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* Though it has since been revised on account of the author admitting to his CriticalResearchFailure due to a lack of sleep and just wanting to publish the chapter before going to sleep, the original ending to ''Chapter 3'' had Momonga use [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill [The Goal of All Life is Death],]] a spell that bypassed any and all immunity to instant death. Raven had previously somehow managed to negate [Touch of Undeath] and [Paralysis], and following that, [Grasp Heart]. ''Raven managed to survive a skill that kills anyone, regardless of immunity''!
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* Though it has since been revised on account of the author admitting to his CriticalResearchFailure mistake due to a lack of sleep and just wanting to publish the chapter before going to sleep, the original ending to ''Chapter 3'' had Momonga use [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill [The Goal of All Life is Death],]] a spell that bypassed any and all immunity to instant death. Raven had previously somehow managed to negate [Touch of Undeath] and [Paralysis], and following that, [Grasp Heart]. ''Raven managed to survive a skill that kills anyone, regardless of immunity''!
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* Charles Holloway's [[https://youtu.be/lslG3X0-2eY faceoff]] against Mr. Dark. Need I say more?
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* Charles Holloway's [[https://youtu.be/lslG3X0-2eY [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A6DHtYc3BWg faceoff]] against Mr. Dark. Need I say more?
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* Though it has since been revised on account of the author admitting to his CriticalResearchFailure due to a lack of sleep and just wanting to publish the chapter before going to sleep, the original ending to ''Chapter 3'' had Momonga use [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill [The Goal of All Life is Death],]] a spell that bypassed any and all immunity to instant death. Raven had previously somehow managed to negate [Touch of Undeath] and [Paralysis], and following that, [Grasp Heart]. ''Raven managed to survive a skill that kills anyone, regardless of immunity''!
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* Though it has since been revised on account of the author admitting to his CriticalResearchFailure due to a lack of sleep and just wanting to publish the chapter before going to sleep, the original ending to ''Chapter 3'' had Momonga use [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill [The Goal of All Life is Death],]] a spell that bypassed any and all immunity to instant death. Raven had previously somehow managed to negate [Touch of Undeath] and [Paralysis], and following that, [Grasp Heart]. ''Raven managed to survive a skill that kills anyone, regardless of immunity''!immunity''!
!!Volume 2: The Lone Huntress
* How Initiation goes. Unlike how it went for Team RWBY and CFVY, this time it's been changed to a battle royal-esque fight between all the initiates. [[CurbStompBattle For Shizu, it was cake-walk]].
* The introduction of the Wild Hunt--Grimm that have been around since the days of the Brother Gods. It's first seen commanding the Grimm in the castle to bring the intruders, Team RY_L plus Shizu and Port, to it. Team RY_L encounters it, and it winds up being a one-sided slaughter.
* For many readers, Roy getting his recompense for leaving his teammates to die and his single-minded obsession with Shizu ends with him being carted off to Nazarick by Aura. So he can be experimented on to learn more about aura.
* The surprise decision in the ''EPILOGUE'' chapter for Shizu to become part of a new team consisting of May Zedong, Arslan Altan and Reese Chloris, all of whom are canonically first-years like Ruby in the show.
* The interlude chapter shows a man being accompanied by Demiurge, who calls him "President." That man happens to be Ainz, who is now assuming a human guise and is starting up his own business.
!!Volume 2: The Lone Huntress
* How Initiation goes. Unlike how it went for Team RWBY and CFVY, this time it's been changed to a battle royal-esque fight between all the initiates. [[CurbStompBattle For Shizu, it was cake-walk]].
* The introduction of the Wild Hunt--Grimm that have been around since the days of the Brother Gods. It's first seen commanding the Grimm in the castle to bring the intruders, Team RY_L plus Shizu and Port, to it. Team RY_L encounters it, and it winds up being a one-sided slaughter.
* For many readers, Roy getting his recompense for leaving his teammates to die and his single-minded obsession with Shizu ends with him being carted off to Nazarick by Aura. So he can be experimented on to learn more about aura.
* The surprise decision in the ''EPILOGUE'' chapter for Shizu to become part of a new team consisting of May Zedong, Arslan Altan and Reese Chloris, all of whom are canonically first-years like Ruby in the show.
* The interlude chapter shows a man being accompanied by Demiurge, who calls him "President." That man happens to be Ainz, who is now assuming a human guise and is starting up his own business.
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!For the film and book
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* Mr. Dark's evil monologue in the library, where he throws away Charles Holloway's years like a demented auctioneer. He makes a Faustian bargain sound perfectly reasonable while scaring the holy hell out of the audience with nothing but his words.
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* Mr. Dark's evil monologue in the library, where he throws away Charles Holloway's years like a demented auctioneer. He makes a Faustian bargain sound perfectly reasonable while scaring the holy hell out of the audience with nothing but his words.words.
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!For the Fanfic
!!Volume 1: The God of Death
* How ''PROLOGUE'' gives us a glimpse of what many consider to be the ultimate BreakTheHaughty moment for Raven Branwen. Qrow hears rumors about Raven being in Vacuo, which is odd since she never strays far from her tribe in Mistral. When he finds her, she's become a BrokenBird that's been DrowningMySorrows. The reason? ''Momonga killed off the entire Branwen Tribe when she attempted to raid a village.''
* ''Chapter 2'' and ''Chapter 3'' feature Momonga performing a BigDamnHeroes moment to save Shiroyuki, much like how he saved Carne Village in the light novel. He even channels his inner [[VideoGame/Disgaea5 Demon General Bloodis]] by giving the Branwen Tribe an ultimatum.
-->'''Momonga''': [[HowWouldYouLikeToDie Obey, or die.]] ''[[HowWouldYouLikeToDie Which will you choose?]]''
* ''Chapter 3'' shows that Raven stands above others, mostly because of her Maiden powers. The Branwen Tribe couldn't fight effectively against the Death Knight, much less damage it. What is Raven's solution? To freeze it and render it immobile, then turn it into a "Death Knight skewer" by impaling it several dozen times over.
** After the Death Knight is defeated, Raven assumes that Momonga is weak and has to rely on others to fight for him. Momonga instantly proves her wrong by [[TheReveal taking off his mask and showing her that he is an undead]]. What follows is a CurbStompBattle that readers have been looking forward to since they saw a glimpse of it in ''PROLOGUE''.
* Though it has since been revised on account of the author admitting to his CriticalResearchFailure due to a lack of sleep and just wanting to publish the chapter before going to sleep, the original ending to ''Chapter 3'' had Momonga use [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill [The Goal of All Life is Death],]] a spell that bypassed any and all immunity to instant death. Raven had previously somehow managed to negate [Touch of Undeath] and [Paralysis], and following that, [Grasp Heart]. ''Raven managed to survive a skill that kills anyone, regardless of immunity''!
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!For the Fanfic
!!Volume 1: The God of Death
* How ''PROLOGUE'' gives us a glimpse of what many consider to be the ultimate BreakTheHaughty moment for Raven Branwen. Qrow hears rumors about Raven being in Vacuo, which is odd since she never strays far from her tribe in Mistral. When he finds her, she's become a BrokenBird that's been DrowningMySorrows. The reason? ''Momonga killed off the entire Branwen Tribe when she attempted to raid a village.''
* ''Chapter 2'' and ''Chapter 3'' feature Momonga performing a BigDamnHeroes moment to save Shiroyuki, much like how he saved Carne Village in the light novel. He even channels his inner [[VideoGame/Disgaea5 Demon General Bloodis]] by giving the Branwen Tribe an ultimatum.
-->'''Momonga''': [[HowWouldYouLikeToDie Obey, or die.]] ''[[HowWouldYouLikeToDie Which will you choose?]]''
* ''Chapter 3'' shows that Raven stands above others, mostly because of her Maiden powers. The Branwen Tribe couldn't fight effectively against the Death Knight, much less damage it. What is Raven's solution? To freeze it and render it immobile, then turn it into a "Death Knight skewer" by impaling it several dozen times over.
** After the Death Knight is defeated, Raven assumes that Momonga is weak and has to rely on others to fight for him. Momonga instantly proves her wrong by [[TheReveal taking off his mask and showing her that he is an undead]]. What follows is a CurbStompBattle that readers have been looking forward to since they saw a glimpse of it in ''PROLOGUE''.
* Though it has since been revised on account of the author admitting to his CriticalResearchFailure due to a lack of sleep and just wanting to publish the chapter before going to sleep, the original ending to ''Chapter 3'' had Momonga use [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill [The Goal of All Life is Death],]] a spell that bypassed any and all immunity to instant death. Raven had previously somehow managed to negate [Touch of Undeath] and [Paralysis], and following that, [Grasp Heart]. ''Raven managed to survive a skill that kills anyone, regardless of immunity''!
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* Tom Fury has two moments of awesome appears in the Disney movie: The first one is during his resistance to Mr. Dark's electroshock torture. And then, after Charles shatters the illusions appearing in the mirrors, Tom arrives and stabs the Dust Witch with a now fully charged lightning rod, disintegrating her.
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* Tom Fury has two moments of awesome appears in the Disney movie: The first one is during his resistance to Mr. Dark's electroshock torture. And then, after Charles shatters the illusions appearing in the mirrors, Tom arrives and stabs the Dust Witch with a now fully charged lightning rod, disintegrating her.her.
* Mr. Dark's evil monologue in the library, where he throws away Charles Holloway's years like a demented auctioneer. He makes a Faustian bargain sound perfectly reasonable while scaring the holy hell out of the audience with nothing but his words.
* Mr. Dark's evil monologue in the library, where he throws away Charles Holloway's years like a demented auctioneer. He makes a Faustian bargain sound perfectly reasonable while scaring the holy hell out of the audience with nothing but his words.
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* Charles Holloway's faceoff against Mr. Dark. Need I say more?
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* Charles Holloway's faceoff [[https://youtu.be/lslG3X0-2eY faceoff]] against Mr. Dark. Need I say more?
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* Just the title alone. One of the most dark, chilling, and iconic titles in all of literature, and commonly used for works with a LiteraryAllusionTitle.
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* Just the title alone. One of the most dark, chilling, and iconic titles in all of literature, and commonly used for works with a LiteraryAllusionTitle. masterful use of the LiteraryAllusionTitle in reference to ''Theatre/{{Macbeth}}''.
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* Just the title alone. One of the most dark, chilling, and iconic titles in all of literature, and commonly used for works with a LiteraryAllusionTitle.
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* Tom Fury has two moments of awesome appears in the Disney movie: The first one is during his resistance to Mr. Dark's electroshock torture. And then, after Charles shatters the illusions appearing in the mirrors, Tom arrives and stabs the Dust Witch with a now fully charged lightning rod.
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* Tom Fury has two moments of awesome appears in the Disney movie: The first one is during his resistance to Mr. Dark's electroshock torture. And then, after Charles shatters the illusions appearing in the mirrors, Tom arrives and stabs the Dust Witch with a now fully charged lightning rod.rod, disintegrating her.
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** It gets better. After the [[DisabilitySuperpower Dust]] [[HyperAwareness Witch]] joins in, he quickly figures out what's what and finds a way to completely cripple all of her senses!
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** It gets better. After the [[DisabilitySuperpower Dust]] [[HyperAwareness Witch]] joins in, he quickly figures out what's what and finds a way to completely cripple all of her senses!senses!
* Tom Fury has two moments of awesome appears in the Disney movie: The first one is during his resistance to Mr. Dark's electroshock torture. And then, after Charles shatters the illusions appearing in the mirrors, Tom arrives and stabs the Dust Witch with a now fully charged lightning rod.
* Tom Fury has two moments of awesome appears in the Disney movie: The first one is during his resistance to Mr. Dark's electroshock torture. And then, after Charles shatters the illusions appearing in the mirrors, Tom arrives and stabs the Dust Witch with a now fully charged lightning rod.
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* Will facing the Dust Witch, alone. Even when his plan to take her out goes horribly wrong, he still finds a way to fight her off.
* Charles Holloway's faceoff against Mr. Dark. Need I say more?
** It gets better. After the [[DisabilitySuperpower Dust]] [[HyperAwareness Witch]] joins in, he quickly figures out what's what and finds a way to completely cripple all of her senses!
* Charles Holloway's faceoff against Mr. Dark. Need I say more?
** It gets better. After the [[DisabilitySuperpower Dust]] [[HyperAwareness Witch]] joins in, he quickly figures out what's what and finds a way to completely cripple all of her senses!
