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Explaining why I keep the deadname: she still was a man then.
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* In Chapter 21, Benedict faces Dobie, one of the main villains and leader of Team Cottage. At one point, he corners him with a Magikarp, namely his trusted Asuka.
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* In Chapter 21, Benedict Benedict, before he transitions to Holly, faces Dobie, one of the main villains and leader of Team Cottage. At one point, he corners him with a Magikarp, namely his trusted Asuka.
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* In Chapter 24, Kidd, despite starting with the least ambitions out of the three heroes, wins his first contest. In Chapter 39, through a tie for the first place, his victories become ''three''.
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* In Chapter 24, Kidd, despite starting with the least ambitions out of the three heroes, wins his first contest. In Chapter 39, through a tie for the first place, his victories become ''three''.''three''.
* Holly against Dobie in Chapter 46, where they have a physical fight. Holly ambushes him and taunts him, but he does not hold back against her. Nevertheless, she still manages to land a [[GroinAttack decisive blow]] before Judy saves her.
* In Chapter 48, Amelia does the first form of damage to Don, taking revenge for his cheating ways and evil in general. She burns her wedding ring and stands up to him this way.
* Holly against Dobie in Chapter 46, where they have a physical fight. Holly ambushes him and taunts him, but he does not hold back against her. Nevertheless, she still manages to land a [[GroinAttack decisive blow]] before Judy saves her.
* In Chapter 48, Amelia does the first form of damage to Don, taking revenge for his cheating ways and evil in general. She burns her wedding ring and stands up to him this way.
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* In Chapter 21, Benedict faces Dobie, one of the main villains and leader of Team Cottage. At one point, he corners him with a Magikarp, namely his trusted Asuka.
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* In Chapter 21, Benedict faces Dobie, one of the main villains and leader of Team Cottage. At one point, he corners him with a Magikarp, namely his trusted Asuka.Asuka.
* In Chapter 24, Kidd, despite starting with the least ambitions out of the three heroes, wins his first contest. In Chapter 39, through a tie for the first place, his victories become ''three''.
* In Chapter 24, Kidd, despite starting with the least ambitions out of the three heroes, wins his first contest. In Chapter 39, through a tie for the first place, his victories become ''three''.
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* Tank catches several Pokémon in the first chapter alone.
* In Chapter 21, Benedict faces Dobie, one of the main villains and leader of Team Cottage. At one point, he corners him with a Magikarp, namely his trusted Asuka.
* In Chapter 21, Benedict faces Dobie, one of the main villains and leader of Team Cottage. At one point, he corners him with a Magikarp, namely his trusted Asuka.
