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* Steven giving Ash Claydol to be his protector.
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* Steven giving Ash Claydol to be his protector.protector.
* Ash winning a Silver Medal in his first Pokémon Contest with Oz and Plume as his partners.
* Ash giving Daisy a minor TheReasonYouSuckSpeech regarding how she has been ignoring her family.
* Ash finding Silver with Mewtwo's help and convincing Silver to turn himself into the Ever Grande League.
** The fact that Ash was able to bribe Drake into letting him talk down Silver alone.
** Ash tells Wallace that Silver is his brother, and the Champion immediately connects the dots concerning Ash and Giovanni. Wallace tells Ash that he does not hold Giovanni's crimes against his children.
* Ash winning a Silver Medal in his first Pokémon Contest with Oz and Plume as his partners.
* Ash giving Daisy a minor TheReasonYouSuckSpeech regarding how she has been ignoring her family.
* Ash finding Silver with Mewtwo's help and convincing Silver to turn himself into the Ever Grande League.
** The fact that Ash was able to bribe Drake into letting him talk down Silver alone.
** Ash tells Wallace that Silver is his brother, and the Champion immediately connects the dots concerning Ash and Giovanni. Wallace tells Ash that he does not hold Giovanni's crimes against his children.
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* Drake congratulating Ash on surviving his first assassination attempt.
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** Metagross was nowhere to be seen at Sky Pillar. Why? It immediately started going through intel and data to track down Zinnia and her allies on top of processing data from the latest Hoenn attack the moment he heard that Ash was attacked, even urging Steven to get vengeance.
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** Metagross was nowhere to be seen at Sky Pillar. Why? It immediately started going through intel and data to track down Zinnia and her allies on top of processing data from the latest Hoenn attack the moment he it heard that Ash was attacked, even urging Steven to get vengeance.
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** Ash gives Durand a small TheReasonYouSuckSpeech in regards to the attack on Devon and how his almost teammate Anorith was among the casualties.
** Metagross was nowhere to be seen at Sky Pillar. Why? It immediately started going through intel and data to track down Zinnia and her allies on top of processing data from the latest Hoenn attack the moment he heard that Ash was attacked, even urging Steven to get vengeance.
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* Steven and Metagross being able to discover who has been backing Zinnia thanks to Ash's intel on the warp tiles and bringing back DNA from Zinnia's Tyrantrum.
* Ash impressing Lance, and possibly Drake, by mentioning that ZInnia only unleashed her Tyrantrum because Plume was keeping Mega Salamence busy.
* Ash impressing Lance, and possibly Drake, by mentioning that ZInnia only unleashed her Tyrantrum because Plume was keeping Mega Salamence busy.
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* Steven and Metagross being able to discover who has might have been backing Zinnia thanks to Ash's intel on the warp tiles and bringing back DNA from Zinnia's Tyrantrum.
* Ash impressing Lance, and possibly Drake, by mentioning thatZInnia Zinnia only unleashed her Tyrantrum because Plume was keeping Mega Salamence busy.
* Ash impressing Lance, and possibly Drake, by mentioning that
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** Metagross talks to Ash directly for the first time instead of through Steven, ordering Ash not to hesitate to use lethal force if necessary to protect others.
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** Metagross talks to Ash directly for the first time instead of through Steven, ordering Ash not to hesitate to use lethal force if necessary to protect others.others.
* Durand aids Ash against Zinnia, who was trying to kill him moments before under the guise of an Aqua Grunt.
* Seeker taking out a Dreepy fired by Zinnia's Dragapult.
* Durand and Ash have a talk after Zinnia flees, with Durand giving up some information about Team Flare's influence on Kalos and why she went rogue in the first place.
** Ash being able to convince Durand about how much weight his word means in the League by bringing up that Lance went after Giovanni on his word alone.
* Bruiser earning trophies in the form of spines from Zinnia's Tyrantrum.
* Lance, Steven, and many others having to be talked down from going on a warpath to find Zinnia when they hear about her assassination attempt on Ash. Even members of Team Aqua are ready to pitch in and help because Ash has fans among their numbers!
** Steven mentioning that Drake went to the Meteor Village to get more information about Zinnia with a promise that if any of them knew about Zinnia's plan, then the entire village would be reduced to rubble.
* Drake standing up out of respect for Charles Goodshow. When Ash tries to stand up, Goodshow urges Ash to sit.
* Steven and Metagross being able to discover who has been backing Zinnia thanks to Ash's intel on the warp tiles and bringing back DNA from Zinnia's Tyrantrum.
* Ash impressing Lance, and possibly Drake, by mentioning that ZInnia only unleashed her Tyrantrum because Plume was keeping Mega Salamence busy.
* Despite no longer being master and student, Drake is still able to put Lance in his place with a few words.
* Ash earning a Mega Stone for Plume and one of Ever Grande's Keystones for himself.
* Steven giving Ash Claydol to be his protector.
* Durand aids Ash against Zinnia, who was trying to kill him moments before under the guise of an Aqua Grunt.
* Seeker taking out a Dreepy fired by Zinnia's Dragapult.
* Durand and Ash have a talk after Zinnia flees, with Durand giving up some information about Team Flare's influence on Kalos and why she went rogue in the first place.
** Ash being able to convince Durand about how much weight his word means in the League by bringing up that Lance went after Giovanni on his word alone.
* Bruiser earning trophies in the form of spines from Zinnia's Tyrantrum.
* Lance, Steven, and many others having to be talked down from going on a warpath to find Zinnia when they hear about her assassination attempt on Ash. Even members of Team Aqua are ready to pitch in and help because Ash has fans among their numbers!
** Steven mentioning that Drake went to the Meteor Village to get more information about Zinnia with a promise that if any of them knew about Zinnia's plan, then the entire village would be reduced to rubble.
* Drake standing up out of respect for Charles Goodshow. When Ash tries to stand up, Goodshow urges Ash to sit.
* Steven and Metagross being able to discover who has been backing Zinnia thanks to Ash's intel on the warp tiles and bringing back DNA from Zinnia's Tyrantrum.
* Ash impressing Lance, and possibly Drake, by mentioning that ZInnia only unleashed her Tyrantrum because Plume was keeping Mega Salamence busy.
* Despite no longer being master and student, Drake is still able to put Lance in his place with a few words.
* Ash earning a Mega Stone for Plume and one of Ever Grande's Keystones for himself.
* Steven giving Ash Claydol to be his protector.
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* Wallace comments that Ash has made good progress despite only being a trainer for two years. Metagross immediately has Steven correct Wallace that Ash has been a trainer for shorter than that. He may not communicate much with Ash, but Metagross is fond of the boy and his progress.
