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** "Hypersonic Missiles
* The TitleTrack is a rather epic tune akin to [[Music/BruceSpringsteen "Born To Run"]] about appreciating life despite being aware of all the conflict in the world.
* "Dead Boys" is also rather notable, calling out how men committing suicide is an overlooked issue with a great build-up to the chorus.
* The TitleTrack is a rather epic tune akin to [[Music/BruceSpringsteen "Born To Run"]] about appreciating life despite being aware of all the conflict in the world.
* "Dead Boys" is also rather notable, calling out how men committing suicide is an overlooked issue with a great build-up to the chorus.
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* "Dead Boys"
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* The TitleTrack of "Hypersonic Missles", a rather epic tune akin to [[Music/BruceSpringsteen "Born To Run"]] about appreciating life despite being aware of all the conflict in the world.
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** "Hypersonic Missiles
* The TitleTrackof "Hypersonic Missles", is a rather epic tune akin to [[Music/BruceSpringsteen "Born To Run"]] about appreciating life despite being aware of all the conflict in the world.world.
* "Dead Boys" is also rather notable, calling out how men committing suicide is an overlooked issue with a great build-up to the chorus.
* The TitleTrack
* "Dead Boys" is also rather notable, calling out how men committing suicide is an overlooked issue with a great build-up to the chorus.
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* The TitleTrack of "Hypersonic Missles", a rather epic tune akin to [[Music/BruceSpringsteen "Born To Run"]] about appreciating life despite being aware of all the conflict in the world.
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Song titles go in quotes, and "an euphoric" is incorrect.
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* His [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RcUaoKQfZ7s cover]] of Music/{{Avicii}}'s Waiting For Love, taking a popular Electronic Dance Song and turning it into an euphoric rock song.
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* His [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RcUaoKQfZ7s cover]] of Music/{{Avicii}}'s Waiting "Waiting For Love, Love", taking a popular Electronic Dance Song and turning it into an a euphoric rock song.
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* His cover of Music/Avicii's Waiting For Love, taking a popular Electronic Dance Song and turning it into an euphoric rock song.
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* His cover [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RcUaoKQfZ7s cover]] of Music/Avicii's Music/{{Avicii}}'s Waiting For Love, taking a popular Electronic Dance Song and turning it into an euphoric rock song.
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* His cover of Music/Avicii's Waiting For Love, taking a popular Electronic Dance Song and turning it into an euphoric rock song.
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None of these examples have adequate context, and describing a track as "[X] to listen to" is Word Cruft.
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A lot of his songs are majestic to listen to.
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A lot of his songs are majestic to listen to.majestic.
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* Hypersonic Missiles: The TitleTrack, "The Borders", "Will We Talk?", "Play God" and "Dead Boys"
* Seventeen Going Under: The TitleTrack, "Getting Started", "Long Way Off", "Get You Down", "The Dying Light", "Spit of You", "Last To Make It Home" and "Pretending That You're Dead"
* Other songs include his cover of [[Music/{{Avicii}} "Waiting For Love"]], "Spice" and "Poundshop Kardashians"
* Seventeen Going Under: The TitleTrack, "Getting Started", "Long Way Off", "Get You Down", "The Dying Light", "Spit of You", "Last To Make It Home" and "Pretending That You're Dead"
* Other songs include his cover of [[Music/{{Avicii}} "Waiting For Love"]], "Spice" and "Poundshop Kardashians"
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%%A list of titles is not context. What's awesome about EACH of them?
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** Hypersonic Missiles: The TitleTrack, "The Borders", "Will We Talk?", "Play God" and "Dead Boys"
** Seventeen Going Under: The TitleTrack, "Getting Started", "Long Way Off", "Get You Down", "The Dying Light", "Spit of You", "Last To Make It Home" and "Pretending That You're Dead"
** Other songs include his cover of [[Music/{{Avicii}} "Waiting For Love"]], "Spice" and "Poundshop Kardashians"
** Seventeen Going Under: The TitleTrack, "Getting Started", "Long Way Off", "Get You Down", "The Dying Light", "Spit of You", "Last To Make It Home" and "Pretending That You're Dead"
** Other songs include his cover of [[Music/{{Avicii}} "Waiting For Love"]], "Spice" and "Poundshop Kardashians"
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A lot of his songs are majestic to listen to.
** Hypersonic Missiles: The TitleTrack, "The Borders", "Will We Talk?", "Play God" and "Dead Boys"
** Seventeen Going Under: The TitleTrack, "Getting Started", "Long Way Off", "Get You Down", "The Dying Light", "Spit of You", "Last To Make It Home" and "Pretending That You're Dead"
** Other songs include his cover of [[Music/{{Avicii}} "Waiting For Love"]], "Spice" and "Poundshop Kardashians"
** Hypersonic Missiles: The TitleTrack, "The Borders", "Will We Talk?", "Play God" and "Dead Boys"
** Seventeen Going Under: The TitleTrack, "Getting Started", "Long Way Off", "Get You Down", "The Dying Light", "Spit of You", "Last To Make It Home" and "Pretending That You're Dead"
** Other songs include his cover of [[Music/{{Avicii}} "Waiting For Love"]], "Spice" and "Poundshop Kardashians"
