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* ''All'' of page 60. Carmilla [[http://worstidea.skyscrapersoup.com/2011/03/22/60-step-aside/ punches through Sergio's front door]] and throws it to the forest beyond. Then Ian manages to avoid colliding with it when it lands in front of his car.
* Cynthia [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B5RWk171beU punches Rika out]] so hard ''that Rika transforms''.
* Cynthia [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B5RWk171beU punches Rika out]] so hard ''that Rika transforms''.
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* ''All'' of page 60. Carmilla [[http://worstidea.skyscrapersoup.com/2011/03/22/60-step-aside/ punches through Sergio's front door]] and throws it to the forest beyond. Then Ian manages to avoid colliding with it when it lands in front of his car.
* Cynthia [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B5RWk171beU punches Rika out]] so hard ''that Rika transforms''.car.
* Cynthia [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B5RWk171beU punches Rika out]] so hard ''that Rika transforms''.
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* ''All'' of page 60. Carmilla [[http://worstidea.skyscrapersoup.com/2011/03/22/60-step-aside/ punches through Sergio's front door]] and throws it to the forest beyond. Later down the same page, Ian manages to avoid colliding with it as it falls in front of his car.
* Cynthia [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B5RWk171beU punching out Rika]] ''right as she transforms''.
** Actually, Cynthia punched her so hard that she transformed. It just makes it even ''more'' crowning.
* Cynthia [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B5RWk171beU punching out Rika]] ''right as she transforms''.
** Actually, Cynthia punched her so hard that she transformed. It just makes it even ''more'' crowning.
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* ''All'' of page 60. Carmilla [[http://worstidea.skyscrapersoup.com/2011/03/22/60-step-aside/ punches through Sergio's front door]] and throws it to the forest beyond. Later down the same page, Then Ian manages to avoid colliding with it as when it falls lands in front of his car.
* Cynthia [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B5RWk171beUpunching out Rika]] ''right as she transforms''.
** Actually, Cynthia punched herpunches Rika out]] so hard that she transformed. It just makes it even ''more'' crowning.''that Rika transforms''.
* Cynthia [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B5RWk171beU
** Actually, Cynthia punched her
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* Cynthia [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B5RWk171beU punching out Rika]] ''right as she transforms''.
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* Cynthia [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B5RWk171beU punching out Rika]] ''right as she transforms''.transforms''.
** Actually, Cynthia punched her so hard that she transformed. It just makes it even ''more'' crowning.
** Actually, Cynthia punched her so hard that she transformed. It just makes it even ''more'' crowning.
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* ''All'' of page 60. Carmilla [[http://worstidea.skyscrapersoup.com/2011/03/22/60-step-aside/ punches through Sergio's front door]] and throws it to the forest beyond. Later down the same page, Ian manages to avoid colliding with it as it falls in front of his car.
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* ''All'' of page 60. Carmilla [[http://worstidea.skyscrapersoup.com/2011/03/22/60-step-aside/ punches through Sergio's front door]] and throws it to the forest beyond. Later down the same page, Ian manages to avoid colliding with it as it falls in front of his car.car.
* Cynthia [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B5RWk171beU punching out Rika]] ''right as she transforms''.
* Cynthia [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B5RWk171beU punching out Rika]] ''right as she transforms''.
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* ''All'' of page 60. Carmilla [[http://worstidea.skyscrapersoup.com/2011/03/22/60-step-aside/ punching punches through Sergio's front door]] and throwing throws it to the forest beyond. Later down the same page, Ian manages to avoid colliding with it as it falls in front of his car.
