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* ''Fanfic/TriptychContinuum'': In ''Luna's Lottery Lunacy'', it is stated that the Lunar Courtyard exists under a illusory total solar eclipse during the day. The problem, of course, is that under Equestria's cosmology Sun and Moon are never naturally in the sky at the same time, and as such a solar eclipse will never occur without someone going to great effort to specifically arrange it. In response, ''A Total Eclipse Of The Fun'' establishes that the Diarchs witnessed eclipses during the Discordant Era and revolves around Celestia and Princess Luna arranging a solar eclipse in celebration of the one-year anniversary of Princess Luna's Return.

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* A common complaint about ''FanFic/DumbledoresArmyAndTheYearOfDarkness'' is that the Cruciatus Curse is demoted from being a nightmarish torture to the equivalent of flogging -- the students take to ''bragging'' about how often they get cruciated. Thanfiction wrote a scene in Chapter 21 of the first story where Neville, facing Bellatrix, gets hit with the curse -- and thinks to himself, just before he whites out from the pain, that the Carrows never did a ''proper'' one.



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* A common complaint about ''FanFic/DumbledoresArmyAndTheYearOfDarkness'' is that the Cruciatus Curse is demoted from being a nightmarish torture to the equivalent of flogging -- the students take to ''bragging'' about how often they get cruciated. Thanfiction wrote a scene in Chapter 21 of the first story where Neville, facing Bellatrix, gets hit with the curse -- and thinks to himself, just before he whites out from the pain, that the Carrows never did a ''proper'' one.
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* ''Fanfic/ShadowsOverMeridian'' (''WesternAnimation/JackieChanAdventures'' & ''WesternAnimation/{{WITCH}}''): After several readers complained about how unlikable Caleb was being made by his [[RonTheDeathEater characterization]] as a KnightTemplar, Chapter 11 gives him several {{Freudian Excuse}}s for his behavior -- most prominently, the fact that his hopes of ending the war and being able to retire to a normal life with Cornelia have been dashed by the Knights of Vengeance and Jade/Kage's actions, as well as the revelation that everything the Rebellion sacrificed was just part of Nerissa's master plan, all of which is pushing him to his emotional and mental breaking point.

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* ''Fanfic/ShadowsOverMeridian'' (''WesternAnimation/JackieChanAdventures'' & ''WesternAnimation/{{WITCH}}''): After several readers complained about how unlikable Caleb was being made by his [[RonTheDeathEater characterization]] characterization as a KnightTemplar, Chapter 11 gives him several {{Freudian Excuse}}s for his behavior -- most prominently, the fact that his hopes of ending the war and being able to retire to a normal life with Cornelia have been dashed by the Knights of Vengeance and Jade/Kage's actions, as well as the revelation that everything the Rebellion sacrificed was just part of Nerissa's master plan, all of which is pushing him to his emotional and mental breaking point.

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* ''Fanfic/TheEquestrianWindMage'': A lot of readers' viewed the Equestrian villains getting the short end of the stick, the Zelda villains being the major threat with [[spoiler:Ganondorf overpowering the Elements and Daring Do getting her flank kicked by the Church of Majora]], and Vaati single-handedly dealing with all the major villains while the Mane Six barely did anything. Come Season 2, and not only do the Mane Six hold their weight, they're the ones to finish off nearly every boss monster [[spoiler: including Demise himself]]. Lampshaded during that last example, when Twilight points out that they've been relying on him the whole time, but now that he's too exhausted to continue, they'll have to finish it themselves.

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* ''Fanfic/TheEquestrianWindMage'': A lot of readers' viewed the Equestrian villains getting the short end of the stick, the Zelda villains being the major threat with [[spoiler:Ganondorf overpowering the Elements and Daring Do getting her flank kicked by the Church of Majora]], and Vaati single-handedly dealing with all the major villains while the Mane Six barely did anything. Come Season 2, and not only do the Mane Six hold their weight, they're the ones to finish off nearly every boss monster [[spoiler: including [[spoiler:including Demise himself]]. Lampshaded during that last example, when Twilight points out that they've been relying on him the whole time, but now that he's too exhausted to continue, they'll have to finish it themselves.



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** After [[spoiler: she's split off from Lena Luthor, Morgan Le Fay is shown in ''Counterpart Conferences'' to have altered her appearance to now look like Creator/ElizabethHurley as Morgan in the ''Series/{{Runaways 2017}}'' show.]]

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** After [[spoiler: she's [[spoiler:she's split off from Lena Luthor, Morgan Le Fay is shown in ''Counterpart Conferences'' to have altered her appearance to now look like Creator/ElizabethHurley as Morgan in the ''Series/{{Runaways 2017}}'' show.]]



** In addition, it's noted that AIs are still common among humans living ''outside'' of Citadel law and influence [[spoiler: or working for ONI]].

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** In addition, it's noted that AIs are still common among humans living ''outside'' of Citadel law and influence [[spoiler: or [[spoiler:or working for ONI]].



** The revelation about what happened to Linka ([[spoiler: and Lane and Lars]]) was probably intended to do this, but how effective it was is up to you.
** If you were getting tired of the bros not seeing the truth about Linka, or being in denial, chapter 20 has [[spoiler: Luke, Lars and Loki]] discover the truth by visiting the girl herself, and are left ''broken'' when she states she doesn't want to come home.

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** The revelation about what happened to Linka ([[spoiler: and ([[spoiler:and Lane and Lars]]) was probably intended to do this, but how effective it was is up to you.
** If you were getting tired of the bros not seeing the truth about Linka, or being in denial, chapter 20 has [[spoiler: Luke, [[spoiler:Luke, Lars and Loki]] discover the truth by visiting the girl herself, and are left ''broken'' when she states she doesn't want to come home.



* ''Fanfic/AftermathOfTheGames'' was criticized over Twilight [[WhatIf defeating the villainous Starlight Glimmer]] by [[spoiler: {{Ret Gone}}ing her via adopting her younger self and taking her away to the future]], which lead to an EsotericHappyEnding. The sequel, ''Integration'', addressed some concerns the fans had [[WholeEpisodeFlashback by using an interlude chapter to flashback to the event in question]]. It shows that Twilight did offer Starlight the same chance of redemption that she got in canon, but [[RedemptionRejection she refused and became even more dangerous]], meaning that [[ShootTheDog Twilight really DID have no other choice]]. Also, despite her friends, brother, and fellow princesses being extremely supportive of her decision and believing that it was necessary in those circumstances, Twilight is haunted by what she did, feeling like [[spoiler: she had purposely murdered the original Starlight, which combined with her being [[AscendedFridgeHorror fully aware of]] the [[ButterflyOfDoom possible ramifications of altering the timeline]] meant she felt undeserving to be filly Starlight's adoptive mom]].

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* ''Fanfic/AftermathOfTheGames'' was criticized over Twilight [[WhatIf defeating the villainous Starlight Glimmer]] by [[spoiler: {{Ret [[spoiler:{{Ret Gone}}ing her via adopting her younger self and taking her away to the future]], which lead to an EsotericHappyEnding. The sequel, ''Integration'', addressed some concerns the fans had [[WholeEpisodeFlashback by using an interlude chapter to flashback to the event in question]]. It shows that Twilight did offer Starlight the same chance of redemption that she got in canon, but [[RedemptionRejection she refused and became even more dangerous]], meaning that [[ShootTheDog Twilight really DID have no other choice]]. Also, despite her friends, brother, and fellow princesses being extremely supportive of her decision and believing that it was necessary in those circumstances, Twilight is haunted by what she did, feeling like [[spoiler: she [[spoiler:she had purposely murdered the original Starlight, which combined with her being [[AscendedFridgeHorror fully aware of]] the [[ButterflyOfDoom possible ramifications of altering the timeline]] meant she felt undeserving to be filly Starlight's adoptive mom]].



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* ''Fanfic/TruePotential'':
** Prior to Chapter 27, several readers complained that Naruto was too weak as a result of relying on the Kyūbi too much. [=DryBonesKing=] acknowledged the complaints in the Author's Note at the end of Chapter 27 and decided, in regards to Naruto's fight in that chapter, to remove a few elements of the fight where Naruto would have used the demon's chakra to show how he can fight on his own.
** When Chapter 55 was first published, [[spoiler:Naruto initially let go of Hidan's head following their fight during said chapter]]. Many readers complained over how stupid it was that [[spoiler:he didn't bring Hidan's head back to Konoha instead]]. Recognizing his mistake, the author updated the chapter about one week later. In the updated version, [[spoiler:Naruto attempts to bring Hidan's head back to Konoha by sealing it inside a scroll, but Zetsu intervenes and prevents him from doing so]].



* ''FanFic/AgesOfShadow'': Partway through the Third Age portion of the story, Mildred ends up [[spoiler: getting her [[EyeScream eyes gouged out]]]]. Fan complaints about this weren't so much about the event in question as they were the fact that it's mostly glazed over, with very little direct reaction to it. Later chapters responded by having characters discuss it, and even giving Mildred a subplot wherein [[spoiler: she learns to use shadow magic to compensate for the lack of eyesight]].

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* ''FanFic/AgesOfShadow'': Partway through the Third Age portion of the story, Mildred ends up [[spoiler: getting [[spoiler:getting her [[EyeScream eyes gouged out]]]]. Fan complaints about this weren't so much about the event in question as they were the fact that it's mostly glazed over, with very little direct reaction to it. Later chapters responded by having characters discuss it, and even giving Mildred a subplot wherein [[spoiler: she [[spoiler:she learns to use shadow magic to compensate for the lack of eyesight]].
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--> '''Peter Chimaera''': Auithors notel Digimon is a new Digimon because there is not actual Digimon that is called Digimon he is a new one that I invented

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* ''Fanfic/AftermathOfTheGames'' was criticized over Twilight [[ForWantOfANail defeating the villainous Starlight Glimmer]] by [[spoiler: {{Ret Gone}}ing her via adopting her younger self and taking her away to the future]], which lead to an EsotericHappyEnding. The sequel, ''Integration'', addressed some concerns the fans had [[WholeEpisodeFlashback by using an interlude chapter to flashback to the event in question]]. It shows that Twilight did offer Starlight the same chance of redemption that she got in canon, but [[RedemptionRejection she refused and became even more dangerous]], meaning that [[ShootTheDog Twilight really DID have no other choice]]. Also, despite her friends, brother, and fellow princesses being extremely supportive of her decision and believing that it was necessary in those circumstances, Twilight is haunted by what she did, feeling like [[spoiler: she had purposely murdered the original Starlight, which combined with her being [[AscendedFridgeHorror fully aware of]] the [[ButterflyOfDoom possible ramifications of altering the timeline]] meant she felt undeserving to be filly Starlight's adoptive mom]].

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* ''Fanfic/AftermathOfTheGames'' was criticized over Twilight [[ForWantOfANail [[WhatIf defeating the villainous Starlight Glimmer]] by [[spoiler: {{Ret Gone}}ing her via adopting her younger self and taking her away to the future]], which lead to an EsotericHappyEnding. The sequel, ''Integration'', addressed some concerns the fans had [[WholeEpisodeFlashback by using an interlude chapter to flashback to the event in question]]. It shows that Twilight did offer Starlight the same chance of redemption that she got in canon, but [[RedemptionRejection she refused and became even more dangerous]], meaning that [[ShootTheDog Twilight really DID have no other choice]]. Also, despite her friends, brother, and fellow princesses being extremely supportive of her decision and believing that it was necessary in those circumstances, Twilight is haunted by what she did, feeling like [[spoiler: she had purposely murdered the original Starlight, which combined with her being [[AscendedFridgeHorror fully aware of]] the [[ButterflyOfDoom possible ramifications of altering the timeline]] meant she felt undeserving to be filly Starlight's adoptive mom]].



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** While [[Franchise/{{Pokemon}} the Pokémon Trainer]] is one of the most beloved fighters in ''Ultimate'', some Charizard mains from ''[=3DS/Wii U=]'' were [[IncrediblyLamePun burned]] by their favorite character no longer being a standalone fighter. As with ''VideoGame/ProjectM'', ''EX'' features Charizard along with Squirtle and Ivysaur as standalone fighters with more intricate movesets, all while bringing back most of the ''Ultimate'' cast and multiple newcomers so as to make less of a sacrifice in terms of roster size than ''PM'' and ''Project+''.

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** While [[Franchise/{{Pokemon}} the Pokémon Trainer]] is one of the most beloved fighters in ''Ultimate'', some Charizard mains from ''[=3DS/Wii U=]'' were [[IncrediblyLamePun [[{{Pun}} burned]] by their favorite character no longer being a standalone fighter. As with ''VideoGame/ProjectM'', ''EX'' features Charizard along with Squirtle and Ivysaur as standalone fighters with more intricate movesets, all while bringing back most of the ''Ultimate'' cast and multiple newcomers so as to make less of a sacrifice in terms of roster size than ''PM'' and ''Project+''.

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*''Fanfic/Quiververse''
**''A Shimmering New Year'' was meant to be this after critical reception brought up flaws in ''Wherever You Find Love''. Further edits to the former story, however, led to one of the epilogues for ''Many Happy Reunions'' being written to address issues raised there.
** When the first version of the Vignette for ''Luna Eclipsed'' was met with similar reception, a new one was written to take its place.
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* In the original ''Film/{{Stargate}}'' film, the name of Daniel Jackson's wife was Sha'uri, but in ''Series/StargateSG1'' the character's name was Sha're. "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/979473/ One Dimension Removed]]" acknowledges and justifies the change as Sha're literally changing her name; "Sha'uri" meant "finding peace in Ra" while "Sha're" means "rebellion against Ra", which seemed more appropriate after she joined the rebellion against the Goa'uld in question.

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