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* Lara, having had enough of being brutalised by the bad guys, manages to get herself a grenade launcher. All hell breaks loose.
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* Lara, having had enough of being brutalised by the bad guys, manages to get herself a grenade launcher. All hell promptly breaks loose.
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* Lara, having had enough of being brutalised by the bad guys, manages to get herself a grenade launcher, and all hell breaks loose.
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* Lara, having had enough of being brutalised by the bad guys, manages to get herself a grenade launcher, and all launcher. All hell breaks loose.
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-->'''[[GiantMook Dmitri]]''': *insert constant blathering here*
-->'''Lara''': SHUT... UP!!
-->'''Lara''': SHUT... UP!!
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* Shortly afterwards, when dying, Alex decides he's ''not'' going to be gunned down. He fires a bullet at a pipe on the wall... and half the Endurance explodes into flames. The Endurance ''is a very large tanker'', so it goes up pretty well...
* In a meta example, this game itself has been the best selling in the franchise, with around 11 million units sold.
* In a meta example, this game itself has been the best selling in the franchise, with around 11 million units sold.
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* Shortly afterwards, when dying, Alex decides he's ''not'' going to be gunned down. He fires a bullet at a pipe on the wall... and half the Endurance explodes into flames. The Endurance ''is a very large tanker'', so it goes up pretty well...
* In a meta example, this game itself has been the best selling in the franchise, with around 11 million units sold.well.
* In a meta example, this game itself has been the best selling in the franchise, with around 11 million units sold.
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* In a meta example, this game itself has been the best selling in the franchise, with around 11 million units sold.
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* In a meta example, this game itself has been the best selling in the franchise, with around 11 million units sold.sold.
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