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* [[spoiler:Po's father]] suddenly appears and attacks Zhan and another wolf in order to [[PapaWolf protect his son]]. Shen is briefly astonished.
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* When [[spoiler:Lianne is released by Shen [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy out of love]] just when they're going through with their second marriage ceremony, she fully surprises Shen by finalizing their marriage out of her own will]].
* When Shen is about to set sail for his conquest, Jade attacks him in order to give him a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech over his willingness to drag down everyone with him, including Zhan and his family. Even though she's been driven away by Zhan, is in crippling emotional turmoil, and is no close to Shen's fighting skills, she risks her life just to give Shen a piece of her mind. What's more, her words cause Shen to let her go after defeating her [[spoiler:and send Zhan with his wolves away [[SparedByTheAdaptation before they can die in the final confrontation]]]].
* Shen [[spoiler:survives being crushed beneath one of his cannons, gaining wounds that cripple him for life. Despite this, [[{{Determinator}} he]] spends the following weeks searching for Lianne [[ThePowerOfLove to see her one more time]]]].
* When Shen is about to set sail for his conquest, Jade attacks him in order to give him a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech over his willingness to drag down everyone with him, including Zhan and his family. Even though she's been driven away by Zhan, is in crippling emotional turmoil, and is no close to Shen's fighting skills, she risks her life just to give Shen a piece of her mind. What's more, her words cause Shen to let her go after defeating her [[spoiler:and send Zhan with his wolves away [[SparedByTheAdaptation before they can die in the final confrontation]]]].
* Shen [[spoiler:survives being crushed beneath one of his cannons, gaining wounds that cripple him for life. Despite this, [[{{Determinator}} he]] spends the following weeks searching for Lianne [[ThePowerOfLove to see her one more time]]]].
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* When Shen is about to set sail for his conquest, Jade attacks him in order to give him a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech over his willingness to drag down everyone with him, including Zhan and his family. Even though she's been driven away by Zhan, is in crippling emotional turmoil, and is no close to Shen's fighting skills, she risks her life just to give Shen a piece of her mind. What's more, her words cause Shen to let her go after defeating her[[spoiler:and and send Zhan with his wolves away [[SparedByTheAdaptation before they can die in the final confrontation]]]].
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* Shen[[spoiler:survives survives being crushed beneath one of his cannons, gaining wounds that cripple him for life. Despite this, [[{{Determinator}} he]] spends the following weeks searching for Lianne [[ThePowerOfLove to see her one more time]]]].time]].
* When Shen is about to set sail for his conquest, Jade attacks him in order to give him a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech over his willingness to drag down everyone with him, including Zhan and his family. Even though she's been driven away by Zhan, is in crippling emotional turmoil, and is no close to Shen's fighting skills, she risks her life just to give Shen a piece of her mind. What's more, her words cause Shen to let her go after defeating her
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-->'''Lianne''': Rest assured councillor, simple paleness will not discourage me. And should Shen and I choose to wed, you will see for yourself how strong ''Shen's'' children will be, with or without my genetic input.
-->'''Councillor Wong''': That is... marvellous to hear. I am sure you will make an excellent mother.
-->'''Lianne''': Indeed. I remember my uncle telling me of [[MamaBear how fierce and protective my grandmother was when she became a mother]]. During a festival, she brought her young children to the city when they were just chicks, and in the hustle and bustle of the crowd, a ''sheep'' stood on my father's foot. It was an accident of course, and my grandmother would have been more than understanding... had she not [[DisproportionateRetribution had the sheep flogged and beaten in the main square in front of the entire city for even daring to bring any harm towards her child]].
-->''*Wong has [[OhCrap paled]] and the whole room is silent.*''
-->'''Lianne''': So you can imagine Councillor how I would be most... ''displeased'' to hear of any talk against the health of my children. But I'm sure you meant no harm, I am not new to these types of rumours, what with my mother being a black swan and therefore considered to be quite ''abnormal''.
-->''*Everyone in the room gasps and Wong has a JawDrop.*''
-->'''Councillor Wong''': Y-y-your Ladyship! I-I didn't m-mean to —
-->'''Lianne''': In future Mr Wong you will refrain from speaking of such comments in front of me, and you will also show more respect when speaking of your future leader and my potential betrothed.
-->'''Councillor Wong''': Y-y-yes My Lady, I-I —
-->'''Lianne''': That is good. We wouldn't want Shen finding this out, he might remember this when he comes into power. I am sure he will forget, but I would hate to be ''reminded'' of this in the future. I would not tell him intentionally of course... but I've heard that pillow talk can be quite an ''enlightening'' experience.
* Despite being frightened, [[DefiantCaptive Lianne]] adopts her cold facade and [[KirkSummation scorns]] Haun until he hits her in rage.
-->'''Councillor Wong''': That is... marvellous to hear. I am sure you will make an excellent mother.
-->'''Lianne''': Indeed. I remember my uncle telling me of [[MamaBear how fierce and protective my grandmother was when she became a mother]]. During a festival, she brought her young children to the city when they were just chicks, and in the hustle and bustle of the crowd, a ''sheep'' stood on my father's foot. It was an accident of course, and my grandmother would have been more than understanding... had she not [[DisproportionateRetribution had the sheep flogged and beaten in the main square in front of the entire city for even daring to bring any harm towards her child]].
-->''*Wong has [[OhCrap paled]] and the whole room is silent.*''
-->'''Lianne''': So you can imagine Councillor how I would be most... ''displeased'' to hear of any talk against the health of my children. But I'm sure you meant no harm, I am not new to these types of rumours, what with my mother being a black swan and therefore considered to be quite ''abnormal''.
-->''*Everyone in the room gasps and Wong has a JawDrop.*''
-->'''Councillor Wong''': Y-y-your Ladyship! I-I didn't m-mean to —
-->'''Lianne''': In future Mr Wong you will refrain from speaking of such comments in front of me, and you will also show more respect when speaking of your future leader and my potential betrothed.
-->'''Councillor Wong''': Y-y-yes My Lady, I-I —
-->'''Lianne''': That is good. We wouldn't want Shen finding this out, he might remember this when he comes into power. I am sure he will forget, but I would hate to be ''reminded'' of this in the future. I would not tell him intentionally of course... but I've heard that pillow talk can be quite an ''enlightening'' experience.
* Despite being frightened, [[DefiantCaptive Lianne]] adopts her cold facade and [[KirkSummation scorns]] Haun until he hits her in rage.
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-->'''Lianne''': Rest assured councillor, simple paleness will not discourage me. And should Shen and I choose to wed, you will see for yourself how strong ''Shen's'' children will be, with or without my genetic input.
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'''Councillor Wong''': That is... marvellous to hear. I am sure you will make an excellentmother.
-->'''Lianne''':mother.\\
'''Lianne''': Indeed. I remember my uncle telling me of [[MamaBear how fierce and protective my grandmother was when she became a mother]]. During a festival, she brought her young children to the city when they were just chicks, and in the hustle and bustle of the crowd, a ''sheep'' stood on my father's foot. It was an accident of course, and my grandmother would have been more than understanding... had she not[[DisproportionateRetribution had the sheep flogged and beaten in the main square in front of the entire city for even daring to bring any harm towards her child]].
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'''Lianne''': So you can imagine Councillor how I would be most... ''displeased'' to hear of any talk against the health of my children. But I'm sure you meant no harm, I am not new to these types of rumours, what with my mother being a black swan and therefore considered to be quite''abnormal''.
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''[Wong has a JawDrop while everyone else in the roomgasps and Wong has a JawDrop.*''
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'''Councillor Wong''': Y-y-your Ladyship! I-I didn't m-mean to—
-->'''Lianne''':—\\
'''Lianne''': In future Mr Wong you will refrain from speaking of such comments in front of me, and you will also show more respect when speaking of your future leader and my potentialbetrothed.
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'''Councillor Wong''': Y-y-yes My Lady, I-I—
-->'''Lianne''':—\\
'''Lianne''': That is good. We wouldn't want Shen finding this out, he might remember this when he comes into power. I am sure he will forget, but I would hate to be ''reminded'' of this in the future. I would not tell him intentionally of course... but I've heard that pillow talk can be quite an ''enlightening'' experience.
* Despite being frightened, [[DefiantCaptive Lianne]] adopts her cold facade and [[KirkSummationscorns]] Haun scorns Haun]] until he hits her in rage.
-->'''Councillor
'''Councillor Wong''': That is... marvellous to hear. I am sure you will make an excellent
-->'''Lianne''':
'''Lianne''': Indeed. I remember my uncle telling me of [[MamaBear how fierce and protective my grandmother was when she became a mother]]. During a festival, she brought her young children to the city when they were just chicks, and in the hustle and bustle of the crowd, a ''sheep'' stood on my father's foot. It was an accident of course, and my grandmother would have been more than understanding... had she not
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-->'''Lianne''':
'''Lianne''': So you can imagine Councillor how I would be most... ''displeased'' to hear of any talk against the health of my children. But I'm sure you meant no harm, I am not new to these types of rumours, what with my mother being a black swan and therefore considered to be quite
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'''Councillor Wong''': Y-y-your Ladyship! I-I didn't m-mean to
-->'''Lianne''':
'''Lianne''': In future Mr Wong you will refrain from speaking of such comments in front of me, and you will also show more respect when speaking of your future leader and my potential
-->'''Councillor
'''Councillor Wong''': Y-y-yes My Lady, I-I
-->'''Lianne''':
'''Lianne''': That is good. We wouldn't want Shen finding this out, he might remember this when he comes into power. I am sure he will forget, but I would hate to be ''reminded'' of this in the future. I would not tell him intentionally of course... but I've heard that pillow talk can be quite an ''enlightening'' experience.
* Despite being frightened, [[DefiantCaptive Lianne]] adopts her cold facade and [[KirkSummation
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* Shen defies Lord Chang by announcing that he and Lianne are engaged, reminding engaged. When Chang protests, Shen reminds him of the agreement he made by Chang and with Shen's parents and warning warns of the consequences of trying if Chang tries to break the still unexpired deal and forbid the marriage.
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* The night after Shen has taken over Gongmen City, Lianne writes a request of help to Master Shifu, escapes [[GildedCage the Tower of the Sacred Flame]] through her room's window and locates Lang, sending him to deliver the message while distracting Shen's soldiers from him.
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* The night after Shen has taken over Gongmen City, Lianne writes a request of help to Master Shifu, escapes [[GildedCage the Tower of the Sacred Flame]] through her room's window and locates Lang, sending him to deliver the message while distracting she distracts Shen's soldiers from him.until they recapture her.
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* When Jade causes several powder barrels to move dangerously close to fire, Shen prevents the accident by cutting the ropes holding a beam above and ordering his men to push it to the barrels' path.
* [[NinjaMaid Jade]] takes down the two guards ordered to kill the [[BadassInDistress restrained Po and the Furious Five]].
* Lianne helps the Kung Fu warriors sneak unnoticed to the throne room and spoil Shen's trap by directing everyone's attention to herself.
* During Shen and Po's duel in the fireworks factory, Lianne accidentally ends up being trapped by a metal grate in the [[ConveyorBeltODoom conveyor belt]] leading to the smelter. After she's freed with Shen's assistance, she uses the last three seconds left to run with the belt and use the smelter's smokes to gain purchase in order to fly.
* [[NinjaMaid Jade]] takes down the two guards ordered to kill the [[BadassInDistress restrained Po and the Furious Five]].
* Lianne helps the Kung Fu warriors sneak unnoticed to the throne room and spoil Shen's trap by directing everyone's attention to herself.
* During Shen and Po's duel in the fireworks factory, Lianne accidentally ends up being trapped by a metal grate in the [[ConveyorBeltODoom conveyor belt]] leading to the smelter. After she's freed with Shen's assistance, she uses the last three seconds left to run with the belt and use the smelter's smokes to gain purchase in order to fly.
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* When Jade causes several powder barrels to move dangerously close to fire, Shen prevents the accident by cutting the ropes holding a beam above and ordering his men to push it the beam to the barrels' path.
* [[NinjaMaid Jade]] takes down the two guardsordered who are about to carry out the order to kill the [[BadassInDistress restrained Po and the Furious Five]].
* Lianne helps the Kung Fu warriors to sneak unnoticed to the throne room and spoil Shen's trap by directing everyone's attention to herself.
* During Shen and Po's duel in the fireworks factory, Lianne accidentally ends up being trapped by a metal gratein onto the [[ConveyorBeltODoom conveyor belt]] leading that leads to the smelter. After she's freed with Shen's assistance, she uses the last three seconds left to run with the belt and use the smelter's smokes to gain purchase in order to fly.
* [[NinjaMaid Jade]] takes down the two guards
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* Shen is [[spoiler:crushed beneath one of his cannons like in the movie, but he survives with wounds that cripple him for life. Despite this, [[{{Determinator}} he]] spends the following weeks searching for Lianne [[ThePowerOfLove to see her one more time]]]].
* Shen is [[spoiler:crushed beneath one of his cannons like in the movie, but he survives with wounds that cripple him for life. Despite this, [[{{Determinator}} he]] spends the following weeks searching for Lianne [[ThePowerOfLove to see her one more time]]]].
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* When Shen is about to set sail for his conquest, Jade attacks him in order to give him a ReasonYouSuckSpeech TheReasonYouSuckSpeech over his willingness to drag down everyone with him, including Zhan and his family. Even though she's been driven away by Zhan, is in crippling emotional turmoil turmoil, and is no close to Shen's fighting skills, she risks her life just to give Shen a piece of her mind. What's more, her words cause Shen to let her go after defeating her [[spoiler:and send Zhan with his wolves away [[SparedByTheAdaptation before they can die in the final confrontation]]]].
* Shenis [[spoiler:crushed [[spoiler:survives being crushed beneath one of his cannons like in the movie, but he survives with cannons, gaining wounds that cripple him for life. Despite this, [[{{Determinator}} he]] spends the following weeks searching for Lianne [[ThePowerOfLove to see her one more time]]]].
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* Councillor Wong inappropriately brings up Shen's coloring and the subject of his genetic health being countered by Lianne's genes while talking with her - with Shen being within earshot in the court, no less. [[BerserkButton Angered by this]], Lianne [[BreakThemByTalking humiliates]] the councilor calmly by projecting her following words so that everyone in the throne room can hear without her having to shout or raise her voice.
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* Councillor Wong inappropriately brings up Shen's coloring and the subject of his genetic health being countered by Lianne's genes while talking with her - -- with Shen being within earshot in the court, no less. [[BerserkButton Angered by this]], Lianne [[BreakThemByTalking humiliates]] the councilor calmly by projecting her following words so that everyone in the throne room can hear without her having to shout or raise her voice.
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* When Shen is about to set sail for his conquest, Jade attacks him in order to give him a ReasonYouSuckSpeech over his willingness to drag down everyone with him, including Zhan and his family. Even though she's been driven away by Zhan, is in crippling emotional turmoil and is no close to Shen's fighting skills, she risks her life just to give Shen a piece of her mind. What's more, her words cause Shen to let her go after defeating her [[spoiler:and send Zhan with his wolves away [[SparedByTheAdaptation before they can die in the final confrontation]]]].
* Shen is [[spoiler:crushed beneath one of his cannons like in the movie, but[[ThePowerOfLove he survives simply because he wishes to see Lianne one more time]]]]. with wounds that cripple him for life. Despite this, [[{{Determinator}} He]] then [[spoiler:spends he]] spends the following weeks searching for Lianne]], and when he [[spoiler:finds her, he's badly injured]].Lianne [[ThePowerOfLove to see her one more time]]]].
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* Councillor Wong inappropriately brings up Shen's coloring and the subject of his genetic health being countered by Lianne's genes while talking with her - with Shen being within earshot in the court, no less. [[BerserkButton Angered by this]], Lianne humiliates [[BreakThemByTalking humiliates]] the councilor calmly by projecting her following words so that everyone in the throne room can hear without her having to shout or raise her voice.
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* Shen is [[spoiler:crushed beneath one of his cannons like in the movie, but [[ThePowerOfLove he survives simply because he wishes to see Lianne one more time]]]]. [[{{Determinator}} He]] then [[spoiler:spends the following weeks searching for Lianne]], and when he [[spoiler:finds her, he's badly injured]].
* Shen is [[spoiler:crushed beneath one of his cannons like in the movie, but [[ThePowerOfLove he survives simply because he wishes to see Lianne one more time]]]]. [[{{Determinator}} He]] then [[spoiler:spends the following weeks searching for Lianne]], and when he [[spoiler:finds her, he's badly injured]].
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* When [[spoiler:Lianne is released by Shen [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy out of love]] just when they're going through with their second marriage ceremony, she fully surprises Shen by finalizing their marriage out of her own will]].
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* The night after Shen has taken over Gongmen City, Lianne writes a request of help to Master Shifu, escapes [[GildedCage the Tower of the Sacred Flame]] through her room's window and locates Lang, sending him to deliver to message while distracting Shen's soldiers from him.
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* The night after Shen has taken over Gongmen City, Lianne writes a request of help to Master Shifu, escapes [[GildedCage the Tower of the Sacred Flame]] through her room's window and locates Lang, sending him to deliver to the message while distracting Shen's soldiers from him.
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* Shen and Lianne's duel in the library.
* When Jade causes several powder barrels to move dangerously close to fire, Shen prevents the accident by cutting the ropes holding a beam above and ordering his men to push it to the barrels' path.
* [[NinjaMaid Jade]] takes down the two guards ordered to kill the [[BadassInDistress restrained]] Po and the Furious Five.
* Lianne helps the Kung Fu warriors to sneak unnoticed to the throne room and spoil Shen's trap by directing everyone's attention to herself.
* When Jade causes several powder barrels to move dangerously close to fire, Shen prevents the accident by cutting the ropes holding a beam above and ordering his men to push it to the barrels' path.
* [[NinjaMaid Jade]] takes down the two guards ordered to kill the [[BadassInDistress restrained]] Po and the Furious Five.
* Lianne helps the Kung Fu warriors to sneak unnoticed to the throne room and spoil Shen's trap by directing everyone's attention to herself.
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* Shen defies Lord Chang by announcing that he and Lianne are engaged, reminding of the agreement made by Chang and Shen's parents and warning of the consequences of trying to break the deal and forbid the marriage.
* [[spoiler:Po's father]] attacking Zhan and another wolf in order to [[PapaWolf protect his son]].
* The night after Shen has taken over Gongmen City, Lianne writes a request of help to Master Shifu, escapes [[GildedCage the Tower of the Sacred Flame]] through her room's window and locates Lang, sending him to deliver to message while distracting Shen's soldiers from him.
* Lianne interferes when a squad of wolves are beating a rabbit child, dispiriting them with only a DeathGlare and a threat.
* [[spoiler:Po's father]] attacking Zhan and another wolf in order to [[PapaWolf protect his son]].
* The night after Shen has taken over Gongmen City, Lianne writes a request of help to Master Shifu, escapes [[GildedCage the Tower of the Sacred Flame]] through her room's window and locates Lang, sending him to deliver to message while distracting Shen's soldiers from him.
* Lianne interferes when a squad of wolves are beating a rabbit child, dispiriting them with only a DeathGlare and a threat.
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-->'''Lianne''': That is good. We wouldn't want Shen finding this out, he might remember this when he comes into power. I am sure he will forget, but I would hate to be ''reminded'' of this in the future. I would not tell him intentionally of course... but I've heard that pillow talk can be quite an ''enlightening'' experience.
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-->'''Lianne''': That is good. We wouldn't want Shen finding this out, he might remember this when he comes into power. I am sure he will forget, but I would hate to be ''reminded'' of this in the future. I would not tell him intentionally of course... but I've heard that pillow talk can be quite an ''enlightening'' experience.experience.
* Lianne's [[TookALevelInBadass progress]] under Shen's hard tutorship for self-defense. The visiting Master Thundering Rhino is impressed at her demonstration.
* The fireworks display Shen has prepared for the Moon Festival.
* Lianne's [[TookALevelInBadass progress]] under Shen's hard tutorship for self-defense. The visiting Master Thundering Rhino is impressed at her demonstration.
* The fireworks display Shen has prepared for the Moon Festival.
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* Councillor Wong inappropriately brings up the subject of Shen's coloring and genetic health being countered by Lianne's genes while talking with her - with Shen being within earshot in the court, no less. [[BerserkButton Angered by this]], Lianne humiliates the councilor with calmly by projecting her following words so that everyone in the throne room can hear without her having to shout or raise her voice.
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* Councillor Wong inappropriately brings up the subject of Shen's coloring and the subject of his genetic health being countered by Lianne's genes while talking with her - with Shen being within earshot in the court, no less. [[BerserkButton Angered by this]], Lianne humiliates the councilor with calmly by projecting her following words so that everyone in the throne room can hear without her having to shout or raise her voice.
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-->'''Lianne''': Indeed. I remember my uncle telling me of how fierce and protective my grandmother was when she became a mother. During a festival, she brought her young children to the city when they were just chicks, and in the hustle and bustle of the crowd, a ''sheep'' stood on my father's foot. It was an accident of course, and my grandmother would have been more than understanding... had she not had the sheep flogged and beaten in the main square in front of the entire city for even daring to bring any harm towards her child.
''Wong has [[OhCrap paled]] and the whole room is silent.''
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-->'''Lianne''': Indeed. I remember my uncle telling me of [[MamaBear how fierce and protective my grandmother was when she became a mother.mother]]. During a festival, she brought her young children to the city when they were just chicks, and in the hustle and bustle of the crowd, a ''sheep'' stood on my father's foot. It was an accident of course, and my grandmother would have been more than understanding... had she not [[DisproportionateRetribution had the sheep flogged and beaten in the main square in front of the entire city for even daring to bring any harm towards her child.
''Wongchild]].
-->''Wong has [[OhCrap paled]] and the whole room is silent.''
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-->'''Councillor Wong''': Y-y-yes My Lady, I-I —
-->'''Lianne''': That is good. We wouldn't want Shen finding this out, he might remember this when he comes into power. I am sure he will forget, but I would hate to be ''reminded'' of this in the future. I would not tell him intentionally of course... but I've heard that pillow talk can be quite an ''enlightening'' experience.
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* Councilor Wong inappropriately brings up the subject of Shen's coloring and genetic health being countered by Lianne's genes while talking with her - with Shen being within earshot in the court, no less. [[BerserkButton Angered by this]], Lianne humiliates the councilor with words calmly by projecting her voice so that everyone in the throne room can hear without her having to shout or raise her voice.
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* Councilor Councillor Wong inappropriately brings up the subject of Shen's coloring and genetic health being countered by Lianne's genes while talking with her - with Shen being within earshot in the court, no less. [[BerserkButton Angered by this]], Lianne humiliates the councilor with words calmly by projecting her voice following words so that everyone in the throne room can hear without her having to shout or raise her voice.voice.
-->'''Lianne''': Rest assured councillor, simple paleness will not discourage me. And should Shen and I choose to wed, you will see for yourself how strong ''Shen's'' children will be, with or without my genetic input.
-->'''Councillor Wong''': That is... marvellous to hear. I am sure you will make an excellent mother.
-->'''Lianne''': Indeed. I remember my uncle telling me of how fierce and protective my grandmother was when she became a mother. During a festival, she brought her young children to the city when they were just chicks, and in the hustle and bustle of the crowd, a ''sheep'' stood on my father's foot. It was an accident of course, and my grandmother would have been more than understanding... had she not had the sheep flogged and beaten in the main square in front of the entire city for even daring to bring any harm towards her child.
''Wong has [[OhCrap paled]] and the whole room is silent.''
-->'''Lianne''': So you can imagine Councillor how I would be most... ''displeased'' to hear of any talk against the health of my children. But I'm sure you meant no harm, I am not new to these types of rumours, what with my mother being a black swan and therefore considered to be quite ''abnormal''.
''everyone in the room gasps and Wong has a JawDrop''
-->'''Councillor Wong''': Y-y-your Ladyship! I-I didn't m-mean to —
-->'''Lianne''':
-->'''Lianne''': Rest assured councillor, simple paleness will not discourage me. And should Shen and I choose to wed, you will see for yourself how strong ''Shen's'' children will be, with or without my genetic input.
-->'''Councillor Wong''': That is... marvellous to hear. I am sure you will make an excellent mother.
-->'''Lianne''': Indeed. I remember my uncle telling me of how fierce and protective my grandmother was when she became a mother. During a festival, she brought her young children to the city when they were just chicks, and in the hustle and bustle of the crowd, a ''sheep'' stood on my father's foot. It was an accident of course, and my grandmother would have been more than understanding... had she not had the sheep flogged and beaten in the main square in front of the entire city for even daring to bring any harm towards her child.
''Wong has [[OhCrap paled]] and the whole room is silent.''
-->'''Lianne''': So you can imagine Councillor how I would be most... ''displeased'' to hear of any talk against the health of my children. But I'm sure you meant no harm, I am not new to these types of rumours, what with my mother being a black swan and therefore considered to be quite ''abnormal''.
''everyone in the room gasps and Wong has a JawDrop''
-->'''Councillor Wong''': Y-y-your Ladyship! I-I didn't m-mean to —
-->'''Lianne''':
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* Councilor Wong inappropriately brings up the subject of Shen's coloring and genetic health being countered by Lianne's genes while talking with her - with Shen being within earshot in the court, no less. [[BerserkButton Angered by this]], Lianne humiliates the councilor with words calmly by projecting her voice so that everyone in the throne room can hear without her having to shout or raise her voice.