Comments: This fic is brilliant in its writing plotline and characterization. While Hinata is wonderfully done in this fic I personally feel that this author probably does the best Gai ever, he is so three dimensional and insightful while keeping him perfectly in-character.
It is fairly excellent, and TenTen's accidental murder spree is hilarious, but the fic hasn't been updated since 5-14-08, and seems to be dead. Would still give it a read.
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