Comments: The fic is well written and has an interesting plot, and the author does have a pretty good grip on the cannon's character's personalities. It is from his OC's viewpoint most of the time, but manages to sidestep the familiar trap of gary sue-dom by giving the cannon characters their chances to shine and by focusing most of Koyaiba's attention on said cannon characters. Chapters are short, but updates are frequent, currently the chunin exams have just ended. (30/05/11)
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