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----> "[[BadassBoast I am Peter Van Doorn. I do not give a damn what they want. Matters of significance require my presence, and I do not follow orders blindly. It's time that they rememer that. That they remember the Nightmare of Abbas.]]"
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----> "[[BadassBoast I am Peter Van Doorn. I do not give a damn what they want. Matters of significance require my presence, and I do not follow orders blindly. It's time that they rememer remember that. That they remember the Nightmare of Abbas.]]"
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* Van Doorn is a walking moment of awesome, and is probably the one who most:
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* Van Doorn is a walking moment of awesome, and is probably the one who most:awesome:
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----> "[[BadassBoast I am Van Doorn. I do not give a damn what they want. Matters of significance require my presence, and I do not follow orders blindly. It's time that they rememer that. That they remember the Nightmare of Abbas.]]"
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----> "[[BadassBoast I am Peter Van Doorn. I do not give a damn what they want. Matters of significance require my presence, and I do not follow orders blindly. It's time that they rememer that. That they remember the Nightmare of Abbas.]]"
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** Despite a brief moment of friction at the beginning, the [[ColdSniper Silent Sniper]] quickly proves his worth as a member of the team, being the first to spot aliens on the move and saving Patricia from a Sectoid that nearly got the drop on her.
** Patricia herself quickly proves to be no slouch either: she knocks out a mind-controlled Ivan before he can kill any more of his teammates, and saves Pete from the remaining Sectoids and Drones, alongside Paige.
** Patricia herself quickly proves to be no slouch either: she knocks out a mind-controlled Ivan before he can kill any more of his teammates, and saves Pete from the remaining Sectoids and Drones, alongside Paige.
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** Despite a brief moment the possibility of friction at the beginning, the [[ColdSniper Silent Sniper]] due to his background, resident ColdSniper Nero quickly proves his worth as a member of the team, being the first to spot aliens on the move and saving Patricia from a Sectoid that nearly got the drop on her.
** Patricia herselfquickly proves to be is no slouch either: she knocks out a mind-controlled Ivan before he can kill any more of his their teammates, and saves Pete from the remaining Sectoids and Drones, alongside Paige.
** Patricia herself
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** He is the first to figure out that there are Thin Men cleverly hidden amongst the fearful populace. He couldn't intervene in time to save Cortez, but if he had never connected the dots, XCOM could've lost ''more soldiers'' to a single Thin Man.
** His DyingMomentOfAwesome: Shortly after first encountring the Chryssalid zombies, he sees a few of the things chasing after fleeing civilians. What does he do? Charge in. He kills the Chryssalids, saving people he never knew in the process, but sadly, the final Chryssalid pins him down, and no one is able to save him.
** His DyingMomentOfAwesome: Shortly after first encountring the Chryssalid zombies, he sees a few of the things chasing after fleeing civilians. What does he do? Charge in. He kills the Chryssalids, saving people he never knew in the process, but sadly, the final Chryssalid pins him down, and no one is able to save him.
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** He is the first to figure out that there are Thin Men cleverly hidden amongst the fearful populace. He couldn't intervene in time to save Cortez, but if he had never connected the dots, XCOM the squad could've lost ''more soldiers'' more soldiers to a single ''single'' Thin Man.
** His DyingMomentOfAwesome: Shortly after first encountring the Chryssalid zombies, he sees a few of the things chasing after fleeing civilians. What does he do? Charge in. He kills the Chryssalids, saving people he never knew in the process, but sadly, the final Chryssalid pins him down, and no one is able to savehim.him.
* Van Doorn is a walking moment of awesome, and is probably the one who most:
** His very first scene has him and his security detail being ambushed by alien forces. He wastes no time in formulating a plan to hold them off. He and his men succeed in holding out long enough for XCOM to arrive.
*** And after XCOM arrives? He fights an ''[[MechaMook Outsider]]'' in close quarters. The Outsider '''loses.'''
*** When all's said and done, and their team ends up being rerouted to fend off the alien attack in Hamburg, Van Doorn is eager to help, even in spite of whatever his superiors may think.
----> "[[BadassBoast I am Van Doorn. I do not give a damn what they want. Matters of significance require my presence, and I do not follow orders blindly. It's time that they rememer that. That they remember the Nightmare of Abbas.]]"
** His DyingMomentOfAwesome: Shortly after first encountring the Chryssalid zombies, he sees a few of the things chasing after fleeing civilians. What does he do? Charge in. He kills the Chryssalids, saving people he never knew in the process, but sadly, the final Chryssalid pins him down, and no one is able to save
* Van Doorn is a walking moment of awesome, and is probably the one who most:
** His very first scene has him and his security detail being ambushed by alien forces. He wastes no time in formulating a plan to hold them off. He and his men succeed in holding out long enough for XCOM to arrive.
*** And after XCOM arrives? He fights an ''[[MechaMook Outsider]]'' in close quarters. The Outsider '''loses.'''
*** When all's said and done, and their team ends up being rerouted to fend off the alien attack in Hamburg, Van Doorn is eager to help, even in spite of whatever his superiors may think.
----> "[[BadassBoast I am Van Doorn. I do not give a damn what they want. Matters of significance require my presence, and I do not follow orders blindly. It's time that they rememer that. That they remember the Nightmare of Abbas.]]"
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** His DyingMomentOfAwesome: After seeing the Chryssalid zombies for the first time, the team sees a few of the things chasing after fleeing civilians. Shawn charges in to kill the Chryssalids, saving plenty of people in the process. He dies after being pinned down by the final 'lid.
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** His DyingMomentOfAwesome: After seeing Shortly after first encountring the Chryssalid zombies for the first time, the team zombies, he sees a few of the things chasing after fleeing civilians. Shawn charges in to kill What does he do? Charge in. He kills the Chryssalids, saving plenty of people he never knew in the process. He dies after being pinned down by process, but sadly, the final 'lid.Chryssalid pins him down, and no one is able to save him.
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* Chapter 3, XCOM's first encounter with the aliens, sees resident rookie Abigail Gertrude in her first ever combat engagement. She scores the killing shot on two Sectoids, and although there were some moments where she was close to panicking, she's able to keep it together throughout the entire mission. Several of her teammates compliment her on this, and even the Commander (who had been observing through their armor cams) is positively impressed.
* Chapter 5:
** Despite a brief moment of friction at the beginning, the [[ColdSniper Silent Sniper]] quickly proves his worth as a member of the team, being the first to spot aliens on the move and saving Patricia from a Sectoid that nearly got the drop on her.
** Patricia herself quickly proves to be no slouch either: she knocks out a mind-controlled Ivan before he can kill any more of his teammates, and saves Pete from the remaining Sectoids and Drones, alongside Paige.
* Chapter 5:
** Despite a brief moment of friction at the beginning, the [[ColdSniper Silent Sniper]] quickly proves his worth as a member of the team, being the first to spot aliens on the move and saving Patricia from a Sectoid that nearly got the drop on her.
** Patricia herself quickly proves to be no slouch either: she knocks out a mind-controlled Ivan before he can kill any more of his teammates, and saves Pete from the remaining Sectoids and Drones, alongside Paige.
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* Chapter 22, "Absolute Terror": A few understated moments with Shawn:
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* Chapter 22, "Absolute Terror": 22: A few understated moments with Shawn:Shawn, during the [[WhamEpisode invasion of Hamburg]]:
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* Chapter 22, "Absolute Terror": A few understated moments with Shawn:
** He is the first to figure out that there are Thin Men cleverly hidden amongst the fearful populace. He couldn't intervene in time to save Cortez, but if he had never connected the dots, XCOM could've lost ''more soldiers'' to a single Thin Man.
** His DyingMomentOfAwesome: After seeing the Chryssalid zombies for the first time, the team sees a few of the things chasing after fleeing civilians. Shawn charges in to kill the Chryssalids, saving plenty of people in the process. He dies after being pinned down by the final 'lid.
** He is the first to figure out that there are Thin Men cleverly hidden amongst the fearful populace. He couldn't intervene in time to save Cortez, but if he had never connected the dots, XCOM could've lost ''more soldiers'' to a single Thin Man.
** His DyingMomentOfAwesome: After seeing the Chryssalid zombies for the first time, the team sees a few of the things chasing after fleeing civilians. Shawn charges in to kill the Chryssalids, saving plenty of people in the process. He dies after being pinned down by the final 'lid.
