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** Also overlaps with [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Crowning Moment Of Funny]] in the next line.
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** Also overlaps with [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Crowning Moment Of Funny]] in the next line.
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* Nahruahn challenging [[spoiler:Gaithim]] to a duel of power. [[spoiler: To clarify, Nahruahn is going up against a mage who can do everything he can except better, ''and'' as a hoshek Gaithim can use the other three elements as well. Nahruahn is basically throwing his life away to buy a few minutes for his Prince to grab the Prince's Crown and hopefully stop Gaithim.]]
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* Nahruahn challenging [[spoiler:Gaithim]] to a duel of power. [[spoiler: To clarify, Nahruahn is going up against a mage who can do everything he can except better, ''and'' as a hoshek Gaithim can use the other three elements as well. Nahruahn is basically throwing his life away to buy a few minutes for his Prince to grab the Prince's Crown and hopefully stop Gaithim.]]
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* Also overlaps with [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Crowning Moment Of Funny]] in the next line.
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* Alaric killing a dragon with absolutely no magic. [[WordOfGod Word Of God]] tells the tale of Relnar, a full unaligned prince who fought a dragon and was injured and crippled for life.
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* Alaric killing a dragon with absolutely no magic. [[WordOfGod Word Of God]] WordOfGod tells the tale of Relnar, a full unaligned prince who fought a dragon and was injured and crippled for life.
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* [[spoiler: Alaric using the Prince's Crown to transform Laeshana into an orah, thus simultaneously allowing her to marry him, giving her the full power that she has been seeking for years, and freeing her of the black aspect of her fire-magic that she's been fighting her whole life.]]
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* [[spoiler: Alaric using the Prince's Crown to transform Laeshana into an orah, thus simultaneously allowing her to marry him, giving her the full power that she has been seeking for years, and freeing her of the black aspect of her fire-magic that she's been fighting her whole life.orah.]]
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* Alaric and Laeshana together fight there way through a cave tunnel infested with 500+ fire-spiders (which, as you might guess, shoot flaming webs).
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* [[spoiler: Alaric using the Prince's Crown to transform Laeshana into an orah, thus simultaneously allowing her to marry him, giving her the full power that she has been seeking for years, and freeing her of the black aspect of her fire-magic that she's been fighting her whole life.]]
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* [[spoiler: Alaric using the Prince's Crown to transform Laeshana into an orah, thus simultaneously allowing her to marry him, giving her the full power that she has been seeking for years, and freeing her of the black aspect of her fire-magic that she's been fighting her whole life.]]]]
* After [[spoiler: becoming an orah]] Alaric manages to combine the magics of two different elements, something even ''Laeshana'' thought was impossible.
* After [[spoiler: becoming an orah]] Alaric manages to combine the magics of two different elements, something even ''Laeshana'' thought was impossible.
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* Alaric fights [[spoiler: Gaithim, a hoshek, and wins. To provide further context, the last time a hoshek was created it took down half the country before finally being destroyed, Gaithim has just [[CurpStompBattle annihilated]] the second-most powerful ruahk in the world, and Alaric has only been able to use magic for about a week, most of which he spent being inundated in socialites.]]
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* Alaric fights [[spoiler: Gaithim, a hoshek, and wins. To provide further context, the last time a hoshek was created it took down half the country before finally being destroyed, Gaithim has just [[CurpStompBattle [[CurbStompBattle annihilated]] the second-most powerful ruahk in the world, and Alaric has only been able to use magic for about a week, most of which he spent being inundated in socialites.]]
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* Alaric fights [[spoiler: Gaithim, a hoshek, and wins. To provide further context, the last time a hoshek was created it took down half the country before finally being destroyed, Gaithim has just [[CurpStompBattle annihilated]] the second-most powerful ruahk in the world, and Alaric has only been able to use magic for about a week, most of which he spent being inundated in socialites.]]
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--> "I've never seen a man in Caederan go so far above and beyond the call of duty in the face of mortal danger. In light of that, I take it upon myself as a certified security chief of Tonzimmiel, with all the privleges and honors that go with it."
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--> "I've never seen a man in Caederan go so far above and beyond the call of duty in the face of mortal danger. In light of that, I take it upon myself as a certified security chief of Tonzimmiel, Tonzimmiel to award you an honorary level one appointment, with all the privleges privileges and honors that go with it."
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* Laeshana trying to challenge Ruahkini to a duel of power. Though he's able to back out of it and escape, there's a brief moment where he's terrified, and he flees rather than fight. This noble, the royal steward of Caederan, is terrified of a peasant girl half his age who has already almost worn herself out fighting fire-spiders.
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* Nahruahn challenging [[spoiler:Gaithim]] to a duel of power. [[spoiler: To clarify, Nahruahn is going up against a mage who can do everything he can except better, ''and'' as a hoshek he can use the other three elements as well. Nahruahn is basically throwing his life away to buy a few minutes for his Prince to grab the Prince's Crown and hopefully stop Gaithim.]]
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-->"These weren't very much, mostly free beers at some of the smaller bars, but Nahruahn didn't need to know that.
* Deshamai's speech to the Court. Not just because it's an awesome speech in and of itself, but because of who is giving it. Deshamai is probably the staunchest, most hidebound traditionalist in Caederan, and he is advocating in favor of [[spoiler: letting the Crown Prince marry a peasant, and the same prince's plans to radically renovate Caederan's social structure.]]
* Deshamai's speech to the Court. Not just because it's an awesome speech in and of itself, but because of who is giving it. Deshamai is probably the staunchest, most hidebound traditionalist in Caederan, and he is advocating in favor of [[spoiler: letting the Crown Prince marry a peasant, and the same prince's plans to radically renovate Caederan's social structure.]]
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-->"These weren't very much, mostly free beers at some of the smaller bars, but Nahruahn didn't need to know that.
that."
* Alaric learning earth magic in about fifteen seconds because he needed it to save Nahruahn.
* Alaric killing a dragon with absolutely no magic. [[WordOfGod Word Of God]] tells the tale of Relnar, a full unaligned prince who fought a dragon and was injured and crippled for life.
* Deshamai's speech to the Court. Not just because it's an awesome speech in and of itself, but because of who is giving it. Deshamai is probably the staunchest, most hidebound traditionalist in Caederan, and he is advocating in favor of [[spoiler: letting the Crown Prince marry a peasant, and the same prince's plans to radically renovate Caederan's social structure.]]
* [[spoiler: Alaric using the Prince's Crown to transform Laeshana into an orah, thus simultaneously allowing her to marry him, giving her the full power that she has been seeking for years, and freeing her of the black aspect of her fire-magic that she's been fighting her whole life.]]
* Alaric learning earth magic in about fifteen seconds because he needed it to save Nahruahn.
* Alaric killing a dragon with absolutely no magic. [[WordOfGod Word Of God]] tells the tale of Relnar, a full unaligned prince who fought a dragon and was injured and crippled for life.
* Deshamai's speech to the Court. Not just because it's an awesome speech in and of itself, but because of who is giving it. Deshamai is probably the staunchest, most hidebound traditionalist in Caederan, and he is advocating in favor of [[spoiler: letting the Crown Prince marry a peasant, and the same prince's plans to radically renovate Caederan's social structure.]]
* [[spoiler: Alaric using the Prince's Crown to transform Laeshana into an orah, thus simultaneously allowing her to marry him, giving her the full power that she has been seeking for years, and freeing her of the black aspect of her fire-magic that she's been fighting her whole life.]]
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* Nahruahn challenging [[spoiler:Gaithim]] to a duel of power. [[spoiler: To clarify, Nahruahn is going up against a mage who can do everything he can except better, ''and'' as a hoshek he can use the other three elements as well. Nahruahn is basically throwing his life away to buy a few minutes for his Prince to grab the Prince's Crown and hopefully stop Gaithim.]]
* Alaric's response to Nahruahn's heroism:
--> "I've never seen a man in Caederan go so far above and beyond the call of duty in the face of mortal danger. In light of that, I take it upon myself as a certified security chief of Tonzimmiel, with all the privleges and honors that go with it."
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-->"These weren't very much, mostly free beers at some of the smaller bars, but Nahruahn didn't need to know that.
* Deshamai's speech to the Court. Not just because it's an awesome speech in and of itself, but because of who is giving it. Deshamai is probably the staunchest, most hidebound traditionalist in Caederan, and he is advocating in favor of [[spoiler: letting the Crown Prince marry a peasant, and the same prince's plans to radically renovate Caederan's social structure.]]
