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Also, the titles of the individual movements from The Planets go in quotes.
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* "Ghosts and Glass" has a clear shout-out to Gustav Holst's ''The Planets'' Suite. Specifically, it's a sad version of the middle part of Jupiter, The Bringer of Jollity.
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* "Ghosts and Glass" has a clear shout-out to Gustav Holst's ''The Planets'' Suite. Specifically, it's a sad version of the middle part of Jupiter, The "Jupiter, the Bringer of Jollity.Jollity".
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The suite is for all seven non-Earth planets, not just one. The apostrophe is incorrect.
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* "Ghosts and Glass" has a clear shout-out to Gustav Holst's The Planet's Suite. Specifically, it's a sad version of the middle part of Jupiter, The Bringer of Jollity.
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* "Ghosts and Glass" has a clear shout-out to Gustav Holst's The Planet's ''The Planets'' Suite. Specifically, it's a sad version of the middle part of Jupiter, The Bringer of Jollity.
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* "Ghosts and Glass" has a clear shout-out to Gustav Holst's The Planet's Suite. Specifically, it's a sad version of the middle part of Jupiter, The Bringer of Jollity.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cRJPi_cn_L8 "Greatest Journey"]], ''the'' most epic ''complete'' rendition of the ''Halo'' theme, serves as the BackgroundMusic for the final [[{{Pun}} run]] of ''Halo 3''. (It gets bonus points for throwing in "Under Cover of Night", a melancholic piece the first game, and some creepy Flood-type music.) It has [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q_pAa9252Uo a rival for the title of most "complete" rendition.]]
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cRJPi_cn_L8 "Greatest Journey"]], ''the'' most epic ''complete'' rendition of the ''Halo'' theme, serves as the BackgroundMusic for the final [[{{Pun}} run]] of ''Halo 3''. (It gets bonus points for throwing in "Under Cover of Night", a melancholic piece from the first game, and some creepy Flood-type music.) It has [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q_pAa9252Uo a rival for the title of most "complete" rendition.]]
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cRJPi_cn_L8 "Greatest Journey"]], ''the'' most epic ''complete'' rendition of the ''Halo'' theme, serves as the BackgroundMusic for the final [[{{Pun}} run]] of ''Halo 3''. (It gets bonus points for throwing in "Under Cover of Night", a criminally underused piece from the first game, and some creepy Flood-type music.) It has [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q_pAa9252Uo a rival for the title of most "complete" rendition.]]
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cRJPi_cn_L8 "Greatest Journey"]], ''the'' most epic ''complete'' rendition of the ''Halo'' theme, serves as the BackgroundMusic for the final [[{{Pun}} run]] of ''Halo 3''. (It gets bonus points for throwing in "Under Cover of Night", a criminally underused melancholic piece from the first game, and some creepy Flood-type music.) It has [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q_pAa9252Uo a rival for the title of most "complete" rendition.]]
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* [[http://youtu.be/wulYtR_2M4A "Unforgotten"]], which plays over the credits and occasionally in the menu, has become one of the most enduring songs from the game. There's just something about that piano and those strings. There is also a RealitySubtext to the theme, as the first thing that appears when the piece begins is [[https://gamestooge.podbean.com/e/gamestooge-flashback-halo-2-dion-arroyo-remembered/ an obituary]] for Dion Arroyo, the brother of one of the developers who was killed on September 11, 2003 in a car crash. Unforgotten, indeed.
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* [[http://youtu.be/wulYtR_2M4A [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uxKH5JKaduQ "Unforgotten"]], which plays over the credits and occasionally in the menu, has become one of the most enduring songs from the game. There's just something about that piano and those strings. There is also a RealitySubtext to the theme, as the first thing that appears when the piece begins is [[https://gamestooge.podbean.com/e/gamestooge-flashback-halo-2-dion-arroyo-remembered/ an obituary]] for Dion Arroyo, the brother of one of the developers who was killed on September 11, 2003 in a car crash. Unforgotten, indeed.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cRJPi_cn_L8 "Greatest Journey"]], ''the'' most epic ''complete'' rendition of the ''Halo'' theme, serves as the BackgroundMusic for the final [[IncrediblyLamePun run]] of ''Halo 3''. (It gets bonus points for throwing in "Under Cover of Night", a criminally underused piece from the first game, and some creepy Flood-type music.) It has [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q_pAa9252Uo a rival for the title of most "complete" rendition.]]
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cRJPi_cn_L8 "Greatest Journey"]], ''the'' most epic ''complete'' rendition of the ''Halo'' theme, serves as the BackgroundMusic for the final [[IncrediblyLamePun [[{{Pun}} run]] of ''Halo 3''. (It gets bonus points for throwing in "Under Cover of Night", a criminally underused piece from the first game, and some creepy Flood-type music.) It has [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q_pAa9252Uo a rival for the title of most "complete" rendition.]]
