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* A subtle moment. After headbutting the guy who threatened Amy, Paul sends the skateboard back to the bank. Veck, who witnesses this, [[BreakTheHaughty is horrified]], closes the bank door. ''He's scared of the mall cop''.
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* A subtle moment. After headbutting the guy who threatened Amy, Paul sends the skateboard back to the bank. Veck, who witnesses this, [[BreakTheHaughty is horrified]], horrified]] and closes the bank door. ''He's scared of the mall cop''.
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* A subtle moment. After headbutting the guy who threatened Amy, Paul sends the skateboard back to the bank. Veck, who witnesses this, [[BreakTheHaughty is horrified]], and closes the door to the bank. ''He's scared of the mall cop''.
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* A subtle moment. After headbutting the guy who threatened Amy, Paul sends the skateboard back to the bank. Veck, who witnesses this, [[BreakTheHaughty is horrified]], and closes the door to the bank. bank door. ''He's scared of the mall cop''.cop''.
* Paul manages to [[ObfuscatingDisability fake a hypoglycemia attack]] to take down Veck. [[EvilAllAlong Before he revealed himself to be a bad guy]], even Jimmy was impressed.
* Paul manages to [[ObfuscatingDisability fake a hypoglycemia attack]] to take down Veck. [[EvilAllAlong Before he revealed himself to be a bad guy]], even Jimmy was impressed.
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* Right up until his hypoglycemia kicked in, Blart was doing fantastically well on the obstacle course, wildly outperforming the skinnier, fitter guys. Too bad he collapsed an inch before the finish line.
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* Right up until his hypoglycemia kicked in, Blart was doing fantastically well on the obstacle course, [[{{Acrofatic}} wildly outperforming the skinnier, fitter guys. guys.]] Too bad he collapsed an inch before the finish line.
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** Fifth: using a hockey stick to sweep someone's ankles out from under him, and then hit him in the stomach ''before he lands''.
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** Fifth: In a Fast/Slow Motion sequence worthy of ''Film/ThreeHundred'', using a hockey stick to sweep someone's ankles out from under him, and then hit him in the stomach ''before he lands''.
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* Right up until his hypoglycemia kicked in, Blart was doing fantastically well on the obstacle course, ultimately beating out most of the skinnier, fitter guys.
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* Right up until his hypoglycemia kicked in, Blart was doing fantastically well on the obstacle course, ultimately beating out most of wildly outperforming the skinnier, fitter guys.guys. Too bad he collapsed an inch before the finish line.
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--> '''Paul''': [[PreAsskickingOneLiner "You aren't gonna touch her, but you are gonna feel this."]] ''(headbutt)''
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--> '''Paul''': [[PreAsskickingOneLiner "You You aren't gonna touch her, but you are gonna feel this."]] this]]. ''(headbutt)''
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* A subtle moment. After headbutting the guy who threatened Amy, Paul sends the skateboard back to the bank. Veck, who witnesses this, [[BreakTheHaughty is horrified]], and closes the door to the bank. ''He's scared of the mall cop''.
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* First: Knocking out the guy who threatened to kill Amy.
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* Right up until his hypoglycemia kicked in, Blart was doing fantastically well on the obstacle course, ultimately beating out most of the skinnier, fitter guys.
* Let's be honest, pretty much every time Paul took down a bad guy.
** First: Knocking out the guy who threatened to kill Amy.
* Let's be honest, pretty much every time Paul took down a bad guy.
** First: Knocking out the guy who threatened to kill Amy.
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** Sixth+: Let's be honest, pretty much every time Paul took down a bad guy.
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-->'''Kent''':''Oh, please. Like Paul Blart is a badass.'' ''(kaboom)''
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** Fifth+: Let's be honest, pretty much every time Paul took down a bad guy.
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** Fifth+: Sixth+: Let's be honest, pretty much every time Paul took down a bad guy.
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* First [=CMoA=]: Blart knocking the guy out with the scuba tank. "Scuba-dooby-doo."
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** Second:
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* First First: Knocking out the guy who threatened to kill Amy.
--> '''Paul''': [[PreAsskickingOneLiner "You aren't gonna touch her, but you are gonna feel this."]] ''(headbutt)''
** Second [=CMoA=]: Blart knocking the guy out with the scuba tank. "Scuba-dooby-doo."
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--> '''Paul''': [[PreAsskickingOneLiner "You aren't gonna touch her, but you are gonna feel this."]] ''(headbutt)''
** Second [=CMoA=]: Blart knocking the guy out with the scuba tank. "Scuba-dooby-doo."
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** Third: Pretending to take a fall and knocking Veck down.
** Fourth: using a hockey stick to sweep someone's ankles out from under him, and then hit him in the stomach ''before he lands''.
** Fourth: using a hockey stick to sweep someone's ankles out from under him, and then hit him in the stomach ''before he lands''.
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** Third: Fourth: Pretending to take a fall and knocking Veck down.
**Fourth: Fifth: using a hockey stick to sweep someone's ankles out from under him, and then hit him in the stomach ''before he lands''.
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** Third: Pretending to take a fall and knocking Veck down.
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** Third: Pretending to take a fall and knocking Veck down.down.
** Fourth: using a hockey stick to sweep someone's ankles out from under him, and then hit him in the stomach ''before he lands''.
** Fifth+: Let's be honest, pretty much every time Paul took down a bad guy.
** Fourth: using a hockey stick to sweep someone's ankles out from under him, and then hit him in the stomach ''before he lands''.
** Fifth+: Let's be honest, pretty much every time Paul took down a bad guy.
