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* The way our group enters Cheney's place at the [[http://www.star-crossedcomic.com/fnr/fnr_10_6.html start of chapter 10]]. The very moment in itself is awesome enough, but the best part is that it is done by combining powers: Stephen and Jon clear the monsters, Anderson and Steve make a gap in the shield, and Tek and Rob finally open the 'door'. Bonus points if [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ACiwHP7TOPE this]] song with a fitting title is playing in the background.
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* The way our group enters Cheney's place at the [[http://www.star-crossedcomic.com/fnr/fnr_10_6.html start of chapter 10]]. The very moment in itself is awesome enough, but the best part is that it is done by combining powers: Stephen and Jon [[TheWarSequence clear the monsters, monsters]], Anderson and Steve make a gap in the shield, and Tek and Rob finally open the 'door'. Bonus points if [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ACiwHP7TOPE this]] song with a fitting title is playing in the background.
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* Brian Williams, of {{NBC}} Nightly News, saves Steve Carrell and neutralizes Stephanos, whose own charisma allowed him to ''conquer his homeworld'', using only the gravitas of a Real Newscaster... plus a little help from his winning smile and soulful eyes. He later casts CharmPerson on one of Cheney's hell-beasts and rides it into the final battle, emerging, at the end, ''unscathed''.
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* Brian Williams, of {{NBC}} Creator/{{NBC}} Nightly News, saves Steve Carrell and neutralizes Stephanos, whose own charisma allowed him to ''conquer his homeworld'', using only the gravitas of a Real Newscaster... plus a little help from his winning smile and soulful eyes. He later casts CharmPerson on one of Cheney's hell-beasts and rides it into the final battle, emerging, at the end, ''unscathed''.
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* The way our group enters Cheney's place at the [[http://www.star-crossedcomic.com/fnr/fnr_10_6.html start of chapter 10]]. The very moment in itself is awesome enough, but the best part is that it is done by combining powers: Stephen and Jon clear the monsters, Anderson and Steve make a gap in the shield, and Tek and Rob finally open the 'door'. Bonus points if [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ACiwHP7TOPE this]] song with a fitting title is playing in the background.
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* Brian Williams, of {{NBC}} Nightly News, saves Steve Carrell and neutralizes Stephanos, whose own charisma allowed him to ''conquer his homeworld'', using only the gravitas of a Real Newscaster... plus a little help from his winning smile and soulful eyes. He later casts CharmPerson on one of Cheney's hell-beasts and rides it into battle, emerging, at the end, ''unscathed''.
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* Brian Williams, of {{NBC}} Nightly News, saves Steve Carrell and neutralizes Stephanos, whose own charisma allowed him to ''conquer his homeworld'', using only the gravitas of a Real Newscaster... plus a little help from his winning smile and soulful eyes. He later casts CharmPerson on one of Cheney's hell-beasts and rides it into the final battle, emerging, at the end, ''unscathed''.
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-->'''Williams: ''[[ItMakesSenseInContext "And if you're lucky, I'll read the phone book to you later!"]]'''''
-->'''Williams: ''[[ItMakesSenseInContext "And if you're lucky, I'll read the phone book to you later!"]]'''''
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* Brian Williams, of {{NBC}} Nightly News, saves Steve Carrell and neutralizes Stephanos, whose own charisma allowed him to ''conquer his homeworld'', using only the gravitas of a Real Newscaster... plus a little help from his winning smile and soulful eyes. He later casts CharmPerson on one of Cheney's hell-beasts and rides it into battle, emerging, at the end, ''apparently unscathed''.
-->'''Williams: ''[[ItMakesSenseInContext "And if you're lucky, I'll read the phone book to you later!"]]'''''''unscathed''.
-->'''Williams: ''[[ItMakesSenseInContext "And if you're lucky, I'll read the phone book to you later!"]]'''''
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* Brian Williams, of {{NBC}} Nightly News, saves Steve Carrell and neutralizes Stephanos, whose own charisma allowed him to ''conquer his homeworld'', using only the gravitas of a Real Newscaster... plus a little help from his winning smile and soulful eyes. He later casts CharmPerson on one of Cheney's hell-beasts and rides it into battle.battle, emerging, at the end, ''apparently unscathed''.
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* [[http://www.star-crossedcomic.com/fnr/fnr_12_9.html Jon and his Tesla Bat tells Dark Lord Cheney where to stick it.]]
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* Brian Williams, of {{NBC}} Nightly News, saves Steve Carrell and neutralizes Stephanos, whose own charisma allowed him to ''conquer his homeworld'', using only the gravitas of a Real Newscaster... plus a little help from his winning smile and soulful eyes. He later casts CharmPerson on one of Cheney's hell-beasts, hell-beasts and rides it like a tank into battle.
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* Brian Williams, of {{NBC}} Nightly News, saves Steve Carrell and neutralizes Stephanos, whose own charisma allowed him to ''conquer his homeworld'', using only the ''gravitas'' of a Real Newscaster... plus a little help from his winning smile and soulful eyes.
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* Brian Williams, of {{NBC}} Nightly News, saves Steve Carrell and neutralizes Stephanos, whose own charisma allowed him to ''conquer his homeworld'', using only the ''gravitas'' gravitas of a Real Newscaster... plus a little help from his winning smile and soulful eyes. He later casts CharmPerson on one of Cheney's hell-beasts, and rides it like a tank into battle.
-->'''Williams: ''[[ItMakesSenseInContext "And if you're lucky, I'll read the phone book to you later!"]]'''''
-->'''Williams: ''[[ItMakesSenseInContext "And if you're lucky, I'll read the phone book to you later!"]]'''''
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[[http://www.star-crossedcomic.com/fnr/fnr_10_18.html YOU HAVE YOURSELF A FORMIDABLE OPPONENT!]]
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* [[http://www.star-crossedcomic.com/fnr/fnr_10_18.html YOU HAVE YOURSELF A FORMIDABLE OPPONENT!]]OPPONENT!]]
* Brian Williams, of {{NBC}} Nightly News, saves Steve Carrell and neutralizes Stephanos, whose own charisma allowed him to ''conquer his homeworld'', using only the ''gravitas'' of a Real Newscaster... plus a little help from his winning smile and soulful eyes.
* Brian Williams, of {{NBC}} Nightly News, saves Steve Carrell and neutralizes Stephanos, whose own charisma allowed him to ''conquer his homeworld'', using only the ''gravitas'' of a Real Newscaster... plus a little help from his winning smile and soulful eyes.