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** And despite being beat to hell by them, Harry had enough wits to notice the BigBad's man who sped past the Streetwolves vehicle to survey them, finally allowing him to put the pieces together.
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* Parker, the owner leader of Streetwolves owning an uppity subordinate subordinates who was trying to undermine his authority.authority despite getting on in years.
** He also OutGambitted Harry as well. He let Harry focus on him, taunting him, allowing his men to sneak up behind Harry and beat him down. Simple street technique, abd it worked like a charm.
** He also OutGambitted Harry as well. He let Harry focus on him, taunting him, allowing his men to sneak up behind Harry and beat him down. Simple street technique, abd it worked like a charm.
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** Shortly after the above, Harry manages to drive the loup-garou off with a phenomenally powerful fure blast that hurls it through ''two buildings.'' As one of the witnesses so eloquently puts it:
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** Shortly after the above, Harry manages to drive the loup-garou off with a phenomenally powerful fure fire blast that hurls it through ''two buildings.'' As one of the witnesses so eloquently puts it:
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** Shortly after the above, Harry manages to drive the loup-garou off with a phenomenally powerful telekinetic blast that hurls it through ''three buildings.'' As one of the witnesses so eloquently puts it:
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** Shortly after the above, Harry manages to drive the loup-garou off with a phenomenally powerful telekinetic fure blast that hurls it through ''three ''two buildings.'' As one of the witnesses so eloquently puts it:
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* Marcone and Hendricks [[spoiler: performing a VillainousRescue of Harry from Parker, the leader of Streetwolves at their hideout just as he was about to beat Harry to death, toting a massive shotgun, revealing that he had all of Parker's associates were first waylaid and their vehicles tampered with, leaving Parker alone, and that he had got his hands on Harry's report to Murphy and knows all about werewolves and repeats his job offer to Harry. And shooting their way out when Hexenwolves attack.]]
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* How Harry finally defeats the loup-garou. [[spoiler: His mother's ''silver'' pendant]]
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* How Harry finally defeats the loup-garou. [[spoiler: His He realises his mother's ''silver'' pendant]]pendant counts as inherited silver, so he charges it up with magical energy and uses it as an improvised shuriken to kill it. Simultaneously, Murphy guns down the BigBag trying to attack Harry from behind. And Susan records all this from far away, getting a massive career boost from the footage.]]
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** The loup-garou is ''just annoyed'' by that attack it.
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** The loup-garou is ''just annoyed'' by that attack it.attack.
--> '''Harry''': (realising its unharmed) Oh you've gotta be kidding me!
--> '''Harry''': (realising its unharmed) Oh you've gotta be kidding me!
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* Murphy shoots a loup-garou [read: giant psychotic werewolf] with silver bullets she made from her deceased aunt's earrings.
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* Murphy shoots a loup-garou [read: giant psychotic werewolf] with silver bullets she made from her deceased aunt's earrings.(only inherited silver can harm it)
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* The villains get one for being CrazyPrepared to already have a hostage ''in case Harry got an advantage over them''.
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* The villains get one for being CrazyPrepared enough to already have ''already having'' a hostage ''in case Harry got an advantage over them''.them''.
* Harry and his ally are being chased by officers and Harry gets shot in the shoulder. And they nearly get cornered. Harry, handcuffed and close to unconsciousnes from blood loss, gets the idea to perform some blood magic with ''the blood he just lost on the way'' due to the gunshot wound. This covers a large area in mist and allows his ally to spirit him away.
* Harry generating electricity from him body to escape a chokehold.
* How Harry finally defeats the loup-garou. [[spoiler: His mother's ''silver'' pendant]]
* Harry and his ally are being chased by officers and Harry gets shot in the shoulder. And they nearly get cornered. Harry, handcuffed and close to unconsciousnes from blood loss, gets the idea to perform some blood magic with ''the blood he just lost on the way'' due to the gunshot wound. This covers a large area in mist and allows his ally to spirit him away.
* Harry generating electricity from him body to escape a chokehold.
* How Harry finally defeats the loup-garou. [[spoiler: His mother's ''silver'' pendant]]
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* m* Harry pushing Murphy out if of the way from of a gunshot
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* Murphy casually owning Agent Denton with one move when she tries to sucker punch Murphy.
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* Murphy casually owning Agent Denton with one move when she tries to sucker punch Murphy.
*m* Harry pushing Murphy out if the way from a gunshot
*m* Harry pushing Murphy out if the way from a gunshot
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** There is also Harry curbstomping one of the villains using the same TransformationTrinket. BeatThemAtTheirOwnGame is his middle name.
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** There is also Harry curbstomping one of the villains who was using the same TransformationTrinket. BeatThemAtTheirOwnGame is his middle name.
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** The loup-garou is ''just annoyed'' by it.
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** The loup-garou is ''just annoyed'' by that attack it.
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** Harry's response? He tackles the massive wolf, PalatePropping it's mouth with a wrech, rips off his TransformationTrinket, before beating him into unconscioussness by slamming his face into the ground repeatedly. That's right, Harry Dresden '''destroyed''' ''a werewolf in physical combat with his bare hands''.
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** Harry's response? He tackles the massive wolf, PalatePropping it's mouth with a wrech, rips off his TransformationTrinket, before beating him into unconscioussness by slamming his face into the ground repeatedly. That's right, Harry Dresden '''destroyed''' ''a werewolf in physical combat with his bare hands''.combat''.
* The villains get one for being CrazyPrepared to already have a hostage ''in case Harry got an advantage over them''.
* The villains get one for being CrazyPrepared to already have a hostage ''in case Harry got an advantage over them''.
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** The loup-garou is ''just annoyed'' by it.
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** Marcone distracts the creature at a critical time with high-pitched whistling as well, risking gaining its attention so others could move into a safe position.
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** Harry's response? He tackles the massive wolf, PalatePropping it's mouth with a wrech, rips off his TransformationTrinket, before beating him into unconscioussness by slamming his face into the ground repeatedly. That's right, Harry Dresden destroyed a werewolf in physical combat with his bare hands.
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** Harry's response? He tackles the massive wolf, PalatePropping it's mouth with a wrech, rips off his TransformationTrinket, before beating him into unconscioussness by slamming his face into the ground repeatedly. That's right, Harry Dresden destroyed a '''destroyed''' ''a werewolf in physical combat with his bare hands.hands''.
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* Carmichael's DyingMomentOfAwesome.DyingMomentOfAwesome, going out saving Murphy from a loup-garou.
* Harry is rescued by a group of werewolves from a Hexenwulf attack, and when one of them catches up, they offer to HoldTheLine so that he can escape despite being throughly outclassed.
** Harry's response? He tackles the massive wolf, PalatePropping it's mouth with a wrech, rips off his TransformationTrinket, before beating him into unconscioussness by slamming his face into the ground repeatedly. That's right, Harry Dresden destroyed a werewolf in physical combat with his bare hands.
* Harry is rescued by a group of werewolves from a Hexenwulf attack, and when one of them catches up, they offer to HoldTheLine so that he can escape despite being throughly outclassed.
** Harry's response? He tackles the massive wolf, PalatePropping it's mouth with a wrech, rips off his TransformationTrinket, before beating him into unconscioussness by slamming his face into the ground repeatedly. That's right, Harry Dresden destroyed a werewolf in physical combat with his bare hands.
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* Harry, after [[spoiler:donning one of the cursed wolfskin belts of the Hexenwulf and becoming (temporarily) a werewolf himself]], realizes that the BlackMagic of the artifact is seducing him into doing and becoming something that appalls him, and ''rips it off and flings it away.'' Given the overwhelming and addictive appeal of BlackMagic in this series, given the fact that it was stated earlier that it was practically impossible for someone who'd tasted the power of such an artifact to turn their back on it, and given that Harry--weak, wounded, unarmed and stripped of magic--was ready to die as a human rather than live as a monster...this was a CrowningMomentOfAwesome from every possible angle.
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* Harry, after [[spoiler:donning one of the cursed wolfskin belts of the Hexenwulf and becoming (temporarily) a werewolf himself]], realizes that the BlackMagic of the artifact is seducing him into doing and becoming something that appalls him, and ''rips it off and flings it away.'' Given the overwhelming and addictive appeal of BlackMagic in this series, given the fact that it was stated earlier that it was practically impossible for someone who'd tasted the power of such an artifact to turn their back on it, and given that Harry--weak, wounded, unarmed and stripped of magic--was ready to die as a human rather than live as a monster...this was a CrowningMomentOfAwesome SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome from every possible angle.
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* Carmichael's DyingMomentOfAwesome.DyingMomentOfAwesome.
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*** And a while later he disperses a lycanthrope's (read: {{Berserker}}'s) bloodlust with the magical equivalent of a slap.
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*** And a while later he disperses a lycanthrope's (read: {{Berserker}}'s) bloodlust with the magical equivalent of a slap.slap.
* Carmichael's DyingMomentOfAwesome.
* Carmichael's DyingMomentOfAwesome.
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*** And a while later he disperds a lycanthrope's (read: {{Berserker}}'s) bloodlust with the magical equivalent of a slap.
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*** And a while later he disperds disperses a lycanthrope's (read: {{Berserker}}'s) bloodlust with the magical equivalent of a slap.
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*** And a while later he disperds a lycanthrope's (read: {{Berseker}}'s) bloodlust with the magical equivalent of a slap.
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*** And a while later he disperds a lycanthrope's (read: {{Berseker}}'s) {{Berserker}}'s) bloodlust with the magical equivalent of a slap.
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** Given what happens in Changes and Cold Days, this could easily become [[FridgeHorror Fridge Horror]] later in the series.
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** Given what happens in Changes ''Changes'' and Cold Days, ''Cold Days'', this could easily become [[FridgeHorror Fridge Horror]] FridgeHorror later in the series.
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**** Maybe he was an {{Expy}} of {{Ron Simmons}}.
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**** Maybe he was an {{Expy}} of {{Ron Simmons}}.Wrestling/RonSimmons.
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* Murphy shoots a loup-garou [read: giant psychotic werewolf] with silver bullets she made from her deceased aunt's earrings.
** Right after, Carmichael, who has been the complete skeptic who has never believed Harry to be anything other than a con man, tells another officer about Harry:
--->''"He's the guy who knows. If he comes to and says anything, '''you listen to him'''."''
** Shortly after the above, Harry manages to drive the loup-garou off with a phenomenally powerful telekinetic blast that hurls it through ''three buildings.'' As one of the witnesses so eloquently puts it:
--->''"Damn."''
*** Arguably made even funnier by the fact that the guy was basically a [[UncleTomfoolery token black guy]]; the kind who stands around and says that things are 'whack'.
* Crime lord John Marcone, when trussed up and hanging over a pit as bait for said loup-garou, uses a knife his captors didn't find, and instead of cutting all the ropes and freeing himself, cuts one rope so that Harry and Murphy can climb out of the pit and away from the werewolf--though this leaves him in considerable danger. ''And'' he banters with Harry while he does it. Oh and does it in the dark.
** He's also ''hanging upside down'' while he does this. He doesn't just cut the rope, either- he ''throws'' the knife, despite all of the mentioned circumstances, and manages to hit the rope accurately and hard enough for it to work. Harry remarks on this achievement of Marcone's in his narratives a few times in later books, because it was damn impressive.
*** Speaking of Marcone, Harry's conversation with him in his awesome definitely qualifies.
* Harry, after [[spoiler:donning one of the cursed wolfskin belts of the Hexenwulf and becoming (temporarily) a werewolf himself]], realizes that the BlackMagic of the artifact is seducing him into doing and becoming something that appalls him, and ''rips it off and flings it away.'' Given the overwhelming and addictive appeal of BlackMagic in this series, given the fact that it was stated earlier that it was practically impossible for someone who'd tasted the power of such an artifact to turn their back on it, and given that Harry--weak, wounded, unarmed and stripped of magic--was ready to die as a human rather than live as a monster...this was a CrowningMomentOfAwesome from every possible angle.
* Harry pitches himself out of a moving vehicle, downs a hella-powerful pick-me-up potion, stands up, and then ''explodes'' a pursuing pickup truck's tires, sending it careening off the road.
** While humming ''Carmen'' as an incantation.
*** And a while later he disperds a lycanthrope's (read Berseker) bloodlust with the magical equivalent of a slap.
** Right after, Carmichael, who has been the complete skeptic who has never believed Harry to be anything other than a con man, tells another officer about Harry:
--->''"He's the guy who knows. If he comes to and says anything, '''you listen to him'''."''
** Shortly after the above, Harry manages to drive the loup-garou off with a phenomenally powerful telekinetic blast that hurls it through ''three buildings.'' As one of the witnesses so eloquently puts it:
--->''"Damn."''
*** Arguably made even funnier by the fact that the guy was basically a [[UncleTomfoolery token black guy]]; the kind who stands around and says that things are 'whack'.
* Crime lord John Marcone, when trussed up and hanging over a pit as bait for said loup-garou, uses a knife his captors didn't find, and instead of cutting all the ropes and freeing himself, cuts one rope so that Harry and Murphy can climb out of the pit and away from the werewolf--though this leaves him in considerable danger. ''And'' he banters with Harry while he does it. Oh and does it in the dark.
** He's also ''hanging upside down'' while he does this. He doesn't just cut the rope, either- he ''throws'' the knife, despite all of the mentioned circumstances, and manages to hit the rope accurately and hard enough for it to work. Harry remarks on this achievement of Marcone's in his narratives a few times in later books, because it was damn impressive.
*** Speaking of Marcone, Harry's conversation with him in his awesome definitely qualifies.
* Harry, after [[spoiler:donning one of the cursed wolfskin belts of the Hexenwulf and becoming (temporarily) a werewolf himself]], realizes that the BlackMagic of the artifact is seducing him into doing and becoming something that appalls him, and ''rips it off and flings it away.'' Given the overwhelming and addictive appeal of BlackMagic in this series, given the fact that it was stated earlier that it was practically impossible for someone who'd tasted the power of such an artifact to turn their back on it, and given that Harry--weak, wounded, unarmed and stripped of magic--was ready to die as a human rather than live as a monster...this was a CrowningMomentOfAwesome from every possible angle.
* Harry pitches himself out of a moving vehicle, downs a hella-powerful pick-me-up potion, stands up, and then ''explodes'' a pursuing pickup truck's tires, sending it careening off the road.
** While humming ''Carmen'' as an incantation.
*** And a while later he disperds a lycanthrope's (read Berseker) bloodlust with the magical equivalent of a slap.
