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* AmplifierArtifact: The U app performs this function for its users' avatars by identifying and enhancing their natural characteristics. Though it's usually portrayed aesthetically, it also seems to apply to the Dragon functionally - his determination and defiance of pain resulted in a nearly unbeatable {{Juggernaut}} that even thrashes the local peacekeepers, who are no slouches themselves.
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* AmplifierArtifact: The U app performs this function for its users' avatars by identifying and enhancing their natural characteristics. Though it's usually portrayed aesthetically, it also seems to apply to the Dragon functionally - his determination and defiance of pain resulted in a nearly unbeatable {{Juggernaut}} [[TheJuggernaut Juggernaut]] that even thrashes the local peacekeepers, who are no slouches themselves.
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* NonstandardCharacterDesign: U's denizens are ''very'' diverse, but Belle stands out for being so human and so ''pretty''; she looks like a Disney princess died and ascended to goddesshood. The Dragon's hulking size and blood-and-iron color scheme makes him stand out in a different way.
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* NonstandardCharacterDesign: U's denizens are ''very'' diverse, but Belle stands out for being so human and so ''pretty''; she looks like a Disney princess died and ascended to goddesshood. The Dragon's hulking size and blood-and-iron color scheme makes him stand out in a different way.
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: [[spoiler: The Dragon, for being a seven-foot-tall creature, is actually a 9th grader who is a few years younger than Suzu.]]
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: [[spoiler: The Dragon, for Kei looks like he’s in his late teens despite being a seven-foot-tall creature, is actually a 9th grader who is a few years younger than Suzu.]]
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* DateMyAvatar: Suzu's tracking of the Beast blossoms into a full-blown crush when she enters his castle, mirroring the various adaptations of ''Literature/BeautyAndTheBeast'' having the romance blossom when the heroine is in the Beast's domain. She even tries to kiss him, only stopped when he cringes away. [[spoiler:Good thing, too. He's just a kid.]]
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* CringeComedy: [[spoiler: The reveal that the elegant-looking woman (who mysteriously lies about having a family) is actually a baby on U is ''ludicrously cringe-worthy'', as it's a testament of how [[{{Manchild}} emotionally stunted]] she is. One can hardly believe she ever claimed [[BlatantLies she was a family woman]].]]
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* CringeComedy: CringeComedy:
** [[spoiler: The reveal that the elegant-looking woman (who mysteriously lies about having a family) is actually a baby on U is ''ludicrously cringe-worthy'', as it's a testament of how [[{{Manchild}} emotionally stunted]] she is. One can hardly believe she ever claimed [[BlatantLies she was a family woman]].]]
** Far less mean-spirited is Suzu accidentally revealing Kamishin's (mutual) crush on Ruka, which results in Kamishin freaking out and running away screaming while Ruka [[HeroicBSOD simply buries her hands in her face and does her best statue impression for minutes as Kamishin freaks out.]]
** [[spoiler: The reveal that the elegant-looking woman (who mysteriously lies about having a family) is actually a baby on U is ''ludicrously cringe-worthy'', as it's a testament of how [[{{Manchild}} emotionally stunted]] she is. One can hardly believe she ever claimed [[BlatantLies she was a family woman]].]]
** Far less mean-spirited is Suzu accidentally revealing Kamishin's (mutual) crush on Ruka, which results in Kamishin freaking out and running away screaming while Ruka [[HeroicBSOD simply buries her hands in her face and does her best statue impression for minutes as Kamishin freaks out.]]
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: [[spoiler: The Dragon, for being a seven-foot-tall creature, is actually a teenage boy a few years younger than Suzu.]]
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: [[spoiler: The Dragon, for being a seven-foot-tall creature, is actually a teenage boy 9th grader who is a few years younger than Suzu.]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:Kei's father regularly beats him despite him only being a 9th grader. He also hits Suzu toward the end, which draws blood and manages to [[EvenEvilHasStandards shake even him momentarily.]]]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:Kei's [[spoiler:Kei and Tomo's father regularly beats him despite him only being a 9th grader.them. He also hits Suzu toward the end, which draws blood and manages to [[EvenEvilHasStandards shake even him momentarily.]]]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:Kei and Tomo's father regularly beats them. He also hits Suzu toward the end, which draws blood and manages to [[EvenEvilHasStandards shake even him momentarily.]]]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:Kei and Tomo's [[spoiler:Kei's father regularly beats them.him despite him only being a 9th grader. He also hits Suzu toward the end, which draws blood and manages to [[EvenEvilHasStandards shake even him momentarily.]]]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:Kei's father regularly beats him despite him only being a 9th grader. He also hits Suzu toward the end, which draws blood and manages to [[EvenEvilHasStandards shake even him momentarily.]]]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:Kei's [[spoiler:Kei and Tomo's father regularly beats him despite him only being a 9th grader.them. He also hits Suzu toward the end, which draws blood and manages to [[EvenEvilHasStandards shake even him momentarily.]]]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:Kei and Tomo's father regularly beats them despite them. He also hits Suzu toward the end, which draws blood and manages to [[EvenEvilHasStandards shake even him momentarily.]]]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:Kei and Tomo's [[spoiler:Kei's father regularly beats them him despite them.him only being a 9th grader. He also hits Suzu toward the end, which draws blood and manages to [[EvenEvilHasStandards shake even him momentarily.]]]]
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** During Suzu's singing class with her adult peers, one of them relays that she too fell for a "bad boy" who was aloof and lonesome in her Senior year, and appealed to him with a present. [[spoiler: When the others wonder if she pursued a relationship with him, she explains that no, she did not. It actually wasn't a romantic relationship but a platonic one and he was in the 8th grade. Since this story is supposed to parallel Suzu's relationship with the Dragon, it acts as a hint that the Dragon (aka Kei) is younger than Suzu, about 14 years old.]]
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* CrushBlush:
** Suzu gets one of these pretty much every time she interacts with Shinobu. To say she's not great at concealing her feelings for him is an understatement.
** Kamoshin and Ruka have a mutual one while (at Suzu's prodding) confessing their feelings for each other at the bus station. Kamoshin's extends ''across his entire body''.
** Suzu gets one of these pretty much every time she interacts with Shinobu. To say she's not great at concealing her feelings for him is an understatement.
** Kamoshin and Ruka have a mutual one while (at Suzu's prodding) confessing their feelings for each other at the bus station. Kamoshin's extends ''across his entire body''.
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* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:Kei and Tomo's father regularly beats them despite them being very young teenagers at most. He also hits Suzu toward the end, which draws blood and manages to [[EvenEvilHasStandards shake even him momentarily.]]]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:Kei and Tomo's father regularly beats them despite them being very young teenagers at most.them. He also hits Suzu toward the end, which draws blood and manages to [[EvenEvilHasStandards shake even him momentarily.]]]]
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** [[spoiler: This was also baited during Suzu's singing class with her adult peers, one of them relays that she fell for a an 8th grader in her senior year, and wrote a song for him.]]
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** During Suzu's singing class with her adult peers, one of them relays that she too fell for a "bad boy" who was aloof and lonesome in her Senior year, and appealed to him with a present. [[spoiler: When the others wonder if she pursued a relationship with him, she explains that no, she did not. It actually wasn't a romantic relationship but a platonic one and he was in the 8th grade. Since this story is supposed to parallel Suzu's relationship with the Dragon, it acts as a hint that the Dragon (aka Kei) is younger than Suzu, about 14 years old.]]
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** [[spoiler: This was also baited during Suzu's singing class with her adult peers, one of them relays that she fell for a an 8th grader in her senior year, and wrote a song for him.]]
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** During Suzu's singing class with her adult peers, one of them relays that she too fell for a "bad boy" who was aloof and lonesome in her Senior year, and appealed to him with a present. [[spoiler: When the others wonder if she pursued a relationship with him, she explains that no, she did not. It actually wasn't a romantic relationship but a platonic one and he was in the 8th grade. Since this story is supposed to parallel Suzu's relationship with the Dragon, it acts as a hint that the Dragon (aka Kei) is younger than Suzu, about 14 years old.]]
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** During Suzu's singing class with her adult peers, one of them relays that she too fell for a "bad boy" who was aloof and lonesome in her Senior year, and appealed to him with a present. [[spoiler: When the others wonder if she pursued a relationship with him, she explains that no, she did not. It actually wasn't a romantic relationship but a platonic one and he was in the 8th grade. Since this story is supposed to parallel Suzu's relationship with the Dragon, it acts as a hint that the Dragon (aka Kei) is younger than Suzu, about 14 years old.]]
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** During Suzu's singing class with her adult peers, one of them relays that she too fell for a "bad boy" who was aloof and lonesome in her Senior year, and appealed to him with a present. [[spoiler: When the others wonder if she pursued a relationship with him, she explains that no, she did not. It actually wasn't a romantic relationship but a platonic one and he was in the 8th grade. Since this story is supposed to parallel Suzu's relationship with the Dragon, it acts as a hint that the Dragon (aka Kei) is younger than Suzu, about 14 years old.]]
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** During Suzu's singing class with her adult peers, one of them relays that she too fell for a "bad boy" who was aloof and lonesome in her Senior year, and appealed to him with a present. [[spoiler: When the others wonder if she pursued a relationship with him, she explains that no, she did not. It actually wasn't a romantic relationship but a platonic one and he was in the 8th grade. Since this story is supposed to parallel Suzu's relationship with the Dragon, it acts as a hint that the Dragon (aka Kei) is younger than Suzu, about 14 years old.]]
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** [[spoiler: This was also baited during Suzu's singing class with her adult peers, one of them relays that she fell for a an 8th grader in her senior year, and wrote a song for him.]]
