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* When the Well Farm celebrity volunteers are led on a deliberately exhausting walk to their quarters, and are unexpectedly assigned to shared dorms...
-->'''Well Farm Guide:''' I don't know what you're getting so upset about. I mean they do it in ''Series/BigBrother'', don't they? Don't you want to share a bedroom with a few lovely ladies? You know, sex is one of the best exercises -
-->'''Grenville:''' We are not zoo animals. We are not a bunch of fucking pandas. We will not be herded into mating units for your amusement and delectation. So, one last time, are you going to afford these lovely ladies some small portion of human dignity and reallocate the rooms, or are you going to spend the next few days shitting bits of undigested clipboard?
-->'''Well Farm Guide:''' I don't know what you're getting so upset about. I mean they do it in ''Series/BigBrother'', don't they? Don't you want to share a bedroom with a few lovely ladies? You know, sex is one of the best exercises -
-->'''Grenville:''' We are not zoo animals. We are not a bunch of fucking pandas. We will not be herded into mating units for your amusement and delectation. So, one last time, are you going to afford these lovely ladies some small portion of human dignity and reallocate the rooms, or are you going to spend the next few days shitting bits of undigested clipboard?
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* When the Well Farm celebrity volunteers are led on a deliberately exhausting walk to their quarters, and are unexpectedly assigned to shared dorms...
-->'''Well Farm Guide:''' I don't know what you're getting so upset about. I mean they do it in ''Series/BigBrother'', don't they? Don't you want to sharedorms, Grenville makes a bedroom with a few lovely ladies? You know, sex is one of the best exercises -
-->'''Grenville:''' We are not zoo animals. We are not a bunch of fucking pandas. We will not be herded into mating units for your amusement[[TranquilFury stand]], and delectation. So, one last time, are you going to afford these lovely ladies some small portion of human dignity and reallocate the rooms, or are you going to spend the next few days shitting bits of undigested clipboard? is quickly appeased.
-->'''Well Farm Guide:''' I don't know what you're getting so upset about. I mean they do it in ''Series/BigBrother'', don't they? Don't you want to share
-->'''Grenville:''' We are not zoo animals. We are not a bunch of fucking pandas. We will not be herded into mating units for your amusement
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* Jemma's informative refute of scaremongering, self-contradicting health warnings; with specific nod to the erosion of epidemiology standards.
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* Jemma's informative refute of scaremongering, self-contradicting dubious, scaremongering health warnings; with specific nod to the erosion of epidemiology standards.
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* With all the scorn and sneers at his weight, Grenville's drily smouldering inner indignation is a wholesome riposte to fashionable fat-bashing.
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* With all the scorn and sneers at his weight, Grenville's drily smouldering inner indignation is a wholesome riposte to fashionable fat-bashing.
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* Grenville's helpless rage against abuse and administrative incompetence eventually pays off: erroneously told his Well Farm credits isn't able to afford his breakfast, Grenville, as later [[OffscreenMomentOfAwesome noted by a sneering tabloid piece]], douses the kitchen staff in lukewarm oatmeal, steals a tractor, and ploughs into a field an obscene word of protest. This culminates in him getting his own cookery show: ''Roberts' Rampages''.
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* Grenville's helpless rage against abuse and administrative incompetence eventually pays off: erroneously told his Well Farm credits card isn't able to afford his breakfast, Grenville, as later [[OffscreenMomentOfAwesome noted by a sneering tabloid piece]], douses the kitchen staff in lukewarm oatmeal, steals a tractor, and ploughs into a field an obscene word of protest. This culminates in him getting his own cookery show: ''Roberts' Rampages''.
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* Jeremy's humbled resolve to use his promotion to make what improvements he can to hospital conditions.
* After a revolting [[BrokenPedestal encounter]] with Big Boys Cry heartthrob Jason Black, Hayleigh, having spent the book horrified at the very thought of eating, manages to face a plate of chicken nuggets. Her mother quietly [[TearsOfJoy weeps with relief]].
* After a revolting [[BrokenPedestal encounter]] with Big Boys Cry heartthrob Jason Black, Hayleigh, having spent the book horrified at the very thought of eating, manages to face a plate of chicken nuggets. Her mother quietly [[TearsOfJoy weeps with relief]].
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* Jeremy's humbled resolve to use his promotion to make what improvements he can to hospital conditions. \n His happening upon Hayleigh's private ward, seeing her Jason Black posters, and arranging a surprise visit from the aforementioned - even if he turns out to be a crass, loutish, hedonistic narcissist - is in itself a wonderful gesture.
* After a revolting [[BrokenPedestal encounter]] with Big Boys Cryheartthrob [[CelebrityCrush heartthrob]] Jason Black, Hayleigh, having spent the book horrified at the very thought of eating, manages to face a plate of chicken nuggets. Her mother quietly [[TearsOfJoy weeps with relief]].
* After a revolting [[BrokenPedestal encounter]] with Big Boys Cry
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* After a revolting [[BrokenPedestal encounter]] with Big Boys Cry heartthrob Jason Black, Hayleigh, having spent the book horrified at the very thought of eating, manages to face a plate of chicken nuggets.
* Grenville's helpless rage against abuse and administrative incompetence eventually pays off: erroneously told his Well Farm credits isn't able to afford his breakfast, Grenville, as [[OffscreenMomentOfAwesome noted by a sneering tabloid piece]], douses the kitchen staff in lukewarm oatmeal, steals a tractor, and ploughs into a field an obscene word of protest. This culminates in him getting his own cookery show: ''Roberts' Rampages''.
* Grenville's helpless rage against abuse and administrative incompetence eventually pays off: erroneously told his Well Farm credits isn't able to afford his breakfast, Grenville, as [[OffscreenMomentOfAwesome noted by a sneering tabloid piece]], douses the kitchen staff in lukewarm oatmeal, steals a tractor, and ploughs into a field an obscene word of protest. This culminates in him getting his own cookery show: ''Roberts' Rampages''.
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* After a revolting [[BrokenPedestal encounter]] with Big Boys Cry heartthrob Jason Black, Hayleigh, having spent the book horrified at the very thought of eating, manages to face a plate of chicken nuggets. \n Her mother quietly [[TearsOfJoy weeps with relief]].
* Grenville's helpless rage against abuse and administrative incompetence eventually pays off: erroneously told his Well Farm credits isn't able to afford his breakfast, Grenville, as later [[OffscreenMomentOfAwesome noted by a sneering tabloid piece]], douses the kitchen staff in lukewarm oatmeal, steals a tractor, and ploughs into a field an obscene word of protest. This culminates in him getting his own cookery show: ''Roberts' Rampages''.
* Grenville's helpless rage against abuse and administrative incompetence eventually pays off: erroneously told his Well Farm credits isn't able to afford his breakfast, Grenville, as later [[OffscreenMomentOfAwesome noted by a sneering tabloid piece]], douses the kitchen staff in lukewarm oatmeal, steals a tractor, and ploughs into a field an obscene word of protest. This culminates in him getting his own cookery show: ''Roberts' Rampages''.
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-->'''Grenville:''' We are not zoo animals. We are not a bunch of fucking pandas. We will not be herded into mating units for your amusement and delectation. So, one last time, are you going to afford these "lovely ladies" some small portion of human dignity and reallocate the rooms, or are you going to spend the next few days shitting bits of undigested clipboard?
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-->'''Grenville:''' We are not zoo animals. We are not a bunch of fucking pandas. We will not be herded into mating units for your amusement and delectation. So, one last time, are you going to afford these "lovely ladies" lovely ladies some small portion of human dignity and reallocate the rooms, or are you going to spend the next few days shitting bits of undigested clipboard?
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* Narration from the perspective of a heavily overweight man, which dares to suggest his weight might not stem from bad habit, and takes a dry, heartfelt stand against fat-bashing, is most definitely Awesome.
* The book's informative riposte to scaremongering, self-contradicting health warnings.
* The book's informative riposte to scaremongering, self-contradicting health warnings.
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*Narration from With all the perspective of a heavily overweight man, which dares to suggest scorn and sneers at his weight, Grenville's drily smouldering inner indignation is a wholesome riposte to fashionable fat-bashing.
* Jemma's informative refute of scaremongering, self-contradicting health warnings; with specific nod to the erosion of epidemiology standards.
* Observations that excess weightmight not stem from bad habit, can actually improve life expectancy, and takes a dry, heartfelt stand against fat-bashing, is most definitely Awesome.that cholesterol can't actually enter the bloodstream.
*The book's informative riposte When the Well Farm celebrity volunteers are led on a deliberately exhausting walk to scaremongering, self-contradicting health warnings.their quarters, and are unexpectedly assigned to shared dorms...
-->'''Well Farm Guide:''' I don't know what you're getting so upset about. I mean they do it in ''Series/BigBrother'', don't they? Don't you want to share a bedroom with a few lovely ladies? You know, sex is one of the best exercises -
-->'''Grenville:''' We are not zoo animals. We are not a bunch of fucking pandas. We will not be herded into mating units for your amusement and delectation. So, one last time, are you going to afford these "lovely ladies" some small portion of human dignity and reallocate the rooms, or are you going to spend the next few days shitting bits of undigested clipboard?
* Jeremy's humbled resolve to use his promotion to make what improvements he can to hospital conditions.
* After a revolting [[BrokenPedestal encounter]] with Big Boys Cry heartthrob Jason Black, Hayleigh, having spent the book horrified at the very thought of eating, manages to face a plate of chicken nuggets.
* Grenville's helpless rage against abuse and administrative incompetence eventually pays off: erroneously told his Well Farm credits isn't able to afford his breakfast, Grenville, as [[OffscreenMomentOfAwesome noted by a sneering tabloid piece]], douses the kitchen staff in lukewarm oatmeal, steals a tractor, and ploughs into a field an obscene word of protest. This culminates in him getting his own cookery show: ''Roberts' Rampages''.
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* Jemma's informative refute of scaremongering, self-contradicting health warnings; with specific nod to the erosion of epidemiology standards.
* Observations that excess weight
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-->'''Well Farm Guide:''' I don't know what you're getting so upset about. I mean they do it in ''Series/BigBrother'', don't they? Don't you want to share a bedroom with a few lovely ladies? You know, sex is one of the best exercises -
-->'''Grenville:''' We are not zoo animals. We are not a bunch of fucking pandas. We will not be herded into mating units for your amusement and delectation. So, one last time, are you going to afford these "lovely ladies" some small portion of human dignity and reallocate the rooms, or are you going to spend the next few days shitting bits of undigested clipboard?
* Jeremy's humbled resolve to use his promotion to make what improvements he can to hospital conditions.
* After a revolting [[BrokenPedestal encounter]] with Big Boys Cry heartthrob Jason Black, Hayleigh, having spent the book horrified at the very thought of eating, manages to face a plate of chicken nuggets.
* Grenville's helpless rage against abuse and administrative incompetence eventually pays off: erroneously told his Well Farm credits isn't able to afford his breakfast, Grenville, as [[OffscreenMomentOfAwesome noted by a sneering tabloid piece]], douses the kitchen staff in lukewarm oatmeal, steals a tractor, and ploughs into a field an obscene word of protest. This culminates in him getting his own cookery show: ''Roberts' Rampages''.
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* Narration from the perspective of a heavily overweight man, which dares to suggest his weight might not stem from bad habit, and takes a stand against fat-bashing, is most definitely Sugarwiki/{{Awesome}}.Awesome.
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* The book's informative riposte to scaremongering, self-contradicting health warnings.