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** All the Newfoals are getting turned back into humans.
** Things are starting to look up for Neo-Equestria, as they're about to get aid from [[BigGood Shattered Glass Megatron.]]
** Rainbow Bridge Discord is back, taunts Queen Celestia that no one will believe her, reveals that he's been out for a ''week,'' and that he's about to have ''[[OhCrap fun.]]''
** All the Newfoals are getting turned back into humans.
** Things are starting to look up for Neo-Equestria, as they're about to get aid from [[BigGood Shattered Glass Megatron.]]
** Rainbow Bridge Discord is back, taunts Queen Celestia that no one will believe her, reveals that he's been out for a ''week,'' and that he's about to have ''[[OhCrap fun.]]''
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** Nice little one for one specific character- Little Strong Heart. When we first meet her, she's just another member of the Buffalo tribe. Now? She's Equestria's representative to other worlds.
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* The RB!Mane Six defeat their counterparts by (unintentionally) proving to the TCB!Elements that their wielders have become the very antithesis of harmony through one collective [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech]]. Once they realize this, the Elements rejudge and then promptly abandon the TCB!Mane Six one by one.
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** Princess Celestia exploits her doppelganger's gullibility by boasting about how the amulet she's wearing gives her power equal to the Heart of Ponyland, and when Queen Celestia immediately shatters it, Cadence is set free to fight alongside her aunt and tip the scales in their favor.
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** Optimus Prime's epic rebuttal to his evil counterpart calling him a knockoff.
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* The final battle against Queen Celestia, who is boosted with the power of her Luna and Cadance and the Heart of Ponyland - The Elements of Harmony, formed into the Rainbow of light, boosts itself with Megan's Omnicorn powers, and is channeled ''through'' the Matrix of Leadership.
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** Optimus Prime's epic rebuttal to his evil counterpart calling him a knockoff.
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** Optimus Prime's epic rebuttal to his evil counterpart calling him a knockoff.
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* The Neo-Equestrian Siege of Autobot City is chock-full of moments:
** Wheeljack and Twilight Sparkle, {{Badass Bookworm}}s both, easily handling the first of the Shattered Glass guardian drones.
** Blaster sees Omega Doom emerging to assault the city, and decides to call Big M. Cue the words every Transformers fan loves to hear:
---> '''''Optimus Prime has called for us to help them... And [[GeniusLoci Metroplex]] heeds the call of the Last Prime!'''''
*** The resulting BehemothBattle is awe-inspiring to visualize. And who's the tie-breaker? ''[[BigDamnHeroes Omega Supreme]]''.
** The human defenders showing their own chops against the lightning-towing, spell-slinging Equestrians, with Cybertronian technology, enhancements and power armor on hand.
** [[BattleCouple Optimus Prime and Elita-1]] dropping in just in time to save a bunker of civilians and a Canadian tank detachment against the guardian drones.
** Elita showing ''why'' she's second-in-command of the Autobots, by completely trouncing SG!Grimlock.
* The true might of humanity culminates in General Plan 24 - when President Abernathy orders all available Earth Defense Command space battleships to execute [[WaveMotionGun Energon cannon]] OrbitalBombardment of the Neo-Equestrian barrier. 15 Energon blasts against the inviolate magic of Neo-Equestrian invasion... and the barrier finally gives.
* The final battle against Queen Celestia, who is boosted with the power of her Luna andCadance- Cadance and the Heart of Ponyland - The Elements of Harmony, formed into the Rainbow of light, boosts itself with Megan's Omnicorn powers, and is channeled ''through'' the Matrix of Leadership.
** Wheeljack and Twilight Sparkle, {{Badass Bookworm}}s both, easily handling the first of the Shattered Glass guardian drones.
** Blaster sees Omega Doom emerging to assault the city, and decides to call Big M. Cue the words every Transformers fan loves to hear:
---> '''''Optimus Prime has called for us to help them... And [[GeniusLoci Metroplex]] heeds the call of the Last Prime!'''''
*** The resulting BehemothBattle is awe-inspiring to visualize. And who's the tie-breaker? ''[[BigDamnHeroes Omega Supreme]]''.
** The human defenders showing their own chops against the lightning-towing, spell-slinging Equestrians, with Cybertronian technology, enhancements and power armor on hand.
** [[BattleCouple Optimus Prime and Elita-1]] dropping in just in time to save a bunker of civilians and a Canadian tank detachment against the guardian drones.
** Elita showing ''why'' she's second-in-command of the Autobots, by completely trouncing SG!Grimlock.
* The true might of humanity culminates in General Plan 24 - when President Abernathy orders all available Earth Defense Command space battleships to execute [[WaveMotionGun Energon cannon]] OrbitalBombardment of the Neo-Equestrian barrier. 15 Energon blasts against the inviolate magic of Neo-Equestrian invasion... and the barrier finally gives.
* The final battle against Queen Celestia, who is boosted with the power of her Luna and
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** In her last moments of being an Alicorn, Queen Celestia gets a vision from Discord who tells her that not only were her attempts to save humanity and stop them from destroying ponykind doomed from the start, ''he made up the prophecy specifically to get her to do exactly this.'' So everything she did was AllForNothing.
** In her last moments of being an Alicorn, Queen Celestia gets a vision from Discord who tells her that not only were her attempts to save humanity and stop them from destroying ponykind doomed from the start, ''he made up the prophecy specifically to get her to do exactly this.'' So everything she did was AllForNothing.
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* One of the side stories say that there are legends from the Mag'ne's world of Key'tuck of the greatest warriors of all, who saved the world time and again from evil. These were known as the Bloody Jaws.... but like how "Megan" became "Mag'ne" and "Kentucky," became "Key'tuck" over fifteen hundred years, the name was changed by ponykind. "Ig" for ponies is an acronym for a type of chemical found in blood, so the name of the group of warriors is more properly known as "Ig Jaws." Or, more properly, "G.I. Joes." Fifteen hundred years later and the tales of the Joes still ring strong in the halls of Equestria.
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* In the side story "Day of the Broken Fang", Cobra Commander telling off Serpentor when the new leader of COBRA confirms that [[spoiler: [[BullyingTheDragon he ordered an attack on the Decepticons]]]], and then being GenreSavvy enough to get the hell out of there [[spoiler: thus being one of COBRA's few survivors]].
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** Also from that epilogue, it's revealed ''how'' exactly Duke managed to survive the snake attack in ''WesternAnimation/GIJoeTheMovie''[[note]]the production crew had intended for him to be killed, but backlash from MoralGuardians over Optimus Prime's death in ''WesternAnimation/TheTransformersTheMovie'' resulted in [[ExecutiveMeddling Hasbro making the crew dub in lines that said Duke was merely in a coma]][[/note]]- Doc of the Joe team and First Aid of the Autobots helped to construct a new heart for Duke. Unfortunately, the toxins from the snake's venom had already made their mark on his body, so he was off the front-lines for the foreseeable future. [[spoiler: [[HeroicSacrifice Duke dies for real while stopping Overkill and a bunch of COBRA survivors from attacking graduation day at West Point]]; Overkill had done enough damage when he battled Duke- who managed to take out Overkill with a laser pistol set to overload.]]
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** By the DistantEpilogue of the side story, humanity had all but [[spoiler:''destroyed the Decepticons'']]. Took them weapons based on [[spoiler:Cybertronian technology that Optimus Prime released for reverse-engineering]], but considering ''who'' was the enemy...
** By the DistantEpilogue of the side story, humanity had all but [[spoiler:''destroyed the Decepticons'']]. Took them weapons based on [[spoiler:Cybertronian technology that Optimus Prime released for reverse-engineering]], but considering ''who'' was the enemy...
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** For the [[spoiler:Decepticons]], being so powerful that being attacked by Cobra was considered ''entertainment''. Enought Enough that at first [[spoiler:Megatron]] [[HopeSpot was willing to spare them]]. Then he learned that the attack had [[spoiler:ruined some energy energon cubes]]... And in a single day, [[spoiler:Cobra was no more]].
** By the DistantEpilogue of the side story, humanity had all but[[spoiler:''destroyed [[spoiler:driven the Decepticons'']].Decepticons off of Earth]]. Took them weapons based on [[spoiler:Cybertronian technology that Optimus Prime released for reverse-engineering]], but considering ''who'' was the enemy...
** By the DistantEpilogue of the side story, humanity had all but
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* Fluttershy tries to use [[DeathGlare The Stare]] on Spykoran the Old after his dramatic entrance scares a bunch of ponies and Megan's kids, and ''he shrugs it off.'' Giving him further {{Badass}} points, he then proceeds to effortlessly trounce the green dragon causing trouble in Everfree forest.
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* Fluttershy tries to use [[DeathGlare The Stare]] on Spykoran the Old after his dramatic entrance scares a bunch of ponies and Megan's kids, and ''he shrugs it off.'' Giving him further {{Badass}} badass points, he then proceeds to effortlessly trounce the green dragon causing trouble in Everfree forest.
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** For the [[spoiler:Decepticons]], being so powerful that being attacked by Cobra was considered ''entertainment''. Enought that at first [[spoiler:Megatron]] [[HopeSpot was willing to spare them]]. Then he learned that the attack had [[spoiler:ruined some energy cubes]]... And in a single day, [[spoiler:Cobra was no more]].
** By the DistantEpilogue of the side story, humanity had all but [[spoiler:''destroyed the Decepticons'']]. Took them weapons based on [[spoiler:Cybertronian technology that Optimus Prime released for reverse-engineering]], but considering ''who'' was the enemy...
** For the [[spoiler:Decepticons]], being so powerful that being attacked by Cobra was considered ''entertainment''. Enought that at first [[spoiler:Megatron]] [[HopeSpot was willing to spare them]]. Then he learned that the attack had [[spoiler:ruined some energy cubes]]... And in a single day, [[spoiler:Cobra was no more]].
** By the DistantEpilogue of the side story, humanity had all but [[spoiler:''destroyed the Decepticons'']]. Took them weapons based on [[spoiler:Cybertronian technology that Optimus Prime released for reverse-engineering]], but considering ''who'' was the enemy...
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* From the sequel, Omnicorn Megan: 1/5 earth pony, pegasus, unicorn, flutter and sea pony, [[HeroicWillpower half]]-[[BrainWashedAndCrazy crazed,]] half-'''[[MamaBear angry]]''', and 100% focused on taking down TCB!Celestia, as soon as she fights off that ''pesky'' brainwashing.
** Ironically, if there's anyone more deserving of being an alicorn, it's Megan herself.
* As of June 3, 2013, the most current chapter has Optimus Prime on his way to help save humanity from TCB!Celestia. He even put the Autobots and all Autobot forces on Earth in control of the EDC until he gets there.
** Ironically, if there's anyone more deserving of being an alicorn, it's Megan herself.
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** Ironically, if there's anyone more deserving of being an alicorn, it's Megan herself.
* As of June 3, 2013, the most current chapter has Optimus Prime on his way to help save humanity from TCB!Celestia. He even put the Autobots and all Autobot forces on Earth in control of the EDC until he gets there.
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* Megan. Founded. Equestria. She brought the various scattered groups of ponies together, helped weave alliances between them. She brought a ton of books over to provide them with information that was invaluable in building their civilization. She, Molly, and Danny raised Luna and Celestia for the first part of their lives. And ''that'' is how Equestria was made.
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* Kind of off-screen awesome: [[WordOfGod The Earth Megan comes from]] has all the [[Franchise/{{Transformers}} Hasbro]] [[Franchise/GIJoe franchises]] [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons of]] [[WesternAnimation/{{Jem}} the]] [[WesternAnimation/{{Inhumanoids}} 1980's.]] [[MegaCrossover All of them.]]
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* During the FinalBattle, [[spoiler: Tirac summons the Rainbow of Darkness to hold off the Elements of Harmony, and does so successfully... until Megan shoots his arms off, disrupting the Rainbow and allowing them to destroy him for good]]. And then the Elements' wave spreads out and destroys all of [[spoiler: Tirac]]'s Shadowbolts.
** The individual efforts by each of the Mane Six during this fight also deserve mention, even if they didn't accomplish much.
** Luna killing the last Ursa by shooting it in the head.
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* In the side story "Day of the Broken Fang", Cobra Commander telling off Serpentor when the new leader of COBRA confirms that [[spoiler: he ordered an attack on the Decepticon]], and then being GenreSavvy enough to get the hell out of there [[spoiler: thus being one of COBRA's few survivors]].
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* [[HiddenDepths Blueblood's]] RousingSpeech to the Royal Guard during [[spoiler: Tirac]]'s attack.
* The Equestrian armed forces versus [[spoiler: Tirac]]'s Shadowbolt army. Especially the image of the ponies fighting with machine guns, artillery, and ''tanks''.
* [[HiddenDepths Blueblood's]] RousingSpeech to the Royal Guard during [[spoiler: Tirac]]'s attack.
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