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* ''ALL'' of [[strike:Chapter]] Episode 15 of ''FanFic/PowerRangersGPX''.

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* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3415504/1/Prodigy prodigy]], Holy crap. This story is actually pretty damn insane, and not just for the fact that it's a crossover between, ahem: Harry Potter, Crime Scene Investigation, House MD, Grey's Anatomy, Numb3rs, Psych, Law and Order:Special Victims Unit, Naval Criminal Investigative Services, and possibly even more. No, I'm not kidding. Nearly the entire damn story (Which is 140,841 words, if I may add.) is so damn awesome. Words don't describe it, while it does have the thin base of a lot of HP AU's (Harry Potter's twin is named BWL, Harry is ignored.) If runs away with it and crashes that idea into a building, then lights the building. This is easily in the Crowning Moments Of Funny as well.



* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3415504/1/Prodigy prodigy]], Holy crap. This story is actually pretty damn insane, and not just for the fact that it's a crossover between, ahem: Harry Potter, Crime Scene Investigation, House MD, Grey's Anatomy, Numb3rs, Psych, Law and Order:Special Victims Unit, Naval Criminal Investigative Services, and possibly even more. No, I'm not kidding. Nearly the entire damn story (Which is 140,841 words, if I may add.) is so damn awesome. Words don't describe it, while it does have the thin base of a lot of HP AU's (Harry Potter's twin is named BWL, Harry is ignored.) If runs away with it and crashes that idea into a building, then lights the building. This is easily in the Crowning Moments Of Funny as well.


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* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3415504/1/Prodigy prodigy]], Holy crap. This story is actually pretty damn insane, and not just for the fact that it's a crossover between, ahem: Harry Potter, Crime Scene Investigation, House MD, Grey's Anatomy, Numb3rs, Psych, Law and Order:Special Victims Unit, Naval Criminal Investigative Services, and possibly even more. No, I'm not kidding. Nearly the entire damn story (Which is 140,841 words, if I may add.) is so damn awesome. Words don't describe it, while it does have the thin base of a lot of HP AU's (Harry Potter's twin is named BWL, Harry is ignored.) If runs away with it and crashes that idea into a building, then lights the building. This is easily in the Crowning Moments Of Funny as well.



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*[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3415504/1/Prodigy prodigy]], Holy crap. This story is actually pretty damn insane, and not just for the fact that it's a crossover between, ahem: Harry Potter, Crime Scene Investigation, House MD, Grey's Anatomy, Numb3rs, Psych, Law and Order:Special Victims Unit, Naval Criminal Investigative Services, and possibly even more. No, I'm not kidding. Nearly the entire damn story (Which is 140,841 words, if I may add.) is so damn awesome. Words don't describe it, while it does have the thin base of a lot of HP AU's (Harry Potter's twin is named BWL, Harry is ignored.) If runs away with it and crashes that idea into a building, then lights the building. This is easily in the Crowning Moments Of Funny as well.

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* ''ALL'' of [[strike:Chapter]] Episode 15 of ''TroperWorks/PowerRangersGPX''.

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* From the recently started fanfic ''[[http://bbs.stardestroyer.net/viewtopic.php?f=9&t=132786 Supernatural Taisen]]'' [[StargateSG1 Anubis]] is bringing his fleet to Earth to conquer it, and makes his ultimatum to the President of the United States. Unfortunately for him, this fic is ''SuperRobotWars'' expanded beyond HumongousMecha, and the sitting Commander-in-Chief is none other than ''[[{{Gargoyles}} David Xanatos]]'':
-->'''Anubis''': ?I am Anubis,?
-->'''Xanatos''' ?Sure you are.?
-->'''Anubis''': ?Are you the leader of this world??
-->'''Xanatos''': ?For all intents and purposes, let us talk as though I were.?
-->'''Anubis''': ?Your leadership has come to an end. Bow before your God, and I may grant you leniency.?
-->'''Xanatos''' ''(mentally removing plan b from consideration)'': ?I?m a self-made billionaire who now leads the most powerful nation on the planet. Do you honestly think I?d accept handouts or being ranked ''second'' best??
-->'''Anubis''': ?If you possessed weapons matching mine, you would have used them.?
-->'''Xanatos''': ?Despite our image, we know the meaning of restraint and patience.?
-->'''Anubis''': ?You will bring destruction upon yourselves.?
-->'''Xanatos''': ?In the last hundred years, we?ve been faced with 30 invasions like yours. What makes you think that yours will fare any differently from theirs??

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* From the recently started fanfic ''[[http://bbs.stardestroyer.net/viewtopic.php?f=9&t=132786 Supernatural Taisen]]'' ''Fanfic/SupernaturalTaisen'': [[StargateSG1 Anubis]] is bringing his fleet to Earth to conquer it, and makes his ultimatum to the President of the United States. Unfortunately for him, this fic is ''SuperRobotWars'' expanded beyond HumongousMecha, and the sitting Commander-in-Chief is none other than ''[[{{Gargoyles}} David Xanatos]]'':
-->'''Anubis''': ?I "I am Anubis,?
Anubis,"
-->'''Xanatos''' ?Sure "Sure you are.?
-->'''Anubis''': ?Are "Are you the leader of this world??
-->'''Xanatos''': ?For "For all intents and purposes, let us talk as though I were.?
-->'''Anubis''': ?Your "Your leadership has come to an end. Bow before your God, and I may grant you leniency.?
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-->'''Xanatos''' ''(mentally removing [[XanatosGambit plan b b]] from consideration)'': ?I?m "I'm a self-made billionaire who now leads the most powerful nation on the planet. Do you honestly think I?d I'd accept handouts or being ranked ''second'' best??
best??"
-->'''Anubis''': ?If "If you possessed weapons matching mine, you would have used them.?
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-->'''Xanatos''': ?Despite "Despite our image, we know the meaning of restraint and patience.?
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-->'''Anubis''': ?You "You will bring destruction upon yourselves.?
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-->'''Xanatos''': ?In "In the last hundred years, we?ve been faced with 30 invasions like yours. What makes you think that yours will fare any differently from theirs??



-->'''Xanatos''': ?Still, not as [[LargeHam large of a ham]] as Sevarius.?

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-->'''Xanatos''': ?Still, "Still, not as [[LargeHam large of a ham]] as Sevarius.?"
** After that, the Battle of the Antarctic begins, much like the series. Except SG-1 also has Nanoha Takamachi and WonderWoman in her invisible Jet (a [[StargateAtlantis Puddle Jumper]]. When the ''Prometheus'' shows up, it brings MazingerZ, GreatMazinger, GetterRobo G, and [[{{Gigantor}} Tetsujin-28]] along for the ride. With {{Gamera}} bringing up the rear. When Anubis' forces start bombarding the battlefield from orbit, Jack unleashes the base's ultimate weapon: Not the swarm of drones, but the ''{{RahXephon}}''.
** The ''Prometheus'', ''[[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Ashura]]'', and ''Gotengo'' hold the line against 300 [[{{Kaiju}} Dinozaur]]. Only eight reach Earth, and three of those are missing their heads.
** {{Supergirl}}, a.k.a. [[ProjectAKO Eiko Megami]] makes a grand entrance in the battle in Chicago, [[{{DieBuster}} Nono]]-style!
*** Then Nanoha ends the battle with the Mother Of All Starlight Breakers.
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** [[spoiler: It is revealed Arcade managed to kill Doom in one of his traps, thus imitating him for a long period of time, and finally getting most heroes depowered and killed when he used Doom's final plan. When Arcade finally dies, Doom reveals he is overlord of HELL ITSELF and begins a millenia of vengeful torture, finishing on the line "I! AM! DOOM!"]].
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* There's the ''MassEffect'' SelfInsert ''Mass Vexations'', during which AuthorAvatar Art finds himself having to drive the Mako after Shepard suffers a hand injury. Aside from turning that entire section into a not-too-subtle BackToTheFuture reference, it's a moment of awesome on its own given that Art successfully drives Shepard and the crew to the Conduit. What makes it even better is that it's the cap of an entire fic's worth of character development for Art; he's gone from someone who's never fired a firearm to a very good soldier by Alliance standards.

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* There's the ''MassEffect'' SelfInsert ''Mass Vexations'', ''FanFic/MassVexations'', during which AuthorAvatar Art finds himself having to drive the Mako after Shepard suffers a hand injury. Aside from turning that entire section into a not-too-subtle BackToTheFuture reference, it's a moment of awesome on its own given that Art successfully drives Shepard and the crew to the Conduit. What makes it even better is that it's the cap of an entire fic's worth of character development for Art; he's gone from someone who's never fired a firearm to a very good soldier by Alliance standards.
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* ''[[Awesome/{{Ptitle0028gzjm}} Kyon: Big Damn Hero]]''
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* When [[TroperWorks/UltimateSleepwalker Sleepwalker]] is being tried by the Silent Ones, the lords and rulers of his alien race, for his many sins, they sentence him to execution. Executing Sleepwalker will punish the alien for his crimes, while also freeing Rick Sheridan from their bond. Their decision is overturned by Rick himself, who adamantly refuses to let them execute Sleepwalker. When he reminds the Silent Ones of all the good Sleepwalker has done in the human world, they are forced to reconsider their decision and eventually rescind their verdict. Not bad for an ordinary human going up against beings of almost godlike power.

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* When the Silent Ones, the lords of [[TroperWorks/UltimateSleepwalker Sleepwalker]] is being tried by the Silent Ones, the lords and rulers of his alien Sleepwalker]]'s race, for his many sins, they sentence are ready to execute him to execution. Executing Sleepwalker will punish the alien for his crimes, while also freeing Sleepy's human host Rick Sheridan from their bond. Their decision is overturned by Rick himself, who adamantly intervenes and refuses to let them execute Sleepwalker. When he reminds the it happen:
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Silent Ones of all Ones''': You are advised to stand aside, human.
-->'''Rick''': And what if I don't? Can’t do much to me in my own mind, can you? That’d really screw up
the good tenets of the Sleepwalker has done in the human world, they are forced to reconsider their decision and eventually rescind their verdict. Not bad for an ordinary human race, wouldn’t it?
-->'''Sleepwalker''': Rick, you must not-
-->'''Rick''': No! Killing Terren’sk isn’t
going up to bring back Mom and Dad! Killing Terren’sk isn’t going to stop Psyko if he ever comes back! Killing Terren’sk isn’t going to protect Julia from Lightmaster, if he ever comes back! Killing Terren’sk won’t do a damn thing for Sv’ara, or any of the other Sleepwalkers!
-->'''The Silent Ones''': Explain yourself, human.
-->'''Rick''': It happened, alright? My fusion with Terren’sk, Mom and Dad’s deaths, all of it! It happened, and I wish to God it hadn’t, but it did! There’s nothing that’ll change it, and it’s a part of who I am now. Besides, who’s to say there isn’t a way to break the bond? Kill Terren’sk, and you lose a warrior, you lose someone who’s put his life on the line
against beings Cobweb time and again, you lose someone who’s saved who knows how many lives, both in the Mindscape and on Earth! Besides, you think of almost godlike power.
all the criminals he’s iced, they’re not going away on their own! ''(To Sleepwalker)'' Until you can return home, we still need you.
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* When [[TroperWorks/UltimateSleepwalker Sleepwalker]] is being tried by the Silent Ones, the lords and rulers of his alien race, for his many sins, they sentence him to execution. Executing Sleepwalker will punish the alien for his crimes, while also freeing Rick Sheridan from their bond. Their decision is overturned by Rick himself, who adamantly refuses to let them execute Sleepwalker. When he reminds the Silent Ones of all the good Sleepwalker has done in the human world, they are forced to reconsider their decision and eventually rescind their verdict. Not bad for an ordinary human going up against beings of almost godlike power.
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* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6266421/1/FATE_Holy_Grail_War_of_2814 FATE/Holy Grail War of 2814]], an offshoot story of FanFic/TakamichiNanohaOf2814, has Archer fighting the Wolkeritter by himself. Through a combination of Tracing, emotional manipulation based on his memories, and Unlimited Blade Works, he starts creating [[GreenLantern power rings]]. He starts with enraging the Wolkenritter by threatening Hayate, using their rage to make a Red ring (and making a giant angry construct of Rin), drawing on their love for her to make a Violet ring, and using Signum's will, Vita's hope, and Zafira's compassion to make Green, Blue, and Indigo. Despite bleeding from everywhere from the strain, he blasts them all with a Ring-Construct [[{{Nanoha}} Starlight Breaker]] big enough to be seen from orbit and uses their fear to make a Yellow ring.

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* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6266421/1/FATE_Holy_Grail_War_of_2814 FATE/Holy Grail War of 2814]], an offshoot story of FanFic/TakamichiNanohaOf2814, FanFic/TakamachiNanohaOf2814, has Archer fighting the Wolkeritter by himself. Through a combination of Tracing, emotional manipulation based on his memories, and Unlimited Blade Works, he starts creating [[GreenLantern power rings]]. He starts with enraging the Wolkenritter by threatening Hayate, using their rage to make a Red ring (and making a giant angry construct of Rin), drawing on their love for her to make a Violet ring, and using Signum's will, Vita's hope, and Zafira's compassion to make Green, Blue, and Indigo. Despite bleeding from everywhere from the strain, he blasts them all with a Ring-Construct [[{{Nanoha}} Starlight Breaker]] big enough to be seen from orbit and uses their fear to make a Yellow ring.

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* ''Awesome/SailorMoonZ''



* While it is a bit of MarySueAlwaysTriumphs, go to [[http://www.thekeep.org/~wombat/Stories/Z/Ep25.txt this link]], about a quarter of the way down, and tell me that what [[SailorMoon Osaka Naru]] does to the Zodiac isn't awesome.
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* This troper knows that there are numerous FanFic out there that strive to ''create'' Crowning Moments of Awesome for canon characters. That said, if you don't gain a profound sense of respect and awe for Aziraphale after reading the ''GoodOmens'' fanfic ''[[http://community.livejournal.com/lower_tadfield/428364.html Be Ye Therefore Merciful]]'', you aren't entirely human. Standing between Death and your 6000-year-old demon friend, preventing the first from getting to the latter by sheer willpower alone? And then persuading Death to overlook your friend because of the giant bureaucratic headache you'll cause for him if he decides to take you first or charge you with protecting the Enemy? ''That's'' the ultimatest sign of true friendship (love?) if there ever was one.

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* This troper knows that there are numerous FanFic out there that strive to ''create'' Crowning Moments of Awesome for canon characters. That said, if If you don't gain a profound sense of respect and awe for Aziraphale after reading the ''GoodOmens'' fanfic ''[[http://community.livejournal.com/lower_tadfield/428364.html Be Ye Therefore Merciful]]'', you aren't entirely human. Standing between Death and your 6000-year-old demon friend, preventing the first from getting to the latter by sheer willpower alone? And then persuading Death to overlook your friend because of the giant bureaucratic headache you'll cause for him if he decides to take you first or charge you with protecting the Enemy? ''That's'' the ultimatest sign of true friendship (love?) if there ever was one.



* ShinjiAndWarhammer40k. I can think of one meta one for the author, namely turning [[NeonGenesisEvangelion Shinji Ikari]] from a useless ButtMonkey into a BadassBookworm MagnificentBastard who honestly seems like a combination of [[{{Discworld}} Carrot Ironfoundersson]], [[TengenToppaGurrenLagann Kamina]], [[GGundam Domon Kasshu]], [[{{Dune}} Paul Atreides]], and [[TheBible Jesus]].
** In the fic itself, {{Badass}} Shinji gets one when he consecrates EVA-01 as his personal Titan.

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* ShinjiAndWarhammer40k. I can think ''ShinjiAndWarhammer40k'' is perhaps the fanfiction king of this trope, with every single chapter containing at least one meta one for the author, namely turning [[NeonGenesisEvangelion and every single character getting their own moments to shine. Shinji? Walking awesome factory. Rei? Never, ever cross her, ever. Asuka? Three words: [[spoiler:'''GIGA! DRILL! BREEEAAAKEEEERR!''']] Kaworu? Everything that Shinji Ikari]] is, but on the opposing side. Misato, Ritsuko, Gendo? There's a reason they are still in charge after everything going FUBAR on a constant basis. Maya becomes a [[AmazonBrigade Sister of Battle]]. Mana becomes a Commisar with her own personal Dreadnought. Hikari becomes an Inquisitor, with Stormtrooper Suzuhara as her retainer. There is even the original characters, including-but-not-limited-to a military genius that almost led China to world domination, and a [[BadassNormal regular solider]] with collossal titanium balls that has survived a ZombieApocalypse and being absorbed by an EldritchAbomination and is far from finished. Pick a useless ButtMonkey into character, pick a BadassBookworm MagnificentBastard who honestly seems like chapter, pick a combination of [[{{Discworld}} Carrot Ironfoundersson]], [[TengenToppaGurrenLagann Kamina]], [[GGundam Domon Kasshu]], [[{{Dune}} Paul Atreides]], ''page'', and [[TheBible Jesus]].
this trope is almost certainly there. Enjoy.
** In the fic itself, {{Badass}} For a specific example, Shinji gets one when he consecrates EVA-01 as his personal Titan.



** The author also has this little habit of [[BeyondTheImpossible topping himself]]. ''[[HolyShitQuotient Over and over and over again]]''. In the latest chapter, Shinji [[spoiler:had a BigDamnHeroes moment, where he rescues some PDF soldiers that were going to be killed by angel-made zombies, by charging in with Leman Russ tanks, and then deploying what amounts to ''[[SuperSoldier Space Marine]] [[PoweredArmor Terminators]]''. And then used his PsychicPowers to just vaporise an enemy unit that got a ''little'' too close to him]]. ItMakesSenseInContext.

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** The author also has this little habit of [[BeyondTheImpossible topping himself]]. ''[[HolyShitQuotient Over and over and over again]]''. In the latest chapter, Shinji [[spoiler:had a BigDamnHeroes moment, where he rescues some PDF soldiers that were going to be killed by angel-made zombies, by charging in with Leman Russ tanks, and then deploying what amounts to ''[[SuperSoldier Space Marine]] [[PoweredArmor Terminators]]''. And then used his PsychicPowers to just vaporise an enemy unit that got a ''little'' too close to him]]. ItMakesSenseInContext.



** In order to provide some context and clarification as to exactly ''how'' awesome this story is, the very first Crowning Moment of Awesome, the one that all successive Awesome Moments exceed by increasing magnitudes, is when eight-year-old Shinji has his Warboss figurine stolen by three larger boys, and he proceeds to ''beat the living crap out of them''. The boys are so impressed by his sheer balls that from then on they refer to him only as "Da' Boss".
* [[GentlemensDame883 This Troper]] sees Charles Belphin's ''Shinji and Warhammer 40k'' and raises you Academia Nut's ''FanFic/ThousandShinji''!

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** In order to provide some context and clarification as to exactly ''how'' awesome this story is, the very first Crowning Moment of Awesome, the one that all successive Awesome Moments exceed by increasing magnitudes, is when eight-year-old Shinji has his Warboss figurine stolen by three larger boys, and he proceeds to attempt to ''beat the living crap out of them''.them'', and ''wins'', despite being nothing but a big bruise by the end of it. The boys are so impressed by his sheer balls that from then on they refer to him only as "Da' Boss".
* [[GentlemensDame883 This Troper]] Troper sees Charles Belphin's ''Shinji and Warhammer 40k'' and raises you Academia Nut's ''FanFic/ThousandShinji''!



** The Ghost Riders. It seems [[AhMyGoddess Skuld]] [[TookALevelInBadass took]] ''[[TookALevelInBadass 10]]'' [[TookALevelInBadass levels in badass]].

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** The Ghost Riders. It seems [[AhMyGoddess Skuld]] [[TookALevelInBadass took]] ''[[TookALevelInBadass 10]]'' took ''10'' [[TookALevelInBadass levels in badass]].



-->'''Rei''': [[spoiler:I'm unarmed. I have no armor, no defenses. If you want DJ and Asuka dead, then kill me.]]

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-->'''Rei''': --->'''Rei''': [[spoiler:I'm unarmed. I have no armor, no defenses. If you want DJ and Asuka dead, then kill me.]]



* When Asuka comes back to Tokyo-3 in [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5528503/1/NGE_Walking_in_the_Shadow_of_Dreams NGE: Walking in the Shadow of Dreams]], she moves into the apartment next door to Shinji's. While unpacking, Rei comes by to 'set things straight' with her, though it's mostly to pick a fight(It makes sense in context). Eventually it devolves into a cat fight, which is halted suddenly by Misato taseing them both, which naturally is complete with the BondOneLiner...
--> ?Crap like this is why I don?t let pilots live with me anymore.?

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* When Asuka comes back to Tokyo-3 in [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5528503/1/NGE_Walking_in_the_Shadow_of_Dreams NGE: Walking in the Shadow of Dreams]], she moves into the apartment next door to Shinji's. While unpacking, Rei comes by to 'set things straight' with her, though it's mostly to pick a fight(It fight (It makes sense in context). Eventually it devolves into a cat fight, which is halted suddenly by Misato taseing them both, which naturally is complete with the BondOneLiner...
--> ?Crap -->"Crap like this is why I don?t don't let pilots live with me anymore.?anymore?"



** Really, the series needs its own [[CrowningMoment/NobodyDies list]].



* [[DoctorWho The Doctor]] gets one in the DoctorWho / {{Firefly}} cross-over [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3486070/1/A_Life_Less_Extraordinary A Life Less Extraordinary´]] where he is pushed one inch too far:
---> [[spoiler: ?Yes, I think war is a fool?s game. Yes, I believe life -? all life -? is precious. But tell me something, Vharaj -? did you ever listen to my ''enemies''' tales of me? If you did, it?s obvious you weren?t paying attention. The Daleks do not have emotion, Vharaj. They don?t know fear. But do you know what they called me? ''Ka Faraq Gatri''. It means 'Destroyer of Worlds'. I am the Bringer of Darkness, Vharaj. The Oncoming Storm. I?ve watched worlds and galaxies fall, and rise, and fall again. I fought the Vampires at the dawn of Creation, and I may yet witness the end of the Universe. I brought about the destruction of my own race, the deaths of my children, my grandchildren, my siblings, my friends, all in the name of peace, to save this Universe. So you tell me, Vharaj: ''what do you think I am capable of?''?]]

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* [[DoctorWho The Doctor]] gets one in the DoctorWho / {{Firefly}} ''DoctorWho''/''{{Firefly}}'' cross-over [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3486070/1/A_Life_Less_Extraordinary A Life Less Extraordinary´]] where he is pushed one inch too far:
---> [[spoiler: ?Yes, --> [[spoiler:"Yes, I think war is a fool?s fool's game. Yes, I believe life -? - all life -? - is precious. But tell me something, Vharaj -? - did you ever listen to my ''enemies''' tales of me? If you did, it?s it's obvious you weren?t weren't paying attention. The Daleks do not have emotion, Vharaj. They don?t know fear. But do you know what they called me? ''Ka Faraq Gatri''. It means 'Destroyer of Worlds'. I am the Bringer of Darkness, Vharaj. The Oncoming Storm. I?ve I've watched worlds and galaxies fall, and rise, and fall again. I fought the Vampires at the dawn of Creation, and I may yet witness the end of the Universe. I brought about the destruction of my own race, the deaths of my children, my grandchildren, my siblings, my friends, all in the name of peace, to save this Universe. So you tell me, Vharaj: ''what do you think I am capable of?''?]]



-->'''Hannah''': But ''why''? Why risk your life for us?
-->'''Krum''': You are Hufflepuff, yes? Like Cedric?
-->'''Hannah''': Yes.
-->'''Krum''': Then you know vy.

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-->'''Hannah''': --->'''Hannah''': But ''why''? Why risk your life for us?
-->'''Krum''': --->'''Krum''': You are Hufflepuff, yes? Like Cedric?
-->'''Hannah''': --->'''Hannah''': Yes.
-->'''Krum''': --->'''Krum''': Then you know vy.



* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3925241/ The Ultimate Ace]] just for the fact that it's ''Ace Combat'', written RealLife-style ([[LampshadeHanging lampshading]] the difference thus: Mobius One "hadn?t been responsible for the final destruction of Stonehenge though. That was a common misconception. Nothing short of a B-1 or B-2 had that much firepower"), and it actually ''works''.

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* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3925241/ The Ultimate Ace]] just for the fact that it's ''Ace Combat'', written RealLife-style ([[LampshadeHanging lampshading]] the difference thus: Mobius One "hadn?t "hadn't been responsible for the final destruction of Stonehenge though. That was a common misconception. Nothing short of a B-1 or B-2 had that much firepower"), and it actually ''works''.



* [[{{Ronnie}} This troper]] would like to think [[DannyPhantom Sam Manson's]] disembodied consciousness leading Charles Xavier and the X-Men to almost certain doom against an army of various [[FaceHeelTurn Dannys-turned-evil]] led by an [[RealityWarper omnipotent]] [[OmnicidalManiac Dark Danny]], and [[DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu proceeding to win anyways]], and then return Danny from death by [[PowerOfLove sheer force of love]] counts, no matter [[OldShame how hideous his writing was at the time.]]
** Uh, can we have a link, please?
*** [[{{FanFic/WhenWorldsCollide}} So you have wished it, so it shall be.]] Second in the series.

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* [[{{Ronnie}} [[{{FanFic/WhenWorldsCollide}} This troper]] troper would like to think think]] [[DannyPhantom Sam Manson's]] disembodied consciousness leading Charles Xavier and the X-Men XMen to almost certain doom against an army of various [[FaceHeelTurn Dannys-turned-evil]] led by an [[RealityWarper omnipotent]] [[OmnicidalManiac Dark Danny]], and [[DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu proceeding to win anyways]], and then return Danny from death by [[PowerOfLove sheer force of love]] counts, no matter [[OldShame how hideous his writing was at the time.]]
** Uh, can we have a link, please?
*** [[{{FanFic/WhenWorldsCollide}} So you have wished it, so it shall be.]] Second in the series.
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--->'''Hinata:''' That's ''[[PrecisionFStrike bullshit!]]'' * sudden horrified pause, claps both hands over her mouth*

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* No one's mentioned "Black Flames Dance in the Wind: Rise of Naruto" by Devilkeys Writing?http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3665921/1/Black_Flames_Dance_In_The_Wind_Rise_of_Naruto. The whole story is filled with CrowningMomentsOfAwesome and CrowningMomentsOfFunny.
** Basically, all of Chapter 25 is a CrowningMomentOfAwesome. Naruto [[spoiler: fights his mother and destroys several city blocks in the process while all available Chuunin and Jounin are maintaining a barrier so the two don't destroy the entire village.]]
* "[[Fanfic/RokuNaruto Roku Naruto]]" hasn't been mentioned either yet? [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4176756/1/Roku_Naruto Roku Naruto]]
** Chapter 13 gets a Crowning moment of awesome for the conclusion of the first fight against Zabuza. [[spoiler: Naruto and his clones threw several giant kunai filled with 900 kilos of rubhidium into the lake Zabuza is standing on. Zabuza later swore never to fight Naruto over water.]]

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\n* No one's mentioned "Black Flames Dance in the Wind: Rise of Naruto" by Devilkeys Writing?http://www."[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3665921/1/Black_Flames_Dance_In_The_Wind_Rise_of_Naruto. net/s/3665921/1/Black_Flames_Dance_In_The_Wind_Rise_of_Naruto Black Flames Dance in the Wind: Rise of Naruto]]". The whole story is filled with CrowningMomentsOfAwesome Crowning Moments Of Awesome and CrowningMomentsOfFunny.
Crowning Moments Of Funny.
** Basically, all of Chapter 25 is a CrowningMomentOfAwesome. Naruto [[spoiler: fights [[spoiler:fights his mother and destroys several city blocks in the process while all available Chuunin and Jounin are maintaining a barrier so the two don't destroy the entire village.]]
* "[[Fanfic/RokuNaruto Roku Naruto]]" hasn't been mentioned either yet? [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4176756/1/Roku_Naruto Roku Naruto]]
**
Naruto]]". Chapter 13 gets a Crowning moment of awesome for the conclusion of the first fight against Zabuza. [[spoiler: Naruto and his clones threw several giant kunai filled with 900 kilos of rubhidium into the lake Zabuza is standing on. Zabuza later swore never to fight Naruto over water.]]



* Edward Elric gets one in ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2929916/1/Invert Invert]]'', a ''Main/FullmetalAlchemist''[=/=]''Main/HarryPotter'' crossover by Marz1. Bound by magic and being mindraped by Voldemort, Ed breaks Voldemort's concentration by calling up an image of the Gate of Truth, causing it to manifest for a few moments before fading out. In the distraction, Ed breaks Voldemort's grip on him and ''kicks him in the balls'' for good measure.
* [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanficRecs/HarryPotter Sluagh]], the sequel to the above mentioned "Dumbledore's Army..." has more Crowning Moments of Awesome than the original Harry Potter series combined. Seamus Finnigan, in particular, has become a serious [[Main/AntiHero Anti-Hero]], as well as [[TookALevelInBadass Taken A Level In Badass]] to a whole new degree. For anyone who was disappointed by the Big Bad of the original series being taken down with an Expelliarmus, [[spoiler: this time the - much nastier, IMHO - bad is taken out in a last-ditch wager where the fate of the world rests on a knife fight to the death. "You want to live, I just want you to die." Made of Win.]]

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* Edward Elric gets one in ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2929916/1/Invert Invert]]'', a ''Main/FullmetalAlchemist''[=/=]''Main/HarryPotter'' crossover by Marz1.''FullmetalAlchemist''[=/=]''HarryPotter'' crossover. Bound by magic and being mindraped by Voldemort, Ed breaks Voldemort's concentration by calling up an image of the Gate of Truth, causing it to manifest for a few moments before fading out. In the distraction, Ed breaks Voldemort's grip on him and ''kicks him in the balls'' for good measure.
* [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanficRecs/HarryPotter [[FanficRecs/HarryPotter Sluagh]], the sequel to the above mentioned "Dumbledore's Army..." has more Crowning Moments of Awesome than the original Harry Potter series combined. Seamus Finnigan, in particular, has become a serious [[Main/AntiHero Anti-Hero]], as well as [[TookALevelInBadass Taken A Level In Badass]] to a whole new degree. For anyone who was disappointed by the Big Bad of the original series being taken down with an Expelliarmus, [[spoiler: this time the - much nastier, IMHO - bad is taken out in a last-ditch wager where the fate of the world rests on a knife fight to the death. "You want to live, I just want you to die." Made of Win.]]



* In ''{{Daria}}'' fanfic, two OC's are living, breathing CMOA's every time they show their faces! ''Jim Vitale'' (especially when written by Scissors MacGillicutty) and ''Black Majesty'' (when written by Roentgen). The pinnacle of the BigBad, both are superb examples of the ManipulativeBastard who lives by the XanatosGambit - and while Black Majesty is probably LikeABadassOutOfHell, Vitale is a fusion of BunnyEarsLawyer and BadassNormal with his own CatchPhrases (anyone who he calls 'asshat' is in for a world of 'ow', people he calls 'sport' should watch their backs, and as he says, 'the law is just what lawyers do with it'), his own version of the KubrickStare, a CompellingVoice and takes any woman in sight that he wants - because AllGirlsWantBadBoys, and he's a amped-up version of DracoInLeatherPants.

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* In ''{{Daria}}'' fanfic, two OC's are living, breathing CMOA's every time they show their faces! ''Jim Vitale'' (especially when written by Scissors MacGillicutty) [=MacGillicutty=]) and ''Black Majesty'' (when written by Roentgen). The pinnacle of the BigBad, both are superb examples of the ManipulativeBastard who lives by the XanatosGambit - and while Black Majesty is probably LikeABadassOutOfHell, Vitale is a fusion of BunnyEarsLawyer and BadassNormal with his own CatchPhrases (anyone who he calls 'asshat' is in for a world of 'ow', people he calls 'sport' should watch their backs, and as he says, 'the law is just what lawyers do with it'), his own version of the KubrickStare, a CompellingVoice and takes any woman in sight that he wants - because AllGirlsWantBadBoys, and he's a amped-up version of DracoInLeatherPants.



* Post's gigantic Teen Titans fic, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4778437/1/These_Black_Eyes_A_Re_Post_Ing These Black Eyes]] is pretty much comprised of CMOA but my favorite is his OC Noir, who has at this point been [[spoiler: kicked out of the Titans after Slade framed him as his Third Apprentice and had been marked with a microchip which Slade could activate and easily kill him at any time, going in to save the Titan's asses. When Slade tries to activate the chip, Noir shows how he got rid of it: by slicing off his own goddamn arm. He then proceesed to kill the bastard and save his friends. Hell Yeah.]] http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4778437/64/These_Black_Eyes_A_Re_Post_Ing_r
** Don't forget chapter 249 [[spoiler: Dagger's forces are pursuing Robin and Noir, who end up unintentionally leading them into a ambush by the US Army, who were warned in advance by Lex Luthor, and were waiting for Dagger's men to attack.]]

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* Post's gigantic Teen Titans ''TeenTitans'' fic, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4778437/1/These_Black_Eyes_A_Re_Post_Ing These Black Eyes]] is pretty much comprised of CMOA but my favorite is his OC Noir, who has at this point been [[spoiler: kicked [[spoiler:kicked out of the Titans after Slade framed him as his Third Apprentice and had been marked with a microchip which Slade could activate and easily kill him at any time, going in to save the Titan's asses. When Slade tries to activate the chip, Noir shows how he got rid of it: by slicing off his own goddamn arm. He then proceesed to kill the bastard and save his friends. Hell Yeah.]] http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4778437/64/These_Black_Eyes_A_Re_Post_Ing_r
]]
** Don't forget chapter 249 [[spoiler: Dagger's [[spoiler:Dagger's forces are pursuing Robin and Noir, who end up unintentionally leading them into a ambush by the US Army, who were warned in advance by Lex Luthor, and were waiting for Dagger's men to attack.]]



--> '''Auron:''' Braska? Can you hear me? Yevon? Fayth? Lords of the Living and the Dead? Are you listening? Rikku will not die today. Rikku will not die today. Rikku will not die tomorrow. Rikku will not die in Zanarkand. Listen to me. Hear me all of you. All of your plans and your devices and wars, she has no part of them. She is not here because of you, to help you or to stop you. She is only here because she loves her cousin. Do you even understand such a simple reason? So Rikku does not die today. Rikku does not die tomorrow. Rikku does not die in Zanarkand at all and if she does '''then there is a new side in your forever wars''' and a '''new player''' and [[AC: then I '''promise''' you that at the end of everything, at the end of it all '''no one will be standing.''']]
* ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4821971/1/Edward_meets_Sherlock_Holmes Sherlock Holmes defeating Edward Cullen.]]'' Without any special powers. It just proved that SherlockHolmes is a BadassNormal. Edward Cullen, the Vampire from twilight. Getting his ass kicked by Sherlock Holmes. I can't stress that point enough.
* S'TarKan's ''Harry Potter and the Nightmares of Futures Past,'' chapter 27. Lucius Malfoy has just lost his house-elf Dobby and is pissed at Harry because of it. He spins towards Harry, ready to curse him with his wand...and stops. "Because an inch from the end of his nose was the end of Harry?s wand, rock steady even with his arm at full extension. Five other wands were out as well, as a handful of children silently threatened to hex him and his son if they made another move." There are several others throughout the series, but that one always stands out to me.

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--> '''Auron:''' --->'''Auron:''' Braska? Can you hear me? Yevon? Fayth? Lords of the Living and the Dead? Are you listening? Rikku will not die today. Rikku will not die today. Rikku will not die tomorrow. Rikku will not die in Zanarkand. Listen to me. Hear me all of you. All of your plans and your devices and wars, she has no part of them. She is not here because of you, to help you or to stop you. She is only here because she loves her cousin. Do you even understand such a simple reason? So Rikku does not die today. Rikku does not die tomorrow. Rikku does not die in Zanarkand at all and if she does '''then there is a new side in your forever wars''' and a '''new player''' and [[AC: then I '''promise''' you that at the end of everything, at the end of it all '''no one will be standing.''']]
* ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4821971/1/Edward_meets_Sherlock_Holmes Sherlock Holmes defeating Edward Cullen.]]'' Without any special powers. It just proved that SherlockHolmes is a BadassNormal. Edward Cullen, the Vampire from twilight.''{{Twilight}}''. Getting his ass kicked by Sherlock Holmes. I can't stress that point enough.
* S'TarKan's ''Harry Potter and the Nightmares of Futures Past,'' chapter 27. Lucius Malfoy has just lost his house-elf Dobby and is pissed at Harry because of it. He spins towards Harry, ready to curse him with his wand...and stops. "Because an inch from the end of his nose was the end of Harry?s wand, rock steady even with his arm at full extension. Five other wands were out as well, as a handful of children silently threatened to hex him and his son if they made another move." There are several others throughout the series, but that one always stands out to me.



* There are a few in the {{Pokemon}} fanfic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2987606/1/Tales_Of_Flame Tales of Flame]] but the two that come to mind are:

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* There are a few in the {{Pokemon}} ''{{Pokemon}}'' fanfic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2987606/1/Tales_Of_Flame Tales of Flame]] but the two that come to mind are:



* The HarryPotter[=/=]IronMan crossover, The Invicible Technomage, which features a Harry raised by Tony Stark. The Ministry of Magic tries to start a custody battle when they learn Harry's being raised by a muggle. Harry responds by threatening to "unleash the wrath of God on them". Ignoring what they see as an idle threat, they give him a court date. On the appointed date, Harry walks in, reminds them of his promise, and appologizes for not having been more specific as to ''which'' god. In walks Thor, who then uses the well known legal technique of "threaten to smite the mortals if they don't lay off your friend's kid".
* From chapter 13 of the NeonGenesisEvangelion fanfic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4574288/1/Altered_Destinies Altered Destinies]], where Shinji forces Gendo to de-activate the Dummy Plug before it kills the pilot of Unit Three [[spoiler:who in this AU is a de-aged Misato]] ''by arming Unit One's self-destruct system and threatening to nuke himself if Gendo doesn't back down''. Made doubly awesome in that Shinji is not only standing up to his father, but epically [[CallingTheOldManOut calling him out]] on an open broadcast frequency with all of NERV listening in.

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* The HarryPotter[=/=]IronMan ''HarryPotter''/''IronMan'' crossover, The Invicible Technomage, which features a Harry raised by Tony Stark. The Ministry of Magic tries to start a custody battle when they learn Harry's being raised by a muggle. Harry responds by threatening to "unleash the wrath of God on them". Ignoring what they see as an idle threat, they give him a court date. On the appointed date, Harry walks in, reminds them of his promise, and appologizes for not having been more specific as to ''which'' god. In walks Thor, who then uses the well known legal technique of "threaten to smite the mortals if they don't lay off your friend's kid".
* From chapter 13 of the NeonGenesisEvangelion ''NeonGenesisEvangelion'' fanfic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4574288/1/Altered_Destinies Altered Destinies]], where Shinji forces Gendo to de-activate the Dummy Plug before it kills the pilot of Unit Three [[spoiler:who in this AU is a de-aged Misato]] ''by arming Unit One's self-destruct system and threatening to nuke himself if Gendo doesn't back down''. Made doubly awesome in that Shinji is not only standing up to his father, but epically [[CallingTheOldManOut calling him out]] on an open broadcast frequency with all of NERV listening in.



* ''[[Fanfic/TheShockerLegit The Shocker: Legit]]'' is one great big long Crowning Moment for C-List supervillain Herman Shultz, aka the titular Shocker. Particularily memorable moments include

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* ''[[Fanfic/TheShockerLegit The Shocker: Legit]]'' is one great big long Crowning Moment for C-List supervillain Herman Shultz, aka the titular eponymous Shocker. Particularily memorable moments includeinclude:



** This line.
--->'''Shocker:''' "...being a meta with no direction in New York in the Eighties? Bad times: the Sentinel Program, Galactus?s second and third visits, the Green Goblin?s reign of terror, Ghost Rider, the Scourge of the Underworld, the Avengers going from seven members to seven hundred (I think I could?ve joined and they wouldn?t have even noticed)..."

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** This line.
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--->'''Shocker:''' "...being a meta with no direction in New York in the Eighties? Bad times: the Sentinel Program, Galactus?s Galactus's second and third visits, the Green Goblin?s Goblin's reign of terror, Ghost Rider, the Scourge of the Underworld, the Avengers going from seven members to seven hundred (I think I could?ve joined and they wouldn?t wouldn't have even noticed)..."



* This Troper found the end of ''Chapter 23: For What Can Change'' of [[FanFic/{{Stray}} Stray]] really powerful, maybe her absolute favorite in any fanfic, because she was counting bullets and realized [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong what Adamska was about to do]]. Amazing scene.
* In ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2370566/1/ Elsewhen, and Elsewhere]]'', a ''{{Warhammer 40000}} - {{Star Trek}}'' crossover, the ''Enterprise'' is captured by a group of Jem'Hadar. What the Jem'Hadar don't realize is that there's a couple squads of Space Marines on board. HilarityEnsues.

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* This Troper found the end of ''Chapter "Chapter 23: For What Can Change'' Change" of [[FanFic/{{Stray}} Stray]] ''FanFic/{{Stray}}'' really powerful, maybe her absolute favorite in any fanfic, because she was counting bullets and realized [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong what Adamska was about to do]]. Amazing scene.
* In ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2370566/1/ Elsewhen, and Elsewhere]]'', a ''{{Warhammer 40000}} - {{Star Trek}}'' 40000}}''/''StarTrek'' crossover, the ''Enterprise'' is captured by a group of Jem'Hadar. What the Jem'Hadar don't realize is that there's a couple squads of Space Marines on board. HilarityEnsues.



* The Master has many in the ''Doctor Who'' AU Fic ''[[http://dwseason4.livejournal.com/4776.html Season Four]]'', but his finest moment is in Chapter 13, [[spoiler: where he and the Doctor confront the Rani - who plans to establish a New Gallifrey for the currently human Time Lords in her possession at a psychiatric ward with the help of the Doctor and Master.]] The Master laughs hysterically at this and has this brilliant rebuttal:
---> [[spoiler: "Oh, come ''on'', a Time Lord empire? Founded by the three of ''us''? There goes ''that'' policy of neutrality! No, wait, I've got it! I can make more black hole converters, you know. I can be Rassilon. Lucy, my dear, you get to be Omega, that would be fitting. Oh, Doctor, that leaves you as the Other. Yes, that sounds about right. I can rule for a thousand years of terror and the new Eye of Harmony will have all sorts of gadgets to keep it in check and they'll all be named after me! The Sash of the Master and the Key of the Master and the Seal of the Master. While we're at it we might as well have a bloody Trouser Press of the Master. Does that sound nice? Does that sound fun? Yes, come on, let's build a new Time Lord empire!"]]

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* The Master has many in the ''Doctor Who'' ''DoctorWho'' AU Fic ''[[http://dwseason4.livejournal.com/4776.html Season Four]]'', but his finest moment is in Chapter 13, [[spoiler: where [[spoiler:where he and the Doctor confront the Rani - who plans to establish a New Gallifrey for the currently human Time Lords in her possession at a psychiatric ward with the help of the Doctor and Master.]] The Master laughs hysterically at this and has this brilliant rebuttal:
---> [[spoiler: "Oh, --> [[spoiler:"Oh, come ''on'', a Time Lord empire? Founded by the three of ''us''? There goes ''that'' policy of neutrality! No, wait, I've got it! I can make more black hole converters, you know. I can be Rassilon. Lucy, my dear, you get to be Omega, that would be fitting. Oh, Doctor, that leaves you as the Other. Yes, that sounds about right. I can rule for a thousand years of terror and the new Eye of Harmony will have all sorts of gadgets to keep it in check and they'll all be named after me! The Sash of the Master and the Key of the Master and the Seal of the Master. While we're at it we might as well have a bloody Trouser Press of the Master. Does that sound nice? Does that sound fun? Yes, come on, let's build a new Time Lord empire!"]]



---> "I won't let you fight alone! This time, we're not going to be picked off one by one! NOT THIS TIME!" (...) "I won't lose again! THIS I DO SWEAR! We will defeat you and protect those we love! FOR I AM THE BATTLE PRINCESS OF THE WIND STORM! AND TOGETHER WE WILL DEFEAT YOU!"
* I am a fanfic fanatic, so there's going to be a few from [[http://www.fanfiction.net ff.net]] from here, mostly ''Naruto'' fics.
** New Beginnings, New Fate by [=FreetheKyuubi=], this scene made both hilarious and awesome by the amount of skill implied.
--->''?KAWAII!? All the girls (except the blonde and pink haired girls that were fighting earlier though even they looked like they were seriously fighting the urge) screamed in unison and launched themselves at the very surprised blonde. The glomping that ensued was one of legends as girls piled on top of each other in attempt to get to the boy beneath them.''
--->''A good natured chuckling suddenly came up from beneath the pile of girls and every one looked down in shock to see the aged face of the Hokage just visible. ?Well, it has been a while since I was glomped by such attractive young ladies.? The old man said with a smile. ?But it is getting somewhat hard to breath. So would you all mind allowing this old man to get up?? The girls had to have set a new speed record in their haste to get themselves off the village?s leader.''
--->''As the old man stood back up, a loud laughter filled the air and every looked over to see Naruto rolling on the ground holding his sides. ?I?I can?t?believe you?replaced yourself?with?the old man!? Naruto wheezed out as he laughed.''
--->''?I can?t believe you replaced yourself with me, you little bastard!? Jagaa said heatedly from next to Kakashi. Naruto started laughing harder and Jagaa glared at him. Kakashi was using every ounce of will power he had not to join the sunny blonde. Seriously, how often does one see the most powerful man in the village get used as a replacement and then glomped? It was certainly a first for him.''
** Eyes of the Broken Soul by SincereNaruto, a story that has so far extended Naruto's Academy life to about 37+ chapters, while still remaining awesome, a CMOA for the author by default. This scene is taken from a rather recent chapter where Naruto is on a survival trip (read: camping trip/death trap) with his class and they need to catch their own food. Naruto decides to fish last, being unsure of himself in front of Ino, Sakura, Choji, Shikamaru and their fathers, and unintentionally, completely, ''shows everyone up.''
--->?What the hell!?!?!?!? Sakura shouted, almost causing the boy to lose his balance and fall over. ?How the hell can you walk on water!?!?!?!? Naruto just shrugged his shoulders before scratching the back of his head with embarrassment.
--->?Ehehehe... well, the thing is I can?t really swim that well.? He mumbled sheepishly, somewhat embarrassed by his own ?shortcomings?. The pink haired girl just deadpanned.
--->?So... you just decided that defying the laws of nature and walking on water was easier...? She replied sarcastically. Naruto just nodded his head nervously, wondering why everyone looked so surprised by that.
--->?Yeah... that and I wanted to make sure that my dragon didn?t get wet either...? he added lamely, trying to to escape the sittuation that he had gotten himself into. Ryuukimi just rolled his eyes before falling into his own blank expression
** From the recently started fanfic ''[[http://bbs.stardestroyer.net/viewtopic.php?f=9&t=132786 Supernatural Taisen]]'' [[StargateSG1 Anubis]] is bringing his fleet to Earth to conquer it, and makes his ultimatum to the President of the United States. Unfortunately for him, this fic is ''SuperRobotWars'' expanded beyond HumongousMecha, and the sitting Commander-in-Chief is none other than ''[[{{Gargoyles}} David Xanatos]]'':
--->'''Anubis''': ?I am Anubis,?
--->'''Xanatos''' ?Sure you are.?
--->'''Anubis''': ?Are you the leader of this world??
--->'''Xanatos''': ?For all intents and purposes, let us talk as though I were.?
--->'''Anubis''': ?Your leadership has come to an end. Bow before your God, and I may grant you leniency.?
--->'''Xanatos''' ''(mentally removing plan b from consideration)'': ?I?m a self-made billionaire who now leads the most powerful nation on the planet. Do you honestly think I?d accept handouts or being ranked ''second'' best??
--->'''Anubis''': ?If you possessed weapons matching mine, you would have used them.?
--->'''Xanatos''': ?Despite our image, we know the meaning of restraint and patience.?
--->'''Anubis''': ?You will bring destruction upon yourselves.?
--->'''Xanatos''': ?In the last hundred years, we?ve been faced with 30 invasions like yours. What makes you think that yours will fare any differently from theirs??
--->''(Anubis' Hologram fades. Xanatos turns to Owen, who raises an eyebrow)''
--->'''Xanatos''': ?Still, not as [[LargeHam large of a ham]] as Sevarius.?

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---> "I -->"I won't let you fight alone! This time, we're not going to be picked off one by one! NOT THIS TIME!" (...) "I won't lose again! THIS I DO SWEAR! We will defeat you and protect those we love! FOR I AM THE BATTLE PRINCESS OF THE WIND STORM! AND TOGETHER WE WILL DEFEAT YOU!"
* I am a fanfic fanatic, so there's going to be a few from [[http://www.fanfiction.net ff.net]] from here, mostly ''Naruto'' fics.
**
New Beginnings, New Fate by [=FreetheKyuubi=], this scene made both hilarious and awesome by the amount of skill implied.
--->''?KAWAII!? -->''?KAWAII!? All the girls (except the blonde and pink haired girls that were fighting earlier though even they looked like they were seriously fighting the urge) screamed in unison and launched themselves at the very surprised blonde. The glomping that ensued was one of legends as girls piled on top of each other in attempt to get to the boy beneath them.''
--->''A -->''A good natured chuckling suddenly came up from beneath the pile of girls and every one looked down in shock to see the aged face of the Hokage just visible. ?Well, it has been a while since I was glomped by such attractive young ladies.? The old man said with a smile. ?But it is getting somewhat hard to breath. So would you all mind allowing this old man to get up?? The girls had to have set a new speed record in their haste to get themselves off the village?s leader.''
--->''As -->''As the old man stood back up, a loud laughter filled the air and every looked over to see Naruto rolling on the ground holding his sides. ?I?I can?t?believe you?replaced yourself?with?the old man!? Naruto wheezed out as he laughed.''
--->''?I -->''?I can?t believe you replaced yourself with me, you little bastard!? Jagaa said heatedly from next to Kakashi. Naruto started laughing harder and Jagaa glared at him. Kakashi was using every ounce of will power he had not to join the sunny blonde. Seriously, how often does one see the most powerful man in the village get used as a replacement and then glomped? It was certainly a first for him.''
** * Eyes of the Broken Soul by SincereNaruto, Soul, a story that has so far extended Naruto's Academy life to about 37+ chapters, while still remaining awesome, a CMOA for the author by default. This scene is taken from a rather recent chapter where Naruto is on a survival trip (read: camping trip/death trap) with his class and they need to catch their own food. Naruto decides to fish last, being unsure of himself in front of Ino, Sakura, Choji, Shikamaru and their fathers, and unintentionally, completely, ''shows everyone up.''
--->?What -->?What the hell!?!?!?!? Sakura shouted, almost causing the boy to lose his balance and fall over. ?How the hell can you walk on water!?!?!?!? Naruto just shrugged his shoulders before scratching the back of his head with embarrassment.
--->?Ehehehe...-->?Ehehehe... well, the thing is I can?t really swim that well.? He mumbled sheepishly, somewhat embarrassed by his own ?shortcomings?. The pink haired girl just deadpanned.
--->?So...-->?So... you just decided that defying the laws of nature and walking on water was easier...? She replied sarcastically. Naruto just nodded his head nervously, wondering why everyone looked so surprised by that.
--->?Yeah...-->?Yeah... that and I wanted to make sure that my dragon didn?t get wet either...? he added lamely, trying to to escape the sittuation that he had gotten himself into. Ryuukimi just rolled his eyes before falling into his own blank expression
** * From the recently started fanfic ''[[http://bbs.stardestroyer.net/viewtopic.php?f=9&t=132786 Supernatural Taisen]]'' [[StargateSG1 Anubis]] is bringing his fleet to Earth to conquer it, and makes his ultimatum to the President of the United States. Unfortunately for him, this fic is ''SuperRobotWars'' expanded beyond HumongousMecha, and the sitting Commander-in-Chief is none other than ''[[{{Gargoyles}} David Xanatos]]'':
--->'''Anubis''': -->'''Anubis''': ?I am Anubis,?
--->'''Xanatos''' -->'''Xanatos''' ?Sure you are.?
--->'''Anubis''': -->'''Anubis''': ?Are you the leader of this world??
--->'''Xanatos''': -->'''Xanatos''': ?For all intents and purposes, let us talk as though I were.?
--->'''Anubis''': -->'''Anubis''': ?Your leadership has come to an end. Bow before your God, and I may grant you leniency.?
--->'''Xanatos''' -->'''Xanatos''' ''(mentally removing plan b from consideration)'': ?I?m a self-made billionaire who now leads the most powerful nation on the planet. Do you honestly think I?d accept handouts or being ranked ''second'' best??
--->'''Anubis''': -->'''Anubis''': ?If you possessed weapons matching mine, you would have used them.?
--->'''Xanatos''': -->'''Xanatos''': ?Despite our image, we know the meaning of restraint and patience.?
--->'''Anubis''': -->'''Anubis''': ?You will bring destruction upon yourselves.?
--->'''Xanatos''': -->'''Xanatos''': ?In the last hundred years, we?ve been faced with 30 invasions like yours. What makes you think that yours will fare any differently from theirs??
--->''(Anubis' -->''(Anubis' Hologram fades. Xanatos turns to Owen, who raises an eyebrow)''
--->'''Xanatos''': -->'''Xanatos''': ?Still, not as [[LargeHam large of a ham]] as Sevarius.?



* Ultra Sonic 007's remake of Digimon: Zero 2 final battle between BelialMyotismon and the DigiKnight. Read it [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1584078/60/Zero_2_A_Revision]]: your head will explode from sheer awesomeness.

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* Ultra Sonic 007's remake of Digimon: Zero 2 final battle between BelialMyotismon [=BelialMyotismon=] and the DigiKnight.[=DigiKnight=]. Read it [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1584078/60/Zero_2_A_Revision]]: your head will explode from sheer awesomeness.



* In the Harry Potter FanFic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3384712/1/The_Lie_Ive_Lived "The Lie I've Lived"]] [[spoiler:after the Dementor fight at the end of Book 3, Harry finds out that, when his dad died, he got all of his memories.]] After that discovery, Harry becomes steadily more badass as the story progresses.

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* In the Harry Potter ''HarryPotter'' FanFic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3384712/1/The_Lie_Ive_Lived "The Lie I've Lived"]] [[spoiler:after the Dementor fight at the end of Book 3, Harry finds out that, when his dad died, he got all of his memories.]] After that discovery, Harry becomes steadily more badass as the story progresses.



* ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3931250/1/Men_of_War Men of War]]'', a {{Gears of War}}/{{Halo}}. Master Chief. Duel-wielding Troikas. Need I say more?

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* ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3931250/1/Men_of_War Men of War]]'', a {{Gears ''{{Gears of War}}/{{Halo}}.War}}''/''{{Halo}}'' fanfiction. Master Chief. Duel-wielding Troikas. Need I say more?



** Master Chief [[BadAss kills a Berserker barehanded.]] By ''[[CrowningMomentOfAwesome dropkicking it in the face.]]''

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** Master Chief [[BadAss kills a Berserker barehanded.]] barehanded. By ''[[CrowningMomentOfAwesome dropkicking ''dropkicking it in the face.]]''''



* [[http://www.dotmoon.net/library_storyview.php?chapterid=296 She's Come Undone]], an AU Sailor Moon where Usagi is placed in a mental asylum for the criminally insane by the government because her senshi battles were embarrassing them. She's given the choice of being set free but renouncing the fact she really was Sailor Moon, and staying in the hospital she's been confined in since forever and remaining a persona non grata and possibly never getting out alive. Her response: [[spoiler:giving them a figurative middle finger by ripping up the papers she's given that would have had her saying she wasn't really Sailor Moon but just crazy, and stomping on them. Followed by saying she will ''always'' be Sailor Moon with a smile on her face, even while she's being dragged and ''beaten'' by the nurses for not doing what she was told.]] The [[spoiler:Maya Angelou poem]] just enhances the awesome for me.
* How has nobody mentioned Nazo Unleashed by ChakraX? The first episode opens with [[spoiler:Nazo nabbing a Chaos Emerald, then destroying the city it was located in]]. Then [[spoiler:it goes into a three-minute brawl as Nazo beats the crap out of Sonic, Tails, and Knuckles]], followed by Sonic [[spoiler:turning into Dark Sonic.]] Episode two kicks the action up even further as [[spoiler:Super Sonic]] and [[spoiler:Super Shadow go two-on-one against Nazo]]. Finally, in the third Episode, [[spoiler:Nazo uses the Chaos Emeralds AND the Master Emerald to go Super himself, then beats the ever-loving crap out of Super Sonic and Super Shadow. [[RuleOfCool Then both hedgehogs turn the Emeralds into Super Emeralds so they can go Hyper, and then FUSE into Hyper Shadic]]. What follows next is a one-on-one battle across Angel Island, into SPACE, then back to the island, before Nazo uses the Super Emeralds to go Hyper as well, followed by what can only be described as a Dark Spirit Bomb versus a Wave Motion Cannon]]. It's basically to Flash what TengenToppaGurrenLagann is to anime.

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* [[http://www.dotmoon.net/library_storyview.php?chapterid=296 She's Come Undone]], an AU Sailor Moon ''SailorMoon'' where Usagi is placed in a mental asylum for the criminally insane by the government because her senshi battles were embarrassing them. She's given the choice of being set free but renouncing the fact she really was Sailor Moon, and staying in the hospital she's been confined in since forever and remaining a persona non grata and possibly never getting out alive. Her response: [[spoiler:giving them a figurative middle finger by ripping up the papers she's given that would have had her saying she wasn't really Sailor Moon but just crazy, and stomping on them. Followed by saying she will ''always'' be Sailor Moon with a smile on her face, even while she's being dragged and ''beaten'' by the nurses for not doing what she was told.]] The [[spoiler:Maya Angelou poem]] just enhances the awesome for me.
* How has nobody mentioned Nazo Unleashed by ChakraX? Unleashed. The first episode opens with [[spoiler:Nazo nabbing a Chaos Emerald, then destroying the city it was located in]]. Then [[spoiler:it goes into a three-minute brawl as Nazo beats the crap out of Sonic, Tails, and Knuckles]], followed by Sonic [[spoiler:turning into Dark Sonic.]] Episode two kicks the action up even further as [[spoiler:Super Sonic]] and [[spoiler:Super Shadow go two-on-one against Nazo]]. Finally, in the third Episode, [[spoiler:Nazo uses the Chaos Emeralds AND the Master Emerald to go Super himself, then beats the ever-loving crap out of Super Sonic and Super Shadow. [[RuleOfCool Then both hedgehogs turn the Emeralds into Super Emeralds so they can go Hyper, and then FUSE into Hyper Shadic]]. What follows next is a one-on-one battle across Angel Island, into SPACE, then back to the island, before Nazo uses the Super Emeralds to go Hyper as well, followed by what can only be described as a Dark Spirit Bomb versus a Wave Motion Cannon]]. It's basically to Flash what TengenToppaGurrenLagann is to anime.



* Chapter 20 of [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4869171/20/Grand_Tour Grand Tour]] by DrunkenGrognard has several, being essentially a climactic battle to cap a particluarly screwy MegaCrossover ([[RanmaOneHalf Ranma 1/2]], StarTrek, {{Nanoha}}, {{Slayers}}, and {{Berserk}}). Most of the good guys get a crowning moment:

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* Chapter 20 of [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4869171/20/Grand_Tour Grand Tour]] by DrunkenGrognard has several, being essentially a climactic battle to cap a particluarly screwy MegaCrossover ([[RanmaOneHalf (''[[RanmaOneHalf Ranma 1/2]], StarTrek, {{Nanoha}}, {{Slayers}}, 1/2]]'', ''StarTrek'', ''{{Nanoha}}'', ''{{Slayers}}'', and {{Berserk}}).''{{Berserk}}''). Most of the good guys get a crowning moment:



*** In Journey, the [[spoiler:the DRB, an imperialistic evil counterpart to the TSAB, who have access to a not quite dead Queen Beryl and her youma as well,]] show up to conquer Earth. They end up fighting the JSDF, the TSAB, the Sailor Senshi, Hellboy, Evangeline, and the casts of both Ranma 1/2 and Black Lagoon. It... doesn't go well for them.
*** Special mention for Sailor Moon's contribution at the end. [[spoiler: told that an orbiting battleship is about to bombard the city, she uses the Millenium Silver Crystal to throw a shield over the city that stands up to three volleys. Each of which was hitting with one hundred twenty MEGATONNES of force.]] Not bad at all for a clumsy crybaby.

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*** ** In Journey, the [[spoiler:the DRB, an imperialistic evil counterpart to the TSAB, who have access to a not quite dead Queen Beryl and her youma as well,]] show up to conquer Earth. They end up fighting the JSDF, the TSAB, the Sailor Senshi, Hellboy, Evangeline, and the casts of both Ranma 1/2 ''Ranma 1/2'' and Black Lagoon.''BlackLagoon''. It... doesn't go well for them.
*** Special mention for Sailor Moon's contribution at the end. [[spoiler: told [[spoiler:told that an orbiting battleship is about to bombard the city, she uses the Millenium Silver Crystal to throw a shield over the city that stands up to three volleys. Each of which was hitting with one hundred twenty MEGATONNES of force.]] Not bad at all for a clumsy crybaby.







*** [[spoiler:Didn't she dump [[FridgeLogic Taniguchi]] after 5 minutes?]]
*** [[spoiler:Well, it was never stated outright in the original series, so the author of this Fanfiction twisted it a little bit. But of course this is lampshaded by Kyon in the story.]]
* There are several by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/8744/Thrythlind Thrythlind]]

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*** [[spoiler:Didn't she dump [[FridgeLogic Taniguchi]] after 5 minutes?]]
*** [[spoiler:Well, it was never stated outright in the original series, so the author of this Fanfiction twisted it a little bit. But of course this is lampshaded by Kyon in the story.]]
* There are several by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/8744/Thrythlind Thrythlind]]Thrythlind]]:



-->''"It did not understand whom it was facing."'' paraphrase of Riddick's ''"It didn't know who it was fucking with."''
** [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4935344/1/Fighters_of_a_New_Day Fighters of a New Day]] Kurumi vs Kiba in chapter 5.
** [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/453260/1/Kiyone_Muyo Kiyone Muyo!]] Quote Kiyone Chapter 10: ''"Let me explain to you the facts of life," Kiyone started. "You've lost."''
** [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/229625/1/Slayers_Bred Slayers Bred]] Third part of the Unnamed Trilogy that started with [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/220957/1/Kitsune_Lina Kitsune Lina]] [[spoiler:Jolrael to the Elf Lord -->''"You dare mock a scion of House Feanor?"''-->''"I mock almost everybody," Jolrael said honestly. "Except Luna Inverse, tried that once, didn't turn out too well. Now shall we find one of your mages or do we have to tell every bleeding high elf individually that you've surrendered."'']]

* The [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Nanoha]]/RanmaOneHalf crossover [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5245635/1/Magical_Girl_Nanoha_12 Nanoha 1/2]] gives a threefold Crowning Moment to Ranma near the end of the Nanoha Classic arc, when Precia claims the last of the Jewel Seeds and starts on her MotiveRant[=/=]HannibalLecture to Fate and the TSAB. Moments after she starts talking, Genma notices that Ranma has disappeared from the ''Asura'''s bridge just as Lindy's troops move in to aprehend Precia. Precia, naturally, nukes the {{Red Shirts}} and keeps ranting, only for Ranma to make his reappearance. The [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome AWESOME]] is how [[spoiler: he slipped off the bridge, through the teleporter, and into the Garden of Time, dodged an area of effect spell potent enough to put down several squads of TSAB {{Space Marine}}s and then escaped Precia's notice as long as he did.]] The [[CrowningMomentOfFunny FUNNY]] was [[spoiler: stealing the Jewel Seeds ''literally'' out from under Precia's nose ("''Yoink!''") and then running away with them, [[MahouSenseiNegima Miyazaki Nodoka]]-style.]] The [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming HEARTWARMING]] was how this affected Fate, [[spoiler: who snaps out of the HeroicBSOD she'd been going into and manages to crack a smile despite everything she'd been put through in the last two minutes.]]
* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2277668/1/Kingdom_of_Chaos Kingdom of Chaos]], a Kingdom Hearts fic set after Chain Memories (written before Kingdom Hearts 2, and in this troper's opinion what Kingdom Hearts 2 should have been) has a wonderful Crowning Moment at the hands of [[spoiler: Larxene. The Organization has been betrayed and hung out to dry by Axel (whose convoluted plot to restore his heart to him has just succeeded) and most of their members have been killed by a [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/DeadlyUpgrade Deadly Upgraded]] Sora. About all that's left is Marluxia, who takes Axel to task for his betrayal and starts kicking his ass. Finally Axel is on his last legs and, as Marluxia delivers the killing blow, Larxene, combining a [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/HeroicSacrifice Heroic Sacrifice]] and a [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/CrowningMomentofAwesome CMOA]] teleports into the space between Axel and Marluxia's scythe, saving him at the cost of her own life. Marluxia is so astonished that he actually offers Axel an elixr that can save her life en exchange for his surrender.]]

* Proving that [[SturgeonsLaw there is always the other 10% that's]] SoCoolItsAwesome, the KingdomHearts {{Slash}} HighSchoolAU fanfic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4413465/1/Boys Boys]] contains a ''major'' one for Sora in chapter 20: The Day I Tried To Live. The fic deals (professionally) with the difference between real and fake, the importance of [[IAmWhatIAm owning up to what you are rather than fighting it]], and the connections between the two. Sora finally reaches a conclusion on the matter, and [[spoiler: kisses Riku right on the lips in the middle of the senior hall, thereby proclaiming his acceptance of the story's events and indicating how little he cares about anyone who has a problem with them.]] It's written and presented so that the response, even for the most devoted of YaoiFangirls, is not to {{Squee}}, but to stand up and cheer.

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-->''"It --->"It did not understand whom it was facing."'' paraphrase of Riddick's ''"It didn't know who it was fucking with."''
"
** [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4935344/1/Fighters_of_a_New_Day Fighters of a New Day]] Day]]; Kurumi vs Kiba in chapter 5.
** [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/453260/1/Kiyone_Muyo Kiyone Muyo!]] Muyo!]]; Quote Kiyone Chapter 10: ''"Let me explain to you the facts of life," Kiyone started. "You've lost."''
** [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/229625/1/Slayers_Bred Slayers Bred]] Bred]]; Third part of the Unnamed Trilogy that started with [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/220957/1/Kitsune_Lina Kitsune Lina]] [[spoiler:Jolrael to the Elf Lord -->''"You dare mock a scion of House Feanor?"''-->''"I mock almost everybody," Jolrael said honestly. "Except Luna Inverse, tried that once, didn't turn out too well. Now shall we find one of your mages or do we have to tell every bleeding high elf individually that you've surrendered."'']]

"'']]
* The [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Nanoha]]/RanmaOneHalf ''[[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Nanoha]]''/''RanmaOneHalf'' crossover [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5245635/1/Magical_Girl_Nanoha_12 Nanoha 1/2]] gives a threefold Crowning Moment to Ranma near the end of the Nanoha Classic arc, when Precia claims the last of the Jewel Seeds and starts on her MotiveRant[=/=]HannibalLecture to Fate and the TSAB. Moments after she starts talking, Genma notices that Ranma has disappeared from the ''Asura'''s bridge just as Lindy's troops move in to aprehend Precia. Precia, naturally, nukes the {{Red Shirts}} and keeps ranting, only for Ranma to make his reappearance. The [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome AWESOME]] is how [[spoiler: he slipped off the bridge, through the teleporter, and into the Garden of Time, dodged an area of effect spell potent enough to put down several squads of TSAB {{Space Marine}}s and then escaped Precia's notice as long as he did.]] The [[CrowningMomentOfFunny FUNNY]] was [[spoiler: stealing the Jewel Seeds ''literally'' out from under Precia's nose ("''Yoink!''") and then running away with them, [[MahouSenseiNegima Miyazaki Nodoka]]-style.]] The [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming HEARTWARMING]] was how this affected Fate, [[spoiler: who snaps out of the HeroicBSOD she'd been going into and manages to crack a smile despite everything she'd been put through in the last two minutes.]]
* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2277668/1/Kingdom_of_Chaos Kingdom of Chaos]], a Kingdom Hearts ''KingdomHearts'' fic set after Chain Memories ''Chain Memories'' (written before Kingdom ''Kingdom Hearts 2, and in this troper's opinion what Kingdom Hearts 2 should have been) 2'') has a wonderful Crowning Moment at the hands of [[spoiler: Larxene. [[spoiler:Larxene. The Organization has been betrayed and hung out to dry by Axel (whose convoluted plot to restore his heart to him has just succeeded) and most of their members have been killed by a [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/DeadlyUpgrade [[DeadlyUpgrade Deadly Upgraded]] Sora. About all that's left is Marluxia, who takes Axel to task for his betrayal and starts kicking his ass. Finally Axel is on his last legs and, as Marluxia delivers the killing blow, Larxene, combining a [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/HeroicSacrifice Heroic Sacrifice]] HeroicSacrifice and a [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/CrowningMomentofAwesome CMOA]] CMOA teleports into the space between Axel and Marluxia's scythe, saving him at the cost of her own life. Marluxia is so astonished that he actually offers Axel an elixr that can save her life en exchange for his surrender.]]

]]
* Proving that [[SturgeonsLaw there is always the other 10% that's]] SoCoolItsAwesome, the KingdomHearts ''KingdomHearts'' {{Slash}} HighSchoolAU fanfic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4413465/1/Boys Boys]] contains a ''major'' one for Sora in chapter 20: The Day I Tried To Live. The fic deals (professionally) with the difference between real and fake, the importance of [[IAmWhatIAm owning up to what you are rather than fighting it]], and the connections between the two. Sora finally reaches a conclusion on the matter, and [[spoiler: kisses [[spoiler:kisses Riku right on the lips in the middle of the senior hall, thereby proclaiming his acceptance of the story's events and indicating how little he cares about anyone who has a problem with them.]] It's written and presented so that the response, even for the most devoted of YaoiFangirls, is not to {{Squee}}, but to stand up and cheer.



* The webcomic site Stardroids.net is full of one shots and story arcs for the Megaman and [[MegamanX Megaman X]] series, ranging from [[CrowningMomentofHeartWarming heart warming]] to [[CrowningMomentOfFunny gut-bustingly hilarious]] to [[RuleOfCool unbelievably awesome]], but the real awesome is in the most recent story arc, True Blue: Under Fire. During the storyline, X is consumed by an evil version of himself, given a Healing Factor, and Zero is faced with the task of taking him down. The sheer level of Determinator in Zero becomes a CMOA when [[spoiler:after losing an arm, being torn apart, and welded to a wall, Zero rips himself off the wall]] and keeps fighting X.
* There's at least one per chapter in ''People Lie'', a Naruto fanfic by Nugar, but the one that stands out to me the most combines not only awesome, but heartwarming and funny. Naruto and Hinata are nearly half-dead and unconscious after [[spoiler:defeating a [[CosmicHorror Shoggoth]] and destroying an evil cult.]] That's the awesome. Sasuke [[spoiler:carries Hinata and Naruto all the way back to Konoha]], being severly beaten up himself when only a few days before, there were mutual death threats between him and Hinata. That's the heartwarming. The funny comes from [[spoiler:all three of them being entirely ''naked'', and references to fangirls attempting to make Naked Sasuke Day a national holiday.]]

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* The webcomic site Stardroids.net is full of one shots and story arcs for the Megaman and [[MegamanX Megaman X]] ''MegamanX'' series, ranging from [[CrowningMomentofHeartWarming heart warming]] to [[CrowningMomentOfFunny gut-bustingly hilarious]] to [[RuleOfCool unbelievably awesome]], but the real awesome is in the most recent story arc, True Blue: Under Fire. During the storyline, X is consumed by an evil version of himself, given a Healing Factor, and Zero is faced with the task of taking him down. The sheer level of Determinator in Zero becomes a CMOA when [[spoiler:after losing an arm, being torn apart, and welded to a wall, Zero rips himself off the wall]] and keeps fighting X.
* There's at least one per chapter in ''People Lie'', a Naruto ''{{Naruto}}'' fanfic by Nugar, but the one that stands out to me the most combines not only awesome, but heartwarming and funny. Naruto and Hinata are nearly half-dead and unconscious after [[spoiler:defeating a [[CosmicHorror Shoggoth]] and destroying an evil cult.]] That's the awesome. Sasuke [[spoiler:carries Hinata and Naruto all the way back to Konoha]], being severly beaten up himself when only a few days before, there were mutual death threats between him and Hinata. That's the heartwarming. The funny comes from [[spoiler:all three of them being entirely ''naked'', and references to fangirls attempting to make Naked Sasuke Day a national holiday.]]



* BigD1987's [[DigimonAdventure Digimon]] fic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5036837/1/Its_A_Grand_Old_Team_to_Play_For It's A Grand Old Team to Play For]], which has Tai Kamiya playing for [[BritishFootyTeams Glasgow Celtic]] has two in chapters 6 and 7. The first is when Tai passes to his teammate--who he hated for some time--[[spoiler:and the teammate scores to beat Manchester United]] and the second is when [[spoiler:''Tai himself'' scores ''twice'' in two minutes to help his team win]].
* In chapter 28 of the [[HigurashiNoNakuKoroNi Higurashi]] fanfic ''Redemption'' (as well as in the last half of the story in general), several characters earn their CMOAs. The one that stood out for this troper in particular was Mion's CMOA: [[spoiler: She has only one gun...and manages to ''take down five soldiers'' with it. And just when it's revealed she missed one...she just shoots him a second time and he dies.]]

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* BigD1987's [[DigimonAdventure Digimon]] The ''[[DigimonAdventure Digimon]]'' fic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5036837/1/Its_A_Grand_Old_Team_to_Play_For It's A Grand Old Team to Play For]], which has Tai Kamiya playing for [[BritishFootyTeams Glasgow Celtic]] has two in chapters 6 and 7. The first is when Tai passes to his teammate--who he hated for some time--[[spoiler:and the teammate scores to beat Manchester United]] and the second is when [[spoiler:''Tai himself'' scores ''twice'' in two minutes to help his team win]].
* In chapter 28 of the [[HigurashiNoNakuKoroNi Higurashi]] fanfic ''Redemption'' (as well as in the last half of the story in general), several characters earn their CMOAs.[=CMOAs=]. The one that stood out for this troper in particular was Mion's CMOA: [[spoiler: She has only one gun...and manages to ''take down five soldiers'' with it. And just when it's revealed she missed one...she just shoots him a second time and he dies.]]



** Hot damn, this fic needs its own page, already! ...How I do it?
*** Nevermind; [[Fanfic/EnemyOfMyEnemy see it here]].

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** Hot damn, this fic needs its own page, already! ...How I do it?
*** Nevermind;
[[Fanfic/EnemyOfMyEnemy see See it here]].



* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4705142/1/Zero_vs_Kira Zero vs Kira]], this crossover fic is basically an epic win from the start, on behalf of our favorite VillainProtagonist Light. As soon as he teleported into CodeGeass universe, first thing he does is to trick the guards, commander, and the scientist who is responsible of his presence to write their names and the commander's cause of death?
-->'''Light:'''It says "George Taurus: orders his men to write their names down in a book, will succumb to an overwhelm fear for his own life and will follow any command given in order to save himself, dies in 30 minutes."
Holy Crap.

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* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4705142/1/Zero_vs_Kira Zero vs Kira]], this crossover fic is basically an epic win from the start, on behalf of our favorite VillainProtagonist Light. As soon as he teleported into CodeGeass universe, ''CodeGeass'', first thing he does is to trick the guards, commander, and the scientist who is responsible of his presence to write their names and the commander's cause of death?
-->'''Light:'''It
death?
-->'''Light:''' It
says "George Taurus: orders his men to write their names down in a book, will succumb to an overwhelm fear for his own life and will follow any command given in order to save himself, dies in 30 minutes."
Holy Crap.
"



* The entirety of [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5013714/1/Edward_Vs_Edward Edward Vs Edward]], a Twilight/Fullmetal Alchemist crossover, is pretty much a CMoA for Edward Elric. Most of the dialouge is Edward Elric bashing Edward Cullen's insults with ease.
--->Edward Cullen: "I'm practically perfect in every way."
--->Edward Elric: "I don't NEED to be perfect for people to like me. OR fall in love with me."
--->Edward Cullen: "I've got the most beautiful, perfect, delicious girl in the world. Her name is Bella Swan?"
--->Edward Elric: "Heh, really? I thought her name was Mary Sue."

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* The entirety of [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5013714/1/Edward_Vs_Edward Edward Vs Edward]], a Twilight/Fullmetal Alchemist ''{{Twilight}}''/''FullmetalAlchemist'' crossover, is pretty much a CMoA [=CMoA=] for Edward Elric. Most of the dialouge dialogue is Edward Elric bashing Edward Cullen's insults with ease.
--->Edward Cullen: "I'm -->'''Edward Cullen''': I'm practically perfect in every way."
--->Edward Elric: "I
way.
-->'''Edward Elric''': I
don't NEED to be perfect for people to like me. OR fall in love with me."
--->Edward Cullen: "I've
me.
-->'''Edward Cullen''': I've
got the most beautiful, perfect, delicious girl in the world. Her name is Bella Swan?"
--->Edward Elric: "Heh,
Swan?
-->'''Edward Elric''': Heh,
really? I thought her name was Mary Sue."MarySue.



--->Edward Cullen: "Pfft. You're just a dumb anime character..."
--->Edward Elric: "Well you're just a fake vampire - no, strike that. You're a carnivorous disco ball."
* From ''The Hokage's Will'' by Airhead dude, we have the long anticipated Naruto vs Sasuke match. [[spoiler: Naruto basically outclasses Sasuke in taijutsu-with Sasuke having no defense against Sage Mode Phantom Punches, so Sasuke amps up the ally by going fully incomplete Susano'o, thinking he has it won now. Know what Naruto does? Toss the Rasenshuriken into the Susano'o...and completely and utterly SHATTERS it like glass.]] So. Awesome.

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--->Edward Cullen: "Pfft. --->'''Edward Cullen''': Pfft. You're just a dumb anime character..."
--->Edward Elric: "Well
character...
--->'''Edward Elric''': Well
you're just a fake vampire - no, strike that. You're a carnivorous disco ball."
ball.
* From ''The Hokage's Will'' by Airhead dude, we have the long anticipated Naruto vs Sasuke match. [[spoiler: Naruto [[spoiler:Naruto basically outclasses Sasuke in taijutsu-with Sasuke having no defense against Sage Mode Phantom Punches, so Sasuke amps up the ally by going fully incomplete Susano'o, thinking he has it won now. Know what Naruto does? Toss the Rasenshuriken into the Susano'o...and completely and utterly SHATTERS it like glass.]] So. Awesome.



* JLAWatchtower and DCNation universe

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* JLAWatchtower and DCNation universeuniverse:



*** Hal Jordan's BadassBoast
--> '''Hal:''' "You may be a god, Hades, but I was once the wrath of the God Himself. Do you dare risk that I have forgotten all your sins, which were once laid bare for me to see? You have lost. Return Troia and Nightwing to us, and call off your armies, before you face punishment that would make even the Furies cry."

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*** Hal Jordan's BadassBoast
--> '''Hal:''' "You
BadassBoast:
-->'''Hal:''' You
may be a god, Hades, but I was once the wrath of the God Himself. Do you dare risk that I have forgotten all your sins, which were once laid bare for me to see? You have lost. Return Troia and Nightwing to us, and call off your armies, before you face punishment that would make even the Furies cry."



* ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5453047/1/Graveyard_Shift Graveyard Shift]]'', a ''MassEffect'' novelization being written by the same author behind ''Fanfic/TiberiumWars'' and ''Fanfic/{{Forward}}'', has one for Wrex almost right off the bat, when a trio of assassins dressed up as C-Sec officers show up and try to "arrest" him. Wrex chats with them for a bit [[spoiler: before suddenly killing all three in the span of a couple of seconds with casual and insulting ease. Then he tells off the leader of the group, saying he's really disappointed with him for the "fake arrest routine."]]

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* ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5453047/1/Graveyard_Shift Graveyard Shift]]'', a ''MassEffect'' novelization being written by the same author behind ''Fanfic/TiberiumWars'' and ''Fanfic/{{Forward}}'', has one for Wrex almost right off the bat, when a trio of assassins dressed up as C-Sec officers show up and try to "arrest" him. Wrex chats with them for a bit [[spoiler: before [[spoiler:before suddenly killing all three in the span of a couple of seconds with casual and insulting ease. Then he tells off the leader of the group, saying he's really disappointed with him for the "fake arrest routine."]]



* Michael, ActionSurvivor main character for ''FanFic/ToyHammer'', gets an extended one for not only being able to - through diplomacy, threats and friendship (also, [[IncrediblyLamePun impressing]] [[RunningGag the commanders]] with his [[ImprobableWeaponsUser fire extinguisher]] - he manages to get the Human, Eldar, Tau and even ''Ork'' forces of Warhammer40000 to not only stop fighting, but to co-exist (more or less) and even - when the need arose - to ''fight as one'', we have to give him a CrowningMomentOfAwesome... or a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming.

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* Michael, ActionSurvivor main character for ''FanFic/ToyHammer'', gets an extended one for not only being able to - through diplomacy, threats and friendship (also, [[IncrediblyLamePun impressing]] [[RunningGag the commanders]] with his [[ImprobableWeaponsUser fire extinguisher]] - he manages to get the Human, Eldar, Tau and even ''Ork'' forces of Warhammer40000 ''{{Warhammer 40000}}'' to not only stop fighting, but to co-exist (more or less) and even - when the need arose - to ''fight as one'', we have to give him a CrowningMomentOfAwesome... or a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming.



*** Chapter 21: Chaos forces seem to be winning but the [[spoiler: GOD EMPEROR OF MANKIND]] shows up in the very ticked of and very powerful flesh, and basically has the Chaos forces all void their bowels, by just appearing there.
* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4627879/1/The_Middle_Ground The Middle Ground]] (an epic {{Naruto}} fanfiction) has many- Tenten beating the hell out of Tandea Shun, the {{Smug Snake}} and then sticking a sword through his heart when he gets up to attack her the last time. Tracking Shino into the middle of a warzone then landing in front of him to defend him from enemy shinobi all righteous fury. Team Gai taking down bandits with an air of boredom. Shino using his bugs to tickle someone into submission in a fight. Aburame Katsu (Shino's grandfather) using tea as a weapon... oh there are just too many!

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*** ** Chapter 21: Chaos forces seem to be winning but the [[spoiler: GOD [[spoiler:GOD EMPEROR OF MANKIND]] shows up in the very ticked of and very powerful flesh, and basically has the Chaos forces all void their bowels, by just appearing there.
* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4627879/1/The_Middle_Ground The Middle Ground]] (an epic {{Naruto}} ''{{Naruto}}'' fanfiction) has many- many - Tenten beating the hell out of Tandea Shun, the {{Smug Snake}} and then sticking a sword through his heart when he gets up to attack her the last time. Tracking Shino into the middle of a warzone then landing in front of him to defend him from enemy shinobi all righteous fury. Team Gai taking down bandits with an air of boredom. Shino using his bugs to tickle someone into submission in a fight. Aburame Katsu (Shino's grandfather) using tea as a weapon... oh there are just too many!



And then [[CoolOldGuy Fuyutsuki]] punches Soryu in the stomach hard enough to K.O. him, just for good measure.
--> '''Fuyutsuki''': "Sorry, Commander. It seems my fist slipped. I apologize".
--> '''Gendo (dismissively)''': "Ah. Well, don't let it happen again. By the way, Fuyutsuki, make sure he and his wife leave Japan as soon as possible. I think there is a military cargo flight bound for Germany leaving shortly. See to it they are on it before it leaves, will you?"
--> '''Fuyutsuki''': "By your command".
* The Evangelion / DBZ crossover fic FanFic/EvaPossibilitiesAndFusionPandemonium has a few good ones, such as Vegeta utterly dominating Shamshel and then making a one-Saiyan siege to rescue his captive son from Gendo's clutches. Also, [[spoiler:Gogeta vs. Bardiel]].
* Few fanfics mimic their source material as perfectly as [[http://www.rdrop.com/~/wyvern/data/houseplants.html Houseplants of Gor]], a parody of John Norman's ''{{Gor}}'' series. It's simultaneously a CMoA and a CMoF.
* These two stories, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3293585/1/Harry_Potter_and_the_Unexpected_Visitor Harry Potter and the Unexpected Visitor]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3664961/1/Prodigy Prodigy]] by im100HPGWandRWHG (yep, he is a big fan of the Harry Potter Canon couples). The author, despite not being a native, can nonetheless write with better grammar than many English and American people in Fanfiction.net, and has managed to write two scenes which are quite good CrowningMomentOfAwesome in my opinion:

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** And then [[CoolOldGuy Fuyutsuki]] punches Soryu in the stomach hard enough to K.O. him, just for good measure.
--> '''Fuyutsuki''': "Sorry, --->'''Fuyutsuki''': Sorry, Commander. It seems my fist slipped. I apologize".
--> '''Gendo
apologize.
--->'''Gendo
(dismissively)''': "Ah.Ah. Well, don't let it happen again. By the way, Fuyutsuki, make sure he and his wife leave Japan as soon as possible. I think there is a military cargo flight bound for Germany leaving shortly. See to it they are on it before it leaves, will you?"
--> '''Fuyutsuki''': "By
you?
--->'''Fuyutsuki''': By
your command".
command.
* The Evangelion / DBZ Evangelion/DBZ crossover fic FanFic/EvaPossibilitiesAndFusionPandemonium has a few good ones, such as Vegeta utterly dominating Shamshel and then making a one-Saiyan siege to rescue his captive son from Gendo's clutches. Also, [[spoiler:Gogeta vs. Bardiel]].
* Few fanfics mimic their source material as perfectly as [[http://www.rdrop.com/~/wyvern/data/houseplants.html Houseplants of Gor]], a parody of John Norman's ''{{Gor}}'' series. It's simultaneously a CMoA CMOA and a CMoF.
CMOF.
* These two stories, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3293585/1/Harry_Potter_and_the_Unexpected_Visitor Harry Potter and the Unexpected Visitor]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3664961/1/Prodigy Prodigy]] by im100HPGWandRWHG (yep, he is a big fan of the Harry Potter Canon couples). The author, despite not being a native, can nonetheless write with better grammar than many English and American people in Fanfiction.net, and has managed to write two scenes which are quite good CrowningMomentOfAwesome in my opinion:



* I once read a crossover between Halloween and Buffy the vampire slayer, where Michael ends up coming to Sunnydale and stalking Willow. Well, after a LONG series of events, Michael has trapped Willow in her school, and has already taken out Xander twice (Neither time fatal) and managed to get the drop on Buffy. When Loomis shows up, he's got a plan. It basically boils down to bait Michael with Willow, then when he gets close enough STABS Micheal in the NECK WITH A SYRINGE FULL OF SEDATIVE, then savagely beating him to the floor via a pistol whipping. Your mileage may vary, but I liked it.
* There's a PhineasAndFerb fanfic called "Doof Wins" in which [[LoonyFan Irving]] of all people gets one. Doofenshmirtz is preparing to [[spoiler: disintegrate Perry The platypus]] when Irving shows up and assumes he wants to harm Phineas and Ferb. Then he jumps into the air and ''punches Doof in the face'', destroys the combine-inator (Long Story), and unfreezes Perry who then precedes to give Doof a severe beating. Yes Irving just single handily saved the day. Wow.
* One excellent Yu-Gi-Oh! fic by the name of [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4659502/1/ ''Homecoming'']] featured the long-suffering Ryou Bakura, always portrayed as the helpless woobie in fanfiction, finally being pushed to his breaking point and ''slamming Yami Bakura in the face with a freaking baseball bat''. If that isn't awesome, I don't know what is.
* There's the MassEffect SelfInsert ''Mass Vexations'', during which AuthorAvatar Art finds himself having to drive the Mako after Shepard suffers a hand injury. Aside from turning that entire section into a not-too-subtle BackToTheFuture reference, it's a moment of awesome on its own given that Art successfully drives Shepard and the crew to the Conduit. What makes it even better is that it's the cap of an entire fic's worth of character development for Art; he's gone from someone who's never fired a firearm to a very good soldier by Alliance standards.
* The LegendOfZelda [=FanFic=] ''[[{{Exoria}}The Legend of Zelda: Exoria]]'': Link, a member of Hylian Joint Intelligence, needs to find a vehicle which he can use to get Princess Zelda out of the city. He finds the MRX402A ULATRV, codename Epona, and proceeds to avoid two road blocks (blowing up one and avoiding the other by getting up on the curb and turning into an alley), outrun or lose a total of Humvees, outrun the crumbling of a highway cause by one of two attack helicopters shooting out the support with a missile, trick one attack helicopter into crashing into a building, ''drive up a breaking tree to get on the upper level of a highway'', fend off two gunsword wielders ''also'' on motorcycles, jump off one end of a drawbridge to land on the other, dodge a missile of the remaining helicopter whose blast cloud destroys said helicopter, and outrun a fricken' ''' ''spider mecha'' '''.

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* I once read a crossover between Halloween ''Halloween'' and Buffy the vampire slayer, ''BuffyTheVampireSlayer'', where Michael ends up coming to Sunnydale and stalking Willow. Well, after a LONG series of events, Michael has trapped Willow in her school, and has already taken out Xander twice (Neither time fatal) and managed to get the drop on Buffy. When Loomis shows up, he's got a plan. It basically boils down to bait Michael with Willow, then when he gets close enough STABS Micheal in the NECK WITH A SYRINGE FULL OF SEDATIVE, then savagely beating him to the floor via a pistol whipping. Your mileage may vary, but I liked it.
* There's a PhineasAndFerb ''PhineasAndFerb'' fanfic called "Doof Wins" in which [[LoonyFan Irving]] of all people gets one. Doofenshmirtz is preparing to [[spoiler: disintegrate [[spoiler:disintegrate Perry The platypus]] when Irving shows up and assumes he wants to harm Phineas and Ferb. Then he jumps into the air and ''punches Doof in the face'', destroys the combine-inator (Long Story), and unfreezes Perry who then precedes to give Doof a severe beating. Yes Irving just single handily saved the day. Wow.
Wow.
* One excellent Yu-Gi-Oh! ''Yu-Gi-Oh!'' fic by the name of [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4659502/1/ ''Homecoming'']] Homecoming]] featured the long-suffering Ryou Bakura, always portrayed as the helpless woobie in fanfiction, finally being pushed to his breaking point and ''slamming Yami Bakura in the face with a freaking baseball bat''. If that isn't awesome, I don't know what is.
bat''.
* There's the MassEffect ''MassEffect'' SelfInsert ''Mass Vexations'', during which AuthorAvatar Art finds himself having to drive the Mako after Shepard suffers a hand injury. Aside from turning that entire section into a not-too-subtle BackToTheFuture reference, it's a moment of awesome on its own given that Art successfully drives Shepard and the crew to the Conduit. What makes it even better is that it's the cap of an entire fic's worth of character development for Art; he's gone from someone who's never fired a firearm to a very good soldier by Alliance standards.
* The LegendOfZelda ''LegendOfZelda'' [=FanFic=] ''[[{{Exoria}}The ''[[{{Exoria}} The Legend of Zelda: Exoria]]'': Link, a member of Hylian Joint Intelligence, needs to find a vehicle which he can use to get Princess Zelda out of the city. He finds the MRX402A ULATRV, [=MRX402A=] [=ULATRV=], codename Epona, and proceeds to avoid two road blocks (blowing up one and avoiding the other by getting up on the curb and turning into an alley), outrun or lose a total of Humvees, outrun the crumbling of a highway cause by one of two attack helicopters shooting out the support with a missile, trick one attack helicopter into crashing into a building, ''drive up a breaking tree to get on the upper level of a highway'', fend off two gunsword wielders ''also'' on motorcycles, jump off one end of a drawbridge to land on the other, dodge a missile of the remaining helicopter whose blast cloud destroys said helicopter, and outrun a fricken' ''' ''spider mecha'' '''.



* In a massive multiplayer crossover, When worlds collide, where anime characters fight the super heroes and villains of the DCU In the final battle in Gotham city, which is split halfway with Konoha, due to the worlds merging, Black Adam fights all of the Z-fighters, and wins easily. He even rips Tien's arm off.

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* In a massive multiplayer crossover, When MassiveMultiplayerCrossover, when worlds collide, where anime characters fight the super heroes and villains of the DCU In the final battle in Gotham city, which is split halfway with Konoha, due to the worlds merging, Black Adam fights all of the Z-fighters, and wins easily. He even rips Tien's arm off.



* The absolutely wonderful HarryPotter fic ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3735743/1/The_Moment_It_Began The Moment It Began]]'' begins with a [=CMOA=]: Severus Snape, given the chance to go back and re-live his life starting from the day he pushed Lily away, not only never says "Mudblood", but hands James and Sirius their asses when they let their guard down, more than paying them back for every time they tortured him in his first life. It also ends with the most awesomely ironic death ever: [[spoiler: Voldemort gets ''[[WhyDontYaJustShootHim shot in the back of the head]]'' by Severus's reformed father, Tobias, in full PapaWolf mode]].
* From the ''DoctorWho'' DarkFic "[[http://www.whofic.com/viewstory.php?action=printable&textsize=0&sid=7981&chapter=all Psycho Savior, qu'est-ce que c'est?]]", five words:
-->'''Ninth Doctor:''' "Ha, ha! ''Drank your death.''"

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* The absolutely wonderful HarryPotter ''HarryPotter'' fic ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3735743/1/The_Moment_It_Began The Moment It Began]]'' begins with a [=CMOA=]: CMOA: Severus Snape, given the chance to go back and re-live his life starting from the day he pushed Lily away, not only never says "Mudblood", but hands James and Sirius their asses when they let their guard down, more than paying them back for every time they tortured him in his first life. It also ends with the most awesomely ironic death ever: [[spoiler: Voldemort gets ''[[WhyDontYaJustShootHim shot in the back of the head]]'' by Severus's reformed father, Tobias, in full PapaWolf mode]].
* From the ''DoctorWho'' DarkFic "[[http://www.whofic.com/viewstory.php?action=printable&textsize=0&sid=7981&chapter=all Psycho Savior, qu'est-ce que c'est?]]", five words:
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-->'''Ninth Doctor:''' "Ha, Ha, ha! ''Drank your death.''"''



-->'''Marlene:''' "Where did they take my son?"
-->'''Kidnapper #1:''' "Bite me."

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-->'''Kidnapper #1:''' "Bite Bite me."



-->'''Marlene:''' "Where did they take my son?"
** Kidnapper #2 spills the beans immediately. [[FireFly Captain Reynolds]] would be proud.

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-->'''Marlene:''' "Where Where did they take my son?"
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** Kidnapper #2 spills the beans immediately. [[FireFly [[{{Firefly}} Captain Reynolds]] would be proud.


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* A series of novelisations of the ''{{Half-Life}}'' games, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3147068/1/The_Black_Mesa_Incident The Black Mesa Incident]]'' and ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4389329/1/Welcome_to_City_17 Welcome to City 17]]'', are full to the brim with this trope, mostly by virtue of [[BadassBookworm Gordon Freeman]] being [[OneManArmy Gordon Freeman]]. Even by his standards there are plenty of exceptional moments, including Gordon destroying a Gunship by dropping a piece of a bridge on it, destroying another Gunship by directing it into a Strider's warp cannon, then destroying that same Strider by ''riding on top of it and jamming a grenade into it'', and killing the Nihilanth using nothing but his trusty crowbar, driving it straight into its brain.
* In the ''{{Touhou}}'' fanfiction ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5829008/1/ Imperfect Metamorphosis]]'', an indestructible being that can absorb any form of attack thrown at it, soon acquiring the abilities of another being that [[WalkingWasteland kills most things just by being near them]] and whose touch is potentially deadly to absolutely anyone, is loose in Gensoukyou. It swiftly dispatches its millenia-old creator, a RealityWarper, two stupidly powerful magicians and a bearer of impervious PlotArmor, leaving only Suika to fight it. After her treasured gourd is crushed in the battle, Suika acts [[BoisterousBruiser exactly like Suika]], proceeding to ''pound the ever-loving crap'' out of the life-ending monstrosity, leaving it (temporarily) broken and unconscious in a crater. Moral of the story: never force an oni to be sober.
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* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6266421/1/FATE_Holy_Grail_War_of_2814 FATE/Holy Grail War of 2814]], an offshoot story of FanFic/TakamichiNanohaOf2814, has Archer fighting the Wolkeritter by himself. Through a combination of Tracing, emotional manipulation based on his memories, and Unlimited Blade Works, he starts creating [[GreenLantern power rings]]. He starts with enraging the Wolkenritter by threatening Hayate, using their rage to make a Red ring (and making a giant angry construct of Rin), drawing on their love for her to make a Violet ring, and using Signum's will, Vita's hope, and Zafira's compassion to make Green, Blue, and Indigo. Despite bleeding from everywhere from the strain, he blasts them all with a Ring-Construct [[{{Nanoha}} Starlight Breaker]] big enough to be seen from orbit and uses their fear to make a Yellow ring.
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* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1837367/1/Children_of_the_Blue Children of the Blue]], a ''BlueGender'' fanfic, features the scene where Yuji's son is kidnapped, and two of the kidnappers have been caught and are now being interrogated. The interrogator? [[BadAss Marlene]] [[LadyOfWar Angel]], who happens to be the kidnapped boy's [[MamaBear mother]]. The kidnappers decide to cop an attitude. Anyone who's watched the show knows exactly how well ''that's'' going to work.
-->'''Marlene:''' "Where did they take my son?"
-->'''Kidnapper #1:''' "Bite me."
-->*Marlene [[PinkMist shoots him in the face]], and casually points her gun at Kidnapper #2.
-->'''Marlene:''' "Where did they take my son?"
** Kidnapper #2 spills the beans immediately. [[FireFly Captain Reynolds]] would be proud.
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* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3735743/1/The_Moment_It_Began The Moment It Began]] by Sindie can be a bit polarizing, but then you get to the end: Tobias Snape [[spoiler: kills Voldemort by [[WhyDontYaJustShootHim shooting him in the back of the head]]. [[PapaWolf Hol. Lee.]] ''[[LetsGetDangerous Shit]]''.

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* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3735743/1/The_Moment_It_Began The Moment It Began]] by Sindie can be a bit polarizing, but then you get to the end: Tobias Snape [[spoiler: kills Voldemort by [[WhyDontYaJustShootHim shooting him in the back of the head]]. ]] [[PapaWolf Hol. Lee.]] ''[[LetsGetDangerous Shit]]''.

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When [[SturgeonsLaw you come across the ten percent of fanfiction that's worth dying for]] (and even some that falls squarely under PoesLaw), there ''will'' be awesome.

Please keep in mind that this is a ''very'' subjective trope; what strikes one person as "HOLY SHIT THAT'S AWESOME!!!!" may strike you as "meh". '''[[RuleOfCautiousEditingJudgment Disagreeing with someone else's opinion is NOT a valid reason to delete their example.]]''' When in doubt, ''leave it alone''.

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** "And make sure to tell 'em, that was left-handed."
** Captain Victor Wallace gets one when he and a nameless Corporal are fighting the Nod troops in the pipes in Egypt. Not even getting shot point-blank in the chest with laser beams slows him down.



* ''Fanfic/{{Renegade}}'', a ''MassEffect[=/=]CommandAndConquer AlternateUniverse crossover, has several of these, but one of the very best is at the end of the fifth chapter, where [[spoiler: Kane makes his triumphant return after a hundred and fifty years by cutting off the Council in the middle of one of their speeches by hijacking the holoprojector in the Council Chamber.]]

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* ''Fanfic/{{Renegade}}'', a ''MassEffect[=/=]CommandAndConquer ''MassEffect[=/=]CommandAndConquer'' AlternateUniverse crossover, has several of these, but one of the very best is at the end of the fifth chapter, where [[spoiler: Kane makes his triumphant return after a hundred and fifty years by cutting off the Council in the middle of one of their speeches by hijacking the holoprojector in the Council Chamber.]]]]
** Jenkins gets one when he kills eight geth in about as many seconds, including a Destroyer, in close combat. [[spoiler: Then Saren kills him by scrambling his targeting and releasing the buzzers.]]
** Sovereign earns a moment when it faces off against a GDI ion cannon array that is explicitly described as being able to destroy the most powerful dreadnoughts in anyone's fleet. It actually outmaneuvers the arrays around Eden Prime by bombarding them at a distance and then forcing them to expend their shots at a distant target, and the jumps into FTL right before the beams reach its position. The array in question dumps all its capacitors into the guns to recharge instantly, and delivers a point-blank blast into the Reaper - which Sovereign shrugs off, suffering only superficial damage, and then clinically destroys the array before moving on.
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\n* [[http://www.mgcomics.com/GOTF/index.php?ep=1216609140 Ghosts of the Future]], a [[SonicTheHedgehog Sonic]] fan-comic gets one around the Secret Rings arc with [[http://www.mgcomics.com/GOTF/index.php?ep=1239517972 "I'm the ghost writer of this story"]]. (Another bit of awesome, look at the improvement in the art) There was also "[[ShoutOut Let's]] [[DarkwingDuck get]] [[LetsGetDangerous dangerous]]", but that was great for different reasons.
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* The first novel of ''Dumbledore's Army and the Year of Darkness'' is, essentially, one long Crowning Moment for Neville Longbottom.

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** [[spoiler: Thunderstrike]] calls in the [[Cavalry Cavalry]]

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** Daredevil [[spoiler: Killing the Kingpin, [[EyeScream WITH HER EYES!]]]]
** [[FamousLastWords IT'S CLOBBERIN' TIIIIIIIIME!]]
** [[spoiler: Thunderstrike]] calls in the [[Cavalry Cavalry]]
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* ''Awesomet/{{Anti-Cliche and Mary-Sue Elimination Society}}''

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* ''CrowningMoment/MyImmortal''
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