Reviews: Ranma The Second Time Around

A prime example of how a Peggy Sue can go wrong

Ranma The Second Time Around is ultimately a far too long story of Ranma and Akane winning constantly and everything going perfectly for them in a Peggy Sue Fix Fic.

It's fairly boring all around and strips anything interesting out of Ranma and Akane's relationship as is.

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I've read two chapters. While the style of writing and the length are enjoyable, Ranma feels like a Gary Stu, with everything handed to him besides the initial transformation. Genma is bashed to the point of being Out of Character and his stupidity is used as the primary plot device, although that will probably change over chapters. At first glance, I'm not too impressed.