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Harry hooked down at his own wand. He could see finger marks all over it. He gathered a fistful of robe from his knee and tried to rub it clean surreptitiously. Several gold sparks shot out of the end of it. Fleur Delacour gave him a very patronizing look, and he desisted.
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Harry hooked looked down at his own wand. He could see finger marks all over it. He gathered a fistful of robe from his knee and tried to rub it clean surreptitiously. Several gold sparks shot out of the end of it. Fleur Delacour gave him a very patronizing look, and he desisted.
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* [[ItMakesSenseInContext "I need to see what Malfoy is doing inside you...I need to see what Malfoy is doing inside you..."]]
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* [[ItMakesSenseInContext "I need to see what Draco Malfoy is doing inside you...I need to see what Draco Malfoy is doing inside you..."]]
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* Later in ''Goblet of Fire'', from Barty Crouch Jr.: "I'll show you mine if you'll show me yours!"
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{{Accidental Innuendo}}s in ''Franchise/HarryPotter''.
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{{Accidental Innuendo}}s in ''Franchise/HarryPotter''.
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"[[ADateWithRosiePalms Polished it last night]]," said Cedric, grinning.\\
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** Snape also opens his first Occlumency lesson with "I will attempt to penetrate your mind, you will attempt to resist. Prepare yourself!" It's quite telling that, even with the words "your mind", some viewers found the line rather suspect.
