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* DysfunctionalFamily: The [=McAlistairs=]; Annabel is stated to have been emotionally abused by her parents, when she dies her heartbroken young son Edgar never quite recovers, an adult Edgar ends up blackmailing his love Fay into marrying him, leading to her hating him and raising their son to hate him as well. "The Old Trunk in the Attic" even goes over various mementos of other, unseen [=McAlistairs=] who are implied to have had their own tragedies, from broken hearts to children who died young.
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* DysfunctionalFamily: The [=McAlistairs=]; Annabel is stated to have been emotionally abused by her parents, when she dies her heartbroken young son Edgar never quite recovers, and an adult Edgar ends up blackmailing his love Fay into marrying him, leading to her hating him and raising their son to hate him as well. "The Old Trunk in the Attic" even goes over various mementos of other, unseen [=McAlistairs=] who are implied to have had their own tragedies, from broken hearts to children who died young.
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** Annabel successfully figures out how to raise the dead but her UnrequitedLove CameBackWrong.
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** Annabel successfully figures out how to raise the dead but her UnrequitedLove CameBackWrong.didn't want to be resurrected and wishes to die again.
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* DysfunctionalFamily: The [=McAlistairs=].
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* DysfunctionalFamily: The [=McAlistairs=]. [=McAlistairs=]; Annabel is stated to have been emotionally abused by her parents, when she dies her heartbroken young son Edgar never quite recovers, an adult Edgar ends up blackmailing his love Fay into marrying him, leading to her hating him and raising their son to hate him as well. "The Old Trunk in the Attic" even goes over various mementos of other, unseen [=McAlistairs=] who are implied to have had their own tragedies, from broken hearts to children who died young.
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* AllThereInTheManual: While never said in the musical proper, the author Paul Shapera revealed in interviews the names of the narrator and Soldier 7285: Kate and Saul/Paul.
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-->''"Annabel no friends, you must be brilliant and the best\\
You must be better and industrious, or you are worthless"''
You must be better and industrious, or you are worthless"''
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* AndIMustScream: The titular dolls of Albion are the souls of the dead, [[spoiler:taken from the eternal paradise of Elysium to be trapped in mechanical dolls that can barely move. As they can't really communicate--save for Jasper, who learned how to manage over his long history as a doll--they are treated like literal objects for their own loved ones to project whatever they want onto, longing to die and return to Elysium but stuck in bodies which don't even age. Act 3 makes it clear that the dolls are suffering.]]
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** All of the dolls in New Albion are this really.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: [[spoiler: Jasper, after four generations of begging for death, finally gets his wish--at the cost of Priscilla's life.]]
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: [[spoiler: Jasper, after four generations of begging for death, finally gets his wish--at the cost of Priscilla's life.]]
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** All of the dolls in New Albion are this really.
the souls of the dead resurrected and placed in mechanical dolls.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor:[[spoiler: Jasper, [[spoiler:Jasper, after four generations of begging for death, finally gets his wish--at the cost of Priscilla's life.]]
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor:
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* CameBackWrong: Pretty much the driving force of the novel. The Dolls go ''somewhere'' when they die and being removed from it results in them being near-catatonic even if they are recognizably the people they were before to their loved ones.
* CityOfAdventure: New Albion itself is the main setting of the story and undergoes various upheavals thanks to the [=McAlistairs=]. Even aside from that, the opening songs boast of the city having various fantastical and exciting elements completely removed from the main story, such as the drama of the city's mafia family, alchemists who can make pearls out of dreams, and the [[HeroOfAnotherStory exploits of two catburglars and their animal companions]].
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* {{Dystopia}}: [[spoiler: After Act III, New Albion becomes this.]]
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* {{Dystopia}}: [[spoiler: After Act III, New Albion becomes this.a police state ruled by marshal law, where the anti-doll regime is so extreme that people aren't allowed to even keep mementos of their deceased loved ones, and if you're found with a doll you'll be killed on-sight.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice:
** [[spoiler: Priscilla sacrifices her life so Jasper can die (again).]]
** [[spoiler: Priscilla sacrifices her life so Jasper can die (again).]]
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* HeroicSacrifice:
**HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Priscilla sacrifices her life so Jasper can die (again).]]
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* IncompatibleOrientation:
** Amelia to Byron. Have we mentioned AllLoveIsUnrequited?
** To make this worse for poor Amelia, Byron later does marry a lady for political purposes, as the fourth generation focuses on his daughter Priscilla. [[spoiler: Amelia is dead by then and even if she'd been alive, it would unlikely be happy for Byron at least...]]
** Amelia to Byron. Have we mentioned AllLoveIsUnrequited?
** To make this worse for poor Amelia, Byron later does marry a lady for political purposes, as the fourth generation focuses on his daughter Priscilla. [[spoiler: Amelia is dead by then and even if she'd been alive, it would unlikely be happy for Byron at least...]]
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* IncompatibleOrientation:
**IncompatibleOrientation: Amelia loves Byron, who is confirmed to Byron. Have we mentioned AllLoveIsUnrequited?
**be homosexual. To make this worse for poor Amelia, Byron later does marry a lady for political purposes, as the fourth generation focuses on his daughter Priscilla. [[spoiler: Amelia is dead by then and even if she'd been alive, it would unlikely be happy for Byron at least...]]
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* {{Irony}}:
** Byron [=McAlistair=] despises his father and wants to be nothing like him, but his style of singing is the same salesman pitch that Edgar used, and like his father he also [[spoiler:forces someone to be with him for his own emotional needs, albeit in his case it's not romantic.]]
** Near the end of Act 3 Byron desperately [[spoiler:searches New Albion to save Jasper from the bonfire of dolls]], blissfully unaware that [[spoiler:the only thing Jasper wants is to die.]]
** Byron [=McAlistair=] despises his father and wants to be nothing like him, but his style of singing is the same salesman pitch that Edgar used, and like his father he also [[spoiler:forces someone to be with him for his own emotional needs, albeit in his case it's not romantic.]]
** Near the end of Act 3 Byron desperately [[spoiler:searches New Albion to save Jasper from the bonfire of dolls]], blissfully unaware that [[spoiler:the only thing Jasper wants is to die.]]
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* LoveMakesYouEvil: [[spoiler:Fay dumping Edgar for someone else does not make him happy.]]
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* LoveMakesYouEvil: [[spoiler:Fay dumping Edgar for someone else [[spoiler:While he clearly does not make him happy.benefit financially from Annabelle's formula for raising the dead, Edgar's crueler actions--namely financially ruining his rival in love and blackmailing Fay into marrying him--are all motivated by wanting Fay back after she dumped him.]]
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* MadScientist: Annabel, of course, and Edgar as well, to a lesser extent.
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* MadScientist: Annabel, of course, Annabel is a downplayed version, as her research into resurrecting the dead and Edgar her abusive upbringing has left her a social outcast with "problems" going outside her laboratory, but she does have some ethical scruples as well, she undid the results of her experiment after learning she was causing harm. It's played with in regards to her son Edgar; his being able to [[spoiler:replicate Annabel's formula]] suggests he has some scientific knowledge, but he views it through a lesser extent. businessman lens.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Although initially ecstatic to have her once-dead love Jasper back with her, once Annabel actually listens to the sounds Jasper is broadcasting, she realizes [[spoiler:that he hates being alive and was happy in Elysium. Horrified, she destroys the doll with an axe, putting him back to rest, and never tells a soul about her formula for raising the dead.]]
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Although initially ecstatic to have her once-dead love Jasper back with her, once Annabel actually listens to the sounds Jasper is broadcasting, she realizes [[spoiler:that he hates being alive and was happy in Elysium. Horrified, she destroys the doll with an axe, putting him back to rest, and never tells a soul about her formula for raising the dead.]]
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** Edgar makes this his life's mission after [[spoiler: Fay leaves him. Once he succeeds, Fay vows revenge unto him.]]
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** Edgar makes this his life's mission to get revenge on his romantic rival after [[spoiler: Fay leaves him. Once [[spoiler:Once he succeeds, Fay vows revenge unto him, leading her to turn their son Byron against him.]]
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** [[YouAreNumberSix Soldier 7285]] eventually vows this [[spoiler: upon the government of New Albion after Priscilla's death.]]
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** [[YouAreNumberSix Soldier 7285]] eventually vows this [[spoiler: upon revenge [[spoiler:upon the government of New Albion after Priscilla's death.]]
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* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Annabel/Annabelle/Annabella.
* {{Steampunk}}: The Dolls of New Albion: ''A Steampunk Opera''.
* SuicideByCop: [[spoiler: Priscilla sacrifices herself to let Jasper return to the afterlife by doing this.]]
* {{Steampunk}}: The Dolls of New Albion: ''A Steampunk Opera''.
* SuicideByCop: [[spoiler: Priscilla sacrifices herself to let Jasper return to the afterlife by doing this.]]
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* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Annabel/Annabelle/Annabella.
Annabel/Annabelle/Annabella--the vocals themselves switch between "Annabel" and "Annabella" depending on what fits the meter.
* {{Steampunk}}: TheDolls album is itself titled a "steampunk opera" and features a vaguely Victorian-era fantasy setting with alchemists, machinery, clock-inspired instrumentals, and a theme of New Albion: ''A Steampunk Opera''.
subversive anarchy in the third act.
* SuicideByCop: [[spoiler: Priscilla sacrifices herself to let Jasper return to the afterlife bydoing this.calling new Albion's doll-hunting police to their doorstep. She is killed for harboring a doll, while Jasper is destroyed.]]
* {{Steampunk}}: The
* SuicideByCop: [[spoiler: Priscilla sacrifices herself to let Jasper return to the afterlife by
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* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: Annabel struts around New Albion with a life-sized mechanical doll and no one seems to care, probably because there is a lot of weirder stuff going on.
-->'''Narrator:''' "New Albion today / With bustling streets, machines, cafes / And the nice, the wise, the eccentric and insane"
-->'''Narrator:''' "New Albion today / With bustling streets, machines, cafes / And the nice, the wise, the eccentric and insane"
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* LovingAShadow: The source behind Annabel and Byron's love for Jasper, wanting a submissive partner (or father figure) they can project whatever they want onto for their own emotional problems rather than an actual person. Notably Priscilla is the only [=McAlistair=] who learns how to have a conversation with him.
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* LovingAShadow: The source behind Annabel and Byron's love for Jasper, Jasper is wanting a submissive partner (or father figure) they can project whatever they want onto for their own emotional problems gratification rather than an actual person. Notably Priscilla is the only [=McAlistair=] who learns how to have a conversation with him.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: At the end of Act 3, [[spoiler: Byron gives a speech to try and rally the population back to his side after the song being played by the dolls leads Amelia to kill herself. This involves telling them that they're pushing a doll into the position of Mayor and that their kids are all dancing each night with the dead.]]
-->'''Narrator:''' [[spoiler: "Kill the dolls! Kill the dolls!" everyone screamed.]]
-->'''Byron:''' Now hold on, this isn't at all what we mean!
* {{Revenge}}:
** Edgar makes this his life's mission after [[spoiler: Fay leaves him. Once he succeeds, Fay vows revenge unto him.]]
-->'''Edgar:''' One day, you will learn, and you will burn like my heart burns!
** [[YouAreNumberSix Soldier 7285]] eventually vows this [[spoiler: upon the government of New Albion after Priscilla's death.]]
-->'''Narrator:''' [[spoiler: "Kill the dolls! Kill the dolls!" everyone screamed.]]
-->'''Byron:''' Now hold on, this isn't at all what we mean!
* {{Revenge}}:
** Edgar makes this his life's mission after [[spoiler: Fay leaves him. Once he succeeds, Fay vows revenge unto him.]]
-->'''Edgar:''' One day, you will learn, and you will burn like my heart burns!
** [[YouAreNumberSix Soldier 7285]] eventually vows this [[spoiler: upon the government of New Albion after Priscilla's death.]]
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* SingleLineOfDescent: All four generations of [=McAlistairs=] are only children.
* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Annabel/Annabelle/Annabella.
* {{Steampunk}}: The Dolls of New Albion: ''A Steampunk Opera''.
* SuicideByCop: [[spoiler: Priscilla sacrifices herself to let Jasper return to the afterlife by doing this.]]
* TogetherInDeath: [[spoiler:Priscilla's]] song at the very end [[spoiler: suggests she expects to see Jasper again in the afterlife after they've both been killed by the police.]] The third installment in the series shows that [[spoiler:this won't happen, as Priscilla repeatedly reincarnates, making this a subversion.]]
* UnwantedRevival: From the moment Annabel brings him back, Jasper just wants to be dead again.
* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: Annabel struts around New Albion with a life-sized mechanical doll and no one seems to care, probably because there is a lot of weirder stuff going on.
-->'''Narrator:''' "New Albion today / With bustling streets, machines, cafes / And the nice, the wise, the eccentric and insane"
* VillainSong: "Edgar Builds a Business" is a cheerful, carnival-esque tune about Edgar building a massive fortune, and then using it to utterly ruin his romantic rival and extort Fay into getting back together with him.
* YouAreNumberSix: Soldier 7285.
* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Annabel/Annabelle/Annabella.
* {{Steampunk}}: The Dolls of New Albion: ''A Steampunk Opera''.
* SuicideByCop: [[spoiler: Priscilla sacrifices herself to let Jasper return to the afterlife by doing this.]]
* TogetherInDeath: [[spoiler:Priscilla's]] song at the very end [[spoiler: suggests she expects to see Jasper again in the afterlife after they've both been killed by the police.]] The third installment in the series shows that [[spoiler:this won't happen, as Priscilla repeatedly reincarnates, making this a subversion.]]
* UnwantedRevival: From the moment Annabel brings him back, Jasper just wants to be dead again.
* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: Annabel struts around New Albion with a life-sized mechanical doll and no one seems to care, probably because there is a lot of weirder stuff going on.
-->'''Narrator:''' "New Albion today / With bustling streets, machines, cafes / And the nice, the wise, the eccentric and insane"
* VillainSong: "Edgar Builds a Business" is a cheerful, carnival-esque tune about Edgar building a massive fortune, and then using it to utterly ruin his romantic rival and extort Fay into getting back together with him.
* YouAreNumberSix: Soldier 7285.
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Priscilla knows Jasper doesn't want to live, that's why she called the police on themselves so they can kill them both
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** Priscilla [[spoiler: dies to protect Jasper despite the fact he doesn't want to live.]]
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** Abigail successfully figures out how to raise the dead but her UnrequitedLove CameBackWrong.
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** Abigail Annabel successfully figures out how to raise the dead but her UnrequitedLove CameBackWrong.
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** Jasper stays alive despite wishing to return to the afterlife because [[spoiler: if he is caught, his entire family will be killed.]]
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* AllForNothing: Frequently happens.
** The Gambler and the Monk's game. [[spoiler: The Gambler dies right before he wins, which is arguably an ending by itself.]]
** Abigail successfully figures out how to raise the dead but her UnrequitedLove CameBackWrong.
** Edgar becomes a millionaire and destroys his rival but only gets Fay's disgust.
** Byron's attempts to normalize the dolls actually ticks off a massive riot against them.
** Priscilla [[spoiler: dies to protect Jasper despite the fact he doesn't want to live.]]
** The Gambler and the Monk's game. [[spoiler: The Gambler dies right before he wins, which is arguably an ending by itself.]]
** Abigail successfully figures out how to raise the dead but her UnrequitedLove CameBackWrong.
** Edgar becomes a millionaire and destroys his rival but only gets Fay's disgust.
** Byron's attempts to normalize the dolls actually ticks off a massive riot against them.
** Priscilla [[spoiler: dies to protect Jasper despite the fact he doesn't want to live.]]
* CameBackWrong: Pretty much the driving force of the novel. The Dolls go ''somewhere'' when they die and being removed from it results in them being near-catatonic even if they are recognizably the people they were before to their loved ones.
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* {{Cult}}: The Voodoopunks.
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* {{Cult}}: The Voodoopunks.Voodoopunks are a 19th century Spiritualist-esque society based around the Dolls.
* FantasticAesop: Don't raise the dead.
* FantasticRacism: The Dolls are initially beloved but because they're immortal, silent, and barely reactive--eventually the public loathes them. This finally explodes as one of their cries of mourning triggers a horrifying rash of suicides.
* FantasticRacism: The Dolls are initially beloved but because they're immortal, silent, and barely reactive--eventually the public loathes them. This finally explodes as one of their cries of mourning triggers a horrifying rash of suicides.
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* HistoryRepeats:
** The play itself begins with the story of New Albion' founding, which revolves around a never-ending play of cards until one player dies. [[spoiler: New Albion's revolutionary movement begins with the death of a card player.]]
** The [=McAlistairs=] tragedy begins and ends with a lonely girl and her possessed doll.
** The play itself begins with the story of New Albion' founding, which revolves around a never-ending play of cards until one player dies. [[spoiler: New Albion's revolutionary movement begins with the death of a card player.]]
** The [=McAlistairs=] tragedy begins and ends with a lonely girl and her possessed doll.
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* AbusiveParents:
** Anabelle's overachieving parents raised her with conditional, minimal love and constant pressure to be successful.
** Amelia's father is revealed as abusive by the narrator, and the abrupt interruption of Jasper's broadcast is implied to be him yelling at her.
** Anabelle's overachieving parents raised her with conditional, minimal love and constant pressure to be successful.
** Amelia's father is revealed as abusive by the narrator, and the abrupt interruption of Jasper's broadcast is implied to be him yelling at her.
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** Anabelle's overachieving parents raised her with conditional, minimal love and constant pressure to be successful.
** Edgar forcing Fay to marrying him caused Byron to resent him, seek a new father figure in a doll and seek to cause anarchy in order to destroy "[his] father's world."
** Edgar forcing Fay to marrying him caused Byron to resent him, seek a new father figure in a doll and seek to cause anarchy in order to destroy "[his] father's world."
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** "Elysium", for Jasper's constant plead for death.
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** "Elysium", for Jasper's Jasper's, and eventually all Dolls', constant plead for death.
* DysfunctionalFamily: The [=McAlistairs=].
** Anabelle's overachieving parents raised her with conditional, minimal love and constant pressure to be successful.
** Edgar forcing Fay to marrying him caused Byron to resent him, seek a new father figure in a doll and seek to cause anarchy in order to destroy "[his] father's world."
** Anabelle's overachieving parents raised her with conditional, minimal love and constant pressure to be successful.
** Edgar forcing Fay to marrying him caused Byron to resent him, seek a new father figure in a doll and seek to cause anarchy in order to destroy "[his] father's world."
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: At the end of Act 3, [[spoiler: Byron gives a speech to try and rally the population back to his side after the song being played by the dolls leads Amelia to kill herself. This involves telling them that they're pushing a doll into the position of Mayor and that their kids are all dancing each night with the dead.]]
-->'''Narrator:''' [[spoiler: "Kill the dolls! Kill the dolls!" everyone screamed.]]
-->'''Byron:''' Now hold on, this isn't at all what we mean!
* OnlyChildSyndrome: All four generations of [=McAlistairs=] are only children.
* {{Revenge}}:
** Edgar makes this his life's mission after [[spoiler: Fay leaves him. Once he succeeds, Fay vows revenge unto him.]]
-->'''Edgar:''' One day, you will learn, and you will burn like my heart burns!
** [[YouAreNumberSix Soldier 7285]] eventually vows this [[spoiler: upon the government of New Albion after Priscilla's death.]]
* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Annabel/Annabelle/Annabella.
* {{Steampunk}}: The Dolls of New Albion: ''A Steampunk Opera''.
* SuicideByCop: [[spoiler: Priscilla sacrifices herself to let Jasper return to the afterlife by doing this.]]
* TogetherInDeath: [[spoiler:Priscilla's]] song at the very end [[spoiler: suggests she expects to see Jasper again in the afterlife after they've both been killed by the police.]] The third installment in the series shows that [[spoiler:this won't happen, as Priscilla repeatedly reincarnates, making this a subversion.]]
* UnwantedRevival: From the moment Annabel brings him back, Jasper just wants to be dead again.
* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: Annabel struts around New Albion with a life-sized mechanical doll and no one seems to care, probably because there is a lot of weirder stuff going on.
-->'''Narrator:''' "New Albion today / With bustling streets, machines, cafes / And the nice, the wise, the eccentric and insane"
* VillainSong: "Edgar Builds a Business" is a cheerful, carnival-esque tune about Edgar building a massive fortune, and then using it to utterly ruin his romantic rival and extort Fay into getting back together with him.
* YouAreNumberSix: Soldier 7285.
-->'''Narrator:''' [[spoiler: "Kill the dolls! Kill the dolls!" everyone screamed.]]
-->'''Byron:''' Now hold on, this isn't at all what we mean!
* OnlyChildSyndrome: All four generations of [=McAlistairs=] are only children.
* {{Revenge}}:
** Edgar makes this his life's mission after [[spoiler: Fay leaves him. Once he succeeds, Fay vows revenge unto him.]]
-->'''Edgar:''' One day, you will learn, and you will burn like my heart burns!
** [[YouAreNumberSix Soldier 7285]] eventually vows this [[spoiler: upon the government of New Albion after Priscilla's death.]]
* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Annabel/Annabelle/Annabella.
* {{Steampunk}}: The Dolls of New Albion: ''A Steampunk Opera''.
* SuicideByCop: [[spoiler: Priscilla sacrifices herself to let Jasper return to the afterlife by doing this.]]
* TogetherInDeath: [[spoiler:Priscilla's]] song at the very end [[spoiler: suggests she expects to see Jasper again in the afterlife after they've both been killed by the police.]] The third installment in the series shows that [[spoiler:this won't happen, as Priscilla repeatedly reincarnates, making this a subversion.]]
* UnwantedRevival: From the moment Annabel brings him back, Jasper just wants to be dead again.
* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: Annabel struts around New Albion with a life-sized mechanical doll and no one seems to care, probably because there is a lot of weirder stuff going on.
-->'''Narrator:''' "New Albion today / With bustling streets, machines, cafes / And the nice, the wise, the eccentric and insane"
* VillainSong: "Edgar Builds a Business" is a cheerful, carnival-esque tune about Edgar building a massive fortune, and then using it to utterly ruin his romantic rival and extort Fay into getting back together with him.
* YouAreNumberSix: Soldier 7285.
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-->'''Narrator:''' [[spoiler: "Kill the dolls! Kill the dolls!" everyone screamed.]]
-->'''Byron:''' Now hold on, this isn't at all what we mean!
* OnlyChildSyndrome: All four generations of [=McAlistairs=] are only children.
* {{Revenge}}:
** Edgar makes this his life's mission after [[spoiler: Fay leaves him. Once he succeeds, Fay vows revenge unto him.]]
-->'''Edgar:''' One day, you will learn, and you will burn like my heart burns!
** [[YouAreNumberSix Soldier 7285]] eventually vows this [[spoiler: upon the government of New Albion after Priscilla's death.]]
* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Annabel/Annabelle/Annabella.
* {{Steampunk}}: The Dolls of New Albion: ''A Steampunk Opera''.
* SuicideByCop: [[spoiler: Priscilla sacrifices herself to let Jasper return to the afterlife by doing this.]]
* TogetherInDeath: [[spoiler:Priscilla's]] song at the very end [[spoiler: suggests she expects to see Jasper again in the afterlife after they've both been killed by the police.]] The third installment in the series shows that [[spoiler:this won't happen, as Priscilla repeatedly reincarnates, making this a subversion.]]
* UnwantedRevival: From the moment Annabel brings him back, Jasper just wants to be dead again.
* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: Annabel struts around New Albion with a life-sized mechanical doll and no one seems to care, probably because there is a lot of weirder stuff going on.
-->'''Narrator:''' "New Albion today / With bustling streets, machines, cafes / And the nice, the wise, the eccentric and insane"
* VillainSong: "Edgar Builds a Business" is a cheerful, carnival-esque tune about Edgar building a massive fortune, and then using it to utterly ruin his romantic rival and extort Fay into getting back together with him.
* YouAreNumberSix: Soldier 7285.
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* BrokenBird: Amelia. While she's aware Byron doesn't love her, she would've been content if he at least was a friend to her, which he's not, making her already tough life with an abusive father more difficult. She looks solace in the ecstatic company of the Voodoopunk cult and drugs. [[spoiler: Jasper's song about the relief of death is the last push she needs to end it all.]]
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* ArcWords:
** "My angel", mostly directed at Jasper.
** "Elysium", for Jasper's constant plead for death.
** "All you love does not love you" is the narrator's advice to 3/4 of the [=McAlistairs=].
** "My angel", mostly directed at Jasper.
** "Elysium", for Jasper's constant plead for death.
** "All you love does not love you" is the narrator's advice to 3/4 of the [=McAlistairs=].
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* LoveHungry: The entire opera revolves around love-depraved individuals who in their search for it end up hurting those they claim to love. [[spoiler: The only one to break the cycle is Priscilla in her ActOfTrueLove.]]
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* CityOfWeirdos: Annabel struts around New Albion with a life-sized mechanical doll and no one seems to care, probably because there is a lot of weirder stuff going on.
-->'''Narrator:''' "New Albion today / With bustling streets, machines, cafes / And the nice, the wise, the eccentric and insane"
-->'''Narrator:''' "New Albion today / With bustling streets, machines, cafes / And the nice, the wise, the eccentric and insane"
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* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: Annabel struts around New Albion with a life-sized mechanical doll and no one seems to care, probably because there is a lot of weirder stuff going on.
-->'''Narrator:''' "New Albion today / With bustling streets, machines, cafes / And the nice, the wise, the eccentric and insane"
-->'''Narrator:''' "New Albion today / With bustling streets, machines, cafes / And the nice, the wise, the eccentric and insane"
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** Jasper. After Annabelle brings him back [[spoiler: and then kills him because he asked her to, Edgar brings him back AGAIN.]]
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** Jasper. After Annabelle Annabel brings him back [[spoiler: and then kills him because he asked her to, Edgar brings him back AGAIN.]]
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* ChekhovsGun: Annabelle's notes on raising the dead, which Edgar finds in a trunk in the attic.
* CityOfWeirdos: Annabelle struts around New Albion with a life-sized mechanical doll and no one seems to care, probably because there is a lot of weirder stuff going on.
* CityOfWeirdos: Annabelle struts around New Albion with a life-sized mechanical doll and no one seems to care, probably because there is a lot of weirder stuff going on.
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* ChekhovsGun: Annabelle's Annabel's notes on raising the dead, which Edgar finds in a trunk in the attic.
* CityOfWeirdos:Annabelle Annabel struts around New Albion with a life-sized mechanical doll and no one seems to care, probably because there is a lot of weirder stuff going on.
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** Jasper stays alive, despite wishing to return to the afterlife because [[spoiler: if he is caught, his entire family will be killed.]]
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** Jasper stays alive, alive despite wishing to return to the afterlife because [[spoiler: if he is caught, his entire family will be killed.]]
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** [[spoiler: When Priscilla dies, the Narrator reverses her lines from Annabelle has a Doll.]]
** [[spoiler: Also, Priscilla reverses Annabella's lines back in Annabelle Raises the Dead.]]
** [[spoiler: Jasper also mimics the "Be my angel" lines from Annabelle, which may be more or less ironic since he actually knew her and heard those lines.]]
* LightningCanDoAnything: The exact process Annabelle uses to bring Jasper back to life is never said, but the line "With voltage I invoke!" seems to imply this.
** [[spoiler: Also, Priscilla reverses Annabella's lines back in Annabelle Raises the Dead.]]
** [[spoiler: Jasper also mimics the "Be my angel" lines from Annabelle, which may be more or less ironic since he actually knew her and heard those lines.]]
* LightningCanDoAnything: The exact process Annabelle uses to bring Jasper back to life is never said, but the line "With voltage I invoke!" seems to imply this.
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** [[spoiler: When Priscilla dies, the Narrator reverses her lines from Annabelle has Annabel Has a Doll.]]
** [[spoiler: Also, Priscilla reversesAnnabella's Annabel's lines back in Annabelle Annabel Raises the Dead.]]
** [[spoiler: Jasper also mimics the "Be my angel" lines fromAnnabelle, Annabel, which may be more or less ironic since he actually knew her and heard those lines.]]
* LightningCanDoAnything: The exact processAnnabelle Annabel uses to bring Jasper back to life is never said, but the line "With voltage I invoke!" seems to imply this.
** [[spoiler: Also, Priscilla reverses
** [[spoiler: Jasper also mimics the "Be my angel" lines from
* LightningCanDoAnything: The exact process
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* MadScientist: Annabelle, of course, and Edgar as well, to a lesser extent.
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* MadScientist: Annabelle, Annabel, of course, and Edgar as well, to a lesser extent.
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* UnwantedRevival: From the moment Annabel brings him back, Jasper just wants to be dead again.
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* VillainSong: "Edgar Builds a Business" is a cheerful, carnival-esque tune about Edgar building a massive fortune, and then using it to utterly ruin his romantic rival and extort Fay into getting back together with him.
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* BreatherEpisode: The Ballad of the Monk and the Gambler is a fun and carnival-esque song separating [[spoiler: the (almost) burning of Byron's love]] and [[spoiler: the dystopian New Albion of Act 4.]]
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* BreatherEpisode: The Ballad of the Monk and the Gambler is a fun and carnival-esque song separating [[spoiler: the (almost) burning of Byron's love]] Jasper]] and [[spoiler: the dystopian New Albion of Act 4.]]
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* GreenEyedMonster: Edgar, big time. [[spoiler: Destroyed the home and livelihood of the man his girlfriend left him for in order to make her desperate enough to give into his blackmail.]]
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* GreenEyedMonster: Edgar, big time. [[spoiler: Destroyed the home and livelihood of the man his girlfriend left him for in order to make her desperate enough to give into in to his blackmail.]]
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* LovingAShadow: The source behind Annabel and Byron's love for Jasper, wanting a submissive partner they can project whatever they want onto for their own emotional problems rather than an actual person. Notably Priscilla is the only [=McAlistair=] who learns how to have a conversation with him.
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* LovingAShadow: The source behind Annabel and Byron's love for Jasper, wanting a submissive partner (or father figure) they can project whatever they want onto for their own emotional problems rather than an actual person. Notably Priscilla is the only [=McAlistair=] who learns how to have a conversation with him.
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* TogetherInDeath: [[spoiler:Priscilla's]] song at the very end [[spoiler: suggests she expects to see Jasper again in the afterlife after they've both been killed by the police.]]
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* TogetherInDeath: [[spoiler:Priscilla's]] song at the very end [[spoiler: suggests she expects to see Jasper again in the afterlife after they've both been killed by the police.]] The third installment in the series shows that [[spoiler:this won't happen, as Priscilla repeatedly reincarnates, making this a subversion.]]
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The other two parts of the trilogy, [[AudioPlay/TheNewAlbionRadioHour The New Albion Radio Hour]] and The New Albion Guide To Analogue Consciousness, are available for your listening pleasure. The entire albums are available [[http://mochalab.bandcamp.com/album/the-new-albion-radio-hour-a-dieselpunk-opera here]] and [[https://mochalab.bandcamp.com/album/an-atompunk-opera-the-new-albion-guide-to-analogue-consciousness-the-complete-album here]].
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The other two parts of the trilogy, [[AudioPlay/TheNewAlbionRadioHour The New Albion Radio Hour]] AudioPlay/TheNewAlbionRadioHour and The New Albion Guide To Analogue Consciousness, AudioPlay/TheNewAlbionGuideToAnalogueConsciousness, are available for your listening pleasure. The entire albums are available [[http://mochalab.bandcamp.com/album/the-new-albion-radio-hour-a-dieselpunk-opera here]] and [[https://mochalab.bandcamp.com/album/an-atompunk-opera-the-new-albion-guide-to-analogue-consciousness-the-complete-album here]].
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* WordOfGod: Paul Shapera has a [[http://steampunkopera.wordpress.com/ blog]] where he sometimes gives extra background information about the world and the characters.
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''The Dolls Of New Albion: A Steampunk Opera'' is a 4-Act play composed and written by Paul Shapera. So far, there has only been a workshop performance, but the audio version of the entire play can be found [[http://mochalab.bandcamp.com/album/the-dolls-of-new-albion-a-steampunk-opera here]].
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''The Dolls Of New Albion: A Steampunk Opera'' is a 4-Act play composed and written by Paul Shapera.Music/PaulShapera. So far, there has only been a workshop performance, but the audio version of the entire play can be found [[http://mochalab.bandcamp.com/album/the-dolls-of-new-albion-a-steampunk-opera here]].
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* AllKnowingSingingNarrator
* AllLoveIsUnrequited: The only character with a requited love interest [[spoiler: marries her ex-fiancee when he threatens to keep her from her father, whom he just brought back from the dead.]]
** Also, even though all of the [=McAlistairs=] are strangely in love with Jasper, Priscilla is the only person he truly loves back. [[spoiler: It doesn't end well]]
* AllLoveIsUnrequited: The only character with a requited love interest [[spoiler: marries her ex-fiancee when he threatens to keep her from her father, whom he just brought back from the dead.]]
** Also, even though all of the [=McAlistairs=] are strangely in love with Jasper, Priscilla is the only person he truly loves back. [[spoiler: It doesn't end well]]
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* AllKnowingSingingNarrator
AllKnowingSingingNarrator: The narrator for the story operates like this--in addition to providing exposition in the main songs, in between each act is a sung tango describing how New Albion is progressing.
*AllLoveIsUnrequited: AllLoveIsUnrequited:
** The only character with a requited love interest [[spoiler: marries her ex-fiancee when he threatens to keep her from her father, whom he just brought back from the dead.]]
** Also, even thoughall 3/4 of the [=McAlistairs=] are strangely in love with Jasper, Priscilla is the only person he truly loves back. [[spoiler: It doesn't end well]]
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** Jasper. After Annabelle brings him back [[spoiler: and then kills him because he asked her to, Edgar brings him back AGAIN.]]
** Jasper. After Annabelle brings him back [[spoiler: and then kills him because he asked her to, Edgar brings him back AGAIN.]]
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* BreatherEpisode: The Ballad of the Monk and the Gambler is a fun and carnival-esque song separating [[spoiler: the burning of Byron's love]] and [[spoiler: the dystopian New Albion of Act 4.]]
* ChekhovsGun: Annabelle's notes.
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* BreatherEpisode: The Ballad of the Monk and the Gambler is a fun and carnival-esque song separating [[spoiler: the (almost) burning of Byron's love]] and [[spoiler: the dystopian New Albion of Act 4.]]
* ChekhovsGun: Annabelle'snotes.notes on raising the dead, which Edgar finds in a trunk in the attic.
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* DeathSeeker: Jasper is one thought all four acts. [[spoiler: [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor Eventually he gets his wish,]] [[HeroicSacrifice but at the cost of Priscilla's life.]] ]]
* [[spoiler: {{Dystopia}}: After Act III, New Albion becomes this.]]
* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: Several songs are titled this way--"Annabel Raises the Dead", "Edgar Gets His Heart Broken", [[spoiler:"The Suicide"]]...
* [[spoiler: {{Dystopia}}: After Act III, New Albion becomes this.]]
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* DeathSeeker: Jasper is one thought through all four acts. [[spoiler: [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor Eventually he gets his wish,]] [[HeroicSacrifice but at the cost of Priscilla's life.]] ]]
*[[spoiler: {{Dystopia}}: [[spoiler: After Act III, New Albion becomes this.]]
* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: Several songs are titled this way--"Annabel Raises the Dead", "Edgar Gets His Heart Broken", [[spoiler:"The Suicide"]]...]]
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* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: Several songs are titled this way--"Annabel Raises the Dead", "Edgar Gets His Heart Broken", [[spoiler:"The Suicide"]]...
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** [[spoiler: Priscilla sacrifices her life so Jasper can die (again).]]
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* IncompatibleOrientation: Amelia to Byron. Have I mentioned AllLoveIsUnrequited?
** To make this worse for poor Amelia, Byron later does marry a lady, as the fourth generation focuses on his daughter Priscilla. [[spoiler: Amelia is dead by then and even if she'd been alive, it would unlikely be happy for Byron at least...]]
** To make this worse for poor Amelia, Byron later does marry a lady, as the fourth generation focuses on his daughter Priscilla. [[spoiler: Amelia is dead by then and even if she'd been alive, it would unlikely be happy for Byron at least...]]
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* IncompatibleOrientation: IncompatibleOrientation:
** Amelia to Byron. HaveI we mentioned AllLoveIsUnrequited?
** To make this worse for poor Amelia, Byron later does marry alady, lady for political purposes, as the fourth generation focuses on his daughter Priscilla. [[spoiler: Amelia is dead by then and even if she'd been alive, it would unlikely be happy for Byron at least...]]
** Amelia to Byron. Have
** To make this worse for poor Amelia, Byron later does marry a
* LovingAShadow: The source behind Annabel and Byron's love for Jasper, wanting a submissive partner they can project whatever they want onto for their own emotional problems rather than an actual person. Notably Priscilla is the only [=McAlistair=] who learns how to have a conversation with him.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: At the end of Act 3, [[spoiler: Byron gives a speech to try to calm the population after the song being played by the dolls leads Amelia to kill herself. This involves telling them that they're pushing a doll into the position of Mayor and that their kids are all dancing each night with the dead.]]
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: At the end of Act 3, [[spoiler: Byron gives a speech to try to calm and rally the population back to his side after the song being played by the dolls leads Amelia to kill herself. This involves telling them that they're pushing a doll into the position of Mayor and that their kids are all dancing each night with the dead.]]
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-->'''Byron:''' Now my friends just hold on, that is not what I mean!
* OnlyChildSyndrome: All four generations of [=McAlistairs=] appear to be only children.
* {{Revenge}}: Big time. Edgar makes this his life's mission after [[spoiler: Fay leaves him. Once he succeeds, Fay vows revenge unto him.]]
* OnlyChildSyndrome: All four generations of [=McAlistairs=] appear to be only children.
* {{Revenge}}: Big time. Edgar makes this his life's mission after [[spoiler: Fay leaves him. Once he succeeds, Fay vows revenge unto him.]]
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-->'''Byron:''' Now my friends just hold on, that is not what I we mean!
* OnlyChildSyndrome: All four generations of [=McAlistairs=]appear to be are only children.
*{{Revenge}}: Big time. {{Revenge}}:
** Edgar makes this his life's mission after [[spoiler: Fay leaves him. Once he succeeds, Fay vows revenge unto him.]]
* OnlyChildSyndrome: All four generations of [=McAlistairs=]
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** Edgar makes this his life's mission after [[spoiler: Fay leaves him. Once he succeeds, Fay vows revenge unto him.]]
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* {{Steampunk}}: The Dolls of New Albion: [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin A Steampunk Opera]]
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* LoveMakesYouEvil: [[spoiler:Fay dumping Edgar for someone else does not make him happy.]]
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* AndNowYouMustMarryMe: [[spoiler:Edgar blackmails Fay into marrying him after ruining her fiance by threatening to withhold her recently revived father from her.]]
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: [[spoiler: Jasper, after four generations of begging for death, finally gets his wish- at the cost of Priscilla's life.]]
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** Also, even though all of the McAlisters are strangely in love with Jasper, Priscilla is the only person he truly loves back. [[spoiler: It doesn't end well]]
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* BreatherEpisode: The Ballad of the Monk and the Gambler is a fun and carnivalistic song separating [[spoiler: the burning of Byron's love]] and [[spoiler: the dystopian New Albion of Act 4.]]
* BreatherEpisode: The Ballad of the Monk and the Gambler is a fun and carnivalistic song separating [[spoiler: the burning of Byron's love]] and [[spoiler: the dystopian New Albion of Act 4.]]
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: [[spoiler: Jasper, after four generations of begging for death, he finally get's gets his wish- at the cost of Priscilla' life]]
Priscilla's life.]]
* BreatherEpisode: The Ballad of the Monk and the Gambler is a fun andcarnivalistic carnival-esque song separating [[spoiler: the burning of Byron's love]] and [[spoiler: the dystopian New Albion of Act 4.]]
* BreatherEpisode: The Ballad of the Monk and the Gambler is a fun and
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* DeathSeeker: Jasper is one thought all four acts [[spoiler: [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor Eventually he gets his wish,]] [[HeroicSacrifice but at the cost of Priscilla's life]] ]]
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* DeathSeeker: Jasper is one thought all four acts acts. [[spoiler: [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor Eventually he gets his wish,]] [[HeroicSacrifice but at the cost of Priscilla's life]] life.]] ]]
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* GenerationalSaga: Each acts follows a new generation in the McAlistair family.
* GreenEyedMonster: Edgar, big time. [[spoiler: Destroyed the home and livelihood of the man his girlfriend left him for in order to make her desprate enough to give into his blackmail]]
-->'''Edgar''': There's a man they call Sillof, and he once stole my girl. I want him destroyed, all he has in this world. His business, his home, and his carriage all crushed. I want him left penniless, face down in the dust!
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Priscilla sacrifices her life so Jasper can die (again.)]]
* GreenEyedMonster: Edgar, big time. [[spoiler: Destroyed the home and livelihood of the man his girlfriend left him for in order to make her desprate enough to give into his blackmail]]
-->'''Edgar''': There's a man they call Sillof, and he once stole my girl. I want him destroyed, all he has in this world. His business, his home, and his carriage all crushed. I want him left penniless, face down in the dust!
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Priscilla sacrifices her life so Jasper can die (again.)]]
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* GenerationalSaga: Each acts follows a new generation in the McAlistair [=McAlistair=] family.
* GreenEyedMonster: Edgar, big time. [[spoiler: Destroyed the home and livelihood of the man his girlfriend left him for in order to make herdesprate desperate enough to give into his blackmail]]
-->'''Edgar''':blackmail.]]
-->'''Edgar:''' There's a man they call Sillof, and he once stole my girl. I want him destroyed, all he has in this world. His business, his home, and his carriage all crushed. I want him left penniless, face down in the dust!
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Priscilla sacrifices her life so Jasper can die(again.)]](again).]]
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-->'''Edgar''':
-->'''Edgar:''' There's a man they call Sillof, and he once stole my girl. I want him destroyed, all he has in this world. His business, his home, and his carriage all crushed. I want him left penniless, face down in the dust!
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** [[spoiler: Also, Priscilla reverses Annabella's lines back in Annabella Raises the Dead.]]
** [[spoiler: Jasper also mimics the "Be my angel" lines from Annabella, which may be more or less ironic since he actually knew her and heard those lines.]]
** [[spoiler: Also, Priscilla reverses Annabella's lines back in Annabella Raises the Dead.]]
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** [[spoiler: When Priscilla dies, the Narrator reverses her lines from Annabella Annabelle has a Doll.]]
** [[spoiler: Also, Priscilla reverses Annabella's lines back inAnnabella Annabelle Raises the Dead.]]
** [[spoiler: Jasper also mimics the "Be my angel" lines fromAnnabella, Annabelle, which may be more or less ironic since he actually knew her and heard those lines.]]
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-->'''Byron''': Now my friends just hold on, that is not what I mean!
* OnlyChildSyndrome: All four generations of McAlistairs appear to be only children.
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** [[YouAreNumberSix Soldier 7285]] eventually vows this [[spoiler: Upon the government of New Albion after Priscilla's death]]
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* {{Steampunk}}: The Dolls of New Albion:[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin A Steampunk Opera]]
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The other two parts of the trilogy, [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/AudioPlay/TheNewAlbionRadioHour The New Albion Radio Hour]] and The New Albion Guide To Analogue Consciousness, are available for your listening pleasure. The entire albums are available [[http://mochalab.bandcamp.com/album/the-new-albion-radio-hour-a-dieselpunk-opera here]] and [[https://mochalab.bandcamp.com/album/an-atompunk-opera-the-new-albion-guide-to-analogue-consciousness-the-complete-album here]].
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The other two parts of the trilogy, [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/AudioPlay/TheNewAlbionRadioHour [[AudioPlay/TheNewAlbionRadioHour The New Albion Radio Hour]] and The New Albion Guide To Analogue Consciousness, are available for your listening pleasure. The entire albums are available [[http://mochalab.bandcamp.com/album/the-new-albion-radio-hour-a-dieselpunk-opera here]] and [[https://mochalab.bandcamp.com/album/an-atompunk-opera-the-new-albion-guide-to-analogue-consciousness-the-complete-album here]].
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* WordOfGod: Paul Shapera has a [[http://www.steampunkopera.wordpress.com/ blog]] where he sometimes gives extra background information about the world and the characters.
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* WordOfGod: Paul Shapera has a [[http://www.steampunkopera.[[http://steampunkopera.wordpress.com/ blog]] where he sometimes gives extra background information about the world and the characters.
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The Steampunk Opera follows four generations of McAlistairs, beginning with the MadScientist Annabelle, who is attempting to raise from the dead the love of her life. The story is told by an all-knowing {{Narrator}}.
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The Steampunk Opera follows four generations of McAlistairs, [=McAlistairs=], beginning with the MadScientist Annabelle, who is attempting to raise from the dead the love of her life. The story is told by an all-knowing {{Narrator}}.
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!The Dolls Of New Albion: A Steampunk Opera
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A Steampunk Opera is a 4-Act play composed and written by Paul Shapera. So far, there has only been a workshop performance, but the audio version of the entire play can be found [[http://mochalab.bandcamp.com/album/the-dolls-of-new-albion-a-steampunk-opera here]].
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''The Dolls Of New Albion: A Steampunk Opera Opera'' is a 4-Act play composed and written by Paul Shapera. So far, there has only been a workshop performance, but the audio version of the entire play can be found [[http://mochalab.bandcamp.com/album/the-dolls-of-new-albion-a-steampunk-opera here]].
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