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** And then the epilogue of Thunder Junction's story, retroactively makes [[spoiler:Jace's desperate determination]] during All Will Be One all the more impressive. [[spoiler:He manages to shit-talk Elesh Norn in his head before succumbing properly to compleation, manages to break its hold on him enough to knock himself out, and functionally turbocharges his own body to force the oil out of it when he wakes up after the invasion is over. Still wounded, he makes the time and effort to save Vraska's life too before going to the one healer he's known the longest in his life: His mother, only finally collapsing when he's right in front of her.]]
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** And then the epilogue of Thunder Junction's story, retroactively makes [[spoiler:Jace's desperate determination]] during All Will Be One all the more impressive. [[spoiler:He manages to shit-talk Elesh Norn in his head before succumbing properly to compleation, manages to break its hold on compleation. Except it didn't get all of his mind as getting stabbed by Luxior also infused him with enough Halo to seperate himself from his compleated part enough to knock himself out, and then when the oil goes inert and regains control he functionally turbocharges his own body to force the oil out of it when he wakes up after the invasion is over. Still wounded, he makes the time and effort to save Vraska's life too before going to the one healer he's known the longest in his life: His mother, only finally collapsing when he's right in front of her.]]
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!!Outlaws of Thunder Junction
* The final chapter of the main story shows just what [[spoiler:Jace Beleren]] can do when allowed to flex. To wit: [[spoiler: He completely outmaneuvers Oko, a noted trickster, manages to make off with the main treasure of the Vault everybody's after, gets away before most people even realise he's there, and his teamwork with Vraska has upped significantly. From the reveal of 'Ashiok' being Jace in disguise to his exit, he quickly establishes WHY he's such a notable powerhouse.]]
** And then the epilogue of Thunder Junction's story, retroactively makes [[spoiler:Jace's desperate determination]] during All Will Be One all the more impressive. [[spoiler:He manages to shit-talk Elesh Norn in his head before succumbing properly to compleation, manages to break its hold on him enough to knock himself out, and functionally turbocharges his own body to force the oil out of it when he wakes up after the invasion is over. Still wounded, he makes the time and effort to save Vraska's life too before going to the one healer he's known the longest in his life: His mother, only finally collapsing when he's right in front of her.]]
* The final chapter of the main story shows just what [[spoiler:Jace Beleren]] can do when allowed to flex. To wit: [[spoiler: He completely outmaneuvers Oko, a noted trickster, manages to make off with the main treasure of the Vault everybody's after, gets away before most people even realise he's there, and his teamwork with Vraska has upped significantly. From the reveal of 'Ashiok' being Jace in disguise to his exit, he quickly establishes WHY he's such a notable powerhouse.]]
** And then the epilogue of Thunder Junction's story, retroactively makes [[spoiler:Jace's desperate determination]] during All Will Be One all the more impressive. [[spoiler:He manages to shit-talk Elesh Norn in his head before succumbing properly to compleation, manages to break its hold on him enough to knock himself out, and functionally turbocharges his own body to force the oil out of it when he wakes up after the invasion is over. Still wounded, he makes the time and effort to save Vraska's life too before going to the one healer he's known the longest in his life: His mother, only finally collapsing when he's right in front of her.]]
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** Also, when Baral tries to goad Chandra into punching him, he ''is'' slugged- by Nissa's elemental that is.
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** Baral says his actions won't be forgotten?
-->'''Dovin:''' Excellent. I don't care to repeat myself.
-->'''Dovin:''' Excellent. I don't care to repeat myself.
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-->'''Dovin:''' Chief Inspector Dhiren Baral, I charge you with one count of murder—possibly with more yet to be uncovered—and one count of attempted murder. I charge you with one count of extrajudicial incarceration—again, possibly with more to be revealed. Finally, I charge you with multiple counts of falsification of the public record, with the express intention of obscuring your crimes. You are a disgrace to your uniform, and a disquieting aberration to the ideals the Consulate espouses. Though I personally find your offenses...vexing in the extreme, the law requires that even you must be judged in court. Be aware that your every statement from this point forward shall be entered into the official record as evidence.
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-->'''Dovin:''' Chief Inspector Dhiren Baral, I charge you with one count of murder—possibly with more yet to be uncovered—and one count of attempted ''attempted'' murder. I charge you with one count of extrajudicial incarceration—again, possibly with more to be revealed. Finally, I charge you with multiple counts of falsification of the public record, with the express intention of obscuring your crimes. You are a disgrace to your uniform, and a disquieting aberration to the ideals the Consulate espouses. Though I personally find your offenses...vexing in the extreme, the law requires that even you ''you'' must be judged in court. Be aware that your every statement from this point forward shall be entered into the official record as evidence.
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** The next chapter, [[https://magic.wizards.com/en/articles/archive/magic-story/arbiter-law-left-chaos-his-wake-2018-01-24 The Arbiter of Law Left Chaos in his Wake]], Jace and Vraska confront Azor over the mess he made with the Immortal Sun. It ends with Jace [[HoistByHisOwnPetard using his power as the Living Guildpact]] to condemn Azor for ruining Ravnica, Ixalan and every other plane he visited. The magic makes Azor utterly powerless thanks to being the parun of Azorius, and thus a part of Ravnica. Jace condemns him to be the guardian of Useless Island and never meddle in mortals' affairs again. Despite all his might, Azor is forced to comply.
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** The next chapter, [[https://magic.wizards.com/en/articles/archive/magic-story/arbiter-law-left-chaos-his-wake-2018-01-24 The Arbiter of Law Left Chaos in his Wake]], Jace and Vraska confront Azor over the mess he made with the Immortal Sun. It ends with Jace [[HoistByHisOwnPetard using his power as the Living Guildpact]] to condemn Azor for ruining Ravnica, Ixalan and every other plane he visited. The magic makes Azor utterly powerless thanks to being the parun of Azorius, and thus a part of Ravnica. Jace condemns him to be the guardian of Useless Island (the island from "Jace, Alone") and never meddle in mortals' affairs again. Despite all his might, Azor is forced to comply.
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* [[http://magic.wizards.com/en/articles/archive/magic-story/burn-2017-01-04 Burn]]: a small one for Dovin Baan. Despite being Tezzeret's {{Dragon}}, the man still has morals, and gives us a particularly satifying moment when he arrests Baral for Kiran's murder, Chandra's - attempted - execution, Pia's imprisonment, and falsifying the records to hide his crimes. Not only that, he proceeds to counter every single argument used by Baral and reveal how despicable the man is.
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* [[http://magic.wizards.com/en/articles/archive/magic-story/burn-2017-01-04 Burn]]: a small one for Dovin Baan. Despite being Tezzeret's {{Dragon}}, [[TheDragon Dragon]], the man still has morals, and gives us a particularly satifying moment when he arrests Baral for Kiran's murder, Chandra's - attempted - execution, Pia's imprisonment, and falsifying the records to hide his crimes. Not only that, he proceeds to counter every single argument used by Baral and reveal how despicable the man is.
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* Urza ''Planeswalking'' '''[[GeneralRipper K'rrik]]''' ''to death.'' One could refer to that moment as [[IncrediblyLamePun "Urza getting rid of a nasty K'rrik in his neck."]]
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* Urza ''Planeswalking'' '''[[GeneralRipper K'rrik]]''' ''to death.'' One could refer to that moment as [[IncrediblyLamePun [[{{Pun}} "Urza getting rid of a nasty K'rrik in his neck."]]
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OxUmqQrMIWY This trailer]] showed that Wizards really pulled out all the stops to promote this set. Featuring animation from Pierrot[[note]](Studio that animated shows such as Tokyo Mew Mew, Naruto, and Tokyo Ghoul)[[/note]], Yui Ishikawa[[note]](Mikasa from Attack on Titan and 2B from Nier Automata)[[/note]] and Yuichiro Umehara[[note]](Goblin Salyer himself)[[/note]] to play Rowan and Will respectively, and music from Hiroyuki Sawano[[note]](Attack on Titan, Kill La Kill, and many other series)]].
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OxUmqQrMIWY This trailer]] showed that Wizards really pulled out all the stops to promote this set. Featuring animation from Pierrot[[note]](Studio that animated shows such as Tokyo Mew Mew, Naruto, and Tokyo Ghoul)[[/note]], Yui Ishikawa[[note]](Mikasa from Attack on Titan and 2B from Nier Automata)[[/note]] and Yuichiro Umehara[[note]](Goblin Salyer himself)[[/note]] to play Rowan and Will respectively, and music from Hiroyuki Sawano[[note]](Attack on Titan, Kill La Kill, and many other series)]].series)[[/note]].
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!!Wilds of Eldraine
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OxUmqQrMIWY This trailer]] showed that Wizards really pulled out all the stops to promote this set. Featuring animation from Pierrot[[note]](Studio that animated shows such as Tokyo Mew Mew, Naruto, and Tokyo Ghoul)[[/note]], Yui Ishikawa[[note]](Mikasa from Attack on Titan and 2B from Nier Automata)[[/note]] and Yuichiro Umehara[[note]](Goblin Salyer himself)[[/note]] to play Rowan and Will respectively, and music from Hiroyuki Sawano[[note]](Attack on Titan, Kill La Kill, and many other series)]].
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** [[https://magic.wizards.com/en/news/magic-story/she-who-breaks-the-world She Who Breaks the World]] shows that, even after losing their sparks, Teferi, Karn, and Koth are still ready for a fight when they save Nissa from an interplanar lightning beast.
*** Nissa herself manages to overcome her own trauma from serving New Phyrexia and tap into her full Animist powers once again, allowing her to connect to Zhalfir and channel its power to Chandra to help free the lightning beast, which was a trapped storm elemental.
*** Nissa herself manages to overcome her own trauma from serving New Phyrexia and tap into her full Animist powers once again, allowing her to connect to Zhalfir and channel its power to Chandra to help free the lightning beast, which was a trapped storm elemental.
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*** Zhalfir's entry into the battle on New Phyrexia is the final telling blow of Norn's grand invasion, Vorinclex is killed and Jin-Gitaxias betrays Norn and attempts to depose her. The battle ends with all Praetors dead, Ajani and Nissa incapacitated, and the Mirrans escaping to find a new home on Zhalfir.
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*** Zhalfir's entry into the battle on New Phyrexia is the final telling blow of Norn's grand invasion, Vorinclex is killed and Jin-Gitaxias betrays Norn and attempts to depose her. The battle ends with all Praetors dead, Ajani and Nissa incapacitated, and the Mirrans escaping to find a new home on Zhalfir.Zhalfir...which, after spending countless years in an extraplanar void thanks to Teferi's meddling, has taken New Phyrexia's place, becoming a plane unto itself, while condemning New Phyrexia to oblivion.
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** [[https://magic.wizards.com/en/news/magic-story/episode-6-the-last-to-leave The Last to Leave]] and [[https://magic.wizards.com/en/news/magic-story/episode-7-divine-intervention Divine Intervention]] show [[spoiler:Elspeth's transformation into an Archangel after venturing into eternity and being shown the battles unfolding by an unknown voice that actually reveals itself to be ''Serra herself.'' Afterward, Elspeth leaps directly into battle on New Phyrexia, taking it directly to Norn's forces and even healing up the remainder of the Mirran resistance and Chandra. Any fear she had about the Phyrexians are gone and when Norn tries to give her the NotSoDifferent speech, her response boils down to,"You're right; we're not so different. Neither of us are Phyrexian." Having her hypocrisy rubbed in her face [[VillainousBreakdown makes Norn completely snap]] ]]
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** [[https://magic.wizards.com/en/news/magic-story/episode-6-the-last-to-leave The Last to Leave]] and [[https://magic.wizards.com/en/news/magic-story/episode-7-divine-intervention Divine Intervention]] show [[spoiler:Elspeth's Elspeth's transformation into an Archangel after venturing into eternity and being shown the battles unfolding by an unknown voice that actually reveals itself to be ''Serra herself.'' Afterward, Elspeth leaps directly into battle on New Phyrexia, taking it directly to Norn's forces and even healing up the remainder of the Mirran resistance and Chandra. Any fear she had about the Phyrexians are gone and when Norn tries to give her the NotSoDifferent speech, NotSoDifferentRemark, her response boils down to,"You're right; we're not so different. Neither of us are Phyrexian." Having her hypocrisy rubbed in her face [[VillainousBreakdown makes Norn completely snap]] ]]snap]].
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*** [[spoiler:Kaya joins Elspeth in slaying a Therian God when she takes down the compleated Heliod.]]
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*** [[spoiler:Kaya Kaya joins Elspeth in slaying a Therian God when she takes down the compleated Heliod.]]
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*** In a mix of awesome with TearJerker, we have [[spoiler:a dying Melira gives her life and Karn, his spark, to cleanse both Ajani and Nissa, freeing them from Phyrexia's influence.]]
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*** In a mix of awesome with TearJerker, we have [[spoiler:a dying Melira gives giving her life and Karn, his spark, to cleanse both Ajani and Nissa, freeing them from Phyrexia's influence.]]
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** [[https://magic.wizards.com/en/news/magic-story/episode-6-the-last-to-leave The Last to Leave]] and [[https://magic.wizards.com/en/news/magic-story/episode-7-divine-intervention Divine Intervention]] show [[spoiler:Elspeth's transformation into an Archangel after venturing into eternity and being shown the battles unfolding by an unknown voice that actually reveals itself to be ''Serra herself.'' Afterward, Elspeth leaps directly into battle on New Phyrexia, taking it directly to Norn's forces and even healing up the remainder of the Mirran resistance and Chandra. Any fear she had about the Phyrexians are gone and when Norn tries to give her the NotSoDifferent speech, her response boils down to,"You're right; we're not so different. [[spoiler:Neither of us are Phyrexian.]]" Having her hypocrisy rubbed in her face [[VillainousBreakdown makes Norn completely snap]] ]]
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** [[https://magic.wizards.com/en/news/magic-story/episode-6-the-last-to-leave The Last to Leave]] and [[https://magic.wizards.com/en/news/magic-story/episode-7-divine-intervention Divine Intervention]] show [[spoiler:Elspeth's transformation into an Archangel after venturing into eternity and being shown the battles unfolding by an unknown voice that actually reveals itself to be ''Serra herself.'' Afterward, Elspeth leaps directly into battle on New Phyrexia, taking it directly to Norn's forces and even healing up the remainder of the Mirran resistance and Chandra. Any fear she had about the Phyrexians are gone and when Norn tries to give her the NotSoDifferent speech, her response boils down to,"You're right; we're not so different. [[spoiler:Neither Neither of us are Phyrexian.]]" " Having her hypocrisy rubbed in her face [[VillainousBreakdown makes Norn completely snap]] ]]
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*** In a mix of awesome mixed with TearJerker, we have [[spoiler:a dying Melira gives her life and Karn, his spark, to cleanse both Ajani and Nissa, freeing them from Phyrexia's influence.]]
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** [[https://magic.wizards.com/en/news/magic-story/episode-6-the-last-to-leave The Last to Leave]] and [[https://magic.wizards.com/en/news/magic-story/episode-7-divine-intervention Divine Intervention]] show [[spoiler:Elspeth's transformation into an Archangel after venturing into eternity and being shown the battles unfolding by an unknown voice that actually reveals itself to be ''Serra herself.'' Afterward, Elspeth leaps directly into battle on New Phyrexia, taking it directly to Norn's forces and even healing up the remainder of the Mirran resistance and Chandra. Any fear she had about the Phyrexians are gone and she even has time to deliver a ReasonYouSuckSpeech to Norn directly as they're battling.]]
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** [[https://magic.wizards.com/en/news/magic-story/episode-6-the-last-to-leave The Last to Leave]] and [[https://magic.wizards.com/en/news/magic-story/episode-7-divine-intervention Divine Intervention]] show [[spoiler:Elspeth's transformation into an Archangel after venturing into eternity and being shown the battles unfolding by an unknown voice that actually reveals itself to be ''Serra herself.'' Afterward, Elspeth leaps directly into battle on New Phyrexia, taking it directly to Norn's forces and even healing up the remainder of the Mirran resistance and Chandra. Any fear she had about the Phyrexians are gone and she even has time to deliver a ReasonYouSuckSpeech to when Norn directly as they're battling.tries to give her the NotSoDifferent speech, her response boils down to,"You're right; we're not so different. [[spoiler:Neither of us are Phyrexian.]]" Having her hypocrisy rubbed in her face [[VillainousBreakdown makes Norn completely snap]] ]]
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** Eslpeth's response to Norn's smug [[NotSoDifferent Not So Different]] speech. Her response can be summarized thus: "You're right; we're not so different. [[spoiler:Neither of us are Phyrexian.]]" Having her hypocrisy rubbed in her face [[VillainousBreakdown makes Norn completely snap]].
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** Eslpeth's response [[https://magic.wizards.com/en/news/magic-story/episode-9-the-old-sins-of-new-phyrexia The Old Sins of New Phyrexia]] opens with [[spoiler:the Angels of New Cepenna spreading far out across the multiverse to fight back the corruption.]]
*** [[spoiler:Kaya joins Elspeth in slaying a Therian God when she takes down the compleated Heliod.]]
*** [[spoiler:Zhalfir's entry into the battle on New Phyrexia is the final telling blow of Norn'ssmug [[NotSoDifferent Not So Different]] speech. Her response can be summarized thus: "You're right; we're not so different. [[spoiler:Neither of us are Phyrexian.]]" Having her hypocrisy rubbed in her face [[VillainousBreakdown makes grand invasion, Vorinclex is killed and Jin-Gitaxias betrays Norn completely snap]].and attempts to depose her. The battle ends with all Praetors dead, Ajani and Nissa incapacitated, and the Mirrans escaping to find a new home on Zhalfir.]]
** [[https://magic.wizards.com/en/news/magic-story/episode-10-the-rhythms-of-life The Rhythms of Life]] Opens with the results of the war on multiple planes. When it gets to Kaldheim, we see Tyvar returning to his brother with the head of a compleated sea serpent that dragged him underwater for ''five minutes.''
*** In a mix of awesome mixed with TearJerker, we have [[spoiler:a dying Melira gives her life and Karn, his spark, to cleanse both Ajani and Nissa, freeing them from Phyrexia's influence.]]
*** [[spoiler:Kaya joins Elspeth in slaying a Therian God when she takes down the compleated Heliod.]]
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** [[https://magic.wizards.com/en/news/magic-story/episode-10-the-rhythms-of-life The Rhythms of Life]] Opens with the results of the war on multiple planes. When it gets to Kaldheim, we see Tyvar returning to his brother with the head of a compleated sea serpent that dragged him underwater for ''five minutes.''
*** In a mix of awesome mixed with TearJerker, we have [[spoiler:a dying Melira gives her life and Karn, his spark, to cleanse both Ajani and Nissa, freeing them from Phyrexia's influence.]]
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** Eslpeth's response to Norn's smug [[NotSoDifferent Not So Different]] speech. Her response can be summarized thus: "You're right; we're not so different. [[spoiler:Neither of us are Phyrexian.]]" Having her hypocrisy rubbed in her face [[VillainousBreakdown makes Norn completely snap]].
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* Trying to rendezvous with the rest of the strike team, Elspeth and Tyvar are confronted by the Compleated Ajani and Tibalt. During the fight, Elsepth finds herself overwhelmed by Tibalt's doubt magic and Ajani's BreakingSpeech, making her almost unable to fight back. So what does Tyvar do? Grab one of Tibalt's tails and reverse one of Phyrexia's favorite tricks by covering ''him'' in Phyresis-resistant Glimmervoid metal, completely negating his magic and letting Elspeth get the HeroicSecondWind she needs to defeat Ajani. Tyvar then follows this up by stabbing Tibalt in the heart with his own tail before tossing him off the bridge, finally killing the bastard.
-->''[[https://gatherer.wizards.com/pages/Card/Details.aspx?multiverseid=602720 "When they write songs about this battle, I will make sure your name is forgotten, devil."]]''
-->''[[https://gatherer.wizards.com/pages/Card/Details.aspx?multiverseid=602720 "When they write songs about this battle, I will make sure your name is forgotten, devil."]]''
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** [[https://magic.wizards.com/en/news/magic-story/episode-8-wrenn-and-eight Wrenn and Eight]]: [[spoiler: Wrenn, despite losing Seven ''and'' [[AnArmAndALeg her legs]], is able to bond with the Invasion Tree/Realmbreaker. Despite the oil's attempts at MindRape--not just on her, but on the part of Realmbreaker that is terrified of what he is--she is able to encourage Realmbreaker/Eight to grow out and ''displace'' the phyretic influence. Not only that, but they then proceed to seek out Zhalfir and Teferi. Once they're found, Wrenn proceeds to bring a telling blow on Elesh Norn's campaign by ''re-enacting the Rathi Overlay with Zhalfir binding to New Phyrexia''.]]
