheng slips into this and notes that "I think he just admitted to it" when [[spoiler: Jin Guangshan]] blurts out wanting Nie Mingjue dead near the end of his son's trial.
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* In ''Fanfic/LoopingBackToTheBeginning'', Dabi has a moment when the League of Villains shows up to attack the training camp, only to find a sign at the coordinates of the camp labeled "Caution: Landmines" with a stick-figure Shigaraki being blown up. This is ''after'' the League gets pizzas delivered to their hideout, in Shigaraki's name, with a message saying that they knew that the villains would attack the training camp.
-->'''Dabi:''' I think they may be expecting us.
-->'''Dabi:''' I think they may be expecting us.
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* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/238736/1/Sic-Transit-Gloria-Mundi Sic Transit Gloria Mundi]]'' Buffy, dealing with the threat of Glory and her mother's death, gets into an argument with Giles and storms out of the Magic Box.
-->'''Giles''': She's had a rough time recently.\\
'''Xander''': [[Series/{{Jeopardy}} I'll take the Glaringly Obvious for 100, Alex.]]
-->'''Giles''': She's had a rough time recently.\\
'''Xander''': [[Series/{{Jeopardy}} I'll take the Glaringly Obvious for 100, Alex.]]
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* In ''Fanfic/ThePandaChronicles'' chapter "Sick Day", after throwing up, [[WesternAnimation/TurningRed Tae-young]] feels the need to tell Robaire that he threw up, despite Robaire standing right next to him, watching him do so.
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* In the ''WesternAnimation/Frozen2013'' fic ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3503216 Anywhere Her Heart May Lead]]'', [[AscendedExtra Ingrid]] combines this with ObfuscatingStupidity when she's interrogated by Commander Lund.
-->'''Commander Lund:''' And how old is Miss Elsie?
-->'''Ingrid:''' Eight, sir.
-->'''Commander Lund:''' So you were playing with an eight year old girl?
-->'''Ingrid:''' Not all the time, sir.
-->'''Commander Lund:''' Of course not.
-->'''Ingrid:''' She used to be seven, sir. And before that, six.
-->'''Commander Lund:''' And how old is Miss Elsie?
-->'''Ingrid:''' Eight, sir.
-->'''Commander Lund:''' So you were playing with an eight year old girl?
-->'''Ingrid:''' Not all the time, sir.
-->'''Commander Lund:''' Of course not.
-->'''Ingrid:''' She used to be seven, sir. And before that, six.
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* In ''Fanfic/DirtySympathy'', Apollo reveals that his boss Kristoph is abusing him, but Apollo can't leave him due to being dependent on him. Klavier then summarizes what he's heard.
-->'''Klavier''': So without him(Kristoph) you have no job, no employment history, no home, and no car. This is bad.\\
'''Apollo''': [[LampshadeHanging Thanks very fucking much, Watson, I noticed that]]!
-->'''Klavier''': So without him(Kristoph) you have no job, no employment history, no home, and no car. This is bad.\\
'''Apollo''': [[LampshadeHanging Thanks very fucking much, Watson, I noticed that]]!
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* In ''Fanfic/TheNightmareHouse'', the nurse says, "[[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse Lana Loud]]?", to which Rita replies, "That's you."
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* ''Fanfic/NotTheIntendedUseZantetsukenReverse'' has Soma telling the Mafia members that abducted him and want to sell his organs that they're horrible people.
-->'''Mafia member:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Yes, it's hard to miss the murders.]]
-->'''Mafia member:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Yes, it's hard to miss the murders.]]
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* In ''Fanfic/DespairsLastResort'', the narrator does this after the first body is discovered hanging from the ceiling.
-->There was no way to deny it at that point. [[spoiler:Chiyo]] was definitely dead. And someone among them was [[spoiler:her]] murderer.
-->There was no way to deny it at that point. [[spoiler:Chiyo]] was definitely dead. And someone among them was [[spoiler:her]] murderer.
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* In ''Literature/TheSilmarillion'' fanfiction ''Fanfic/ABoyAGirlAndADogTheLeithianScript'', Beren's comrades quickly gang up on two Feanor's partisans who are attempting to bully him. Said partisans proceed to shout they're outnumbered.
-->'''Seneschal of Formenos:''' [almost speechless with fury] You -- dishonorable ruffians --\\
'''Captain:''' I beg your pardon? Beren wasn't doing anything to you -- to say nothing of the rest of us.\\
'''Seneschal of Formenos:''' Setting upon us with guile and greater numbers -- !\\
'''Captain:''' I don't understand.\\
'''Warden of Aglon:''' [snarling in pain] You outnumber us, idiot!\\
'''Captain: [puzzled frown]''' Er -- yes, surely you'd noticed that already? That's usually the way it is.
-->'''Seneschal of Formenos:''' [almost speechless with fury] You -- dishonorable ruffians --\\
'''Captain:''' I beg your pardon? Beren wasn't doing anything to you -- to say nothing of the rest of us.\\
'''Seneschal of Formenos:''' Setting upon us with guile and greater numbers -- !\\
'''Captain:''' I don't understand.\\
'''Warden of Aglon:''' [snarling in pain] You outnumber us, idiot!\\
'''Captain: [puzzled frown]''' Er -- yes, surely you'd noticed that already? That's usually the way it is.
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* In ''Fanfic/APrizeForThreeEmpires'', the [[Franchise/XMen Shi'ar Imperial Guard]] has captured ComicBook/CarolDanvers, and Oracle warns Gladiator that their prisoner will try to escape.
-->'''Oracle:''' Gladiator, I must warn you of my vision. I have a sight that she will try to escape before we make planet. Be on your guard.\\
'''Gladiator:''' (rolling eyes) That I needed you to tell me? Thank you, Oracle.
-->'''Oracle:''' Gladiator, I must warn you of my vision. I have a sight that she will try to escape before we make planet. Be on your guard.\\
'''Gladiator:''' (rolling eyes) That I needed you to tell me? Thank you, Oracle.
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* In ''Fanfic/ChristianHumberReloaded'', after Vash's friend Soku betrays him and reports him to the police, he wants to kill her, but remembers that he promised her that he wouldn't kill anyone else. One chapter later, he changes his mind, and [[DisproportionateRetribution not only kills Soku, but also slaughters her friends and family and destroys her village]]. He then says, "By doing that I broke my promise to her."
